1. Marathon (5,98 stars, 2890 notes)

Stefan wrote:

My expressions to this project can't be said due to my position as Global Moderator.

Take some stars instead

phonics wrote:

beautiful map

I think OD7-7.5 would make it even more beautiful

DaxMasterix wrote:

Unrankeable yey

XVoIR wrote:

nice to see this updated again!
ps mb change OD to ~7.5 or 8

1. Okay, I found something weird in the timing, some offsets sounded quite wrong, especially in the first part of the map... This is what I got, if you want to try it... I think it's not perfect but still better than the current one in my opinion
   
   
   
   
   

1. Dat rape face
2. You can try to use a different name, since Marathon is mainstream, you know
3. Also, default combo colours? :c
4. HP 7 in a Marathon is a pain in le ass, maybe decrease to 6/6.5
5. Have fun, since you need to add all song titles to the tags :3
6. 00:26:485 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - I don't know if this was supposed to be a square, but maybe you can make one
7. 01:24:414 (3,4,5) - There is quite a speedup here, so maybe you can afford a bigger jump? Maybe by moving 4 down?
8. 01:59:648 - Maybe this will destroy your pattern but you can add a note here?
9. 02:26:601 (5) - Uhm, I don't know but these sliderticks are a bit noisy, you can try to silence them and see if you like it. Same goes for 02:29:101 (5) -
10. 03:08:546 (1,2,3,4) - Weird. I couldn't find a better snap but I'm pretty sure that something is wrong here... Ask next modders to check these, maybe someone could be more useful than me
11. 03:32:235 (1,2,3,4) - Well, these blankets can just be a bit better
12. 03:49:418 - Quite a strong beat here...
13. 03:52:849 - Same here 03:56:280 - and here
14. 04:46:901 (1) - I think this NC is quite unnecessary here
15. 06:43:604 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't know, compared to the rest of the map, this pattern looks a bit random!
16. 07:11:573 (10) - A slowdown would fit here imo
17. 07:15:948 (8) - Same here, even though this slider is fantabulous :c
18. 07:17:666 - Lmao I thought I missed here because of that sound xD
19. 07:20:948 (1,2,3,4) - Pretty random-ish as well
20. 07:32:198 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Well, are you 100% sure about using 1/2 rhythm here? I think you can use a rhythm like this 07:27:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - since it fits much more. I know that maybe you wanted to give some variation, but I personally think you can sacrifice it in order to have a better rhythm
21. 07:58:135 (5,6,1) - Are you sure you don't want to make a stream here?
22. 08:23:760 (2) - Spacing is a bit weird here
23. 08:50:323 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think this whole stuff is 1/8. You could try to replace this with 2 1/8 sliders, they sound cool as well! (If you use them, decrease their volume a bit)
24. 10:43:048 (1) - Wut? Why does it end on the blue tick?
25. 12:15:705 (6) - Turn this into a slider and end it here? 12:16:133 - You can hear that sound

RikiH_ wrote:

m4m right here ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

This map is so well-done, so there's not much to point out ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Timing

1. Okay, I found something weird in the timing, some offsets sounded quite wrong, especially in the first part of the map... This is what I got, if you want to try it... I think it's not perfect but still better than the current one in my opinion Fixed. Thanks!
   
   
   
   
   

Marathon

1. Dat rape face tho
2. You can try to use a different name, since Marathon is mainstream, you know I can, but will keep marathon until I get a good one
3. Also, default combo colours? :c this map is normal, we need the normal cc eue, not really, will find anothers one
4. HP 7 in a Marathon is a pain in le ass, maybe decrease to 6/6.5 to 6!
5. Have fun, since you need to add all song titles to the tags :3 I have the list :3
6. 00:26:485 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - I don't know if this was supposed to be a square, but maybe you can make one fixed to a nosquare
7. 01:24:414 (3,4,5) - There is quite a speedup here, so maybe you can afford a bigger jump? Maybe by moving 4 down? moved at the centre
8. 01:59:648 - Maybe this will destroy your pattern but you can add a note here? done
9. 02:26:601 (5) - Uhm, I don't know but these sliderticks are a bit noisy, you can try to silence them and see if you like it. Same goes for 02:29:101 (5) - reduced the MK HS to 70%
10. 03:08:546 (1,2,3,4) - Weird. I couldn't find a better snap but I'm pretty sure that something is wrong here... Ask next modders to check these, maybe someone could be more useful than me fixed I think
11. 03:32:235 (1,2,3,4) - Well, these blankets can just be a bit better idk
12. 03:49:418 - Quite a strong beat here... changed to soft
13. 03:52:849 - Same here 03:56:280 - and here know'ed, preff the pattern
14. 04:46:901 (1) - I think this NC is quite unnecessary here I know but renard
15. 06:43:604 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't know, compared to the rest of the map, this pattern looks a bit random! cause Im random
16. 07:11:573 (10) - A slowdown would fit here imo done
17. 07:15:948 (8) - Same here, even though this slider is fantabulous :c then no, it follows the beaats :c
18. 07:17:666 - Lmao I thought I missed here because of that sound xD xDDD
19. 07:20:948 (1,2,3,4) - Pretty random-ish as well cause flandre takes my flan
20. 07:32:198 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Well, are you 100% sure about using 1/2 rhythm here? I think you can use a rhythm like this 07:27:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - since it fits much more. I know that maybe you wanted to give some variation, but I personally think you can sacrifice it in order to have a better rhythm I enjoy the playability here, the jumps make sence with the music, the rhytm is in there.
21. 07:58:135 (5,6,1) - Are you sure you don't want to make a stream here? 4 sure and 4 norte
22. 08:23:760 (2) - Spacing is a bit weird here done moar weir'd'ness
23. 08:50:323 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think this whole stuff is 1/8. You could try to replace this with 2 1/8 sliders, they sound cool as well! (If you use them, decrease their volume a bit) I see but the players would hate me
24. 10:43:048 (1) - Wut? Why does it end on the blue tick? the nazis o.o. Fixed.
25. 12:15:705 (6) - Turn this into a slider and end it here? 12:16:133 - You can hear that sound Fixed.

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That's all, now I need to fap on that video <3 omg

dark_assassin16 wrote:

I'm going to try to pull through this... ~_~

[Suggestions]
04:40:038 - Maybe try adding a break there so people can pause and not have to have their HP bar drain.

Not really that much (literally. There's only one), but it looks really nice. 99.999999999% of it.
Now, I either need to set an appointment for therapy or I could just do some stuff. I feel very conflicted.

ThoomyyxD wrote:

IRC log

Al ThoomyyxD se le quema el arroz jijiji

15:41 ThoomyyxD: Hola!
15:41 ThoomyyxD: Tienes tiempo?
15:41 ThoomyyxD: te hago un irc
15:42 DaxMasterix: Sobre? 'w'
15:43 ThoomyyxD: tu mapa
15:43 ThoomyyxD: el marathon
15:44 DaxMasterix: Oh El de aniki?
15:44 DaxMasterix: then, si, tengo tiempo de sobra
15:44 ThoomyyxD: dale, 1 minuto
15:46 DaxMasterix: 'w')b
15:47 ThoomyyxD: ya
15:47 ThoomyyxD: primero que todo
15:47 ThoomyyxD: baja el volumen pó óé:c
15:47 ThoomyyxD: ta muy fuerte todo
15:47 ThoomyyxD: xD
15:49 ThoomyyxD: yo lo hubiese hecho con soft y whistle, aunque creo que te daria lata cambiarlo a esta altura pq suena muy fuerte QAQ
15:51 DaxMasterix: Bueno, eso es subjetivo, debido a que los jugadores pueden bajar el volumen de los hitsounds :c
15:51 ThoomyyxD: en serio ? ooooooooooooooooooo:!!!!
15:51 ThoomyyxD: CÓMOOO
15:51 ThoomyyxD: XDD
15:51 ThoomyyxD: ya, sgamos con el mod
15:52 DaxMasterix: LOOOL XDDD
15:52 DaxMasterix: andate al menu, baja el volumen con la rueda del mouse
15:52 ThoomyyxD: aaah
15:52 DaxMasterix: Existe el general, el de la musica, y el de los sonidos
15:52 ThoomyyxD: verdad
15:52 ThoomyyxD: ya me acordé
15:52 ThoomyyxD: :3
15:52 ThoomyyxD: <3
15:52 ThoomyyxD: ailoyu
15:52 ThoomyyxD: 00:31:485 (3)
15:52 ThoomyyxD: debería tener NC
15:52 ThoomyyxD: por el cambio
15:52 ThoomyyxD: de velocidad
15:53 DaxMasterix: Added 4 sure and 4 norte
15:53 ThoomyyxD: xd
15:54 ThoomyyxD: 01:06:172 (2,3)
15:54 ThoomyyxD: podrías intercambiarlos
15:54 ThoomyyxD: para que l tercero vaya en medio
15:56 DaxMasterix: podría pero el Spacing se iría a la chucha :C Igual me diste la idea, que piensas de hacer (2) Invertido? (hacia abajo de en vez hacia arriba)
15:56 ThoomyyxD: 01:16:485 (3) encuentro realmente feo que la cola del slider temrine bajo un slider
15:56 ThoomyyxD: 01:16:485 (3)
15:57 ThoomyyxD: podría ser que el 1 y 2 que vayan a los extremos
15:57 ThoomyyxD: vayan hacia arriba
15:57 ThoomyyxD: y el 3 que va en media vaya hacia abajo
15:57 ThoomyyxD: pq como todo el mapa
15:57 ThoomyyxD: si pasa algo en un lado
15:57 ThoomyyxD: pasa en el otro
15:57 ThoomyyxD: en ese caso
15:57 ThoomyyxD: no pasa
15:57 ThoomyyxD: y así mantienes la consistencia de la monotonía que tiene el mapa
15:57 ThoomyyxD: que en lo personal me encanta<3
15:58 DaxMasterix: y asi mejor?
15:59 DaxMasterix: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4566497
16:02 ThoomyyxD: yapo osu carga luego:c
16:02 ThoomyyxD: me parece
16:02 ThoomyyxD: buena idea
16:02 DaxMasterix: creo que tus mensajes me llegan de golpe
16:02 DaxMasterix: porque minimo osu!
16:02 DaxMasterix: y me llega el sonido de un mensaje pero x 1000
16:03 DaxMasterix: minimizo :v
16:03 DaxMasterix: gomene
16:03 DaxMasterix: y este lo dejaré meramente por la consistencia entre 01:17:110 (1) y 01:15:235 (3) -
16:03 DaxMasterix: talking about 01:16:485 (3) -
16:04 ThoomyyxD: eso, que la cola queda
16:04 ThoomyyxD: debajo del slider
16:04 ThoomyyxD: queda feito
16:04 ThoomyyxD: por lo menos a mi no me gusta
16:04 ThoomyyxD: 01:30:652 (3) este tampoco:s
16:05 ThoomyyxD: 01:56:902 (7)
16:05 ThoomyyxD: nc por el cambio de velocidad
16:06 ThoomyyxD: 02:00:339 (3)
16:06 ThoomyyxD: antes de eso hay un over map
16:06 DaxMasterix: lo corri a la izquierda y abajo para que no se vea la puntita
16:06 ThoomyyxD: podrías hacer que uno de los circulos quede en la misma posición que el end del slider
16:07 DaxMasterix: el 01:59:714 (5) - está
16:07 DaxMasterix: quizas no tienes habilitados el stack
16:07 ThoomyyxD: shaa
16:07 ThoomyyxD: estoy ciego hmno
16:08 ThoomyyxD: 02:01:589 (2,3)
16:08 ThoomyyxD: ctrl + G
16:08 DaxMasterix: xD
16:08 ThoomyyxD: y arregla los hitsounds
16:08 ThoomyyxD: queda terrible de weno zi oe
16:09 ThoomyyxD: 02:25:027 (1,2)
16:09 DaxMasterix: Listo pero le hice el g al 2 no más, en este caso no agregaré el jump por ser una parte "tranquila" IMO
16:09 ThoomyyxD: solo como sugerenci, estos sliders tan raros no los recomiendo
16:09 DaxMasterix: qué pasa con los PeppaSliders
16:11 ThoomyyxD: peppa slider po
16:11 ThoomyyxD: xDD
16:11 ThoomyyxD: 02:31:902 (6)
16:11 ThoomyyxD: vo cachai ahí
16:12 ThoomyyxD: 02:37:839 (2) tengo entendido que no se puede poner nada bajo un slider
16:12 ThoomyyxD: 02:37:839 (2)
16:12 DaxMasterix: NoCe
16:12 DaxMasterix: a qué te refieres con bajo un slider?
16:13 ThoomyyxD: bajo
16:13 ThoomyyxD: el trayecto
16:13 ThoomyyxD: del slider
16:13 ThoomyyxD: pq el overlap es bajo el slider
16:13 ThoomyyxD: no te voy a revisar los hitsounds pq hay muchas notas xDDD
16:14 DaxMasterix: en serio?
16:14 DaxMasterix: ok np xD
16:14 DaxMasterix: pero esa wea no la sabía
16:14 DaxMasterix: lo dejaré hasta que me metan show
16:14 ThoomyyxD: mira, yo aprendí a modear con las reglas del 2012
16:14 ThoomyyxD: así que esperemos no leseen xD
16:14 ThoomyyxD: cancion entera pica a nico nico douga
16:14 ThoomyyxD: xDD
16:15 ThoomyyxD: cancion wena
16:15 ThoomyyxD: xD
16:16 DaxMasterix: de allí viene pueh
16:16 ThoomyyxD: a verda
16:16 ThoomyyxD: xd
16:16 ThoomyyxD: 04:16:760
16:16 ThoomyyxD: no te tinca jugar con los jumps en esta parte?
16:17 DaxMasterix: Nah, pienso por preferir pegarle sus dedazos al teclado en esa parte
16:17 ThoomyyxD: 04:44:801 - 04:47:201 - los nc son innecesarios acá
16:18 DaxMasterix: Y como es el mismo tono, allí stacked se ve mejor IMO
16:18 ThoomyyxD: es tu mapa men
16:18 ThoomyyxD: vos elegis zi oe
16:18 DaxMasterix: no son necesarios pero se ven lindos, como es renard la wea :c
16:18 ThoomyyxD: 04:54:101 - creo que ese nc esta de más (ahora entendí pq hay un guión dps de los times, pa poder escribir y que no se juntara con el numero, esto de no hacer IRCs casi nunca)
16:18 DaxMasterix: anyways, los saque ya
16:19 DaxMasterix: xDDD siempre se aprende algo nuevo
16:19 ThoomyyxD: 04:55:901 (2) - ponle viagra a este slider
16:20 ThoomyyxD: 04:58:901 (1) - new combo fuea jijij
16:20 ThoomyyxD: 05:03:411 - ^
16:27 ThoomyyxD: se me muere el internet

I couldn't finish it because my internet die:C

Good luck, STARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR