ExUsagi wrote:

small check because mfw when i play...

mania diff :

00:56:916 (56916|6,57396|4,57876|6,58356|6) - idk, you may add 1 more notes to emphasize the horn / synth thingy..
yep, i got the sound, but no XD i cant add more note especially here 00:56:916 -
the special sound is 00:57:396 (57396|4) - hitsounded like this , while 00:57:556 (57556|4,57716|4) - the other two is not
just to let u know that i understand what u suggest ^^, thanks but no


03:19:340 (199340|4,199340|2) - still unable to understand why don't you put this in 03:19:447 - ...
and many other...
hmm,now i put more consistency into that....

03:40:019 (220019|1,220019|0,220019|2,220019|4,220019|6,220019|5) - .... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3400883
last warn, you put 6 holds at once while there's no supporting sound on it, which definitely affect gameplay and technical aspect (nuff said quality)..
the host music / bga doesn't even *BANG* enough for players to play & feel the beat on that spot, meanwhile you left each spot in 03:40:019 -, 03:40:126 - & 03:40:233 - empty, although they has same cue sound that you don't layer at all..
sure, forget bout those single sound XD changed into mapping other sound instead ^^


03:40:876 (220876|0) - i hear this start at 03:40:769 -
03:50:733 (230733|0,231590|1) - oh well, some of these LNs in this part (and so on) doesn't snaps to the beat at all.. becareful & re-check the snapping
04:33:476 (273476|5,273532|6) - can you ctrl + j this?
sure things, and ive made them as close as possible to perfect consistency now...
( still hating a perfect consistency stuff can be determine by note amount and can be copy pasted orz )

AustinsGuitar wrote:

I have to say this because i feel like it will drive you to create and rank this beautiful map.
I LOVE THIS MAP NOW! it is 100x better than it was before, and i truly believe that this will be one of the greatest ranked maps in osu.
i could even see this as a hd map for OWC.
please continue to craft this master peace )
have a good day~!

Blocko wrote:

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Mod inside

03:12:376 - I bet you made this on purpose.


umm well yea XD its additional note for kick sound that makes it total 4 note
for the LN it represent the bass from the music, its quite long sound thou, so no change for all
they are all consistent enough


04:49:896 - Add another note on 6 for increased impact.
Sure ^^/

05:11:032 - to 05:11:714 - I think this part is actually in 1/8. Using 1/6 just doesn't really follow the drums in this section, so I highly recommend using 1/8 for this one.

Blocko, can u ask QAT about this? ive ask around but im sure it was 1/6
but some said, its 1/6 then 1/8 , it got increased speed halfway till the end...

Poke me back if you have this applied.

TheBronyGames wrote:

AR9 just feels too slow for this map, try changing it to AR9.5-AR10

1. drum-hitclap8.wav and pause-overlay.jpg files are unused, so use them or delete them.
2. The delay is over 5ms in those hitsounds, so fix them: scg_a5.wav, a2s.wav, lr3_bassdroppdgx.wav, drum-hitnormal99.wav, drum-hitclap7.wav, drum-hitwhistle6.wav, soft-hitclap20.wav
3. Some hitsounds last shorter than 100ms: lr_tom hit 2.wav (lasts about 80 seconds), a2s.wav (lasts about 45 seconds)
4. I guess there is some storyboard in the beatmap but there is no lr2_hato file, lol.

• There are some unsnapped timing lines in yout difficulty. This kind of thing isn't anything harmful in o!s mode, but Blocko told me every timing line must be snapped properly otherwise you can get rekt, so please snap the lines. D:

1. 01:21:273
2. 01:21:753
3. 01:23:673
4. 01:25:593
5. 01:27:513

1. There is one doubled timing point at 01:33:724 - in your diff (red timing point and a green line but the green one doesn't change the speed of the sliders).

2015-09-19 15:39 Kuo Kyoka: okay i got it
2015-09-19 15:39 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/kgrij/879a028abd.png
2015-09-19 15:40 Kuo Kyoka: since Raika remove those hitsound but it's not probably removed well so it's still on there
2015-09-19 15:41 Kuo Kyoka: ask Raika to fixs those, 100% removed! "LR2_HatO" mean like removed but still on there (i think this must be fixs this bug) and "LR2_HatO.wav" mean using it

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file

LordRaika wrote:

since i was responsible for most of the SB particle, im checking them now...

Before the mod, here is some highlight of awesome stuff :
00:12:276 - Nice Heart that actually form "ME" character hha
00:20:436 - Nice loop and most everything around here is ^^b

most breakdown part is also well timed.

02:54:168 - YES, YES, this part and forward, just as planned...
Nice extra colourized lighting on dubstep part
04:06:260 - ^^b


here is some thoughts to finalize this into one of the best SB >w< :

1. 1)u havent use the "Opening SFX.mp3" that i gave you?
   if you want to use it, simply add this script to *.osb(yeah supposed to be manual since its negative offset)
   

   Sample,-18000,0,"Opening SFX.mp3",100
   
   under this bracket
   //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
   //Storyboard Sound Samples
   (here)

   supposed to be around -18scd since the SFX is only around 18scd
   -also, delete the file on SB\Opening SFX.mp3
   (im going to remake one with better volume and u should put it on song folder together with hitsound file)
   
2. 2)00:50:676 - this 1/2 , you can add some effect like blinking/stutter/shake or stuff
3. 3)01:22:356 - rotate this by 90? or -90? to make it different from 00:41:556 -
4. 4)move the Background5 from 01:33:724 - to here 01:30:724 - , while starting with 0 opacity till 50
   then instantly to 100% here 01:33:724 - (just to make things smoother and better than simple black)
5. 5)for dubstep part, your "untitled fdf.png" sprite doesnt works really nice here while
   -its supposed to start/appear not from bottom , but middle line(of the "center shape")
   or from the "center shape" 's horizon towards the top
   also hopefully this untitled fdf is behind equalizer right and left, and behind center shape and the glow.
   -its best not to dump the circle along with the line light, just the light(group of it)
   well, i could remake this for you >w<
6. 6)04:08:078 - this part is nice but , tbh... its too fast to read it and we still have a few strong beat that have nothing to display...
   here is some suggestion :
   04:09:896 - display the previous 2 item again here... (beatmap by & Fatfan Kolek)
   this time, its scaling from small to a bit bigger
   04:11:487 - guest mapper
   04:11:942 - , 04:12:396 - , 04:12:851 - 3 GDers here for each of it
   04:18:760 - for this, i think it cant be help for this to blank, XD haha
   but you could spam 1 fog towards top left
   1 fog towards bottom right
   1 fog towards top right
   1 fog towards bottom left
   (this makes four and we are done here)
7. 00:43:596 - add another ME!ME!ME! font here? this time, from left to right and its flipped vertical
   to fill some blank BG on bottom half.
   
8. i also have found the caused of huge load,
   err yeah its because of my sprite "dimension size" is too big (1366x768)

To sum up, *phew...* just done more stuff :
>>>here is the update file<<<

-now you only have to reposition the "y" axis of stair1-4 and stairglow1-4 and center shape. XD

-delete the opening sfx.mp3 from sb, and add the script to osb.

-put the new opening sfx.mp3 and hopefully you dont mind readjust timing of your opening since -27scd
into around -19 scd, this time, make it faster... and the roomfull.jpg, can have a bit zoomed, and became zoomed out
(better than static) , and hopefully the buffer sound of the mp3 finally match your buffer SB hehe XD

-rescale or reposition the animation here 00:40:596 - (i jst remake them for consistent colour and size)

-change from which "y" axis the untitle fdf.png should start

-after this, if you still want to add some effect, you could use LR_Circle to spam where the light goes (above the center shape)
and random place. but in small size... an effect like you did here 00:09:116 -



Note:if i still have time before this getting ranked, i will get rid some white pixel around the outer image of "AnmV2" animation
doing this will be a bit time consuming but i will certainly do it for a better image quality , (no more annoying little white pixel)

^^b awesome stuff...
good luck, hope i didnt missed anything.
ah btw i think.... i will do the circle animation around dubstep part to emphasize the wooble. (aaaa but it will take some time)

arviejhay wrote:

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It would be better to config the color of the title
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Changing_Title_Text

the appearance of the title and artist are good but the colour is plain.
i'm afraid i can't do it because i dont know how.

Best color fit for the artist is teal and the title is purple.

LordRaika wrote:

and arvie, i have 2 final note after u update from fatfan :
-i was wondering if you can make use of this additional Gear sprite on dubstep wooble here
03:37:340 - , 03:37:662 - , 03:38:304 - , 03:38:519 - ,
03:40:769 - , 03:41:090 - , 03:41:412 - , 03:41:733 - and so on
by adding the gear on the top most left/right part then rotate or something , fast slow , disappear, appear, idk XD ahaha
but i just think the gear stuff 'might' fits there.... (the gear is place on only shows around 1/4 of it because it was place like in corner,
err something like Blu's SB?)
.

ExUsagi wrote:

did you just move the video into the storyboard or what!?
i can't load the storyboard properly in my notebook, too much osb code, i wonder if its possible to reduce the code line or w/e
hh XD , we use the story of the video, trying to animated it using 2d material... OwO
ehm Usagi, some note for HIGH 5-6x load, is due to "HUGE" dimension material in used for the SB

for example : while the WHITE flashy image is appear, which has full resolution , which is HUGE, increase the load...
so its like we almost cant do anything bout it.... while i already reduce most sprite dimension as fits as possible



[storyboard]
adults material / no-safe for work imaginary might not safe for rankability, because yha.. :^)
00:15:876 - the cut-scene might works better if you follow the clap, or something like http://puu.sh/lhAKd.png
wigglish bewbs.. .-.

BUT, its bikini, osu never forbid bikin, unless its a panty shot, correct me if i was wrong


02:48:390 - i remember the girl closes her eyes and fading out somehow, it would be neat if you grab some more sprite for it :^)

i will try to make one soon one XD


for the mania map itself, omg i glad those LNs makes more sense now... xD
lemme continue to give hope for the mania diff somewhere later.. and it would be neat if someone edit the watermark in the sprites because its ewwww (i could do that)
sure thing , pm me in-game anytime >w<

1. 04:36:714 light_blah.png has a lot of unnecessary space between each point. You could use separated dots and you'll reduce around 2.0x of SB load (Take caution here since the SB load is always 5.0x +)
2. 00:15:556 You can reduce the size of W.png since there are unnecesary extra space being used out of playfield
   
   SPOILER

   
3. BurstCircle has a looot of unnecesary transparent space. Just cut it in Photoshop or any other image editing software
4. It looks like there are some corrupted codes since it crashes sometimes. Weird stuff since I did storyboard with much more lines of code (4728 lines of code only) ppy's update
5. Well That's all, this is the most important part to be optimized 04:35:351

Good luck with your beatmap!

XinCrin wrote:

Some Suggestions to reduce the huge SB load

1. 04:36:714 light_blah.png has a lot of unnecessary space between each point. You could use separated dots and you'll reduce around 2.0x of SB load (Take caution here since the SB load is always 5.0x +) instead, i remove the light_blah.png flashing light and shorter the time of the W.png flash because i dont know how to rotate the separeted dots like the light_blah.png rotation, even i use sgl editor
2. 00:15:556 You can reduce the size of W.png since there are unnecesary extra space being used out of playfield reduce
   
   SPOILER

   
3. BurstCircle has a looot of unnecesary transparent space. Just cut it in Photoshop or any other image editing software cut it
4. It looks like there are some corrupted codes since it crashes sometimes. Weird stuff since I did storyboard with much more lines of code (4728 lines of code only) ppy's update
5. Well That's all, this is the most important part to be optimized 04:35:351 optimized it maybe

No kds

Good luck with your beatmap!

caren_sk wrote:

GO!GO!GO!