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Our Stolen Theory - United (L.A.O.S Remix)

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Asphyxia

Squigly wrote:

uguu small mod


just some general ideas
  1. 02:08:830 (5,6,7) - for things like this, there is a vocal here on the white tick, and it would fit to put a kicklider from the white to the blue, and then have a note on the red tick on the slider, but you dont need too, just an idea It surely would, but it's too awkward for me to put such things there now, so I have to deny it. Moreover, notes work as good as a slider, if not better.
  2. 02:10:202 (4) - why not switch this curve to face the other side True, flow is better now and looks more appealing, fixed.
  3. 02:12:088 (9,10,1) - as an example, you could take like DS .8 and make this into a small line or curved triple that points away from the next note, i think it is rather good effect ;e; I'll have to think about these kind of suggestions a bit more, they're good but I like my stacked triplets. I'll ask around and see what people prefer.
  4. 02:15:773 - there is indeed a note here, why not make this part a little better, as is the 2 triplets make it kinda silly ;w; It's for the emphasis on the united-part, which fits if you ask me, so I decided to leave it.
  5. 02:16:973 (3,4,5,6) - you should make this curve into the next slider instead of away, it make more sense in this case Yes, flows better and looks visually much better, fixed.
  6. 02:18:430 (4,5,6,7,8) - i thought that maybe you could have changed the notes into sliders to follow the vocals here, might be better? ;w; I think I answered this before already
  7. 02:28:373 (8) - this sounds better when you extend it 1 tick since the vocal matches it more that way It doesn't (for me, at least), so I denied all of these suggestions. Kickslider there does a better job than a 1/2 would
  8. 02:29:230 (6,7) - maybe into kicksliders? ;w; it would work but up to you I prefer notes in this case, sorry ;_;
  9. 02:31:116 (7,8) - you kno wut i bout to sey you know wuti bout to reply
  10. 02:32:659 (8,9,1) - maybe curve this away from next note as well? ;w; As said before, will think about it more, same goes for every similar suggestion.
  11. 02:37:459 (6) - kickslider into next note? C: Prefer notes, sorry
  12. 02:40:202 (6) - maybe a kickslider parallel to the next longer slider I think it'd be an awkward addition because I haven't introduced any kicksliders besides the ones in kiai so no.
  13. 02:41:230 (2,3,4) - curve away
  14. 03:00:259 (1,2,3) - why not make these like semi stacked with a really small ds you know what im sayin bruh? Tried, but ended up liking my current one better. Nice suggestion, though
  15. 03:03:173 (2,3,4) - make this triangle look better you lazy scrubba Lol sure xD
  16. 03:14:659 (3,4) - shorten repeat to the red tick, delete the note, and make another repeating slider for the same length on the white tick? c: Sounds somewhat overmapped, it fits the vocals better, but I have a feeling mine fits the maps atmosphere better so I decided to stick with my current one.
  17. 03:15:945 (7) - you can keep this note here but i feel only 1 note is necessary and creates a better feel so i would delete this ;w; Awesome suggestion, fixed!
  18. 03:17:573 (4) - this would be cool as a mini slider point back ?
  19. 03:17:916 (6) - same here ^
  20. 03:18:688 (7) - plserino Fixed aswell ^_^
  21. 03:26:830 (6,7) - i dunno, maybe repeating sliders? guess not but might as well suggest ;w; I think notes fit here better because I already introduced few short streams (and maybe even triplets) before this, it emphasis the united really well and also flow well into the stream.
  22. uguu marathons
:)
Thanks for your awesome mod, Squigly! I denied most due to my personal preference, sorry about that. :f
Kyshiro
Recheck

Infinity
  1. Add an epilepsy warning as the background flashes during the kiai times
  2. 01:35:230 (1,2) - For some reason I don't like this and it flows rather odd, how about copying 01:35:230 (1) - and CTRL+H CTRL+G it
  3. 05:25:716 (1) - Spinner feels so long and boring, maybe shorten it to 2 measures? (Also IF people are going to play it with HR it's close to a suicide spinner)


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Topic Starter
Asphyxia

Kyshiro wrote:

Recheck

Infinity
  1. Add an epilepsy warning as the background flashes during the kiai times Added
  2. 01:35:230 (1,2) - For some reason I don't like this and it flows rather odd, how about copying 01:35:230 (1) - and CTRL+H CTRL+G it I fixed it differently, should have a smoother flow now!
  3. 05:25:716 (1) - Spinner feels so long and boring, maybe shorten it to 2 measures? (Also IF people are going to play it with HR it's close to a suicide spinner)
    I don't want to shorten it anymore since it'd feel too awkward. Current place is enough HR-friendly to survive :f


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so fast lol
Topic Starter
Asphyxia

Kyshiro wrote:

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Thank you soooooo much <3
Lust
log
13:43 Asphyxia: eyyyy
15:01 Lust: sorry buddy i was asleep
15:01 Lust: whats up?
15:01 Asphyxia: Ah all good
15:01 Asphyxia: I was just wondering if you remembered my mod request, it's currently sitting at 1st bubble
15:02 Lust: yeah i remember, the sb is done? o.o
15:02 Asphyxia: Yes
15:02 Asphyxia: It got finished yesterday
15:02 Lust: niceeeee
15:02 Lust: np the map lets do it now
15:02 Asphyxia: Also, how are you?
15:02 *Asphyxia is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/550235 Our Stolen Theory - United (L.A.O.S Remix)]
15:02 Lust: im alright
15:03 Asphyxia: do you prefer irc or forum
15:03 Lust: irc
15:03 Asphyxia: alright
15:03 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/550235 Our Stolen Theory - United (L.A.O.S Remix) [Infinity]]
15:04 Lust: 00:21:859 (5,6) - i think a ctrl+g here would provide for nicer flow, and the flow change from the newly placed 6 to 00:22:202 (7) - will reflect the song nicely imo
15:04 Asphyxia: Fixed
15:06 Lust: 01:03:173 (5,6) - same deal here, a ctrl+g will really flow a lot smoother and the transition from 01:03:345 (6,7) - will fit the song right
15:06 Lust: the changed angle from 6 to 7 will accent the song closer imo
15:08 Asphyxia: My intention was to make the jump slightly bigger what the ctrl + g gives, but I fixed it because it gives a smoother flow
15:08 Lust: yeah im aware of that, but the angle that you had before the ctrl+g was not as sharp as the angle after the ctrl+g making it actually a bit more difficult to play imo
15:09 Lust: and since the flow from before was a lot more roundabout, the leadin will have the same effect as before
15:14 Lust: alright
15:14 Lust: that should be it
15:15 Lust: update that shit and lets get this bubble #2

We fixed various patterns to make it flow nicer and provide nicer transitions into the following ones.
Topic Starter
Asphyxia

Lust wrote:

log
13:43 Asphyxia: eyyyy
15:01 Lust: sorry buddy i was asleep
15:01 Lust: whats up?
15:01 Asphyxia: Ah all good
15:01 Asphyxia: I was just wondering if you remembered my mod request, it's currently sitting at 1st bubble
15:02 Lust: yeah i remember, the sb is done? o.o
15:02 Asphyxia: Yes
15:02 Asphyxia: It got finished yesterday
15:02 Lust: niceeeee
15:02 Lust: np the map lets do it now
15:02 Asphyxia: Also, how are you?
15:02 *Asphyxia is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/550235 Our Stolen Theory - United (L.A.O.S Remix)]
15:02 Lust: im alright
15:03 Asphyxia: do you prefer irc or forum
15:03 Lust: irc
15:03 Asphyxia: alright
15:03 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/550235 Our Stolen Theory - United (L.A.O.S Remix) [Infinity]]
15:04 Lust: 00:21:859 (5,6) - i think a ctrl+g here would provide for nicer flow, and the flow change from the newly placed 6 to 00:22:202 (7) - will reflect the song nicely imo
15:04 Asphyxia: Fixed
15:06 Lust: 01:03:173 (5,6) - same deal here, a ctrl+g will really flow a lot smoother and the transition from 01:03:345 (6,7) - will fit the song right
15:06 Lust: the changed angle from 6 to 7 will accent the song closer imo
15:08 Asphyxia: My intention was to make the jump slightly bigger what the ctrl + g gives, but I fixed it because it gives a smoother flow
15:08 Lust: yeah im aware of that, but the angle that you had before the ctrl+g was not as sharp as the angle after the ctrl+g making it actually a bit more difficult to play imo
15:09 Lust: and since the flow from before was a lot more roundabout, the leadin will have the same effect as before
15:14 Lust: alright
15:14 Lust: that should be it
15:15 Lust: update that shit and lets get this bubble #2

We fixed various patterns to make it flow nicer and provide nicer transitions into the following ones.
Thank you so much Lust! ~
Lust
Bubble #2
Topic Starter
Asphyxia

Lust wrote:

Bubble #2
Thanks soooo much Lust! Also, I confirmed with Damnae that the SB is ready to go in its current state;

Myxo
Approved ヽ(´ー`)ノ

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2015-01-03 22:23 Desperate-kun: 00:31:973 (6) -
2015-01-03 22:23 Desperate-kun: usually you used two circles there
2015-01-03 22:23 Desperate-kun: which feels better, due to the strong sound at the downbeat
2015-01-03 22:24 Asphyxia: Yes, but I can't think of anything better than that pattern-wise
2015-01-03 22:24 Asphyxia: I tried playing with notes but then jump would feel really big
2015-01-03 22:24 Asphyxia: and the flow between them sloppy
2015-01-03 22:24 Desperate-kun: i'm trying
2015-01-03 22:26 Desperate-kun: hmm wouldn't it work if you just have (6) a circle and then some little jumps for (1) (2) (3)
2015-01-03 22:26 Desperate-kun: like you did before
2015-01-03 22:26 Desperate-kun: you can basically do anything
2015-01-03 22:26 Desperate-kun: while keeping everything from 00:32:659 (7) -
2015-01-03 22:28 Desperate-kun: http://puu.sh/e1PML/b47cb3c744.jpg
2015-01-03 22:28 Desperate-kun: for example
2015-01-03 22:29 Asphyxia: Do you mind if I just removed the slider, and stacked the note at 00:31:973 (6) - ?
2015-01-03 22:29 Asphyxia: I contacted Shiro for the preview point problem, and he'll lurk around some corners now
2015-01-03 22:29 Desperate-kun: hmm don't you think the jump would be a bit too big in that case
2015-01-03 22:29 Desperate-kun: ahh okay :D
2015-01-03 22:29 Asphyxia: I actually tested it, and even though it looks big
2015-01-03 22:30 Asphyxia: the flow is rather good, so it feels natural to me
2015-01-03 22:30 Desperate-kun: okay, do as you wish
2015-01-03 22:30 Desperate-kun: or keep the slider, it was just a minor thing anyways
2015-01-03 22:30 Asphyxia: Well if I can keep the slider, I'd prefer that
2015-01-03 22:30 Asphyxia: overall
2015-01-03 22:30 Desperate-kun: yea
2015-01-03 22:31 Desperate-kun: for this map you can deny all of my suggestions, it's perfect anyway
2015-01-03 22:31 Asphyxia: LOL thanks!
2015-01-03 22:31 Desperate-kun: np
2015-01-03 22:32 Desperate-kun: 01:39:688 (5,6) -
2015-01-03 22:32 Desperate-kun: it feels weird to have 3/4s here
2015-01-03 22:33 Desperate-kun: 01:36:945 (5,6) - while you have 1/2 here
2015-01-03 22:33 Desperate-kun: (and before as well)
2015-01-03 22:33 Desperate-kun: 01:37:630 (7) - this 3/4 sounds good although you used 1/2 before, it's a nice variation, but the above was really bothering me :c
2015-01-03 22:34 Asphyxia: Well it's basically for the variation
2015-01-03 22:34 Desperate-kun: hmm but imo those feel inconsistent then
2015-01-03 22:34 Desperate-kun: it's noticeable when playing that it's really different than before
2015-01-03 22:35 Asphyxia: I am open for some pattern suggestion, certainly
2015-01-03 22:36 Asphyxia: this got mentioned once already but I can't come up with anything as cool as that for that part
2015-01-03 22:36 Asphyxia: which is the real issue
2015-01-03 22:36 Desperate-kun: http://puu.sh/e1QXv/7973b91651.jpg
2015-01-03 22:36 Desperate-kun: it's basically what you had just with 1/2s
2015-01-03 22:36 Desperate-kun: would work for me
2015-01-03 22:38 Asphyxia: Fixed
2015-01-03 22:38 Desperate-kun: nice
2015-01-03 22:38 Asphyxia: I also reduced the hp to 6
2015-01-03 22:38 Desperate-kun: cool
2015-01-03 22:38 Desperate-kun: btw
2015-01-03 22:38 Desperate-kun: how to map repetetive songs like this one
2015-01-03 22:38 Desperate-kun: please explain
2015-01-03 22:38 Desperate-kun: :D
2015-01-03 22:39 Asphyxia: You just gotta get that variation done
2015-01-03 22:39 Desperate-kun: yeah but it always feels so inconsistent when i do it
2015-01-03 22:39 Desperate-kun: it feels like if it's wrong
2015-01-03 22:40 Asphyxia: Then repetitive songs are a no-no for you :P
2015-01-03 22:40 Desperate-kun: yep
2015-01-03 22:40 Asphyxia: Also, Shiro told me that there is no fix for it
2015-01-03 22:40 Asphyxia: so judging from that, we can not do anything about it
2015-01-03 22:40 Desperate-kun: okay
2015-01-03 22:40 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/e1RHn/892991119b.png
2015-01-03 22:42 Asphyxia: report
2015-01-03 22:42 Asphyxia: jk jk
2015-01-03 22:42 Desperate-kun: yep
2015-01-03 22:44 Desperate-kun: your streamshapes are sex
2015-01-03 22:44 Desperate-kun: honestly
2015-01-03 22:44 Asphyxia: LOL
2015-01-03 22:44 Asphyxia: the key to is that
2015-01-03 22:44 Asphyxia: if you're going to make a roundish shape
2015-01-03 22:44 Asphyxia: remember to blanket it
2015-01-03 22:45 Asphyxia: that's a good way to make it look good
2015-01-03 22:45 Desperate-kun: well i use convert...
2015-01-03 22:45 Asphyxia: :D
2015-01-03 22:45 Desperate-kun: and for multiple curves i just use multiple sliders
2015-01-03 22:46 Asphyxia: that's a good way too
2015-01-03 22:46 Desperate-kun: okay
2015-01-03 22:46 Desperate-kun: update please
2015-01-03 22:48 Asphyxia: Updated!
2015-01-03 22:48 Asphyxia: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/550235 Our Stolen Theory - United (L.A.O.S Remix)]
2015-01-03 22:53 Asphyxia: Wait
2015-01-03 22:53 Asphyxia: Is there something I could possibly check
2015-01-03 22:53 Asphyxia: before you set the flames?
2015-01-03 22:54 Desperate-kun: ehh what do you mean
2015-01-03 22:54 Desperate-kun: i am checking everything again
2015-01-03 22:54 Asphyxia: Well I guess the drain time is enough
2015-01-03 22:54 Asphyxia: because it doesn't count the last spinner
2015-01-03 22:54 Desperate-kun: oh yes
2015-01-03 22:55 Desperate-kun: 00:15:687 -
2015-01-03 22:55 Asphyxia: so you're sure?
2015-01-03 22:55 Asphyxia: awesome
2015-01-03 22:55 Desperate-kun: 05:31:116 -
2015-01-03 22:55 Desperate-kun: ^ 5:15
2015-01-03 22:55 Desperate-kun: i'm sure
2015-01-03 22:55 Asphyxia: awesome
2015-01-03 22:55 Asphyxia: Then I am good
2015-01-03 22:55 Asphyxia: thanks! <3
2015-01-03 23:02 Desperate-kun: okay
2015-01-03 23:02 Desperate-kun: i am fine with everything
2015-01-03 23:02 Asphyxia: I am barely sitting in my chair
2015-01-03 23:02 Asphyxia: so hyped
2015-01-03 23:02 Desperate-kun: is it your first approval
2015-01-03 23:02 Desperate-kun: i don't remember
2015-01-03 23:02 Asphyxia: yes
Topic Starter
Asphyxia

Desperate-kun wrote:

Approved ヽ(´ー`)ノ
Omg, thank you sooooo much! <3<3
Squigly
congratz bb <$$$
Mao
Grats :b
Lust
Congratulations!
Aka
take my invisible mod oh yes!
Xgor
That.... was fast... anyways Gratz!
Buttercup
Congrats \:D/
ProfessionalBox
wtf
Secretpipe
So fast \o/

I'm so sorry , I couldn't mod this cause of the amount of work I had recently !
Proxy
free peppy points here
phaZ
best and fast mapper, also fast rank~ song is epic, too
gratz dude!
VINXIS
00:35:402 (4) - im crei


is this the nomod koigokoro btw

gratz on approval ayee
Topic Starter
Asphyxia

Squigly wrote:

congratz bb <$$$

Thank you! <3

Mao wrote:

Grats :b
Thanks Mao!! <3

Lust wrote:

Congratulations!
Thank you Lust!

Aka wrote:

take my invisible mod oh yes!
Oh yes, thanks! ;)

Xgor wrote:

That.... was fast... anyways Gratz!
Thanks and thank you for the SB! =w=

Nhawak wrote:

Congrats \:D/
Thank you Nhawak! \:D/

ProfessionalBox wrote:

wtf
Niinpä \o/

Secretpipe wrote:

So fast \o/

I'm so sorry , I couldn't mod this cause of the amount of work I had recently !
Don't say sorry for such things, thanks for your support Pipe <3

Proxy wrote:

free peppy points here
I wouldn't call them ''free'' but yeah x)

phaZ wrote:

best and fast mapper, also fast rank~ song is epic, too
gratz dude!
Aww, thanks so much phaZ! <3

VINXIS wrote:

00:35:402 (4) - im crei


is this the nomod koigokoro btw

gratz on approval ayee
Grey & cry, good combination, and thanks! <3yeah 5 minute koigokoro
AustinsGuitar
Beautiful map work. Very Unique streaming concepts. Id like to see these implemented in other songs. Lets make 2015 the DIFFICULT STREAMS YEAR!
Chloe
the song is so nice , can i use your mp3 to create another set?
JMC
N E V E R G I V E U P 
NaTeRiZen
Nice Mapping Man ;)
Schneemesis
Nice Beatmap sir!
I started this song a few years ago too, but i had no time too finish it, so i left all the fans suffering, hehe.

Thank you for mapping this great song!
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