Hey! o/
[General]
You cannot use red timing points to manipulate slider speeds
Your background is really pixely :3 (480x300 is really small) you'll need to change that.
Offset = 5066, I think I am terrible at this but I know it's wrong since you're using 1/8 for white ticks.
Turn the note volume down or make the music louder I can barely hear it
Why is "Hard" in your tags? Also add "vocaloid"[Infinity]00:16:553 (6,7) - Blanket this for a nicer look and flow
00:18:053 (1,2,3) - Why is this jumping so far, the music doesnt call for a jump here?
00:18:386 (3,4,5) - These aren't symetrical, slider 5 is further away
00:19:219 (5,6,7) - Slider 5 is going over a big white tick, make it smaller and put the notes after on the big white tick to follow the backbeat
00:22:219 (5) - Move this into the pattern a bit more it goes out too far
00:22:053 (4,1) - Make this a better blanket note 4 is too far left
00:23:553 (1) - Put this on the big white tick
00:26:553 (1) - The curves arent even on both sides, heres a trick to help you with these or two tricks XD
00:31:886 (4,5) - Make this a better blanket also note 4 is too far up and right
00:40:053 (1,2) - ^ Make it a better blanket but this time move it up and right
00:40:886 (4) - Don't make it go over a big white tick it is the most emphasised part in the song
00:41:386 (5,1) - Make this blanket better its too low
00:44:719 (4,5) - Why don't you make these blanket with the previous two sliders?
00:48:053 (3,4) - Make it so the blanket is more curved around the whole note
00:53:219 (1) - The curve on the other side of the slider isnt the same as the one before, make it the same for a nice look
01:05:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I'd avoid things such as this it sounds monotonous and causes a huge amount of notes which have no NC.
01:07:386 (2,3) - The tail of slider 2 doesnt blanket correctly with slider 3 make the blanket for a nicer flow
01:09:053 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is quite a large difficulty spike, maybe you can space out the streams with sliders to make it less?
01:11:053 (1,2) - Make these the same slider for better consistency
01:15:803 (4,5) - Make the end of slider 5 come out a bit more to make it a symetrical blanket
01:18:386 (1) - NC
01:24:386 (4,5) - Move the slider in a bit more for a consistant blanket
01:36:719 (3,4,5) - It's confusing and hard to play, space it out so the user knows what's going on.
01:40:719 (1) - The end of this is curved too much, curve it lighter for a blanket
01:57:053 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,
1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3
,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) (THE HUGE STREAM IN THE MIDDLE OF YOUR SONG XD) - Duuude that is so much diff spike, the streams are brutal and this is only inflating the difficulty rating of your map, I would put a break here maybe
02:35:719 (2,3,4,5,6) - Shape can be improved
02:39:719 (5,6) - The curves are too deep at the beginning space the curve out evenly for a nicer flow in the slider
02:58:053 (5,6) - Move slider 6 to the left for a better blanket
03:01:719 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -
I dont understand the mapping here so I am going to leave it03:47:386 (4) - Make it so the curve doesnt happen right at the end of the slider it looks ugly if you do that imo
03:49:053 (1,2,1,2) - Why is the spacing so small here compared to the rest?
04:14:386 (1,2) - This part is wierd startup to a stream I wouldn't have it ontop of the stream tbh
04:15:303 (11) - I also wouldn't end this on the backbeat.
04:21:886 (4,5) - Move note 5 down and left to make it a blanket
04:32:719 (6,8) - ^ Improve the blanket
04:41:386 (1,2) - ^^^^
04:42:553 (1) - Move this up and right to make the blanket better and consistant
04:53:303 (1) - End this 04:53:303 (1) here