1. Easy (1,38 stars, 87 notes)
2. Hard (2,65 stars, 196 notes)
3. Insane (3,61 stars, 256 notes)
4. Normal (1,68 stars, 131 notes)

1. I think you should add "christmas" and "xmas" to the tags since this song is a christmas song

1. 00:01:854 (2,3) - I still highly suggest you to fix the blanket here, it looks kinda bad right now orz
2. 00:07:392 (3) - Add a whistle on slider's end, it fits with music imo
3. 00:48:931 (4) - I think you missed a clap at slider's end, i think you should add it o.o

1. 00:25:392 (4) - how about making ctrl+g on this, it will follow the vocal much better, and it'll have nice flow as well o.o
2. 00:32:777 (4) - ^

1. Tags are inconsistent between the difficulties, make sure to fix them properly.
2. Use an higher Stack Leniency at least on Easy and Normal difficulty.
3. Add some Audio Lead-In on every difficulty if possible.
4. Try to find a better Christmas Background if you can.

1. 01:10:623 (3,4,5) - Small spacing inconsistency, just move a bit (4).
2. 01:23:084 (4) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.

1. HP Drain 4 would play fine, I'd use it.

1. Same as Normal, just use HP 6 here.

1. 00:21:931 (7) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change, also due to the jumpy pattern.
2. 00:38:084 (6) - Same as above, though there's no jump here.
3. 01:11:315 (2,3) - I kinda dislike the jump here since the part goes calm, try to make the spacing smaller here if possible.

1. OD8 is way too high for such a relaxing song, reduce it to 7 instead.
2. Same goes for the AR, 8 would be great already.
3. Also HP Drain would be enough as 7 too.

1. 00:55:392 (1,2,3) - This part has a pretty high emphasis on the song, I'd use some jumps here instead of close spacing, would play better.
2. 01:04:392 (5,6) - Sounds really weird, this blue tick feels out of place and too random, just reduce the slider on the previous red tick.
3. 01:05:084 (1,2) - ^ Same as above, though this one seems to sound good enough actually.
4. 01:23:777 (4,5,6) - The spacing of this triplet isn't perfectly straight, not sure if you did it on purpose.

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hey Mochi owo/

General:

1. I think you should add "christmas" and "xmas" to the tags since this song is a christmas song

added

Easy:

1. 00:01:854 (2,3) - I still highly suggest you to fix the blanket here, it looks kinda bad right now orz k
2. 00:07:392 (3) - Add a whistle on slider's end, it fits with music imo nah, its weird lol
3. 00:48:931 (4) - I think you missed a clap at slider's end, i think you should add it o.o yes

Hard:

1. 00:25:392 (4) - how about making ctrl+g on this, it will follow the vocal much better, and it'll have nice flow as well o.o nope for this two,. it's not exactly the flow i want
2. 00:32:777 (4) - ^

That's all i have orz, this is the shortest mod ever lol anyways. Good luck with this Mochi <3

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. Tags are inconsistent between the difficulties, make sure to fix them properly.
2. Use an higher Stack Leniency at least on Easy and Normal difficulty.
3. Add some Audio Lead-In on every difficulty if possible.
4. Try to find a better Christmas Background if you can.

fixed everything, but i cant find BG :#

~Easy~

1. 01:10:623 (3,4,5) - Small spacing inconsistency, just move a bit (4). k for both
2. 01:23:084 (4) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.

~Normal~

1. HP Drain 4 would play fine, I'd use it.

nope, it would be a bit high imo

~Hard~

1. Same as Normal, just use HP 6 here.

its already habit for me using 5,5 at HP for Hard diff lol

1. 00:21:931 (7) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change, also due to the jumpy pattern. it's per 2 stanza here
2. 00:38:084 (6) - Same as above, though there's no jump here. added for this one
3. 01:11:315 (2,3) - I kinda dislike the jump here since the part goes calm, try to make the spacing smaller here if possible.k

~Insane~

1. OD8 is way too high for such a relaxing song, reduce it to 7 instead.
2. Same goes for the AR, 8 would be great already.
3. Also HP Drain would be enough as 7 too.

reduced all diff setting, but not really same with you xD

1. 00:55:392 (1,2,3) - This part has a pretty high emphasis on the song, I'd use some jumps here instead of close spacing, would play better. i prefer this way
2. 01:04:392 (5,6) - Sounds really weird, this blue tick feels out of place and too random, just reduce the slider on the previous red tick. i can hear clap here, o.o same for below
3. 01:05:084 (1,2) - ^ Same as above, though this one seems to sound good enough actually.
4. 01:23:777 (4,5,6) - The spacing of this triplet isn't perfectly straight, not sure if you did it on purpose. ups my mistake

Enjoy this Christmas gift :3

Kocari wrote:

You are just too good.

00:02:777 (3) - I suggest making that angle a little more parallel to the note? (Fixed) http://puu.sh/d8XsL/f0af5dcad3.jpg
00:06:469 (2) - I feel like a 2 tick to the right would be better because the previous slider end can be directly centered (Fixed) http://puu.sh/d8XzM/6ab2571813.jpg
00:54:469 (2) - Move slider end 1 tick to the right for parallel spacing
01:11:546 (5) - Spaced weird at this part what's the weird side ? lol
others fixed
[Normal]

Nothing I can tell

[Hard]

00:02:777 (4) - Slider end can be moved to the right 1 tick and snapped to get the good blanket feeling
That's about it k

I swear man... Shortest mod I have ever done. So you know what (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻ take my star

1. 01:24:700 (T) this kiai should be consistency for all diff's (only insane have
2. 00:26:315 (3) - (For all diff's) there no whistle ? I feel the melody is really high there also I think you missing add here

1. 00:27:008 (6) - this slider move to x:448 y:336 because this will be same space with 00:26:777 (5,7), if you do that, in end point change place to x:508 y:288, example this link http://puu.sh/diEqB/f53e50e506.jpg, if you don't like that slider place, you change place you own or do overlaps
2. 00:38:084 (4) - just saying, this could be NC because the rhythm is change that I can is drum, melody and beat, is like in 00:15:931 (1) IMo
3. 00:44:777 (6) - (nazi) 1 grid 1 left to align this slider 00:44:315 (5)

1. 00:03:238 (1) - this could be remove new color, to keep consistency from you style pattern
2. 00:12:700 (1,2) - intentional or not, this slider can be improve blanket with 00:13:392 (2) ?

1. 00:01:854 (2) - this isn't be NC for consistency other diff's ? I know the 00:00:700 (1) is alone but well

1. Artist needs to be fixed
   artist: SAKURA＊TRICK
   romanized: SAKURA*TRICK
   
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2. offset sounds slightly on the early side to me, ill get some people to check though Pishi got around +5 Cloudsplash got like +8
   so something in the middle would do fine.
3. Isn't normal-hitnormal3 just the default normal hitnormal lol
4. 00:32:315 - for places like this (example from insane diff) you can hear the sliderslide sound, not sure if this is intentional or not.
   if you want to silence the slider slide here as well then add a normal-sliderslide too

1. 01:11:546 (6) - add NC for SV change?
   00:12:008 (3) - ^
2. 00:57:238 (3) - NC for kiai?
3. if you'd like you can improve these blankets too 01:13:623 (1,2) - 00:09:238 (1,2) - but doesn't really matter
4. why is your stack leniency so low?
5. 01:15:238 - unsnapped greenline?

1. 00:12:008 (6) - NC for sv change?
   01:11:546 (3) - ^
2. 00:03:238 (1,2) - swap nc? follows music better also you have nc at 00:03:469 - for insane as well
   alternatively i think you can just remove nc 00:03:238 (1) - that will keep your 2 measure consistency
3. 00:19:277 (1,4) - uh swap nc here too to keep your 2 measure consistency
4. 01:15:469 (1,2) - swap nc makes more sense to the music here imo
5. 00:19:161 - i prefer you add a note here since 3/4 gaps are a bit weird to play also to be consistent with 00:17:315 (2) -
6. 00:57:238 (3) - probably should nc for the start of kiai
7. 00:57:238 - nc is off here, if you want every 2 measures. starting from kiai it should be at 00:57:238 - 01:00:700 - 01:04:392 - and itll fix itself at 01:08:084 -
8. same as insane, why is your stack leniency so low?
9. There's also probably alot of useless green lines for this diff that i suggest you take a look through and delete

1. 00:08:084 (5,1) - not too sure about this overlap, if you want to keep it, we can get some opinions on it first. should be fine but better safe than sorry i suppose?
2. Also probably multiple unused green lines, will be nice if you can check them for me :>

1. 00:55:392 (3,1) - imo you shouldn't use 1/2 for easy diff maybe you can just delete 00:56:084 (1) -
2. 01:10:623 (3,4,5) - definitely want to avoid this one, clicking 1/2 twice is pretty tricky for beginner players. i think this rhythm can work
   
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3. Unecessary green lines etc.

Kibbleru wrote:

[General]

1. Artist needs to be fixed
   artist: SAKURA＊TRICK
   romanized: SAKURA*TRICK
   
   SPOILER

   
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2. offset sounds slightly on the early side to me, ill get some people to check though Pishi got around +5 Cloudsplash got like +8
   so something in the middle would do fine. ill go for +6 then xD
3. Isn't normal-hitnormal3 just the default normal hitnormal lol nope its different, it has slightly drum hit on it.
4. 00:32:315 - for places like this (example from insane diff) you can hear the sliderslide sound, not sure if this is intentional or not.
   if you want to silence the slider slide here as well then add a normal-sliderslide too

[Insane]

1. 01:11:546 (6) - add NC for SV change? ok
   00:12:008 (3) - ^ nope, this one is not pretty noticeable and i dont like single nc ><
2. 00:57:238 (3) - NC for kiai? keep it
3. if you'd like you can improve these blankets too 01:13:623 (1,2) - 00:09:238 (1,2) - but doesn't really matter fixed
4. why is your stack leniency so low? i like it, i've used it in many of my maps o.o
5. 01:15:238 - unsnapped greenline? fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:12:008 (6) - NC for sv change? nope for same reason as Insane
   01:11:546 (3) - ^ dded
2. 00:03:238 (1,2) - swap nc? follows music better also you have nc at 00:03:469 - for insane as well
   alternatively i think you can just remove nc 00:03:238 (1) - that will keep your 2 measure consistency
3. 00:19:277 (1,4) - uh swap nc here too to keep your 2 measure consistency uhhh i make this part become 1 measure so its consistency now
4. 01:15:469 (1,2) - swap nc makes more sense to the music here imo nope
5. 00:19:161 - i prefer you add a note here since 3/4 gaps are a bit weird to play also to be consistent with 00:17:315 (2) - added note
6. 00:57:238 (3) - probably should nc for the start of kiai
7. 00:57:238 - nc is off here, if you want every 2 measures. starting from kiai it should be at 00:57:238 - 01:00:700 - 01:04:392 - and itll fix itself at 01:08:084 - nope for both for same reason as Insane lol
8. same as insane, why is your stack leniency so low?
9. There's also probably alot of useless green lines for this diff that i suggest you take a look through and delete honestly it didn't effect the gameplay,i'd like to keep it if possible ><

[Normal]

1. 00:08:084 (5,1) - not too sure about this overlap, if you want to keep it, we can get some opinions on it first. should be fine but better safe than sorry i suppose? fixed
2. Also probably multiple unused green lines, will be nice if you can check them for me :>

[Easy]

1. 00:55:392 (3,1) - imo you shouldn't use 1/2 for easy diff maybe you can just delete 00:56:084 (1) -
2. 01:10:623 (3,4,5) - definitely want to avoid this one, clicking 1/2 twice is pretty tricky for beginner players. i think this rhythm can work well if you see Andrea's Easy on the ranked ver they're many 1/2 stuffs, since you insist. fixed both then
   
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3. Unecessary green lines etc.

For now i've just pointed out the major issues, ill get the minor hitsound etc when i recheck.

also can u tell me if you used the hitsound copier or not owo

also pls reply this mod lol