Hello! R4 ticket used from my queue~


I kinda liked the song a bit close ;3 Sorry if i can't bring this to the ranking process, but it's the rules not to overdo it much.
Good luck with this!

Thanks Gray Veyron, went through and updated quite a bit that I can't even remember what I changed

-General-
"with my" is part of the english title

-Easy-
01:12:000 (2) - This looks symmetrical to me when i rotate it
01:45:600 (2,1,2) - Looks the same and rotated to me as 01:50:400 (2,1,2)

-Normal-
00:37:500 (1,2,3,4) - Wasn't quite sure what you meant, tried something else instead

-Insane-
Edited quite a number of patterns including those you mentioned

Well, I have to say good job so far, there really isn't much for me to really crack down on (granted I'm only looking at hard/insane here).
So this is gonna be me nitpicking, although I'm pretty sure that's what you want anyways.

HARD

First off, Might just be me, but I feel the AR is a little oddly slow for the map and makes it look faster than it actually is, I'd recommend a slight increase to 7.5 or 7.7

00:18:000 - (1,2,3,4) - This Pattern here feels very robotic to play, Id recommend increasing the spacing so that the tails of each are about at the same level and angling the sliders towards the next combo.

00:31:950 - (1,2) - This flick feels a little strenuous for a Hard difficulty, I'd reduce the spacing here slightly.

01:58:350 - (3,4) - I'd recommend slightly spacing these two, the lack on consistency from the flick last time this pattern occurred is visible

02:17:700 - (3) - I don't like the angle of this slider, I'd recommend tilting it slightly so that the head is closer to the tail of the previous slider and that the tail leads to the next slider properly.

03:27:000 - (3,4) - Listening to the song I feel like these two sliders should actually be one longer slider, if you want to cut the length you can always make it snake on 1/12 or 1/16 snap to reduce speed and length.

04:25:650 - (2) - This circle is very high on the grid, while it doesn't seem to have any errors while playing I wouldn't want to take chances with a note that's half off the "map able" grid.

That's it for the Hard, if anything else I'd say it feels very difficult for what's supposed to be a "Hard" map, but seeing as the difficulty spread holds alright it shouldn't be a problem.

INSANE

03:15:300 - 03:37:200 - Honestly, This whole section, There should be notes starting from the initial time there, and when you did have notes later, I felt like they weren't highlighting the guitar which was the dominant track and would've been very fun to play, I'd recommend remapping this entier segment with that in mind.

Yea honestly, Outside that one segment, I didn't see anything I'd want to change in the insane, I played it through maybe 5 or 6 times modding it alone, I could see my self playing this enough to learn and SS it. the Insane is a very good map and I hope you get this ranked soon, GL.

Thanks TheOnlyLeon

TheOnlyLeon wrote:

HARD

First off, Might just be me, but I feel the AR is a little oddly slow for the map and makes it look faster than it actually is, I'd recommend a slight increase to 7.5 or 7.7 Went with 7.4

00:18:000 - (1,2,3,4) - This Pattern here feels very robotic to play, Id recommend increasing the spacing so that the tails of each are about at the same level and angling the sliders towards the next combo. Moved and reangled a bit

00:31:950 - (1,2) - This flick feels a little strenuous for a Hard difficulty, I'd reduce the spacing here slightly. Reduced

01:58:350 - (3,4) - I'd recommend slightly spacing these two, the lack on consistency from the flick last time this pattern occurred is visible Not sure what you meant but kept it to be consistent with previous

02:17:700 - (3) - I don't like the angle of this slider, I'd recommend tilting it slightly so that the head is closer to the tail of the previous slider and that the tail leads to the next slider properly. Adjusted

03:27:000 - (3,4) - Listening to the song I feel like these two sliders should actually be one longer slider, if you want to cut the length you can always make it snake on 1/12 or 1/16 snap to reduce speed and length. Prefer to keep this on 1/2 beat

04:25:650 - (2) - This circle is very high on the grid, while it doesn't seem to have any errors while playing I wouldn't want to take chances with a note that's half off the "map able" grid. Moved

INSANE

03:15:300 - 03:37:200 - Honestly, This whole section, There should be notes starting from the initial time there, and when you did have notes later, I felt like they weren't highlighting the guitar which was the dominant track and would've been very fun to play, I'd recommend remapping this entier segment with that in mind. Remapped some of it, left the break there as the song really needed a break somewhere

Hi, from my modding queue !

[Insane]
03:15:450 - I feel like this guitar solo should be mapped up until at least 03:20:400 or something if you still want a break in the map.

[Hard]
Consider raising the AR to 8
00:10:050 (2) - put this on the red tick
00:11:250 (2) - ^
00:31:950 (1,2) - could increase the spacing here a bit
04:34:800 (1) - this slider doesn't look as nice as the rest of them

[Easy]
00:22:800 (4) - NC

Couldn't really find any problems honestly...great mapset, and good luck getting it ranked

Thanks Synpoo!

Synpoo wrote:

[Insane]
03:15:450 - I feel like this guitar solo should be mapped up until at least 03:20:400 or something if you still want a break in the map. Added some stuff

[Hard]
Consider raising the AR to 8 Used 7.8
00:10:050 (2) - put this on the red tick Shortened slider and added circle in front and adjusted to red tick
00:31:950 (1,2) - could increase the spacing here a bit Seemed fine
04:34:800 (1) - this slider doesn't look as nice as the rest of them Wow it was ugly, better now

[Easy]
00:22:800 (4) - NC Done

inb4 /rank

Thanks DahplA!

DahplA wrote:

General

1. Maybe add "SML" to tags for lazy people who can't type the periods like me? Haha me too

Insane

1. 00:04:800 (1) - Maybe move this so it doesn't touch 00:05:700 (4) -
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:08:100 (4) - ^ Both moved
3. 00:19:500 (2) - Not stacked properly
4. 00:52:800 (1) - ^ They seem stacked for me
5. 03:06:900 (6) - Move so it's symmetrical to 03:07:050 (7) - ? Moved
6. 03:19:050 (6) - This should be mapped to the lyrics. Changed
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 03:31:200 (1) - Not stacked properly Looks stacked
8. 04:40:200 (1,2) - Maybe change the distance spacing on these because of the last two circles being 1/2 apart, it might confuse people to hitting it too quickly. I'd recommend either making the distance smaller or use fancy slider Shortened a bit
9. 01:04:800 (11) - & 02:31:200 (1) - Isn't this meant to be 3/4? Lyrics fall on 2/3

Hard

1. 00:10:200 (3) - Was this meant to be stacked? Looks stacked
2. 00:10:500 (1) - Remove NC It's there to tell people its not 1/2
3. 01:04:800 (5) - & 02:31:200 (5) - You sure this isn't meant to be 3/4? Lyrics fall on 2/3
4. 02:42:000 (1) - Fix blanket a bit Done

STAR~~!

Thanks ReeChelly!

From ✞Kuki and Moph's Modding Q✞(Sorry it took so long!)

I couldn't find any issues with the easy/normal, but that doesn't mean there aren't, try and get some more modders to focus on these two to make them perfect!

Hard

1. 00:46:350 (3,4) - try this: http://puu.sh/hLuQV/77801aa553.jpg.
2. 02:52:350 - Map this beat.

Insane

1. 01:39:300 (5,1) - Could make a small stream here between these notes.
2. 01:43:500 (2,3,4,5) - Try this here: http://puu.sh/hLvs2/14f9ddb19b.jpg.
3. 03:37:200 (1) - This is juuust out of snap with the rest of the stream I think, try to fix this if you see a problem.
4. 04:09:600 (1) - Try making this a reverse slider and removing 04:09:900 (2).

Thanks Kuki!

Kuki wrote:

Hard

1. 00:46:350 (3,4) - try this: http://puu.sh/hLuQV/77801aa553.jpg. Did this and a few others I spotted
2. 02:52:350 - Map this beat. Prefer skipping this to match vocals

Insane

1. 01:39:300 (5,1) - Could make a small stream here between these notes. Stacked for consistency
2. 01:43:500 (2,3,4,5) - Try this here: http://puu.sh/hLvs2/14f9ddb19b.jpg. Needed the 2nd blue tick for the drum
3. 03:37:200 (1) - This is juuust out of snap with the rest of the stream I think, try to fix this if you see a problem. Moved a bit
4. 04:09:600 (1) - Try making this a reverse slider and removing 04:09:900 (2). 04:09:900 (2) Too strong with vocals to remove

general:
move offset to 3600

ez:
00:22:050 (3) - start from 00:21:900 ()
01:03:600 (1,2) - fix DS
01:09:600 (3) - normal sample set on repeat
01:19:200 (3) - ^ \\ 01:25:200 (1) - \\ 01:27:600 (1) - \\ 01:30:000 (1) - \\ and for the same sliders on other kiais
01:33:900 (3,1) - fix DS
02:30:000 (1,2) - ^

nrml:
01:19:200 (3) - normal sample set on repeat - and for the same sliders on other kiais

ins:
01:46:500 (2,1) - jump here
01:48:900 (2,1) - ^

not really type of vocals I like, find 2-3 mods and call me

Thanks Sieg!

Changed everything, will find a few more mods

Here I am, and here is my mod

[Insane]

1. 00:31:500 (3) - This jump seems out of place
2. 00:34:800 (1) - Maybe move 1 a bit away from 3
3. 00:49:050 (5,1) - The vocals, to which (I think) you mapped the slider 1 to, start on 5 already
4. 00:58:200 (3,4) - Maybe flip 3 and 4 horizontally
5. 01:18:000 (1) - Maybe flip that vertically
6. 01:48:750 (1,2) - Looks and plays weird, consider making it go more horizontally
7. 01:51:150 (1,2) - Like here
8. 02:12:750 (1) - Maybe move that a bit
9. 02:27:600 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Even when playing, this looks copy/pasted, consider remaking this
10. 02:56:100 (5,6) - I can't hear anything in the song that would justify these being further spaced than the previous ones
11. 03:17:100 (2) - Consider filling these empty places with jumps, as you did later
12. 03:28:800 (1) - You could do a stream here
13. 04:22:350 (1,2) - Maybe make the ending note not stack with the previous one (same for the following)

That's it, I hope I could help
For further questions, feel free to PM me in-game
Good luck !

Thanks Asonate!

Asonate wrote:

1. 00:31:500 (3) - This jump seems out of place 2,3,4 makes a triangle
2. 00:34:800 (1) - Maybe move 1 a bit away from 3 Stacked 1 on 3 instead
3. 00:49:050 (5,1) - The vocals, to which (I think) you mapped the slider 1 to, start on 5 already Was following the beat this time
4. 00:58:200 (3,4) - Maybe flip 3 and 4 horizontally I like how it is now more
5. 01:18:000 (1) - Maybe flip that vertically I prefer it flowing to the next combo instead of previous
6. 01:48:750 (1,2) - Looks and plays weird, consider making it go more horizontally Moved 1
7. 01:51:150 (1,2) - Like here
8. 02:12:750 (1) - Maybe move that a bit Swapped them around
9. 02:27:600 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Even when playing, this looks copy/pasted, consider remaking this Redone
10. 02:56:100 (5,6) - I can't hear anything in the song that would justify these being further spaced than the previous ones Moved closer
11. 03:17:100 (2) - Consider filling these empty places with jumps, as you did later Filled
12. 03:28:800 (1) - You could do a stream here Fine with slider
13. 04:22:350 (1,2) - Maybe make the ending note not stack with the previous one (same for the following) Moved a couple around

Thanks for responding

[Insane]

1. 00:17:100 (2,3) - Ctrl+G this rhythm, maps the instruments better.
2. 00:19:500 (2) - Same here. Circle, then Slider so you can emphasize the beat on 00:19:650 - .
3. 00:31:950 (1) - How about stacking this below 4 so you create a jump from 1>2 instead of from 4>1. Emphasizes vocals much better imo.
4. 00:42:450 - Theres a beat here you didnt map? :S This is an Insane, feels weird to skip beats especially since you dont seem to be skipping them in later lines.
5. 00:45:600 (1,2,3,4) - I would space these out more so theyre bigger than 00:44:850 (2,3,4,5) - . Otherwise there is no emphasis.
6. 00:58:500 (4,1,2) - Deceptive spacing here. Notice how 4>1 is 1/2 spaced, but 1>2 is 1/1 spaced? Yet they are almost the same spacing. Same with
7. 00:59:850 (4,1) - . If you're going to put 1/1 gaps in your map, you should space them farther apart so its *clear* that theres a 1/1 gap between the two objects and not a large jump. (I would discourage using 1/1 gaps in your Insane to begin with, more often than not they end up just skipping clearly audible beats).
8. 01:45:600 (1,2) - Not going to use 1/2 circles instead?
9. 02:02:550 (1,2) - 4 circles instead to be consistent with: 00:36:150 (1,2,3,4) -
10. 02:24:900 (4,1,2) - Okay, this spacing is good!
11. 03:13:200 - Theres still vocals... and instruments... why the random break...
12. 03:27:900 (3,4) - Should have larger spacing here to emphasize the guitar. .
13. 03:36:000 (1,2) - How about using 1/4 repeat sliders instead? The stream begins on 03:36:000 -
14. 04:28:800 (1,2) - Circles here would fit better with the vocals. Also, i mentioned this earlier too about consistency. Don't be afraid to use more circles and jumps honestly... You seem to use a lot of 1/2 sliders when circles would fit just as well if not better (because you can map jumps to them and emphasize vocals on like 04:28:950 - and 04:29:250 - Which you can't emphasize when you use 1/2 sliders)
15. 04:36:300 (3) - Two circles fits better.

[Easy]

1. 00:12:000 (1) - Remove NC, inconsistent with your pattern.
2. 00:36:150 (1) - Remove NC.
3. 00:39:600 (4) - NC, 00:40:800 (1) - Remove NC
4. 00:42:600 (2) - NC
5. 00:43:200 (1) - Remove NC
6. 00:44:400 (3) - NC and Remove from 00:45:600 (1) - Now your NC pattern makes more sense. and you don't have random single NC's on like 00:45:600 (1) - .
7. 01:01:200 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 sliders are really discouraged on Easies. Also consider that this song is 200 bpm. I've seen maps get disqualified because of 1/2 sliders on 140 bpm maps... Imo, just replace them with circles.
8. 02:27:600 (1,2,3,4) - ^
9. 04:10:800 (1) - Just a tip, but, make the control point in the center red instead. Makes the wave curve look nicer.

Tbh, your NC pattern in this diff isn't very consistent. You seem to be NC'ing every 2 measures, but you deviate from this quite often... It results in NC patterns that are very different in length. For example: 00:47:100 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - The first combo spans 3 measures, the second combo spans 2, and the third combo spans 1, so you already know the first combo is too long and the third combo is too short. Additionally, you have stuff like 00:56:400 (1,2,1,2) - Which *could* work, but I wouldn't recommend it on Easy. Just stay with the 2 measure NC pattern and remove it on 00:57:600 (1) - so visually, beginners can see that the beginning of each new color marks the start of a new line that is 2 measures long. Visual rhythm if you want to call it that. (NC spam is totally fine in higher diffs though)

01:13:200 (4,1,2) - Stuff like this should be one combo. NC on 4., and remove it from 1. Why? because 01:10:800 - Is the beginning of a new 2 measure interval. This 2 measure interval ends on 01:13:200 - (where a new one begins).

Alright, good luck with this set!

Thanks monstrata, changed pretty much everything (insane suffered my learning process so some stuff are still wierd) except

monstrata wrote:

[Insane]
03:13:200 - Theres still vocals... and instruments... why the random break...I feel after 3 minutes on 200bpm most people would be dying for a break

hi~ furywolf
form my Queue
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[Easy]

1. 00:45:600 (2) - blanket 00:44:400 (1) - tail point
   
   SPOILER

   
   my not good blanket x_x
2. 01:19:200 (3) - add finish at tail point
3. 02:25:800 (2,1) - If you can stack this note, beautiful than now

[Normal]

1. 00:07:200 (1) - blanket this Circle 00:05:700 (2) -
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:12:000 (1) - add finish
3. 00:12:300 (2,3,4) - remove clap
   I think don't need hit sound
4. 00:31:350 (3) - add NC
   this point is changed Rhythm pattern
5. 01:00:300 (2,4) - remove finish
   hitting Cymbals point is 01:00:000 (1,3) - only.
6. 01:33:300 (3,4) - try this Rhythm
   
7. 02:59:400 (2,1) - stack!

[Insane]

1. 00:35:700 (5,6) - If your not reason, stack it
2. 00:48:900 (4,5) - ctrl + G?
   little jump
3. 01:37:200 (1,2) - umm I think don't need finish
4. 01:50:400 (1,2) - I think that you should leave the interval a little more
   01:50:550 (2) - 　move at x180 y224
   01:50:700 (3) - change direction
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 03:43:200 (1) - why not so far of the street pattern hitsound?
6. 03:51:600 (1) - add finish at head
7. 04:10:800 (1) - same as above

gl~!!
ai no jumon wo tonaeyou~

Thanks litoluna

litoluna wrote:

[Easy]
01:19:200 (3) - add finish at tail point doesn't fit

[Normal]
00:12:300 (2,3,4) - remove clap
I think don't need hit sound i like the claps
00:31:350 (3) - add NC
this point is changed Rhythm pattern keeping nc to every 2 big ticks
01:00:300 (2,4) - remove finish
hitting Cymbals point is 01:00:000 (1,3) - only. i prefer 4 finish

Fixed the rest

Hello!

[General]
[Insane]
[Hard]

I hope this was helpful, don't forget to vote on my Poll

Thanks Lumael, I pretty much corrected all your suguestions and am now going through Insane again. I may add a new difficulty soon to bridge the gap

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