schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi Awang411~~ ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ~~ xD

Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue

Feel free to implement or rejecti if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~
"rejecti" xD


General : ( √ )
Mapset : ( ? ) 10 diffs and are all 4k? make sure you're not self-plagiarising the map~~ need to make sure that each diff is unique enough to stand alone as a diff, or else you might encounter problems when you submit for rank o(>﹏<)o I'll trY xP
Metadata : ( √ )
Timing : ( √ )
Audio : ( X ) make sure bitrate is not higher than 192kbps o(>﹏<)o ExactlY ;w;w;w; searching for different mp3 xD
Background : ( √ )

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4K = |1|2|3|4|

for example,
3rd twilight
00:13:181 - until 00:39:363 -
from 3rd twilight - 10th twilight, it's completely the same, this section self-plagiarises one another. please make sure you don't have too many sections like this.
if you cannot differentiate them enough then it means you don't need to have too many diffs o(>﹏<)o It's different xP
but Yea seems too similiar ;w;w;w;w; i'll trY to fix it xD

Nice Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

schwarzvgrune wrote:

no kudosu o(>﹏<)o
you can use audacity or format factory to decrease the 'bitrate" to 192kbps without actually affecting the actual audio quality that much.! so have a try!

i can mod once you've made adjustment on your diffs o(≧v≦)o~~

MEGAtive wrote:

Hi Awang
Mod from my queue~

Mapset: 10 maps with 4 minutes duration. Wow, that must be hard o.o welp actually only 9. 1 is a GD xP but still, hard ;w;w;w;
Graphic: 1024x768 -> 4:3 (Good)
Hitsound: No Hitsounds here. Actually, are you intend to add one? Hitsounds is n=in progress because hitsounds are needed for rank ;w;w;w; Knew this recently when rereading the ranking criteria ;w;w;w;

[7th Twilight]

Mods

00:32:750 (32750|1) - I suggest you to just delete this. Even the 8th Twilight use one note here. right xP
00:32:000 (32000|2) - This LN follows the vocal right? If that so, contract the LN to 00:32:409 . The vocal ends here. You better apply this to other Diffs as well. forgot ;w;w;w;
00:32:954 (32954|1,33091|0) - Ctrl+J. It more balanced that way. ok xP
00:35:136 (35136|0,35272|1) - ^ ok xP
00:35:545 (35545|2) - Move to 2. Jacks didn't fit here + It's more balanced. oops xP
00:35:954 (35954|3) - Move to either 1 or 3. Don't create Jack with 00:35:818 (35818|3) - yes xP
00:36:227 (36227|2) - Move to 2. It has better balance there. ok xP
00:37:045 (37045|3) - ^ to 3 welp ok xP
01:00:636 - Add note on 1. Use two notes here because of Cymbal, and The Intro uses that as well. right xP
01:22:727 - ^ on 4. ok xP
01:36:363 - ^ on 1. To signify the change of pace + even 6th Twilight use Two notes here. Actually 6th wasn't following that. It was just the pattern. Buuuuut you're right anyway xP
02:15:772 (135772|1,135909|1) - Suggest to move this one column to the left. It balances the Kick sound + Balancing the 02:16:045 (136045|1) - part. Great Idea xP
02:16:863 (136863|2) - Move to 2. Maintaining the pattern you just create. ok xP
02:17:409 (137409|0) - Move to 3. It's more balanced like that. ok xP
02:46:181 (166181|3,166181|1) - I didn't hear any sound here. Better just delete the notes. And you can consider this mod on other Diffs too. Heard something
02:47:818 (167818|0,167818|3) - ^this too
03:37:727 (217727|0,217727|3) - The LN ends on 03:39:363 -, both the Vocal and the Uplifters. You better fixed the other like this on other Diffs as well. right xP
04:26:818 - Better you use Three notes here to signify the End. Add note on 3. ok xP

Take note that I just mod one on my average. Good Luck with your mapset~

rhalp10 wrote:

Hello Sorry For Delay I Have A Busy Stuff But Here's My MOD I Hope You All Appreciate It

Katayoku No Tori

Nice map, But I cant here much sound because of noise my headset having a problem sorry for modded for so short..
ok no problem if you want you can mod next time xP (would be a burden for you tho)

1|2|3|4

[6th Twilight]
00:07:454 (7454|0) - Add 2 idk why you want me to add one
00:07:591 (7591|1) - Move To 3 ok xP
00:10:727 (10727|3) - Add 4 this too
00:10:863 (10863|3) - Move To 2 welp ok xP
00:11:000 (11000|1) - Move To 1 moved it somewhere els

Rivals_7 wrote:

This 10th twilight should be on the O!mania world cup mappool for final round this year XD

iJXL wrote:

10th twilight mod ;

from 00:00:091 (91|0,500|0) - 00:12:363 (12363|0) - delete all these LNs, for me all these LNs are overmapped are u mapping to the vocals? if your answer is yes, then u have to remap those LNs bcos u did not properly map it to the vocal (eg: 00:03:772 (3772|1) - this LN should start at 00:03:806
- but if your answer is no, then... it is overmapped for me. but i highly recommend u to delete those LNs ---------- edit: not only for this part, check throughout the song I was following the vocals, but i always thought it's a bad idea to do so, only i never bothered to change it ;w;w;w;w;w;w;
welp, deleted most of them xP

00:12:636 (12636|0,12636|1,12636|2,12704|3,12772|1,12841|3) - chg to double notes bcos same sound as 00:12:909 (12909|2,12909|0) - check throughout the song too oops i guess i made a mistake xP

00:30:091 for strong sound like this i suggest u to add one more note since the LN = vocal, the notes = strong sound, like what u did here 00:31:454 (31454|0,31454|2) - The LN can also counts as a part of double notes. Try pressing it. You see that you pressed two notes for that If I add another note, it will feel like a triple instead xP

01:00:636 delete one note here, since for these kind of strong sound u used 2 notes but here got 3, I kind of heard something here that makes me want to make it triple notes. maybe it sounds "slightly" different than the others
01:01:591 delete one too, no strong sound as above -- i saw lots of these problem, please check throughout the song i don't really follow the drum beats for that. Idk what to call the sound I'm following, but I guess i'll try explaining later?


overall, the 10 twilight is not that bad, just the issues i found above.

DanSparce wrote:

all 10 diffs just 4k? not-so-safe for rank.
btw, gl

puxtu wrote:

this map has to be ranked someday

Worms wrote:

at least get this loved, it deserves it