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Sugar donut - Fury

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Topic Starter
DeeN
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年1月31日 at 3:56:26

Artist: SUGAR DONUT
Title: Fury
Source: DJMAX
Tags: lzy sprosive
BPM: 135
Filesize: 9836kb
Play Time: 00:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. (not)SC (5 stars, 73 notes)
  2. Easy (1.55 stars, 80 notes)
  3. lzy's MX (4.93 stars, 310 notes)
  4. Normal (3.83 stars, 145 notes)
  5. Sp's Technika (4.86 stars, 259 notes)
Download: SUGAR DONUT - Fury
Download: SUGAR DONUT - Fury (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Composed by sugar donut
and also from DJMAX metro project~

THX lzy and sprosive for modding and new difficulty

lzy U R MINE!

Revived!
remap SHIT SC diff
working now!
lzy
(ノ゚ω゚)ノ (ノ゚ω゚)ノ (ノ゚ω゚)ノ (ノ゚ω゚)ノ (ノ゚ω゚)ノ (ノ゚ω゚)ノ (ノ゚ω゚)ノ (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
lzy
distance complete

Download: Sugar donut - Fury (DeeN) [lzy's MX].osu
Chacha17
The green timing section that shifts the hitsounds from soft to loud hitsounds should be 1/2 or 1/4 tick before the beat itself. This also applies to timing sections that shift the volume lower to higher or the other way around. Correct me please if I'm wrong.
^
00:07:469
00:07:913
and so on.

(This applies for lzy's mix)

Add the backgrounds to lzy's Mix
Add lzy to the tags

[lzy's Mix]
00:36:135 (1,2,3,4) - please overlap these sliders' ends properly (turn off grid snap and set distance snap to 0.0x so that it'll snap perfectly)
01:21:023 (4,5) - align these to 01:20:579 (2)
01:21:579 (7,8) - ^

[DeeN's Hard] (Please rename it to 'Hard'. You only have 1 guest difficulty and it is understood that you're the one who made this difficulty because you are the creator of the map itself.)

And oh why aren't your beats snapped on the timeline D:
Timing > Resnap All Notes

00:18:119 (5) - new combo
00:27:671 (1,2,3,4) - make this pattern neat please
00:45:024 (5) - place this slider perfectly underneath the previous beat
00:45:913 (8) - move one grid down
00:49:246 (6,7,8) - OH GOD SPACING
00:52:135 (5) - make this slider straight please
01:25:691 (1) - make this slider's curve perfect

Here you go.
lzy

Chacha17 wrote:

The green timing section that shifts the hitsounds from left to right should be 1/2 or 1/4 tick before the beat itself. This also applies to timing sections that shift the volume lower to higher or the other way around. Correct me please if I'm wrong.
^
00:07:469
00:07:913
and so on.

(This applies for lzy's mix)

Add the backgrounds to lzy's Mix
Add lzy to the tags

[lzy's Mix]
00:36:135 (1,2,3,4) - please overlap these sliders' ends properly (turn off grid snap and set distance snap to 0.0x so that it'll snap perfectly)
01:21:023 (4,5) - align these to 01:20:579 (2)
01:21:579 (7,8) - ^

thx i will fix :3
rustbell
complete
no hitsound>///< need hitsound modding>///<
difficulty name from DeeN's idea
lzy
fixed
thx chacha:3

Download: Sugar donut - Fury (DeeN) [lzy's MX].osu
Topic Starter
DeeN
MAP fixed and add new difficulty
thank u chacha~
lzy
[NM]
00:33:691 (9) - timing
00:49:135 (3) - ^
01:35:802 (3,4,5,6,7) - TIMING
00:14:580 (6) - New combo
00:33:024 (8) - ^
00:44:802 (5) - ^
00:48:357 (2) - ^
00:51:913 (5) - ^
00:55:580 (2) - ^
01:05:246 (2) - ^
01:06:135 (3) - ^
01:07:024 (4) - ^
01:07:913 (5) - ^
01:08:802 (9) - ^
01:09:691 (11) - ^
01:20:580 (2) - ^
01:23:913 (5) - ^?
01:27:469 (5) - ^
01:31:135 (2) - ^
Topic Starter
DeeN

lzy wrote:

[NM]
00:33:691 (9) - timing
00:49:135 (3) - ^
01:35:802 (3,4,5,6,7) - TIMING
00:14:580 (6) - New combo
00:33:024 (8) - ^
00:44:802 (5) - ^
00:48:357 (2) - ^
00:51:913 (5) - ^
00:55:580 (2) - ^
01:05:246 (2) - ^
01:06:135 (3) - ^
01:07:024 (4) - ^
01:07:913 (5) - ^
01:08:802 (9) - ^
01:09:691 (11) - ^
01:20:580 (2) - ^
01:23:913 (5) - ^?
01:27:469 (5) - ^
01:31:135 (2) - ^
ALL FIXED
thank lzy~
lzy
[SC]
00:16:358 (7) - new combo
00:17:246 (1) - delete new combo
00:19:913 (6) - new combo
00:19:691 (5,6,7,8) - ....spacing?
00:21:246 (1) - delete new combo
00:21:691 (2) - new combo
00:22:580 (6) - ^ and put it to top
00:22:802 (1) - delete new combo
00:23:469 (4) - new combo
00:28:802 (1,2,3) - stack them perfectly
00:30:135 (8) - new combo? im not sure
00:32:691 - 00:32:802 - add a beat suggestion
00:33:024 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:36:580 (3,4) - ^
00:38:580 (8) - new combo
00:45:024 (5) - ^
00:45:469 (6,7,8,9) - trun off grid snap to spacing
00:48:580 (5) - new combo
00:52:135 (5) - ^
00:55:580 (5) - ^
01:06:135 (9) - ^
01:06:357 (1) - delete new combo
01:09:691 (7) - new combo
01:11:469 (15) - ^ spacing
01:15:246 (8) - new combo
01:16:580 (11) - ^
01:20:580 (7) - ^
01:24:135 (5) - ^
01:31:024 (2) - ^
Topic Starter
DeeN
ALL FIXED ;)
Cike
star
SamiPale
;)
Shinxyn
~~ Add guest mapper's names into tags
hmm... I have issues with the timing, but that's probably just me testing poorly...

Easy-
Good Enough though..
01:04:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spread this around, its not a very appealing stack

Normal-
If it wasn't for Easy being there, I'd nitpick
It looks like you used small grid and no grid, some patterns seem uneven cuz of that, try smaller grid sizes (Press "G" in editor) and fix some of the spacing
00:31:913 (6) - extend by 1/4, you don't have to use 1/4 at all
00:32:802 (7,1) - this is very uncomfortable to play, because the (7) before it is following the music, then (1) suddenly jumps to vocal.... either remove (7) or just map to 1/1 beats...
00:33:802 (2) - depending if you change ^ move this 1/4 forward to the red tick if you decide to follow vocal
00:48:469 (1) - preferably start on the red/white tick, it doesn't sound TOO bad starting on the blue, but still
00:55:580 (1) - ^
01:14:135 (4,1) - slider+spinner clash D:!
01:20:580 (1) - extend to red tick, don't use 1/3
01:31:135 (1,2,3) - parts like these make me suspect the timing...its probably just vocal being off though
01:35:802 (3,4,5,6,7) - BPM slow down part, kinda awkward to play, maybe just remove D:, if not remove, snap (3) to 1/3 note, I think...

Sp's Technika- who? yea, this needs creator's name in tag, its also missing the Source by the way
The hitsounds aren't too bad, a bit too much whistles maybe, then a bit too less whistles during the kiai time
00:32:357 (11) - might as well just stack this
01:36:357 - move this timing panel a bit more, I keep hearing the wrong hitsounds Dx

lzy's MX- Source~? (name in tag?)
00:41:913 - smaller volume jump please
00:48:246 (5,6) - awkwardly placed, just stack this?
01:15:024 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read this as a part of the stream cuz of your custom spacing (and following from the stream before it)
01:19:246 (4,5,6,7,8) - I don't think this pattern sounds -too- good, maybe if you tried with hitsounds? dunno, don't like
01:35:617 (1) - ? this one is snapped differently compared to next ones

SC-
... the starting could sound better, the volume jumps too quick and too loud
.... errrm, try smaller grid size for this too, your no-grid-snap placement could look better
00:11:024 (6) - odd out of place whistle?
00:13:691 (4,1) - spinner and note are snapped in same place, not allowed
00:15:024 (2,3,5,6) - okay, I heard clap-clap... but... then it stops? add more in the same pattern?
00:18:580 (2,3) - ^ see? its here, but its missing in between and after this
00:31:469 (11) - new combo? its getting long
00:33:357 (2,3) - !? what? odd place for a jump
00:37:246 (5,7) - properly stack these please
00:38:580 (8) - new combo?
01:08:135 (2,5) - same comment as the claps before, you hear whistles here, and they don't sound bad, but you can add more in the same pattern for the next few notes
01:17:691 (1) - err.. end on a 1/2? (maybe remove 01:18:580 (1) and have this end there?)
01:20:580 (1) - end on 1/2, not 1/8
01:35:802 (11,12,13,14,15) - argh, I hate this part, dunno what it snaps to, IF AT ALL >_<

... Yea, please have a timing expert check the timing, no matter how much I try on your offset, I get about -25, and that seems really off near the end too ;-;
I don't know how the ending snaps well x.x
lzy

Shinxyn wrote:

lzy's MX- Source~? (name in tag?)
00:41:913 - smaller volume jump please
00:48:246 (5,6) - awkwardly placed, just stack this?
01:15:024 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read this as a part of the stream cuz of your custom spacing (and following from the stream before it)
01:19:246 (4,5,6,7,8) - I don't think this pattern sounds -too- good, maybe if you tried with hitsounds? dunno, don't like
01:35:617 (1) - ? this one is snapped differently compared to next ones
fixed
and 01:35:617 (1) - ? this part's timing is...hmm..wait for expert>_>

Download: Sugar donut - Fury (DeeN) [lzy's MX].osu
Shenyin
= =Deen...
rustbell

Shinxyn wrote:

Sp's Technika- who? yea, this needs creator's name in tag, its also missing the Source by the way
The hitsounds aren't too bad, a bit too much whistles maybe, then a bit too less whistles during the kiai time uh... I think it's not so terrible there... but still changed a bit lol
00:32:357 (11) - might as well just stack this fixed
01:36:357 - move this timing panel a bit more, I keep hearing the wrong hitsounds Dx fixed
thx^^

Download: Sugar donut - Fury (DeeN) [Sp's Technika].osu
LKs
general
  • 背景图片不可以大于1024x768
    删掉 .OSB 文件
    LZY难度设置了custom colors,其他难度没设。建议你用LZY一样的notes colors

DeeN wrote:

can u pass the guest diff?
既然你这么说了

Easy

建议你使用AI MOD 适用方法: ctrl+shift+A 看看有什么问题,主要是间距的

HP drain rate 不能=0 至少3
[00:29:24] 间距
[00:33:91] 向上一点?
[00:40:66] 绿线红线一般设置在red tick , blue tick , white tick 上,不要设在随意的地方。 而且这个绿线没有意义
[00:41:44] 同上
[00:57:69] 开始在前面的红线会更好
[01:15:02] new combo?
[01:33:24] 开始在前面的红线会更好
[01:32:80] 绿线没有意义
[01:34:58] 同上
[01:36:35] 移动到 [01:36:49]

Normal


[00:31:91] 这里不要用1/4
[00:48:35] ^
[00:55:46] ^
[00:53:69] 间距

SC

[01:10:13] new combo
not bad :3

star
tsuka
lzy:
01:35:469 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - sorry , its not readable , maybe u could make those notes stack on each other
others fine
kiddly
;)
lzy

tsukamaete wrote:

lzy:
01:35:469 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - sorry , its not readable , maybe u could make those notes stack on each other
others fine
fixed

Download: Sugar donut - Fury (DeeN) [lzy's MX].osu
Sagisawa-Yukari
哦,中医,下次我把我抓到的妹子分你几个吧~~ :lol:
Furudo_Erika_old
star~
DJPop
Don't put timing sections exactly on the notes.


~Easy~
00:28:358 (1) - delete
00:30:580 (6) - new combo
00:37:691 (4) - ^
00:39:913 (9) - ^
01:15:024 (7) - ^
01:36:506 (1) - snap on blue tick, add hitfinish

~Normal~
Add more hitsounds
00:13:691 (5) - end on white tick
00:48:357 (1) - end on white tick, or start on red tick and end on next red tick
00:55:469 (1) - ^
01:09:691 (7) - new combo
01:31:135 (1,2) - move 1/4 right
01:31:802 (3) - start on white tick

01:34:580 (1) - add hitfinish at the end
01:35:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - unsnapped, add hitfinish

~Sp's Technika~
Only good diff in this mapset imo :D
01:35:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add hitfinish

~Izy's MX~
Add more hitsounds
00:05:024 (1,3) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:35:469 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - add hitfinish

~SC~
00:13:691 (4) - end on white tick
00:16:580 (2,3) - too far, unexpected spacing
00:20:913 (5) - move up & right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:53:135 (5) - better start on white tick
00:55:580 (1) - start on red tick
00:57:246 (6) - add hitfinish
01:35:469 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:37:135 (1,2,3) - remove hitfinish


No star yet due to important errors found.
rustbell

DJPop wrote:

Don't put timing sections exactly on the notes. fixed for my diff

~Sp's Technika~
Only good diff in this mapset imo :D thx :D
01:35:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add hitfinish fixed
thanks for modding lol
gdeath
[Easy]
01:15:024 (7) - new combo
01:15:469 (8,9,10,11,12) - make the same spacing as 01:15:024 (7,8)

[Normal]
00:25:246 (1) - make it end on 00:28:357
00:41:024 (4) - spacing set the same spacing as 00:43:024 (1,2)
00:48:357 (1) - make it end on 00:49:024(dont forget to adjust spacing if you fix this)
00:53:691 (1) - enlarge the spacing
01:22:135 (1,2,3,4) - sound better with lower volume
01:22:135 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:25:691 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:29:246 (1) - ^
01:34:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remove these notes and add a spinner from 01:34:580 to 01:37:357(suggestion)

[Sp's Technika]
fine

[lzy's MX]
add "lzy" "sprosive" into tags
add "DJMAX" into source

[SC]
00:36:580 (3,4) - set the same spacing as 00:36:135 (1,2) (are you intended to set the irregular spacing?)
00:40:580 (3,4) - set the same spacing as 00:40:357 (2,3)
01:11:691 (1,2,3,4) - sound better with lower volume
01:14:802 (7,1,2,3) - ^

Star!
himydanny
很喜欢这歌,尽绵薄之力,希望能早日rank
Asutarotto
;) star
ignorethis
irc modded

fix and I'll pubble
Topic Starter
DeeN

ignorethis wrote:

irc modded

fix and I'll pubble
ALL FIXED
THX~
ignorethis
Ephemeral annouced the removal of pubble system one hour ago :/
subarasikibuta
这歌超酷~
abalee
This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly!
Topic Starter
DeeN

abalee wrote:

This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly!
it's my fault
FIXED
rustbell
grav'd omg
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