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dj-Nate - Theory of Everything

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Stjpa
886 posts
Joined July 2013
Stjpa
[Easy]

• 00:13:846 (4,1) - This is snapped too close together. You should map Easy's with 1/1 only.
• 00:18:461 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time.
• 00:23:538 (1) - I think it's better if you start at the downbeat there. You don't have the problem with the recovery time then. Also you should never let sliders end at a downbeat anyways.
• 00:51:692 (1,1) - Also not enough recovery time. However, maybe just do breaks there. Spinners are just good at the ending of a map imo.


[Normal]

• AR5, OD4 fits better.
• 00:29:538 (1) - This is something you should avoid in a Normal. One reverse arrow is fine, but two will confuse newer players.
• 00:31:384 (1) - ^
• 01:05:538 (2) - ^
• 01:09:230 (2) - ^
• 01:09:230 (2,1,2) - They're touching. Looks really ugly.
• 01:11:076 (2,1) - ^
• 01:18:923 (5) - You know the problem already.


[Hard]

• 00:08:153 (2,3) - I would use an overlap here.
• 00:14:153 (4,5,6) - Maybe less spacing? This also counts for all the other spaced singletaps. That's shit tons of movement for a Hard.
• 00:44:769 (1,2) - Bit ugly that they are almost touching.


[Insane]

• AR9? 8.5 is very low imo.
• 00:06:923 (4,5,6) - Nothing allows this spacing here.
• 00:51:692 (1,1) - This is too close imo.
SkyDevil
1,771 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

Stjpa wrote:

[Normal]

• AR5, OD4 fits better.
• 00:29:538 (1) - This is something you should avoid in a Normal. One reverse arrow is fine, but two will confuse newer players. ---I normally wouldve agreed but since this song is 1/3 and literally every short slider with reverse arrow does this I decide to let it stay for now..
• 00:31:384 (1) - ^
• 01:05:538 (2) - ^
• 01:09:230 (2) - ^
• 01:09:230 (2,1,2) - They're touching. Looks really ugly. ---spaced them a bit out
• 01:11:076 (2,1) - ^
• 01:18:923 (5) - You know the problem already.


[Hard]

• 00:08:153 (2,3) - I would use an overlap here. ---I think its fine atm ; ;
• 00:14:153 (4,5,6) - Maybe less spacing? This also counts for all the other spaced singletaps. That's shit tons of movement for a Hard. ---I already think the diff is too easy so I dont want to make it even more easier (the bpm is really low so it should be ok)
• 00:44:769 (1,2) - Bit ugly that they are almost touching. ---I moved it a bit


[Insane]

• AR9? 8.5 is very low imo. ---Not too much of a fan of it but I heard its really popular lately to use higher ar so why not i guess ;;
• 00:06:923 (4,5,6) - Nothing allows this spacing here. ---its to build up, cause when the music gets louder i use bigger spacing as well
• 00:51:692 (1,1) - This is too close imo. ---Im sure its ok to do tho
thank you ;o
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-

shmiklak wrote:

Hi! I am from

Easy
00:01:538 - I think you must make short slider or place 2 circles No cuz the beginning of the song is the calmest part
00:54:461 to 00:54:923 - Maybe make slider? No because there is a rule about spacing between spin and note
Thanks for mod

Stjpa wrote:

[Easy]

• 00:13:846 (4,1) - This is snapped too close together. You should map Easy's with 1/1 only. Yay, you are right, changed into notes
• 00:18:461 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time. considering BPM, is allowed, I'll ask to some BN
• 00:23:538 (1) - I think it's better if you start at the downbeat there. You don't have the problem with the recovery time then. Also you should never let sliders end at a downbeat anyways. O.o It's actually on 00:23:538 -
• 00:51:692 (1,1) - Also not enough recovery time. However, maybe just do breaks there. Spinners are just good at the ending of a map imo. As I said before there isn't an issue for BPM, I ranked a beatmap with the same space between spin and note.
Thanks for mod~~

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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: toe.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 53538
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 7384,14887
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.14

[Metadata]
Title:Theory of Everything
TitleUnicode:Theory of Everything
Artist:dj-Nate
ArtistUnicode:dj-Nate
Creator:SkyDevil
Version:Sh1n1's Easy
Source:
Tags:toe geometry dash sh1n1
BeatmapID:614691
BeatmapSetID:235682

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Asking for more mods~~ :3
_handholding
3,109 posts
Joined April 2014
_handholding
hi, from my modding queue

[easy]
00:05:538 (3) - finish slider at 00:06:769
00:08:307 (2) - make into a reverse slider, it suits the music imo
like this
00:10:461 (4) - add a note
00:49:846 (3) - you dont need to change this slider since its already perfectlt shaped, but in future you can make curves with only 1 point for minimal effort
like this

[normal]
00:00:000 to 00:20:307 - I think the rhythm doesnt fit the music at all really imo opinion as the notes are only on white ticks. maybe remap the rhythm for this part?

[Insane]
00:36:461 (2) - teach me how to slider art senpai

yh thats all i could find. I hope this mod was useful. GL
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

hi, from my modding queue

[easy]
00:05:538 (3) - finish slider at 00:06:769 nope cuz I want to make simple this easy avoiding distance issues, could be confusing for newbies
00:08:307 (2) - make into a reverse slider, it suits the music imo Yeah, sounds good but will be to close with 00:09:230 (3) -
like this

00:10:461 (4) - add a note no cuz I need more little breaks at certain places :3
00:49:846 (3) - you dont need to change this slider since its already perfectlt shaped, but in future you can make curves with only 1 point for minimal effort omg, my bad xd, I'm totally agree, thanks
like this

yh thats all i could find. I hope this mod was useful. GL
Thanks Nathan
Last edited by -Sh1n1- , edited 1 time in total.
SkyDevil
1,771 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

hi, from my modding queue

[normal]
00:00:000 to 00:20:307 - I think the rhythm doesnt fit the music at all really imo opinion as the notes are only on white ticks. maybe remap the rhythm for this part? ---Err its the only way I could fix it atm since using something else might be too fast for beginners

[Insane]
00:36:461 (2) - teach me how to slider art senpai ---isnt it fancy c8

yh thats all i could find. I hope this mod was useful. GL

Didnt change anything on my part but maybe sh1n1 actually changed something? Still thanks! :O

I didnt update easy yet owo dont click on update automatically

EDIT: I jst realized that u managed to find this mod xDD I was already wondering where he came from xD thanksss
Last edited by SkyDevil , edited 1 time in total.
Xelasto
728 posts
Joined May 2014
Xelasto
Incoming mod from The Gentleman's Modding Queue! :)

Sh1n1's Easy
00:30:461 (2) - Curve more
00:32:769 (5,2) - Are these the same shape?
00:36:000 (4) - Change this shape. Looks really odd
00:37:384 - This is a really strong beat. Are you SURE no note?

Very good Easy mode. Very few things at all. :P

Normal
00:01:846 (1) - This shape is too curvy.
00:10:153 (3) - Kinda the same thing with this
00:13:846 (5) - No blanket?
00:14:769 (1,2,1) - These slider make an oval not a circle, which makes this pattern weird.
00:18:461 (1) - This shape is also kinda weird cause I expected it to blanket the last note
00:29:538 (1,1) - These are kinda meh because it might confuse beginners
00:33:230 (1,2) - No blanket?
00:36:923 (1) - Curve less
00:38:307 (3,1) - Position 3 more directly below 1
00:41:538 (2,1) - This shape doesn't have much point to it. I suggest changing it or improving the curved parts.
00:55:384 (2,3,1) - This flows oddly. Try a different pattern
01:01:846 (2) - Curve less
01:05:538 (2) - Same thing with the confusion
01:08:307 (1) - Curve less
01:17:538 (4) - Improve this blanket
01:18:923 (5) - Confusion

Very solid normal mode. Good job :D

Hard
00:12:000 (3,4,5) - Either make all of them curvy or straight.
00:14:769 (1) - This is too short to be curvy
00:33:230 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Too many notes. Change it up a bit.
00:46:615 (2,3) - These shapes feel a bit odd. Change them a bit.
00:48:769 (2,3,4,5) - Feels kinda random and doesn't flow well with the rest.
01:02:307 (4,1) - These shapes could be improved
01:04:615 (1,2) - PLEASE no overlap
01:12:000 (1) - Try to make this blanket 3
01:17:538 (1) - This shape is just so weird 0-o IDK maybe it's just me.

Very noice difficulty m8 8-)

Insane
00:16:615 (1,2) - the slight curves at the end ruin the flow.
00:25:538 (3) - This shape is WAY too small to do a zig zag. Change it or at least fix it.
00:26:769 (1,2,3) - Doesn't flow well. Consider Ctrl G'ing 2 and spacing them out.
00:35:076 (1,2,3) - ^
00:38:769 (1,2,3) - I don't see much purpose to using these shapes as they are usually used to blanket circles.
00:45:230 (4,5) - Think of different shapes as the little bends don't really do anything except look weird.
00:48:769 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This long line of notes is not fun to play. Please change.
01:00:461 (3) - Make the whole thing a zig-zag?
01:04:153 (4) - Change shape or improve it.
01:06:923 (2,3,4) - Make this a triangle instead?
01:08:769 (2) - Curve more
01:18:615 (2,3) - Doesn't flow well. Think of a different pattern
01:19:384 (1) - Curve less
01:22:615 (5) - Make this more in the way of 4 so it's easier to come down to.

Nice difficulty. It's pretty fun. Just some of the shapes are not that good.

Overall, this is a nice mapset. It's pretty fun to play and doesn't have many problems. Good luck on getting this ranked. :)
rs_fadeaway
264 posts
Joined May 2010
rs_fadeaway
hi, from my queue~

[Easy]
  1. 00:22:153 - why not map this part?
  2. 00:37:384 - mb here not space
[Normal]
  1. 00:43:384 (2,3,1) - seems not symmetry enough ?
[Insane]
  1. 0:30:923 (3) - this slider is odd :/
  2. 00:36:461 (2) - this slider 1.5x seems not necessary，and i think the sv should same as 00:36:000 (1) - ;and mb it need a NC
  3. 01:06:153 (5) - i think remove the slider and add a note at 01:06:307 - will be better
    its a nice map
seems ok ,so just make a short mod ) GL with rank!
SkyDevil
1,771 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

Xelasto wrote:

Incoming mod from The Gentleman's Modding Queue! :)

Normal
00:01:846 (1) - This shape is too curvy. ---its supposed to be curvy qwq
00:10:153 (3) - Kinda the same thing with this ---dont you just love these sliders
00:13:846 (5) - No blanket? ---fixed
00:14:769 (1,2,1) - These slider make an oval not a circle, which makes this pattern weird. ---I purposely did that so the spacing would be correct ;o
00:18:461 (1) - This shape is also kinda weird cause I expected it to blanket the last note ---uhh changed this as well
00:29:538 (1,1) - These are kinda meh because it might confuse beginners ---Feel like i should take this risk cus players learn fast
00:33:230 (1,2) - No blanket? ---I made it a sort of blanket now owo
00:36:923 (1) - Curve less ---i changed the whole pattern
00:38:307 (3,1) - Position 3 more directly below 1 --- same
00:41:538 (2,1) - This shape doesn't have much point to it. I suggest changing it or improving the curved parts. ---mehhh I kinda like it now qwq
00:55:384 (2,3,1) - This flows oddly. Try a different pattern ---errr tried to fix
01:01:846 (2) - Curve less ---#realslidershavecurves
01:05:538 (2) - Same thing with the confusion ---meh I used it to have some differences in rhythm so i want to keep it
01:08:307 (1) - Curve less --- curves are cool
01:17:538 (4) - Improve this blanket ---changed
01:18:923 (5) - Confusion --- same reason

Very solid normal mode. Good job :D ---Thanks!!

Hard
00:12:000 (3,4,5) - Either make all of them curvy or straight. ---I dont think it matters that much hmm
00:14:769 (1) - This is too short to be curvy ---doesnt it look cool tho c8
00:33:230 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Too many notes. Change it up a bit. ---its supposed to be too much so you'll have to spam tap a bit
00:46:615 (2,3) - These shapes feel a bit odd. Change them a bit. ---I currently dont know something to change it to qwq
00:48:769 (2,3,4,5) - Feels kinda random and doesn't flow well with the rest. ---I can kinda see that... I might consider doing it later but its supposed to reflect the thing that I did in insane
01:02:307 (4,1) - These shapes could be improved ---yeahh changed them
01:04:615 (1,2) - PLEASE no overlap ---idk why but I really like it
01:12:000 (1) - Try to make this blanket 3 ---okay
01:17:538 (1) - This shape is just so weird 0-o IDK maybe it's just me. ---errr yeahhh kinda actually xD changed it

Very noice difficulty m8 8-) --thank you c8

Insane
00:16:615 (1,2) - the slight curves at the end ruin the flow. ---fixed
00:25:538 (3) - This shape is WAY too small to do a zig zag. Change it or at least fix it. ---noooo its cute
00:26:769 (1,2,3) - Doesn't flow well. Consider Ctrl G'ing 2 and spacing them out. ---okay
00:35:076 (1,2,3) - ^ ---I acutally think its kinda ok here
00:38:769 (1,2,3) - I don't see much purpose to using these shapes as they are usually used to blanket circles. ---hmmm tried something else
00:45:230 (4,5) - Think of different shapes as the little bends don't really do anything except look weird. ---rofl I have no idea why i did this but it would otherwise look really boring xD I might fix later
00:48:769 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This long line of notes is not fun to play. Please change. ---errr fineee -A- I remember my friend testplaying and missing all these lol
01:00:461 (3) - Make the whole thing a zig-zag? ---ermmm that mihgt look weirder than it is now so hhhhh ill keep this for now
01:04:153 (4) - Change shape or improve it. ---mini zigzags are cool
01:06:923 (2,3,4) - Make this a triangle instead? ---No i think its better now, as design and flo
01:08:769 (2) - Curve more ---#realslidershavecurves so sure
01:18:615 (2,3) - Doesn't flow well. Think of a different pattern ---I personally think its fine h h
01:19:384 (1) - Curve less ---no
01:22:615 (5) - Make this more in the way of 4 so it's easier to come down to. ---hmmm I wanted it to be like a big finish so i want to keep it ;;;

Nice difficulty. It's pretty fun. Just some of the shapes are not that good. ---Its cause this is the first diff i made xD the 2nd one was normal and the third one was hard,,,, thats why hard probably was the best diff imo

Overall, this is a nice mapset. It's pretty fun to play and doesn't have many problems. Good luck on getting this ranked. :)

Thank you for the mod !!! actually helped me alot

rs_fadeaway wrote:

hi, from my queue~


[Normal]
  1. 00:43:384 (2,3,1) - seems not symmetry enough ? --oh yeah whoops I wanted to fix that myself but I forgot


[Insane]
  1. 0:30:923 (3) - this slider is odd :/ ---meh qwq it reminds me of a candy cane
  2. 00:36:461 (2) - this slider 1.5x seems not necessary，and i think the sv should same as 00:36:000 (1) - ;and mb it need a NC --- no the music indicates something weird so I figured this would work
  3. 01:06:153 (5) - i think remove the slider and add a note at 01:06:307 - will be better ---that wouldnt play well I think
    its a nice map
seems ok ,so just make a short mod ) GL with rank!

Thank you as well, I fixed something owo
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-
:3 yay too many mods~~ I 'll reply tomorrow *-*/
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-

Xelasto wrote:

Incoming mod from The Gentleman's Modding Queue! :)

[Sh1n1's Easy]00:30:461 (2) - Curve more Nope, it will ruin my current blanquet
00:32:769 (5,2) - Are these the same shape? yes, why?
00:36:000 (4) - Change this shape. Looks really odd whyyyy? :c follow the song nicer :3
00:37:384 - This is a really strong beat. Are you SURE no note? Yes because I want to emphasize cymbal sound at 00:36:923 -

Very good Easy mode. Very few things at all. :P

Thanks for mod

rs_fadeaway wrote:

hi, from my queue~

[Easy]
  1. 00:22:153 - why not map this part? cuz I must add a break after spin D:
  2. 00:37:384 - mb here not space as I said on previous mod, I want to emphasize cymbal sound at 00:36:923 -
seems ok ,so just make a short mod ) GL with rank!
Thanks for mod~~

Update~~
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: toe.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 53538
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 7384,14887
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.14

[Metadata]
Title:Theory of Everything
TitleUnicode:Theory of Everything
Artist:dj-Nate
ArtistUnicode:dj-Nate
Creator:SkyDevil
Version:Sh1n1's Easy
Source:
Tags:toe geometry dash sh1n1
BeatmapID:614691
BeatmapSetID:235682

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Update my diff please xD I changed two things, Don't forget to change tag: sh1n1 to -Sh1n1-

time to ask for more mods :3 /me is calling some friends
Atsuro
1,290 posts
Joined January 2013
Atsuro
Hi! Mod requested by -Sh1n1-
Well, it's a quick check since i said i'm not modding right now sooo this will be short :p

[General]
I think that this kiai is unnecesary 00:22:146 - , almost half of the song is kiai right now so consider removing it
The offset should be something like -6 or -7 imo, but the mp3 is cut from the start soooo doing that should take some time :p

[Insane]
There are some slider patterns that can would play and follow the song better if they were changed a bit by adding some circles. Example:
00:33:230 (1,2,3,1,2) - A rhythm pattern like this http://puu.sh/l6JU7/8f48fae757.jpg would make a lot more sense, the stronger beats on the song land on the slider heads making it more fun to play and go well with the song. Try making a pattern like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3904740 these are really fun to play :)
There are some other parts that can be improved this way (01:05:538 (3,4,5) - , 00:26:769 (1,2,3) - etc. basically when a strong beat lands on a slider end)
00:36:461 (2) - This speed up is a little exagerated, i always sliderbreak here and feels a bit troll. Oh, and the blanket can be improved :v)
01:07:230 (4) - No slider slowdown with a cool shape here? It would fit so well :D

The difficulty is nice, the only thing that i didn't like are those slider rhythms, i think you can use more circles to make it more interesting to play.

[Hard]
00:25:230 (5) - This plays really weird, that clap sound you added there has to be clickable because it's a very strong beat. http://puu.sh/l6KLO/244c40d812.jpg Try this rhythm
00:27:384 (5) - ctrl+g would work nice here
00:30:307 (3,4) - This is another weird rhythm, you switch polarity from here 00:29:538 (1,2) - which is confusing. It would work better if the pattern was circle + slider + circle.
00:56:615 (2) - The stronger beat should be emphasized (00:56:769 - This one). Make it clickable (using something like circle + slider with repeat). There are more like this 01:11:384 (2,3) - etc.

The same commentary as the Insane, minus the circles thing

[Normal]
01:19:846 - This needs a note here, why skip it?
01:21:692 - Same

This one is fine, you use a lot of 1/1 but that's how the song is so it's ok

[Sh1n1's Easy]
00:00:923 (2,3) - No estoy seguro del slider 2, a los jugadores nuevos se les dificulta leer ritmos así de complicados, para hacerles más facil la vida puedes extenderlo y volverlo un slider 1/1. Aplica a todos los sliders así del inicio.
00:23:538 (1,2) - Tendría más sentido empezar en el downbeat (línea blanca más larga) estaría mejor ritmicamente.
00:54:923 (1) - Same^

G00D

I hope this helps, GL!
SkyDevil
1,771 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

Atsuro wrote:

Hi! Mod requested by -Sh1n1-https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/260804
Well, it's a quick check since i said i'm not modding right now sooo this will be short :p

[General]
I think that this kiai is unnecesary 00:22:146 - , almost half of the song is kiai right now so consider removing it ---Mehhh it fits with the song and it doesnt break any rule atm tho ;;
The offset should be something like -6 or -7 imo, but the mp3 is cut from the start soooo doing that should take some time :p --meh I honestly dont hear anything weird atm with the offset

[Insane]
There are some slider patterns that can would play and follow the song better if they were changed a bit by adding some circles. Example:
00:33:230 (1,2,3,1,2) - A rhythm pattern like this http://puu.sh/l6JU7/8f48fae757.jpg would make a lot more sense, the stronger beats on the song land on the slider heads making it more fun to play and go well with the song. Try making a pattern like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3904740 these are really fun to play :)
There are some other parts that can be improved this way (01:05:538 (3,4,5) - , 00:26:769 (1,2,3) - etc. basically when a strong beat lands on a slider end) ---hmmm i kinda wanted to make this map really slider based but idk I have changed a few things now
00:36:461 (2) - This speed up is a little exagerated, i always sliderbreak here and feels a bit troll. Oh, and the blanket can be improved :v) --just changed the blanket
01:07:230 (4) - No slider slowdown with a cool shape here? It would fit so well :D ---hmmm that would mean I'd make another wiggly sliders -w- maybe

The difficulty is nice, the only thing that i didn't like are those slider rhythms, i think you can use more circles to make it more interesting to play.

[Hard]
00:25:230 (5) - This plays really weird, that clap sound you added there has to be clickable because it's a very strong beat. http://puu.sh/l6KLO/244c40d812.jpg Try this rhythm --changed it
00:27:384 (5) - ctrl+g would work nice here --kinda want to keep it like this atm cause I dont think it changes much
00:30:307 (3,4) - This is another weird rhythm, you switch polarity from here 00:29:538 (1,2) - which is confusing. It would work better if the pattern was circle + slider + circle. ----chaned
00:56:615 (2) - The stronger beat should be emphasized (00:56:769 - This one). Make it clickable (using something like circle + slider with repeat). There are more like this 01:11:384 (2,3) - etc. ---also cause the diff is very slider based ;; and imo it doesnt play too weird and flows well atm

The same commentary as the Insane, minus the circles thing

[Normal]
01:19:846 - This needs a note here, why skip it? --thought it sounded kinda fun to break the 1/1 spam mhhhhmmhm
01:21:692 - Same -- qwq

This one is fine, you use a lot of 1/1 but that's how the song is so it's ok

I hope this helps, GL!
thank you for the mod :O
phongdai
26 posts
Joined July 2014
phongdai
Nice Map :)

can i push some osu!Mania in this maps ?
LimePixel
184 posts
Joined March 2015
LimePixel
PixelRedstoner's Modding Queue (Sorry for the massive delay *~* I've been busy...)

Easy
00:18:461 (1) - This spinner seems unnecessary.
Everything else is just fine, in my opinion.
Normal
Everything before the first spinner is out of sync with the music. Also, consider using more hitsounds.
Hard
Everything is great here, except for the hitsounds, which need a little more variety.
Insane
00:15:692 (3,4,1,2,3) - This part, the sliders don't sync with the music and they're too long, in my opinion. Add more circles in between instead of the sliders or make them shorter.

This is a great beatmap, but it lacks variety of hitsounds. I hope you find this helpful. :)
SkyDevil
1,771 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

phongdai wrote:

Nice Map :)

can i push some osu!Mania in this maps ?
Im not really interested in having osu mania diffs sorry ;;



PixelRedstoner wrote:

PixelRedstoner's Modding Queue (Sorry for the massive delay *~* I've been busy...)

Easy
Normal
Everything before the first spinner is out of sync with the music. Also, consider using more hitsounds. ---Yes but I have to do that cause spinners need to have like at least 1/1 distance from the last circle or else it'll confuse players... also the hitsounding is fine imo
Hard
Everything is great here, except for the hitsounds, which need a little more variety. ----same
Insane
00:15:692 (3,4,1,2,3) - This part, the sliders don't sync with the music and they're too long, in my opinion. Add more circles in between instead of the sliders or make them shorter. ---I did that to add more variety or else it would just be clicking the same pattern over and over ;;

This is a great beatmap, but it lacks variety of hitsounds. I hope you find this helpful. :) ---Yeahhh I dont think its neccesary to add weird hitsounding since these work well atm
Didnt change anything but still thanks :o
xDarxen
313 posts
Joined July 2014
xDarxen
Hullo, from my queue

[Insane]
  1. 00:23:538 (4,1) - I think the blanket is kinda off.
  2. 01:08:307 (1,2) - ^
  3. 01:19:384 (1) - ^ It would look better if it went around 01:19:230 (4). Fixing these will make the map look neater and more beautiful.
  4. 01:22:615 (5) - The slider ends on the downbeat (the big white line), which should be clickable IMO. Try shortening the slider till the red tick and add a circle to the downbeat, here 01:23:076.
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:153 (4) - Although there is nothing wrong with it, you didn't use that kind of pattern before and it might be confusing to players. Maybe remove it and add a 1/2 slider on the red tick?
  2. 01:19:076 (3,1) - A blanket looks better I think.
  3. 01:22:615 (4) - Same with Insane diff. The downbeat thingy.
[Normal]
  1. That's ok I think
[Sh1n1's Easy]
  1. 00:05:538 (3) - This should end on blue tick. (one tick less)
  2. 00:14:769 (1,2,3,4) - Hitsounds missing.
  3. 01:00:923 (1,2) - Blanket yeyyy
That's all. I hope it helps and good luck!
SkyDevil
1,771 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

xDarxen wrote:

Hullo, from my queue

[Insane]
  1. 00:23:538 (4,1) - I think the blanket is kinda off. ----I dont see it ;;
  2. 01:08:307 (1,2) - ^ ---i dont see it x2
  3. 01:19:384 (1) - ^ It would look better if it went around 01:19:230 (4). Fixing these will make the map look neater and more beautiful. ---the antijump would be a mess tho
  4. 01:22:615 (5) - The slider ends on the downbeat (the big white line), which should be clickable IMO. Try shortening the slider till the red tick and add a circle to the downbeat, here 01:23:076. ---since its the last beat its not that much of a deal imo
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:153 (4) - Although there is nothing wrong with it, you didn't use that kind of pattern before and it might be confusing to players. Maybe remove it and add a 1/2 slider on the red tick? ---hard players arent really that new though, I think it would be better if i can challenge them a little bit
  2. 01:19:076 (3,1) - A blanket looks better I think. ---okay
  3. 01:22:615 (4) - Same with Insane diff. The downbeat thingy. ---meh ;;;;;;;
[Normal]
  1. That's ok I think ---yey

That's all. I hope it helps and good luck!
Thank you for the mod owo
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-

Atsuro wrote:

Hi! Mod requested by -Sh1n1- Thanks Atsuro :3
Well, it's a quick check since i said i'm not modding right now sooo this will be short :p :P

[Sh1n1's Easy]
00:00:923 (2,3) - No estoy seguro del slider 2, a los jugadores nuevos se les dificulta leer ritmos así de complicados, para hacerles más facil la vida puedes extenderlo y volverlo un slider 1/1. Aplica a todos los sliders así del inicio. Me parecio muy buena idea pero, no seguiria el ritmo que yo ando buscando, de momento lo mantendre asi, de haber algun moder mas que me lo diga yo te lo hago saber
00:23:538 (1,2) - Tendría más sentido empezar en el downbeat (línea blanca más larga) estaría mejor ritmicamente. creo que si, ademas respetaria la regla de los 3 ticks blancos despues de un spin xD, nice
00:54:923 (1) - Same^ same :3

G00D *-*/

I hope this helps, GL!
Thanks for your mod.

xDarxen wrote:

Hullo, from my queue

[Sh1n1's Easy]
  1. 00:05:538 (3) - This should end on blue tick. (one tick less) I don't agree~~
  2. 00:14:769 (1,2,3,4) - Hitsounds missing. Added whistles at 00:15:692 - and 00:17:538 -
  3. 01:00:923 (1,2) - Blanket yeyyy .-. Fixed I guess xD
That's all. I hope it helps and good luck!
Thanks for your mod :3

update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: toe.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 53538
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.14

[Metadata]
Title:Theory of Everything
TitleUnicode:Theory of Everything
Artist:dj-Nate
ArtistUnicode:dj-Nate
Creator:SkyDevil
Version:Sh1n1's Easy
Source:
Tags:toe geometry dash -sh1n1-
BeatmapID:614691
BeatmapSetID:235682

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

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Jayel
846 posts
Joined August 2010
Jayel
Star this since I'm one big fan of Geometry Dash and it's the map done by SkyDevil and I literally love this song.

Whatever. Just take the star.
SkyDevil
1,771 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
SkyDevil

Jayel wrote:

Star this since I'm one big fan of Geometry Dash and it's the map done by SkyDevil and I literally love this song.

Whatever. Just take the star.
hahhahaha thanks xDDD
Originality
102 posts
Joined October 2014
Originality
[Easy]

00:01:538 (3) - - Polarity feels weird here, inserting this circle makes me feel a lot better about the transition from red to white tick
00:05:230 - ^^
00:09:230 (3) - ^^ (i'm not gonna point any more of those out, it's really a personal thing, it sounds fine as is, it'd be easier to play w/ that single though
00:13:846 (4) - I like this pattern here
http://puu.sh/lv1jx/8ae403d3b9.png
00:36:000 (4) - Love these sliders :D

[Hard]

00:01:384 (4) - There's no beat/sound on this note
00:05:076 (4) - ^^
00:04:615 (3) - preference here, the end of that slider might sound better as an individual hit? What you have sounds good too, though
00:24:000 (1) - Teach me your slider art PLEASE, this looks amazing :D
01:00:923 (4) - This setup lets you hit this beat more prominently, but that messes with the flow. The way you have it now sounds good as well.
http://puu.sh/lv2hu/8aec47b1ab.png
01:07:230 (4) - This feels abrupt
01:23:537 - No piano mapping!? /me cries

This looks REALLY good, and plays well to boot. Love your flow.

[Insane]
00:01:384 (4) - Same as in hard
00:05:538 (1) - Feels like the end of this slider should be emphasized more
00:22:000 (6,1) - This feels really abrupt, did not like,maybe if you changed this into a slider so that it wasn't singles into different tempo'd singles?
00:25:846 (1,2) - That's a leap, there!
00:48:000 (1,2) - something doesn't sound right here, but I can't put my finger on what it is. maybe it's because most of the time you don't stack double notes, but here it's different? the spacing felt wrong
01:05:538 (3,4,5) - These sliders could be beautified
01:20:307 (3,4,5,6) - spacing between 3 and 6 looks off


This difficulty looks pretty good too, just some visual suggestions! Best of luck getting your map ranked!
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