1. Intense (4.99 stars, 375 notes)
2. Relaxing (3.27 stars, 147 notes)

RandomJibberish wrote:

General:
Skin's pretty cool, maybe doing something with the hitcircles or spinner would be nice? I'll try to make a custom circle, but I like the spinner the way it is.

Relaxing:
00:49:401 (1,2) - These two sliders sound like they're a half beat too late. The first slider sounds fine, ended the second one 1/4 earlier.
01:10:401 (1) - I'd make the spinner end on the white tick before or after.
01:16:601 (4) - Really doesn't fit the music Fixed
01:50:401 (1,2) - I'd make this a horizontal flip of the yellow combo I think it's fine like that :
02:03:201 (1,1) - I'd remove the clapticks, I don't really like how it sounds. Your call though. Removed one claptick :3

Intense:
00:50:401 (2,3,4) - Feels a half beat too late Fixed
01:10:401 (1) - I'd make the spinner end on the white tick before or after. I think it's fine like that :

Rest is fine. Star~

Natteke desu wrote:

:3

DiamondCrash wrote:

Generally, I think this needs an even easier difficulty. Some of the patterns in relaxing are definately not newbie friendly. Otherwise, this is all very good.

AtemiskKun wrote:

:D go go glassy~!! i love it

AngelHoney wrote:

Source: O2jam

intense

00:33:001 (9) - move 1 gird right
00:35:001 (8) - new combo
01:30:801 - add a note
01:30:901 ^
01:31:101 ^
01:54:801 ^
01:55:601 ^
01:56:401 ^


Relaxing

00:49:401 (1) - start at 00:49:601
01:10:401 (1) - end at 01:11:601
01:23:201 (1) - ^

Astom wrote:

I give u a star for now i make a mod later :3

YGOkid8 wrote:

Relaxing:

Hitsound Mod~
00:40:001 (1) - Remove Whistle. Add Finish.
00:46:401 (1) - ^

00:40:201 (2) - Remove Whistle.

Intense:

Fine.

Well mapped. Star ~ ☆ + Kudosu! Star ~ ☆

• • "Volcano.jpeg" this img should be 1024x768
  • You should make another diff

• • 01:56:601 (8,1) - Spacing

Glasslake wrote:

Fixed. Sorry no kudo this time since there wasn't much to change ._.

peppy wrote:

The main thing to think about before rewarding posters: Does this post contain constructive criticism about my map which will help me improve it?. The feedback doesn't necessarily need to be in-depth and technical - as long as you found it helpful, please give the poster kudosu.

emaal wrote:

Remember, you do NOT need to take my suggestions or mods.

Not going to have a Storyboard? Delete the .OSB file then.

~[Relaxing]~

01:52:801(1): Consider doing something about this spinner.
02:19:201(x): End kiai time here.

Nice difficulty ^^

~[Intense]~

00:33:601(x): This part here isn't snapped, redo this, though, only a suggestion.
00:40:201(2): Remove note.
01:11:401(1): This should end at: 01:11:601. In my opinion.
01:18:001(1,2,3): Oh dear god, I LOVE that part.
01:24:401(x): What about doing the same as at: 01:18:001?
02:19:201(x): End kiai.


Nice map! Really, I liked it.

• 00:48:001 (1) None
  01:45:601 (3) New combo

• Good Enough

sonnyc wrote:

Hi~

Relaxing

• 00:48:001 (1) None
  01:45:601 (3) New combo

Intense

• Good Enough

Star

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*I see skin countdown elements in the folder, but the countdown isn't enabled for either difficulty. o_o;
*hit0.png is missing from the skin folder
*ready.png is also missing.
*spinner-background.png: missing.
*I'd like to see more skin elements used in this song, such as a reddish/orange sectionpass/sectionfail.
*Source is inconsistent between diffs. One has "o2jam" and the other has "O2jam". Should it be capitalized or not? :U

[Relaxing]
00:29:401 (5) - too close to previous
00:30:401 (1) - also too close, unless you fix the above
00:32:601 (5) - too close to previous
00:33:601 (1) - o-o Very interesting (I like it!)
00:39:801 - expected a note here (kepy 50ing the two notes because I thought that they started 1/2 back)
00:50:701 (2) - Unpredictable offbeat (try to avoid using blue tick notes like this in easy/normal diffs)
01:12:001 (1) - too far from center of spinner
01:14:801 (1) - top left node to the left two tiny grids~
01:24:801 (1) - too far from center of slider
01:43:201 (2,1) - Avoid overlapping sliders like this. The bottom of (1) gets hidden, and so the slidertick will be missed and combo will be broken. :X :X
01:45:601 (3) - too far from previous
01:52:001 (1) - angle this to the left so that it's not semi-hidden by previous ones
01:52:801 (2) - I was going to say that I think the kiai should start on 01:53:601 (1), but I like the fountain shooting "lava" as this long(ish) slider is being used. :B
01:53:901 (2) - too close to previous
02:00:601 (2,3) - too close to previous and could be made a little better. Take the bottom left anchor/node and drag it to the left two tiny grids.
*I think that this is a very nice Normal diff, but is too hard to be the easiest of the set. Could you make an easier diff to go along with these (since there are only two diffs) or perhaps get a guest easy? :/

[Intense]
*Perhaps up the tick rate to 1? 0.5 feels kinda awkward on those longer sliders towards the mid-end.
02:18:801 (8,9,10,11,12) - a bit hard to see/read between the hitbursts of the previous staacks

Besides all of that, I think that this map is close to being pubble-ready. Nice job~

Derekku Chan wrote:

Whoops, I copy pasted the wrong time for one of those nazi comments, but it doesn't matter.

Skin: Great!
Intense: Nice~
Relaxing: A couple things...

01:16:601 (4) - I feel like this a little bit too far from the previous stack. I thought that it started on the white tick and missed it. :S
01:21:601 (5) - too close to the last slider since you removed the stack on it
01:44:001 (1) - wohhhh WAY too far from previous.
01:52:801 (2) - too far..
02:03:201 (1,1) - Actually, I feel like a lot of the spacing should be like on this slider; the end/beginning touch. Other 1/2 spaced sliders in the map are farther away and a bit more tricky to hit.

I'd still like to see an easier diff, but I suppose this one isn't too bad.

EDIT: oh right, orion's post reminded me to say something about the red color. For two of the spinners, there are red circles right after them, and they're very hard to see. =S

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- here still have .osb file
- dark red combo colour abit hard to see on some parts, can you make it look light more then this?

[Relaxing]
- Your Relaxing look abit hard for beginner.. but.. I don't know.. orz
01:21:601 (5) - spacing? look so close
01:44:001 (1) - look too far ;_;
01:45:601 (1) - ^

[Intense]
seem fine to me ~

starr ~

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- I think you need an easier difficulty, some parts of Relaxing are too tricky for the easiest difficulty.
-- The red cursor sometimes blends into the spinner and red color. . .

Relaxing:

-- I like it but some of the spacing changes are just too hard for the easiest map in a map set.

00:36:201 (2) - Notes like these are really hard to read for the easiest diff.
00:39:401 (2) - ^
01:28:801 (2,3) - ^
01:31:201 (1,2) - ^
01:40:801 (1,2,1,2,1) - Jumps on normal...?
01:52:001 (1,2) - ^ I think the small jumps might be too hard >.<

Of course if you added an Easier diff comments about it being too hard don't really matter much

Intense:

-- I think the map looks and plays better - 1 OA, bizarrely the star rating goes up if you do this.

Nice diff.

That's all, definitely think you should add an Easy though ^_^
~ Star.

yaya wrote:

SV on Normal abit high , overall is low , it's weird.
suggest turn down SV .

whymeman wrote:

Remove the 3 scorebar-ki.pngs, scorebar skin stuff, and sliderball.pngs. They are not really being used and is only taking up space.