Hoshizora Rin (CV.Iida Riho) & Nishikino Maki (CV.Pile) - Be

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Topic Starter
dosyeru

Starry- wrote:

[8K Normal]
00:17:070 (17070|4,17470|4) - Hitsound too loud ;w; -15%
00:25:870 (25870|4,26070|5,26270|6) - Best to remove or rearrange, as a player, dont really see what this represents.
rearranged/reorganized to emphasize more organ piano sounds, and removed S notes from this section.
00:29:870 (29870|0,30270|0) - slightly too loud
that note was removed

[8K Hyper]
00:17:070 (17070|5,17470|5) - loud -15%
01:25:470 (85470|0) - These hitsounds always so loud xD ^
00:46:070 (46070|4) - Why drum sample set?
00:47:670 (47670|4) - ^ must be Rin-chan's prank :o removed
01:23:470 (83470|6,83570|4,83670|2,83770|6,83870|4,83970|2) - Either follow correct snap here, or make it LN or something.
remapped
01:32:270 (92270|0,92670|0,95470|0,95870|0) - Best to use the LR kick low ... noise (the one i say always too loud)
ok
02:08:070 (128070|7) - Why LN here?
To give variety of patterns into the chart. Is that answer to your question? Honestly i dont get your question.
I'm more confident with this map now, so I will come more quickly~
Looking better!
thx mod ;)

Zan - wrote:

Pile is mine.
you are gonna get spammed by all Pile's fans around the world lol
-LASU-

Starry- wrote:

0123
[4K Normal]
00:40:670 (40670|3) - This LN should end at 00:41:270 - (easier for this diff) ok

00:50:670 (50670|1) - More balanced at 2 move

01:13:070 (73070|3,73470|0) - CTRL+H ok
01:14:070 (74070|1) - Move to 0 - for pitch / balance. move

01:19:470 (79470|1) - Kinda hard to hit / accuracy on, make normal note. change normal note

01:19:870 (79870|0,80070|1,80270|3,80470|2,80670|0,80870|1,81270|3) - CTRL+H works so much better for pitch ok
01:21:270 (81270|0) - Then move to 1 for balance. move

01:57:270 (117270|3) - this part recommend to:
Ex.1 http://puu.sh/gm5bG/c44c68d6ce.png ok

01:12:670 (72670|2,73070|0,73470|3) - 02:02:270 (122270|0,122670|1,123070|2) - why are these different?
rest looks a lot better now in this diff
01:12:670 (72670|2,73070|0,73470|3) - change pattern
[4K Hyper]
00:17:070 (17070|1,17470|1) - Too loud change 70%
Again this diff has (only slight) LN issues like Zan mentioned before. 00:20:070 (20070|1) - if this is LN, why not 00:19:671 - ? Stuff like this. Just for example. It's like this quite a lot. Suggest to remove some LN like this which is short vocal (1/1 vocal) or keep and add more LN for vocals.
00:19:670 - add LN
00:49:270 (49270|1) - Move to 2 move

01:28:870 (88870|2) - Too loud change 60%

01:30:470 (90470|1,90870|1) - Actually might be best to remove water drip hitsounds after all. (only these) remove

01:30:870 (90870|2) - Move to 3 move

I'm more confident with this map now, so I will come more quickly~
Looking better!
mod thx~(^ω^)

Topic Starter
dosyeru
updated
Starry-
[8K Hyper]01:24:070 (84070|0) - For this stream, something like this will work lots better. No need to skip notes. :P
02:13:070 (133070|3) - ^ same idea.
Rest seems fine

[4K Normal]
01:14:070 (74070|1) - Move to 0
01:19:670 - Best to add at 0 here for snare sound.
01:41:270 (101270|0) - Move to 1 for balance.

[4K Hyper]
00:35:270 (35270|2) - More balanced if moved to 3
00:54:870 (54870|2) - Add whistle like Another
02:03:270 (123270|1) - Move to 0 for balance.

[4K Another]
00:00:770 (770|1,1070|3) - CTRL+H? pitch
00:17:070 (17070|0,17470|0) - Too loud,
00:31:170 (31170|0) - Add finish
00:30:970 (30970|1,31170|0) - Put both in normal sample set (on left side of screen)
00:55:470 (55470|1) - Move to 0, balance
01:10:970 (70970|1,71170|1) - Put normal sample set (on left side of screen)
01:25:470 (85470|1,86470|2,87070|3,88670|0,88870|0) - Too loud
01:42:470 (102470|0,102470|3) -
http://puu.sh/gnRwg/b081d99c5f.png
The stream plays so much more comfortable like this.
01:59:470 (119470|1,119870|1) - So loud ;w;
02:00:570 (120570|2,120770|3) - Add finishes, and make normal sampleset

[8K Another]
I suggest on LR_Kick Low .wav noises to reduce volume to 65%
00:27:470 (27470|6) - More comfortable if moved to 7
00:30:270 (30270|5) - Move to 2? (optional, but a lot more comfortable if this on a different hand)
01:02:470 (62470|6) - Move to 7, more balance.
01:29:170 (89170|0) - Best to replace with LR_Kick low.wav sound with 65%

Pretty sure rest is fine :3/
LordRaika
Starry X_X why not just give a IRC mod , and talk with dosyeru & -LASU-
Rizqy

LordRaika wrote:

Starry X_X why not just give a IRC mod , and talk with dosyeru & -LASU-
starry is too shy to give irc mod. srsly.
Blocko
Beep

20:49 dosyeru: hi
20:49 Blocko: hello
20:49 dosyeru: id like to ask your opinion about my mania map...
20:50 Blocko: sure
20:50 dosyeru: yay
20:50 *dosyeru is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/555227 Iida Riho & Pile - Beat in Angel [8K Hyper]]
20:50 dosyeru: at 01:23:470
20:50 dosyeru: 01:23:470 (83470|6) -
20:50 dosyeru: im trying to follow snare drums there
20:51 dosyeru: how would you map here in Hyper diff
20:51 Blocko: hold on, my internet is pretty bad right now, so it's taking me awhile to dl your map orz
20:52 dosyeru: oh ok, sry
20:52 Blocko: it's cool
20:54 Blocko: alright let's see
20:54 dosyeru: i mapped like this http://puu.sh/gofR2.jpg before
20:55 dosyeru: i changed to 32th notes since i got mod
20:55 dosyeru: but i feel filling full of 32th notes are not suit for Hyper diff
20:55 dosyeru: thats why i mapped the one you see now
20:56 Blocko: so what do you think is best for that part?
20:57 dosyeru: 16th notes are best for hyper diff imo
20:57 Blocko: i'm hearing 1/8th notes for the song
20:58 Blocko: similar to what you have mapped on 8k another
20:58 dosyeru: yeah music sounds 1/8 notes
20:59 dosyeru: im wodnering whether i should map exactly what music sounds in hyper or not
20:59 Blocko: i think it's good to map all sounds in there, as long as the patterns are easy
21:00 Blocko: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2854000 just like this one, all sounds mapped with an easy stair pattern]
21:01 dosyeru: hm, i agree with that. modder also gave me the placement suggestion that was like what you gave me
21:02 Blocko: oh nice
21:02 dosyeru: i just couldnt decide if this stair is suit for hyper or not
21:02 Blocko: hmm
21:03 Blocko: i think it's fine
21:03 Blocko: you have a good variety of patterns mapped in hyper, and a burst like that is a nice touch imo
21:04 dosyeru: ah, you brought me new point of view that i never thought
21:05 dosyeru: yeap i rarely map stairs in hyper
21:05 Blocko: ah
21:05 dosyeru: ok, i take that
21:05 Blocko: alright
21:05 dosyeru: lets change to stairs
21:05 dosyeru: thx alot ;)
21:06 Blocko: you should probably do this one to hyper too 02:13:020 -
21:06 Blocko: oh, and correct offset for the song is 80
21:06 dosyeru: absolutely
21:06 dosyeru: really
21:06 Blocko: yeah
21:06 Blocko: the song sounded quite early with 70
21:07 Blocko: test that out and see if that's the correct one
21:10 Blocko: wait, a more correct one would be 79
21:10 Blocko: check that one?
21:11 dosyeru: ahh i dunno. both seems fine to me while test-playting lol
21:12 Blocko: 79 is a better one
21:12 dosyeru: you are the first one who suggested new offset
21:12 Blocko: oh?
21:12 Blocko: i thought other people would've found that by now
21:13 dosyeru: i started to feel good with offset 79
21:14 Blocko: ah, that's good
21:15 Blocko: so do i post this short irc mod in the thread?
21:16 dosyeru: yeah pls.
21:16 Blocko: alrighty
21:17 dosyeru: so that i have supportive opinion for changing offset


In short, this IRC mod is about a certain pattern in 8K Hyper, and a new offset suggestion of 79. Seemed a bit off for the song, so that's why I suggested that.
Good luck to qualified!
Topic Starter
dosyeru
i agree with offset 79, and will change.

Sry BNs, but pls check notes snap again after updating.

timing setup panel > select all > offset +9 and click move
timing tab > move all notes in time > put 9 ms and ok
adjust preview point
this is what i did to change offset and adjust note snaps.
there should be no problem then...

Starry- wrote:

[8K Another]
00:30:270 (30270|5) - Move to 2? (optional, but a lot more comfortable if this on a different hand)
move to 4
thx mod
-LASU-
Topic Starter
dosyeru
updated
Starry-
[4K Another]
01:10:979 (70979|1,71179|1) - These are missing finish hitsounds.
01:13:279 - Add note at 2? Since snare = 2 notes.
01:17:979 (77979|0,78079|3) - CTRL+H so much more comfortable
01:19:679 (79679|0) - Move to 2 and add at 3?
01:27:079 (87079|3) - Maybe this is better:
But, IDK why 01:27:479 (87479|0,87479|2,87679|2,87679|0,87879|0,87879|2) - these water drops have 2 notes, 01:30:279 (90279|1,90679|0) - these only have one?
02:00:579 (120579|2,120779|3) - Missing finish hitsounds
02:07:079 (127079|0) - Maybe this is better:
02:10:079 (130079|1,130079|2,130079|3) - 3 note random chord, LN seems misplaced, maybe remove it

[4K Hyper]
01:13:479 - Add note here? at 3 maybe
01:28:879 (88879|2) - Probably best to move to 3, for balance.

Checked 8K diffs, all fine now. Just last changes to 4K and we should be ready.

LordRaika wrote:

Starry X_X why not just give a IRC mod , and talk with dosyeru & -LASU-
1. Timezones
2. I focus a lot more if I'm modding on forum
3. I don't sugercoat words on forum compared to IRC
4. My modding style revolves around checking a map more than once.
etc.
Don't see how it's such a big problem :?

Anyways, we'll see how this turns out. If anyone else has any suggestions about these diffs please post them quickly.
Topic Starter
dosyeru
updated
Starry-
I'm pretty satisfied now with how this turned out. Thank you all for your patience.
Bubbled~

To the next BN: You need to catch me in PM or IRC to discuss a variety of concerns before qualification. Thanks.

Topic Starter
dosyeru
thank you starry ;););)
I really appreciate all work you did 8-)
Rizqy
i after it.
i take the qualify part.
/o/


raika took it
Topic Starter
dosyeru
do you mean you are going to mod this map?
got it
LordRaika
sry i jst got back, key ^^/
wait for it...

2015-03-14 09:49 LordRaika: osu ^^/
2015-03-14 09:49 LordRaika: oh... etoooo chotto matte neeee
2015-03-14 09:49 -LASU-: hai- ^^/
2015-03-14 10:38 LordRaika: ^^/
2015-03-14 10:38 LordRaika: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/555227 Iida Riho & Pile - Beat in Angel]
2015-03-14 10:38 -LASU-: okay
2015-03-14 10:38 LordRaika: lets make the 4k perfeect mapping
2015-03-14 10:38 LordRaika: so i can qualify it
2015-03-14 10:39 -LASU-: wow >w<
2015-03-14 10:39 LordRaika: ehm because u map vocal with LN, lets make it fully consistent and perfect mapping
2015-03-14 10:39 LordRaika: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/600241 Iida Riho & Pile - Beat in Angel [-LASU-'s 4K Normal]]
2015-03-14 10:39 LordRaika: 00:22:879 (22879|0) - LN
2015-03-14 10:40 LordRaika: because its same with 00:19:679 (19679|2,20079|1) -
2015-03-14 10:40 -LASU-: Sure
2015-03-14 10:40 -LASU-: done
2015-03-14 10:40 LordRaika: ^^b
2015-03-14 10:40 LordRaika: 00:26:479 (26479|2,26879|1) - move to right and make both LN
2015-03-14 10:41 LordRaika: *move to right 1 column
2015-03-14 10:41 LordRaika: 00:27:079 (27079|0) - single note
2015-03-14 10:41 -LASU-: ok
2015-03-14 10:43 LordRaika: done? its like this >>> http://puu.sh/gzpMs.jpg
2015-03-14 10:43 LordRaika: 00:26:479 - ^
2015-03-14 10:44 -LASU-: done desu
2015-03-14 10:44 LordRaika: 00:49:879 (49879|1,50679|2) - LN
2015-03-14 10:45 LordRaika: tsugi?
2015-03-14 10:46 -LASU-: done
2015-03-14 10:47 LordRaika: ok for reef part desu......
2015-03-14 10:47 LordRaika: i have an idea... because some short LN is quite hard in normal... tatoeba.... : 01:09:079 (69079|0,69879|3) -
2015-03-14 10:49 LordRaika: the idea is... 01:01:679 - map LN on music melody , instead of vocal.... and remove vocal LN? because 1/1 LN is easy and its 100% consistent >w<
2015-03-14 10:49 LordRaika: http://puu.sh/gzq5l.png
2015-03-14 10:50 LordRaika: 01:04:879 - soshite , http://puu.sh/gzqbT.png
2015-03-14 10:51 LordRaika: dou?
2015-03-14 10:52 -LASU-: good idea -
2015-03-14 10:52 LordRaika: but you will have to rearrange pattern XD sry
2015-03-14 10:52 LordRaika: but ofc this one is easier thou
2015-03-14 10:52 LordRaika: *of course
2015-03-14 10:57 -LASU-: done
2015-03-14 10:57 -LASU-: Normal is this the end?
2015-03-14 10:58 LordRaika: yep . but do the same here 01:57:679 - ^^
2015-03-14 10:58 -LASU-: Sure
2015-03-14 10:58 LordRaika: >w< done
2015-03-14 10:59 -LASU-: >w<
2015-03-14 10:59 LordRaika: 00:22:879 (22879|0) - LN
2015-03-14 10:59 LordRaika: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/608915 Iida Riho & Pile - Beat in Angel [-LASU-'s 4K Hyper]]
2015-03-14 11:01 LordRaika: 00:25:679 (25679|0) - LN end 00:26:479 - ,
2015-03-14 11:01 LordRaika: easier to be play
2015-03-14 11:01 -LASU-: done
2015-03-14 11:03 LordRaika: 00:40:279 - >>> [http://puu.sh/gzqU2.jpg kore de dou omou?]
2015-03-14 11:04 LordRaika: saigo wa.... >>> 00:59:279 - http://puu.sh/gzr0f.jpg
2015-03-14 11:04 LordRaika: 01:05:679 - do the same ^
2015-03-14 11:07 -LASU-: 01:00:479 (60479|3) - LN end 01:01:279 ?
2015-03-14 11:07 -LASU-: 00:40:279 - done
2015-03-14 11:09 -LASU-: aa 01:01:679 - deshita
2015-03-14 11:09 LordRaika: hai 01:01:679 - kore desu
2015-03-14 11:09 LordRaika: ^^
2015-03-14 11:10 -LASU-: 01:05:679 - done desu -
2015-03-14 11:10 LordRaika: \:D/
2015-03-14 11:10 -LASU-: \:D/
2015-03-14 11:10 LordRaika: 02:08:679 (128679|1) - okashii XD
2015-03-14 11:11 LordRaika: single note? and move to 4
2015-03-14 11:11 LordRaika: then 02:08:879 (128879|3) - move to 2
2015-03-14 11:12 LordRaika: done? then 02:09:279 (129279|2) - move to 3 and 02:09:079 - add LN here >w< end 02:09:479 -
2015-03-14 11:12 -LASU-: ok single note and moved -
2015-03-14 11:13 -LASU-: done
2015-03-14 11:15 LordRaika: kore honto ni saigo desu >>> 01:16:279 - http://puu.sh/gzryW.png
2015-03-14 11:17 -LASU-: ok done desu
2015-03-14 11:17 LordRaika: :D
2015-03-14 11:17 LordRaika: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/600239 Iida Riho & Pile - Beat in Angel [-LASU-'s 4K Another]]
2015-03-14 11:19 LordRaika: 00:35:079 (35079|3) - normal note and 00:37:479 (37479|0) -
2015-03-14 11:20 -LASU-: both done
2015-03-14 11:20 LordRaika: 01:05:679 - http://puu.sh/gzrPH.jpg
2015-03-14 11:21 LordRaika: 01:13:079 (73079|0,74879|2) - single note
2015-03-14 11:21 -LASU-: changed -
2015-03-14 11:21 -LASU-: done
2015-03-14 11:21 LordRaika: 01:17:079 (77079|0) - single because... 01:17:479 - no LN as well on rin's voice
2015-03-14 11:22 LordRaika: 01:19:279 (79279|1,80679|2) - single note, and u can add more note... >w<
2015-03-14 11:22 -LASU-: Sure-
2015-03-14 11:22 LordRaika: no LN because this part , people can say its not consistent
2015-03-14 11:23 LordRaika: 01:51:279 (111279|1,112279|3) - LN on single note
2015-03-14 11:24 -LASU-: ok
2015-03-14 11:25 LordRaika: 02:06:279 - http://puu.sh/gzs4G.png
2015-03-14 11:26 -LASU-: done
2015-03-14 11:26 LordRaika: 02:08:679 (128679|0,129479|1) - single note
2015-03-14 11:26 -LASU-: done
2015-03-14 11:27 -LASU-: end ?
2015-03-14 11:27 LordRaika: hai desu ^^/
2015-03-14 11:27 LordRaika: otsukare
2015-03-14 11:27 -LASU-: thank you >w<
2015-03-14 11:27 -LASU-: otukare desu
2015-03-14 11:28 LordRaika: will ask starry once again if he's satisfy with 4k consistency or not :D
2015-03-14 11:28 LordRaika: and i will qualify it

Let see if stawwy love this update/change for 4k consistency now
Topic Starter
dosyeru
will be updated soon
updated
Harbyter
mark for mod on 4k Another pattern


[4K Another]

00:07:279 (7279|2) - suggest to move in col 1 then 00:07:479 (7479|0) - in col 3 for a better pitch revelancy while playing too

00:07:679 (7679|2) - col 1 and 00:07:879 (7879|2,7979|1) - ctrl+h same reason as before

for a better flow of pattern and pitch i suggest you to apply those changes too 00:08:179 (8179|2,8279|3) - move one column on left

00:08:379 (8379|0) - col 2

00:08:479 (8479|2,8479|1) - col 1 4

00:08:579 (8579|3) - col 3

00:08:679 (8679|0,8779|1) - move one column on right

00:08:879 (8879|2) - col 1 and 00:09:079 (9079|3) - col 3

00:10:479 (10479|2,10579|0,10679|1,10779|3,10879|2,10979|0,11079|1) - suggest something like this

00:12:479 (12479|1) - what is this note ,previous pattern like here there wasn't a double ,remove it and rearrange this pattern ,something simple here

00:19:079 (19079|0) - suggest to avoid another jack here ,better in col 2

00:19:679 (19679|2,19879|1) - suggest to move one col on right for a better flow of pattern

00:20:079 (20079|3) - someone told me that you like those LN for vocal , i like map vocal too but only putting a LN here for the last vocal feel a little awkward .really suggest you to turn in simple note and then rearranging those pattern

if you followed the previous suggestion about the LN then 00:20:479 (20479|2) - col 4 and 00:20:279 (20279|2,20379|1) - ctrl+h

00:21:079 (21079|1,21179|2,21279|3,21379|1,21479|2,21579|3) - for those sound a pattern like this is more suitable

00:22:079 - sudden triple meanwhile in the previous pattern like this was a double ,nothing for a triple remove 00:22:079 (22079|2) - ??And 00:22:079 (22079|3) - turn this too in a simple note

00:22:079 (22079|1) - col 1 for balance then 00:22:279 (22279|0,22379|1) - ctrl+h and 00:22:479 (22479|2) - col 4 for a better pitch revelancy

00:23:279 - another triple , nothing for a triple here too , suggest to remove this 00:23:279 (23279|2) - and then turning into a simple note the LN too 00:23:279 (23279|0) -

00:23:679 - add note 1 for drum and pattern consistency

00:23:879 (23879|3) - col 2 and 00:24:079 (24079|1) - col 4 ,avoid same pattern

00:24:379 (24379|3,24479|1,24479|2) - suggest to make a pattern like the previous one in this section but inverted, move one column on left then 00:24:579 (24579|0) - col 4 and 00:24:779 (24779|3,24879|1,24879|2) - one column on left

00:25:079 (25079|0) - suggest to move in col 3 if you applied the previous changes

00:25:279 - another triple orz xD suggest to remove 00:25:279 (25279|2) - and turn the LN into a simple note too

00:25:679 (25679|0) - this LN for the vocal should end here 00:26:079 -

00:26:479 (26479|3) - same here LN should end here 00:26:879 -

00:26:479 (26479|2) - suggest to move in col 1 and then 00:26:079 (26079|2) - turn this note in a 1/1LN , don't delete the note due for the keysound ,just press shift and click on the note

00:26:779 - add a note 1 here

00:27:079 (27079|0) - move in col 4 and add 00:27:279 - another note 4 for the drum

00:29:079 - 00:29:479 - nothing for a triple here, suggest to remove those 00:29:079 (29079|0,29479|3) -

00:29:479 (29479|1) - this LN is wrong , suggest to turn into a simple note and 00:30:479 (30479|2,31479|1) - same as for those two LN too

00:29:679 - if you followed the previous suggestion about the LN then add a note 4 for the drum

00:29:879 (29879|0) - move in col 2 and 00:29:879 (29879|3) - move this note here 00:30:079 -

00:30:379 (30379|3) - col 2 and 00:30:479 (30479|2) - col 4 for a better flow of pattern

suggest to add a note 1 here 00:30:679 - and a note 3 here 00:30:779 - , then 00:30:979 - add a note 4 and move 00:30:979 (30979|1) - in col 3 ,after this remove this note 00:31:079 (31079|3) - and add a note 4 here 00:31:179 - and a note 3 here 00:31:279 - ,all this to emphatize those strange sound in this section ,

if you followed the previous suggestion then 00:31:479 (31479|1) - move in col 1 and 00:31:479 (31479|3,31679|3) - move one column on left ,after this 00:31:879 (31879|2) - move in col 4 and always here add a note 2 for consistency mall this for a better pitch revelancy

00:33:379 (33379|3) - ghost note, remove it unrankable

00:37:079 (37079|0) - col 2 and 00:37:279 (37279|1) - col 1 ,then 00:37:479 (37479|0) - move this note here 00:37:679 -

00:37:579 (37579|2) - no sound in 1/4 here unrankable notes are in 1/6 here 00:37:545 - 00:37:612 -


00:38:279 (38279|1) - suggest to turn in a simple note too

00:38:479 - add a note for the drum here in col 4

00:38:679 (38679|0) - move in col 2 for a better flow of those pattern

00:39:079 (39079|2) - remove this LN , no need a triple here

00:39:179 (39179|1) - move in col 3 and add a note 4 here 00:39:279 -

00:39:879 (39879|0) - suggest to turn this LN too into a simple note then rearrange this pattern 00:39:679 (39679|3) - col 1 00:39:879 (39879|1) - col 4 00:40:079 (40079|3) - col 1 and always here add a note 2

00:40:879 (40879|2) - turn into a simple note and 00:40:279 (40279|1,40479|2,40679|1,40879|2) - ctrl+h for a better flow of those pattern

00:41:279 - add note 1 for the drum and 00:41:479 (41479|3) - turn into a simple note

00:41:679 - add a note 4 for the drum

00:44:479 (44479|0) - for those vocal move in col 2 and 00:44:079 (44079|0) - turn this note into a 1/1 LN

00:44:879 (44879|3) - remove this note and 00:44:879 (44879|1) - move in col 4 ,after this turn this note 00:44:479 (44479|1) - into a 1/1 LN too

00:45:079 (45079|3,45479|3) - suggest to move in col 2 and 00:45:279 - add a note 4 for the drum

00:45:679 (45679|1,45879|3) - switch column and 00:46:079 (46079|1) - move in col 4 for a better flow of those patterns

00:46:479 - suggest to don't change the consistency of the triple here ,wait for the refrain remove this 00:46:479 (46479|3) -

00:46:279 (46279|0,46379|1,46479|2) - move one column on right

00:46:679 (46679|3,46879|2) - move one column on left

00:47:279 (47279|3,48079|3) - remove those too

00:47:079 (47079|1) - move in col 4

00:48:079 (48079|1,48079|2,48279|0) - move one col on right and 00:48:479 (48479|1) - move in col 1 for a better flow of pattern

00:48:679 (48679|1) - remove this note

00:48:679 (48679|0) - move in col 2

00:48:679 (48679|3) - turn in simple note this LN ,00:48:879 - add a note 3 for drum

00:49:279 (49279|2) - col 4 and 00:49:379 (49379|1,49479|2,49579|3) - ctrl+h for pitch ,after this remove 00:49:679 (49679|2) - and move 00:49:679 (49679|0) - in col 4

00:51:479 - add a note 1 here and 00:51:679 (51679|0) - move in col 2 ,after this 00:51:879 (51879|2) - move in col 1 00:52:079 - add a note 3 and 00:52:279 (52279|2) - remove this ,just let notes for the drums in this section

00:52:679 (52679|2,52879|0,52879|3,52879|1,53079|1,53279|2,53279|3) - rearrange like this

00:55:079 (55079|2) - suggest to turn in simple note and 00:55:179 (55179|1,55279|3) - removing those note ,just emphatize the drums here

00:55:479 - add a note 3 for the drum and move 00:55:679 (55679|2) - in col 4

00:55:879 (55879|3) - turn in simple note 00:56:479 (56479|2) - this too

00:56:279 - add a note 4 and 00:56:379 (56379|3,56479|1,56479|2,56579|3) - move one col on left

00:56:679 (56679|1,56779|0) - ctrl+j and add a note 4 here 00:56:679 - after this follor those suggestion

00:56:879 (56879|1,57079|1,57279|1,57479|1) - col 1 and 00:56:979 (56979|0,57379|0) - col 3 and 00:57:179 (57179|0) - col 2

00:56:779 - add note 3

00:57:679 (57679|1,57979|2,58279|1) - ctrl+h for pitch

00:59:679 (59679|0,60079|1,60479|2) - turn in simple notes..

00:59:679 - from here suggest to put triple for those kick ,add note 4

00:59:879 (59879|3) - move in col 2 and 01:00:079 (60079|1,60179|2,60279|3) - move one col on left for a better flow of pattern

01:00:479 - add a note 1 and move 01:00:479 (60479|2) - move in col 2

01:00:679 (60679|0) - suggest to move in col 3 and 01:00:879 - add a note 2 for the drum ,also 01:00:979 - add a note 3 for the tick

01:01:279 - add notes 2 3

01:01:479 (61479|3,61579|0) - col 3 2

01:01:679 - add note 1 for the drum

01:02:479 (62479|3) - remove

01:02:879 - add note 2 for the kick

01:04:479 (64479|2) - turn into a simple note and 01:04:479 - add a note 4 for the kick

01:04:779 (64779|3) - move in col 3 for a better flow of pattern

01:06:079 (66079|3,66479|2,66879|1) - feel like a copypaste here ,turn into simple notes those too and rearrange the pattern like the previous section as here

01:08:879 (68879|1) - remove

01:09:079 (69079|2,69879|3) - turn in simple notes

01:09:079 (69079|0) - move in col 2 and 01:09:279 - add notes 1 2

01:10:879 (70879|2,71079|3) - remove those notes and make this pattern something like here 00:30:679 -

01:11:779 (71779|3,71979|1) - remove and add a note here 01:11:879 - col 2

and.. so much things to fix here , poke me in game better











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00:33:379 - ghost note ,remove it

00:37:579 - no sound in 1/4 notes are in 1/6 here 00:37:545 - 00:37:612 -

00:37:779 - 00:37:979 - same here ,sound are in 1/6
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dosyeru
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Harbyter wrote:

[8k]
00:33:379 - ghost note ,remove it
I do hear downward synth sounds in music at this point.
00:37:579 - no sound in 1/4 notes are in 1/6 here 00:37:545 - 00:37:612 -
00:37:779 - 00:37:979 - same here ,sound are in 1/6
hmm, i dont think so.
up&downwards synth sounds may seem to have a bit of delay, but i think it's still on 1/4 beat.
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