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SawanoHiroyuki - Dragon Rises

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ProgressiveStar
49 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
ProgressiveStar
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年8月2日 at 13:31:05

Artist: SawanoHiroyuki
Title: Dragon Rises
Source: 医龍 -Team Medical Dragon-
Tags: オリジナル.サウンドトラック 澤野弘之
BPM: 186
Filesize: 4733kb
Play Time: 03:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dragon (4.8 stars, 640 notes)
  2. Hard (3.7 stars, 434 notes)
  3. Normal (2.05 stars, 221 notes)
Download: SawanoHiroyuki - Dragon Rises
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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At last I finish the map. Hope you could love it
I want to rank it. I'm looking forward to your modding and helping
Have fun!
Submitted at 11.22
1st update at 12.13 fix figure
2nd update at 12.14 add storyboard
3rd update at 12.28 fix as MODs
4th update at 1.2 fix figure
5th update at 1.23 fix as MODs
6th update at 7.29.2017 rebirthed
7th update at 7.31 fix figure
Last edited by ProgressiveStar , edited 15 times in total.
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
Hi ! My mod !

~General~

The metadata is unrankable because first , the name in japanese style , is name of family and the nickname example :

SawanoHiroyuki -> Hiroyuki Sawano

~Normal~

00:12:018(3)- Make this slider 1/1 slider to fit in music and then add a note

00:14:599(3)- ^

00:17:180(3)- ^

00:36:535(1,2)- This blanket could be improved

00:39:115(1,2)- ^

00:40:405(3,4)- These sliders aren't allowed in normal diff ! Replace these with a 1/1 slider and 4 should be note like here :
SPOILER

~Hard~

00:20:405(1)- I don't like the slider ! I highly suggest you to delete that slider and make another slider

00:21:051(2,3)- Improve this blanket please ! It is not good !

00:27:986(2)- Like 00:20:405(1)-

There are many problems ! You should resolve these problems and the problems with offscreen too ! I wil stop here with the mentioning !

~Dragon~

00:24:276(2,3,4,5)- It doesn't look so good ! Try this :
SPOILER

You have a lots of blankets unimproved .

Hmmm. Your map is almost good . Good luck getting this ranked ! :)
ProgressiveStar
49 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
ProgressiveStar
Reply =w=

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Hi ! My mod !

~General~

The metadata is unrankable because first , the name in japanese style , is name of family and the nickname example :

SawanoHiroyuki -> Hiroyuki Sawano

~Normal~

00:12:018(3)- Make this slider 1/1 slider to fit in music and then add a note I like this style,from pavor nocturnus hard

00:14:599(3)- ^

00:17:180(3)- ^

00:36:535(1,2)- This blanket could be improved -fixed

00:39:115(1,2)- ^ -fixed

00:40:405(3,4)- These sliders aren't allowed in normal diff ! Replace these with a 1/1 slider and 4 should be note like here : -I will think about it
SPOILER

~Hard~

00:20:405(1)- I don't like the slider ! I highly suggest you to delete that slider and make another slider
I will make it shorter

00:21:051(2,3)- Improve this blanket please ! It is not good ! -I'll try

00:27:986(2)- Like 00:20:405(1)-

There are many problems ! You should resolve these problems and the problems with offscreen too ! I wil stop here with the mentioning !

~Dragon~

00:24:276(2,3,4,5)- It doesn't look so good ! Try this :
00:23:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ,they are mirror image...I will hold it
SPOILER
You have a lots of blankets unimproved .

Hmmm. Your map is almost good . Good luck getting this ranked ! :)
Thanks for your modding,I will finish and updating next week
Last edited by ProgressiveStar , edited 1 time in total.
CoLouRed GlaZeE
282 posts
Joined August 2013
CoLouRed GlaZeE
Mod time~ （我第一次mod，如果不好请体谅:D)

---Normal---

00:20:728 - 加个note?

01:01:696 (4) - 这个加多一次返回?

01:13:631 - 加个note?
01:14:922 - ^
01:16:212 - ^
01:18:793 - ^
01:20:083 - ^

---Hard---

None
做的很好,没觉得有问题:)

---Dragon---

00:10:889 - 加个note?
00:11:696 - ^

02:03:470 - 我觉得这里加个note应该好点儿吧。。。
----------End----------
我觉得很不错的beatmap:) ;)
ProgressiveStar
49 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
ProgressiveStar
多谢MOD啦，很高兴的说=w=
这里是回复的说

CoLouRed GlaZeE wrote:

Mod time~ （我第一次mod，如果不好请体谅:D) 其实很不错

---Normal---

00:20:728 - 加个note? 很好，就这样的说

01:01:696 (4) - 这个加多一次返回? 下一个重音很弱，个人感觉不太需要

01:13:631 - 加个note?
01:14:922 - ^
01:16:212 - ^
01:18:793 - ^
01:20:083 - ^ 这些地方音乐都很弱，所以故意做稀疏了些，原来的保留，但多谢你找到这么多

---Hard---

None
做的很好,没觉得有问题:)

---Dragon---

00:10:889 - 加个note?
00:11:696 - ^ 这里听音乐的话没有这么密

02:03:470 - 我觉得这里加个note应该好点儿吧。。。 觉得红线开始比较难抓节奏，但确实是值得讨论的地方，我会考虑
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我觉得很不错的beatmap:) ;)
Snepif
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
Snepif
I spent 2 hours modding this map and when I tried to post, osu! told me to log in again and I lost everything I did.
AyumuzawaYui
3 posts
Joined March 2014
AyumuzawaYui
初次MOD还请多多包涵~

NormalMOD
这个是几乎没动Note 只改了音效的MOD(稍微改了一点点Note以使节奏更加好听)
Normal MOD
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: DRAGON RISES.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39115
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 124274,147500
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Dragon Rises
TitleUnicode:Dragon Rises
Artist:SawanoHiroyuki
ArtistUnicode:SawanoHiroyuki
Creator:ProgressiveStar
Version:Normal MOD -From COD_IS
Source:医龍 -Team Medical Dragon-
Tags:オリジナル.サウンドトラック 澤野弘之
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,62218,71614
2,124153,146452
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"StoryBoard\HP Normal.jpg",320,240
S,0,124276,,1.053334
F,0,124276,126857,0,1
M,0,124276,147502,318,30,318,480
F,0,126857,129438,1
F,0,129438,142341,1
F,0,142341,144922,1
F,0,144922,147502,1,0
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下面这个则是在最后多加了些连打(超慢速三连串(可单指戳))
Normal MODV2
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Countdown: 0
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[Metadata]
Title:Dragon Rises
TitleUnicode:Dragon Rises
Artist:SawanoHiroyuki
ArtistUnicode:SawanoHiroyuki
Creator:ProgressiveStar
Version:Normal MOD +Stream -From COD_IS
Source:医龍 -Team Medical Dragon-
Tags:オリジナル.サウンドトラック 澤野弘之
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ProgressiveStar
49 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
ProgressiveStar
多谢MOD啦，音效我会部分采用的说~
第二种就算了，节奏有点过了，flow和blanket也有点乱了

COD_IS wrote:

初次MOD还请多多包涵~

NormalMOD
这个是几乎没动Note 只改了音效的MOD(稍微改了一点点Note以使节奏更加好听)
Normal MOD
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: DRAGON RISES.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 39115
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 124274,147500
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Dragon Rises
TitleUnicode:Dragon Rises
Artist:SawanoHiroyuki
ArtistUnicode:SawanoHiroyuki
Creator:ProgressiveStar
Version:Normal MOD -From COD_IS
Source:医龍 -Team Medical Dragon-
Tags:オリジナル.サウンドトラック 澤野弘之
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,62218,71614
2,124153,146452
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"StoryBoard\HP Normal.jpg",320,240
S,0,124276,,1.053334
F,0,124276,126857,0,1
M,0,124276,147502,318,30,318,480
F,0,126857,129438,1
F,0,129438,142341,1
F,0,142341,144922,1
F,0,144922,147502,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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下面这个则是在最后多加了些连打(超慢速三连串(可单指戳))
Normal MODV2
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[Metadata]
Title:Dragon Rises
TitleUnicode:Dragon Rises
Artist:SawanoHiroyuki
ArtistUnicode:SawanoHiroyuki
Creator:ProgressiveStar
Version:Normal MOD +Stream -From COD_IS
Source:医龍 -Team Medical Dragon-
Tags:オリジナル.サウンドトラック 澤野弘之
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312,288,52018,6,0,P|390:323|464:277,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,232,52986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,144,53309,2,0,L|384:64,2,80,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,232,54276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,288,54599,6,0,P|240:256|168:288,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,232,55567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,176,55889,2,0,L|240:120,2,80,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,232,56857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,176,57180,6,0,P|80:128|96:32,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,64,58147,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,88,58470,2,0,L|352:120,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,168,59115,2,0,L|352:200,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,248,59760,6,0,P|336:288|384:368,1,160,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,280,60728,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,208,61051,2,0,L|440:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,61696,2,0,L|344:64,2,40,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,56,72664,6,0,P|120:112|56:136,1,120.000004577637
112,232,73631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,74922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,152,76212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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440,112,78793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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376,240,80083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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312,256,83954,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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368,192,85567,6,0,P|441:223|508:175,1,160,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,93,86535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,56,86857,2,0,P|424:104|446:153,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,16,87825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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376,256,102341,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,184,102664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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344,56,113309,2,0,L|264:56,1,60.0000022888184,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,280,149438,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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272,160,151051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,72,152664,6,0,P|368:144|348:224,1,160,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,280,153631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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440,104,156212,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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144,224,157502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,296,157825,6,0,L|256:344,3,40,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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464,240,164922,2,0,L|392:320,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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392,40,170567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,88,171696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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56,88,180889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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216,232,183470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Snepif
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
Snepif
Alright modding this again..


[General]

- Add combo colors? :D
- 00:18:470 (1) - If you listen at x0.25 speed, this is badly timed o:
[Normal]

00:11:696 (2,3) - I don't like how it touches the note :/
00:18:470 (1) -This looks better http://puu.sh/dLxyn/c783c863a3.jpg
00:41:051 (4,1) - Make them not touch each other
01:00:728 (2,3,4) - This feels better http://puu.sh/dLxMD/afcf28a4d5.jpg
01:57:180 (2) - http://puu.sh/dLzPR/987f1d73d1.jpg
02:02:341 (2) - I think this is better http://puu.sh/dLzRK/0a0d4a15b5.jpg
02:45:567 (1,2,3,4) - You could improve this "curve"

nice diff

[Hard]

00:15:889 (1,4) - Move it so 1 doesn't touch 4
00:21:051 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/dLCq3/fc8405e66b.jpg
00:28:147 ) - Add note because on the previous pattern you added a note here
00:31:373 (1,3) - Change slider shape so it doesn't touch the note
00:40:567 (2,3) - I don't think this overlap is a good idea
00:41:696 (1) - Hmm this shape is kinda ugly, maybe change it?
00:44:276 (1) - Same x.x
00:46:857 (1) - Same
00:48:631 (6,1) - The jump from 6 to 1 is reaaaaally hard for hard diff players
00:51:857 (3,1) - The jump from 3 to 1 is too high
00:57:018 (8,1) - Make it not touch the slider
00:59:599 (2,3) - Make the note not touch the slider
01:01:051 (1) - http://puu.sh/dLCFh/cd3e682215.jpg
01:17:180 (5) - Try http://puu.sh/dLCHE/1ed1821b35.jpg
01:21:051 (2,3,4) - This is kinda unpolite, it could be better
01:22:502 (3,1) - Make them not touche each other?
01:28:147 (1) - try http://puu.sh/dLCME/1bc24348c3.jpg
01:33:309 (1) - Same here, ugly slider shape
01:38:470 (1) - 1 point here is enough
01:42:986 (3,4,5,6) - This jump is a little hard, but it's okay, what makes it even harder is the fact that it is "hidden" below other objects, make it clearer to read
02:03:631 (5) - Too close to 4
02:27:502 (1) - Delete 1 return and add a note? Same for all following sliders (02:30:083 (1) - ,02:32:664 (1) - , etc.)
03:05:405 (4,5) - Jump from 4 to 5 is too high
03:05:889 (6,1) - Make them not touch each other

[Dragon]

The intro could have less SV
I don't like the sliders with more than 1 repeat (except streams). They are confusing x.x

00:31:373 (1) - Move closer to the previous note?
00:32:825 (8) - Improve flow by moving the end down
00:49:922 (2) - http://puu.sh/dLDbt/5232cedb52.jpg?
00:51:373 (8) - This could be 4 notes
01:54:438 (6) - Move further away from 5
01:56:857 (3,4) - Flow between these 2 sliders could be better
02:03:631 (5) - Move farther away from 4
02:27:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why is this part with so little DS? 1 should be farter away from 2, etc. The streams are okay but the spacing between notes and streams, and notes and sliders is not good
02:58:470 (1,3) - Make them not touch each other
03:03:470 (8) - inconsistent distance


Good luck!
Beafowl
131 posts
Joined March 2013
Beafowl
Hi! Coming from your Queue.

I have just moded one diff, so you should do the same to your mod.
General
  1. Maybe change the offset to 430?

Hard
  1. Set the Approach Rate to 7.
  2. Forgot to add hitsounds at 00:31:373 - 00:36:373 ?
  3. 00:20:405 (1) - I would move the NC to the next slider.
  4. 00:51:857 (3,1) - Make the distance between these two objects shorter.
  5. 01:00:889 (6,1) - ^
  6. 00:55:889 (5) - NC
  7. 01:24:276 (1,2,3,4) - The distance between those slider is too big
  8. 02:56:373 (2,3) - distance is too big (I won't mention that again)
  9. 03:08:551 (1) - Change the begin of this spinner to 03:08:793

Good luck with your map!
ProgressiveStar
49 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
ProgressiveStar
Oh, Snepif, thank you very much for your great MOD! :)
They really help me much! :)

Here is the Reply

Snepif wrote:

Alright modding this again..


[General]

- Add combo colors? :D yes I will
- 00:18:470 (1) - If you listen at x0.25 speed, this is badly timed o: I will think about the offset
[Normal]

00:11:696 (2,3) - I don't like how it touches the note :/ fixed
00:18:470 (1) -This looks better http://puu.sh/dLxyn/c783c863a3.jpg I don't think so, sorry
00:41:051 (4,1) - Make them not touch each other fixed
01:00:728 (2,3,4) - This feels better http://puu.sh/dLxMD/afcf28a4d5.jpg fixed
01:57:180 (2) - http://puu.sh/dLzPR/987f1d73d1.jpg fixed
02:02:341 (2) - I think this is better http://puu.sh/dLzRK/0a0d4a15b5.jpg Great change
02:45:567 (1,2,3,4) - You could improve this "curve" fixed

nice diff

[Hard]

00:15:889 (1,4) - Move it so 1 doesn't touch 4 fixed
00:21:051 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/dLCq3/fc8405e66b.jpg fixed,It's a mistake
00:28:147 ) - Add note because on the previous pattern you added a note here Great
00:31:373 (1,3) - Change slider shape so it doesn't touch the note fixed
00:40:567 (2,3) - I don't think this overlap is a good idea but I like it
00:41:696 (1) - Hmm this shape is kinda ugly, maybe change it?
00:44:276 (1) - Same x.x It is fix to music I think so I wont change it
00:46:857 (1) - Same
00:48:631 (6,1) - The jump from 6 to 1 is reaaaaally hard for hard diff players but music is very fast here so...
00:51:857 (3,1) - The jump from 3 to 1 is too high music's twist place so...
00:57:018 (8,1) - Make it not touch the slider fixed
00:59:599 (2,3) - Make the note not touch the slider fixed
01:01:051 (1) - http://puu.sh/dLCFh/cd3e682215.jpg fixed
01:17:180 (5) - Try http://puu.sh/dLCHE/1ed1821b35.jpg Great, thank you
01:21:051 (2,3,4) - This is kinda unpolite, it could be better fixed
01:22:502 (3,1) - Make them not touche each other? No
01:28:147 (1) - try http://puu.sh/dLCME/1bc24348c3.jpg fixed but another way
01:33:309 (1) - Same here, ugly slider shape fixed
01:38:470 (1) - 1 point here is enough Yep,thanks for looking such careful
01:42:986 (3,4,5,6) - This jump is a little hard, but it's okay, what makes it even harder is the fact that it is "hidden" below other objects, make it clearer to read moved a liitle
02:03:631 (5) - Too close to 4 fixed
02:27:502 (1) - Delete 1 return and add a note? Same for all following sliders (02:30:083 (1) - ,02:32:664 (1) - , etc.)
Sorry, I think it's hard to read
03:05:405 (4,5) - Jump from 4 to 5 is too high But the path is still square so I think it's OK
03:05:889 (6,1) - Make them not touch each other fixed

[Dragon]

The intro could have less SV fixed
I don't like the sliders with more than 1 repeat (except streams). They are confusing x.x
I'll think about it
00:31:373 (1) - Move closer to the previous note? No
00:32:825 (8) - Improve flow by moving the end down not a flow here, just from 7 to 10 is four turns
00:49:922 (2) - http://puu.sh/dLDbt/5232cedb52.jpg? fixed
00:51:373 (8) - This could be 4 notes It will be too nervous...
01:54:438 (6) - Move further away from 5 fixed
01:56:857 (3,4) - Flow between these 2 sliders could be better fixed
02:03:631 (5) - Move farther away from 4 fixed
02:27:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why is this part with so little DS? 1 should be farter away from 2, etc. The streams are okay but the spacing between notes and streams, and notes and sliders is not good fixed, it is a big mistake
02:58:470 (1,3) - Make them not touch each other fixed
03:03:470 (8) - inconsistent distance fixed


Good luck!
ProgressiveStar
49 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
ProgressiveStar
Thank you BerkZ, your MOD is great :)
Reply

BerkZ wrote:

Hi! Coming from your Queue.

I have just moded one diff, so you should do the same to your mod.
General
  1. Maybe change the offset to 430?
I will analyze it again

Hard
  1. Set the Approach Rate to 7. OK
  2. Forgot to add hitsounds at 00:31:373 - 00:36:373 ? Sorry, no hitsounds here
  3. 00:20:405 (1) - I would move the NC to the next slider. OK
  4. 00:51:857 (3,1) - Make the distance between these two objects shorter. It's a music turn
  5. 01:00:889 (6,1) - ^ No
  6. 00:55:889 (5) - NC fixed
  7. 01:24:276 (1,2,3,4) - The distance between those slider is too big I will keep it
  8. 02:56:373 (2,3) - distance is too big (I won't mention that again) I will think again
  9. 03:08:551 (1) - Change the begin of this spinner to 03:08:793 OK

Good luck with your map!
Snepif
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
Snepif
Have a star~
Squichu
1,013 posts
Joined November 2012
Squichu
hey there!
mod from my queue >w<
Sorry, took me a while longer than expected to mod this.. >__<

General
  1. to make the set rankable you need a difficulty with a Star Rating of 2 or below. Your Normal diff's SR is 2.05, so you should decrease difficulty of Normal slightly or map an Easy diff.
    Both works, but it's better if you add an Easy (imo!), cause even if you get the Normal diff below 2 SR, there are still some patterns and rhythms that are way too hard for the easiest difficulty. And if you remove all of them the gap between Normal and Hard is awkward, so I'd definitely prefer if you add an Easy
  2. disable widescreen support in all difficulties. your background image is 4:3, so are your SB elements. atm it looks like this - http://puu.sh/e0nVb/5e8f0ef2e1.png
  3. why don't you choose some nice combo colours?
    example
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 211,192,129
    Combo2 : 168,183,198
    Combo3 : 150,182,129
    Combo4 : 90,113,139
Normal
  1. overall I noticed the lack of hitsounds in this diff (didn't look at the others yet), why do you have so many parts that are completely not hitsounded? :c keep in mind this is a rhythm game and giving players feedback on how accurate they are is essential and can't only be done by 300/100/50, but also by hitsounding. try to use them more!
  2. if you want to keep this as the easiest difficulty you have to use Distance Snap and adjust all objects, cause atm there are many small inconsistencies, for example 00:18:470 (1,2,3) - where you switch from 1.1 DS to 1.35 and there are many more of this. it might be easy for more experienced players to read this but is really uncomfortable to play for beginners, so you'd be better of if you stick to 1 DS. just enable it and don't turn it off when mapping the easiest difficulty c: (also, disable grid snap, you can place objects way more accurately if you don't stick to the grid)
    maybe you want to take a look at https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... y_elements
  3. also, if this = easiest -> remove all SV changes, they are too hard to read and don't belong in the easiest diff of a spread.
  4. 00:13:309 (1,2) - movement is a little awkward, you could move 2+3 further down to avoid that - http://puu.sh/e3pgH/782764df49.png
  5. 00:23:631 (1,2) - similar to ^, why do you initially break the flow by having the player move in zig-zag form? ;-; I'm not saying that it's generally bad, but especially in lower diffs smooth movement is important so players can focus on rhythm (imo). placing 2 differently or reversing it (ctrl+g) plays better?
  6. 00:36:535 (1,2) - also ^, ctrl+g or just move 2 and the following objects further down? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2465579
  7. 00:57:180 (1,2,3) - movement from 1's end to 2 to 3 is close to linear, round out the movement a little, example - http://puu.sh/e9yQ9/3ac22bf8c6.jpg
  8. 00:59:115 (4,1) - if you revere 4 and curve 1 in the other direction, you can improve flow by a lot - http://puu.sh/e9zAd/bec115c33d.jpg
  9. 01:01:696 (4) - I don't mind two-reverse sliders in Normal diffs, but cause there is no Easy diff you should avoid this, because it's unreadable for beginner players (you can read about that in the wiki article I mentioned above, if you have any questions regarding that you can pm me or ask ingame, I can explain it more detailed why you should avoid this.)
  10. 01:13:954 (2,1) - another example of 'bad flow', also a mini-jump like this doesn't belong in a Normal diff. you could alternate the pattern and make it move more comfortably, example > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2465693 > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2465699
  11. 01:20:083 - you should add a circle here, imo, because you mapped it at the previous pattern (same rhythm), too - 01:17:180 (3) - feels really empty otherwise
  12. 01:20:405 (1,1) - avoid red/white tick changes, they're too hard to read (at least if this stays the easiest diff)
  13. 01:24:276 (3) - rotate and move this slightly to improve the flow - http://puu.sh/e9B49/8e72f2a04f.jpg
  14. 01:37:180 (3,4,1) - avoid the confusion and reverse 1, please. the movement indicated by 3+4 points to 1's end, so beginner players will hit that instead of the actual sliderhead. :/ alternatively you could place 1 differently
    similar here btw - 01:54:922 (2,3) - just rotate 3 so the end isn't as close to the circle as the head
  15. 01:43:631 (1,2) - you could alternate the rhythms here to avoid the tick changes -

    similar for the following rhythms, I'm sure you can come up with another rhythm, too, so it's not as monotonous as it is atm. (feel free to ask for help if you can't think of anything!)
  16. 02:37:825 (1,2) - and following - already mentioned this up above
well, depedning on whether or not you tune down this difficulty is up to you, but as I mentioned, adding an Easy would be the better option. (you can always look for a guest mapper if you don't want to map an Easy yourself or don't feel comfortable with it)
and depending on that you might have to make Hard diff more simple, too.

please send me a pm once you've decided what you'll do, cause I don't want to make suggestions to nerf Hard diff when it's not needed at all. :b
I'll complete the mod then!
ProgressiveStar
49 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
ProgressiveStar
Thank you very much!
You really spend lots of time on it
I am so appreciate!
Great MOD
SPOILER

Squirrel wrote:

hey there!
mod from my queue >w<
Sorry, took me a while longer than expected to mod this.. >__<

General
  1. to make the set rankable you need a difficulty with a Star Rating of 2 or below. Your Normal diff's SR is 2.05, so you should decrease difficulty of Normal slightly or map an Easy diff. I will make it, a easy diff
    Both works, but it's better if you add an Easy (imo!), cause even if you get the Normal diff below 2 SR, there are still some patterns and rhythms that are way too hard for the easiest difficulty. And if you remove all of them the gap between Normal and Hard is awkward, so I'd definitely prefer if you add an Easy
  2. disable widescreen support in all difficulties. your background image is 4:3, so are your SB elements. atm it looks like this - http://puu.sh/e0nVb/5e8f0ef2e1.png It has already disabled? why yours are open?
  3. why don't you choose some nice combo colours?I will think of it myself :)
    example
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 211,192,129
    Combo2 : 168,183,198
    Combo3 : 150,182,129
    Combo4 : 90,113,139
Normal
  1. overall I noticed the lack of hitsounds in this diff (didn't look at the others yet), why do you have so many parts that are completely not hitsounded? :c keep in mind this is a rhythm game and giving players feedback on how accurate they are is essential and can't only be done by 300/100/50, but also by hitsounding. try to use them more! I will think about it
  2. if you want to keep this as the easiest difficulty you have to use Distance Snap and adjust all objects, cause atm there are many small inconsistencies, for example 00:18:470 (1,2,3) - where you switch from 1.1 DS to 1.35 and there are many more of this. it might be easy for more experienced players to read this but is really uncomfortable to play for beginners, so you'd be better of if you stick to 1 DS. just enable it and don't turn it off when mapping the easiest difficulty c: (also, disable grid snap, you can place objects way more accurately if you don't stick to the grid)
    maybe you want to take a look at https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... y_elements
  3. also, if this = easiest -> remove all SV changes, they are too hard to read and don't belong in the easiest diff of a spread.
  4. 00:13:309 (1,2) - movement is a little awkward, you could move 2+3 further down to avoid that - http://puu.sh/e3pgH/782764df49.png keep and I will think again
  5. 00:23:631 (1,2) - similar to ^, why do you initially break the flow by having the player move in zig-zag form? ;-; I'm not saying that it's generally bad, but especially in lower diffs smooth movement is important so players can focus on rhythm (imo). placing 2 differently or reversing it (ctrl+g) plays better? same
  6. 00:36:535 (1,2) - also ^, ctrl+g or just move 2 and the following objects further down? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2465579 fixed
  7. 00:57:180 (1,2,3) - movement from 1's end to 2 to 3 is close to linear, round out the movement a little, example - http://puu.sh/e9yQ9/3ac22bf8c6.jpg fixed
  8. 00:59:115 (4,1) - if you revere 4 and curve 1 in the other direction, you can improve flow by a lot http://puu.sh/e9zAd/bec115c33d.jpg fixed
  9. 01:01:696 (4) - I don't mind two-reverse sliders in Normal diffs, but cause there is no Easy diff you should avoid this, because it's unreadable for beginner players (you can read about that in the wiki article I mentioned above, if you have any questions regarding that you can pm me or ask ingame, I can explain it more detailed why you should avoid this.) Teach me please, I will talk to you ingame, thanks! ;)
  10. 01:13:954 (2,1) - another example of 'bad flow', also a mini-jump like this doesn't belong in a Normal diff. you could alternate the pattern and make it move more comfortably, example > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2465693 > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2465699 fixed
  11. 01:20:083 - you should add a circle here, imo, because you mapped it at the previous pattern (same rhythm), too - 01:17:180 (3) - feels really empty otherwise fixed
  12. 01:20:405 (1,1) - avoid red/white tick changes, they're too hard to read (at least if this stays the easiest diff) fixed
  13. 01:24:276 (3) - rotate and move this slightly to improve the flow - http://puu.sh/e9B49/8e72f2a04f.jpg fixed
  14. 01:37:180 (3,4,1) - avoid the confusion and reverse 1, please. the movement indicated by 3+4 points to 1's end, so beginner players will hit that instead of the actual sliderhead. :/ alternatively you could place 1 differently fixed
    similar here btw - 01:54:922 (2,3) - just rotate 3 so the end isn't as close to the circle as the head fixed
  15. 01:43:631 (1,2) - you could alternate the rhythms here to avoid the tick changes -
    I like it
    similar for the following rhythms, I'm sure you can come up with another rhythm, too, so it's not as monotonous as it is atm. (feel free to ask for help if you can't think of anything!)
  16. 02:37:825 (1,2) - and following - already mentioned this up above
well, depedning on whether or not you tune down this difficulty is up to you, but as I mentioned, adding an Easy would be the better option. (you can always look for a guest mapper if you don't want to map an Easy yourself or don't feel comfortable with it)
and depending on that you might have to make Hard diff more simple, too.

please send me a pm once you've decided what you'll do, cause I don't want to make suggestions to nerf Hard diff when it's not needed at all. :b
I'll complete the mod then!
Envvi
46 posts
Joined May 2014
Envvi
For M4M, two difficulties:

General:
- Need an easy difficulty to be ranked. This was already mentioned in a previous mod.
- I feel like the offset is ahead by about 5 to 7ms. It's hard to tell since the Kiai snaps very well but the parts between Kiai seem more behind.
Mostly subjective opinions, since this map seems to be mapped fairly standard all with regular distances.

Dragon:
00:14:599 (5) - These four sliders feel so different that I would put a NC imo
00:22:825 (6) - There is cymbol hit in the middle of this big slider. You have hitsounds snapped to every other cymbol hit, so this one is an oddity
00:28:147 (1) - Not sure if these two notes NC is necessary
00:32:825 (8) - I don't like this in conjunction with 00:33:309 (10). I think either put them in parallel or have the 8 point to 9.
00:38:147 (1) - I would move this NC to 00:38:631 (3) following your convention of NC at streams
00:41:051 (5) - NC unless you like having the 5 as part of the diamond combo
00:57:180 (1) - Doesn't line up with 7 and 8 of previous combo
01:15:889 (2) - Kind of out of place as you mostly use parallel straight sliders or curved sliders in that area
01:33:309 (1) - I almost like this except it curves outward too much, how about this: https://b.catgirlsare.sexy/yl9r.png (but better since I suck) (also I think this happens more than once)
01:34:599 (1) - Move this to 01:35:083 (2)
01:29:438 (1) - If you're comfortable with NC here then I suggest having NC at 00:41:051 (5) too
01:41:051 (3) - Breaking convention of NC after double buzz slider (see 00:59:760 (1) and 01:33:309 (1) )
01:43:309 (5) - I think Kiai should end here instead (or the end of this note)
01:43:631 (1) - I don't like how you structured NC's from here to 01:56:373 (6)
01:55:244 (3) - Another cymbol hit without hitsound
01:55:728 (4) - ^
01:59:115 (1) - ^
02:00:889 (7) - ^
02:59:760 (1) - NC here instead of the next note?
03:02:825 (4) - Really easy to misread this, but not a bad thing I suppose
03:04:922 (7) - Conflict of convention with 02:54:599 (1)
03:06:857 (5) - NC
03:08:793 (1) - Alternatively for Kiai endings, if you want to keep the convention of the previous two, last Kiai should end here.
I would suggest putting higher OD like 5.

Hard:
00:28:309 (1) - I suggest keeping slider with the previous combo for easier reading
00:32:664 (1) - No NC
00:53:954 (1) - Move this NC to 00:53:309 (5)
01:21:535 (1) - I suggest using color light blue (combo type 5) as that's what you've been using for these hits
01:34:599 (1) - Actually for these four sliders I recommend having positions: https://b.catgirlsare.sexy/DimJ.png as it reflects the song more
02:51:535 (2) - I would have this in line with the next combo like so: https://b.catgirlsare.sexy/XPGB.png
Other than that, I wish it was easier to tell if or not the buzz sliders in the last climax are fast or slow.
I can't play this difficulty as well as the other one unfortunately.
Amaikai
70 posts
Joined September 2014
Amaikai
Dragon
00:18:470 (1) - this being note is weird. this sound is later mapped as sliders 00:18:793 (2,3) -

Rhythm is irregular here 00:24:276 (2,3,4,5,6) - expected to be same rhythm as 00:21:696 (2,3,4,5) -

Dunno about this rhythm either, i feel like 00:32:825 (1) -note, 00:32:986 (2) -note, 00:33:147 (3) - repeat would fit song better since 00:32:825 (8) - is covering sound on 00:32:825 and 00:32:986 which to my ears sound equally strong and both should have feedback on map.

00:35:244 (6) - sliderend on this has strong sound

I feel like jumps here 00:37:018 (1) - till 00:38:147 (2) - would fit nicely to map. I don't feel like current mapping 00:37:341 (9,10,11) - is following song. It felt like map pauses while song keeps going.

Now this is an opinion but as I played map further I got more and more bored, map is extremely straightforward which is something i expect from normal/hards. There weren't any interesting patterns or more importantly, variance. Yes, song does repeat same tune over and over which makes making an interesting map for this song difficult. I see you improvised rhythm at spots to make it interesting to play but sadly patterning wasn't. Sorry, I can't mod further because of the design issue.

No kds please.
ProgressiveStar
49 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
ProgressiveStar
Thank you Envvi, these are my replys
Replys

Envvi wrote:

For M4M, two difficulties:

General:
- Need an easy difficulty to be ranked. This was already mentioned in a previous mod. Get it
- I feel like the offset is ahead by about 5 to 7ms. It's hard to tell since the Kiai snaps very well but the parts between Kiai seem more behind. I'll analyze it again
Mostly subjective opinions, since this map seems to be mapped fairly standard all with regular distances.Thank you

Dragon:
00:14:599 (5) - These four sliders feel so different that I would put a NC imo Yes
00:22:825 (6) - There is cymbol hit in the middle of this big slider. You have hitsounds snapped to every other cymbol hit, so this one is an oddity Fixed
00:28:147 (1) - Not sure if these two notes NC is necessary It necessaries,I used NC in some same place before
00:32:825 (8) - I don't like this in conjunction with 00:33:309 (10). I think either put them in parallel or have the 8 point to 9.I designed 10 head to the next combo,I'll think it again
00:38:147 (1) - I would move this NC to 00:38:631 (3) following your convention of NC at streams the stream before start on the white line but this one do not
00:41:051 (5) - NC unless you like having the 5 as part of the diamond combo Yes
00:57:180 (1) - Doesn't line up with 7 and 8 of previous combo I tried to line them up,but not comfortale when jumping
01:15:889 (2) - Kind of out of place as you mostly use parallel straight sliders or curved sliders in that area Great!
01:33:309 (1) - I almost like this except it curves outward too much, how about this: https://b.catgirlsare.sexy/yl9r.png (but better since I suck) (also I think this happens more than once) Nice work!
01:34:599 (1) - Move this to 01:35:083 (2) Not good for the figure
01:29:438 (1) - If you're comfortable with NC here then I suggest having NC at 00:41:051 (5) too OK
01:41:051 (3) - Breaking convention of NC after double buzz slider (see 00:59:760 (1) and 01:33:309 (1) ) You are right
01:43:309 (5) - I think Kiai should end here instead (or the end of this note) Great!
01:43:631 (1) - I don't like how you structured NC's from here to 01:56:373 (6) Tried fixing
01:55:244 (3) - Another cymbol hit without hitsound It already has one?
01:55:728 (4) - ^
01:59:115 (1) - ^
02:00:889 (7) - ^
02:59:760 (1) - NC here instead of the next note? Genius
03:02:825 (4) - Really easy to misread this, but not a bad thing I suppose I'll think of it again
03:04:922 (7) - Conflict of convention with 02:54:599 (1) NCed
03:06:857 (5) - NC Nice
03:08:793 (1) - Alternatively for Kiai endings, if you want to keep the convention of the previous two, last Kiai should end here. I don't want Kiai ends on the spinner
I would suggest putting higher OD like 5. Fixed to 7

Hard:
00:28:309 (1) - I suggest keeping slider with the previous combo for easier reading You are right!
00:32:664 (1) - No NC I kept the NC
00:53:954 (1) - Move this NC to 00:53:309 (5) Nice!
01:21:535 (1) - I suggest using color light blue (combo type 5) as that's what you've been using for these hits Maybe our editor's color is not same
01:34:599 (1) - Actually for these four sliders I recommend having positions: https://b.catgirlsare.sexy/DimJ.png as it reflects the song more Spectacular
02:51:535 (2) - I would have this in line with the next combo like so: https://b.catgirlsare.sexy/XPGB.png I'll think of it again
Other than that, I wish it was easier to tell if or not the buzz sliders in the last climax are fast or slow. Replaced the buzz
I can't play this difficulty as well as the other one unfortunately.
Yugu
Elite Mapper
1,006 posts
Joined August 2013
Yugu
From my queue

一般
Offest错了，红线开始位置应该是424，不信的话你自己改了然后听第一个重音跟后面的重音
改完后点Timing选项里面的全部重新对齐再开ai mod检查下就行了

Dragon
我这是按照424offest来摸的

00:11:714 - 漏音 你后面00:16:553 - 这的相同部分都放了note，前面为啥没放
00:18:327 - 漏音
00:21:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 为什么这里下的note和00:23:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不一样，音乐是一样的，00:26:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 也是，我看了下后面相同音乐的部分并没有重复一样的note排版，所以你这里就要改了，歌曲都有规律凭什么你的图没有规律，把这三段音乐改成相同的节奏就好了，全改成00:21:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这样的或者是你想改成其他的节奏都可以

00:42:359 (3,4,5) - 这三个滑条之间的间隔弄成一样的吧
00:44:940 (3,4,5) - ^

kiai段开始到00:52:036 - 这里是一个重复，00:52:036 - 到01:02:359 - 是一个重复，后面的重复结尾部分不同你就可以用别的节奏下法下了，你要遵循歌曲规律的话就是要在这个kiai段里面重复2遍相同的节奏，和我上面说的一样的，后面的相同节奏也是一样处理的，所以后面我就不说了你自己看着改


00:51:391 (8) - 建议把00:51:875 - 换成note
01:34:294 (4,1) - 这种擦边最好不要 nazi overlap
01:40:101 (2,1) - 太挤，跟我上面说的一样拉开点间隔或者和01:39:778 (1,2) - 弄成相同间隔
01:51:391 (1,2) - switch NC (前一个取消NC后一个NC)
01:52:682 (1,2) - ^
01:54:617 (1,2) - 这个的1最好不要叠上去因为你前面的叠是1/4连打但是你后面紧跟着的叠是个1/2，可能会误读
01:57:843 (5,6,7,8) - 你这要么和01:57:359 (4) - 滑条尾弄成相同间距，不然不太好看，这几个滑条之间也是互相挤来挤去的
02:28:649 (7) - 该NC的时候就要NC，个人是不推荐这么长的combo的，除了连打
02:31:230 (8) - ^
02:30:746 (3,4,5,6,7) - 弧形没摆好

testplay
ProgressiveStar
49 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
ProgressiveStar
Thanks for your modding
Reply

Amaikai wrote:

[box=Dragon]00:18:470 (1) - this being note is weird. this sound is later mapped as sliders 00:18:793 (2,3) - It's OK

Rhythm is irregular here 00:24:276 (2,3,4,5,6) - expected to be same rhythm as 00:21:696 (2,3,4,5) - changed the previous one

Dunno about this rhythm either, i feel like 00:32:825 (1) -note, 00:32:986 (2) -note, 00:33:147 (3) - repeat would fit song better since 00:32:825 (8) - is covering sound on 00:32:825 and 00:32:986 which to my ears sound equally strong and both should have feedback on map. I don't want to put too many circles in a combo

00:35:244 (6) - sliderend on this has strong sound

I feel like jumps here 00:37:018 (1) - till 00:38:147 (2) - would fit nicely to map. I don't feel like current mapping 00:37:341 (9,10,11) - is following song. It felt like map pauses while song keeps going. OK

Now this is an opinion but as I played map further I got more and more bored, map is extremely straightforward which is something i expect from normal/hards. There weren't any interesting patterns or more importantly, variance. Yes, song does repeat same tune over and over which makes making an interesting map for this song difficult. I see you improvised rhythm at spots to make it interesting to play but sadly patterning wasn't. Sorry, I can't mod further because of the design issue.I'lll try to make it funnier ,Thanks

No kds please.
ProgressiveStar
49 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
ProgressiveStar
谢谢MOD！萌新学到了很多
中文MOD真是太好了！
以下是回复

Yugu wrote:

From my queue

一般
Offest错了，红线开始位置应该是424，不信的话你自己改了然后听第一个重音跟后面的重音
改完后点Timing选项里面的全部重新对齐再开ai mod检查下就行了已经修改了offset

Dragon
我这是按照424offest来摸的

00:11:714 - 漏音 你后面00:16:553 - 这的相同部分都放了note，前面为啥没放 我最后把后面的删掉了，感觉这里节奏不需要这么密集
00:18:327 - 漏音 补上去了
00:21:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 为什么这里下的note和00:23:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不一样，音乐是一样的，00:26:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 也是，我看了下后面相同音乐的部分并没有重复一样的note排版，所以你这里就要改了，歌曲都有规律凭什么你的图没有规律，把这三段音乐改成相同的节奏就好了，全改成00:21:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这样的或者是你想改成其他的节奏都可以 我把第一个节奏改了，第一个节奏的长条跳过了一个clap，所以已经改成和后面一样了

00:42:359 (3,4,5) - 这三个滑条之间的间隔弄成一样的吧 谢谢你如此细致的观察，我已经用尺子改好了=w=
00:44:940 (3,4,5) - ^ 这里滑条头间隔是一样的，感觉还可以

kiai段开始到00:52:036 - 这里是一个重复，00:52:036 - 到01:02:359 - 是一个重复，后面的重复结尾部分不同你就可以用别的节奏下法下了，你要遵循歌曲规律的话就是要在这个kiai段里面重复2遍相同的节奏，和我上面说的一样的，后面的相同节奏也是一样处理的，所以后面我就不说了你自己看着改 我想让节奏稍微多样一点，这首歌重复的乐段比较多，所以想让节奏听起来不一样，于是我修改了一些比较突兀的节奏


00:51:391 (8) - 建议把00:51:875 - 换成note 换了
01:34:294 (4,1) - 这种擦边最好不要 nazi overlap 已经拉开了距离
01:40:101 (2,1) - 太挤，跟我上面说的一样拉开点间隔或者和01:39:778 (1,2) - 弄成相同间隔 采用了后者
01:51:391 (1,2) - switch NC (前一个取消NC后一个NC) 这里的NC我全部重做了
01:52:682 (1,2) - ^
01:54:617 (1,2) - 这个的1最好不要叠上去因为你前面的叠是1/4连打但是你后面紧跟着的叠是个1/2，可能会误读 我把这个1叠在上一个点下面了
01:57:843 (5,6,7,8) - 你这要么和01:57:359 (4) - 滑条尾弄成相同间距，不然不太好看，这几个滑条之间也是互相挤来挤去的拉开了距离
02:28:649 (7) - 该NC的时候就要NC，个人是不推荐这么长的combo的，除了连打 已修改，包括紧接着的一点
02:31:230 (8) - ^
02:30:746 (3,4,5,6,7) - 弧形没摆好 改的更扁平了一点

testplay
大触
Shiratori
525 posts
Joined April 2015
Shiratori
3 years ago 可怕
[hard]
00:25:585 (1) - 取消nc
00:35:585 (4,1) - 擦边了 尽量避免这种
00:40:101 (6,3,4) - 同理
01:13:972 (3) - 这个间距和后面不同
01:17:198 (5) - 同
01:28:004 (5,1) - 现在其实 许多图都不用这种滑条了 不过只是美观问题 不影响rank
01:28:972 (2,5) - 擦边
01:35:907 (1,1) - 你这个长滑条把大部分短滑条都遮住了 应该是unrankable
02:03:649 -在这nc
hard大概就这些 需要注意的是 擦边并不是不允许的 只是要把擦边玩出新意02:47:520 (2,1) - 这种擦边就ok
[dragon]
00:37:520 (3,1) - 擦边 这种我建议叠起来
01:53:649 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这样叠起来是很难读的

连打串有点多 星数却才4.8 加点跳让他成5星
啊对了你这张图要是想rank我建议加个adv难度 毕竟1.6的spread有点大
好水啊 想要kd私我一下我shoot一个
Aoki Inoue
148 posts
Joined December 2016
Aoki Inoue
Hey request mod

Ini mohond ikondisikan mz !!
Normal HP:4|OD:4 ×
HP:5|OD:5,3 √
Hard HP:4|OD:4 ×
HP:6|OD:6,5 √
Dragon HP:4|OD:7 ×
HP:7,3|OD:8,5 √

Oke segitu dah Thank ~
ProgressiveStar
49 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
ProgressiveStar
啊，谢谢MOD的说
这里是回复

Amamiya Kanade wrote:

3 years ago 可怕 AFK过嘛
[hard]
00:25:585 (1) - 取消nc 是我没注意233
00:35:585 (4,1) - 擦边了 尽量避免这种 已经远离了
00:40:101 (6,3,4) - 同理 已经修改
01:13:972 (3) - 这个间距和后面不同 虽然不同但感觉会匀称一些
01:17:198 (5) - 同
01:28:004 (5,1) - 现在其实 许多图都不用这种滑条了 不过只是美观问题 不影响rank 可能这是个很老的Blanket，让我考虑一下
01:28:972 (2,5) - 擦边 适当远离了
01:35:907 (1,1) - 你这个长滑条把大部分短滑条都遮住了 应该是unrankable 改成挡不住的了，现在节奏距离很远都这么严格的吗
02:03:649 -在这nc 说得对
hard大概就这些 需要注意的是 擦边并不是不允许的 只是要把擦边玩出新意02:47:520 (2,1) - 这种擦边就ok
[dragon]
00:37:520 (3,1) - 擦边 这种我建议叠起来 那就叠起来咯
01:53:649 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这样叠起来是很难读的 难吗，我试着做成滑条了

连打串有点多 星数却才4.8 加点跳让他成5星 个人感觉4.8并无遗憾，这些串感觉就值4.8 Orz，所以跳跃上也就不再追求难度了
啊对了你这张图要是想rank我建议加个adv难度 毕竟1.6的spread有点大 我把NM改成EZ算了233
好水啊 想要kd私我一下我shoot一个
coco
410 posts
Joined January 2017
coco
hi from my q
Dragon
00:23:569 (4) - Overmapped. It's repeated throughout the song so you should find them and fix them. To fix this you could stack the 3 notes and leave a space where (4) should be.
02:04:294 - The break here is very long.
Normal
02:39:133 (1,2) and 02:41:714 (1,2) - Are suddenly a lot longer than the other sliders with no change in shape. You could probably curve them to make them more distinct.

I really like how you did hitsounds :D
Tar Curunir
59 posts
Joined October 2012
Tar Curunir
Hello! From my modding queue

General
Great map you have there! I love the older mapping style too^^ One change I'd make in the Song Setup is to add "澤野 弘之" in the artist spot and have Sawano Hiroyuki solely in the romanised title.

Hard
00:10:746 (1,5) - I don't know if the ranking criteria for hard diffs is as strict as easy's, but I'd change the SV of the second slider to visually be the same length as the first one, since you're aiming for symmetry.
00:15:907 (1,5) - Here it doesn't bother me as much, since it isn't symmetrical. I'd change one or the other. Either change the SV to aim for symmetry or don't bother to make 00:10:746 (1,5) - symmetrical in the first place.
00:21:714 (2,1) - These to objects shouldn't overlap. keep the spacing uniform across one pattern.
00:24:294 (2,3,4,5) - Keep spacing between these 4 circles the same distance.
00:21:069 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - move this entire section a bit to the left, so that 00:24:940 (1,2,3,4) - is centered.
00:26:230 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - uniform spacing
00:27:520 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
00:29:778 (3) - rotate this slider a bit more upward. looks better imo
00:41:714 (1) - This overlap seems out of place, although it's not a dealbreaker.
00:41:714 (1,2) - align these two objects.
00:52:520 (2,3,4,1) - this pattern fits better here for spacing reasons: https://puu.sh/wYCeu/6440c1acf1.png
01:25:262 (4,1) - Why are these two sliders so close to each other? 01:23:811 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - these should all be the same distance away from each other.
01:26:875 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:28:004 (5,1) - Blanket this a bit more properly
01:28:165 (1,2) - Stack these two objects properly
01:30:101 (5,6) - Align these two sliders better with the square pattern
01:31:391 (3,4,5,1,2,1) - spacing
01:35:585 (4,1) - weird overlap
01:38:488 (1,2) - overlaps like these are way more polished, try to add more of those
01:42:359 (1,5) - Stack these two objects properly
01:42:682 (2,6) - ^
01:49:133 (2,3) - this is a bit of nitpick, but put the second slider a bit higher to align with the first one
01:51:553 (2) - replace this slider with 3 singles, since rhythm emphasizes the white and red ticks.
01:52:843 (2) - ^
02:03:649 (1,2,3,4) - I wouldn't make these four singles go off screen
02:36:553 (1,3,4,5,6,1) - These objects form a hexagon, so i'd put 02:36:875 (2) - more in the center.
02:39:133 (1,2,1) - spacing
02:48:165 (1,2,1,2) - Both these patterns are great, but I'd stick to one, since the music remains the same.

Great map otherwise! Big fan already^^ You might want to doublecheck the spacing all around your map just to make sure. I may have missed some parts.

Hope to see this ranked soon o/
ProgressiveStar
49 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
ProgressiveStar
Thank you for your modding!

cococolaco wrote:

hi from my q
Dragon
00:23:569 (4) - Overmapped. It's repeated throughout the song so you should find them and fix them. To fix this you could stack the 3 notes and leave a space where (4) should be. Sorry, I don't think it is so overmapped, First, this is the last difficult, could be a litte hard, Second, I want to make the map more fluent. so, sorry.
02:04:294 - The break here is very long. I'm sorry but this period of music doesn't have something to map.So I just made the storyboard.
Normal
02:39:133 (1,2) and 02:41:714 (1,2) - Are suddenly a lot longer than the other sliders with no change in shape. You could probably curve them to make them more distinct. I'll think of how to make it distinct


I really like how you did hitsounds :D My Thanks!
ProgressiveStar
49 posts
Joined March 2014
Topic Starter
ProgressiveStar
Thank you for your encourage, I'm so glad you like it~
Replys

Tar Curunir wrote:

Hello! From my modding queue

General
Great map you have there! I love the older mapping style too^^ One change I'd make in the Song Setup is to add "澤野 弘之" in the artist spot and have Sawano Hiroyuki solely in the romanised title.OK, Added

Hard
00:10:746 (1,5) - I don't know if the ranking criteria for hard diffs is as strict as easy's, but I'd change the SV of the second slider to visually be the same length as the first one, since you're aiming for symmetry.I'd like to do like that but this is a hard diff, changing SV too frequently could make problems
00:15:907 (1,5) - Here it doesn't bother me as much, since it isn't symmetrical. I'd change one or the other. Either change the SV to aim for symmetry or don't bother to make 00:10:746 (1,5) - symmetrical in the first place.Same
00:21:714 (2,1) - These to objects shouldn't overlap. keep the spacing uniform across one patternFixed
00:24:294 (2,3,4,5) - Keep spacing between these 4 circles the same distance.You really found my mistake
00:21:069 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - move this entire section a bit to the left, so that 00:24:940 (1,2,3,4) - is centered.Yes,It should be centred
00:26:230 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - uniform spacing OK
00:27:520 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing OK
00:29:778 (3) - rotate this slider a bit more upward. looks better imo Very good
00:41:714 (1) - This overlap seems out of place, although it's not a dealbreaker. I think it is OK?
00:41:714 (1,2) - align these two objects. Fixed with my ruler
00:52:520 (2,3,4,1) - this pattern fits better here for spacing reasons: https://puu.sh/wYCeu/6440c1acf1.png Genius! Really a beautiful pattern
01:25:262 (4,1) - Why are these two sliders so close to each other? the last 4 slider take a quick moving,so I add a long slider close to the last moving, for a safe felling
01:23:811 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - these should all be the same distance away from each other.the 4 slider middle fixed in the same distance, but the first one is a symmetrical design
01:26:875 (1,2,3) - spacing Aligned
01:28:004 (5,1) - Blanket this a bit more properly checked
01:28:165 (1,2) - Stack these two objects properly what a mistake
01:30:101 (5,6) - Align these two sliders better with the square pattern I want players to draw a 540 angle circle so I'll keep it
01:31:391 (3,4,5,1,2,1) - spacing Try to fixed
01:35:585 (4,1) - weird overlap no more overlap now
01:38:488 (1,2) - overlaps like these are way more polished, try to add more of those get it
01:42:359 (1,5) - Stack these two objects properly you find the mistake I didn't find
01:42:682 (2,6) - ^ Yes
01:49:133 (2,3) - this is a bit of nitpick, but put the second slider a bit higher to align with the first one but every square in this period has a round angle(which not a vertical turning)
01:51:553 (2) - replace this slider with 3 singles, since rhythm emphasizes the white and red ticks.Sorry, the sound will be so intensive in this part
01:52:843 (2) - ^ Same
02:03:649 (1,2,3,4) - I wouldn't make these four singles go off screen Sorry,I don't know how to deal with this problem
02:36:553 (1,3,4,5,6,1) - These objects form a hexagon, so i'd put 02:36:875 (2) - more in the center.Creative! I didn't find this polygen ever
02:39:133 (1,2,1) - spacing the buzz slider is kind of hard in this diff so I put them together
02:48:165 (1,2,1,2) - Both these patterns are great, but I'd stick to one, since the music remains the same.I'll check it

Great map otherwise! Big fan already^^ You might want to doublecheck the spacing all around your map just to make sure. I may have missed some parts. My appreciate! Hope you could update the map to see whether the space is fixed as you wish

Hope to see this ranked soon Thank you! o/
frogyfro
144 posts
Joined August 2015
frogyfro
m4m! (only doing the hardest diff)

i think the biggest problem with this mapset is the rhythm choice. hopefully this does not sound too harsh, but i don't think you'll be able to get this ranked unless you improve as a mapper first, and remap the whole thing. im going to focus on the rhythm here, although i think there are more problems beyond it

00:10:746 (1,2,3) - listen to the red tick inside of the slider here, there's a pretty clear cymbal sound. same for the white tick after 3. typically, when this happens it makes the most sense to put slider heads or circles on the important sounds, and slider ends on the less important sounds. personally, i'd lay out the rhythm like this:
SPOILER
this way, you still are mapping to the melody of the song, but you also have the slider ends covering the percussion sounds. you might want to rework the rest of this entire section with this in mind. throughout the map there's a lot of sounds that you're missing (01:33:327 (1) - 01:55:262 (3) - )

00:18:811 (2,3,4,5) - for this part, you definitely have an object over every sound, but they're prioritized incorrectly. take any of the sliders. there's a weak sound on the head, but then the slider end has a super loud snare drum sound. slider ends matter a lot less than circles or slider heads. so, it would make much more sense to have a circle on those snare drum sounds instead of a slider end. i'd make the rhythm of this part like this:
SPOILER
it would also help to put jumps to the snare drum sounds. it would make them stand out more.

00:21:069 (1,2) - firstly, before even listening to the song, repeat sliders with more than 1 repeat are not very good for gameplay. it's annoying for players to read the second repeat arrow. in most cases where you think a double repeat slider would fit, it makes much more sense to just use two sliders. in this case, however, there's a very important sound from the melody on the very end of the first repeat slider. listen to how the first 3 notes are the same, but the 4th is different. i'd lay out the rhythm like this
SPOILER
there is a snare drum sound on the end of 2 here, but because we've chosen to map to the melody, the melody is more important than the snare drum in this scenario.

you could, if you wanted to, instead map to the drums, but then your rhythm would look something like this:
SPOILER
which is kinda boring.

overall, its a good idea to pick any one instrument and map to it. currently, its hard to see what instrument you're trying to follow, and it makes your map feel kinda messy

00:23:327 (1,2,3,4,1) - 2 and 4 in this combo aren't over any sound. its almost never ok to put a circle or a slider head over silence. it doesn't make sense for there to be a stream here, it'd be better to just use circles on white and red ticks. most of the streams in this map are like this. i like how they play but the song just doesn't support them

i'm going to stop my mod here because it's pretty long as is, and most of the other problems i'd point out are just different versions of the things i'd mention above. what i will do, is point out 5 areas i think have particularly bad rhythm, but not explain what i would do to improve the rhythm. i think you can learn from trying to think through the process of figuring out a rhythm yourself.

00:41:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

00:49:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

01:45:585 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -

01:54:456 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -

02:54:133 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
Sandrew
560 posts
Joined March 2014
Sandrew
from my queue
[general]
enable combo colors可以每个难度里开一下的
你的图里没有一个小于2星的难度，rank rules没有改动的话应该是不能rank的，建议把normal再改难一点升点星，然后加个easy难度，就算你把nm改到2星以下这spread也夸张了点
呃，你的storyboard好像有点nsfw，如果将来有人提醒的话可能需要加一个标签
[normal]
如果你要加难度的话normal少不了remap，我就快速扫一下好了
00:53:004 (2,4) - 这样的完全重叠不推荐出现在最低难度里，做easy的时候可以当心一下
02:52:036 (3,4,1) - 这俩挨得有点微妙
别的我感觉没什么问题
[hard]
ar8please，od可以适当加一点6或者7不然对不起你的星数
00:18:488 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个走正常ds吧，当然只是建议
00:59:617 (2,3) - 这里挨得太近了
01:01:714 (3) - 拆个note出来
01:48:811 (1,2) - 把1改成折返，2改成note听起来不那么违和，后面的类似地方也可以这么处理
[dragon]
下音光是这么看违和度还行，看上面一个人说了这么多我就不摸这个方向了
00:23:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这四个跳夹得有点挤，可以改一下几个折返滑条的方向
00:57:036 (8,1) - 可以把这个滑条尾方向往上托一点，和8来一个明显一点好看一点的overlap
感觉滑条没有放开摆，串和跳倒是摆得挺开的
不是很会摸这种反复n次的ost，有的地方不太能理解下音不过听起来违和度不高，好像水了一点，不好意思了 :?
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