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Chordzi

79 posts

Joined July 2012

Chordzi 2014-12-06T08:45:57+00:00

Merry Christmas.

ErunamoJAZZ

osu! Alumni

2,693 posts

Joined August 2012

ErunamoJAZZ 2014-12-08T00:27:51+00:00

Hi, from Christmas Queue :3

[General]
lol, i hope the diff names dont would be problematic xD
And, aimod:

[Easy ;A;]
humm... CS2 will be hard to read, for instance in 01:16:465 (2,3) - or 00:47:524 (2,3) - etc. I really recommend CS3.

00:12:936 (1) - (nazi) blanket is not perfect.
00:21:406 (1,2) - fix spacing. Mmm.. idk, the spacing i very variant (0.96x~1.04x), and due 1/3 rhythm, i think is better if spacing is 1.0x in all map (spacing without "grid snap").
00:22:818 (3) - lol, what happen here? extend a bit
00:29:877 (1) - the real end is in 00:30:583 - (the previous sliders, listen fine for me, but not this).
01:40:465 (1) - (nazi) blanket is not perfect.

BakaHuang's Normal ;^;

why without stack leniency??!, really think is a BIG bad idea. just use the leniency to 3:

And... CS in 4 is a bit small for a normal diff (this feels a bit like a Hard xD). Pls, consider CS to 3.5

AiMod

00:14:230 (3) - stacks in slider tail are hard to read for a normal. Pls, consider spacing and not stack.

SPOILER
Note this is very diferent to 00:40:112 (4) - where is fine the stack.(imo)
00:16:112 (1) - UNRANKABLE. need more time after spinner. Delete this note. Or change the spinner.
00:23:171 (4) - AiMod mark this, fix stack, is not perfect.
01:22:347 (1) - same here... orz
01:41:759 (3) - Same first.

[Hard ;A;]
mm.. same in normal about stack leniency. Why not trust in it?

AiMod

00:19:289 (3) - i know thi broken the symetry, but, the rhythm are you folow is like (i think)
00:24:936 (3) - ^
00:39:641 (5,1) - nice, but i think will be very "failable", may be a sliler works better.

Cilvery's Insane ;^;

Not spinners?? ._.

AiMod

00:09:877 (6) - this is overmapping.. really follow nothing.
00:12:700 (6) - ^
00:22:112 (3,5) - maybe you will try it:
00:34:112 (3,5) - like before:
00:37:641 - note here? (stacked over 00:37:994 (1) - )
00:45:641 - note here?
00:47:524 (1) - AAAHHH, the real end is in 00:47:877 - ... pls fix ;___;
00:48:230 - why ignore this?
01:24:936 (3) - hehehe, is not symetryc o.o (use Ctrl+H for see).

Good luck!

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

nika mika 2014-12-09T11:16:16+00:00

from your m4m queue so i made this modwith low quality maybe

Cilvery's Insane ;^;

00:05:053 (2) - delete
00:06:230 (2,3) - why not use a slider to cover the rhythm of these two objects?
00:13:524 - add
00:17:877 (3) - it sounds better after ctrl+G, but i think the pattern should improve after this, however i've got no points on what should be the changes...sorry
00:19:171 - there is a vocal sound here, i suggest you'd better delete that reverse arrow and add two circles from here 00:19:289 -
00:20:583 - add a circle at the place of that slider, i don't know if that's overmap but it sounds better
00:20:700 (8) - if you take my suggestion above then at a circle at this time point as well
00:33:994 - add
00:34:347 - add
01:41:759 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the music is downwards here, i think if you put the first 5 at the very top and make a stack there it will follow the music
01:36:936 (5) - why not put a same shape as 01:34:112 (5) - ? i think this is great!
01:39:994 (1,2) - could be higher

Hard ;A;

00:35:524 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - maybe too difficult for hard diff players
00:37:641 (3,1) - now that you've put a large distance between previous objects (maybe not that large) why don't you put these objects closer?
00:39:759 (1) - delete and at 00:39:994 - add a circle and NC at (2)'s place
00:41:053 - add
00:48:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - to difficult as well../
00:51:406 (2,3) - are they too far away from other objects in this combo?
00:58:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - …………i suggest you alter some stream into hold sliders
01:22:465 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - ^

i'm not good at hard diff, if it's bad ignore then ;w;

normal and easy……i've got no ideas, sorry
~~i'm not lazy i'm not lazy~~

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,723 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

fanzhen0019 2014-12-09T14:33:11+00:00

Frey

Frey wrote:
Yeah~ Christmas！

[Easy ;A;]

可能是歌曲特殊的原因，整首曲子在第一次打的时候感觉节奏有些拿不准..嘛嘛，毕竟歌曲的原因

· 00:06:583 (2) - 这个滑条，我其实觉得叠在00:09:406 (2) - 上好一点。因为00:06:583 (2,1,2,1) 整体就会很好看。（可能如果这里改了，不少人会评论Blanket没包好 hao

· 00:21:406 (1) - 调整一下DS，这里前后DS和固定的1.0有一点点差距好

· 00:22:818 (3) -00:23:994这里没音啊..我觉得可以取消折返，然后在00:23:877和00:24:230放点东西 wocao 应该是忘了检查了 resnap

· 00:29:877 (1) - 把话条延长到00:30:583，原来那个位置没音。啊啊啊

· 00:47:524 (2,3) - DS有一点点问题 00:47:524 (2) - 放到x164 y276; 00:48:230 (3) - 放到x296 y220

· 01:18:583 (2,2) - 可以考虑放到x256 y108（强迫症 233

· 01:23:171 (1) - 这个可以删好

· 01:34:112 (2) - 同第一条（悄悄复制偷懒的反震）

[BakaHuang's Normal]

整体整洁，Flow也没什么可调的，节奏也很丰富易懂，好。

· 00:25:994 (4) - 滑条的开头取消finish，改成Additions为Soft的Clap k

· 01:06:583 (1) - 这里为了一个更好看的Blanket以及为后边01:08:700 (4) 的blanket做铺垫。应该放到x144 y208。
如果改了这条，请记得把01:08:700 (4) - 放到x201 y106 好

· 01:19:995 (4) - Ctrl+g ，因为01:17:877 (1,2,3) - 的出发点是上下上，这里为了Flow，理应出发点在下。done

[Hard ;A;]

这真的是Hard吗，我个人觉得可以算light insane了。除此之外，音效和排列没什么问题。

· 00:36:818 (1) - 前面是黄黄黄紫紫紫红红红，我倒是觉得为了好看，这里可以取消NC弄成绿色索性弄成红绿

· 01:19:641 (2) - 好像没有对齐 wocao

Good Luck!

ErunamoJAZZ

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hi, from Christmas Queue :3

[General]
lol, i hope the diff names dont would be problematic xD
And, aimod:

[Easy ;A;]
humm... CS2 will be hard to read, for instance in 01:16:465 (2,3) - or 00:47:524 (2,3) - etc. I really recommend CS3. uh... i think it works good for newbie players..
00:12:936 (1) - (nazi) blanket is not perfect. fixed!
00:21:406 (1,2) - fix spacing. Mmm.. idk, the spacing i very variant (0.96x~1.04x), and due 1/3 rhythm, i think is better if spacing is 1.0x in all map (spacing without "grid snap"). done!
00:22:818 (3) - lol, what happen here? extend a bit oh my.. fixed!
00:29:877 (1) - the real end is in 00:30:583 - (the previous sliders, listen fine for me, but not this). fixed!
01:40:465 (1) - (nazi) blanket is not perfect. yes!

BakaHuang's Normal ;^;

why without stack leniency??!, really think is a BIG bad idea. just use the leniency to 3:

And... CS in 4 is a bit small for a normal diff (this feels a bit like a Hard xD). Pls, consider CS to 3.5
[box=AiMod]

00:14:230 (3) - stacks in slider tail are hard to read for a normal. Pls, consider spacing and not stack. yes

SPOILER
Note this is very diferent to 00:40:112 (4) - where is fine the stack.(imo)
00:16:112 (1) - UNRANKABLE. need more time after spinner. Delete this note. Or change the spinner. removed
00:23:171 (4) - AiMod mark this, fix stack, is not perfect. done
01:22:347 (1) - same here... orz well i think it's okay since the start of the slider is near the center..
01:41:759 (3) - Same first. fixed!

[Hard ;A;]
mm.. same in normal about stack leniency. Why not trust in it? I‘ll keep it in Hard..
[box=AiMod]
00:19:289 (3) - i know thi broken the symetry, but, the rhythm are you folow is like (i think) umm.. it isn't imo
00:24:936 (3) - ^ following bass
00:39:641 (5,1) - nice, but i think will be very "failable", may be a sliler works better. yes!

Good luck!

Thanks for modding!

Last edited by fanzhen0019 2014-12-09T18:25:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kaguya Hourain

514 posts

Joined October 2012

Kaguya Hourain 2014-12-09T16:55:05+00:00

Hi~

General

*Thumbs up*

Easy ;A;

00:01:642 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm I'm not feeling these circles with the rhythm. Why not make a nice long slider there? :3
00:12:230 (2,1) - Blanket = Imperfect XD
00:21:406 (1,2,3) - Uneven DS here, make it x1.00 for both ends :>
01:00:936 (1,2) - It would play nicer if you continued the cursorpath the first slider is suggesting instead of breaking flow by moving slider 2 upwards
01:06:583 (1,2) - Same here <:
01:10:700 (1) - Hmmm this here is awkward. Freakin music making ticks like that >.< I dunno if you should move that slider from there. Maybe you'd like to start a slider from 3 and end it where 1 begins and do something else there.
01:20:700 (1) - Spinners might be too short for Easy.
01:39:759 (2,1) - That blanket like previously :3
Why copypasta fanzhen whyyyyy >.<

BakaHuang's Normal ;^;

00:05:524 (4,5) - I don't think this follows anything in the music >.>
Try this!~
00:08:347 (4,5) - Same as above actually!
00:11:171 (2,3) - U.U >.>
01:20:700 (1,1) - Pretty sure the space between the spinner's end and the next object is too short, fix that please :3
01:33:053 (6,7,4,5,2,3) - Same issue with all these objects as the previous ones at the start.

Hard ;A;

AR8 pls *runs*
00:15:053 (2,3,4,5) - Well this looks like a large jump! Consider nerfing it a little bit :3
00:17:053 (3,4) - Blanket
00:22:465 (2,3) - Muh blankets U.U
00:25:994 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks easier this time XD
00:35:524 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - You should do even spacing here it's too hard ;..;
00:48:112 (1) - Maybe try circle on purple tick and start slider on white tick?
01:22:465 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Hard hard hard nerf or riot!

Cilvery's Insane ;^;

OD to 8 please
00:06:700 (5,6) - There's no music there ;...;
00:14:229 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Music divided by thirds is better off being mapped as triples, I think that you should either make those reverse sliders or 1/3 stream with a bigger space every three beats!
Like this~
00:26:347 (1,2,3) - I will stand by my opinion here and suggest two reverse sliders instead of three 1/3 sliders!
00:35:171 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - It would fit the music much better here if you resized the first slider to 0,75 and continued like this:
~kawaii bokkusu~
00:49:053 (7,1,2) - Here you should keep 7 as a circle then continue with another circle then make a slider and then another circle (or make a reverse slider instead of slider + circle).
00:53:759 (1,2,3,4) - Ehhh overmapping >.>
01:10:818 (5,1,2,3,4) - Same theory as previously, resize to 0,75 and continue like previous screenshot \:D/
01:41:759 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - That is pretty hard to read/play. Up to you what you wanna do with it!

Well this will take some work! If you keep up with it you will have it ranked before christmas :3

Good luck~

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-12-10T04:50:16+00:00

hi
[Easy]

00:40:112 (1) - 这种连接部分我打了又打怎么也不舒爽，您看这怎样

01:10:700 (1) - 我看这个难度别的蓝线都在结尾，强迫症就是任性
01:28:818 - 配合下前面的加个圈吧

[Normal]

00:40:112 (4) - 按ds来吧，别挡了
其他没了

[Hard]

00:28:347 (3) - 蓝线加个圈？跟后面差不多
其他没了

[Insane]

00:06:347 - there is no music
00:20:700 (5,6) - seems more appropriate
00:53:759 (1,2,3) - try to add whistle at the sliders end
01:27:054 (1,1) - why you use nc here;w;

good luck :3

Cilvery

346 posts

Joined May 2011

Cilvery 2014-12-10T07:39:09+00:00

Frey wrote:
Yeah~ Christmas！
[Cilvery's Insane]

Nice diff with nice flow, I love it <3 omg.. I LOVE YOU thanks

· 00:05:877 (1) - remove whistle, because I don't hear any sound that should be emphasized in the music

· 00:08:700 (1) - same as above

· 00:11:524 (2) - same as above

· Ah, I think you missed lots of whistle hitsounds which should be added，add whistle plz↓ ya.. added them
00:16:112、00:16:818 (3) 、00:17:524、00:18:230 、00:18:936 、00:19:641... like this,until 00:32:347 (2)

· 01:04:818 (4) - change the addtions, it shoule be normal at 01:04:818 changed

· 01:35:170 (2,3) - add whistle? added at 01:34:818 -

· 01:37:994 (2,3) - add whistle? added at 01:37:641 -

Good Luck!

ty for the mod ^^

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,723 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

fanzhen0019 2014-12-10T08:24:58+00:00

nika:

SPOILER

nikachyan wrote:
from your m4m queue so i made this modwith low quality maybe

Hard ;A;
00:35:524 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - maybe too difficult for hard diff players i was going to make a insane...
00:37:641 (3,1) - now that you've put a large distance between previous objects (maybe not that large) why don't you put these objects closer? but they can be hit and look well :p
00:39:759 (1) - delete and at 00:39:994 - add a circle and NC at (2)'s place o.o..
00:41:053 - add done!
00:48:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - to difficult as well../ ;w;
00:51:406 (2,3) - are they too far away from other objects in this combo? nope indeed~
00:58:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - …………i suggest you alter some stream into hold sliders orz
01:22:465 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - ^ ^
i'm not good at hard diff, if it's bad ignore then ;w; nonono o3o

normal and easy……i've got no ideas, sorry
~~i'm not lazy i'm not lazy~~

Kaguya Hourain:

SPOILER

Kaguya Hourain wrote:
Hi~

General
*Thumbs up*

Easy ;A;
00:01:642 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm I'm not feeling these circles with the rhythm. Why not make a nice long slider there? :3 ;w; idk how to make good long sliders..
00:12:230 (2,1) - Blanket = Imperfect XD hope it's better now..
00:21:406 (1,2,3) - Uneven DS here, make it x1.00 for both ends :> ah i think i have fixed it already
01:00:936 (1,2) - It would play nicer if you continued the cursorpath the first slider is suggesting instead of breaking flow by moving slider 2 upwards ummm i intended to put it in X-axis
01:06:583 (1,2) - Same here <: ya same as above
01:10:700 (1) - Hmmm this here is awkward. Freakin music making ticks like that >.< I dunno if you should move that slider from there. Maybe you'd like to start a slider from 3 and end it where 1 begins and do something else there. but it's a slider :p at least players get 300 rather than 100 here.
01:20:700 (1) - Spinners might be too short for Easy. i hope not ;w;
01:39:759 (2,1) - That blanket like previously :3 yesyes!
Why copypasta fanzhen whyyyyy >.< aaa i did a lot of copy in easier diff ;w;

BakaHuang's Normal ;^;
00:05:524 (4,5) - I don't think this follows anything in the music >.> it follows indeed.. the sample you gave might be a bit hard for normal o.o
Try this!~
00:08:347 (4,5) - Same as above actually! yes~
00:11:171 (2,3) - U.U >.> n.n <.<
01:20:700 (1,1) - Pretty sure the space between the spinner's end and the next object is too short, fix that please :3 i have deleted one note already ;A;
01:33:053 (6,7,4,5,2,3) - Same issue with all these objects as the previous ones at the start. alright o.o

Hard ;A;
AR8 pls *runs* OAO
00:15:053 (2,3,4,5) - Well this looks like a large jump! Consider nerfing it a little bit :3 QAQ
00:17:053 (3,4) - Blanket fixed!
00:22:465 (2,3) - Muh blankets U.U wawawa fixxxx
00:25:994 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looks easier this time XD aha
00:35:524 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - You should do even spacing here it's too hard ;..; orz moved closer a bit
00:48:112 (1) - Maybe try circle on purple tick and start slider on white tick? yes!
01:22:465 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Hard hard hard nerf or riot! ❤

Well this will take some work! If you keep up with it you will have it ranked before christmas :3

Good luck~

Thanks guys!!!

Cilvery

346 posts

Joined May 2011

Cilvery 2014-12-10T14:13:05+00:00

nikachyan wrote:
from your m4m queue so i made this modwith low quality maybe

Cilvery's Insane ;^;
00:05:053 (2) - delete
00:06:230 (2,3) - why not use a slider to cover the rhythm of these two objects?
00:13:524 - add
00:17:877 (3) - it sounds better after ctrl+G, but i think the pattern should improve after this, however i've got no points on what should be the changes...sorry
00:19:171 - there is a vocal sound here, i suggest you'd better delete that reverse arrow and add two circles from here 00:19:289 -
00:20:583 - add a circle at the place of that slider, i don't know if that's overmap but it sounds better
00:20:700 (8) - if you take my suggestion above then at a circle at this time point as well
00:33:994 - add added
00:34:347 - add ^
01:41:759 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the music is downwards here, i think if you put the first 5 at the very top and make a stack there it will follow the music
01:36:936 (5) - why not put a same shape as 01:34:112 (5) - ? i think this is great! idk.. don't wanna use same patterns
01:39:994 (1,2) - could be higher
~~i'm not lazy i'm not lazy~~

ty for the mod ^^

Cilvery

346 posts

Joined May 2011

Cilvery 2014-12-10T14:15:33+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Cilvery's Insane ;^;
Not spinners?? ._. should i add it??
AiMod
00:09:877 (6) - this is overmapping.. really follow nothing.
00:12:700 (6) - ^
00:22:112 (3,5) - maybe you will try it:
00:34:112 (3,5) - like before:
00:37:641 - note here? (stacked over 00:37:994 (1) - )
00:45:641 - note here?
00:47:524 (1) - AAAHHH, the real end is in 00:47:877 - ... pls fix ;___;
00:48:230 - why ignore this?
01:24:936 (3) - hehehe, is not symetryc o.o (use Ctrl+H for see).
Good luck!

sorry no changes, thanks for the mod though ^^

Cilvery

346 posts

Joined May 2011

Cilvery 2014-12-10T14:20:08+00:00

AIR wrote:
hi
[Insane]
00:06:347 - there is no music
00:20:700 (5,6) - seems more appropriate
00:53:759 (1,2,3) - try to add whistle at the sliders end added
01:27:054 (1,1) - why you use nc here;w; fixed
good luck :3

ty for the mod ^^

Lavender

886 posts

Joined January 2014

Lavender 2014-12-10T16:48:59+00:00

From your M4M queue

Red means you should fix
Blue means highly recommended to fix
Black means my personal commenrts, feel free to ignore.

[General]

Your BG size is 1288*768, please use 1366*768 or 1024*768
Use http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav to replace drum-sliderslide.wav
Why do you add some like ;A; after your diff name? You'd better delete it.(I admit that it's moe.)
I really don't know how to deal with 1/3 maps, so I just give some simple suggestions.

[Easy ;A;]
Fine.

[BakaHuang's Normal ;^;]

00:05:171 (3,4) - 00:07:994 (3,4) - 00:21:053 (5,1) - 00:22:700 (3,4) - ....Please don't stack in Normal.
00:36:583 (6) - Delete it?
00:36:818 (1) - It should end at 00:37:994, because u should make player have enough time to react to a note after spinner.
01:22:347 (1) - Same reason, you can replace this slider with a note at 01:22:818

[Hard ;A;]

00:06:230 (3) - This slider is inconvenient for playing, rotate -15
00:42:230 (4,5) - Too far
01:19:171 (1) - Inconvenient for playing.

Overall fine.

[Cilvery's Insane ;^;]

00:14:700 (3,1) - Flow not good.
00:32:347 (2,1,1) - I can't hear a decrescendo here. So we don't need to add green lines to change the SV
00:39:641 (1,2) - Overlap looks bad.
00:47:524 (1,2) - Use two sliders to replace it, 00:47:524 - 00:47:877 and 00:47:994 - 00:48:112. And current distance between 1 and 2 is too far.

Good luck. 我好想要腿照啊prprprpr

CSLM

1,058 posts

Joined May 2013

CSLM 2014-12-13T02:42:43+00:00

m4m from your queue

Unrankeable
Important
Suggestion

General

Unrankeable BG: the BGs must be of 1280x720 at least for a 720p

Easy

The DS is a lot confusing in 1.00x, rised up to 1.20x better plzz

00:17:877 (2) - i feel the flow of this slider weird, something rect imo, will be better if you move the start point of the slider and move it too: x184 y216 (of that way make a blanket with 00:15:759 (1) - )
00:55:289 (1) - i don't think apropiated this kind of sliders in the easy diffs, maybe if you delete a reverse and add a note or delete 2 reverse and reemplaze it with another 2/1 slider will be better
01:14:347 (2) - the same thing of the start, the flow is weird imo
01:16:465 (2,3) - this 2 sliders of that way is... weird, don't make a good style imo, change it plzz

Baka Normal

00:05:524 (4,5) - is rhythm isn't apropiated imo for that part, if you add a note instead of the slider, move (5) a 1/3 tick less (00:05:759 - ) and take of a reverse will have a better rhythm imo
00:08:347 (4,5) - ^
00:11:171 (2,3) - ^
00:36:818 (1,1) - this is unrankeable, all normal diffs must have at least 2 BPM ticks of recovery time after a spinner
00:50:700 (3,4,5,6) - this don't have a rhythm consistence with the patterns of before, change it for a rhythm more consistent plzz
01:20:700 (1,1) - the same about the spinner thing

Hard

I'm not sure if the star spread of this diff is acceptable for a hard, the map have jumps and a lot of 1/3 stream (which isn't normal for a hard), and why the hp is older than the insane? you must check this with a BAT.

00:05:406 (1) - ugly overmap, i don't see apropiated a single microslider of this way, i think what you could making better
00:08:230 (1) - ^
00:11:053 (1) - ^
00:28:112 (2,3) - you can make this blanket better imo
01:32:936 (1) - the same thing about the overmap, and here: 01:32:936 (1) - here: 01:35:760 (1) - and here: 01:38:583 (1) -

Cil Insane

Great insane! the only thing what i see is the overmap in the start of the diff, like in 00:06:230 (2,3,4,5,6) - and 00:09:641 (5,6) - i think what that will be noticied

nice song
i think what you need a diff between the normal and hard, i don think what that gap is rankeable
GL with the map :3
choo choo~

Lust

osu! Alumni

2,667 posts

Joined January 2013

Lust 2014-12-18T01:47:48+00:00

Hey

[General]
Whats up with the ;^; on the diff names, I don't get it lol better to just remove them

[Cilvery's Insane]
Great diff, flows and plays wonderfully

00:20:818 (6) - Eh the drum hitsounds on the repeat and end make the play a bit strange. Maybe have a circle where it starts followed by a slider like so?
01:36:936 (5) - This slider shape is a bit too clustered together, makes it look and play a bit awkwardly in comparison to the rest of the map. Maybe do something like 01:34:112 (5) - ?

[Hard]

00:01:642 (1) - I don't really get the NC spam that populates the diff. Nothing in the music really calls for all this stuff imo, so maybe just a routine combo coloring will be best and more appropriate.

[BakaHuang's Normal]

00:22:700 (3,4) - Having a stack at the end of a slider 1/3 distance apart is kind of tricky. The hitburst will make it hard to read so I suggest you find another location for 4

Call me back

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,723 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

fanzhen0019 2014-12-21T07:54:44+00:00

Fixed some in Teichan's and CSLMVenezuela's mod!

Also fixed diff name issue and other stuff! Now waiting for Cilvery's response.

Thanks guys

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Skystar 2014-12-21T12:19:44+00:00

please keep ;A; ;^; they're too cute!!

;A; ;^;

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

Joined January 2010

Garven 2014-12-22T00:10:09+00:00

[General]
Keep the 泣 in the diff names. It amuses me.

[Easy]
Tick rate 1 fits this song best. 2 doesn't fit the swing style
01:43:289 (1) - I'd position this near the bottom so you don't have as much overlap under the 01:40:465 (1) - slider.

[Ms. Huang]
00:38:700 (1) - Give more recovery time.

Two beats should be fine.
01:22:347 (1) - ^
00:39:641 (3,4) - It'd be better if this wasn't stacked like 00:42:465 (3,4) - to keep your momentum going during the kiai. It's also iffy in a normal difficulty anyway due to it being more difficult to discern the rhythm when it's stacked.

[Hard]
The map itself is fairly okay, but you should think about reducing some of the jumps a bit to help with the transition from Normal to Hard. The one that made me most alarmed was 01:24:583 (4,1) -
00:28:112 (2,3,4,5) - Be careful about your rhythms vs. distance snap. These are very duplicitous .
00:22:465 (2,3,4,5) - ^ etc. Fix these instances.

[しるべり]
良い(・∀・)

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,723 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

fanzhen0019 2014-12-24T12:55:43+00:00

fixed all and waiting for Cilvery's response! thank you garven

Cilvery

346 posts

Joined May 2011

Cilvery 2014-12-25T11:00:27+00:00

CSLMVenezuela wrote:
Cil Insane

Great insane! the only thing what i see is the overmap in the start of the diff, like in 00:06:230 (2,3,4,5,6) - and 00:09:641 (5,6) - i think what that will be noticied ahhhhhhh.. changed!

thanks for the mod~

Cilvery

346 posts

Joined May 2011

Cilvery 2014-12-25T11:02:03+00:00

[quote="Lust"]Hey

[Cilvery's Insane]
Great diff, flows and plays wonderfully

00:20:818 (6) - Eh the drum hitsounds on the repeat and end make the play a bit strange. Maybe have a circle where it starts followed by a slider like so?
01:36:936 (5) - This slider shape is a bit too clustered together, makes it look and play a bit awkwardly in comparison to the rest of the map. Maybe do something like 01:34:112 (5) - ? changed the slider!

ty for mod!

Cilvery

346 posts

Joined May 2011

Cilvery 2014-12-25T11:02:48+00:00

Garven wrote:
[General]
[しるべり]
良い(・∀・) <3

codes

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