Our Stolen Theory - United (L.A.O.S Remix)

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Asphyxia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 3. tammikuuta 2015 at 23:47:03

Artist: Our Stolen Theory
Title: United (L.A.O.S Remix)
Tags: drum and bass dnb marathon Xgor
BPM: 175
Filesize: 11590kb
Play Time: 05:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Infinity (5,64 stars, 1758 notes)


Download: Our Stolen Theory - United (L.A.O.S Remix)
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Something new, we search

Something that varies from this all

Is it what you want, you want?

We make it united~


Infinity - Asphyxia


Really BIG thank you to Xgor who made the marvelous SB, great work & thank you<3!


Kyshiro - Helping me with offset, mp3 and testplay!
Cydros - For showing me this song and a great, great support with a lot of testplays and feedback!
MFZ - Continuous testplays, giving me good feedback, thanks so much! <3
ProfessionalBox - Helping me out with the difficulty name, and also with the hitsound samples, thanks <3 :)
Priti - Thanks for the combo colors! <3
ProfessionalBox
DampfNudel
Owntrolf
Yales
Xellie
Maeglwn
Kyshiro #1
Xilver15
Squigly
Lust#2
Desperate-kun
Cydros
FIRST!
ProfessionalBox
kd for diff name pls
Secretpipe
You can ask me for a mod or stars anytime <3

and credit plz /me hides
DampfNudel
Topic Starter
Asphyxia

ProfessionalBox wrote:

kd for diff name pls
Kudosu was not only given because of the difficulty name, but also from the help of finding hitsound samples (and BG help if I plan to change this current one)
Owntrolf
I dont think you need countdown and disable letterbox

00:18:434 (1,2) - could probably turn it into a triplet to fit better (Feel free to ignore)
00:21:177 (1,2) - ^
00:23:920 (1,2) - ^

00:31:977 (6) - This feels like a really strange slider
00:31:977 to 00:35:577 - I think you should remap this area/move around the notes because the sliders sound really out of place
01:34:377 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - I think you should change it to something like this because I dont think triplets in a row fit this area
02:01:806 - You could always start the stream here(youcanignore)
02:04:034 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Might be a little hard to read it but its fine for me to play
02:07:292 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I think something like this would be better
02:08:834 (5,6,7) - Replace with a 1/2 slider to fit when the singer says " we"
02:11:577 (5,6,7) - ^ something simlar here too
02:13:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it sounds better as
02:15:006 (1) - Shorten to 1/2 slider with a circle at where it used to end
02:15:520 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I dont really like many triplets in a row :>
04:09:520 (4) - Should proably change to a slider to fit vocals


04:52:034 - Everying after this seems fine

*im lazy to mod more since they're mostly similar things

Similar problems can be found throughout the song
I like the last klai time
Its so similar to -GN's pending An - ExaVid because it repeats the same thing but the combos in this actually fit well in this map
Topic Starter
Asphyxia

Owntrolf wrote:

I dont think you need countdown and disable letterbox Fixed~

00:18:434 (1,2) - could probably turn it into a triplet to fit better (Feel free to ignore)
00:21:177 (1,2) - ^
00:23:920 (1,2) - ^ Would feel too much for such an intro, better not to.

00:31:977 (6) - This feels like a really strange slider Oh well, fits better now because I moved objects around in the next part
00:31:977 to 00:35:577 - I think you should remap this area/move around the notes because the sliders sound really out of place Fixed, follows the music better now
01:34:377 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - I think you should change it to something like this because I dont think triplets in a row fit this area
Hmm sure, creating variation wont hurt
02:01:806 - You could always start the stream here(youcanignore)
02:04:034 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Might be a little hard to read it but its fine for me to play Should be a-okay after 1 retry if needed
02:07:292 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I think something like this would be better
I kind of like as it is though, and it plays really good too so I'm gonna keep it
02:08:834 (5,6,7) - Replace with a 1/2 slider to fit when the singer says " we"
02:11:577 (5,6,7) - ^ something simlar here too Maybe... but then again I prefer my way and putting a slider there would make it somewhat dull? Idk, maybe just me, let's see what others think
02:13:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it sounds better as
Stream fits as well as your example (maybe even better?) so I want to keep it
02:15:006 (1) - Shorten to 1/2 slider with a circle at where it used to end Yeah, nice suggestion, fixed
02:15:520 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I dont really like many triplets in a row :> Should be fine to be honest, the song is getting ready for the second chorus so it fits in that sense a lot and now it creates some kind of variation from 1st kiai
04:09:520 (4) - Should proably change to a slider to fit vocals I feel like my current setup is better for this


04:52:034 - Everying after this seems fine

*im lazy to mod more since they're mostly similar things

Similar problems can be found throughout the song
I like the last klai time
Its so similar to -GN's pending An - ExaVid because it repeats the same thing but the combos in this actually fit well in this map
Thanks for the mod! <3
Topic Starter
Asphyxia
Waiting for Xgor's SB! <3
Yales
Yo o/

  1. 00:21:692 (4) - Add NC? You used lots of NC and with those 00:20:834 (1,2) - notes we feel that you're going to keep up. But you don't ._. It also makes your pattern looks lighter.
  2. 00:57:520 (9) - NC? The stream is really hard by itself, a NC would help the player to localize where's the downbeat. And you always used 8 combo on your stream before this part.
  3. 05:20:834 (9) - ^
  4. 02:48:949 (13) - ^ (maybe?) would be swag lol you did it here by the way 03:32:834 (1) - and some other parts as well (everywhere i think lol)
  5. 03:32:149 (5) - ^ (for the "united" and the finish)
  6. 04:16:034 (5) - ^
  7. 04:59:920 (1,1,1) - Oh, you did it here! XD (guess that was for the spacing change though i.i) the way you did this part is awesome btw
  8. 02:01:292 (1) - I think it would flow better if you ctrl+j
  9. 04:47:234 (1) - ^
  10. 00:35:749 - Add a note? 00:35:577 (5) - feels a bit out of place this way. And the empty red tick before the spinner feels awkward. (like we're waiting but we're not sure why) You can add it at the middle of the triangle btw.
  11. 03:55:463 (3,4) - I find the jump between (3) and the stream a bit too high honnestly try to have a consstance spacing between 03:55:292 (2,3,4) - those notes. Like.. Try to move (3) around x456y112
  12. 04:38:663 (13,14,15,16,1) - Honestly I don't like the flow here, why do you break it?? Try something like this if you like http://puu.sh/dhtHA/8cc270b890.jpg


About your hitsounds, the only thing I could say is that I -really- liked the way you add the finishes here 03:32:149 (5,9,1) - and I think it would be cool if you do it each time. Soo.. Here's my suggestions.
  1. 01:42:777 (1,2) - Add finish
  2. 02:26:320 (1,1,2) - ^
  3. 02:48:263 (5,9,13) - ^
  4. 04:16:034 (5,9,13) - ^
  5. 04:37:977 (5,9,13) - ^
  6. 04:59:920 (1,1,1) - ^ (You even add NC here)
    After that, that's up to you, I still think the 1/8 I pointed out would definitely fit better with a finish


Well that's it, just suggestions..on stuff you did each part, so I guess you have your reasons, but I still wanted to point them out. The map is really good this way I gotta say, and the music is AMAZING too *-* Good job!
Tsusumu
Random Mod~

[Infinity]
  1. 00:19:806 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm not sure why you NC like this, when it sounds the same as other parts in the song where you NC every downbeat
  2. 00:24:434 (4) - Maybe change the angle or move this some to avoid the overlap with 1 that doesn't look very nice
  3. 00:30:263 (5,6,1,2) - idk Why you stack these when they sound the same as the rest of the song
  4. 01:25:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - These sound exactly the same as 01:22:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - so i'd make it a stream for consistency
  5. 03:08:149 (4) - Maybe ctrl+G this
  6. 04:39:006 - Why'd you change to soft hitsounds when the song sounds the same here?


I know it's not much but I tried, going from what I've been modding to this makes me realize I have a lot to learn with modding x.x
Maeglwn
ayo

[General]
  1. try 15690 offset, might be better by the looks of things
  2. I know for a fact you can think of a cooler diff name than Infinity ;D
[Dumbfinity]
  1. 00:20:834 (1,2,1,2) - this looks and plays weird, imo. why not make both of the 1 and 2s just parallel to each other? would look much better. like, much much better
  2. 00:35:577 (5,1) - the pause here is mad awkward. make a 6th note on the red tick imo, every time I tried playing this it really felt like I was supposed to be hitting another note there
  3. 01:03:349 (6,7) - flow kinda weird here. it's too much of a loop-ish motion for the angle it's at. maybe make the angle of the jump between 6 and 7 more obtuse so the cursor has more room to loop around into it? probably just an opinion
  4. 01:45:863 (8,1) - this transition seems kinda awkward. why not make this slider 1/2 and then put a jump at the end of it or something to another note and then back down into the stream of the next part? seems a lot more fun.
    it even makes a cute triangle with 6 and 7 afterwards which is awesome looking
  5. 02:04:034 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - RLC IS THAT YOU SENPAI LOL
    holy shit this map screams RLC and I haven't realized it until now
  6. 04:33:177 (10,11,12,1) - idk how I feel about this flow right here either coming off of an insane jump. might be just me. maybe space these out a bit more or something?

just approve this shit already it's so good

10/10
Topic Starter
Asphyxia

Yales wrote:

Yo o/

  1. 00:21:692 (4) - Add NC? You used lots of NC and with those 00:20:834 (1,2) - notes we feel that you're going to keep up. But you don't ._. It also makes your pattern looks lighter. I fixed it differently, thanks!
  2. 00:57:520 (9) - NC? The stream is really hard by itself, a NC would help the player to localize where's the downbeat. And you always used 8 combo on your stream before this part.
  3. 05:20:834 (9) - ^
  4. 02:48:949 (13) - ^ (maybe?) would be swag lol you did it here by the way 03:32:834 (1) - and some other parts as well (everywhere i think lol)
  5. 03:32:149 (5) - ^ (for the "united" and the finish)
  6. 04:16:034 (5) - ^ As for the NC's go, I have a special pattern for them and these would break it so I have to deny them, sorry, if you're interested to hear about it, contact me in-game
  7. 04:59:920 (1,1,1) - Oh, you did it here! XD (guess that was for the spacing change though i.i) the way you did this part is awesome btw
  8. 02:01:292 (1) - I think it would flow better if you ctrl+j Nice, fixed
  9. 04:47:234 (1) - ^ Fixed
  10. 00:35:749 - Add a note? 00:35:577 (5) - feels a bit out of place this way. And the empty red tick before the spinner feels awkward. (like we're waiting but we're not sure why) You can add it at the middle of the triangle btw. Sure, fixed
  11. 03:55:463 (3,4) - I find the jump between (3) and the stream a bit too high honnestly try to have a consstance spacing between 03:55:292 (2,3,4) - those notes. Like.. Try to move (3) around x456y112 Awesome, plays a lot better now
  12. 04:38:663 (13,14,15,16,1) - Honestly I don't like the flow here, why do you break it?? Try something like this if you like http://puu.sh/dhtHA/8cc270b890.jpg
I honestly prefer my current version a lot better and I think it plays really well too, if more people complain, I might change stuff around a bit

About your hitsounds, the only thing I could say is that I -really- liked the way you add the finishes here 03:32:149 (5,9,1) - and I think it would be cool if you do it each time. Soo.. Here's my suggestions.
  1. 01:42:777 (1,2) - Add finish
  2. 02:26:320 (1,1,2) - ^
  3. 02:48:263 (5,9,13) - ^
  4. 04:16:034 (5,9,13) - ^
  5. 04:37:977 (5,9,13) - ^ Fixed every finish, thanks for the suggestions, the emphasis on those notes sound really good!
  6. 04:59:920 (1,1,1) - ^ (You even add NC here)
    After that, that's up to you, I still think the 1/8 I pointed out would definitely fit better with a finish


Well that's it, just suggestions..on stuff you did each part, so I guess you have your reasons, but I still wanted to point them out. The map is really good this way I gotta say, and the music is AMAZING too *-* Good job!
Thanks for the great mod!

Xellie wrote:

Random Mod~

[Infinity]
  1. 00:19:806 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm not sure why you NC like this, when it sounds the same as other parts in the song where you NC every downbeat Fixed
  2. 00:24:434 (4) - Maybe change the angle or move this some to avoid the overlap with 1 that doesn't look very nice The overlap doesn't show in-game and this way it flows really good so I left it
  3. 00:30:263 (5,6,1,2) - idk Why you stack these when they sound the same as the rest of the song They fit imo
  4. 01:25:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - These sound exactly the same as 01:22:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - so i'd make it a stream for consistency But isn't these two a stream already? Even so, having some kind of variety is good, and that's what I did here
  5. 03:08:149 (4) - Maybe ctrl+G this Personal preference, I tend to leave stuff like this so I want to keep it
  6. 04:39:006 - Why'd you change to soft hitsounds when the song sounds the same here? I wanted to give the chorus more emphasis, since it's more intense. Soft hitsounds fit on this part really good too


I know it's not much but I tried, going from what I've been modding to this makes me realize I have a lot to learn with modding x.x
Sorry for denying suggestions but nonetheless, thanks for the nice mod! =w= Appreciate it and good luck!

Maeglwn wrote:

ayo

[General]
  1. try 15690 offset, might be better by the looks of things fixed
  2. I know for a fact you can think of a cooler diff name than Infinity ;D Infinity rolls the tongue well :(
[Dumbfinity]
  1. 00:20:834 (1,2,1,2) - this looks and plays weird, imo. why not make both of the 1 and 2s just parallel to each other? would look much better. like, much much better I like this round-ish movement the star pattern gives me, so I keep it
  2. 00:35:577 (5,1) - the pause here is mad awkward. make a 6th note on the red tick imo, every time I tried playing this it really felt like I was supposed to be hitting another note there Yeah, fixed
  3. 01:03:349 (6,7) - flow kinda weird here. it's too much of a loop-ish motion for the angle it's at. maybe make the angle of the jump between 6 and 7 more obtuse so the cursor has more room to loop around into it? probably just an opinion Flows well if you ask me
  4. 01:45:863 (8,1) - this transition seems kinda awkward. why not make this slider 1/2 and then put a jump at the end of it or something to another note and then back down into the stream of the next part? seems a lot more fun. Awesome suggestion, fixed
    it even makes a cute triangle with 6 and 7 afterwards which is awesome looking
  5. 02:04:034 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - RLC IS THAT YOU SENPAI LOL RLC the senpai
    holy shit this map screams RLC and I haven't realized it until now
  6. 04:33:177 (10,11,12,1) - idk how I feel about this flow right here either coming off of an insane jump. might be just me. maybe space these out a bit more or something? I added a bit more spacing, it plays good nonetheless but better now

just approve this shit already it's so good

10/10
Thanks everyone for the awesome mods, greatly appreciated! <3
Kyshiro
sup
Infinity
  1. Offset -2 to make it perfect
  2. I'd increase the volume a bit as the hitsounds are kinda hard to hear sometimes except for the intro
  3. 00:18:432 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe move this down a bit as a whole to create a little jump? Would fit the music and you seem to have done that a bit further too
  4. 00:32:147 - I prefer this note to be clickable
  5. 00:35:747 (6) - Little more to the left to put it exactly between 00:35:061 (2,4) - YES IM NAZI NOW
  6. 00:49:890 (7,1) - This gets me every time, maybe put it a bit closer to indicate that it's 1/4? Since it's the first one where you put this spacing it would let players know this spacing is being used further on too
  7. 01:35:575 (2) - I don't see a reason for this to be 3/4 honestly, I think 1/2 would fit a lot better
  8. 01:56:318 (3,4,5,6,7) - I can't help but feel this is a bit weird cause the stream is exactly like the one before it, maybe CTRL+J it?
  9. 03:27:690 (1) - NC seems rather pointless here
  10. 03:32:061 (4,5,6) - This angle felt rather awkward to play, maybe make it less pointy?
  11. 05:20:832 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - Would be cool if you could make the circle where it overlaps in the stream perfectly stacked
  12. 05:24:604 (5) - I feel like 2x a 1/2 slider followed by a note would be a lot cooler than a 1/1 repeat


i r8 8/8 gr8 map m8
Topic Starter
Asphyxia

Kyshiro wrote:

sup
Infinity
  1. Offset -2 to make it perfect Sure
  2. I'd increase the volume a bit as the hitsounds are kinda hard to hear sometimes except for the intro Gave +10 except for the intro
  3. 00:18:432 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe move this down a bit as a whole to create a little jump? Would fit the music and you seem to have done that a bit further too Fixed
  4. 00:32:147 - I prefer this note to be clickable I prefer how it is now though, and I couldn't think of any placements for possible 2x notes. I feel like a slider is more appropriate anyway
  5. 00:35:747 (6) - Little more to the left to put it exactly between 00:35:061 (2,4) - YES IM NAZI NOW Lol sure, how did I miss that :f
  6. 00:49:890 (7,1) - This gets me every time, maybe put it a bit closer to indicate that it's 1/4? Since it's the first one where you put this spacing it would let players know this spacing is being used further on too Moved a bit closer
  7. 01:35:575 (2) - I don't see a reason for this to be 3/4 honestly, I think 1/2 would fit a lot better Lol yeah, it follows the vocals somewhat nicely but I agree that 1/2 plays better here
  8. 01:56:318 (3,4,5,6,7) - I can't help but feel this is a bit weird cause the stream is exactly like the one before it, maybe CTRL+J it? oh yeah nice catch, fixed
  9. 03:27:690 (1) - NC seems rather pointless here Well it was according to my NC pattern, but I guess removing it is fine also
  10. 03:32:061 (4,5,6) - This angle felt rather awkward to play, maybe make it less pointy? Sure
  11. 05:20:832 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - Would be cool if you could make the circle where it overlaps in the stream perfectly stacked I like how it plays now and re-arranging this part would be kinda.. hard for me loll
  12. 05:24:604 (5) - I feel like 2x a 1/2 slider followed by a note would be a lot cooler than a 1/1 repeat Hmm true, fixed


i r8 8/8 gr8 map m8
I r8 8/8 mod m8

I also made the end spinner slightly longer so it fits better now, yay! Tons of thanks! 8-)
Secretpipe
Does it even need mods ? LOL

Take my star~
Topic Starter
Asphyxia

Secretpipe wrote:

Does it even need mods ? LOL

Take my star~
Mod pls<3

Thanks so much for the star! <3
Nhawak
wtf
the beatmap is very goooooooooooooooooooooood
congrats and good luck <3
Xilver15
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Topic Starter
Asphyxia

Xilver15 wrote:

Seriously does this thing even need modding this map is so good LOL , let's try anywayyyy

DISCLAIMER: I am very new to modding. If my mod sucks, don't apply it. Wouldn't want to ruin a map like this c:

[Infinity]

00:57:516 (9) - NC? Would be easier to read with that spacing I have a thing with Unless you want like a wall of text how I wanted these NC's to be, you can contact me in-game for more detailed answer but I have to say no, sorry

01:20:145 (9) - I think short sliders would be nice for that part and would look and play better than just a long stream c: If you don't agree to this, then how about NCing 01:20:145 (9) ? :3 Same for the NC, and I think re-arranging the stream with 1/4 sliders would seriously take a lot of time and I currently like mine, so I want to leave this untouched

01:39:688 (5,6) - 1/3 sliders kinda play weird, I think leaving them on red tick would be fine c: They're 3/4 sliders instead of 1/3, and I partly agree, but I don't know any cool ways to come up with a pattern for this, so I'll leave them for now

02:16:973 (3,4,5,6) - Kinda nazi but I think it would look nicer if you made them angle down a bit, something like this: http://puu.sh/dJaZS/1730b8a891.jpg It was supposed to be a short wave (like a wave-slider) but yah, fixed

02:34:545 (5,6) - Angled sliders looks kinda weird, I think curved would be nicer c: Adjusted :D

03:53:745 (1,2,3,4) - That stream has a pretty drastic change in spacing LOL, I think if you made these 4 notes a bit more spaced it would be a lot easier to notice and play without flunking up. I honestly thought it was fine when I tested it several times, but I added some extra spacing on it so it would feel more comfortable

03:57:516 (7) - Same as 02:34:545 (5,6) and maybe just curve it a liiiiitle bit more down, holy shit this is so nazi Adjusted

04:20:488 (5,7) - I think if you curve these it's gonna work better with the curve on 6, sorta like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2388026 Awesome suggestion, fixed!


Alright that's what I have, really these are all minor things this map is amazing, great job hope to see it in approved :D
Thanks so much for the useful mod and nice comments, greatly appreciated man!

Nhawak wrote:

oh shit
the beatmap is very goooooooooooooooooooooood
congrats and good lock <3
Thanks so much!!! :D
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