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V.K - Evolution Era

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FreeSongs
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FreeSongs
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on February 5, 2015 at 9:23:38 PM

Artist: V.K
Title: Evolution Era
Source: Deemo
BPM: 180
Filesize: 6654kb
Play Time: 02:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2.55 stars, 323 notes)
  2. Beginner (1.82 stars, 182 notes)
  3. Evolution (5.3 stars, 656 notes)
  4. Extreme (4.93 stars, 595 notes)
  5. Insane (3.84 stars, 445 notes)
Download: V.K - Evolution Era
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#9

E.E.
2014/12/24 add storyboard
2015/02/02 all done!

Enjoy it :)
Mapset
Evolution - 100%
Extreme - 100%
Insane - 100%
Advanced - 100%
Beginner - 100%
Modders
Oracle
Kazuya
Last edited by FreeSongs , edited 20 times in total.
Oracle
571 posts
Joined April 2012
Oracle
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22:21 FreeSongs: hi~
22:22 Oracle: hii
22:22 FreeSongs: 有空吗。ww
22:22 Oracle: 有有有
22:22 Oracle: 刚吃了寿司
22:23 FreeSongs: 爷爷QAQ
22:23 FreeSongs: 你们都有寿司吃
22:23 *FreeSongs is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/574547 V.K - Evolution Era]
22:23 Oracle: 啊
22:23 Oracle: 你做了insane耶
22:23 FreeSongs: insane看看怎么样
22:23 FreeSongs: 嗯
22:23 Oracle: 让我用鼠标打打看
22:23 Oracle: 我鼠标400pc
22:24 FreeSongs: 。。
22:27 FreeSongs: 。。。
22:27 Oracle: 卡了
22:27 FreeSongs: 果然鼠标飞了
22:27 FreeSongs: 。
22:27 Oracle: 会突然卡几秒
22:27 Oracle: 直接gg
22:27 FreeSongs: …………
22:27 FreeSongs: 皮皮果然蠢
22:27 Oracle: 感觉circle跳比起滑条跳
22:27 Oracle: 大了
22:28 FreeSongs: 要保持一致吗。。
22:31 Oracle: 不是 滑条太简单
22:31 Oracle: 圈太难
22:31 FreeSongs: 这样啊。。
22:31 Oracle: 我觉得主要还是 难度不均衡
22:31 Oracle: 00:21:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 你看这种 很简单
22:32 Oracle: 00:26:826 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这音乐完全没啥变化 突然难了这么多
22:32 FreeSongs: 嗯。。
22:32 Oracle: 00:36:159 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个对于I来说感觉太长了。。
22:32 Oracle: 也可能是我没板子打不好
22:33 FreeSongs: 我是觉得这个比后面好多都要简单。。
22:33 Oracle: 00:58:659 (4) - 这个ctrl+G一下吧
22:33 Oracle: 我还没说到后面呢=-=
22:33 FreeSongs: 我错惹QAQ
22:34 Oracle: 01:06:326 (4,5,6) - 我觉得这三个ctrl+G一下比较好
22:34 Oracle: flow就顺了
22:34 FreeSongs: 猴fixed
22:34 FreeSongs: 58的那个也fixed
22:35 Oracle: 01:18:326 (2,3,4) - 这flow比较坠毁
22:35 Oracle: 要是非得这样 宁愿23ctrl+G
22:36 Oracle: 01:22:993 (11) - 这个得往下放一点
22:36 Oracle: 比9低才舒服
22:36 FreeSongs: 和78共线？
22:36 Oracle: 比如184 52
22:37 FreeSongs: 前一个我再想想咋改
22:37 Oracle: 01:24:993 (7) - 这个也要往外移一点
22:37 FreeSongs: 猴
22:37 Oracle: 试试504 192
22:37 Oracle: 思路是78和6的尾巴做一个类似正三角跳
22:38 FreeSongs: 哦！
22:38 Oracle: 01:30:993 (10,11,1) - 我觉得这个flow
22:38 Oracle: 也不是太好
22:38 Oracle: 你9之后突然逆着过来
22:39 Oracle: 然后10到11的方向完全变了
22:39 Oracle: 这时候接着后面的01:31:159 (11,1) -
22:39 Oracle: 又逆了一次flow
22:41 FreeSongs: 01:31:326 (1) - ctrl+G呢
22:41 Oracle: 好
22:41 Oracle: 01:49:993 (1,2,3) - 这里莫名的变大了这么多
22:41 FreeSongs: 然后10 11 上移 形成上升的一个flow
22:41 Oracle: 没有transition
22:41 FreeSongs: 音乐感觉变大啦
22:42 Oracle: 没有一个过度啊
22:42 Oracle: 01:51:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个有点overdone 主要还是打起来也不特别顺
22:42 Oracle: 我知道你在做8圈跳。。
22:43 Oracle: 另外我还是建议01:50:327 - 减小
22:43 FreeSongs: hhh
22:43 Oracle: 01:52:659 - 这里开始才做大
22:43 FreeSongs: 猴
22:43 Oracle: 01:57:326 (4,5,6,7) - 这一圈
22:43 Oracle: 一拳打爆
22:43 FreeSongs: 以调小
22:43 FreeSongs: 咦 有什么问题吗。。
22:43 Oracle: 本来是交叉的较大跳
22:44 Oracle: 突然变成了逆时针的转一圈
22:44 FreeSongs: 因为感觉音乐变弱了
22:44 Oracle: 简单来说 你看这个
22:44 Oracle: 01:57:326 (4) -
22:44 Oracle: 前后一倍的差距
22:44 Oracle: 简直就是anti jump
22:45 FreeSongs: 转角度也会不舒服吗
22:45 Oracle: 对 这一圈不舒服
22:45 Oracle: 567很别扭。。
22:46 FreeSongs: 好67ctrl+G
22:46 Oracle: 1234都锐角的
22:46 Oracle: 后面就钝角了
22:46 Oracle: 我觉得67保持原样好
22:46 Oracle: 看看56怎么动
22:46 Oracle: 45*
22:47 Oracle: 你还不如把5叠到
22:48 Oracle: 01:57:993 (1) -
22:48 FreeSongs: 好评！
22:49 Oracle: 02:01:159 (4,5) - 这明明是最重的
22:49 Oracle: 为啥跳反而最小
22:50 FreeSongs: 5叠回02:00:659 (1) - ？
22:50 FreeSongs: 然后剩余的顺时针旋转72度？
22:52 Oracle: 感觉可以
22:52 Oracle: 02:03:659 (2,3) - 角度不太好
22:52 Oracle: 顺时针转一点点吧
22:53 FreeSongs: 猴(其实是觉得空气人打起来顺)
22:53 Oracle: 02:07:159 (5,1) - 感觉也是有点 不太顺
22:53 Oracle: 不如ctrlG
22:54 Oracle: 02:12:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 好难啊OAO
22:54 FreeSongs: 整体ctrlG?
22:54 Oracle: 02:14:493 (3) - 往下放吧
22:54 FreeSongs: 我说前面的
22:54 Oracle: 试试88 248
22:54 Oracle: 不是 slider
22:55 Oracle: ctrlG
22:55 FreeSongs: 猴
22:55 FreeSongs: 都fix
22:56 Oracle: 02:23:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 难
22:56 Oracle: 主要是flow又逆了
22:56 FreeSongs: ctrl H？
22:56 FreeSongs: 也不对
22:56 FreeSongs: 。。
22:56 Oracle: 不知道咋改
22:56 Oracle: 问题出在
22:57 Oracle: 02:22:993 (4,1,2) -
22:57 Oracle: 4的一大半的时候就能往后跳了
22:57 Oracle: 这时候你的2放在左边
22:57 Oracle: 方向又回去了
22:57 Oracle: 02:24:326 (6,7,1) - 又逆了
22:58 FreeSongs: 。。。呜呜
22:58 FreeSongs: flow逆了这么严重
22:58 Oracle: 连续的逆很要命啊
22:58 Oracle: 02:24:326 (6,7,1) - 这里突然就变成逆时针
22:59 Oracle: 你有点过于拘泥共用点
22:59 FreeSongs: 有道理
22:59 Oracle: 02:29:327 (4,5,6) - 这里间距也是突然就变小了
22:59 Oracle: 02:27:493 (2) - 因为你拘泥于这个
23:00 FreeSongs: 。。向弱音过度吧
23:00 Oracle: 音永远是次要的
23:00 Oracle: 玩起来最重要
23:00 FreeSongs: 。。。。。。。。。。
23:00 FreeSongs: 原来是这样
23:00 Oracle: 作图不是搞频谱图啊
23:00 Oracle: 所以强弱只是相对的
23:01 FreeSongs: 52stack?
23:01 Oracle: 不是说 这个更强 就要spacing
23:01 Oracle: 加倍这样
23:01 FreeSongs: en
23:02 FreeSongs: 感觉还需要感悟一段时间
23:02 Oracle: 但是你打图太强了
23:02 Oracle: 所以flow再别扭也很难感觉到。。=。=
23:02 FreeSongs: QAQ
23:02 FreeSongs: 这是缺点吧！！
23:02 Oracle: 02:37:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里马上就变成了extra级别了。。
23:03 FreeSongs: 。。。
23:03 FreeSongs: 我错了
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Kazuya
Hello.


[Beginner]

Change CS to: 3 and AR to 4

Delete unnecessary/unused green lines:

00:17:993 - 00:19:159 - 00:19:659 - 00:20:159 - 00:20:659 - 00:21:159 - 00:21:493 - ... and similar

Add beaks here: 00:19:076 - 02:40:743 -

00:35:326 (1,2) - This conception is not good, and very tricky. I think 00:35:326 (1) - move slider end here: 00:35:993 - because the violin ends here, and move circle here: 00:36:326 -
01:04:659 (1,2,3,4) - It's hoo hard/tricky for beginners. Use this: http://puu.sh/fvgEZ/bc2edf1f31.jpg
01:28:993 (1) - Move circle here: x: 129, y: 177 and after fix dstance snap: 01:29:326 (2) -
02:05:993 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:04:659 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard for beginners.

[Advanced]

Delete unnecessary/unused green lines: 00:21:493 - 02:34:993 - and similar.

Ad breaks here: 02:40:743 -

This is perfect hard difficulty (No, not normal, this is harder than normal), because 1/2 is very much. Rename to Hard.
I think, use CS4 and AR 7, because objects is dense.

It's good.

[Insane]

Delete all unnecessary/unused green lines!

Add break here: 02:40:743 -

00:08:659 (1,2) - Hmm. it's bit ugly. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/fvhAJ/45f6138045.jpg http://puu.sh/fvhDz/8144366257.jpg
00:33:659 (3,4) - Same as ^ Bad overlap.
01:14:993 (8) - CTRL+G Make a jump.
01:36:993 (2) - I think, move this slider here: http://puu.sh/fvhWf/1483af9cd4.jpg or use similar.
01:37:326 (3,4) - Îf use: http://puu.sh/fvhZ1/3d6242503b.jpg
01:43:659 (2) - CTRL + G. Make jump
02:05:326 (6) - ^
02:09:993 (5,7) - Ugly overlap. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/fvi8b/4ca9eb81af.jpg

[Extreme]

Delete all unused/unnecessary green lines.
02:40:743 - Add breaks here

00:16:659 (1,2) - Slider ends is not good, not follow the piano! 00:16:659 (1) - Move end here: 00:16:993 - and 00:17:159 (2) - move end here: 00:17:493 -
01:16:493 (5) - Don't use 1/4 repeat slider. Long slider better fits here, because 1/4 is not strong!
01:43:659 (2) - CTRL + g and 01:43:993 (3,4) - ctrl + g. Nice jumps !
02:04:659 (1,1,1,1) - Unnecessary combo spams. Remove NC-s.

Good Luck!
FreeSongs
502 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
FreeSongs

Kazuya wrote:

Hello.


[Beginner]

Change CS to: 3 and AR to 4 ok.

Delete unnecessary/unused green lines: fixed

00:17:993 - 00:19:159 - 00:19:659 - 00:20:159 - 00:20:659 - 00:21:159 - 00:21:493 - ... and similar ^

Add beaks here: 00:19:076 - 02:40:743 - added

00:35:326 (1,2) - This conception is not good, and very tricky. I think 00:35:326 (1) - move slider end here: 00:35:993 - because

the violin ends here, and move circle here: 00:36:326 - I keep them because they are consistent with 00:29:993

(1,2,3,4) -
01:04:659 (1,2,3,4) - It's hoo hard/tricky for beginners. Use this: http://puu.sh/fvgEZ/bc2edf1f31.jpg changed

into a circle + a reversed slider
01:28:993 (1) - Move circle here: x: 129, y: 177 and after fix dstance snap: 01:29:326 (2) - fixed
02:05:993 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:04:659 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard for beginners. ^

[Advanced]

Delete unnecessary/unused green lines: 00:21:493 - 02:34:993 - and similar. fixed

Ad breaks here: 02:40:743 - k

This is perfect hard difficulty (No, not normal, this is harder than normal), because 1/2 is very much. Rename to Hard.

may consider to change it if others say the same
I think, use CS4 and AR 7, because objects is dense. ok.

It's good.

[Insane]

Delete all unnecessary/unused green lines! fixed

Add break here: 02:40:743 - fixed

00:08:659 (1,2) - Hmm. it's bit ugly. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/fvhAJ/45f6138045.jpg http://puu.sh/fvhDz/8144366257.jpg

I feel its ok
00:33:659 (3,4) - Same as ^ Bad overlap. ^
01:14:993 (8) - CTRL+G Make a jump. I kind of dislike the flow after ctrl+G so no change
01:36:993 (2) - I think, move this slider here: http://puu.sh/fvhWf/1483af9cd4.jpg or use similar. ok.
01:37:326 (3,4) - Îf use: http://puu.sh/fvhZ1/3d6242503b.jpg ^
01:43:659 (2) - CTRL + G. Make jump a jump doesnt fit here
02:05:326 (6) - ^ ^
02:09:993 (5,7) - Ugly overlap. Use this similar: http://puu.sh/fvi8b/4ca9eb81af.jpg fixed.

[Extreme]

Delete all unused/unnecessary green lines. fixed.
02:40:743 - Add breaks here ^

00:16:659 (1,2) - Slider ends is not good, not follow the piano! 00:16:659 (1) - Move end here: 00:16:993 - and 00:17:159 (2) -

move end here: 00:17:493 - I must mistakenly shorten them for some reasons lol. fixed!
01:16:493 (5) - Don't use 1/4 repeat slider. Long slider better fits here, because 1/4 is not strong! true.
01:43:659 (2) - CTRL + g and 01:43:993 (3,4) - ctrl + g. Nice jumps ! applied.
02:04:659 (1,1,1,1) - Unnecessary combo spams. Remove NC-s. they are actually necessary for sv changes

Good Luck!


Thanks for your mod! :)
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