Hige Driver join. SELEN - Dadadadadadadadadada [OsuMania] · forum

00:21:732 (3) - I feel like this jump is a bit weird. I would shorten the distance to make it easier since it's a salad.Maybe change to 1.8x distance.
00:50:001 (1,2,1,2) - I feel this part is a bit tedious. Maybe use slanted sliders to make the constant back and forth easier.
00:51:540 (1,2,1,2) - ^ Same thing as before
01:14:617 (1) - With the part starting here I think it's a bit hard for someone who is the level of play for salads but I think this part is great. Just thought I'd say it might be a bit challenging.

Overall i love this salad.

Platter

Honestly there isn't much to say. I overall loved this platter. Great job.

Really hopes this gets ranked. I generally like the maps and i love the song.

MBomb

MBomb 2015-04-06T12:00:34+00:00

Mod requested by Crystal.

Xingxing's Salad

There are some audio preview time conflicts showing up on AIMod, please look into this.

00:11:343 - Add a circle on the 1/2 here for consistency with 00:10:578 (2) - .
00:14:427 - ^ (And all sections like this)
00:22:309 (6,1) - Swap NC.
00:26:155 (1) - Remove NC.
00:27:694 (1) - ^
00:33:847 (1) - ^
00:44:617 (4) - Add NC here for consistency with the NC pattern of 00:45:386 (1,1,2,3) - these.
00:48:463 (6,1) - Swap NC.
00:50:771 (1) - Remove NC.
00:52:310 (1) - ^
01:01:924 (1,2) - Swap NC.
01:04:617 (1) - Remove NC.
01:06:924 (3) - NC this for consistency with the NC pattern from earlier.
01:07:694 (1) - Remove NC on this if you took the above change.
01:17:822 (2) - I think the triple here is a bit awkward for a salad. Maybe move this to x:256?
01:23:078 (7) - NC.
01:34:414 - Add circle on the 1/2 here for consistency with 01:33:655 (2) - .
01:40:771 (3) - NC.

Crystal's Platter

Look into the audio preview time conflicts with the mania difficulties.

00:22:309 (1) - Move this to x:384, still leaves the hyper, but a bit less distance, this distance seemed a bit too much for a platter.
00:23:078 (1) - Remove NC.
00:28:078 (5) - NC here for consistent NC pattern with the last few combos.
00:37:501 - Place a circle on the 1/2 here for the drum beat.
00:47:694 (1) - Remove NC here.
00:53:847 (1) - ^
00:56:828 (3) - Remove this circle, doesn't fit with the beat you've been mapping to.
01:08:463 (1,2) - Move these to the left a bit, a jump this big after a hyper is too awkward for a platter.
01:28:847 (1) - Remove NC.

Crystal's Rain

00:08:847 (4) - NC this for consistency with the NC patterns at the end of the map.
00:36:924 (4) - NC this for consistency with the NCs before it.
01:17:694 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Make these slightly smaller in the distance they cover, right now this is more of an overdose pattern.
01:25:771 (1) - Remove the NC on this for consistency.
01:26:540 (2) - NC this like in the platter difficulty.
01:28:847 (1) - Remove NC.
01:41:732 (1,1) - Personal opinion of course, but I don't like having NC patterns like this, and they weren't NCed in the platter or salad, so maybe remove NCs on both of these?

I'm sorry CLSW, but I'm not gonna mod the EXTRA for reasons relating to the fact that at that difficulty, our mapping styles are very different, and that I don't want to start any arguments. I'm sure you can understand why I'm doing this, and if you feel like this won't happen, pm me in game and I will mod it.

Alright done.

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2015-04-17T16:15:51+00:00

AAAA too much delay ;_;

Most of suggestions were fixed, thank you all! http://puu.sh/hhcXl/882b69d671.zip

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2015-04-18T08:40:30+00:00

spartancog95 wrote:
Here is a mod for the salad and platter.

Xingxing's Salad
00:21:732 (3) - I feel like this jump is a bit weird. I would shorten the distance to make it easier since it's a salad.Maybe change to 1.8x distance. i think it is fine
00:50:001 (1,2,1,2) - I feel this part is a bit tedious. Maybe use slanted sliders to make the constant back and forth easier.
00:51:540 (1,2,1,2) - ^ Same thing as before changed a bit
01:14:617 (1) - With the part starting here I think it's a bit hard for someone who is the level of play for salads but I think this part is great. Just thought I'd say it might be a bit challenging. it is already like a salad i think ;w;

Overall i love this salad.

Really hopes this gets ranked. I generally like the maps and i love the song.

@- Magic Bomb -: fixed everything except rhythm suggestions, i made rhythm the same in an order

thanks for modding!!

@维多: 一些conflict帮我修改一下

update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: dadadadadadadadadada.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 73847
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.6

[Metadata]
Title:Dadadadadadadadadada
TitleUnicode:打打打打打打打打打打
Artist:Hige Driver join. SELEN
ArtistUnicode:ヒゲドライバー join. SELEN
Creator:victorica_db
Version:Xingxing's Salad
Source:REFLEC BEAT groovin'!!
Tags:CrazyStar CLSW Crystal
BeatmapID:651808
BeatmapSetID:237342

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5.8
ApproachRate:5.8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"201221011330.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
771,384.615384615385,4,1,0,70,1,0
8463,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
9665,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0
9761,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
9857,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
10001,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
10194,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
10290,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
10482,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
10578,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
10674,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
10771,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
10963,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
11059,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
11251,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
11347,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
11444,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
11540,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
12021,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
12117,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
12213,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
12309,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
12597,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
12694,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
12790,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
12886,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
13271,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
13367,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
13559,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
13655,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
13751,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
13847,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
14328,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
14424,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
14521,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
14617,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
15097,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
15194,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
15290,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
15386,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
15674,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
15771,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
15867,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
15963,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
18174,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
18271,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
18367,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
18463,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
18751,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
18847,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
18944,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
19040,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
22309,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
25386,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
25674,-100,4,1,2,20,0,0
25771,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
26059,-100,4,1,2,20,0,0
26155,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
26444,-100,4,1,2,20,0,0
26540,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
26828,-100,4,1,2,20,0,0
26924,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
27213,-100,4,1,2,20,0,0
27309,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
27597,-100,4,1,2,20,0,0
27694,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
28271,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
28751,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
28847,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
30290,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
30386,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
31444,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
31540,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
31732,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
31828,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
31924,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
32117,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
32213,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
32309,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
32501,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
32597,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
32694,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
32886,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
32982,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
33078,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
33271,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
33367,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
33463,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
33655,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
33751,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
33847,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
40386,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
40771,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
46155,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
46251,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
46347,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
46444,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
46540,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
46732,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
46924,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
47021,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
47117,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
47213,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
47309,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
50001,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
50290,-100,4,1,2,20,0,0
50386,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
50674,-100,4,1,2,20,0,0
50771,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
51059,-100,4,1,2,20,0,0
51155,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
51828,-100,4,1,2,20,0,0
51924,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
52213,-100,4,1,2,20,0,0
52309,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
52501,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
52597,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
52694,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
53078,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
55867,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
55963,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
56059,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
56155,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
56444,-100,4,1,2,20,0,0
56540,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
56828,-100,4,1,2,20,0,0
56924,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
57213,-100,4,1,2,20,0,0
57309,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
57694,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
57790,-100,4,1,1,20,0,0
57886,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
58174,-100,4,1,1,20,0,0
58271,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
58944,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
59040,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
59136,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
59232,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
59521,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
59617,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
59809,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
60386,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
60482,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
63174,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
63367,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
63463,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
63847,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
63944,-100,4,1,0,20,0,1
64040,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
64136,-100,4,1,0,20,0,1
64232,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
64328,-100,4,1,0,20,0,1
64424,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
64521,-100,4,1,0,20,0,1
64617,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
65386,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
65674,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
67790,-100,4,1,0,20,0,1
67886,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
67982,-100,4,1,0,20,0,1
68078,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
68174,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
68463,-100,4,1,0,50,0,1
68559,-100,4,1,2,50,0,1
68655,-100,4,1,0,20,0,1
68751,-100,4,1,0,50,0,1
68847,-100,4,1,2,50,0,1
68944,-100,4,1,0,20,0,1
69040,-100,4,1,2,50,0,1
69424,-100,4,1,0,20,0,1
69521,-100,4,1,0,50,0,1
69617,-100,4,1,2,50,0,1
69713,-100,4,1,0,20,0,1
69809,-100,4,1,2,50,0,1
70001,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
70097,-100,4,1,2,50,0,1
70194,-100,4,1,0,20,0,1
70290,-100,4,1,0,50,0,1
70386,-100,4,1,2,50,0,1
70482,-100,4,1,0,20,0,1
70578,-100,4,1,2,50,0,1
70963,-100,4,1,0,20,0,1
71059,-100,4,1,0,50,0,1
71155,-100,4,1,2,50,0,1
71251,-100,4,1,0,20,0,1
71347,-100,4,1,2,50,0,1
71540,-100,4,1,2,50,0,1
73078,-100,4,3,0,50,0,1
73847,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
73871,-100,4,1,0,30,0,1
74232,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
74256,-100,4,1,0,30,0,1
74569,-100,4,1,0,30,0,0
74617,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
74745,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
76155,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
76283,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
77694,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
77822,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
80771,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
80899,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
82309,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
82437,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
83847,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
83976,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
86540,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
86828,-100,4,1,0,20,0,1
86924,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
87053,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
87694,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
87822,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
88463,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
88591,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
89521,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
89617,-100,4,1,2,70,0,1
89713,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
90001,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
90194,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
90290,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
90482,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
90578,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
90674,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
90771,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
90963,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
91059,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
91251,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
91347,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
91444,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
91540,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
92021,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
92117,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
92213,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
92309,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
92597,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
92694,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
92790,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
92886,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
93271,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
93367,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
93559,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
93655,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
93751,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
93847,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
94328,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
94424,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
94521,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
94617,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
95097,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
95194,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
95290,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
95386,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
95674,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
95771,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
95867,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
95963,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
98174,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
98271,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
98367,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
98463,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
98751,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
98847,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
98944,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
99040,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
101540,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
101924,-100,4,1,2,70,0,0
102117,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0


[HitObjects]
116,144,8463,6,0,L|104:212,2,53.3333333333333,0|2|2,0:0|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
184,140,8847,2,0,L|168:64,2,53.3333333333333,0|2|2,0:0|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
252,144,9232,2,0,L|240:224,2,53.3333333333333,8|2|2,0:3|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
320,144,9617,1,4,0:3:0:0:
48,284,10001,6,0,L|216:312,1,160,6|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,204,10578,1,2,0:2:0:0:
208,132,10771,2,0,L|48:100,1,160,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,104,11540,6,0,L|148:104,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,200,12117,1,2,0:2:0:0:
340,204,12309,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,204,12501,1,2,0:2:0:0:
340,204,12694,1,10,0:3:0:0:
36,304,13078,6,0,L|65:146,1,160,6|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,308,13655,1,2,0:2:0:0:
264,308,13847,2,0,L|234:150,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,152,14617,6,0,L|176:152,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,148,15386,1,8,0:3:0:0:
292,152,15578,1,2,0:2:0:0:
188,156,15771,1,4,0:2:0:0:
408,336,16155,6,0,L|488:172,1,160,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,132,16732,1,2,0:2:0:0:
284,48,16924,2,0,L|464:48,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,296,17694,6,0,L|128:248,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,240,18463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,240,18655,1,2,0:2:0:0:
360,240,18847,1,10,0:3:0:0:
168,244,19232,6,0,L|-4:244,1,160,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,136,19809,1,2,0:2:0:0:
200,336,20001,2,0,L|32:336,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,160,20771,6,0,L|384:160,1,160,0|6,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
108,48,21540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,48,21732,1,2,0:2:0:0:
200,48,21924,1,4,0:3:0:0:
108,48,22117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,48,22309,5,4,0:2:0:0:
376,48,22694,1,8,0:3:0:0:
200,48,23078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,48,23463,1,8,0:3:0:0:
200,48,23847,5,4,0:3:0:0:
24,48,24232,1,8,0:3:0:0:
200,48,24617,1,4,0:3:0:0:
24,48,25001,1,8,0:3:0:0:
76,124,25194,1,8,0:3:0:0:
136,192,25386,6,0,L|236:192,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,25771,2,0,L|220:192,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,26155,2,0,L|420:192,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,192,26540,2,0,L|420:192,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,296,26924,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,296,27117,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,296,27309,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,296,27501,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,296,27694,2,0,L|332:220,1,240,4|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
428,224,28463,5,4,0:3:0:0:
388,224,28847,1,8,0:3:0:0:
128,224,29232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,224,29617,1,8,0:3:0:0:
360,224,30001,6,0,L|184:224,1,160,4|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
24,112,30771,2,0,L|188:112,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
280,112,31347,1,8,0:3:0:0:
184,112,31540,6,0,L|160:200,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,200,31924,2,0,L|281:277,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,280,32309,6,0,L|276:280,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,280,32694,2,0,L|296:280,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,280,33078,5,0,0:0:0:0:
472,280,33271,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,280,33463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,280,33655,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,280,33847,2,0,L|248:280,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,280,34617,6,0,L|20:164,2,120,6|2|2,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,272,35386,2,0,L|116:156,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,276,36155,6,0,L|388:276,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,184,36924,1,6,0:0:0:0:
404,104,37117,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,108,37309,1,6,0:0:0:0:
32,312,37694,6,0,L|172:312,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,38463,2,0,L|300:192,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,96,39232,6,0,L|140:96,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,204,40001,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,204,40194,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,204,40386,1,10,0:0:0:0:
184,208,40771,6,0,L|76:288,2,120,2|2|2,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,208,41540,2,0,L|388:288,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,208,42309,6,0,L|44:208,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,124,43078,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,124,43271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,124,43463,1,14,0:0:0:0:
368,124,43847,5,2,0:0:0:0:
248,220,44136,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,124,44424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,124,44617,5,2,0:0:0:0:
328,124,44905,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,120,45194,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,124,45386,6,0,L|460:124,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,128,46155,5,2,0:3:0:0:
328,124,46347,1,0,0:3:0:0:
196,128,46540,1,2,0:3:0:0:
452,124,46924,5,4,0:0:0:0:
336,272,47309,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,208,47694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,48078,1,8,0:3:0:0:
440,268,48271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,272,48463,5,4,0:3:0:0:
112,272,48847,1,8,0:3:0:0:
256,120,49232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,120,49617,1,8,0:3:0:0:
160,120,49809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,50001,6,0,L|344:120,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,50386,2,0,L|160:120,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,50771,2,0,L|352:120,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,51155,2,0,L|344:120,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,120,51540,6,0,L|348:120,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,120,51925,2,0,L|528:120,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,120,52310,2,0,L|344:120,1,80,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,120,52694,2,0,L|344:120,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
240,120,53078,5,4,0:3:0:0:
100,244,53463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,248,53847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,244,54232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,136,54617,5,4,0:3:0:0:
452,132,55001,1,8,0:3:0:0:
324,180,55386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,176,55771,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,252,55963,1,8,0:3:0:0:
100,176,56155,6,0,L|40:112,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,96,56540,2,0,L|80:32,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,32,56924,2,0,L|88:32,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,32,57309,2,0,L|276:32,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,32,57694,6,0,L|312:76,2,80,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,32,58271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,136,58463,6,0,L|272:184,2,80,2|8|2,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,136,59040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,136,59232,6,0,P|308:268|200:308,1,240,4|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,152,60001,2,0,L|304:24,1,240,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,32,60771,6,0,B|432:144|432:144|296:144,1,240,4|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,148,61540,1,6,0:0:0:0:
112,148,61732,1,14,0:0:0:0:
208,148,61924,2,0,L|328:256,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,260,62501,5,12,0:0:0:0:
164,260,62694,2,0,L|268:260,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,63078,2,0,L|224:112,2,120,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,52,63847,6,0,L|480:136,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,132,64232,1,10,0:0:0:0:
284,132,64424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,132,64617,2,0,L|188:232,1,80,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,212,65001,2,0,L|284:132,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,132,65386,6,0,L|72:56,2,120,4|8|10,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,296,66155,2,0,L|68:220,2,120,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,296,66924,6,0,L|388:224,2,120,4|8|2,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,300,67694,1,4,0:0:0:0:
464,300,67886,1,4,0:0:0:0:
324,300,68078,2,0,L|488:108,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,69232,5,0,0:0:0:0:
368,108,70001,6,0,L|248:248,4,160,0|2|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71636,12,0,72982,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73078,12,0,74232,0:0:0:0:
184,116,74617,6,0,L|184:56,2,53.3333333333333,4|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,116,75001,2,0,L|248:56,2,53.3333333333333,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,116,75386,2,0,L|312:56,2,53.3333333333333,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,116,75771,1,10,0:0:0:0:
196,192,76155,6,0,L|132:160,2,53.3333333333333,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,192,76540,2,0,L|212:168,2,53.3333333333333,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,192,76924,2,0,L|276:168,2,53.3333333333333,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,192,77309,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,280,77694,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,280,77822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,280,77950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,78078,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,184,78206,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,184,78335,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,328,78463,6,0,L|320:284,2,53.3333333333333,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,328,78847,2,0,L|496:284,2,53.3333333333333,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,72,79232,5,0,0:0:0:0:
296,72,79360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,72,79488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,176,79617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,176,79745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,79873,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,72,80001,6,0,L|160:208,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,172,80771,6,0,L|448:172,2,53.3333333333333,4|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,332,81155,2,0,L|384:332,2,53.3333333333333,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,44,81540,2,0,L|340:44,2,53.3333333333333,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,172,81924,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,176,82309,5,4,0:1:0:0:
352,176,82437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,176,82565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,296,82694,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,296,82822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,296,82950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,64,83078,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,83206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,83334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,83463,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,176,83847,5,4,0:1:0:0:
440,176,83976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,176,84104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,312,84232,1,10,0:0:0:0:
296,312,84360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,84488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,56,84617,5,0,0:0:0:0:
204,56,84745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,56,84873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,176,85001,2,0,L|140:176,2,53.3333333333333,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,176,85386,6,0,L|352:176,2,53.3333333333333,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,248,85771,1,10,0:0:0:0:
432,248,85899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,248,86027,1,10,0:0:0:0:
432,248,86155,5,2,0:0:0:0:
224,248,86540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,248,86924,5,4,0:1:0:0:
96,248,87053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,248,87181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,248,87309,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,248,87694,5,4,0:1:0:0:
228,248,87823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,248,87951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,248,88079,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,248,88463,6,0,L|472:192,2,53.3333333333333,4|0|8,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,248,88847,2,0,L|315:203,2,53.3333333333333,4|0|8,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,248,89232,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,248,89617,5,8,0:3:0:0:
60,252,90001,6,0,L|200:164,1,160,6|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,168,90578,1,10,0:3:0:0:
196,168,90771,2,0,L|60:82,1,160,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,72,91540,6,0,L|444:72,1,160,2|4,0:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
272,72,92309,1,0,0:2:0:0:
352,72,92501,1,6,0:3:0:0:
432,72,92694,1,10,0:3:0:0:
180,72,93078,6,0,L|180:244,1,160,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,228,93655,1,2,0:2:0:0:
180,232,93847,2,0,L|180:72,1,160,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,88,94617,6,0,L|248:88,1,160,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,88,95386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,88,95578,1,6,0:3:0:0:
256,88,95771,1,10,0:3:0:0:
160,88,95963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,96155,6,0,L|392:88,1,120,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
488,240,96732,1,2,0:2:0:0:
392,240,96924,6,0,L|256:240,1,120,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
92,328,97501,1,2,0:2:0:0:
188,328,97694,6,0,L|376:328,2,160,2|4|0,0:2|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,328,98655,1,2,0:2:0:0:
156,328,98847,1,2,0:2:0:0:
372,228,99232,6,0,L|408:112,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,228,100001,2,0,L|240:112,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,228,100771,6,0,L|464:228,1,80
372,228,101155,2,0,L|292:228,1,80,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,228,101540,5,8,0:0:0:0:
248,40,101732,1,4,0:0:0:0:
104,316,101924,1,2,0:0:0:0:

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2015-04-28T09:25:54+00:00

http://puu.sh/htIWW/9dc6e8271e.zip

Fixed some parts myself to be more flawless.

Spy

2,538 posts

Joined November 2011

Spy 2015-05-05T10:18:21+00:00

你倒是tag一下SDVX的名字啊，IIDX就不用了

[Emiria]

1,010 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

[Emiria] 2015-06-04T08:08:46+00:00

save

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2015-06-04T13:14:51+00:00

http://puu.sh/ic6Q1/9a519a8ad2.zip again, fixed with better quality. Now they're ready for get a few mods!

Also changed the diff name 'Crystal's EXTRA' to 'Crystal's Overdose'.

Len

2,812 posts

Joined June 2012

Len 2015-06-11T15:36:12+00:00

irc with

00:20 CLSW: 님님
00:20 CLSW: 캐치모딩 가능하세요
00:20 Fast: 저
00:20 Fast: 캐치에대해 아는게없습니다...
00:20 Fast: ㅠㅠ
00:20 CLSW: 그냥 플레이해보시고 이건 좀 아닌거같다 하는것만
00:20 CLSW: 잡아주심 되는데
00:21 CLSW: 2분 조금 안되는 맵셋이에요
00:21 Fast: np주시면 플레이는해볼게여
00:21 Fast: 근데 어려우면 못할지도 ...
00:21 Fast: 아
00:21 *CLSW is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/640581 Hige Driver join. SELEN - Dadadadadadadadadada]
00:21 Fast: ㅇㅎ
00:22 Fast: 저 하던게임하구 올게여
00:22 CLSW: 넹
00:27 Fast: 오버도즈에서
00:27 Fast: 01:04:040 (2,3,4,1) - 
00:27 Fast: 이거 너무받기가 어려워여
00:28 CLSW: ㅇㅎ
00:28 Fast: 스탠맵에 있는 패턴을 그대로 가져오신거같은뎅
00:28 Fast: 이거 좀만 쉽게해주세여
00:28 CLSW: 네
00:29 CLSW: 오키 열화판으로 바꿨습니다
00:29 Fast: ar도 9.4정도로 내려주시면 좋을듯..
00:29 Fast: 너무빨라여
00:30 Fast: 레인에서는 
00:30 Fast: 00:09:232 (1) - 이거 조금만 더 기울여주시면 좋을거같네여
00:30 Fast: 나머지는 제가 잘 ..
00:30 Fast: 레인치고는 너무 어렵다는 느낌이 많이드는데
00:30 CLSW: 일단 오버도즈 9.5로 수정
00:30 Fast: 오버도즈가 어려워서 괜찮을거같네용
00:30 CLSW: 예쓰
00:31 Fast: 밑에 난이도는
00:31 Fast: 너무 느려서 못하겠
00:31 Fast: end
00:31 CLSW: 00:09:232 (1) - 이거 그냥 수평하게 수정
00:31 CLSW: 오키 수고하셧습니다 감사합니다
00:31 CLSW: 포스팅하세요
00:31 Fast: 아니에여
00:31 Fast: 별로 ㅁ한게없는뎅
00:31 CLSW: ㄴㄴ 3개 고져졌으니까
00:31 CLSW: 쿠도스 받아가시면 됨
00:32 Fast: ㅇㅎ

gl

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Razor Sharp 2015-06-11T15:49:25+00:00

Here to mod for CLSW
Also going over general metadata issues if i find anything!

GENERAL

Tags: Might want to add some tags from the ranked mapset?
Combo Colors: Might also want to add some.
Widescreen Support: Since i can see no storyboard, turn this off.

All else seems fine!

As i am a little bit tired now, i will just go over the diff.

Crystal's OVERDOSE

Might want to add some notes at the start?

00:18:847 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I dont really hear anything in the bg to make this ok as 1/4's.
00:46:155 (1,2,3) - Consider to have this as hypers? Would make it interesting i think.
00:52:309 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - Same as the first thing.
00:58:464 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - ^
01:13:847 (1) - Make this curve a litte, to make it easier to chatch after the 1/8 jump.

00:25:386 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Try to have some more patterns in this, to make it a little bit variated?
00:26:924 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^

00:34:617 (1,2,3,4) - I LOVE THIS!! <3 <3 <3

01:14:617 (1) - 01:20:001 (1) - I feel like you could have much more hypers in this area, to empathize this part more, and it would also fit with the music.
01:41:924 (3) - Troll droplett.. Consider changing this.

00:40:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - As i like this pattern, i would suggest to change the 2 last parts of this patter, to a different one (or simple move 00:41:732 (3) - as the slider end is where the note is now, and ctrl+g it. same for 00:42:117 (6) -
00:42:309 (1,2) - Tilt them more ;w; we want movement here.
00:43:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same for this, try with different patterns.
01:11:540 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - talking of 1,2 and 1,2, would suggest to change this, as its very easy to shitmiss at this part. and it will be annoying to FC up till this point, and shitmiss at this. Up to you tho. (i really like it huehue)

The diff is awesome!

Call me back later if there is anything else i could do for you!

Good luck!

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2015-06-13T06:39:36+00:00

Razor Sharp

Razor Sharp wrote:
Here to mod for CLSW
Also going over general metadata issues if i find anything!

GENERAL

Tags: Might want to add some tags from the ranked mapset?
Combo Colors: Might also want to add some.
Widescreen Support: Since i can see no storyboard, turn this off. done.

All else seems fine!

As i am a little bit tired now, i will just go over the diff.

Crystal's OVERDOSE

Might want to add some notes at the start?

00:18:847 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I dont really hear anything in the bg to make this ok as 1/4's. fixed
00:46:155 (1,2,3) - Consider to have this as hypers? Would make it interesting i think. Too much exaggerated. Also this pattern is 100% spboxer's original map's reference.
00:52:309 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - Same as the first thing. This one shall be fine. It's the last part of stanza so felt nice with using additional rhythms.
00:58:464 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - ^ same as above.
01:13:847 (1) - Make this curve a litte, to make it easier to chatch after the 1/8 jump. done

00:25:386 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Try to have some more patterns in this, to make it a little bit variated?
00:26:924 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^ Both flow really nice, and the melody says it's fine place to add repetitives.

00:34:617 (1,2,3,4) - I LOVE THIS!! <3 <3 <3

01:14:617 (1) - 01:20:001 (1) - I feel like you could have much more hypers in this area, to empathize this part more, and it would also fit with the music. That's enough I guess. I don't want to make them more crazy.
01:41:924 (3) - Troll droplett.. Consider changing this. Will consider this with a BN.

00:40:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - As i like this pattern, i would suggest to change the 2 last parts of this patter, to a different one (or simple move 00:41:732 (3) - as the slider end is where the note is now, and ctrl+g it. same for 00:42:117 (6) - Oh no, the flow will be messed. Also its design isn't lookin good tho.
00:42:309 (1,2) - Tilt them more ;w; we want movement here. Take a rest!
00:43:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same for this, try with different patterns.Not really necessary as I mentioned on above.
01:11:540 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - talking of 1,2 and 1,2, would suggest to change this, as its very easy to shitmiss at this part. and it will be annoying to FC up till this point, and shitmiss at this. Up to you tho. (i really like it huehue) I have a good idea for this. Fixed.

The diff is awesome!

Call me back later if there is anything else i could do for you!

Good luck!

Thanks!

http://puu.sh/imYZr/d3e1b595c0.zip

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,780 posts

Joined February 2011

Spectator 2015-06-25T14:44:40+00:00

General

Difficulty Spread : The difficulty gap between rain and overdose seems a bit too much, please control the difficulties to avoid any severe issues
Unsnapped objects : ☑
Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : ☑
Metadata Issues : 'Wide-screen support' isn't really needed in all diff. Remove them all
Timeline Issues : I just found an amount of timelines in ctb diffs which are useless, please get rid of all of them
Combo Colors : ☑
Unused hitsounds : ☑
Hitsounds Issues : ☑
Inaudible hitsounds : ☑

Crystal's Salad

00:21:540 (2) - I'd move this to about x:448 to avoid anti-flow in salad
00:39:232 (1) - feels a bit harsh here. mind moving it to the left for a bit?
00:56:155 (1,2,3) - This kind of sliders aren't really recommended in salad. recommended to ctrl+g (2)
01:08:078 (4) - I feel like this slider should end on 01:08:463 , as it sounds way better imo
01:14:617 - The whole kiai parts started from here, is pretty tricky for salad. Please adjust the difficulty of them
01:17:694 (1,2,3) - totally not recommended to be added in salad. I recommend you to move 2 to the left-side
01:41:732 (2) - This note can be moved to about x:16 for the sake of flow

Crystal's Platter

1/4 구성이 플래터에서 괜찮을지 모르겠네요. 어느정도 줄여주는걸 고려해보시길.. 불필요한 타이밍포인트 정리도 전부 부탁드려요
00:30:771 (1) - 아주 약간만 오른쪽으로 이동해보는건 어떨까요.
00:32:117 (2,3,1) - 굳이 1/4 유지할 필요가 있을지.. 여긴 1/2 쓰시는건 어떤가요
00:32:886 (3,4,1) - ^
00:40:771 - 여기부터 나오는 1/4들은 이어지게 수정하시는걸 추천합니다.
01:02:309 (1,2) - 1하고 2 사이 거리 조금만 줄여주세요
01:23:463 (1,1) - 하이퍼 다음 점프가 꽤 넓은거같은데 조금만 줄여주세요
01:30:771 (1) - 리버스 부분 왼쪽으로.. 후반이라 생각보다 틀리기 쉬워요

Crystal's Rain

전체적으로 불필요한 inherited point 전부 정리해주세요
00:08:463 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 하이퍼 다음에 오는 패턴이 살짝 불편한데 차라리 원형으로 둥글게 구성해보시는건 어떨까요
00:30:771 (1,2,3) - 1/4..
00:33:847 (1,2,3) - 여기도 개인적으로 1/4이 더 잘 어울려요
01:02:694 (5) - 슬라 끝에 whistle 추가
01:03:655 - N:C2 추가하고 3 머리 부분에 whistle 넣어보세요
01:20:771 - 레인 치곤 삼단점프가 좀 넓은듯 싶네요
01:24:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 레인에 역방향 넓은 하이퍼는 되도록 피하시는게 좋을거같아요
01:35:771 (2) - 뉴콤보 삭제
01:36:155 - 배경에 심벌즈 사운드 있는데 soft-finish 추가 고려해보세요
01:41:540 (1,2) - 1하고 2 사이가 좀더 넓은게 흐름 고려해보면 더 나은거같네요

Crystal's Overdose

맵 전체적으로 1/8 triplelet 쓰인게 보이는데, 제 생각엔 별로 안어울리네요... 거의 대부분 삭제하시는걸 추천합니다. 아래에는 웬만하면 따로 언급 안하겠습니다.
00:08:463 - 여기 볼륨 너무 큰거같은데 조금만 줄여주세요
00:11:732 - 슬라 끝부분 soft-sampleset 사용하시는게 나을거같네요
00:13:559 (5) - 이거 살짝만.. 한 184 정도로 오른쪽으로 이동해보세요
00:18:078 (4) - x:128, 움직임이 더 매끄러워집니다.
00:24:232 (2,3,4,5) - 무빙이 상당히 부자연스러운데 [url=http://puu.sh/iCfwk/90f75072cf.jpg]이런 거[url] 한번 시도해보시길
00:27:694 (1,2,3) - 음을 추가하는건 좋은데.. 여기에 1/4은 별로 안어울리네요. 뒤쪽의 567도 마찬가지..
00:28:463 (1,2) - 1하고 2 사이에 순방향 하이퍼 있으면 좋을거같아요. 2를 144 정도로..
00:34:424 (6) - 와리가리 이전 점프는 하이퍼로 하는게 흐름상 훨씬 편합니다. 6을 왼쪽으로 옮겨보세요
00:35:194 (5) - 마찬가지로 좀더 horizontal하게 바꿔주신 후에 왼쪽으로 옮겨보세요
00:38:271 (5) - 위와 비슷하게 해주시면 됩니다.
01:02:309 (1) - 여기에 soft-additions finish 추가해주세요
01:03:655 (3) - N:C2 추가하고 휘슬 넣어주세요
01:08:078 (3) - 슬라이더 끝이 왼쪽을 향하도록 바꾸시는게 흐름상 좋을거같네요
01:16:155 - 이 파트부터 나오는 삼단 점프들이 원본만큼 매끄럽게 받아지지가 않네요. 거리를 살짝씩만 줄이시는걸 추천합니다.
01:39:232 (1) - 여기 생각보다 흐름 끊기고 어려운데.. 슬라 가로로 늘이고 하이퍼 추가하시는게 어떤가요
01:40:001 (1) - ^

make sure to reply my suggestions

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2015-06-25T15:11:40+00:00

@Spectator: all fixed except 00:56:155, cuz i didnt know exactly what you mean, and i didnt see problems here. thanks!

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2015-06-25T17:56:30+00:00

Spectator wrote:
General
Difficulty Spread : The difficulty gap between rain and overdose seems a bit too much, please control the difficulties to avoid any severe issues
Unsnapped objects : ☑
Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : ☑
Metadata Issues : 'Wide-screen support' isn't really needed in all diff. Remove them all
Timeline Issues : I just found an amount of timelines in ctb diffs which are useless, please get rid of all of them
Combo Colors : ☑
Unused hitsounds : ☑
Hitsounds Issues : ☑
Inaudible hitsounds : ☑

Crystal's Platter
1/4 구성이 플래터에서 괜찮을지 모르겠네요. 어느정도 줄여주는걸 고려해보시길.. 불필요한 타이밍포인트 정리도 전부 부탁드려요
00:30:771 (1) - 아주 약간만 오른쪽으로 이동해보는건 어떨까요.
00:32:117 (2,3,1) - 굳이 1/4 유지할 필요가 있을지.. 여긴 1/2 쓰시는건 어떤가요
00:32:886 (3,4,1) - ^
00:40:771 - 여기부터 나오는 1/4들은 이어지게 수정하시는걸 추천합니다.
01:02:309 (1,2) - 1하고 2 사이 거리 조금만 줄여주세요
01:23:463 (1,1) - 하이퍼 다음 점프가 꽤 넓은거같은데 조금만 줄여주세요
01:30:771 (1) - 리버스 부분 왼쪽으로.. 후반이라 생각보다 틀리기 쉬워요 전부 수정 완료

Crystal's Rain
전체적으로 불필요한 inherited point 전부 정리해주세요
00:08:463 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 하이퍼 다음에 오는 패턴이 살짝 불편한데 차라리 원형으로 둥글게 구성해보시는건 어떨까요
00:30:771 (1,2,3) - 1/4..
00:33:847 (1,2,3) - 여기도 개인적으로 1/4이 더 잘 어울려요
01:02:694 (5) - 슬라 끝에 whistle 추가
01:03:655 - N:C2 추가하고 3 머리 부분에 whistle 넣어보세요
01:20:771 - 레인 치곤 삼단점프가 좀 넓은듯 싶네요
01:24:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 레인에 역방향 넓은 하이퍼는 되도록 피하시는게 좋을거같아요
01:35:771 (2) - 뉴콤보 삭제
01:36:155 - 배경에 심벌즈 사운드 있는데 soft-finish 추가 고려해보세요
01:41:540 (1,2) - 1하고 2 사이가 좀더 넓은게 흐름 고려해보면 더 나은거같네요 역시 전부 수정완료.

Crystal's Overdose
맵 전체적으로 1/8 triplelet 쓰인게 보이는데, 제 생각엔 별로 안어울리네요... 거의 대부분 삭제하시는걸 추천합니다. 아래에는 웬만하면 따로 언급 안하겠습니다. 놔둬도 괜찮은 부분 몇군데 빼고 나머진 전부 없앴습니다.
00:08:463 - 여기 볼륨 너무 큰거같은데 조금만 줄여주세요
00:11:732 - 슬라 끝부분 soft-sampleset 사용하시는게 나을거같네요
00:13:559 (5) - 이거 살짝만.. 한 184 정도로 오른쪽으로 이동해보세요
00:18:078 (4) - x:128, 움직임이 더 매끄러워집니다.
00:24:232 (2,3,4,5) - 무빙이 상당히 부자연스러운데 [url=http://puu.sh/iCfwk/90f75072cf.jpg]이런 거[url] 한번 시도해보시길 조금 다르게 고쳐봤습니다.
00:27:694 (1,2,3) - 음을 추가하는건 좋은데.. 여기에 1/4은 별로 안어울리네요. 뒤쪽의 567도 마찬가지.. 글쎄요.. 이건 괜찮아보여서 놔두겠습니다.
00:28:463 (1,2) - 1하고 2 사이에 순방향 하이퍼 있으면 좋을거같아요. 2를 144 정도로..
00:34:424 (6) - 와리가리 이전 점프는 하이퍼로 하는게 흐름상 훨씬 편합니다. 6을 왼쪽으로 옮겨보세요
00:35:194 (5) - 마찬가지로 좀더 horizontal하게 바꿔주신 후에 왼쪽으로 옮겨보세요
00:38:271 (5) - 위와 비슷하게 해주시면 됩니다.
01:02:309 (1) - 여기에 soft-additions finish 추가해주세요
01:03:655 (3) - N:C2 추가하고 휘슬 넣어주세요
01:08:078 (3) - 슬라이더 끝이 왼쪽을 향하도록 바꾸시는게 흐름상 좋을거같네요
01:16:155 - 이 파트부터 나오는 삼단 점프들이 원본만큼 매끄럽게 받아지지가 않네요. 거리를 살짝씩만 줄이시는걸 추천합니다.
01:39:232 (1) - 여기 생각보다 흐름 끊기고 어려운데.. 슬라 가로로 늘이고 하이퍼 추가하시는게 어떤가요
01:40:001 (1) - ^ 나머지 전부 수정완료.

make sure to reply my suggestions

감사합니당

http://puu.sh/iCtgt/f1e54b6c81.zip

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2015-08-15T13:21:57+00:00

上车

ctb diffs are fun!

pocket-Gao

275 posts

Joined August 2013

pocket-Gao 2015-08-15T13:34:03+00:00

囍

[Emiria]

1,010 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

[Emiria] 2015-08-15T16:06:57+00:00

o.o

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2015-08-19T10:24:37+00:00

ZZHBOY wrote:
上车
ctb diffs are fun!

开车
all diffs are fun!

到站了请各位乘客有序下车

Nomination Assessment Team

182 posts

Joined August 2014

Nomination Assessment Team 2015-08-19T11:13:02+00:00

Disqualification Notice

This has been disqualified upon request by the mapper or nominating nominator within 12 hours after qualification. Please ensure to make your adjustments and then you are free to requalify it.

###0

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2015-08-19T11:40:23+00:00

http://puu.sh/jGQIe/e581ef89bc.zip Sorry for issues guys, here is the final updated version of CtB.

Marirose

1,121 posts

Joined September 2012

Marirose 2015-08-19T11:45:15+00:00

icon

Len

2,812 posts

Joined June 2012

Len 2015-08-19T11:48:33+00:00

yah

[ A v a l o n ]

1,981 posts

Joined July 2014

[ A v a l o n ] 2015-08-19T12:49:57+00:00

Fast wrote:
yah

Spy

2,538 posts

Joined November 2011

Spy 2015-08-19T17:27:31+00:00

Marirose wrote:
icon

No need to icon again due to there is no issues in mania diffs.
So if CtB diffs are fine, you can bubble it directly.

NlHIL

856 posts

Joined December 2013

NlHIL 2015-08-19T17:28:24+00:00

ha...

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2015-08-20T02:42:43+00:00

rebub

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2015-08-20T03:10:48+00:00

开车了请各位乘客扶稳坐好

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,780 posts

Joined February 2011

Spectator 2015-08-20T06:47:06+00:00

there wasn't even apple icon actually

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2015-08-20T19:11:00+00:00

L to the O to the L

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2015-08-23T07:42:29+00:00

OniJAM wrote:
开车了请各位乘客扶稳坐好

Re-qualified!

Kyousuke-

1,796 posts

Joined May 2013

Kyousuke- 2015-08-23T07:49:31+00:00

grats!

打打打打打打打打打打

Dereku

98 posts

Joined May 2013

Dereku 2015-08-23T10:11:18+00:00

Spy wrote:
no issues in mania diffs.

Lv 14:
00:05:194 (5194|1) - no sound. Random click?
00:06:540 (6540|3) - Too early.
00:06:988 (6988|3) - ^
00:07:117 (7117|1) - ^
00:07:213 (7213|3) - no sound

This is only the first 10 seconds.

Realy. No issues.

Kaito-kun

490 posts

Joined July 2014

Kaito-kun 2015-08-23T15:07:04+00:00

Want to add something else, since it looks this map is gonna get DQ:

01:17:501 (77501|3,77549|2,77597|1,77646|0) - I don't see with what you associate this stair, only sounds I can hear in that section are here 01:17:405 - , here 01:17:501 - and here 01:17:597 -, but nothing that can make that stair legit.

01:20:450 (80450|2,80514|1,80578|0,80642|1,80706|2) - This should be a Long Note, since the mapped sound here is a prolonged sound, not a succesion of sounds (AKA, there's only one sound there, only that it's prolonged).

01:13:078 (73078|0,73126|1,73174|2,73222|3,73271|2,73319|1,73367|0,73415|1,73463|2,73511|3,73559|2,73607|1,73655|0,73703|1,73751|2,73799|3) - Re-arrange this, it's VERY unconfortable to hit, would reccomend making [1][2][3][4] streams (AKA, something like this: 01:13:078 (73078|0,73126|1,73174|2,73222|3,73271|0,73319|1,73367|2,73415|3,73463|0,73511|1,73559|2,73607|3,73655|0,73703|1,73751|2,73799|3) -).

Remove jacks like this one 00:24:136 (24136|0,24232|0) -, this one 00:56:347 (56347|0,56444|0) -, this one 00:56:732 (56732|2,56828|2) - and this one 00:57:117 (57117|2,57213|2) -, as most of them don't fit the music and feel like they are simply there to break your combo/SS.

This were only things that I felt while playing the map, so I'm sure I failed to recognize some other things. Anyways, hope this helps you increase the quality of this map (considering it actually gets DQ, because Dereku's post is actually right).

Spy

2,538 posts

Joined November 2011

Spy 2015-08-25T17:25:39+00:00

Dereku wrote:
Spy wrote:
no issues in mania diffs.
Lv 14:
00:05:194 (5194|1) - no sound. Random click?
00:06:540 (6540|3) - Too early.
00:06:988 (6988|3) - ^
00:07:117 (7117|1) - ^
00:07:213 (7213|3) - no sound

This is only the first 10 seconds.

Realy. No issues.

I didn't check it yet.
But please, "No need to icon again due to there is no issues in mania diffs.", not "no issues in mania diffs.".
I mean about BN checks, if the mania diffs got issues, it will be disqualified too.

juankristal

osu! Alumni

1,408 posts

Joined August 2010

juankristal 2015-08-25T17:49:59+00:00

Spy wrote:
I didn't check it yet.
But please, "No need to icon again due to there is no issues in mania diffs.", not "no issues in mania diffs.".
I mean about BN checks, if the mania diffs got issues, it will be disqualified too.

Yeah, I understand what you said at that moment but... This will be fixed for the MWC? I mean, it feels really weird I have to say...

Spy

2,538 posts

Joined November 2011

Spy 2015-08-25T19:57:17+00:00

juankristal wrote:
Yeah, I understand what you said at that moment but... This will be fixed for the MWC? I mean, it feels really weird I have to say...

I'll check it soon, sorry for inconvenience.

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2015-08-26T16:01:57+00:00

It was already announced as an official beatmap of the MWC, so it should stay untouched until the phase is over.

You guys can go for the DQ before the 7-day period is over, but the mapper mustn't apply that mod until next Monday. That'd be a possibility.

Starry-

osu! Alumni

1,074 posts

Joined December 2012

Starry- 2015-08-28T03:44:32+00:00

Greetings!

We have found some potential areas for improvement that we feel are important enough to address before continuing:

General

In CS's Lv.10, Lv.12, and Lv.14, there are a few instances of incorrect snapping and should be fixed.

00:05:867 - Should be at 00:05:843 (5843|3) - 1/16
00:06:540 - Should be at 00:06:588 (6588|3) - 1/8
00:06:988 - Should be at 00:07:021 (7021|3) - 1/4
00:07:117 - Should be at 00:07:165 (7165|1) - 1/8
00:07:213 - Delete, as it is an extra sound here.

00:58:527 (58527|1) - No clear sound on this note
00:58:527 (58527|1,58591|2) - Lv.10 uses 1/4, this uses 1/6, inconsistent snapping.

After going over these suggestions, if you disagree with any change, please reply to this thread stating your reasoning so that alternatives may be discussed.

Otherwise, please reply to this thread when the suggestions have been applied.

Thank you for working with us towards higher quality beatmaps, we hope to see your beatmap ranked soon!

###A

Hige Driver join. SELEN - Dadadadadadadadadada [OsuMania]

Sign In To Proceed

Don't have an account?

Hige Driver join. SELEN - Dadadadadadadadadada [OsuMania]

spartancog95 wrote:

Razor Sharp wrote:

General

Crystal's Salad

Crystal's Platter

Crystal's Rain

Crystal's Overdose

Spectator wrote:

General

Crystal's Platter

Crystal's Rain

Crystal's Overdose

ZZHBOY wrote:

Disqualification Notice

Fast wrote:

Marirose wrote:

OniJAM wrote:

Spy wrote:

Dereku wrote:

Spy wrote:

Spy wrote:

juankristal wrote:

New reply