Steinstwo wrote:

can i mods ?

Feerum wrote:

Great Map, Great Song.
Umineko <3

Muu-chan wrote:

Hi there ｡◕‿◕｡ mod here as requested from ✿Nekoworks
All of them are just suggestions, you can decline it if unnecessary ｡◕‿◕｡
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General

* Delete Umineko No Naku Koro Ni from source or tags. Just put one of them. ok xP
* Idk more details about this song. But i got something about EXIT TRANCE, so i suggest to add it on tags http://music.douban.com/subject/4798659/ ok xP
* I think BPM at 220 is too fast .w. i suggest to half it~ doesn't that seems too slow for a song this upbeat?

1st Twilight

* 00:02:136 (2136|3) - i suggest move to 2, avoiding 1 line note with 00:01:727 (1727|3) - (try avoiding 1 line note in Easy difficulty ) beside that, it has different pitch. ok xP
* 00:05:000 - i suggest to add 1 more note on 4, it has pressure and based on your pattern hmm well according to the song there's no pressure and doesn't it seems smoother this way?
* 00:11:545 - ^ on 1 hmm ok xP
* 00:05:818 (5818|3) - i suggest change this to LN until 00:06:363 - seems ok xP
* 00:12:363 (12363|0) - ^ until 00:12:909 - and if you apply this, please move 00:13:181 (13181|0) - to 4 done xD
* 00:14:818 (14818|3) - i suggest to split this LN here 00:15:636 - because it has different pitch from here. can't hear it @@
* 00:18:091 (18091|2) - ^ split here 00:18:909 - still can't hear it @@
* 00:21:363 (21363|3) - ^ split here 00:22:181 - and delete 00:22:181 (22181|1) - ok here i sort of heard it xD
* 00:16:454 - might add 1 more for cymbal^^ ah right i forgot xD
* 00:23:000 - ^ wow why me forgot this too ;w;w;w;w;
* 00:24:636 (24636|2) - i suggest to stop this LN here 00:25:454 - ok xP
* 00:45:909 (45909|3) - i am highly recommended to split this LN here 00:46:727 - it has different pitch ok xP
* 00:47:545 (47545|2) - ^ split here 00:48:363 - okto that too xP
* 00:49:181 (49181|0) - ^ split here 00:50:818 - ok here i can't hear because i thought have same pitch @@
* I see the pattern after this is following vocal, so i suggest to add note here 00:56:272 here 00:56:545 here 00:56:818 here 00:57:091 - because the vocal start there ^^ I purposely left them empty so players could get ready?
* 00:57:363 - make one of them to LN for vocal until 00:58:454 - ok xP
* 00:59:545 - ^ until 01:00:091 - ok xP
* 01:01:181 - ^ until 01:01:727 - yep xP
* 01:07:181 - ^ until 01:07:727 - yep yep xP
* 01:10:454 - ^ until 01:11:545 - yep yep yep xD
* 01:12:636 - ^ until 01:13:181 - yep yep xD
* 01:14:272 - ^ until 01:14:818 - yep xD
* 01:17:000 - ^ until 01:17:545 - right xD
* 01:19:454 - ^ until 01:20:000 - right right xD
* 01:20:272 - ^ until 01:20:818 - right right right xD
* 01:36:636 - ^ until 01:37:454 - wow wow xD
* 01:39:091 - ^ until 01:39:636 - wow xD
* 01:49:727 - ^ until 01:50:272 - yes xP sorry was bored ;w;w;w;w;w;
and so on to every long vocal sound in my point of view it looks nice and better^^

* 01:03:091 (63091|2) - i think it should stop at 01:03:500 - ok xP
* 01:23:545 (83545|2) - ^ at 01:28:727 - probably not?
* 01:42:363 (102363|1) - ^ at 01:43:181 - hmm ok i guess?
* 02:15:909 (135909|3) - ^ at 02:17:954 - (i hear this LN is for vocal, so it should stop there.) Probably not because I'm following both background and vocal xP
* 03:37:727 (217727|2) - ^ at 03:39:363 - (both cymbal and vocal stop there) ok xP
* 03:51:636 (231636|3) - ^ at 03:52:591 - (vocal stop there^^) ok xP
* 04:04:727 (244727|0) - ^ at 04:05:954 - well ok xP
* 04:17:818 (257818|3) - ^ at 04:18:636 - hmm ok to that too xP
* 01:09:363 (69363|1,69636|1) - move them to different column to avoiding 1 line note ok xP
* 01:39:636 (99636|3,99909|3) - ^ ok
* 01:51:636 - i suggest to add note here for vocal (following your last pattern to follow vocal) hmm idk seems too fast for 1st? And also seems tidier this way xPalso same case with 03:39:909 until 03:41:000 - same reason for 00:57:091 - :P
* 01:51:909 - ^ same xP
* 01:52:863 - ^ also same same xP
* 01:56:818 - ^ same same xP
* 01:58:454 - ^ same xP
* 02:13:181 - ^ wow same xD
* 02:14:000 - ^ ok same same xD
* 02:28:181 - ^ you miss a bass sound here~ yea I guess I heard it too xP
* 03:14:818 - ^ for cymbal ok
* 03:21:363 - ^ ok to that too
* 03:27:909 - ^ ok xP
* 03:34:454 - ^ yep xP
* 03:35:272 - ^ yes and....
* 03:36:091 - ^ yes xD

10th Twilight

* 00:05:818 (5818|1) - how about to long-er this LN until 00:06:636 - ? ^^ That's so evillish hard xD
* 00:20:545 (20545|2) - i hear this LN is for vocal, so i think it should stop at 00:20:954 - hmm ok xP
* 00:24:091 (24091|1) - ^ at 00:25:318 - ok xP
* 00:28:727 (28727|1) - ^ at 00:28:863 - never knew it's that short xD
* 00:32:000 (32000|2) - ^ at 00:32:409 - well ok xD
* i think the rest are okay~ maybe some LN stop timing for vocal. You could playback it around 30% to make it clear ^^ I'll try xP

how2pass ;w; it is beyond my imagination xD There's one way : Magic! jkjk xD
i think that's all from us, hope could helpful~
GOOD LUCK ｡◕‿◕｡

Muu-chan wrote:

also a little recheck for 'General' thing.
I'm still not sure if this song is from Umineko no Naku Koro ni. I can't find any source that state it, MAL said it has different song. But it is okay if you've any source that state this song is from there
u said earlier that you make 9 difficulties and 1 GD. Which one is it? Also please put the name who make that GD in your tags.
Lastly, please delete "," from your tags if it is for spacing between 2 words. I think space is enough ^^

no kds.
good luck~

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi Awang411~~ ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ~~ xD

Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue

Feel free to implement or rejecti if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~
"rejecti" xD


General : ( √ )
Mapset : ( ? ) 10 diffs and are all 4k? make sure you're not self-plagiarising the map~~ need to make sure that each diff is unique enough to stand alone as a diff, or else you might encounter problems when you submit for rank o(>﹏<)o I'll trY xP
Metadata : ( √ )
Timing : ( √ )
Audio : ( X ) make sure bitrate is not higher than 192kbps o(>﹏<)o ExactlY ;w;w;w; searching for different mp3 xD
Background : ( √ )

[/notice]

4K = |1|2|3|4|

for example,
3rd twilight
00:13:181 - until 00:39:363 -
from 3rd twilight - 10th twilight, it's completely the same, this section self-plagiarises one another. please make sure you don't have too many sections like this.
if you cannot differentiate them enough then it means you don't need to have too many diffs o(>﹏<)o It's different xP
but Yea seems too similiar ;w;w;w;w; i'll trY to fix it xD

Nice Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

schwarzvgrune wrote:

no kudosu o(>﹏<)o
you can use audacity or format factory to decrease the 'bitrate" to 192kbps without actually affecting the actual audio quality that much.! so have a try!

i can mod once you've made adjustment on your diffs o(≧v≦)o~~

MEGAtive wrote:

Hi Awang
Mod from my queue~

Mapset: 10 maps with 4 minutes duration. Wow, that must be hard o.o welp actually only 9. 1 is a GD xP but still, hard ;w;w;w;
Graphic: 1024x768 -> 4:3 (Good)
Hitsound: No Hitsounds here. Actually, are you intend to add one? Hitsounds is n=in progress because hitsounds are needed for rank ;w;w;w; Knew this recently when rereading the ranking criteria ;w;w;w;

[7th Twilight]

Mods

00:32:750 (32750|1) - I suggest you to just delete this. Even the 8th Twilight use one note here. right xP
00:32:000 (32000|2) - This LN follows the vocal right? If that so, contract the LN to 00:32:409 . The vocal ends here. You better apply this to other Diffs as well. forgot ;w;w;w;
00:32:954 (32954|1,33091|0) - Ctrl+J. It more balanced that way. ok xP
00:35:136 (35136|0,35272|1) - ^ ok xP
00:35:545 (35545|2) - Move to 2. Jacks didn't fit here + It's more balanced. oops xP
00:35:954 (35954|3) - Move to either 1 or 3. Don't create Jack with 00:35:818 (35818|3) - yes xP
00:36:227 (36227|2) - Move to 2. It has better balance there. ok xP
00:37:045 (37045|3) - ^ to 3 welp ok xP
01:00:636 - Add note on 1. Use two notes here because of Cymbal, and The Intro uses that as well. right xP
01:22:727 - ^ on 4. ok xP
01:36:363 - ^ on 1. To signify the change of pace + even 6th Twilight use Two notes here. Actually 6th wasn't following that. It was just the pattern. Buuuuut you're right anyway xP
02:15:772 (135772|1,135909|1) - Suggest to move this one column to the left. It balances the Kick sound + Balancing the 02:16:045 (136045|1) - part. Great Idea xP
02:16:863 (136863|2) - Move to 2. Maintaining the pattern you just create. ok xP
02:17:409 (137409|0) - Move to 3. It's more balanced like that. ok xP
02:46:181 (166181|3,166181|1) - I didn't hear any sound here. Better just delete the notes. And you can consider this mod on other Diffs too. Heard something
02:47:818 (167818|0,167818|3) - ^this too
03:37:727 (217727|0,217727|3) - The LN ends on 03:39:363 -, both the Vocal and the Uplifters. You better fixed the other like this on other Diffs as well. right xP
04:26:818 - Better you use Three notes here to signify the End. Add note on 3. ok xP

Take note that I just mod one on my average. Good Luck with your mapset~

rhalp10 wrote:

Hello Sorry For Delay I Have A Busy Stuff But Here's My MOD I Hope You All Appreciate It

Katayoku No Tori

Nice map, But I cant here much sound because of noise my headset having a problem sorry for modded for so short..
ok no problem if you want you can mod next time xP (would be a burden for you tho)

1|2|3|4

[6th Twilight]
00:07:454 (7454|0) - Add 2 idk why you want me to add one
00:07:591 (7591|1) - Move To 3 ok xP
00:10:727 (10727|3) - Add 4 this too
00:10:863 (10863|3) - Move To 2 welp ok xP
00:11:000 (11000|1) - Move To 1 moved it somewhere els

Rivals_7 wrote:

This 10th twilight should be on the O!mania world cup mappool for final round this year XD

iJXL wrote:

10th twilight mod ;

from 00:00:091 (91|0,500|0) - 00:12:363 (12363|0) - delete all these LNs, for me all these LNs are overmapped are u mapping to the vocals? if your answer is yes, then u have to remap those LNs bcos u did not properly map it to the vocal (eg: 00:03:772 (3772|1) - this LN should start at 00:03:806
- but if your answer is no, then... it is overmapped for me. but i highly recommend u to delete those LNs ---------- edit: not only for this part, check throughout the song I was following the vocals, but i always thought it's a bad idea to do so, only i never bothered to change it ;w;w;w;w;w;w;
welp, deleted most of them xP

00:12:636 (12636|0,12636|1,12636|2,12704|3,12772|1,12841|3) - chg to double notes bcos same sound as 00:12:909 (12909|2,12909|0) - check throughout the song too oops i guess i made a mistake xP

00:30:091 for strong sound like this i suggest u to add one more note since the LN = vocal, the notes = strong sound, like what u did here 00:31:454 (31454|0,31454|2) - The LN can also counts as a part of double notes. Try pressing it. You see that you pressed two notes for that If I add another note, it will feel like a triple instead xP

01:00:636 delete one note here, since for these kind of strong sound u used 2 notes but here got 3, I kind of heard something here that makes me want to make it triple notes. maybe it sounds "slightly" different than the others
01:01:591 delete one too, no strong sound as above -- i saw lots of these problem, please check throughout the song i don't really follow the drum beats for that. Idk what to call the sound I'm following, but I guess i'll try explaining later?


overall, the 10 twilight is not that bad, just the issues i found above.

DanSparce wrote:

all 10 diffs just 4k? not-so-safe for rank.
btw, gl

puxtu wrote:

this map has to be ranked someday

Worms wrote:

at least get this loved, it deserves it