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Topic Starter
puxtu
le s00n™
idk maybe after enmei ranked
*stares zenx*
Tidek

-X Y Z- wrote:

  • [Tidek's 4K SHD]
    Hella difficult map, but I like it. Jackhammers used nicely.
  1. 00:34:722 (34722|2,34722|3,34722|0,34722|1) - I don't like the quads here, made my fingers confused after all these single jacks
  2. 00:44:722 (44722|3) - Removing this note makes life a bit easier (jks I mean it's tricky to comprehend if you place this single note here) no, because of crash of course
  3. 00:54:722 (54722|2), - same goes for this one ^
  4. 01:04:722 (64722|2) - " (check if emphasised needed on starting notes) ^
  5. 02:14:722 (134722|1) - " ^
  6. 02:34:722 (154722|2) - difficult to play, especially after some brackets, consider removing this note ^
  7. 01:22:378 (82378|2,82534|0,82534|1,82690|2,82690|3,82847|1,83003|3,83159|1,83159|0) - perfect place for triple chords, try this: http://puu.sh/i26dV/4331f5a69f.jpg fixd it in own way
  8. 02:32:534 (152534|1,152534|0,152690|2,152847|1,152847|3,153003|2,153003|0,153159|3,153159|1,153315|2) - another part that would be suitable if triple hammers were implemented
  9. 01:55:659 (115659|0) - seems like a handful but I like it
  10. 03:04:722 (184722|3,184722|2,184722|1) - single note this why? there is a crash
  11. 03:18:472 (198472|2) - try this pattern: http://puu.sh/i26AD/66d98e8240.jpg i want to keep consistency
  12. 03:34:565 (214565|0) - a bit handful to hit this note its the easiest way i could make and i wont ignore crash
  13. 04:27:222 (267222|2) - removing this note will make this pattern flow nicely
Not mentioned = fixd, thanks!

http://puu.sh/igikV/70c35876e2.osu

(I added back my beginning)
arcwinolivirus

KawaEE wrote:

Arcwin's 4K MX
01:02:222 (62222|2) - one remove?
^ when viewed throug a around note, this line too many note? compare this 01:01:909 - The cymbals sounds are supposed to be 3-noters but since there are drum rolls, I decided to put 2-noters only on those part that has 1/4ths. Then the last cymbal sounds would be 3-noter.

02:43:472 (163472|3) - one remove? and 02:43:628 - one add. for example same note 02:43:628 - = 02:44:097 - great notice! fixed~

03:18:628 (198628|2,198706|1,198784|2) - Ctrl + H? I decided to keep it, sorry :3
^if this is going to follow the guitar, seems to be more tender if you want to change.
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-X Y Z- wrote:

Puxtu you very scary D: stop dragging me around
Subjective opinions, please don't take this seriously.
hi.

  • [Arcwin's 4K MX]
    Loved this map, my keyboard literally turned into a drum, right on the beat too. Glad ya like it~ I decided to do it in stepmania style without LNs and drum-like patterns :3/
  1. 03:07:690 (187690|2,187847|3,187847|0) - Sounds like you are missing 3 notes, the previous notes suggest triplets being mapped out, maybe you left it intentionally because of its difficulty? Yes, its intentionally mapped :3/
  2. 03:19:722 (199722|0) - Absolutely loved this bit, drums on the spot Thank you >w<)b

    Everything else seemed nice to me, was unable to find any long notes at all lol. :v

Thank you so much for those mods and feedback~

here's my updated difficulty:
http://puu.sh/ikH4z/c407aff0f1.osu
Remillion Cross
mfw when you're busy but someone keep ask you for mod..
i'm here just for checking, because i think your map is well-mapped and modded.
i might bad modding because i already hiatus for modding stuff for a few months.

i don't know about issue with big filesize above 10 MB without video, but that doesn't important.

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[Usagi's 7K EZ]
02:05:503 (125503|4,125815|3,126128|2) - bagi ku, aku enggak paham mengapa taruh note di garis merah kayak gini (mungkin bisa bingung yang main) bisa jelaskan ?
03:15:034 (195034|2,195347|6,195503|0,195659|4,195815|2,195972|3) - apa pattern yang kayak gini enggak rumit ? apalagi kalau ini bakal panjang pattern nya sampai 03:18:472 -
03:32:847 (212847|4) - bagus kalau ini taruh kemari 03:32:690 - di kolom 4 biar pas sama gitar listrik nya
03:38:784 (218784|4,218940|5,219097|0,219253|2,219409|1) - pattern gini rumit buat noob player. gimana kalau buat tangga gitu ?
04:23:081 (263081|5) - naik ke atas, 04:23:159 -
04:25:581 (265581|6) - sama ^
04:28:315 (268315|5) - kayaknya ini engga terlalu penting, dihapus juga ga ngubah apa-apa

[Etlie's 7K NM]
00:29:565 (29565|0,29643|3) - this isn't really great idea. Player may find it hard for normal.
02:06:753 (126753|3) - delete, not necessary to be here.
02:09:253 (129253|3) - ^
02:11:753 (131753|4,132065|4) - ^
04:05:893 (245893|6) - please consider this pattern next time. it may sound not necessary, but i find that a problem and may hard to read/get a good accuracy on this.

so far i find this no problem at all, but please.. every part that sounds cymbal/finish, you must put at least 2 circle, since 2 circle recommended for cymbal/finish.

[LordRaika's 7K HD]
From 02:54:722 - to 02:56:597 - (and the part which similar like this) - i think it's 1/3 but i'm not sure pls help. (see the Kami or Blocko diff)
This diff is full of suprise, really xD but i love this.

[Kami's 7K MX]
04:30:347 (270347|3,270659|4,270815|2) - please heard it once again. i think this is the correct one : http://puu.sh/ipTTr/e6a3168629.png
04:31:597 (271597|2,271753|3,271909|4,272065|5) - doesn't find wrong, but i just want to ask, is this for following the guitar electric sound ?
04:32:847 (272847|6,273003|4,273159|3,273315|2) - same like this ^
04:48:628 (288628|0,288628|2,288628|1,288628|5,288628|6,288628|4) - i think it's no need for use cymbal/finish sound in this part

okay no problem at the most, but you need to furnish the 1/4 stream in some part. just make it not like you put it like a random mod.

[Blocko's 7K SC]
SV good. Pattern no problem. God what to do now ;-;

So far i'm enjoyed this diff much. Good job :D

[Zenx's 7K Miscreation]
is this diff for masochist ?

so far the pattern keep me entertained, good one. doesn't feel if this one needs further mods but i don't know.

04:48:472 - can you slow it down, a little bit like the blocko's diff ? i don't know what QAT will do when they see this lol.

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Now, i'm only check 7K. i will come later for the rest 4K diffs.

If this mod doesn't helpful, then don't give me a kudos.
Kamikaze

Remillion Cross wrote:

mfw when you're busy but someone keep ask you for mod..
i'm here just for checking, because i think your map is well-mapped and modded.
i might bad modding because i already hiatus for modding stuff for a few months.

i don't know about issue with big filesize above 10 MB without video, but that doesn't important.

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[Kami's 7K MX]
04:30:347 (270347|3,270659|4,270815|2) - please heard it once again. i think this is the correct one : http://puu.sh/ipTTr/e6a3168629.png I'm pretty sure that guitar kicks in on white line
04:31:597 (271597|2,271753|3,271909|4,272065|5) - doesn't find wrong, but i just want to ask, is this for following the guitar electric sound ? Yes and it actually is wrong lmao, fixed
04:32:847 (272847|6,273003|4,273159|3,273315|2) - same like this ^ Same reply
04:48:628 (288628|0,288628|2,288628|1,288628|5,288628|6,288628|4) - i think it's no need for use cymbal/finish sound in this part I don't know, for me it fits with the smash on piano. I'll change if someone else mentions it

okay no problem at the most, but you need to furnish the 1/4 stream in some part. just make it not like you put it like a random mod. Random streams are fun \:D/ Seriously tho I'd appreciate specific suggestions because I have no idea how to make streams better at this point


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Now, i'm only check 7K. i will come later for the rest 4K diffs.

If this mod doesn't helpful, then don't give me a kudos.
Thanks Remi! o/
Update
Topic Starter
puxtu
updated
waiting for momo usagi eter raika and zenx
Arzenvald

Remillion Cross wrote:

[Usagi's 7K EZ]
02:05:503 (125503|4,125815|3,126128|2) - bagi ku, aku enggak paham mengapa taruh note di garis merah kayak gini (mungkin bisa bingung yang main) bisa jelaskan ? // irama gitar, karena jaraknya 1/1, harusnya gk terlalu se susah itu.. dan gk mungkin gw ngasih layering yg sama di phase yg berbeda

03:15:034 (195034|2,195347|6,195503|0,195659|4,195815|2,195972|3) - apa pattern yang kayak gini enggak rumit ? apalagi kalau ini bakal panjang pattern nya sampai 03:18:472 - // rearranged
03:32:847 (212847|4) - bagus kalau ini taruh kemari 03:32:690 - di kolom 4 biar pas sama gitar listrik nya // wee cool
03:38:784 (218784|4,218940|5,219097|0,219253|2,219409|1) - pattern gini rumit buat noob player. gimana kalau buat tangga gitu ? // ok
04:23:081 (263081|5) - naik ke atas, 04:23:159 - // unsnap woey
04:25:581 (265581|6) - sama ^ // untuk 3/4 beat seperti ini, gw cuma masang di ending, sengaja
04:28:315 (268315|5) - kayaknya ini engga terlalu penting, dihapus juga ga ngubah apa-apa
kek
update with re-defined hitsound
http://puu.sh/irNXe.osu
Fubukicat
Applied everything , Also fixed things about cymbal sounds if I did it good should not have missing

UPDATE
LordRaika

Remillion Cross wrote:

[LordRaika's 7K HD]
From 02:54:722 - to 02:56:597 - (and the part which similar like this) - i think it's 1/3 but i'm not sure pls help. (see the Kami or Blocko diff)
This diff is full of suprise, really xD but i love this.

THANKSSSSSSS RC <3
yeap its 1/3
and reduced final SV
appudetto~
Topic Starter
puxtu
updated
Remillion Cross
Back.. now for 4K, nothing to say much about here.
Again, just to make sure. (god i'm suck at modding 4K help)

n o k u d o s

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[Arcwin's 4K MX]
so far i quite enjoying this diff, nothing much to say here, it's good in a terms of quality. Thus it looks like cool for me hehe

The only thing i want to say :

From 00:46:597 to 00:47:222 - please take a look at this http://puu.sh/isr2k/a258d3dda4.jpg

that pattern is from 02:06:597 - and for me, it's better and match with the song than the whole pattern in 00:46:597

Just saying, but if you're agree, then u should fix the same part of song which similar like that one. It's not too much.

Plus, 03:07:768 - and 03:12:768 - missing note ?

And the last, from 04:26:597 - to 04:27:222 - incorrect snap, pls mute the hitsound/sample volume first so you can hear it correctly.


[Momo's 4K SC]
00:01:322 - to 00:21:240 - why you don't map in this part ? just sayin.. i think the other mapped this part too. just copas arcwin if you lazy hueheuhaehah *runs

04:03:472 - incorrect snap, this should be 1/3 ( example : http://puu.sh/isrRc/e9756269f1.jpg , this is just example, you can re-arrange them, but this is the correct snap )

nice diff~



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the rest are good. honestly, i'm super sleepy now.

good luck.
Kamikaze

Remillion Cross wrote:

[Momo's 4K SC]
00:01:322 - to 00:21:240 - why you don't map in this part ? just sayin.. i think the other mapped this part too. just copas arcwin if you lazy hueheuhaehah *runs
look what you've done puxtu
Topic Starter
puxtu
well lol momo is afk so I think he doesn't mind if I fix a little thing on his diff :v
*based on xyz's mod
edit: oh the intro thing? nah don't worry.. it's easy to get it back :3
edit edit: fuck I can't find where the last time he gave me his last update ;w;
edit edit edit: I found it but rip http://puu.sh/isx95/e9eafff7af.png
edit edit edit edit: anyway thanks for full check pat o/
edit edit edit edit edit: updated~
Degojix
only 4K diffs :P
i shall call you puxpux from now on (since its pux-2) XD
^that was lame.

1|2|3|4 :D

MODS:

4K HD
01:34:097 (94097|1) - move note (4), and
01:34:253 (94253|2) - move note (2) [*emphasize on crash]

02:52:534 ~ 02:53:315 - http://puu.sh/ivmzY/fbf8702c36.JPG follow the drums instead [*the first chorus follows the vocals, so let this chorus follow the drums :) its fun to do the 3/4 rhythm :D]

03:31:597 (211597|0) - move note (2), and
03:31:753 (211753|1) - move note (1) [*this makes the triplet easier to see]

04:13:472 - i like this part :D

04:22:847 ~ 04:23:315 - follow the drums as well? [*the one at 04:25:347 can stay as vocal]

04:48:628 (288628|2) - move long note (4) [*it ends with a dissonance, so why make it look neat? 8-) ]

that difficulty jump from this HD to MX...
Arcwin's 4K MX
01:00:815 (60815|3,61128|2,61440|3) - delete [*double notes here? 0.o]
02:04:253 (124253|0) - move note (2), and
02:04:409 (124409|1) - move note (1)

04:05:659 ~ 04:05:972 - http://puu.sh/ivlrm/43ba7c734d.JPG maybe try this?

you ain't like long notes eh? XD
is the jumpstream at the last part too difficult for this difficulty? :o
Momo's 4K SC
04:05:503 ~ 04:05:972 - http://puu.sh/ivhm0/1f40be7873.JPG its the intro to the last chorus! give it some blast with 1/6 notes :o

there are varying gaps/notes in the streams, but i'm not sure if its mapping style or error in inconsistency :o
there isn't much to mod...
but, i feel that the mapping is rather plain :P like, the verses, pre-choruses and choruses are just streams...
and is it just me, or does the LNs at the guitar solo seem slightly hard :P
Tidek's 4K SHD
00:29:175 (29175|2) - move note (1) [*with two hands this part seems more fun]
00:39:097 (39097|3) - delete, and
00:39:175 (39175|1) - move note (4) [*same reason as above^]

00:46:597 ~ 00:47:222 - http://puu.sh/iv3zT/c100c6f736.JPG how about this instead? [*reasons: 1) this emphasizes the strong beats. 2) the previous section has a lot of left-hand notes. 3) for more variety, cause this pattern is being used a lot in the song :o]
00:49:097 ~ 00:49:722 - http://puu.sh/iv3Vv/84ea5c2691.JPG same reasons^ [*the 3rd one at 00:51:597 ~ 00:52:222 can stay though :)]
00:56:597 ~ 00:57:222 - http://puu.sh/iv4mS/9891be6139.JPG same as above but mirrored^
00:59:097 ~ 00:59:722 - http://puu.sh/iv4x7/cadb55f9bb.JPG same^

01:33:940 ~ 01:34:722 - http://puu.sh/ivapn/3f1459e2c8.JPG how about this instead? [*repeating the pattern (without mirror) emphasizes the repeated beat.]

02:03:862 (123862|0) - delete [*there ain't any strong beat here, and removing the note somehow makes it harder to play]

02:11:597 ~ 02:12:222 - http://puu.sh/iv8On/f4dbcb8ee9.JPG maybe this? [*playing the same pattern for the 3rd time again feels weird :(]

02:13:315 - add note (4)

02:43:940 (163940|1) - move note (4), and
02:44:097 ~ 02:44:722 - maybe do the mirrored version of the suggestion mentioned above?

03:20:190 (200190|2,200268|1,200815|2,200815|1,201440|1,201518|2,202065|2,202065|1,202690|2,202768|1,203315|2,203315|1) - delete [*i feel that this makes it more fun, cause the notes only focuses on the drums alone, while the previous part focuses mainly on the guitar...also, the snake at 03:23:472 stands out more]

04:30:659 (270659|2,271909|2,273159|2) - delete [*seems to be overmapping :o it feels better without the notes]
04:34:565 ~ 04:34:800 - http://puu.sh/iveDV/ca23aa1727.JPG this can compensate for the change above^, and can also emphasize on the crash sound


LOTS OF STREAMS <3 :D nice mapping style!
but the patterns are quite overused though... :|

okay modding EZ and NM is too difficult for me :3
i've tried taking into consideration of the mappers' styles, so i hope these mods would help :)
Topic Starter
puxtu

Degojix wrote:

i shall call you puxpux from now on (since its pux-2) XD can u not XD
[4K HD]01:34:097 (94097|1) - move note (4), and
01:34:253 (94253|2) - move note (2) [*emphasize on crash]

02:52:534 ~ 02:53:315 - http://puu.sh/ivmzY/fbf8702c36.JPG follow the drums instead [*the first chorus follows the vocals, so let this chorus follow the drums :) its fun to do the 3/4 rhythm :D] sorry vocal only

03:31:597 (211597|0) - move note (2), and
03:31:753 (211753|1) - move note (1) [*this makes the triplet easier to see]

04:13:472 - i like this part :D me too! :D

04:22:847 ~ 04:23:315 - follow the drums as well? [*the one at 04:25:347 can stay as vocal] sorry

04:48:628 (288628|2) - move long note (4) [*it ends with a dissonance, so why make it look neat? 8-) ]

that difficulty jump from this HD to MX... ikr i think i need a HD+

okay modding EZ and NM is too difficult for me :3
i've tried taking into consideration of the mappers' styles, so i hope these mods would help :)
not replied is ok! thanks4mods

ps: metadata changed re-dl pls
Kamikaze
pux I told you that vocaloids should be in artist months ago, didn't I?
lmao
Topic Starter
puxtu
yea I hate to see when you're right
Kamikaze
ily2
spoonguy
ok it's been quite the long time since i last modded rip
hi zenny
my current heaphones aren't very good so i can't do nazi mods zz
this is going to be mostly stuff i noticed while playing it a couple times and some general suggestions

1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[Zenx's 7k Miscreation]
00:44:722 - this part of the song favors people that use left thumb a lot, you should probably keep that space jack for the whole area or remove it here. i recommend removing it and transforming most of the vocal notes here into chords and keeping the triplets in the "right hand chordjack" section. make sure you make the chords as difficult as the triplets later.
00:49:097 - imo it'd feel more consistent if there was an SV here, just like 00:46:597 -
00:59:097 - ^
00:54:722 - in case you don't remove the space jack, there should be a note in 4 here for consistency with 00:44:722 -
01:07:847 - i'm really wondering why do you have this extra note here, if it was an accident pls remove it
01:24:722 - this time it's the opposite: this pattern favors people that use right thumb. you should try to switch which side of the field has notes on blue lines every 2 beats or so. make sure it switches neatly
01:34:722 - ^
02:34:722 - ^do the same for this chorus too
02:14:409 - nice stuff here
03:47:222 - that giant 26 anchor is super intimidating, change 03:48:003 (228003|1,228003|5) - to 17 perhaps?
04:05:972 - the lack of notes in the 4th lane makes things a bit uncomfortable to play actually, you should probably remap this section and use other ways to express snares instead of reserving a full column for it. do the same for the repetitions
04:29:722 - yeaaah, i know, trill stamina and all, but this part still feels really underwhelming in comparison to the rest of the map, mainly considering it's the fricking ending, if anything it's supposed to feel harder.
04:48:472 - this SV is not readable at all...
...
...
seriously, it's impossible to sightread


alright done
good luck on ranking you guys <3
Evening

Paulmrm wrote:

ok it's been quite the long time since i last modded rip
hi zenny
my current heaphones aren't very good so i can't do nazi mods zz
this is going to be mostly stuff i noticed while playing it a couple times and some general suggestions

1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[Zenx's 7k Miscreation]
00:44:722 - this part of the song favors people that use left thumb a lot, you should probably keep that space jack for the whole area or remove it here. i recommend removing it and transforming most of the vocal notes here into chords and keeping the triplets in the "right hand chordjack" section. make sure you make the chords as difficult as the triplets later. fixed dis
00:49:097 - imo it'd feel more consistent if there was an SV here, just like 00:46:597 -
00:59:097 - ^ both added
00:54:722 - in case you don't remove the space jack, there should be a note in 4 here for consistency with 00:44:722 - added
01:07:847 - i'm really wondering why do you have this extra note here, if it was an accident pls remove it for vocals there
01:24:722 - this time it's the opposite: this pattern favors people that use right thumb. you should try to switch which side of the field has notes on blue lines every 2 beats or so. make sure it switches neatly
01:34:722 - ^
02:34:722 - ^do the same for this chorus too remapped this entirely for the sake of actually it being playable
02:14:409 - nice stuff here
03:47:222 - that giant 26 anchor is super intimidating, change 03:48:003 (228003|1,228003|5) - to 17 perhaps? kinda force-used 26 since it's easier to read and play
04:05:972 - the lack of notes in the 4th lane makes things a bit uncomfortable to play actually, you should probably remap this section and use other ways to express snares instead of reserving a full column for it. do the same for the repetitions Completely remapped
04:29:722 - yeaaah, i know, trill stamina and all, but this part still feels really underwhelming in comparison to the rest of the map, mainly considering it's the fricking ending, if anything it's supposed to feel harder. Remapped
04:48:472 - this SV is not readable at all...
...
...
seriously, it's impossible to sightread changed to 0.1 @ the slider and 1.0 before it


alright done
good luck on ranking you guys <3
thx for mods paul guyguyugyug

Notes :

HP : 8.5 -> 9.7 ( This is to accommodate the star rating being high while the map being easy )
OD : 8.5 -> 8.7

The map is 10 times easier now, it should be easily (close to) SS-able with a bit of luck on the jacks and SV bumps


Tried to dl the hitsound copier in school ( i'll be in school for the next few days )

-_ - i'll find some way to hitsound copier

Update : http://puu.sh/iPXec/c2c581bb47.osu
Hydria
Oh boy here we go again (Only 90 minutes late)...


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Momo's 4K SC
I'll be honest, this map looks pretty flawless, I can't notice any patterns that are out of place. Only suggestions I can give is adding notes:
01:21:753 (81753|2) -
01:21:831 (81831|2) - All column 3, the first two having a drum beat aligned with them and the third just to suit the rhythm.
01:22:065 (82065|2) -

01:23:628 (83628|1) - Column 2, as that's where the drum roll starts

01:41:362 (101362|0) - Column 1, as there is a note there
01:41:440 (101440|0) - moving that note to column 2 for a stream pattern

02:31:753 (151753|1) -
02:31:831 (151831|1) - All column 2, same as the first reason.
02:32:065 (152065|1) -

02:33:628 (153628|2) - Column 3, same as second reason.

03:55:737 (235737|2) - Column 3, same as third reason.

04:01:753 (241753|2) -
04:01:831 (241831|2) - Column 3, first reason again.
04:02:065 (242065|2) -

Arcwin's 4K MX
00:31:753 (31753|0) - add note, column 1 to suit the rest of the patterns
00:34:722 (34722|1) - move down 1/4 beat as there is a beat there (now labelled (2))
00:44:097 (44097|0) - refer to first reason
00:44:565 (44565|1,44565|3,44722|3,44722|1,44722|2,44800|0) -

this makes a lot more sense with the beat of the song imo
01:54:722 (114722|0) - move down 1/4 beat (2)
01:54:722 (114722|1) - add a note 2nd column to continue the triple
02:07:143 (127143|2) - add a note 3rd column (2)
02:09:643 (129643|1) - add a note 2nd column (2)
02:12:143 (132143|3) - add a note 4th column (2)
02:44:097 (164097|1) - move down 1/4 beat (2)
03:24:409 (204409|2) - move down 1/4 beat (2)
03:24:409 (204409|0) - add a note 1st column to continue the double
04:13:706 (253706|0) - remove as there's no strong beat there imo and it seems to flow better with the music without it there

4K HD
Great map IMO, just a few things to clean up some patterns:

03:18:315 (198315|3) - move to column 3
03:18:472 (198472|2) - move to column 2

03:38:003 (218003|1) - move to column 4

03:40:503 (220503|2) - move to column 4
03:40:659 (220659|3) - move to column 2

03:41:284 (221284|2) - move to column 1
03:41:597 (221597|0) - move to column 3

Other 4K difficulties not touched due to being too easy / hard for my skill range.
Good luck with getting ranked~ :)
Topic Starter
puxtu
- updated zenx's diff
- moved hydria's complimentary diff to map's description and applied all his mods to my diff

- waiting momo arcwin and tidek to apply their mods
- re-hitsounding my diffs
- re-adding the stupid intro
- working on 4K 7K HD+

lol this map still has a long way to go
Kamikaze

puxtu wrote:

the stupid intro
your face is fucking stupid
Tidek
Applied few suggestions from previous old mod.

http://puu.sh/jbArQ/1da73981f1.txt
DraciuZ
Topic Starter
puxtu
everything is done.
except this

dammit raika hs lu bermasalah lg
arcwinolivirus

Remillion Cross wrote:

[Arcwin's 4K MX]
SPOILER
so far i quite enjoying this diff, nothing much to say here, it's good in a terms of quality. Thus it looks like cool for me hehe Thank you so much for that positive feedback <3

The only thing i want to say :

From 00:46:597 to 00:47:222 - please take a look at this http://puu.sh/isr2k/a258d3dda4.jpg

that pattern is from 02:06:597 - and for me, it's better and match with the song than the whole pattern in 00:46:597

Just saying, but if you're agree, then u should fix the same part of song which similar like that one. It's not too much. This is on purpose, I decided to make the 2nd phase different (with 3-noter). But thanks~

Plus, 03:07:768 - and 03:12:768 - missing note ? Great notice! thanks!

And the last, from 04:26:597 - to 04:27:222 - incorrect snap, pls mute the hitsound/sample volume first so you can hear it correctly. Fixed!

Degojix wrote:

Arcwin's 4K MX
01:00:815 (60815|3,61128|2,61440|3) - delete [*double notes here? 0.o] It is for the intensity of vocals as well reasonable same as 7K MX
02:04:253 (124253|0) - move note (2), and
02:04:409 (124409|1) - move note (1) good suggestion fixed both!

04:05:659 ~ 04:05:972 - http://puu.sh/ivlrm/43ba7c734d.JPG maybe try this? The note snaps here are different so I decided to only use the 1/2 measure lines for the main percussion

you ain't like long notes eh? XD stepmania style yo :v
is the jumpstream at the last part too difficult for this difficulty? :o The map is supposed to have a bridge of getting harder as it ends

Hydria wrote:

Arcwin's 4K MX
00:31:753 (31753|0) - add note, column 1 to suit the rest of the patterns only guitar.
00:34:722 (34722|1) - move down 1/4 beat as there is a beat there (now labelled (2)) Only following the guitar
00:44:097 (44097|0) - refer to first reason ^
00:44:565 (44565|1,44565|3,44722|3,44722|1,44722|2,44800|0) - ^

this makes a lot more sense with the beat of the song imo
01:54:722 (114722|0) - move down 1/4 beat (2) ^
01:54:722 (114722|1) - add a note 2nd column to continue the triple that would make a 4-noter keypress which I do not plan for the difficulty and overnote. sorry.
02:07:143 (127143|2) - add a note 3rd column (2) ^
02:09:643 (129643|1) - add a note 2nd column (2) ^
02:12:143 (132143|3) - add a note 4th column (2) ^
02:44:097 (164097|1) - move down 1/4 beat (2) ^
03:24:409 (204409|2) - move down 1/4 beat (2) ^
03:24:409 (204409|0) - add a note 1st column to continue the double no strong instruments added to add a note there. It just a snare sound which should be a 2-noter only. No cymbals involved like the next notes.
04:13:706 (253706|0) - remove as there's no strong beat there imo and it seems to flow better with the music without it there There is a strum of guitar in that part, also a low-volume percussion/tom occurred there. you might want to check other difficulty like in 7Ks which include a note in this line.

Sorry, it seems I didn't accept any mod suggestions but I'm still grateful for the mod. Thanks! :?
Sorry for the late update, pux mah man :v)/ too busy in lyfu.
My difficulty already had the intro notes before this so ya :v

Update link: http://puu.sh/jrqC4/f9210ae4c7.osu
Arzenvald
where is my intro
Topic Starter
puxtu
In the fridge 😊
Arzenvald
http://puu.sh/jrDts.osu here's the refrigerator
LordRaika
http://puu.sh/jrNbn.zip update, and nerfed lots of short LN
also make it perfectly no issue
Topic Starter
puxtu
Ok that's the spirit
Kamikaze

ExUsagi wrote:

where is my intro

puxtu few months ago wrote:

lmao wait kami...
I'm sorry i didn't inform you about this, but me and usagi have decided to remove intro
I hope you don't mind :P
?????????????????
Topic Starter
puxtu
Channa
from pm..

before you read, this is my all opinion only. just my suggestion.
if you want to change it or won't, you can decide by yourself.

my column 1234567

Kami's 7K MX
SPOILER
00:02:655 (2655|5,2877|4,3099|3,3321|2) - maybe change to this http://puu.sh/jvZMG/407ac0f23c.jpg because it too stick, make it spread
-------------------------------------------------------------------------
this part i will try to make it look balance
00:47:222 (47222|4) - delete
01:05:659 (65659|2) - change to 5
01:05:972 (65972|4) - change to 3
01:06:284 (66284|5) - change to 2
01:06:518 (66518|1) - change to 5
01:07:065 (67065|0) - to 3
01:07:143 (67143|3) - to 4
01:07:222 (67222|3,67222|4) - to 1,2
01:07:378 (67378|6) - to 4
01:07:456 (67456|4) - to 3
01:07:534 (67534|3) - to 5
01:07:690 (67690|4) - to 4
01:07:768 (67768|5) - to 5
01:07:847 (67847|4) - to 6
01:07:847 (67847|3) - to 3
01:08:159 (68159|2) - to 4
01:08:315 (68315|6) - to 6
01:08:393 (68393|5) - to 5
01:08:706 (68706|5) - to 3
01:08:784 (68784|2) - to 6
01:08:940 (68940|4) - to 6
01:09:018 (69018|2) - to 5
01:09:097 (69097|6) - to 2
01:09:253 (69253|1) - to 5
01:09:331 (69331|5) - to 4
01:09:409 (69409|3) - to 3
01:09:409 (69409|0) - to 2
01:09:409 (69409|4) - to 6
01:09:722 (69722|2) - delete
01:10:190 (70190|3) - to 5
01:10:268 (70268|0) - to 6
01:10:347 (70347|5) - to 7
01:10:347 (70347|1) - to 1
01:10:581 (70581|6) - to 5
01:10:659 (70659|4) - to 7
-------------------------------------------------------------------------
01:17:534 (77534|5) - to 7
01:17:690 (77690|3) - to 3 then add 6 because of voice
01:19:565 (79565|5) - to 5
01:21:753 (81753|1,81831|2) - delete
03:08:628 (188628|6) - move to 4
03:08:706 (188706|5) - to 3
03:08:784 (188784|4) - to 2
03:08:784 (188784|2) - to 4
03:13:940 (193940|1,193940|0) - swap
03:27:847 (207847|5) - to 7
03:28:003 (208003|1) - to 3
03:28:315 (208315|2) - to 2
03:29:565 (209565|1) - to 3
03:30:815 (210815|1) - end at 03:31:284 -
03:33:315 (213315|0) - to 6
03:33:628 (213628|6) - to 4
03:37:847 (217847|2) - to 1
03:38:003 (218003|0) - to 2
03:38:159 (218159|1) - to 3
03:38:315 (218315|2) - to 2
03:38:628 - change to http://puu.sh/jw1fW/9304507e27.jpg
04:01:753 (241753|5,241831|4,241909|3) - move to left 1 column
04:31:597 (271597|2) - end at 04:31:909 -

Blocko's 7K SC
SPOILER
00:46:597 - every part like this maybe you can use 1/2
01:29:722 (89722|4) - delete
02:23:940 - maybe http://puu.sh/jw1EE/57cdd56032.jpg
02:31:597 (151597|1,151753|3,151831|4) - delete
02:31:909 (151909|5) - to 5
02:31:909 (151909|0) - to 4
03:08:784 (188784|4,188784|3) - delete
03:08:628 (188628|2,188706|1,188784|0) - move to right 2 column
03:08:940 (188940|2) - to 2
03:09:097 (189097|1) - to 1
03:38:628 - maybe change to this http://puu.sh/jw1VY/534cc946b0.jpg

Zenx's 7K Miscreation

SPOILER
you need to be more imagine than this. you need to recreate all note or you need to fix whatever you want.
when you make a map or new note, you need to listen to the music when note that you can fill in the blank. i didn't mean wow! this song have many sound and i just fill fill and fill to make to full with note and end. no, you need to listen and try to fill like i hear some melodies in the song and i fill long note that match with melodies then you fill sound of drum or whatever. you need to deduct the note, ex. you hear the drum sound softly but you fill 5 note in the same row. that's too much. last thing, you need to fill more long note and make it look different like long note that didn't start at the same row or end at the same row. make it excited.

good luck!
Topic Starter
puxtu

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Tip Baka wrote:

from pm..

before you read, this is my all opinion only. just my suggestion.
if you want to change it or won't, you can decide by yourself.

my column 1234567

Kami's 7K MX
SPOILER
00:02:655 (2655|5,2877|4,3099|3,3321|2) - maybe change to this http://puu.sh/jvZMG/407ac0f23c.jpg because it too stick, make it spread rearranged in my own way
-------------------------------------------------------------------------
this part i will try to make it look balance y = applied n = denied
00:47:222 (47222|4) - delete why? there's a guitar + crash there, in fact I have too few notes there and I will add 2 more for crash nvm I'm dum, done
01:05:659 (65659|2) - change to 5 n
01:05:972 (65972|4) - change to 3 n
01:06:284 (66284|5) - change to 2 n
01:06:518 (66518|1) - change to 5 n
01:07:065 (67065|0) - to 3 y
01:07:143 (67143|3) - to 4 y
01:07:222 (67222|3,67222|4) - to 1,2 y
01:07:378 (67378|6) - to 4 y
01:07:456 (67456|4) - to 3 y
01:07:534 (67534|3) - to 5 y
01:07:690 (67690|4) - to 4 y
01:07:768 (67768|5) - to 5 y
01:07:847 (67847|4) - to 6 y
01:07:847 (67847|3) - to 3 y
01:08:159 (68159|2) - to 4 made it diffrent
01:08:315 (68315|6) - to 6 y
01:08:393 (68393|5) - to 5 y
01:08:706 (68706|5) - to 3 y
01:08:784 (68784|2) - to 6 y
01:08:940 (68940|4) - to 6 n
01:09:018 (69018|2) - to 5 n
01:09:097 (69097|6) - to 2 n
01:09:253 (69253|1) - to 5 y
01:09:331 (69331|5) - to 4 n
01:09:409 (69409|3) - to 3 n
01:09:409 (69409|0) - to 2 n
01:09:409 (69409|4) - to 6 n
01:09:722 (69722|2) - delete n, it's a crash god damnit
01:10:190 (70190|3) - to 5 y
01:10:268 (70268|0) - to 6 n
01:10:347 (70347|5) - to 7 y
01:10:347 (70347|1) - to 1 y
01:10:581 (70581|6) - to 5 y
01:10:659 (70659|4) - to 7 y
-------------------------------------------------------------------------
01:17:534 (77534|5) - to 7 y
01:17:690 (77690|3) - to 3 then add 6 because of voice y
01:19:565 (79565|5) - to 5 rearranged whole pattern
01:21:753 (81753|1,81831|2) - delete very clear drums
03:08:628 (188628|6) - move to 4 n
03:08:706 (188706|5) - to 3 n
03:08:784 (188784|4) - to 2 n
03:08:784 (188784|2) - to 4 n
03:13:940 (193940|1,193940|0) - swap y
03:27:847 (207847|5) - to 7 exactly same pitch as 03:28:159 (208159|5) -
03:28:003 (208003|1) - to 3 n
03:28:315 (208315|2) - to 2 n
03:29:565 (209565|1) - to 3 n
03:30:815 (210815|1) - end at 03:31:284 - oops
03:33:315 (213315|0) - to 6 n
03:33:628 (213628|6) - to 4 n
03:37:847 (217847|2) - to 1 y
03:38:003 (218003|0) - to 2 y
03:38:159 (218159|1) - to 3 y
03:38:315 (218315|2) - to 2 y
03:38:628 - change to http://puu.sh/jw1fW/9304507e27.jpg y
04:01:753 (241753|5,241831|4,241909|3) - move to left 1 column y
04:31:597 (271597|2) - end at 04:31:909 - nope, this is correct

good luck!
Thanks man, this is the mod I needed!
I also did a lot of pattern polishing myself to get rid of some annoying anchors
le upd8
Blocko

Tip Baka wrote:

Blocko's 7K SC
SPOILER
00:46:597 - every part like this maybe you can use 1/2 Alright, seems good for variety.
01:29:722 (89722|4) - delete Done
02:23:940 - maybe http://puu.sh/jw1EE/57cdd56032.jpg Did a variation of this pattern.
02:31:597 (151597|1,151753|3,151831|4) - delete Don't want to delete the kicks there.
02:31:909 (151909|5) - to 5 Ehh, minijacks here seem to remove some part of comfortability there. Doesn't really warrant a jack there, either.
02:31:909 (151909|0) - to 4 I want to keep as much flow as possible, so no change.
03:08:784 (188784|4,188784|3) - delete That'll reduce the impact of the sounds there.
03:08:628 (188628|2,188706|1,188784|0) - move to right 2 column Moved 1 column to the right instead, also rearranged a few things there.
03:08:940 (188940|2) - to 2 Moved to 4 instead
03:09:097 (189097|1) - to 1 Done
03:38:628 - maybe change to this http://puu.sh/jw1VY/534cc946b0.jpg Did a variation of that pattern to keep more flow in.

good luck!
Thank you for your mod!
Update: https://www.dropbox.com/s/rkdj12nqskrjw ... D.osu?dl=0
PyaKura
sup

1|2|3 etc... |7

I'll just mod the last 3 7K diffs, I can't mod 4K and I'm too lazy to go through the easy stuff as well so here I go.
There are tons of suggestions and I'll also write up my thoughts when I played some parts as well.

[Kami's diff]
00:26:987 (26987|3) - to 5 (trying to avoid 1/2 of the same note in a row in a stream because it is not comfortable to play + doesn't really make sense)
00:30:737 (30737|3) - to 6 ^ (adding to what I said just above this holds especially true for columns 1 4 7)
00:31:909 (31909|0,31909|2,31909|4,32222|4,32222|6) - For better playability try to place the notes next to each other. 00:32:065 (32065|6,32143|5,32222|4,32222|6) - this especially not being comfortable to play at 200bpm
00:33:081 (33081|3,33237|3) - see above

side note : always prefer simple, straight patterns (3 notes ministairs are kinda the perfect thing for such a high speed map) instead of tricky ones which go all over the place at 200bpm. As a basic rule the higher the bpm the smoother the patterns should be.

00:38:159 (38159|2,38315|2,38472|2) - move 00:38:472 (38472|2) - to 1 preferably
00:39:956 (39956|2,40034|4,40034|0,40112|2,40190|4,40190|6) - simple patterns are your friend
00:41:050 (41050|2,41128|3,41206|4,41284|1,41362|2,41440|3,41518|0,41597|1,41675|2) - ok so this is what I was talking about being perfect and all

01:00:347 (60347|3) - move to 2 | 01:00:425 (60425|4) - to 1 | 01:00:503 (60503|5) - to 3
01:29:565 (89565|6) - to 6
01:30:347 (90347|2,90425|0,90503|2,90581|0,90659|6,90737|5,90815|6,90893|5) - muuuuh
01:31:831 (91831|5) - to 4
01:45:581 - chords are over chorded compared to the following | 01:45:581 (105581|3,105737|3,105893|3) - pls
01:49:722 (109722|1,109800|2,109878|3) - move 1 column to the left
01:52:143 (112143|2,112222|1) - Ctrl + J | 01:52:222 (112222|3,112300|4,112378|3,112456|2) - Move 1 column to the right
01:53:081 (113081|3,113237|3) -

02:34:722 - this whole part is arguably the most difficult part of the diff (due to the double LNs) for no real reason, especially considering the following part which is essentially the same in the song but is a lot easier to play.
02:46:206 (166206|1,166284|0,166284|2,166362|1) - urgh
02:50:972 (170972|3,171128|3,171284|3,171440|3) - uurrgghh
03:04:722 - I really like how gimmicky this part feels
03:24:565 - same thing but I won't hide I have some doubts about whether those LNs are legit or not. Fun nonetheless.
03:54:722 - So sometimes we get the 1/3 rhythm then it suddenly disappears then it comes back again wat
04:08:472 - you're missing a note here
04:09:175 (249175|4,249253|6,249331|4,249409|6) - uuh
04:13:472 - Mmmh, yeah, playable.

04:29:253 (269253|6,269409|6) - to 2 and 04:29:331 (269331|5) - to 1

04:45:893 (285893|3,285972|2) - ctrl + J

I have probably skipped a lot of those little cases but they're mostly the same thing so I think you can find them by yourself if you understand what I've been meaning to say.

Overall it's very fun to play IMO but it feels like the patterns are kinda all over the place, like you're trying to do something (more like "some things" actually) but you're not consistent at doing it across the whole map. Also always prefer simple patterns over broken streams and brackets when you map a high bpm song such as this. Always aim for playability over looks. If the map is pretty but is not comfy to play there is no point. Well personally I don't have too many problems playing this but for the range of players this diff is aimed at it might really prove to be a bit too difficult than intended due to the aforementioned reasons.

[Blocko's thing]

First of all I can't play this properly so take everything with a grain of salt.

00:34:643 (34643|5,34722|4) - ctrl + J
00:39:643 (39643|5,39722|4) - Ctrl + J (because 76[57] and 12[13] are not cool :c )

it's impressive I can't find much to speak about

01:26:987 (86987|3) - move to 3
01:29:643 (89643|1,89722|0,89722|2,89800|1) - this kind of makes me cry but I don't really see an alternative

01:39:643 (99643|4,99800|4) - to 6 and 01:39:722 (99722|5) - to 5

01:44:722 - this part really felt mentally heavy and tiring to play for some reason, I didn't really feel like reading it at all x_x Not in the sense that I couldn't read it but... eeeeeh idk it's hard to put it into words. Might be the short 1/2 LNs causing this.

02:04:565 - I suck at this kind of pattern, especially at this speed ;-;

02:14:722 - 02:29:722 - This part would have been interesting with the 1/3 + 1/4 triplets polyrhythm but as it stands now it's kinda bland...

02:35:190 (155190|2,155268|1) - Ctrl + J
02:40:503 (160503|4,160581|5) - Ctrl + J
02:46:206 - something like this to avoid the awkward pattern ?

03:20:503 (200503|3,200581|2) - move 2 columns to the left and 03:20:659 (200659|0) - to 4 and 03:20:659 (200659|1) - to 3 ? 03:20:659 (200659|0,200815|0) - It's to avoid that

03:44:722 - are you sure you don't wanna polyrhythm this? D:

04:29:722 - this is 100% RIPyaKura

I don't think I can help much more with this diff D: The structure looks well done to me overall.

[Zen's food]

ok this is the fun part of the whole thing

00:44:878 - I'm sure you realize but this is most likely going to be seen as overchording (and truth be told I don't see how it is not overchording ;-; ) It's not particularly hard to play but, oh well you know. Same for the following instances.

01:04:722 - same thing also one column is mostly empty

My suggestion would be to periodically Ctrl + H parts of the part (lol vocabulary) so it puts less strain on a hand for a shorter period of time as well.

01:24:097 - chordtrills fest ! I'm not against it at all but if this ever gets accepted then... idk I'll just allow you to eat me whole or something.

03:52:222 - same as previously said

No okay to be honest this diff is soooo straight-forward it's either all right or all wrong. Not much else to say :/




But fun. Very very fun.
Topic Starter
puxtu
You're late pya :c
It's already in its coffin *sad_violin.wav*
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