This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年1月12日 at 21:06:23

Artist: Dormir
Title: Une mage blanche
Source: REFLEC BEAT limelight
Tags: konami bemani crimm TOMOSUKE
BPM: 193
Filesize: 3644kb
Play Time: 01:48
Difficulties Available:

1. BASIC (1.47 stars, 123 notes)
2. EXTRA (5.06 stars, 479 notes)
3. HARD (2.93 stars, 192 notes)
4. HYPER (3.88 stars, 347 notes)
5. MEDIUM (1.9 stars, 171 notes)

Download: Dormir - Une mage blanche
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BASIC 100%
MEDIUM 100%
HARD 60% (Remapping)
HYPER 100%
EXTRA 100%

Hello, from my M4M queue. It's only ideas and my personal opinion. I hope something will help.

[Extra]

00:01:593 (1,2,3,4) - I think follow the piano. Current pattern is not fit here. Please, use this similar:
1st example: http://puu.sh/ddk99/c9d5c41b8b.jpg
2nd example: http://puu.sh/ddkgt/7f2924508e.jpg
3rd example: http://puu.sh/ddkjz/4f09b49736.jpg
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00:04:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above: ^
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00:09:054 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above. Examples:
1st: http://puu.sh/ddkrw/addcc69c13.jpg
2nd: http://puu.sh/ddkvF/078bad9a90.jpg
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00:11:075 (8,9,10) - This triplet is not fit here, because this sound is not drum roll. (Simply echoes.) Delete 00:11:153 (9) - circle or use 1/2 slider.
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00:13:717 (8,1) - I think follow the vocal. This sliders is not fit here. Delete this objects and use this similar:
1st: http://puu.sh/ddkP1/97696700ea.jpg
2nd: http://puu.sh/ddkRy/4f51e14702.jpg Better fits the drums and vocal!
3rd: http://puu.sh/ddkUT/dfdd2a8a37.jpg Vocal & Drums.
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00:18:691 (9,1) - Same as before. Follow the vocal. I think this sliders unfitting here. This sliders endings are not good. Please, use this similar:
1st: http://puu.sh/ddlcj/8abb9bb60f.jpg
2nd: http://puu.sh/ddle2/657684d401.jpg
3rd: http://puu.sh/ddlfi/22ae5e5805.jpg
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00:19:313 (2) - I think two circle is better, because two cirle is better fits the drums, and vocal!
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00:20:246 (5,6,7,8,9) - Again, a strange part. I don't feel that the sliders fit here. Use this similar:

1st: http://puu.sh/ddlAR/1001085741.jpg Better fits to the drums.
2nd: http://puu.sh/ddlJe/7cdfe286de.jpg Better fits the vocal.
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00:28:640 (8,1,2,3,4) - Same as above. Vocal, drums, or piano? The sliders again strangely begin. Better following the vocal or drums:
1st: http://puu.sh/ddlXb/604b999ae3.jpg Drums, and vocal
2nd: http://puu.sh/ddm0V/77aef1aa7a.jpg Vocal & drums.
Please, use this similar!
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00:32:837 (6,7) - I think replace them! slider --> Circle! This circle is not fits the trumpet! Timeline: http://puu.sh/ddmk8/545ddea122.jpg I think better!
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00:34:391 (2,3) - I feel these sliders don't fit here. I think one circle and one repeating slider is better. Better follow the piano. Examples:
1st: http://puu.sh/ddmyY/bf5b29c29d.jpg
2nd: http://puu.sh/ddmAZ/04e7c9cab8.jpg
Use this similar!
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00:36:723 (2) - I think two circle is better fits the drums!
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00:37:033 (3,4) - I think replace them! slider --> Circle! Same as 00:32:837 (6,7) -
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00:47:914 (6) - Two circle is better fits the vocal, and background drums.
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00:53:199 (8,9) - This sliders is not fit here. Please, map the stronger sound: Put circle here: 00:53:199 - and put 1/2 slider here: 00:53:355 - and add once repeat. It's better fits the stronger sound! Timeline: http://puu.sh/ddmVw/554e16ac30.jpg
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00:57:085 (4) - This slider is not fit here, because the high pitched piano ends here: 00:56:930 - Please, use two circle. I think two circle is better here.
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01:00:816 (9,10,11) - Same as 00:11:075 (8,9,10) -
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01:01:904 (3,4) - Replace them! Circle --> Slider. Here begins the vocals: 01:02:059 - . This 1/2 slider is better fits here.
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01:02:681 (6) - Two circle is better, because trumpet is ends here: 01:02:681 -. This background vocal is 1/3, but don't map out. Please, follow the drums, use two circle.
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01:06:567 (2,3) - Replace them. Circle --> Slider. I think better fits the drums and short trumpet.
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01:08:277 (9,10) - Same as above. Replace them. Slider ---> Circle. This 1/2 slider is better here: 01:08:277 - Fits the trumpet. Screenshot: http://puu.sh/ddnVo/ca447ab150.jpg
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01:11:541 (2,3) - Same as above ^
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01:14:028 (2,3,4) - Better follow the trumpet: Screenshot: http://puu.sh/ddo5P/b7e6e30631.jpg
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01:19:002 (2,3,4) - Same as... Trumpet: http://puu.sh/ddobm/af725b3558.jpg
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01:22:733 (6) - I think two circle is better!
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01:23:044 (7,8) - Please, follow the vocal! use 1/1 slider here: 01:23:044 - , and put circle here: 01:23:510 -
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01:31:049 (11) - This circle is unnecessary, and overmapped. There is no clearly audible beat! Delete circle, please.
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01:39:054 (2,3,4) - Replace them. Circles ---> Slider. Better fits the vocal! Screenshot: http://puu.sh/ddowy/d6e7443d3b.jpg
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01:42:785 (7,8,9,10) - This 1/2 slider is better fits here: 01:43:096 - Use this similar: Screenshot: http://puu.sh/ddoBI/fbc9416808.jpg
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01:47:914 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - This is overmapped, because it's not drumroll, and very low drums! Please, follow the trumpet, delete stream!

[Hard]

00:03:147 (5,6) - I think use one circle and one 1/1 slider, because better fits the piano! This piano is stronger than background sound! use this similar:
1st: http://puu.sh/ddoZk/ca5ed0c718.jpg
2nd: http://puu.sh/ddp0E/288dba0848.jpg
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00:05:634 (5) - Remove repeat, because this repeat slider is not fit the piano. Move slider here: 00:05:790 - , and put circle here: 00:05:634 - Another idea: Remove this slider and put circles here: 00:05:634 - 00:05:790 - 00:05:945 -
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00:08:122 (5) - Same as above ^ Use this similar.
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00:11:075 (9) - Same as extra. This is drum echoes, it's not 1/4 beat. Use two circle!
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00:17:448 (4) - This 1/1 slider is not fit here, because the vocal ends here: 00:17:448 - Use three circle, follow the drums!
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00:18:691 (7,1) - I think one circle, and 1/1 slider is better! Current objects is not fits the vocals! use this: http://puu.sh/ddqog/060fa2f350.jpg
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00:20:246 (5) - One 1/2 slider and one circle, or 3 circle is better than 1/1 slider! Better fits the vocals, or drums.
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00:23:355 (6) - As you follow the piano, three circle is better fits here. However, if follow the vocals:
00:22:733 (4,5,6) - This is not fit. Better conception: http://puu.sh/ddsnB/af8345db68.jpg
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00:25:220 (5,6,7,8,9) - Same as. I think follow the vocal, because stronger!
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00:27:707 (5,6,7,8,9) - Same as ^
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00:28:951 (1) - Move slider here: 00:28:795 - because the vocals starts here, and put circle here: 00:29:261 -
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00:32:992 (6) - Two circle is better fit here.
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00:34:391 (2) - Please, don't use 11 slider here, because not fit here, doesn't follow anything. Put circle here: 00:34:391 - , and 1/2 slider here: 00:34:546 - . it's follow the piano.
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00:40:764 (7) - This repeatin slider is not fit here, because no clearly audible 1/4 beat. Use two circle.
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00:52:888 (4) - This slider is not fit here. Please, follow the piano, and drum. Put circle here: 00:52:888 - , and 1/2 slider here: 00:53:044 -
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00:54:132 (2) - Please, follow high pitched piano! Three circle is so much better, and the 1/1 slider is not follow anything!
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00:55:375 (6) - Same as above. Follow the high pitched piano.
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00:56:774 (2) - Same as above. It doesn't fit here.
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01:00:816 (8) - Same as 00:11:075 (9) -
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01:02:837 (5) - This repeat slider is not fit here. Follow the trumpet. Better conception: http://puu.sh/ddtCC/b0057250b5.jpg
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01:10:298 (5,6,7) - This sliders is not follow the trumpet. Please, use this: http://puu.sh/ddtIR/a382629b92.jpg
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Okay, stop!

The rest: (01:10:298 to 01:49:158)
Just to repeat myself... Please, follow the stronger sound, pianos and vocals! Some sliders, long sliders is not fit / weird, and wrong place at the starts or ends.

[Normal]

That's it:

00:02:215 (2) - I think move slider here: 00:02:059 - because piano starts here.
00:20:712 (4) - Move slider here: 00:20:712 - and change slider end here: 00:21:179 - Better fits the vocals.
00:21:489 (1) - This long slider is not fit here. Please, follow the vocal.
00:22:422 (2,3) - Please, follow the vocals! This 1/1 spam is not fit here.
00:24:909 (2,3) - Same as. Follow the vocals. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/ddvpl/861ee6c8e4.jpg
00:28:329 (4) - Move slider here: 00:28:173 - and change slider end here: 00:28:640 - . Better follow the vocals.

[Easy]

It's okay.

Good luck!

Kazuya wrote:

Hello, from my M4M queue. It's only ideas and my personal opinion. I hope something will help.

[Extra]

00:01:593 (1,2,3,4) - I think follow the piano. Current pattern is not fit here. Please, use this similar: I suppose crrent rhythm wouldn't be problem, and put notes consistently as same parts.
1st example: http://puu.sh/ddk99/c9d5c41b8b.jpg
2nd example: http://puu.sh/ddkgt/7f2924508e.jpg
3rd example: http://puu.sh/ddkjz/4f09b49736.jpg
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00:04:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above: ^
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00:09:054 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above. Examples: ^
1st: http://puu.sh/ddkrw/addcc69c13.jpg
2nd: http://puu.sh/ddkvF/078bad9a90.jpg
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00:11:075 (8,9,10) - This triplet is not fit here, because this sound is not drum roll. (Simply echoes.) Delete 00:11:153 (9) - circle or use 1/2 slider. Fixed.
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00:13:717 (8,1) - I think follow the vocal. This sliders is not fit here. Delete this objects and use this similar: Current follows strong vocal parts I suppose.
1st: http://puu.sh/ddkP1/97696700ea.jpg
2nd: http://puu.sh/ddkRy/4f51e14702.jpg Better fits the drums and vocal!
3rd: http://puu.sh/ddkUT/dfdd2a8a37.jpg Vocal & Drums.
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00:18:691 (9,1) - Same as before. Follow the vocal. I think this sliders unfitting here. This sliders endings are not good. Please, use this similar:
1st: http://puu.sh/ddlcj/8abb9bb60f.jpg
2nd: http://puu.sh/ddle2/657684d401.jpg
3rd: http://puu.sh/ddlfi/22ae5e5805.jpg
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00:19:313 (2) - I think two circle is better, because two cirle is better fits the drums, and vocal! Fixed with above suggestion.
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00:20:246 (5,6,7,8,9) - Again, a strange part. I don't feel that the sliders fit here. Use this similar: Another fixed.

1st: http://puu.sh/ddlAR/1001085741.jpg Better fits to the drums.
2nd: http://puu.sh/ddlJe/7cdfe286de.jpg Better fits the vocal.
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00:28:640 (8,1,2,3,4) - Same as above. Vocal, drums, or piano? The sliders again strangely begin. Better following the vocal or drums: I just checked it, but current sounds ok to follow the vocal.
1st: http://puu.sh/ddlXb/604b999ae3.jpg Drums, and vocal
2nd: http://puu.sh/ddm0V/77aef1aa7a.jpg Vocal & drums.
Please, use this similar!
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00:32:837 (6,7) - I think replace them! slider --> Circle! This circle is not fits the trumpet! Timeline: http://puu.sh/ddmk8/545ddea122.jpg I think better! I just want to follow the tranpet beause it sounds loudly, so keep it.
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00:34:391 (2,3) - I feel these sliders don't fit here. I think one circle and one repeating slider is better. Better follow the piano. Examples: Another fixed.
1st: http://puu.sh/ddmyY/bf5b29c29d.jpg
2nd: http://puu.sh/ddmAZ/04e7c9cab8.jpg
Use this similar!
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00:36:723 (2) - I think two circle is better fits the drums! I just minly use slider in this diff, so keep it.
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00:37:033 (3,4) - I think replace them! slider --> Circle! Same as 00:32:837 (6,7) - Fixed.
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00:47:914 (6) - Two circle is better fits the vocal, and background drums.
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00:53:199 (8,9) - This sliders is not fit here. Please, map the stronger sound: Put circle here: 00:53:199 - and put 1/2 slider here: 00:53:355 - and add once repeat. It's better fits the stronger sound! Timeline: http://puu.sh/ddmVw/554e16ac30.jpg fixed.
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00:57:085 (4) - This slider is not fit here, because the high pitched piano ends here: 00:56:930 - Please, use two circle. I think two circle is better here. keep it now, but consider.
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01:00:816 (9,10,11) - Same as 00:11:075 (8,9,10) - Fixed.
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01:01:904 (3,4) - Replace them! Circle --> Slider. Here begins the vocals: 01:02:059 - . This 1/2 slider is better fits here. Keep it now, current would be fine for me.
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01:02:681 (6) - Two circle is better, because trumpet is ends here: 01:02:681 -. This background vocal is 1/3, but don't map out. Please, follow the drums, use two circle.^
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01:06:567 (2,3) - Replace them. Circle --> Slider. I think better fits the drums and short trumpet. ^
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01:08:277 (9,10) - Same as above. Replace them. Slider ---> Circle. This 1/2 slider is better here: 01:08:277 - Fits the trumpet. Screenshot: http://puu.sh/ddnVo/ca447ab150.jpg Fixed.
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01:11:541 (2,3) - Same as above ^ Really same? I don't suppose both is alike part.
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01:14:028 (2,3,4) - Better follow the trumpet: Screenshot: http://puu.sh/ddo5P/b7e6e30631.jpg Fixed.
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01:19:002 (2,3,4) - Same as... Trumpet: http://puu.sh/ddobm/af725b3558.jpg Fixed.
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01:22:733 (6) - I think two circle is better! No change.
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01:23:044 (7,8) - Please, follow the vocal! use 1/1 slider here: 01:23:044 - , and put circle here: 01:23:510 - It sounds enough to follow the ocal I suppose.
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01:31:049 (11) - This circle is unnecessary, and overmapped. There is no clearly audible beat! Delete circle, please. No, it sounds rest of vocal clearly and triplet looks better for next part.
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01:39:054 (2,3,4) - Replace them. Circles ---> Slider. Better fits the vocal! Screenshot: http://puu.sh/ddowy/d6e7443d3b.jpg I'll remap this part because it's not good pattern, but now I don't have an idea...
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01:42:785 (7,8,9,10) - This 1/2 slider is better fits here: 01:43:096 - Use this similar: Screenshot: http://puu.sh/ddoBI/fbc9416808.jpg
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01:47:914 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - This is overmapped, because it's not drumroll, and very low drums! Please, follow the trumpet, delete stream! I'll get more opinion on this part.

[Hard]

00:03:147 (5,6) - I think use one circle and one 1/1 slider, because better fits the piano! This piano is stronger than background sound! use this similar: keep current pattern now.
1st: http://puu.sh/ddoZk/ca5ed0c718.jpg
2nd: http://puu.sh/ddp0E/288dba0848.jpg
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00:05:634 (5) - Remove repeat, because this repeat slider is not fit the piano. Move slider here: 00:05:790 - , and put circle here: 00:05:634 - Another idea: Remove this slider and put circles here: 00:05:634 - 00:05:790 - 00:05:945 -
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00:08:122 (5) - Same as above ^ Use this similar. I don't know why you hate a repeat slider, it follows the instrumental learly so I don't have a reason to change.
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00:11:075 (9) - Same as extra. This is drum echoes, it's not 1/4 beat. Use two circle! Fixed.
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00:17:448 (4) - This 1/1 slider is not fit here, because the vocal ends here: 00:17:448 - Use three circle, follow the drums! No, it's not extra diff so 1/1 slider would be allowed.
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00:18:691 (7,1) - I think one circle, and 1/1 slider is better! Current objects is not fits the vocals! use this: http://puu.sh/ddqog/060fa2f350.jpg If I do so, I can't follow the downbeat, it's not consistence for this diff.
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00:20:246 (5) - One 1/2 slider and one circle, or 3 circle is better than 1/1 slider! Better fits the vocals, or drums. I know what you mean, but it's high BPM so I mainly use 1/1 slider instead of circles on this diff.
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00:23:355 (6) - As you follow the piano, three circle is better fits here. However, if follow the vocals: ^
00:22:733 (4,5,6) - This is not fit. Better conception: http://puu.sh/ddsnB/af8345db68.jpg Just consider now, I don't have a good placement.
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00:25:220 (5,6,7,8,9) - Same as. I think follow the vocal, because stronger! stronger what?
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00:27:707 (5,6,7,8,9) - Same as ^ ^
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00:28:951 (1) - Move slider here: 00:28:795 - because the vocals starts here, and put circle here: 00:29:261 - Again I say, it is better to follow the downbeat rather than voal on this diff.
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00:32:992 (6) - Two circle is better fit here. Same as Ex
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00:34:391 (2) - Please, don't use 11 slider here, because not fit here, doesn't follow anything. Put circle here: 00:34:391 - , and 1/2 slider here: 00:34:546 - . it's follow the piano. Fixed.
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00:40:764 (7) - This repeatin slider is not fit here, because no clearly audible 1/4 beat. Use two circle. Ex has a stream, so I just use repeat slider better.
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00:52:888 (4) - This slider is not fit here. Please, follow the piano, and drum. Put circle here: 00:52:888 - , and 1/2 slider here: 00:53:044 - No, for same reason to maily use 1/1 slider.
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00:54:132 (2) - Please, follow high pitched piano! Three circle is so much better, and the 1/1 slider is not follow anything! ^
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00:55:375 (6) - Same as above. Follow the high pitched piano. ^
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00:56:774 (2) - Same as above. It doesn't fit here. ^
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01:00:816 (8) - Same as 00:11:075 (9) - ^
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01:02:837 (5) - This repeat slider is not fit here. Follow the trumpet. Better conception: http://puu.sh/ddtCC/b0057250b5.jpg Fixed
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01:10:298 (5,6,7) - This sliders is not follow the trumpet. Please, use this: http://puu.sh/ddtIR/a382629b92.jpg Fixed
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Okay, stop!

The rest: (01:10:298 to 01:49:158)
Just to repeat myself... Please, follow the stronger sound, pianos and vocals! Some sliders, long sliders is not fit / weird, and wrong place at the starts or ends.

[Normal]

That's it:

00:02:215 (2) - I think move slider here: 00:02:059 - because piano starts here. It's a first note for music, so 1/1 rhythm would be fine.
00:20:712 (4) - Move slider here: 00:20:712 - and change slider end here: 00:21:179 - Better fits the vocals.
00:21:489 (1) - This long slider is not fit here. Please, follow the vocal. No, I just follor the instrumental not vocal.
00:22:422 (2,3) - Please, follow the vocals! This 1/1 spam is not fit here. ^
00:24:909 (2,3) - Same as. Follow the vocals. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/ddvpl/861ee6c8e4.jpg ^
00:28:329 (4) - Move slider here: 00:28:173 - and change slider end here: 00:28:640 - . Better follow the vocals. ^

[Easy]

It's okay.

Good luck!

I mainly follow the music and instrumental, not vocal so I refuse your suggestion a lot sorry.
Thanks for modding.

Hey its back \o/

hey what this is uploaded again
go go go!

Sweet, I really like this song :3

Finally back

hi

[Extra]
00:00:660 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7124398 try, the current pattern is kinda jarring tbh. this one looks more natural
00:18:225 (8,1) - might a bit hard to read with the reverse point appear late imo, try 1/2 slider + note instead ?
00:30:505 (10,11,12,13) - it's already 1/6 here
00:38:588 (10) - missing clap
00:48:381 (9) - ^
01:00:971 (11,1) - anti jump is pretty weird here considering the previous rhythm is so intense and has big spacing, players may missread easily imo. how about adding note there or just move them farther ?
01:22:111 (4,5) - kinda big jump when there're no highbeat on the song
01:39:831 - add clap

[Hyper]
00:30:505 (6) - 1/6
00:43:717 (10) - stack this with (4) to create jump ? it need one here imo
clean diff

[Medium]
00:02:215 (2,3) - make them a same rhythm like others 00:04:080 (1,2,3) - , 00:06:567 (1,2,3) - etc ?
00:33:925 (1,2) - kinda weird to see this sound on the red tick being covered while you skipped all the unique instrument at the next 00:36:412 (1,2,3,4) - with a simple 1/1 sliders
00:58:640 (5,1) - try note and slider ? more natural to play than letting the slider tail covering the downbeat imo

[Basic]
00:33:925 (1,2) - idk it may be hard for beginners to catch this kind of rythm
00:50:090 (1,1) - the minimal rest spinner time for easiest diff is 1 stanza (full beat until 00:52:577 - )

good luck !

will check later and edit this post.

Momochikun wrote:

hi

[Extra]
00:00:660 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7124398 try, the current pattern is kinda jarring tbh. this one looks more natural
00:18:225 (8,1) - might a bit hard to read with the reverse point appear late imo, try 1/2 slider + note instead ? But the pattern from (4) is consistence so I suppose it is ok.
00:30:505 (10,11,12,13) - it's already 1/6 here I know but it is hard to hear this 1/6 sound, and I already ask this part to some players, and current one is better to play. So I'll get some opinion.
00:38:588 (10) - missing clap
00:48:381 (9) - ^ No, I just keep my patter on here.
01:00:971 (11,1) - anti jump is pretty weird here considering the previous rhythm is so intense and has big spacing, players may missread easily imo. how about adding note there or just move them farther ?
01:22:111 (4,5) - kinda big jump when there're no highbeat on the song
01:39:831 - add clap No fixed in same reason.

[Hyper]
00:30:505 (6) - 1/6 This is a Hyper diff so 1/6 rhythm would be difficult to play.
00:43:717 (10) - stack this with (4) to create jump ? it need one here imo
clean diff

[Medium]
00:02:215 (2,3) - make them a same rhythm like others 00:04:080 (1,2,3) - , 00:06:567 (1,2,3) - etc ? It's intensional not to be bored.
00:33:925 (1,2) - kinda weird to see this sound on the red tick being covered while you skipped all the unique instrument at the next 00:36:412 (1,2,3,4) - with a simple 1/1 sliders
00:58:640 (5,1) - try note and slider ? more natural to play than letting the slider tail covering the downbeat imo I suppose current one is better to play.

[Basic]
00:33:925 (1,2) - idk it may be hard for beginners to catch this kind of rythm Just consider on this point.
00:50:090 (1,1) - the minimal rest spinner time for easiest diff is 1 stanza (full beat until 00:52:577 - )

good luck !

No commet = fixed.
Thanks for modding.

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