Llamame cuando tengas el hitsounding pronto.. Tenia planeado modear este mapa, pero no me gusta modear algo que no esta completito completito
thanks a lot for the mod and the starsmancuso_JM_ wrote:
Hola! Vengo a modear del ''Christmas Queue''
[General][Christmas]
- Viendo que tenes un Storyboard, el Letterbox During Breaks se ve un poco feo. Si yo fuera tu, lo sacaria. no se como, la opcion esta bloqueada D:
- La verdad me sorprendio este mapa, bien hecho en general . Quizas algunos overlaps estaban medio raro, pero como jugaban bien no moleste mucho con esto hehe.
- 00:15:966 (3,4,5) - Esto se ve feo desde mi punto de vista. Seria mejor que apilaras (stackearas) el final de (3) con el final de (5), definitivamente se ve mejor, yo hice algo mas o menos asi fix~
- 00:34:823 (6,7) - Esperaba un spacing mas alto entre estos sliders, ya que lo venias haciendo asi cuando la musica se escuchaba de esta manera. ¿Que te parece mover (7) a x:436 y:172 (o alrededor) para ser consistente en este aspecto? mmm... ok, fix~
- 00:39:966 (3,4) - Esta sugerencia es para darle al mapa algo de estructura (y algo un poco nazi hehe). Curvando estos sliders, vas a obtener mejor estructura viendo que el siguiente slider es curvo tambien (5), yo hice algo mas o menos asi buena idea, fix~
- 00:54:752 (5) - Hmm.. Agrega un New Combo por el cambio tan notorio en la voz (? fix~
- 01:00:966 (3) - Se ve feo que el principio y el final de este slider este superpuestos :/. Intenta mover el final de este Slider algunos grids hacia arriba. fix~
- 01:12:109 (5,6,7) - Hmm.. Quizas quieres mover un poco este patron hacia abajo para que (7) no toque al score. fix~
- 01:21:537 (4,5) - Incrementa el spacing entre estos objetos por consistencia con el siguiente pre-coro. Ademas juega bien si haces esto. fix~
- 01:47:680 (1,2,3) - Uff.. este stack, no me gusta como juega :/, ya que en lo general los usas en los espacios de 1/1 y no en un patron constante de 1/2. Deberias desapilar esas notas. fix~
- 02:17:037 (5) - Como dije anteriormente, creo que un New Combo entraria bien aca. fix~
- 02:19:395 (2) - *Nazi* si, nazi pero vas a poder hacer una pequeña blanket si moves el punto medio de este slider a x:152 y:144 fix~
- 02:29:466 (2) - El blanket no es perfecto y en definitiva fluye mejor si ubicas esta nota por afuera de los Sliders, es decir en x:84 y:308 fix~
- 02:30:323 (4) - Aca seria lo mismo, si ubicas la nota por afuera del slider fluye mejor, si queres apilala con (5), sino pone esta nota donde empieza (5) y move el slider hacia un costado. fix~
- 03:19:823 (7,1) - La verdad este overlap no es como los demas del mapa, este se ve y juega desprolijo :/. ¿Por que no intentas algo mas asi? buena idea, fix~
- 03:21:109 (3) - Deberias mejorar este slider xD. Yo hice algo asi, pero fue a las apuradas, fijate si podes hacer algo mejor fix~
- 04:03:109 (3,4) - La composicion de este patron te quedo bastante extraña, sumando que el (3) esta casi afuera de la pantalla. Yo intentaria otra cosa, te dejo esto como ejemplo, vas a tener un pequeño efecto en zig-zag que no juega para nada mal y asi evitas esta rara composicion. no, este patron me parece mas apropiado con la vocal :3
- 04:11:680 (1,2) - ¿Por que no invertir la forma de los Sliders? Siento que juega mejor. yo no, ese patron no me parecio concorde con el estilo que le estoy aplicando al mapa, sin cambios.
- 05:05:466 (7) - Deberias mover el final del slider un poco hacia arriba, asi no se superponen y se ve mejor. fix~
- 05:30:537 - Termino tan chato el mapa . Yo intentaria un pequeño flash con el SB o al menos un pequeño flash kiai en la ultima nota, pero bueno.. lo dejo a tu criterio xD. see, fix~
Con respecto al resto, ¡buen flow y buen ritmo empleaste!, cosa rara hoy en dia hehe. Solo los hitsounds me parecieron muy basicos, pero meh.. yo soy exquisito con eso, no estan mal de todas maneras. gracias
Eso es todo de mi parte! Dejo unas estrellitas para mostarte mi apoyo!
Espero que te ayude!
Buena Suerte con el mapa!
thx for modding, the things what i don't reply or i replied in green are the things what i fix. the things replied in red are the things what i don't fix :3Momochikun wrote:
Hiiii , as requested :3 Hiiiiii~
[Insane]
Consider adding silent sliderslide ? i think it sounds disturbing and too loud especially on the calm part o.o i should, right? fix~
Ah anyway.. i'm not being nazi here, but this is the list of pattern that maybe you could try to blanket it better : 00:04:823 (1,2) - 00:24:966 (8,1) - 00:31:395 (7,9) - 01:28:395 (4,5) - i don't see prooblem with this one :3 02:37:180 (4,5) - 02:50:895 (5,6) -
00:38:037 (6,7,8) - I'd rather switch their position to get the slider start on the white tick instead
00:49:395 (1,2) - This spacing just really like a 1/2 rhythm when actually it was not.. i highly recommend adding note 00:50:037 - to avoid missread
00:12:537 (3) - Adding whistle on the slider tail could work nicely to emphasize the instrument imo
00:14:252 (9) - I would add NC here or at (10) , it would make this pattern become easier to read during gameplay good idea, fix~
00:27:537 (6) - NC for same reason as ^
00:57:109 (2,7) - Seems they're not stacked properly, i wonder if this was intentional wasn't, i didn't knew it xD, fix~
01:00:966 (3) - Honestly this kind of slider shape does looks cramped for this part, i'd reduce the curve a bit the slider isn't bad in that position imo, no change
01:03:109 (1) - Hmm.. try arrange them like below for better flow ? i feel better the flow with the slider of that way
01:18:323 (4) - I'd separate them into 1/2 sliider and note instead since you could hear slightly cymbal stuff on the sliderslide of this i'm more focus in the vocal what in the instruments
01:22:073 (1) - Since this part got pretty catchy instrument, for approval map i'd like to map this instead of spinner, are you okay with undermapping ? o.o yes, i am, i feel better a spinner before of the kiai :3
01:26:037 (7,8,9) - Try this ! i dislike it :/, no change
01:32:895 - I recommend adding note that stacked to (3) for same reason as before no change, i'm more focus in the vocal
01:46:609 - ^ or move them farther ^
01:40:609 (8,1) - Swap NC for vocal ?
01:42:323 (5,6) - Is this really need to be overlap ? personally its feel crowded for me
01:51:752 (2,3) - move (2) a bit upside pls ><
02:08:680 (1,2) - Try the pattern below for better transition from 02:08:037 (9) - ?
02:18:323 (7,1) - I'd rather unstack them or unstack 02:18:537 (1,2) - , they're stacked on the same slider when their rhtyhm is different
I see you're copying all stuffs on the 1st kiai to the 2nd kiai, aha i catch you being lazy /lol so all my mods is the same with the previous part >_> hehehe xD
03:26:680 (8,1) - Oh this one was poorly readable, a sudden slowdown from 1.00 to 0,5x could be pretty shocking, yea it was fit the music but look at it. The slider 8 and 1 does looks like on the same length at the first sight, this could be confusing imo :/
03:54:537 (1) - It's near to touch the hp bar
04:47:680 (3) - I'd reduce the volume and change to finish instead of drum sampleset
Good Luck :3
thx for moddingCloudSplash16 wrote:
[Christmas]Anyway, the map would be much more interesting if you used some small jumps to emphasize strong notes. It's a bit bland right now.
- 00:14:252 (9,1) - I think it will be much clearer to read if you switch the new combo between these two objects so the combo starts on the downbeat, and (1) is clearly visible.
- 00:18:109 (8,1) - It would be nice if you use larger spacing for parts on stronger notes, as it helps emphasize them and is smoother and more fun to play.
- 01:13:395 (1) - I think it would be nice if you could make this shape smoother: http://puu.sh/dBhAT/9f2bfcc948.jpg
- 01:14:466 (2,4) - This looks a bit confusing as it is now, and I recommend stacking it instead. no, i like it how is now
- 01:45:966 (4,5) - It would play much smoother if you put a bit more distance between these.
- 01:49:395 (5,6,7,8) - It would look nice if you could avoid this overlap by moving them a bit: http://puu.sh/dBhLb/c1d209c68a.jpg
- 02:08:680 (1,2) - Try putting more distance here to make it smoother.
- 02:27:109 (4,5) - A round or less linear pattern would fit better here in my opinion: http://puu.sh/dBhTl/1681fff946.jpg no because i'll had to change 02:27:966 (6) - for keep the flow, and i don't want that
- 02:36:752 (2,4) - Again, I recommend stacking this. the same thing before
- Same things for copy/pasted parts.
y tampoco me sirvio, te he dicho que seas mas especifico con tus mods. Sorry, pero sigues sin kudos por mi ;w;GamerCL wrote:
Vengo por un mejor mod :3 (Cortito pero utilizable (?)
[Christmas]
COMMENT: No hagas variado de la distancia xd tengo que hacerlo por los cambios de intensidad en la canción :3
00:05:466 (2,3) - Sube eso un poco, quedaría mejor. porque? si el blanket esta bien asi :/
00:06:966 (4,9) - No hagas jumps así porque?
01:08:252 (4,7) - No hagas jumps así ^
Y así queda :c
PD: no acostumbro modear, pero espero que sirva c:
thx for moddingStatic Noise Bird wrote:
[The diff]
OD -1
00:09:537 (4,5) - Could be replaced with circle, 1/1 slider, circle. no because 00:09:752 - have a beat
00:59:466 (8,1) - Swap new combo.
01:31:395 (2,3) - This kind of overlapping should be avoided. that overlap was on purpose
01:50:680 (8) - Could be made to blanket the following object. no, is fine of this way
02:26:252 (2,4) - Isn't as bad overlap, but could be easily avoided, too.
02:42:537 (1) - Move to x:392 y:164. i like how is now, no change
Nice, good luck with ranking process!
pero no te molestes, a final de todo yo solo te quiero ayudar ;w;GamerCL wrote:
A la mierda, total, te facilitaran las cosas a futuro
thx a lot for modding~fanzhen0019 wrote:
General
- Offset=1379 . The one now you use sounds a bit off for me.. thanks for this, fix~
Insane
HitsoundsArrangement & Design
Standard 24clap hitsounding. I can't find problems here.
- 01:08:236 (4,5,6,7,1) - It's not a perfect star shape. Umm I would use "Creating a polygon" function to do a star.
- 01:12:093 (5,6,7) - Since you didn't use many overlaps, I suggest you put 6 away a bit. like this:
- 01:31:807 (3) - Yeah, the same reason as above. You can do something else to avoid overlapping~ make it something like that, fix~
- 01:56:236 (5) - How about a newcombo here? Because you switched to another type of pattern here.
- 02:53:664 (3,4) - These two looks random.. You can improve by making a simple patter like: no, i like more this pattern
Also, you need to remake the blanket if you do so- 03:18:521 (5) - Same reason as previous newcombo advice.
- 04:03:093 (3) - Umm..Idk if this is permitted that the track point is out of the boundary of editor, though I can hit it when testing.
- 04:47:664 (3) - This is too..
Ah, the map plays smoothly. But I feel kinda boring x.x
Good luck~
merry chistmas, thanks for modding!Kazuya wrote:
Hello. At the request. (ErunamoJazz) It's only ideas! Sorry, my english is bad!
This slider velocity is slow. Why? because is a low map :3
00:08:879 (2,3,4) - I think, my suggestion is better: timeline pic:http://p uu.sh/dEOML/29d7bf8820.jpg,because
this 1/2 sliders, and 1/1 slider better fits the pianos.
00:12:307 (2,3,4,5) - ^ Same as above. Timeline example: http://puu.sh/dEOYn/61a563bcfa.jpg this
00:14:450 (2,3,4,1) - Please, make stream, because it's drum roll. Put circles here: 00:14:557 - 00:14:771 -
00:14:986 - Emphasize them!
00:20:664 (6,7,8) - Hmm. 6 circle? no :3
00:46:379 (2,3,4) - Please, follow the vocal! Use this similar: http://puu.sh/dEP99/4bb83a9a23.jpg
00:48:521 (6,7) - I think four circle is better fits here. no, i don't think that
01:22:057 (1) - I think, this spinner is not fit here. Please, map the background sound. no, i like the spinner before the kiai
01:35:664 (4,5,6,7) - This four reverse sliders is not fit here, overmapped, because not heared 1/4 sounds. what are you taiking about? i hear clearly the 1/4 rhythm
02:08:664 (2) - Remove reverse, and move slider here: 02:09:093 - , and put circle here: 02:08:664 - Please, follow
the vocal. i like better of this way :3
02:13:807 (5) - Use two circle. Better fits the background sounds! no, ruins the pattern
02:57:950 (5,6,7,8) - Overmapped! Don't use 1/4 reverse sliders, or stream, because there is no 1/4 sound. isn't
04:47:664 (3) - This blanket is very bad. Please, fix it! i believe what this blanket was already fixed xD fix~
05:15:093 (7,8,9,10) - I think, use 1/2 sliders, because this 1/4 sound is very low. i hear clearly the 1/4
Good luck, merry christmas!
looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool, sorry fanzhen xDErunamoJAZZ wrote:
emm.... forgot you kudo to fanzhen?
be careful with this xD
thx for moddingProject Railgun wrote:
Hi from Christmas Queue <3
Testing http://waa.ai/46ff
[General][Christmas]
- Some storyboard elements support 16:9 but others don't? Try to fix? Example: 01:23:664 - is strange because when i test it is fine :/
Good map overall, rank soon
- 00:38:021 (6,7,8) - Try moving this set up to x:292 y:252. wtf, why? no :/
- 01:51:950 (3) - Add more curve to this slider? It may look / play better as well. Maybe something like 03:21:093 (3) - ? no because i want to keep a little blanket with 01:51:093 (1) -
- 01:58:807 - The stack here is off by a few units? I also suggest that you try a special and unique slider for Slider 3.
- 02:11:664 (1,2) - I won't go on about stacks (as my osu! may be inconsistent), but this pattern is not stacked properly to me. Feel free to go through the mapset and fix the stacks you see fit. You may also want to check 02:15:093 (1,2) - as well. yeah, i have to fix someone of this stacks, fixed all~
- 02:21:093 (6,7,1) - This pattern may be confusing? You should try a perfect triangle here to increase the flow for the player. Maybe something like 02:23:236 (4,5,6) - instead?
- 02:54:521 (5,6) - The change in DS here felt a bit off for me. Try x:168 y:108 for 02:55:378 (6) - instead? i feel better the actual (considering what i'm copy and paste all the 1st kiai
- 02:56:236 (1,3) - Not sure how I feel about this pattern? Maybe half-stack Slider 3 so the Head is visible? no,will be a ugly overlap imo
- 03:26:664 (8) - Curve this slider? I think it has a nice side effect. (: mmm... why not? fix~
~- 03:27:521 - The downward motion here does not feel natural to me when played. Try to make Slider 2 ( 03:27:950 (2) - ) higher up instead? e.g: x:296 y:236 You may need to adjust your next pattern.
- Overall the map plays fine~
thx for modding xine-chan :3Xinely wrote:
SB is fine in my eyes
feel free to find more mods before i post mineplaceholder here
from ticket
General
- unsnapped preview time, snap at 01:22:914 -
- i realized something about SB, your flash and BG dimension are 4:3 so dont use widescreen support here, if you ask why, try use 16:9 on your osu, and see how flash effects work here
- according Ranking Criteria Black.jpg, White.jpg , Flash.jpg and Spotlights.png should be resized again which says http://puu.sh/dNEJH.png i knew it, fix~
Christmas
- 00:02:021 (2) - actually you can improve the flow more if you try make the curve on this slider a little bit similar with previous http://puu.sh/dMuUm.jpg
- 00:03:950 (5) - move this slider to 252,120 so the design (space from this slider to previous and next slider) looked more balance
- 00:06:307 (3) - this slider is more natural if you move the middle node at upward imo, i mean just like http://puu.sh/dMws8.jpg no, i feel better a downward slider
- 00:08:879 (2) - just my taste but if you try move the tail to rightside you will give more natural flow at this slider example http://puu.sh/dMxmd.jpg no
- 00:12:736 (3) - just my two cents but if you have consistency spacing for this slider (both spacing affected for previous and next) it would be nicely to play and neater for design example move this slider to 176,348
- 00:15:093 (1) - honestly i dont like 0,30x spacing here. at least try use 1,0x or make jump instead so it would played better here
- 00:18:307 (1) - sadly but you have to change rhythm become circle and then 1/2 slider coz you cant skip 00:18:521 - a loud crystal sound at this time
- 00:20:021 (5) - and for this one imo the curve of this doesnt really with fit previous flow which really curvy, try to keep do consistent flow example http://puu.sh/dMz9n.jpg
- 00:23:664 (5) - i hear a sound something like crystal sound here so i would suggest at least give whistle here
- 00:15:093 - until 00:40:807 - i think you should add whistle for every stanza (long whiteticks) here, since they sound quite empty w/o them, for stanza who skipped to map example 00:30:521 - 00:33:950 - etc, you have to whistle the previous red ticks (00:30:307 - 00:33:736 - etc) good idea, fix~
- 00:40:807 (5) - the music on pitch here and it sounds so strong so i hope we can have larger jump here :C
- 00:32:021 (1) - same as 00:18:307 (1) -
- 00:33:736 (5) - literally if you curve the slider on rightside, it will give more natural lol http://puu.sh/dNpiV.jpg no, i like better how is now
- 00:34:379 (6) - reason same as above, try move the curve on upward instead
- 00:39:950 (3) - add whistle for emphasize the melody, as you did at 00:41:664 -
- :0044:664 (6,7) - the design looked a little bit bad here, at least you can make them neater with symmetrical http://puu.sh/dNqbP.jpg
- 00:48:950 (6) - try ctrl+G for making jump which can emphasize 00:49:379 - nicely here good idea, fix~
- 00:50:879 (5) - same as 00:18:307 (1) - this no, for the vocal
- 00:52:807 (1) - the vocal is really strong so you can add whistle or finish here
- 00:54:093 (3) - you can improve design and flow here, try make this slider a little bit similar with previous slider http://puu.sh/dNqNf.jpg
- 00:58:807 (6) - hmm actually i feel the flow from previous slider to this slider a little bit rigid but i cant find better way too, well just saying ~ i don't see problem :/
- 00:59:450 (1) - actually if we see how the next flow works, this slider would be better if have the curve on downward no
- 01:00:950 (4) - actually since stanza has a little bit strong in vocal, you can try make 1/2 slider and 1/1 slider, which 1/1 has mini jump to emphasize the vocal is better how is now imo, so, no change
- 01:09:093 (6) - the normal sampleset heard a little bit loud for me, personally i prefer use soft whistle only but it's just my taste
- 01:12:521 (6) - nazi, this slider a little bit close with other sliders here so i would say move it a little bit far example 480,116
- 01:14:450 (2,4) - so nazi but literally we usually use stack for make the design looks neater lol
- 01:18:307 (4) - same as 00:18:307 (1) - no :3
- 01:26:879 (1) - nazi but you can improve the flow a lot if you move this tail to point head of next slider here, try move tail to 336,260
- 01:38:236 (2,3,4) - nazi and just my taste that you still can improve the flow here if you try a little bit smoother flow example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2401704
- 01:48:521 (3) - when you hear a string sound from this 01:48:741 - which it continuing from previous whitetick, sad but i would suggest to map this red tick too, i guess change 01:48:521 (3,4) - become 2 of 1/2 sliders will fit here
- 01:53:236 (4) - a little bit confuse with the inconsistency spacing here imo, it would be nice to use 1,2x since it's normal spacing here
- 01:55:379 (3) - make it more symmetrical with previous and next slider please, ofc neater design http://puu.sh/dNuBR.jpg no, i like this pattern
- 02:01:379 (1) - a little bit weird for me here, hmm if you insist to keep a little bit not straight slider so i would suggest like http://puu.sh/dNE5e.jpg
- 02:15:093 (1,2) - nazi but you can stack them better lol
- 02:36:736 (2,4) - same as previous, better to stack for read it lol
- 04:23:664 (3,4) - symmetrical them for better/neater design i like the actual pattern
- hmm actually flows are fine for me but i just feel you have to add whistle on every 1st whiteticks and 3rd whiteticks coz they feel totally empty for me
try 2-3 more mods and when you got them and fix the hitsounds empty i told on last sentence, feel free to poke me back
gracias <3Hakard wrote:
PERFECT MAP
Te lo modearia, pero sinceramente... está perfecto en todo, me encanto. En mi opinión está listo para que lo rankeen? Te dejo star, espero que tengas aprobado esto pronto <3 Lamento no haber sido útil
thx for moddingInyuschan wrote:
As requested.
#modinspanish
[General][Christmas]
- En mi opinión podrías haber hecho este mapa un poquito más difícil en el sentido de que por ejemplo aquí 01:35:664 (4,5,6,7) - como poco en la mitad encajaba bien unos streams, y lo mismo aquí 00:14:450 (2) - pero supongo que está bien. yo trate de hacer un hard (ya que encaja mas con la cancion), y no me gustan los stream en hard
- Sé que no es una marathon como tal pero considera la idea de añadirlo en los tags ya que va para approval, si no lo tienes en el nombre de la diff (tampoco encajaría demasiado) yo lo añadiría en los tags. ok, fix~
Bueeeeeno, no está nada mal el mapa, de hecho gran parte de mi mod son sugerencias. Suerte! gracias :3
- 00:06:950 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Algo como esto es otro ejemplo de que el mapa se siente demasiado fácil, yo creo que no estaría mal si haces de este patrón unos pequeños jumps, por ejemplo esto: http://puu.sh/dT5lh/2b129ad0a8.jpg Yo creo que se ve bien y lo hace más entretenido. no me gusta ese ejemplo, como está ahora esta bien, sin cambios
- 00:14:236 (1) - Este NC no es necesario porque la música sigue prácticamente igual además de que lo añades cada dos stanzas, como mucho te diría de ponerlo aquí 00:13:593 (6) - o simplemente eliminarlo.
Nota: dudo que lo cambies pero lo sugiero igual; 00:13:807 (7,8) - a partir de aquí podrías seguir más bien en la otra dirección e intentar añadir streams que vayan a este slider 00:15:093 (1) - como es algo complicado sé que no lo harás pero al menos inténtalo a ver qué tal, ya que quiero ver más streams en este mapa. pero el asunto es que si no lo notas, yo trato de hacer un cuadrado entre 00:13:164 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - en donde el primer (4) es el punto a seguir, si cambio la direccion el cuadrado se echaria a perder, ademas de que no le quiero colocar streams por la misma razon en la seccion de general.- 00:36:950 (4) - ¿Qué opinas de añadir Ctrl+G aquí? Siento que fluye mejor al menos para mí. me gusta este pattern asi
- 00:37:379 (5,6,7) - Hm... Quizá deberías hacer un stack con 00:38:021 (6,7) - porque (6) está como algo opuesto al slider anterior y no me gusta cómo se ve. que? yo hago los stack en 1/1, no en 1/2 si no te das cuenta, asi que sin cambios
- 00:54:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Algo parecido a lo de antes, prueba a hacer algunos jumps, al menos a partir de (4). no porque si lo hago pareceria inconsistente con 02:16:807 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - y ahi no podria hacer lo mismo que me estas sugiriendo aqui, asi que, sin cambios.
- 01:00:950 (4) - Este tipo de slider lo veo un poco fuera de lugar, de hecho no encaja con el slider que viene después, ¿qué opinas de extender un poco más la curva?
- 01:03:093 (1,2) - Añade Ctrl+J a (1), siento que fluye mucho mejor. no porque no me encaja con 01:02:236 (5) - sin cambios
Nota: si lo haces deberás mover (2) un poco creo, o hacer un stack con (3), de todas formas no supone ningún problema de remapeo ni nada parecido.- 01:07:807 (3) - Ctrl+G? Por la misma razón de antes. no, por la misma razon de antes
- 01:12:521 (6) - Lo mismo. este si, fix~
- 01:45:950 (4,5) - Ya que intentas hacer este tipo de slider podrías mejorarlo un poco, ¿quizá algo así? http://puu.sh/dT6uN/eeaaf387b1.jpg como esta esta bien en mi opinion
Nota: lo mismo aquí 03:08:236 (4,5). ^- 01:51:950 (3) - Al final de este slider creo que falta algo, si añades un whistle creo que encajaría con la música.
Nota: lo mismo aquí 01:58:807 (3) - y en casos similares.- 01:56:236 (1) - ¿No añadías NC cada dos stanzas? Éste está fuera de lugar. este caso es diferente, porque hay una diferencia de patterns
Nota: si hay más casos te recomiendo revisarlos al menos.- 01:57:093 (3) - Lo mismo del whistle pero al principio del slider.
- 02:57:093 (3,4) - Te sugiero hacer un copypaste de (3) para (4), añadir Ctr+J y Ctrl+H, y luego formar un blanket, algo así: http://puu.sh/dT6YJ/3c23d0cc8d.jpg Después añades un círculo en x:240 y:276, es decir elimina 02:57:950 (5,6,7) y haz streams de forma que lleguen a 02:59:236 (8) - Me refiero a algo así: http://puu.sh/dT76X/fbbc5e51bf.jpg Pero mejor hecho, obvio lol no por lo de los streams :3
- 03:09:950 (1) - ¿No se vería un flujo mejor si añadieras Ctrl+H aquí? no :3
Nota: puede que tengas que mover (2) un poco para fixear el DS.- 03:27:950 (2,3) - Añade NC a estos dos debido al cambio de SV.
- 04:01:379 (1,3) - !nazi - Si planeabas un blanket entre estos dos, deberías mejorarlo, moviendo (3) un poco a la derecha por ejemplo.
- 05:01:379 (1) - Creo que sampleset normal no encaja aquí, la música no suena demasiado fuerte, así que si añades un spinner no suena bien con este sampleset al menos para mí.
- 05:08:664 (1,4) - Intercambia los NCs, se nota bastante inconsistente aquí.
- 05:08:664 (1,4) - Lo mismo.
- 05:15:950 (9,10) - Esto es bastante repentino y confuso, en anteriores patrones parecidos no hiciste esta inconsistencia de spacing, acércalos y si acaso aleja un poco 05:16:807 (1). esto no le veo tanto problema, y me gusta ya que es como una sorpresa para el final, asi que, sin cambios :3
be more specific with your modYuii- wrote:
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[Christmas]General: La canción... genial. ¿Qué te parece un HP "5,0" / AR "7,5"? no, muy lento, asi esta bien
- 00:02:664 - Acá se escucha un beat. Intenta agregar un círculo. si, pero muy suave, ademas quiero seguir mas los whistles
- 00:06:093 - Misma ^ ^
- 00:06:950 (4) - Mover a x:328 y:48 \
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\- 00:07:164 (5) - Mover a x:456 y:88 \
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\- 00:07:379 (6) - Mover a x:360 y:152 \
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> no cambios, quiero mantener mi pattern asi- 00:07:593 (7) - Mover a x:224 y:200 /
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/- 00:07:807 (8) - Mover a x:320 y:288 /
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/- 00:08:021 (9) - Mover a x:456 y:256 /
- 00:13:379 (1,2,3,4,5) - ¿Qué te parece algo así? nooooo :/
- 00:20:664 (7,8,9) - ¿Qué te parece agregarle más spacing a estos 3 sliders?
- 00:24:521 (7) - Ctrl+G buena idea, fix~
- 00:24:950 (8) - Ctrl+G (Este es bastante más opcional, sin embargo). este no
- 00:29:664 (3) - Ctrl+G no :/
- 00:36:950 (4) - Ctrl+G ^
- 00:46:593 - Agregar círculo. en esta parte estoy siguendo la vocal, asi que no :3
- 00:47:450 - Misma ^ ^
- 00:48:307 - Misma ^ ^
- 00:52:379 (8) - Ctrl+G eso arruina el pattern, asi que no
- 00:53:450 - Agregar círculo. vocal
- 00:54:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ¿Qué opinás de este "pattern"? buena idea, pero quiero matener este pattern para que sea consistente con 02:17:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - asi que no
- 00:56:879 - Agregar círculo. vocal
- 00:57:736 (4) - Yo haría este slider más corto para poder agregar un círculo en 00:58:164 - ¿qué te parece? vocal
- 01:02:021 - Agregar círculo. ^
- 01:07:164 - Misma ^ ^
- 01:10:593 - Misma ^ ^
- 01:17:450 - ¿Agregar círculo? Hmmm, ¡pensalo! el mapeo del mapa esta mayormente basado en la vocal
- 01:31:164 - Misma ^ ^
- 01:32:879 - Misma ^ ^
- 01:34:593 - Misma ^ ^
- 01:38:021 - Misma ^ ^
- 01:38:879 (4) - Lo que te decía antes, si querés acortás el slider para agregar una nota en 01:39:307 ^
- 01:39:736 (6) - Misma ^ ^
- 01:44:879 - Agregar círculo. ^
- 01:53:021 - Agregar cículo en: x:432 y:232 el beat es muy bajo, daria inconsistencia con el mappeo que le estoy dando a esa parte, asi que no
- 01:53:450 - Misma ^ en: x:464 y:72 ^
- 01:56:664 (2) - La simetría es correcta, pero... ¿qué opinás de un Ctrl+G aquí? me gusta el pattern asi
- 01:59:879 - Agregar círculo. lo mismo que 01:53:021 -
- 02:08:664 (2) - ¿Qué opinas de esto? no, da inconsisencia a los anteriores y no tiene sentido
- 02:11:236 (5,1) - Hmm, no me gusta. Quizás Ctrl+G en 02:11:664 (1) - pero tendrías que cambiar lo que sigue. no, me gusta asi
- 02:12:307 - Agregar círculo. los problemas con los espacios en blanco no los voy a arreglar
- 02:15:736 - Misma ^
- 02:19:164 - Misma ^
- 02:21:736 (1) - Hacé el slider más corto para poder agregar un círculo al 02:22:164
- 02:26:021 - Agregar círculo.
- 02:27:950 (6) - Cambiar por 2 sliders:
- 02:31:164 - Agregar círculo.
- 02:32:021 - Misma ^
- 02:32:879 - Misma ^
- 02:41:664 (6) - Ctrl+G \
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> buena idea, fix~
/- 02:42:093 (7) - Ctrl+G /
- 02:43:164 (2,3,4) - Fijate esto que se me ocurrió: no, porque el hit de los sliders mantiene enfoque en la vocal (que este caso seria en la division roja (1/2)
- 02:55:164 - Agregar círculo.
- 03:00:307 - Misma ^
- 03:07:164 - Misma ^
- 03:08:879 - Misma ^
- 03:18:950 (2) - Ctrl+G no
- 03:19:807 (4) - Ctrl+G ^
- 03:22:164 - Agregar círculo.
- 03:29:664 (2,3,4) - Podrías agregar más spacing le añadi mas espacio en (2) y (3) pero no en (4), para mi esta bien asi
- 03:54:093 - Agregá un círculo y añadile el hitsound "Finish" (O bien presioná la tecla "E"). vocal
- 04:07:807 - Misma ^
- 04:18:093 - Misma ^
- 04:28:379 - Misma ^
- 04:42:093 - Misma ^
- 04:43:164 - Agregar círculo.
- 04:44:021 - Misma ^
- 04:44:879 - Misma ^
- 05:02:879 - Agregar círculo y metele los 3 Hitsounds posibles, en mi opinión suena muy bien. suena bien, pero seria unrankeable (en la dificultad hard, despues de un spinner, tiene que tener un tiempo de recuperacion de al menos 1 beat de BPM (de la division blanca)
- 05:10:593 - Agregar círculo.
- 05:12:307 - Misma ^
- 05:14:021 - Misma ^
- 05:16:379 (7) - Acá me surgió la duda de si le pusiste el spacing a propósito a no. ¿Por qué no lo hiciste con los anteriores patterns? porque quise dejar lo mejor para el final :3
- 05:17:450 - Agregar círculo.
- 05:21:093 (4) - Ctrl+G no
- 05:24:307 - Agregar círculo.
- 05:26:021 - Misma ^
- 05:27:736 - Misma ^
- 05:29:021 - Misma ^
- 05:29:450 - Misma ^
- 05:29:879 - Misma ^
- 05:28:807 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Agregar Hitsound "Clap".
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thx you for modding!Minakami Yuki wrote:
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- Just some complaints.
- My personal suggestions.
- Highly recommended.
- Unrankable, you have to fix it.
GeneralChristmas
- sorry but I'm quite unsure about the metadata(chinese network is limitted to visit outside), can you offer the original website or video to me?
- Delete "GobouP - White Christmas (CSLMVenezuela).osb" since your username had been changed. oops... fixed~
... nothing to say, enjoyable map. thx, the style was inspired by you <3
- The use of hitnormal is quite loud for me... the drum sounds better. or use this instead: http://puu.sh/fB4VN/5bce8c2285.wav sounds much better, thx, fix~
- 00:51:525 (6,1) - not stack?
- 00:58:383 (5) - ctrl+g? no, looks weird imo of that way
call me back
Minakami Yuki wrote:
~Recheck~
- The romanised title should be: "White*Christmas" , you should use * to take the place of ☆ in the title. don't supose what the unicode caracters have to be skipped?:
irc what says another thingwell, if this is wrong, fixed then~2015-02-06 20:49 CSLM: hii
2015-02-06 20:51 jonathanlfj: hii
2015-02-06 21:04 CSLM: can i ask you something?
2015-02-06 21:05 jonathanlfj: sure
2015-02-06 21:05 CSLM: ACTION is editing H_G Remixed by Mili - Past the Stargazing Seazon [Insane]
2015-02-06 21:06 CSLM: this is the original artist: H△G Remixed by Mili
2015-02-06 21:06 CSLM: i dunno what put in the unicode space
2015-02-06 21:06 jonathanlfj: lolol
2015-02-06 21:06 jonathanlfj: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/249904 3L, mariapolo - WARNING!]
2015-02-06 21:06 jonathanlfj: follow the same convention here
2015-02-06 21:07 jonathanlfj: 3L・maria♂polo -> 3L, mariapolo
2015-02-06 21:07 CSLM: alright, then i have to put like artist "HG Remixed by Mili"?
2015-02-06 21:09 jonathanlfj: yes
2015-02-06 21:09 CSLM: ok, thx- Just saying, why not make a lyric sb? i was thinking put ones, but is fine how is it imo
damn, fixed both ;w;Xgor wrote:
Xgor's SB check.
Due to that you changed the title you now have two osb Files. Remove GobouP - White Christmas (CSLM).osb
Also while you are at it, I strongly suggest you storyboard the background and fade it in and out instead of using a black image.
If you do it that way you will save quite some SB load
It's explained how to disable the background here (t/55177)
Anyways gonna pop this for now.