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Gojou Kai & Nakamura Meiko - fragment of tears [OsuMania]

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Frim4503
2,067 posts
Joined July 2013
Frim4503
as requested from

col: 1,2,3,4
Beginner
00:32:524 (32524|3) - move to 3
00:39:895 - i think 1 slider is enought
01:00:810 (60810|0) - slider start here
01:10:581 - add note
01:32:181 (92181|2) - move to 1
Standart
00:04:752 (4752|3) - move to 3
00:26:695 - add note ( you forgot to add it)
00:28:067 - ^
00:32:181 - 00:34:924 - try make stair
00:58:410 - 00:58:067 - try re-arange like this to have a better patern http://img0.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads ... 297c01.jpg use it for preference for another same case
01:26:352 (86352|2) - move to 2
Hyper
00:00:981 - add slider , end here 00:02:009 -
00:50:352 - add slider , end here 00:50:695 -
00:50:695 - add slider , end here 00:51:038 -

good luck
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

-LASU- wrote:

Hi
|1|2|3|4|

mod
Hyper
00:22:581 - add note 4 ok

Another
00:23:095 - add note nope
00:50:010 - add note 1 ok
01:10:752 - add note ok
01:11:267 - ^ nope
01:11:610 (71610|1) - move to 3 and 01:11:781 - add note 2 ok
01:11:952 - add note 3 ok
01:30:124 - add note 1 ok
01:30:467 - add note 1 ok
01:30:810 - add double note 2,3 ok
01:31:495 - add note 1 ok
01:31:838 - ^ ok
01:32:181 - add double note 3,4 ok
01:32:352 - add note 1 ok
01:32:867 - add note 2 ok
goodluck (☝ ՞ਊ ՞)☝
Thanks for the mod :3

Frim4503 wrote:

as requested from

col: 1,2,3,4
Beginner
00:32:524 (32524|3) - move to 3 ok
00:39:895 - i think 1 slider is enought nope
01:00:810 (60810|0) - slider start here doesn't it already start there @_@
01:10:581 - add note ok
01:32:181 (92181|2) - move to 1 no, repeated sound
Standart
00:04:752 (4752|3) - move to 3 no
00:26:695 - add note ( you forgot to add it) there is already a note :/
00:28:067 - ^ ^
00:32:181 - 00:34:924 - try make stair pattern now is fine imo
00:58:410 - 00:58:067 - try re-arange like this to have a better patern http://img0.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads ... 297c01.jpg use it for preference for another same case no
01:26:352 (86352|2) - move to 2 ok
Hyper
00:00:981 - add slider , end here 00:02:009 - no, don't want to emphasis start of map
00:50:352 - add slider , end here 00:50:695 - no, following vocal
00:50:695 - add slider , end here 00:51:038 - ^

good luck
Thanks for the mod c:
DrawdeX
786 posts
Joined December 2012
DrawdeX
Hello! :)
From osu!mania PH Modding Queue
Mod as requested :)
I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance
4K = |1|2|3|4|
Everything modded
[Beginner]
HD -1 ; OD -1
• 00:11:781 (11781|1) - Move to 3, semi-high pitch
• 00:12:981 (12981|1) - Move to 4, for spread note on cymbal sound
• 00:15:381 (15381|1,15724|2) - Ctrl+H, for spread note
• 00:18:467 (18467|2) - Move to 1, for spread note on cymbal sound
• 00:22:238 (22238|2,22581|1) - Move one line to the right, for spread note
• 00:34:924 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:45:895 - ^
• 00:48:467 - ^
• 00:50:010 - ^
• 01:01:667 - ^
• 01:02:010 - ^
• 01:10:581 (70581|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:11:095 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:11:781 - ^
• 01:18:810 - ^
• 01:24:295 (84295|2,84638|0) - Ctrl+G, for spread note
• 01:29:781 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:35:267 - ^
• 01:36:638 - ^
• 01:43:495 - ^
• 01:47:438 - ^
• 01:48:981 (108981|1) - Move to 4, for spread note on cymbal sound
• 01:54:467 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:59:952 - ^

[Standard]
HD -0.5 ; OD- 0.5
• 00:02:524 (2524|1,3038|0) - Move one line to the right
• 00:03:552 (3552|1) - Move to 1, if above is applied (pitch is from high to low)
• 00:08:010 (8010|1,8524|0) - Move one line to the right
• 00:09:038 (9038|1) - Move to 1, if above is applied (pitch is from high to low)
• 00:23:952 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:31:838 (31838|2,32181|1) - Ctrl+H, for hand balance
• 00:33:552 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:40:410 (40410|2) - Move to 2, for spread note on cymbal sound
• 00:51:381 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:10:581 (70581|0,71095|3) - Ctrl+H, for hand balance
• 01:18:467 (78467|2) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 01:24:295 (84295|1,84467|2) - Ctrl+H, for hand balance
• 01:26:867 (86867|1,87038|3) - Ctrl+G, ^
• 01:29:781 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:35:952 (95952|0) - Move to 3, for hand balance
• 01:36:638 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:57:210 (117210|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:57:724 (117724|0) - Move to 4, ^

[Hyper]
• 00:02:009 (2009|1) - Move to 4, high pitch
• 00:03:038 (3038|3) - Move to 3, semi-high pitch
• 00:34:581 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:39:895 (39895|2) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 00:40:410 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:51:038 (51038|2) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 00:51:381 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:56:867 - ^
• 00:59:610 - ^
• 01:00:810 - ^
• 01:01:667 - ^
• 01:02:010 - ^
• 01:02:352 - ^
• 01:03:724 (63724|2,63895|1) - Ctrl+H, for hand balance
• 01:06:467 (66467|0) - Move to 4, for hand balance
• 01:07:838 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:18:467 (78467|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:18:810 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:35:267 - ^ or two notes
• 01:43:495 - ^
• 01:44:867 (104867|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:46:238 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:48:981 - ^
• 01:51:724 (111724|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:54:467 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:55:667 (115667|0,115838|2) - Ctrl+G, for hand balance

[Another]
• 00:23:952 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:32:181 - ^
• 00:33:552 - ^
• 00:50:010 - ^
• 01:18:810 - ^
• 01:24:295 - ^
• 01:25:667 - ^
• 01:27:038 - ^
• 01:28:410 - ^
• 01:29:781 - ^
• 01:31:152 - ^
• 01:33:895 - ^
• 01:35:267 - ^

Good luck~! :)
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

DrawdeX wrote:

Hello! :)
From osu!mania PH Modding Queue
Mod as requested :)
I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance
4K = |1|2|3|4| not changing any of the ODs
Everything modded
[Beginner]
HD -1 ; OD -1
• 00:11:781 (11781|1) - Move to 3, semi-high pitch ok
• 00:12:981 (12981|1) - Move to 4, for spread note on cymbal sound ok
• 00:15:381 (15381|1,15724|2) - Ctrl+H, for spread note ok
• 00:18:467 (18467|2) - Move to 1, for spread note on cymbal sound ok
• 00:22:238 (22238|2,22581|1) - Move one line to the right, for spread note ok
• 00:34:924 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:45:895 - ^ ok
• 00:48:467 - ^ ok
• 00:50:010 - ^ end of slider emphasises cymbal sound
• 01:01:667 - ^ ok
• 01:02:010 - ^ ok
• 01:10:581 (70581|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance more comfy to press down 3 and 4
• 01:11:095 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound ok
• 01:11:781 - ^ ok
• 01:18:810 - ^ ok
• 01:24:295 (84295|2,84638|0) - Ctrl+G, for spread note ok
• 01:29:781 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound ok
• 01:35:267 - ^ ok
• 01:36:638 - ^ ok
• 01:43:495 - ^ ok
• 01:47:438 - ^ ok
• 01:48:981 (108981|1) - Move to 4, for spread note on cymbal sound ok
• 01:54:467 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound ok
• 01:59:952 - ^ no

are you trying to make my beginner diff a hyper one :c

[Standard]
HD -0.5 ; OD- 0.5
• 00:02:524 (2524|1,3038|0) - Move one line to the right
• 00:03:552 (3552|1) - Move to 1, if above is applied (pitch is from high to low)
• 00:08:010 (8010|1,8524|0) - Move one line to the right
• 00:09:038 (9038|1) - Move to 1, if above is applied (pitch is from high to low)
• 00:23:952 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound no
• 00:31:838 (31838|2,32181|1) - Ctrl+H, for hand balance no, i don't understand how pressing 1 and 2 together makes it difficult to play
• 00:33:552 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound ok
• 00:40:410 (40410|2) - Move to 2, for spread note on cymbal sound
• 00:51:381 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound ok
• 01:10:581 (70581|0,71095|3) - Ctrl+H, for hand balance
• 01:18:467 (78467|2) - Move to 2, for hand balance
• 01:24:295 (84295|1,84467|2) - Ctrl+H, for hand balance
• 01:26:867 (86867|1,87038|3) - Ctrl+G, ^
• 01:29:781 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound ok
• 01:35:952 (95952|0) - Move to 3, for hand balance
• 01:36:638 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound ok
• 01:57:210 (117210|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:57:724 (117724|0) - Move to 4, ^

[Hyper]
• 00:02:009 (2009|1) - Move to 4, high pitch ok
• 00:03:038 (3038|3) - Move to 3, semi-high pitch move to 2
• 00:34:581 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound ok
• 00:39:895 (39895|2) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 00:40:410 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:51:038 (51038|2) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 00:51:381 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:56:867 - ^
• 00:59:610 - ^
• 01:00:810 - ^
• 01:01:667 - ^
• 01:02:010 - ^ ok
• 01:02:352 - ^ ok
• 01:03:724 (63724|2,63895|1) - Ctrl+H, for hand balance
• 01:06:467 (66467|0) - Move to 4, for hand balance
• 01:07:838 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:18:467 (78467|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:18:810 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound ok
• 01:35:267 - ^ or two notes
• 01:43:495 - ^
• 01:44:867 (104867|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:46:238 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:48:981 - ^
• 01:51:724 (111724|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance
• 01:54:467 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:55:667 (115667|0,115838|2) - Ctrl+G, for hand balance

[Another]
• 00:23:952 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:32:181 - ^ ok
• 00:33:552 - ^ ok
• 00:50:010 - ^
• 01:18:810 - ^
• 01:24:295 - ^
• 01:25:667 - ^
• 01:27:038 - ^
• 01:28:410 - ^
• 01:29:781 - ^
• 01:31:152 - ^
• 01:33:895 - ^
• 01:35:267 - ^

Good luck~! :)
Thanks for modding, anything that I didn't reply wasn't used c:
and i still don't get how pressing [1 2] or [3 4] is considered hand bias :/
Xenophilius
456 posts
Joined August 2014
Xenophilius
Hi! From _andreamtr & _Xenophilius_'s modding Queue.

Layout:

4k: |0|1|2|3|

Sotty guy for the short mod but actually I've no time.

Standard
  1. 00:40:067 (40067|2) - I suggest to move this here 00:40:067 (40067|2) -
  2. 01:11:438 - 01:11:610 - Add notes
  3. 01:42:981 (102981|1) - Move to 2
  4. 01:43:152 (103152|2) - Move to 1

Hyper
  1. 00:04:410 (4410|1,4752|2) - Ctrl + H
  2. 00:40:067 (40067|1) - I suggest to make it become a LN until 00:40:410 -
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

_Xenophilius_ wrote:

Hi! From _andreamtr & _Xenophilius_'s modding Queue.

Layout:

4k: |0|1|2|3|

Sotty guy for the short mod but actually I've no time.

Standard
  1. 00:40:067 (40067|2) - I suggest to move this here 00:40:067 (40067|2) - move to same place wat?
  2. 01:11:438 - 01:11:610 - Add notes no, following background sound
  3. 01:42:981 (102981|1) - Move to 2 why? :/
  4. 01:43:152 (103152|2) - Move to 1 ar u ok :c

Hyper
  1. 00:04:410 (4410|1,4752|2) - Ctrl + H hmm okay
  2. 00:40:067 (40067|1) - I suggest to make it become a LN until 00:40:410 - no
Thanks for modding, good try even though you're busy c:
SReisen
898 posts
Joined October 2011
SReisen
IRC
23:40 [-Seiryuu-]: erm shiki
23:40 [-Seiryuu-]: are you free to test a map :3
23:40 ShikiNoHollow: lel
23:40 ShikiNoHollow: sure
23:40 [-Seiryuu-]: ;;
23:40 *[-Seiryuu-] is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/545057 Gojou Kai & Nakamura Meiko - fragment of tears]
23:40 [-Seiryuu-]: play any diff that you like
23:41 ShikiNoHollow: dling
23:43 [-Seiryuu-]: okies
23:44 ShikiNoHollow: is it keysounded?
23:46 [-Seiryuu-]: a really small part
23:46 [-Seiryuu-]: well it used to be fully keysounded until it took up too much space
23:46 ShikiNoHollow: oo
23:47 [-Seiryuu-]: wow
23:47 ShikiNoHollow: :3
23:47 [-Seiryuu-]: did you find any part of that map awkward to play?
23:47 ShikiNoHollow: yes
23:47 ShikiNoHollow: many mistake
23:47 ShikiNoHollow: or so
23:47 ShikiNoHollow: lol
23:47 ShikiNoHollow: 00:04:581 - kick
23:47 ShikiNoHollow: kick + piano is heavy right
23:47 ShikiNoHollow: add
23:48 ShikiNoHollow: 00:04:752 - cymbal
23:48 ShikiNoHollow: add
23:48 ShikiNoHollow: 00:07:495 - cymbal add
23:48 [-Seiryuu-]: hm
23:48 [-Seiryuu-]: okay
23:48 ShikiNoHollow: im doing IRD
23:48 ShikiNoHollow: IRC*
23:48 ShikiNoHollow: lol
23:48 [-Seiryuu-]: lel
23:48 [-Seiryuu-]: you want some kudos for this xD
23:48 ShikiNoHollow: not really
23:49 ShikiNoHollow: if you want to make map in good shape density i can help
23:49 [-Seiryuu-]: well thanks in advance :D
23:49 [-Seiryuu-]: since only one part of my earpiece is functioning
23:49 ShikiNoHollow: "O
23:50 [-Seiryuu-]: need help in listening to random sounds in the mappu
23:50 ShikiNoHollow: ok
23:50 ShikiNoHollow: did you add where i ask?
23:50 [-Seiryuu-]: yeah
23:50 ShikiNoHollow: 00:10:067 - kick , add
23:50 [-Seiryuu-]: added
23:51 ShikiNoHollow: 00:12:295 - & - 00:12:638 - cymbal , add
23:51 ShikiNoHollow: i suggest a pattern
23:51 ShikiNoHollow: wait*
23:53 ShikiNoHollow: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2768765
23:53 ShikiNoHollow: 00:16:238 - heavy piano , wanna add?
23:53 [-Seiryuu-]: nope, i'm keeping that
23:54 ShikiNoHollow: no add
23:54 ShikiNoHollow: okay
23:54 ShikiNoHollow: the pattern i suggest? ,
23:54 ShikiNoHollow: 00:23:181 (23181|0,23267|1,23352|2,23438|3,23524|2) - not following the rhythm
23:54 [-Seiryuu-]: hm
23:55 ShikiNoHollow: 00:23:181 - snare
23:55 [-Seiryuu-]: i have no idea what to add there lel
23:55 ShikiNoHollow: do like this
23:55 ShikiNoHollow: 00:22:924 (22924|3,22924|1,23010|0,23010|2) -
23:55 ShikiNoHollow: this one
23:56 ShikiNoHollow: done?
23:56 ShikiNoHollow: 00:32:524 - here got kick , add
23:56 [-Seiryuu-]: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2768795
23:56 [-Seiryuu-]: this fine?
23:56 ShikiNoHollow: 00:32:867 - 00:33:210 - 00:33:381 - also got kick
23:57 [-Seiryuu-]: rip kicks
23:57 [-Seiryuu-]: added
23:57 ShikiNoHollow: 00:23:267 (23267|3,23267|1) - there nothing
23:57 ShikiNoHollow: remove
23:57 [-Seiryuu-]: okay
23:57 ShikiNoHollow: 00:23:524 - this one can add , got kick sound
23:58 ShikiNoHollow: put it on clm 1
23:58 [-Seiryuu-]: hm
23:58 [-Seiryuu-]: that's what i'm worried about
23:58 [-Seiryuu-]: jack on 175 bpm doesn't feel nice
23:58 ShikiNoHollow: no
23:59 ShikiNoHollow: its okay
23:59 [-Seiryuu-]: hmm
23:59 ShikiNoHollow: that jack can change course
23:59 [-Seiryuu-]: okay added :3
23:59 ShikiNoHollow: 00:45:210 (45210|1,45210|0,45295|2,45295|3,45381|0,45381|1,45467|2,45467|3,45552|1,45552|0,45638|2,45638|3,45724|0,45724|1,45810|2,45810|3,45895|1,45895|0) - sudden dluble
23:59 ShikiNoHollow: double*
23:59 ShikiNoHollow: 00:45:895 - cymbal
23:59 ShikiNoHollow: ill give pattern
00:00 [-Seiryuu-]: thanks c:
00:00 ShikiNoHollow: in that part got kick also
00:00 ShikiNoHollow: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2768817
00:01 ShikiNoHollow: 00:48:981 (48981|1,48981|3,49152|1,49152|3,49324|3,49324|1,49495|3,49495|1,49667|1,49667|3) - this one
00:01 ShikiNoHollow: change pattern
00:01 ShikiNoHollow: is awkward jack
00:01 ShikiNoHollow: 00:49:152 (49152|2,49152|0,49495|2,49495|0) - ctrl+h
00:02 [-Seiryuu-]: changed
00:03 ShikiNoHollow: 00:51:724 - 00:52:410 - 00:53:095 - 00:53:781 - 00:54:124 - that 3 note
00:03 ShikiNoHollow: why so sudden?
00:03 ShikiNoHollow: i see your snare and kick are always 2 notes
00:03 ShikiNoHollow: ><
00:03 ShikiNoHollow: remve 1 notes
00:03 [-Seiryuu-]: well
00:03 [-Seiryuu-]: *just seiryuu things*
00:03 ShikiNoHollow: haha
00:03 ShikiNoHollow: its okay
00:03 ShikiNoHollow: 00:55:495 - remove 1 note
00:04 ShikiNoHollow: 00:58:238 - ^
00:05 ShikiNoHollow: 01:01:152 (61152|0,61324|3,61495|1) - remove
00:05 [-Seiryuu-]: nope
00:05 [-Seiryuu-]: those are meant to be there :3
00:05 [-Seiryuu-]: sorry :c
00:05 ShikiNoHollow: it follow?
00:05 ShikiNoHollow: piano
00:05 ShikiNoHollow: but is so sudden
00:05 ShikiNoHollow: before were not
00:05 [-Seiryuu-]: hear the keysound on the triple
00:05 ShikiNoHollow: yes i see
00:05 [-Seiryuu-]: my mapping pattern is using triple for new backgroud sounds :c
00:05 [-Seiryuu-]: instead of LN
00:06 ShikiNoHollow: 00:52:752 - this only 2 note
00:06 ShikiNoHollow: 00:52:410 - no keysound
00:06 [-Seiryuu-]: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2768863 ?]
00:08 ShikiNoHollow: okay
00:08 ShikiNoHollow: 01:07:667 - kick
00:09 [-Seiryuu-]: added
00:09 ShikiNoHollow: start form here - 01:13:324 -
00:09 ShikiNoHollow: you miss many kick
00:09 [-Seiryuu-]: rip i got kicked
00:10 ShikiNoHollow: 01:13:838 - 01:19:324 - 01:21:381 - kick , add
00:10 ShikiNoHollow: 01:22:238 (82238|2,82238|3,82238|0) - theres ?
00:10 ShikiNoHollow: none
00:10 ShikiNoHollow: 1 note only remove 2
00:11 [-Seiryuu-]: vocal for that part
00:11 ShikiNoHollow: 01:21:895 - 01:22:067 - kick
00:11 [-Seiryuu-]: removing 1 only
00:11 ShikiNoHollow: suggest LN for vocal
00:12 [-Seiryuu-]: actually
00:12 ShikiNoHollow: 01:23:952 (83952|1,83952|3,84038|0,84038|2) - remove , theres nothing
00:12 [-Seiryuu-]: i'll keep the triple until someone else picks it out
00:13 [-Seiryuu-]: removed
00:13 ShikiNoHollow: 01:22:581 - clap
00:13 ShikiNoHollow: add
00:14 [-Seiryuu-]: added
00:14 ShikiNoHollow: wait
00:14 ShikiNoHollow: i give you some useful pattern
00:15 [-Seiryuu-]: oWo
00:15 ShikiNoHollow: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2768933 - 01:21:895 -
00:15 ShikiNoHollow: 01:23:781 - kick add
00:15 ShikiNoHollow: i forget to remove this - 01:23:610 (83610|1) -
00:16 [-Seiryuu-]: i'll screenshot the pattern first
00:16 [-Seiryuu-]: because i'm not sure about using it :c
00:16 [-Seiryuu-]: sorry shiki
00:17 ShikiNoHollow: 01:26:010 - 01:26:352 - 01:26:695 - 01:27:381 - 01:27:724 - 01:28:067 - 01:28:752 - 01:29:095 - 01:29:438 - missing kick
00:17 ShikiNoHollow: and if you want to follow the guitar
00:17 ShikiNoHollow: i give you a pattern and note suggestion
00:17 [-Seiryuu-]: wow i missed so many kicks
00:18 ShikiNoHollow: lol
00:18 [-Seiryuu-]: please kick me
00:18 [-Seiryuu-]: ;w;
00:20 ShikiNoHollow: 01:27:038 - to - 01:28:410 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2768969
00:21 ShikiNoHollow: 01:28:410 - to - 01:29:438 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2768973
00:22 ShikiNoHollow: 01:29:781 - cymbal * add
00:22 ShikiNoHollow: avoid jack :v
00:22 ShikiNoHollow: 01:30:467 - missing kick
00:23 [-Seiryuu-]: whoa slow down captain ;w;
00:23 ShikiNoHollow: ><
00:23 [-Seiryuu-]: still trying to understand the pattern so i'm gonna take awhile sorry :c
00:24 [-Seiryuu-]: well you should probably just name the errors that you want me to change and i'll get back to it >3<
00:25 ShikiNoHollow: lol
00:25 ShikiNoHollow: your mistake is most on missing note
00:26 [-Seiryuu-]: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2769023 i think this can avoid the jack lel]
00:26 [-Seiryuu-]: yeah missing notes most of the time
00:26 [-Seiryuu-]: have to get new earpiece soon
00:26 [-Seiryuu-]: ;w;
00:28 ShikiNoHollow: hehe cool
00:28 ShikiNoHollow: 01:31:838 - kick
00:28 ShikiNoHollow: 01:33:210 - ^
00:29 ShikiNoHollow: 01:33:895 - adjust here , dont just follow guitar , add the kick :v
00:29 [-Seiryuu-]: added
00:30 [-Seiryuu-]: damn i thought it was a good idea not to follow the kick
00:30 [-Seiryuu-]: ;w;;;
00:30 ShikiNoHollow: 01:33:895 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2769069
00:30 ShikiNoHollow: if is hard diff is okay
00:30 ShikiNoHollow: kinda awkward
00:30 ShikiNoHollow: is okay if you dont want to add
00:30 [-Seiryuu-]: okay :3
00:30 ShikiNoHollow: is my suggestion
00:30 ShikiNoHollow: ><
00:31 [-Seiryuu-]: hm
00:31 [-Seiryuu-]: i'll add it
00:31 [-Seiryuu-]: since it makes the map consistent
00:31 ShikiNoHollow: :v
00:31 ShikiNoHollow: the rest is okay
LordRaika
Elite Mapper
1,438 posts
Joined September 2013
LordRaika
Yo~ here's my BN Check as requested :

Some note before bubble or else....

BG : ✔ ( ok )
Audio : X ( whoa, all wav now ^^b BUT some of them got a delay issue T^T )
Timing : ✔ ( ok )
Spread : ✔ ( ok )
Pattern & Snap : .....

Audio : aaargh, whatever, here i get my lazy ass and fix it for you.... asdfasdfasdfasdf ( phew , done )
i also optimize the size for you, so overwrite all of them.... and i give u 1 additional hitsound, that automatically works for you when you put it inside your song folder >w<

Some check on harsh pattern.... :

Beginner

  1. 00:23:610 (23610|3) - move to 3, avoid mini jack as much as possible...
  2. 00:46:238 (46238|1,46581|3,46924|2) - move to 4 3 4
  3. 00:48:295 - end the LN on 2nd column here....
  4. 00:49:895 (49895|0,49952|1) - this note... on Another, its 1/8 X_X , consider the right snap then fix for all dif...
  5. 01:01:667 - end the LN here and move 01:02:010 (62010|2) - to 1
  6. 01:35:610 (95610|1) - aaaaa remove pls....
    01:36:295 (96295|3) - same, suggested to remove this...

Standard

  1. 00:34:581 - how bout end the LN here and add 1 more note here in return of... removing this >> 00:34:752 (34752|1) - ,will give you a better rhythm to follow...
  2. 00:51:552 (51552|3) - aaaaaaaaa remove T^T
    01:13:495 (73495|2) - ^
  3. 01:18:467 (78467|2) - to 2

Hyper

  1. 00:23:095 (23095|2) - move to 4 pls D: , its not same with the previous note on 3rd column
  2. 00:23:695 (23695|1,23867|3,23952|1,24124|3) - Ctrl+J ^ really easier flow , at least for me to get all 300s
  3. 00:34:152 (34152|0,34238|1,34324|0) - really suggest swap their column, 1 to 2 , 2 to 1 , 1 to 2
  4. 00:45:210 - supposed to like this :
    notice the four hl note, it supposed to be repeat again ^^, so with that pattern, the flow is easy and its clear on what sound it is...

Another

  1. its fine.... sooo many mini trill and jack ;w; but its another... so its okay....
    just check them again , i wont comment much, it fits the difficulty, just change any pattern if you want,
    fix above mod... and call me back.....
You can call me back after that ^
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

LordRaika wrote:

Yo~ here's my BN Check as requested :

Some note before bubble or else....

BG : ✔ ( ok )
Audio : X ( whoa, all wav now ^^b BUT some of them got a delay issue T^T )
Timing : ✔ ( ok )
Spread : ✔ ( ok )
Pattern & Snap : .....

Audio : aaargh, whatever, here i get my lazy ass and fix it for you.... asdfasdfasdfasdf ( phew , done )
i also optimize the size for you, so overwrite all of them.... and i give u 1 additional hitsound, that automatically works for you when you put it inside your song folder >w<

Some check on harsh pattern.... :

Beginner

  1. 00:23:610 (23610|3) - move to 3, avoid mini jack as much as possible...
  2. 00:46:238 (46238|1,46581|3,46924|2) - move to 4 3 4
  3. 00:48:295 - end the LN on 2nd column here....
  4. 00:49:895 (49895|0,49952|1) - this note... on Another, its 1/8 X_X , consider the right snap then fix for all dif...
  5. 01:01:667 - end the LN here and move 01:02:010 (62010|2) - to 1
  6. 01:35:610 (95610|1) - aaaaa remove pls....
    01:36:295 (96295|3) - same, suggested to remove this...
(all accept)

Standard

  1. 00:34:581 - how bout end the LN here and add 1 more note here in return of... removing this >> 00:34:752 (34752|1) - ,will give you a better rhythm to follow...
  2. 00:51:552 (51552|3) - aaaaaaaaa remove T^T (nope, pressing note after LN should be okay :c)
    01:13:495 (73495|2) - ^ (^)
  3. 01:18:467 (78467|2) - to 2

Hyper

  1. 00:23:095 (23095|2) - move to 4 pls D: , its not same with the previous note on 3rd column
  2. 00:23:695 (23695|1,23867|3,23952|1,24124|3) - Ctrl+J ^ really easier flow , at least for me to get all 300s
  3. 00:34:152 (34152|0,34238|1,34324|0) - really suggest swap their column, 1 to 2 , 2 to 1 , 1 to 2
  4. 00:45:210 - supposed to like this :
    notice the four hl note, it supposed to be repeat again ^^, so with that pattern, the flow is easy and its clear on what sound it is... (i never noticed this ;w;;;;)

Another

  1. its fine.... sooo many mini trill and jack ;w; but its another... so its okay....
    just check them again , i wont comment much, it fits the difficulty, just change any pattern if you want,
    fix above mod... and call me back.....
You can call me back after that ^
Raika @_@, I thought you were kidding lele
Aruel
1,891 posts
Joined February 2014
Aruel
Another

00:10:924 (10924|0) - delete
00:17:952 - add one
01:30:295 (90295|1) - changes a long note, and finish it 01:30:467 -
01:30:381 (90381|3) - delete

Hyper

00:12:981 (12981|2) - move to 1
00:50:352 (50352|0) - move to 3
00:50:695 (50695|1) - move to 3
01:29:438 (89438|3) - changes a long note, and finish it 01:29:781 -

Standard

00:40:067 (40067|3) - move to 2,and change a long note and finish it 00:40:410 -
01:57:552 - add one
01:58:067 - add one
01:58:238 - add one


Beginner

00:48:295 (48295|2) - changes a long note, and finish it 00:48:467 -
00:48:467 (48467|3) - finish it 00:49:895 -
01:00:867 (60867|0) - move to 01:00:810 -

It is only a my opinion. :)
This is the best beatmap!
You hope that helps. :D
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Another

00:10:924 (10924|0) - delete (nope, there's a cymbal here)
00:17:952 - add one (good catch!)
01:30:295 (90295|1) - changes a long note, and finish it 01:30:467 - (ehm nope, i think it's fine now)
01:30:381 (90381|3) - delete (it's following the beat so nope c:)

Hyper

00:12:981 (12981|2) - move to 1 (erm, what are your columns?, i'll take it as 1l2l3l4 then, moved to 2)
00:50:352 (50352|0) - move to 3 (moved to 2)
00:50:695 (50695|1) - move to 3 (okay)
01:29:438 (89438|3) - changes a long note, and finish it 01:29:781 - (hmm, okay c:)

Standard

00:40:067 (40067|3) - move to 2,and change a long note and finish it 00:40:410 - (moved to 2, but keeping as single note)
01:57:552 - add one (good catch!)
01:58:067 - add one (^)
01:58:238 - add one (^)


Beginner

00:48:295 (48295|2) - changes a long note, and finish it 00:48:467 - (not sure if beginners can handle it, but okay c:)
00:48:467 (48467|3) - finish it 00:49:895 - (okay)
01:00:867 (60867|0) - move to 01:00:810 - (oh whoops, i forgot to make it longer :P)

It is only a my opinion. :)
This is the best beatmap!
You hope that helps. :D
Thanks for the mod :)
schwarzvgrune
1,214 posts
Joined April 2014
schwarzvgrune
Hi Seiryuu~~~~ ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue

Feel free to implement or rejecti if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~

General : ( √ )
Mapset : ( √ )
Metadata : ( √ )
Timing : ( √ )
Audio :( √ )
Background :( √ )
Hitsounding :( √ )


4K = |1|2|3|4|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

Another
]
00:08:181 - http://puu.sh/gTRAk/c704410a0c.jpg
00:26:524 (26524|1) - to 3
00:30:638 (30638|1) - 1
00:30:981 (30981|2) - 2
00:31:581 (31581|1,31667|2) - ctrl g
00:35:781 (35781|0) - 3
00:41:610 (41610|0) - 3
00:42:295 (42295|3) - 1
00:42:210 (42210|1) - 4


Nice Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi Seiryuu~~~~ ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue

Feel free to implement or rejecti if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~

General : ( √ )
Mapset : ( √ )
Metadata : ( √ )
Timing : ( √ )
Audio :( √ )
Background :( √ )
Hitsounding :( √ )


4K = |1|2|3|4|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

Another
]
00:08:181 - http://puu.sh/gTRAk/c704410a0c.jpg (i have no idea where you started but i'll just change it then)
00:26:524 (26524|1) - to 3
00:30:638 (30638|1) - 1
00:30:981 (30981|2) - 2
00:31:581 (31581|1,31667|2) - ctrl g
00:35:781 (35781|0) - 3
00:41:610 (41610|0) - 3
00:42:295 (42295|3) - 1
00:42:210 (42210|1) - 4 (well all of the rest actually do not need to be changed imo :/, i'll think about it if someone else notices it, because they are 1 snap apart)


Nice Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
Thanks for modding c:
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Shad0w1and
don't grave it :/
I will upload a STD set in one week, we can link to each other
Muu-chan
1,605 posts
Joined August 2014
Muu-chan
GOLDEN MOD

from ✿Nekoworks
we'll do some super re-check as requested :3 since we had mod it before.
* Firstly take my stars as reward :3
* Secondly please wait, in progress checking. It might take time :)
* Thirdly, sorry for my bad English ><"
* Lastly, all of them just suggestion
|1|2|3|4|
GENERAL
* I suggest to move The BMS Of Fighter 2011 -Intersection of conflict- on tags to source. Since it has BMS on source and tags. But well, i don't know it for sure ^^
* Uncheck the "Widescreen Support" since it doesn't have any SB :3
* Uncheck the "Use special style (N+1 style) for mania. But i also not sure for this ><"
BEGINNER
* 00:23:952 ~ 00:32:181 - i don't know what are those LN for, i heard no guitar, fast drum beat or long sound that fit to the LN >< so i suggest to change them into notes and make it more simple for Easy difficulty.
* 00:33:552 (33552|1) - i suggest to stop this LN here 00:34:581 - so sei san could double this part 00:34:924 - because, it has same sound (chord) with 00:36:295 Example.
* 00:39:895 - i suggest this one sei san. Because i heard that 00:39:895 - still has chord sound and long piano sound start on 00:40:067 - ^^
* 00:49:895 (49895|0,49952|1,50010|2) - this is important. I just playback it on 25% and it isn't 1/6 but 1/4. So i suggest to snap it on 1/4 00:49:838 - :3 desu
* 00:50:352 (50352|0) - i suggest to move on 4
* 01:00:810 (60810|0) - if this LN for vocal, i think it should stop at 01:01:324 -
* 01:11:781 (71781|0) - i suggest to stop this LN on 01:12:981 - (for vocal) and add LN again from 01:12:981 ~ 01:13:324 - for fast 1/4 drum beat.
* 01:22:238 (82238|3) - i suggest to move this note on 01:22:067 - (following pattern) :3
* 01:23:610 (83610|3) - same here^ on 01:23:438 -
* 01:23:781 - if sei san apply that, sei san could add note here^^
* 01:47:781 - maybe add a note here to make it same with 01:47:267 (107267|0,107438|3) -
* 01:54:467 (114467|0,115838|3) - i heard both vocal / piano sound it stops at 01:55:152 - and 01:56:867 - ^^
yay i think that's what i could do sei san ><" sorry for a little mod and very long delay T^T

GOOD LUCK :D
Last edited by Muu-chan , edited 2 times in total.
Fubukicat
970 posts
Joined February 2012
Fubukicat
GOLDEN MOD


Hi there nyan~ Sei-chan mod from ✿Nekoworks

hope it will help :3

Ma mi mu me mod , rainbow gold mooooooood desu~
Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[Another]
00:02:009 (2009|3,2009|1,2009|0) - Better make it 3 notes , ( you did use 2 for piano and there's one for cymbal sound )
00:09:810 (9810|3) - add one note in 4 ( or two) but making them jack is important it's the same sound tham here 00:09:895 (9895|3,9895|1) -
00:38:695 (38695|2) - should be 2 notes according to your previous patterns~
00:49:895 (49895|1) - move to 00:49:838 (49838|1) - This note hitsound isn't the good pitch for the piano you should find the good one . (try raika hitsound library there's alot of piano hitsound )
00:49:952 (49952|2) - move to 00:49:924 (49924|2) - thoose notes are 1/4
01:07:410 (67410|1) - (optional) add one more note 01:07:495 (67495|3,67495|2) - same sound with this
01:07:667 (67667|1,67667|2) - (optional) add one more note
01:54:038 (114038|3) - add to 4 ^(optional)
01:54:295 (114295|2) - add to 3 ^(optional)
[Hyper]
00:05:781 (5781|2,6295|0) - Ctrl+J , (pitch relevancy , firs note is lower in pitch tham the second one)
00:06:810 (6810|2) - move to 2
00:49:895 (49895|1,49952|2) - same as Another this should be 1/4
01:48:295 (108295|3) - add a note for cymbal sound
01:48:638 (108638|0) - ^ same add one more note
[Standard]
00:40:238 (40238|1) - (optional) you could add one more note to 2 to make a pattern , and it keep well the flow imo
00:49:895 (49895|0,49952|1) - Same as Another and Hyper , this should be 1/4
01:10:924 (70924|0) - (optional) add note here on 1 would be suggested
01:11:438 (71438|1) - add note ( there's a drum sound here , and it should follow pretty well the flow of the map imo)
01:11:610 (71610|2) - add here too (drum sound)
01:47:610 (107610|3) - I think this LN should start here : 01:48:295 (108295|0) - ( there is no real sound to press before , and it's not vocal either I think )
[Beginner]
00:17:010 (17010|2) - hmm (optional) up to you to remove this note I think it's really tricky for a newcomer to play that kind of stair
^ suggestion would be also to move 00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2) - from 1 collumn to the left so the left hand play 2 notes and right hand only 1 ( feels like a mini jump )
( note that is my feel about it , it's already nice so up to you to keep it )
00:49:895 (49895|0,49952|1,50010|2) - like Another hyper and standard , it should be 1/4 imo
01:22:067 (82067|0) - add one note
01:22:238 (82238|3) - remove
^ this is to follow your actual patterns~
01:35:952 (95952|0) - remove (imo this isn't needed , esp since it's easier diff :3 )
01:59:952 (119952|3) - (optional) add on more note for cymbal effect prefrerably not LN .

nyah~ , I've enjoyed seeing this map again :3 it's so nice >w<b
Good Luck , and Have a nice day GWD Sei-chan ^^/
/me shoots two star , yeap Rainbow stars /me runs~
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

Eternalie wrote:

GOLDEN MOD


Hi there nyan~ Sei-chan mod from ✿Nekoworks

hope it will help :3

Ma mi mu me mod , rainbow gold mooooooood desu~
Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[Another]
00:02:009 (2009|3,2009|1,2009|0) - Better make it 3 notes , ( you did use 2 for piano and there's one for cymbal sound )
00:09:810 (9810|3) - add one note in 4 ( or two) but making them jack is important it's the same sound tham here 00:09:895 (9895|3,9895|1) - (nope)
00:38:695 (38695|2) - should be 2 notes according to your previous patterns~
00:49:895 (49895|1) - move to 00:49:838 (49838|1) - This note hitsound isn't the good pitch for the piano you should find the good one . (try raika hitsound library there's alot of piano hitsound ) (this was directly from the bms ver keysounds so i think they're fine)
00:49:952 (49952|2) - move to 00:49:924 (49924|2) - thoose notes are 1/4
01:07:410 (67410|1) - (optional) add one more note 01:07:495 (67495|3,67495|2) - same sound with this (nope)
01:07:667 (67667|1,67667|2) - (optional) add one more note (its actually a 3beat by 3beat but i made it a stream so that it's more fun :/)
01:54:038 (114038|3) - add to 4 ^(optional) ^
01:54:295 (114295|2) - add to 3 ^(optional) ^
[Hyper]
00:05:781 (5781|2,6295|0) - Ctrl+J , (pitch relevancy , firs note is lower in pitch tham the second one)
00:06:810 (6810|2) - move to 2
00:49:895 (49895|1,49952|2) - same as Another this should be 1/4
01:48:295 (108295|3) - add a note for cymbal sound
01:48:638 (108638|0) - ^ same add one more note
(all accept^^)
[Standard]
00:40:238 (40238|1) - (optional) you could add one more note to 2 to make a pattern , and it keep well the flow imo (nope)
00:49:895 (49895|0,49952|1) - Same as Another and Hyper , this should be 1/4
01:10:924 (70924|0) - (optional) add note here on 1 would be suggested
01:11:438 (71438|1) - add note ( there's a drum sound here , and it should follow pretty well the flow of the map imo)
01:11:610 (71610|2) - add here too (drum sound)
01:47:610 (107610|3) - I think this LN should start here : 01:48:295 (108295|0) - ( there is no real sound to press before , and it's not vocal either I think )
[Beginner]
00:17:010 (17010|2) - hmm (optional) up to you to remove this note I think it's really tricky for a newcomer to play that kind of stair
^ suggestion would be also to move 00:16:924 (16924|1,17010|2) - from 1 collumn to the left so the left hand play 2 notes and right hand only 1 ( feels like a mini jump )
( note that is my feel about it , it's already nice so up to you to keep it ) (i think i'm gonna keep it because i had no problems with those patterns when i started ;w;)
00:49:895 (49895|0,49952|1,50010|2) - like Another hyper and standard , it should be 1/4 imo
01:22:067 (82067|0) - add one note
01:22:238 (82238|3) - remove
^ this is to follow your actual patterns~
01:35:952 (95952|0) - remove (imo this isn't needed , esp since it's easier diff :3 )
01:59:952 (119952|3) - (optional) add on more note for cymbal effect prefrerably not LN .

nyah~ , I've enjoyed seeing this map again :3 it's so nice >w<b
Good Luck , and Have a nice day GWD Sei-chan ^^/
/me shoots two star , yeap Rainbow stars /me runs~
Thanks for the mod and stars, anything i didn't reply was used ^^

Shad0w1and wrote:

don't grave it :/
I will upload a STD set in one week, we can link to each other
I'm not gonna grave it anytime soon lel, thanks for the stars though c:
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Shad0w1and
Hi Just uploaded mine, can I ask for a link :D to my set?
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/300210
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

Shad0w1and wrote:

Hi Just uploaded mine, can I ask for a link :D to my set?
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/300210
sure, i don't mind ^^
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

Shad0w1and wrote:

don't grave it :/
I will upload a STD set in one week, we can link to each other
rip misclick someone get bn qat here to deny kudos asdfad
JamesHappy
678 posts
Joined January 2014
JamesHappy
yo sofa~ m4m

column |1|2|3|4|

[Beginner]

00:05:781 (5781|0) - move to 2 since it the same sound on this part 00:03:038 (3038|1) -
00:10:752 (10752|1,11267|0) - move to 3 and 2
00:14:352 (14352|1) - remove (not too loud beat)
00:15:724 (15724|3) - ^
00:19:838 (19838|0) - ^
00:21:210 (21210|3) - ^
00:40:410 (40410|2) - ^ (too hard for the newbies)
01:00:810 (60810|0) - end this LN to 01:01:324

[Standard]

00:05:267 (5267|1,5781|0) - move to 3 and 2
00:48:810 - try this one

01:01:838 - add(?)
01:09:038 (69038|3,69210|2) - ctrl+j
01:18:638 - add(?)
01:55:495 - try this :3


noice diff though

[Hyper]

00:10:238 - this one sofa~

00:22:924 - just my suggestion :3I dieded here

01:17:438 - add(?)
01:20:181 - ^
01:22:924 (82924|1,82924|0,82924|2,83610|2,83610|3,83610|1) - woah sudden 3-notes. Can you make it 2-notes :3
01:31:152 - add(?)
01:32:524 - ^
01:33:895 - ^
01:40:410 - ^

[Another]

00:10:238 - just my thing

00:45:295 (45295|2,45381|1,45638|3) - why not try add another notes?
if you added it 00:45:210 (45210|3) - move this to 2
00:50:095 - add(?)
00:50:181 - ^
00:52:067 (52067|3,53438|0) - not double? like here 00:51:724 (51724|3,51724|1) - ?
00:55:238 (55238|0,55324|1) - move to 2 and 3 (following the pattern)
01:10:495 (70495|2) - add
01:12:895 - you know what to do :3
01:17:267 - ^
01:24:381 (84381|0) - am i only one who didn't heard this part
01:24:552 (84552|0) - ^

rest seems fine imo
such poor mod

GL
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

JamesHappy15 wrote:

yo sofa~ m4m

column |1|2|3|4|

[Beginner]

00:05:781 (5781|0) - move to 2 since it the same sound on this part 00:03:038 (3038|1) -
00:10:752 (10752|1,11267|0) - move to 3 and 2
00:14:352 (14352|1) - remove (not too loud beat) (nope, used to emphasis the start of the piano and stuffs)
00:15:724 (15724|3) - ^ (^)
00:19:838 (19838|0) - ^ (^)
00:21:210 (21210|3) - ^ (^)
00:40:410 (40410|2) - ^ (too hard for the newbies) (i'll remove it if it's really a problem for them^^)
01:00:810 (60810|0) - end this LN to 01:01:324

[Standard]

00:05:267 (5267|1,5781|0) - move to 3 and 2
00:48:810 - try this one
(nope, pattern now seems fine imo :c)
01:01:838 - add(?) (nope, but good try tho)
01:09:038 (69038|3,69210|2) - ctrl+j
01:18:638 - add(?) (nope sorry hams :C)
01:55:495 - try this :3
(thx im stealing this)

noice diff though

[Hyper]

00:10:238 - this one sofa~
(nou hams, stairs are easier to hit imo ;w;)
00:22:924 - just my suggestion :3I dieded here

01:17:438 - add(?) (nope, no drum drum beat here)
01:20:181 - ^ (^)
01:22:924 (82924|1,82924|0,82924|2,83610|2,83610|3,83610|1) - woah sudden 3-notes. Can you make it 2-notes :3 (ok ok you win)
01:31:152 - add(?) (same reason as before sorry jamesu)
01:32:524 - ^ (^)
01:33:895 - ^ (^)
01:40:410 - ^ (ok i'll accept this thx ham)

[Another]

00:10:238 - just my thing
(sorry hams ;w;)
00:45:295 (45295|2,45381|1,45638|3) - why not try add another notes? (meh, i think i hear some stuff in the background for the 2 note stuff idk, might just be me)
if you added it 00:45:210 (45210|3) - move this to 2
00:50:095 - add(?)
00:50:181 - ^
00:52:067 (52067|3,53438|0) - not double? like here 00:51:724 (51724|3,51724|1) - ? (ok you win again)
00:55:238 (55238|0,55324|1) - move to 2 and 3 (following the pattern) (this was on purpose LOL ;w;)
01:10:495 (70495|2) - add (ok i didnt see this again)
01:12:895 - you know what to do :3 (nop)
01:17:267 - ^ (^)
01:24:381 (84381|0) - am i only one who didn't heard this part (i think so lol, its following the guitar thingy)
01:24:552 (84552|0) - ^ (^ since i didn't want to do it in 1/6 snap, it ends up like this hue)

rest seems fine imo
such poor mod

GL
Thx for the mod hams, good luck on your future mods c:
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

Muu-chan wrote:

GOLDEN MOD

from ✿Nekoworks
we'll do some super re-check as requested :3 since we had mod it before.
* Firstly take my stars as reward :3
* Secondly please wait, in progress checking. It might take time :)
* Thirdly, sorry for my bad English ><"
* Lastly, all of them just suggestion
|1|2|3|4|
GENERAL
* I suggest to move The BMS Of Fighter 2011 -Intersection of conflict- on tags to source. Since it has BMS on source and tags. But well, i don't know it for sure ^^
* Uncheck the "Widescreen Support" since it doesn't have any SB :3
* Uncheck the "Use special style (N+1 style) for mania. But i also not sure for this ><"
BEGINNER
* 00:23:952 ~ 00:32:181 - i don't know what are those LN for, i heard no guitar, fast drum beat or long sound that fit to the LN >< so i suggest to change them into notes and make it more simple for Easy difficulty. (listen closely to the background lol)
* 00:33:552 (33552|1) - i suggest to stop this LN here 00:34:581 - so sei san could double this part 00:34:924 - because, it has same sound (chord) with 00:36:295 Example. (ehhh it expired, but keeping it as it is anyway c:)
* 00:39:895 - i suggest this one sei san. Because i heard that 00:39:895 - still has chord sound and long piano sound start on 00:40:067 - ^^ (nope, leaving it as it is)
* 00:49:895 (49895|0,49952|1,50010|2) - this is important. I just playback it on 25% and it isn't 1/6 but 1/4. So i suggest to snap it on 1/4 00:49:838 - :3 desu (asdfasdfasdf y u do dis to my pretty 1/6s)
* 00:50:352 (50352|0) - i suggest to move on 4
* 01:00:810 (60810|0) - if this LN for vocal, i think it should stop at 01:01:324 - (doesn't it stop there already? :0)
* 01:11:781 (71781|0) - i suggest to stop this LN on 01:12:981 - (for vocal) and add LN again from 01:12:981 ~ 01:13:324 - for fast 1/4 drum beat.
* 01:22:238 (82238|3) - i suggest to move this note on 01:22:067 - (following pattern) :3 (ehm nope. no pattern here actually lol)
* 01:23:610 (83610|3) - same here^ on 01:23:438 -
* 01:23:781 - if sei san apply that, sei san could add note here^^(nope)
* 01:47:781 - maybe add a note here to make it same with 01:47:267 (107267|0,107438|3) - (good catch)
* 01:54:467 (114467|0,115838|3) - i heard both vocal / piano sound it stops at 01:55:152 - and 01:56:867 - ^^ (to explain, the LNs aren't following vocal, for most of the map actually. They follow the sound made by the triples in Another diff c:)
yay i think that's what i could do sei san ><" sorry for a little mod and very long delay T^T

GOOD LUCK :D
Thanks for the mod :3
Rivals_7
Beatmap Nominator
2,978 posts
Joined July 2014
Rivals_7
Hi~
from my queue 5 days ago. Sorry for delay. I have no internet connection and busy with my real life. :3
Anyways, cause many user have mod this map already, I can't detect any more thing to Mod.

Click Me :3
Another

01:31:152 - and - 01:33:895 - Add note. the drum and bell (?) tune is like this one - 01:29:781 (89781|1,89781|2,89781|0) - and - 01:32:524 (92524|3,92524|2,92524|0) - right?
01:38:010 (98010|0,99381|2) - Consider to delete? no need three notes for a light tune. Isn't it?

Standard

Suggestion :3 (feel free to ignore)

01:00:467 (60467|3) - Move to 3
If you accept that^ - 01:00:638 - add on 4
01:11:438 (71438|0,71438|1,71610|3,71610|2,71781|0,71781|1) - I think this pattern is pretty hard in standard diff. the pattern on the hyper one is not too hard


I'm not really into timing. But I suggest you to remove this time (the highlighted one) to remove the AiMod Issues. (All diff)


The other diff seems perfect to me

GL~ on getting this ranked. Have a nice day [-Seiryuu-] :) :)
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~
from my queue 5 days ago. Sorry for delay. I have no internet connection and busy with my real life. :3
Anyways, cause many user have mod this map already, I can't detect any more thing to Mod.

Click Me :3
Another

01:31:152 - and - 01:33:895 - Add note. the drum and bell (?) tune is like this one - 01:29:781 (89781|1,89781|2,89781|0) - and - 01:32:524 (92524|3,92524|2,92524|0) - right? (good catch)
01:38:010 (98010|0,99381|2) - Consider to delete? no need three notes for a light tune. Isn't it? (its for the keysound)

Standard

Suggestion :3 (feel free to ignore)

01:00:467 (60467|3) - Move to 3 (ok)
If you accept that^ - 01:00:638 - add on 4 (changed)
01:11:438 (71438|0,71438|1,71610|3,71610|2,71781|0,71781|1) - I think this pattern is pretty hard in standard diff. the pattern on the hyper one is not too hard
(changed)

I'm not really into timing. But I suggest you to remove this time (the highlighted one) to remove the AiMod Issues. (All diff)
(nope, leaving it as it is)

The other diff seems perfect to me

GL~ on getting this ranked. Have a nice day [-Seiryuu-] :) :)
Thanks for the mod c:
-Guest_old
3 posts
Joined April 2015
-Guest_old
Another

00:04:581 - make it 320,192,4581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

-Guest wrote:

Another

00:04:581 - make it 320,192,4581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
hmm nope sorry :c

but good try though :3
puxtu
2,926 posts
Joined August 2013
puxtu
m4m logs
21:10 puxtu: dude
21:10 puxtu: before you go
21:10 puxtu: can you check my map
21:10 puxtu: lol
21:10 [-Seiryuu-]: ehm
21:10 [-Seiryuu-]: i'm in league atm
21:11 [-Seiryuu-]: 30mins later huehue sorry pux ;w;
21:11 puxtu: kjhdhjkakjhaaasd
21:32 [-Seiryuu-]: okay hi pux did you need me for something
21:32 puxtu: hi
21:32 *puxtu is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/553626 Neru - Ningen Shikkaku [Zenx's 7K Miscreation]] <osu!mania> |7K|
21:32 puxtu: lol
21:33 [-Seiryuu-]: i can't pass it
21:33 [-Seiryuu-]: lmao
21:33 puxtu: me too
21:33 puxtu: lol
21:33 *puxtu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/704075 Neru - Abstract Nonsense]
21:33 [-Seiryuu-]: not in my current state of mind
21:33 puxtu: ;w;;
21:33 [-Seiryuu-]: r u crazy
21:33 [-Seiryuu-]: we can't have hard 4k map
21:35 puxtu: lol
21:35 puxtu: the NS is not for rank
21:35 [-Seiryuu-]: i can tell
21:35 [-Seiryuu-]: from the start
21:35 [-Seiryuu-]: ;w;;;
21:36 [-Seiryuu-]: 02:20:396 (140396|3,140396|0,140468|1,140468|2,140540|3,140540|0,140613|2,140613|1,140685|1,140685|0,140685|3) - kill yourself for this u henti
21:37 puxtu: ;w;w;
21:37 puxtu: what's wrong with that ;w;
21:38 [-Seiryuu-]: double trill followed by jack
21:38 puxtu: it's nice right :D
21:38 [-Seiryuu-]: at least make it [12][34] ;w;
21:38 [-Seiryuu-]: 01:11:165 (71165|2,71165|0,71238|3,71238|1,71310|0,71310|2,71382|1,71382|3,71454|0,71454|2,71454|3) - this too henti
21:38 puxtu: lol
21:38 [-Seiryuu-]: actually that one is fine
21:38 [-Seiryuu-]: lmao
21:39 puxtu: wat
21:39 [-Seiryuu-]: the second link feels fine to play
21:40 puxtu: okoko
21:40 puxtu: next pls
21:40 [-Seiryuu-]: how am i supposed to check chart mapped to vocals
21:40 [-Seiryuu-]: i'm clueless
21:41 puxtu: lol
21:41 puxtu: what should I map then?
21:41 [-Seiryuu-]: i also have no clue
21:41 puxtu: the hi-hat?
21:42 puxtu: uyries
21:43 [-Seiryuu-]: i have no idea what im doing
21:43 [-Seiryuu-]: can i just summarise it
21:44 [-Seiryuu-]: 03:11:165 (191165|3,191165|1,191238|0,191238|2,191310|1,191310|3,191382|2,191382|0,191454|3,191454|1,191526|2,191526|0,191598|1,191598|0,191598|3) - you should kill youself for this too :c
21:44 puxtu: lmao
21:45 puxtu: ok fixed
21:45 [-Seiryuu-]: 02:48:088 (168088|0,168088|3,168161|2,168161|1,168233|0,168233|3,168305|2,168305|1,168377|1,168377|0,168377|3) - fix anything that looks like this because i'm a nazi
21:46 [-Seiryuu-]: and im so tired that i cant even move out of my chair
21:46 puxtu: ;w;w
21:46 [-Seiryuu-]: with that being said
21:46 [-Seiryuu-]: help me test a map
21:47 puxtu: what map
21:47 [-Seiryuu-]: fragment of tear
21:47 puxtu: np me
21:47 *[-Seiryuu-] is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/545057 Gojou Kai & Nakamura Meiko - fragment of tears]
21:48 [-Seiryuu-]: asking for playtests when the map is already halfway modded
21:48 [-Seiryuu-]: c:
21:48 puxtu: dline
21:48 puxtu: dling
21:52 [-Seiryuu-]: how was it
21:53 puxtu: omg why am i so noob
21:53 puxtu: lwl
21:53 [-Seiryuu-]: oWo
21:53 puxtu: 00:04:581 - dat kick
21:54 puxtu: this kind of sound that "must be mapped"
21:54 [-Seiryuu-]: wat
21:54 [-Seiryuu-]: ;w;;;
21:54 [-Seiryuu-]: b...but i wanted to make it simple
21:55 puxtu: ;w;
21:55 puxtu: ok ok
21:55 puxtu: you can keep it empty
21:56 [-Seiryuu-]: yay \:D/
21:56 puxtu: the rest is perfect
21:56 puxtu: kds pls
21:56 [-Seiryuu-]: yey
21:57 puxtu: 00:25:324 (25324|3) - too henti
21:57 [-Seiryuu-]: okok :c
21:58 [-Seiryuu-]: u no like that pattern :c
21:58 puxtu: nice hitsound
21:58 puxtu: me no like ;C
21:58 [-Seiryuu-]: thx
21:59 puxtu: what's this lol 01:10:752 (70752|0,71267|1) -
21:59 puxtu: hi-hat?
22:00 [-Seiryuu-]: i have no idea
22:01 [-Seiryuu-]: so delete?
22:01 puxtu: well what do you think? :v
22:01 puxtu: idk, your choice
22:01 puxtu: and this 01:15:210 (75210|0) -
22:02 puxtu: why it's double while the rest is only single
22:02 [-Seiryuu-]: the beat thingy
22:02 puxtu: oh
22:02 puxtu: so add here too 01:13:838 (73838|2) -
22:02 puxtu: the beat thingy
22:03 [-Seiryuu-]: added
22:03 puxtu: 01:19:324 (79324|3) - here too
22:03 [-Seiryuu-]: done
22:04 puxtu: wow why it's empty here? D: 01:21:381 -
22:04 [-Seiryuu-]: owat
22:04 [-Seiryuu-]: dafonz
22:04 puxtu: where's the note
22:04 [-Seiryuu-]: idk
22:04 [-Seiryuu-]: i forgot
22:04 [-Seiryuu-]: added
22:04 puxtu: who stole it
22:04 puxtu: ok
22:06 puxtu: 01:58:581 (118581|3) -
22:06 puxtu: explain
22:06 puxtu: owait i think it's fine
22:06 [-Seiryuu-]: o
22:06 [-Seiryuu-]: its the
22:06 [-Seiryuu-]: sound thing
22:07 puxtu: >sound thing
22:07 puxtu: ok
22:07 puxtu: acceptable reason
22:07 [-Seiryuu-]: ii cant name instruments
22:07 puxtu: nice map
22:07 puxtu: that's all i got
22:07 [-Seiryuu-]: ayylmao
22:07 puxtu: nothing really major
22:07 [-Seiryuu-]: double mod
22:07 puxtu: XD
22:07 [-Seiryuu-]: is this m4m irc
22:07 puxtu: yea i think XD
22:07 [-Seiryuu-]: lmao
22:07 [-Seiryuu-]: xDD
Shoegazer
osu!mania Paragon
528 posts
Joined April 2013
Shoegazer
what is this thing
SPOILER
19:55 Shoegazer: 3-note chords are a little overdone I think
19:55 [-Seiryuu-]: o
19:56 [-Seiryuu-]: 00:54:124 (54124|1,54124|3,54124|2) - you mean the ones like this?
19:56 Shoegazer: the one to the soft piano
19:56 Shoegazer: let me find them
19:56 Shoegazer: 00:36:295 - sounds like this
19:56 Shoegazer: I don't think it's loud enough to warrant a hand
19:57 Shoegazer: or triple
19:57 [-Seiryuu-]: hm
19:57 [-Seiryuu-]: so change to double?
19:57 Shoegazer: maybe you can accentuate it 
19:57 Shoegazer: by uh
19:57 [-Seiryuu-]: drowning it
19:57 Shoegazer: hm you actually can't accentuate it 
19:57 [-Seiryuu-]: :c
19:58 [-Seiryuu-]: i wanted to use triples for the sound in the background
19:58 Shoegazer: I was thinking of maybe making the 3rd note of the triplet the same as one of the notes as the double
19:58 [-Seiryuu-]: but nvm
19:58 Shoegazer: as an accentuation of the piano more than anything else
19:58 [-Seiryuu-]: o
19:58 [-Seiryuu-]: hm
19:58 Shoegazer: not quite doable since some of your patterns already do that
19:59 Shoegazer: you can also use miniholds but miniholds suck
19:59 [-Seiryuu-]: rip ideas
19:59 Shoegazer: 00:45:467 (45467|2,45467|3,45552|0,45552|1,45638|3,45724|1,45724|0,45810|2,45810|3,45895|3,45895|0,45895|1) - all of these except for the last note are doubles I think?
20:00 Shoegazer: same with 00:45:210 (45210|0,45210|3,45295|2,45381|1) - 
20:00 Shoegazer: \nvm 
20:00 Shoegazer: I can tell the layering scheme
20:01 [-Seiryuu-]: indecisive shoemaker
20:01 [-Seiryuu-]: XD
20:01 Shoegazer: 01:23:952 (83952|1,83952|0,84038|2,84038|3,84124|1,84124|3) - lol that's rude
20:01 [-Seiryuu-]: sorry :ccc
20:01 Shoegazer: it's fine
20:01 [-Seiryuu-]: so what about that part :O
20:02 Shoegazer: minijack caught me offguard
20:02 [-Seiryuu-]: o
20:02 Shoegazer: 01:28:410 (88410|0) - LN actually goes up to 01:28:410 (88410|0) - 
20:02 Shoegazer: wat
20:02 Shoegazer: 01:28:410 (88410|0) - 
20:02 Shoegazer: goddammit
20:02 Shoegazer: 01:28:752 - 
20:03 [-Seiryuu-]: that LN is for the first sound only D:
20:03 Shoegazer: the guitar right?
20:03 Shoegazer: oh
20:03 Shoegazer: the bell?
20:04 [-Seiryuu-]: bell
20:04 [-Seiryuu-]: the last LN is for guitar
20:04 [-Seiryuu-]: strange layering hehe
20:04 Shoegazer: yeah I was confused for a bit, kinda inconsistent
20:04 [-Seiryuu-]: ok then i'll extend it for guitar
20:04 Shoegazer: planning to go for rank with this?
20:04 [-Seiryuu-]: probably
20:05 [-Seiryuu-]: it's already star'd so i'm gonna work on it
20:05 Shoegazer: 01:41:095 - you can probably change this section since the patterns are exactly the same as another section
20:05 Shoegazer: somethig like uh
20:05 Shoegazer: 32[13]32[14] or something idk
20:05 Shoegazer: an anchor on 3 and then an anchor on 2
20:06 [-Seiryuu-]: what's a anchor
20:06 [-Seiryuu-]: ;w;
20:06 Shoegazer: stepmania term
20:06 Shoegazer: sec
20:06 [-Seiryuu-]: mind taking a screenshot c:
20:06 Shoegazer: yeah in a bit
20:07 [-Seiryuu-]: take your time~
20:07 Shoegazer: [http://puu.sh/i741N/f2ee6d585f.png the anchor is on 1 here]
20:07 [-Seiryuu-]: oh
20:07 Shoegazer: also that looks like shit ignore the map
20:07 [-Seiryuu-]: lmao
20:08 Shoegazer: HP8.5 seems a bit harsh?
20:08 [-Seiryuu-]: well it's fine for now i guess
20:08 [-Seiryuu-]: i mean
20:08 [-Seiryuu-]: hp8.5 on this map in kind of easy
20:09 Shoegazer: true
20:09 Shoegazer: other than that there isn't too much wrong with the layering, maybe you can do some touches based on ptich relevancy
20:10 Shoegazer: you already did on some
20:10 [-Seiryuu-]: o
20:10 Shoegazer: 00:05:267 - move to 3
20:10 Shoegazer: actually
20:10 [-Seiryuu-]: done
20:11 Shoegazer: 00:05:781 - 2
20:11 [-Seiryuu-]: o
20:11 [-Seiryuu-]: done
20:11 Shoegazer: 00:06:810 - 3 maybe? you might have to change some patterns though 
20:11 [-Seiryuu-]: hmm
20:12 [-Seiryuu-]: i'll move it to 1
20:12 Shoegazer: 00:07:495 - 3 could be a part of the triple for PR, again you have to change some patterns
20:12 Shoegazer: you're not layering the piano at that section though but you could always have some musical relevancy or something I guess
20:12 Shoegazer: ~musical relevancy~
20:13 [-Seiryuu-]: the triples are for either bells or cymbal in the chart
20:13 Shoegazer: I know
20:13 [-Seiryuu-]: so i'm not sure about changing them
20:14 Shoegazer: I'm not telling you to add an extra note to the triple, I'm just telling you to change the triple to something like say [134] or [123] or w/e
20:14 Shoegazer: but if you're not doing that that's fine
20:14 [-Seiryuu-]: oo
20:14 [-Seiryuu-]: i'm keeping it sorry shoe ;w;
20:14 Shoegazer: np
20:15 Shoegazer: 00:34:410 (34410|3,34410|0,34495|1,34581|0,34581|3,34667|2,34752|3,34752|0) - maybe you can vary up the doubles here 
20:15 Shoegazer: since they're differently pitched
20:16 [-Seiryuu-]: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3194668 does this work? :3]
20:16 Shoegazer: that triple
20:16 Shoegazer: yeah that works 
20:17 [-Seiryuu-]: oop
20:17 [-Seiryuu-]: 00:34:581 - do you hear a 1/4 beat here
20:17 [-Seiryuu-]: or is it just me
20:18 Shoegazer: lol i can hear the beats from 00:34:581 (34581|0,34581|3,34667|2,34752|0,34752|3,34838|2,34924|3,34924|0,34924|1) - 
20:18 Shoegazer: so yeah 1/4 beat
20:18 [-Seiryuu-]: hm
20:18 Shoegazer: your choice
20:18 [-Seiryuu-]: nvm
20:18 [-Seiryuu-]: leaving it
20:19 Shoegazer: 00:55:495 - maybe have one of the notes in the triple a 4
20:19 Shoegazer: but you'd have to rearrange some of the other triples as well to accentuate the higher pitched sound
20:19 Shoegazer: so eh
20:20 [-Seiryuu-]: hm
20:20 [-Seiryuu-]: but actually
20:21 [-Seiryuu-]: they're arranged in [123] or [432] for patterning
20:21 [-Seiryuu-]: pretty much
20:21 Shoegazer: you could maybe change which ones have [123] or [432] then
20:21 Shoegazer: depending on pitch
20:21 Shoegazer: same applies to the second chorus
20:21 [-Seiryuu-]: hmm okay
20:22 [-Seiryuu-]: thanks shoemaker
20:23 Shoegazer: np
20:23 [-Seiryuu-]: you want some kudos for this
20:23 Shoegazer: yeah I'll post the irc
20:23 [-Seiryuu-]: okies
Abraxos
855 posts
Joined October 2014
Abraxos
Hai Seri heres ur mod ples gimme $10,000 irl later plox

PS. ples be gentle and apologiesie if mod is bad i first time ples no hurt me ;_;

General

  1. BPM and Offset : ( ✓ )
  2. Aimod : ( ✓ )
  3. Kiai : ( ✓ )
  4. Metadata : ( ✓ )
  5. Hitsound : ( ✓ ) Heard some piano here and there. I could just be hearing things. But this map certainly can have piano notes. And maybe it does. I keep doubting myself.
  6. Video : ( ✓ )

Columns! Get your columns here! 1/2/3/4

Easy Beginner

  1. 00:52:752 (52752|0,52752|1) and 00:55:495 (55495|3,55495|2); I find it a little (just a tiny bit) bland that these patterns are on alternate in this chorus. I understand that symmetry and all, but maybe have some of then move to 2/3?
  2. Besides that, everything else was perfect IMO. It was pretty nice to play, and the patterns generally were complementing the song well.

Standard

  1. 01:47:781 (107781|0), have a note at /3/ and 01:47:952 (107952|3), have a note at /2/. This part here seems to be imitating the guitar, and I found that it could probably follow the patterns in 01:01:152 (61152|3,61152|1,61324|2,61324|0) too.
  2. From 01:48:295 (108295|3,108981|2,108981|0) all the way to 01:59:781 (119781|1) - It seems as though you love the right side. Through the whole of this chorus, the only /1/2/ chord I found was 01:54:467 (114467|0,114467|1). Is this intentional?
  3. Another than that, it was nice! I loved the chords in this one.

Hyper

  1. 00:14:352 (14352|0,14352|1) to 00:22:410 (22410|3) - The number of chords appearing at /1/2/ is a bit too much. Mixing them up to create a little variety should be OK.
  2. 00:25:067 (25067|3,25152|2) - Interesting pattern for this part of the song. I like it. :)
  3. 00:44:524 (44524|3,44524|2) to 00:48:467 (48467|2,48467|3) - The chords appear at /3/4/ three times in a row. I find it really uncomfortable. Well to a certain extent.
  4. This was a fun map to play. :D

Another

  1. 00:36:038 (36038|2,36124|1) - Notes like these (separated by 2 columns) aren't found in this part of the song. I saw a couple a few seconds back; consider having some from 00:35:610 to 00:38:695?
  2. 00:52:067 (52067|3,52152|2,52238|3) - Is it me or is it these notes are extremely annoying? I hate mickey mouse. (Mickey mouse voice) "hey y'all, lemme just give you some 200s to go with that 100" This is the mouse I like more: 01:45:981 (105981|0,106067|2,106152|0)
  3. It seems like this diff has underwent massive "refurbishment", so to speak. The triple notes are aligning accordingly, and the pace (right word? Probably not) of the map is pretty well done. Good job on this one :D


Overall

  1. The song is nice, kinda built for these kinds of games (it's from BMS? I think. Yeah.)
  2. The notes were well drawn out, with them going with the song really well.
  3. This is for rank I heard? Good luck with rank, and have some stars while you're at it. 加油! ;)
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

L0rdCthulhu wrote:

Hai Seri heres ur mod ples gimme $10,000 irl later plox

PS. ples be gentle and apologiesie if mod is bad i first time ples no hurt me ;_;

General

  1. BPM and Offset : ( ✓ )
  2. Aimod : ( ✓ )
  3. Kiai : ( ✓ )
  4. Metadata : ( ✓ )
  5. Hitsound : ( ✓ ) Heard some piano here and there. I could just be hearing things. But this map certainly can have piano notes. And maybe it does. I keep doubting myself.
  6. Video : ( ✓ )

Columns! Get your columns here! 1/2/3/4

Easy Beginner

  1. 00:52:752 (52752|0,52752|1) and 00:55:495 (55495|3,55495|2); I find it a little (just a tiny bit) bland that these patterns are on alternate in this chorus. I understand that symmetry and all, but maybe have some of then move to 2/3? i'm keeping it until someone asks me to change
  2. Besides that, everything else was perfect IMO. It was pretty nice to play, and the patterns generally were complementing the song well.

Standard

  1. 01:47:781 (107781|0), have a note at /3/ and 01:47:952 (107952|3), have a note at /2/. This part here seems to be imitating the guitar, and I found that it could probably follow the patterns in 01:01:152 (61152|3,61152|1,61324|2,61324|0) too. did the first part, second part rejected
  2. From 01:48:295 (108295|3,108981|2,108981|0) all the way to 01:59:781 (119781|1) - It seems as though you love the right side. Through the whole of this chorus, the only /1/2/ chord I found was 01:54:467 (114467|0,114467|1). Is this intentional? i put doubles because of consistency, having a triple note in this diff would be weird
  3. Another than that, it was nice! I loved the chords in this one.

Hyper

  1. 00:14:352 (14352|0,14352|1) to 00:22:410 (22410|3) - The number of chords appearing at /1/2/ is a bit too much. Mixing them up to create a little variety should be OK. hm changed a little
  2. 00:25:067 (25067|3,25152|2) - Interesting pattern for this part of the song. I like it. :)
  3. 00:44:524 (44524|3,44524|2) to 00:48:467 (48467|2,48467|3) - The chords appear at /3/4/ three times in a row. I find it really uncomfortable. Well to a certain extent. changed a little
  4. This was a fun map to play. :D

Another

  1. 00:36:038 (36038|2,36124|1) - Notes like these (separated by 2 columns) aren't found in this part of the song. I saw a couple a few seconds back; consider having some from 00:35:610 to 00:38:695?
  2. 00:52:067 (52067|3,52152|2,52238|3) - Is it me or is it these notes are extremely annoying? I hate mickey mouse. (Mickey mouse voice) "hey y'all, lemme just give you some 200s to go with that 100" This is the mouse I like more: 01:45:981 (105981|0,106067|2,106152|0) nop, i want to keep the anchor on the left and right in the song sorry :C. and for the first part, i think most players can hit those so nop
  3. It seems like this diff has underwent massive "refurbishment", so to speak. The triple notes are aligning accordingly, and the pace (right word? Probably not) of the map is pretty well done. Good job on this one :D


Overall

  1. The song is nice, kinda built for these kinds of games (it's from BMS? I think. Yeah.)
  2. The notes were well drawn out, with them going with the song really well.
  3. This is for rank I heard? Good luck with rank, and have some stars while you're at it. 加油! ;)
Thanks for the mod and star :D
Hestia-
271 posts
Joined June 2010
Hestia-
hihi Seiryuu~

[Beginner]
00:15:895 - Add 1
00:16:067 - Add 2
00:16:238 (16238|0) - Move to 3
00:17:952 - Add 3
00:21:381 - Add 1
00:21:552 - Add 3
00:22:067 - Add 3
00:22:410 - Add 2
00:22:752 - Add 4
00:22:924 (22924|3) - Remove
00:23:095 - Add 1
00:23:267 (23267|0) - Remove ☆ -There isn't even a drum here, drums are on 00:23:181 and 00:23:352. If you want to map the drums instead of my changes use these notes.
00:23:438 - Add 23
00:23:610 (23610|2,23610|1) - Remove
00:48:295 (48295|2) - Change to normal note

[Standard]
00:22:067 - Add 2
00:22:238 - Add 1
00:22:410 - Add 2
00:22:752 - Add 1
00:22:924 (22924|1) - Remove
00:23:095 - Add 4
00:23:267 (23267|3) - Remove ☆ - There isn't even a drum here, drums are on 00:23:181 and 00:23:352. If you want to map the drums instead of my changes use these notes.
00:23:438 - Add 23
00:34:581 (34581|3) - Make this LN that ends 00:34:752
00:35:267 - Add 3
00:40:752 - Add 1
00:23:952 - 00:48:467 - This section feels kind of like it should be a little harder.
00:45:210 (45210|3) - Change to LN
00:45:552 (45552|2) - Change to LN
01:01:667 (61667|3) - Change to LN
01:02:010 (62010|1) - Change to LN
01:21:895 - Add 3
01:22:238 (82238|3) - Remove
01:22:410 - Add 3
01:22:581 - Add 4
01:23:267 - Add 4
01:23:781 - Add 1
01:23:952 - Add 3
01:27:381 - Add 1
01:28:067 - Add 1
01:28:752 - Add 1
01:29:438 - Add 3

[Hyper]
00:04:581 - Add 3
00:07:238 - Add 2
00:07:324 - Add 3
00:17:952 - Add 4
00:18:295 - Add 4
00:50:095 - Add 2
00:50:181 - Add 3
00:50:438 - Add 3
00:50:524 - Add 2
00:50:610 - Add 1
00:50:695 (50695|2) - Move to 4
00:50:781 - Add 3
00:50:867 - Add 2
00:51:124 - Add 2
00:51:210 - Add 3
This map has opposite problem of last one, of 00:50:010 to 01:59:952 being too easy compared to the start. Some things you can do to make it harder:
01:08:181 (68181|3) - Move to 01:08:267
01:10:324 - Add note
01:10:495 - Add note
01:15:295 - Add note
01:18:210 - Add note
01:18:467 (78467|2) - Change to normal note; Add trills: 01:18:552 - Add 2; 01:18:638 - Add 3; 01:18:724 - Add 2
01:20:010 - Add note
01:20:181 - Add 1
01:21:467 - Add 4
01:22:152 - Add note
01:23:181 - Add 2
01:23:695 - Add 2
01:23:952 (83952|1) - Change to normal notes
01:24:724 - Add note
01:25:410 - Add note
01:26:095 - Add note
01:26:781 - Add note
01:27:467 - Add note
01:27:810 - Add note
01:28:152 - Add note
01:31:238 - Add note
01:32:952 - Add note
01:33:981 - Add note
01:34:324 - Add note
01:34:667 - Add note
01:35:010 - Add note
01:35:095 - Add note
01:41:181 - Add note
01:42:552 - Add note
01:43:838 (103838|0) - Move to 01:43:924
01:44:267 - Add 1
01:48:124 - Add 3
01:48:895 - Add 3
01:49:752 - Add 4
01:51:124 - Add 1
01:51:810 - Add 1
01:52:067 (112067|0) - Move to 01:52:152
01:52:495 - Add 1
01:53:867 - Add note
01:54:038 - Add note
01:55:238 - Add note
01:56:267 - Add note
01:56:610 - Add note
01:56:952 - Add note ☆
01:57:124 - Add note ☆
01:59:867 (119867|2) - Remove

[Another]
Seems good

Good luck [-Seiryuu-] !! :) c:
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

Hestia- wrote:

hihi Seiryuu~

[Beginner]
00:15:895 - Add 1 nope, i'm not layering the full piano here for certain reasons soooo, ye
00:16:067 - Add 2
00:16:238 (16238|0) - Move to 3 ok
00:17:952 - Add 3
00:21:381 - Add 1
00:21:552 - Add 3
00:22:067 - Add 3
00:22:410 - Add 2
00:22:752 - Add 4 i'm sorry for all of these, but i'm gonna reject it because it's not what i'm layering :c
00:22:924 (22924|3) - Remove supposed to be for the beats in the background, but newbies can't handle it well so it because like that
00:23:095 - Add 1 ^
00:23:267 (23267|0) - Remove ☆ -There isn't even a drum here, drums are on 00:23:181 and 00:23:352. If you want to map the drums instead of my changes use these notes. ^
00:23:438 - Add 23 ^
00:23:610 (23610|2,23610|1) - Remove
00:48:295 (48295|2) - Change to normal note for vocal

sorry for rejecting most of this :(

[Standard]
00:22:067 - Add 2
00:22:238 - Add 1
00:22:410 - Add 2
00:22:752 - Add 1
00:22:924 (22924|1) - Remove
00:23:095 - Add 4
00:23:267 (23267|3) - Remove ☆ - There isn't even a drum here, drums are on 00:23:181 and 00:23:352. If you want to map the drums instead of my changes use these notes. same reasoning as before, sorry :c
00:23:438 - Add 23
00:34:581 (34581|3) - Make this LN that ends 00:34:752 okay
00:35:267 - Add 3 the doubles in this map are used for the background sound, so nope
00:40:752 - Add 1
00:23:952 - 00:48:467 - This section feels kind of like it should be a little harder. this difficulty is for people who are still getting used to the keys, sorry :c
00:45:210 (45210|3) - Change to LN ok
00:45:552 (45552|2) - Change to LN ok
01:01:667 (61667|3) - Change to LN nope
01:02:010 (62010|1) - Change to LN nope
01:21:895 - Add 3
01:22:238 (82238|3) - Remove
01:22:410 - Add 3
01:22:581 - Add 4
01:23:267 - Add 4
01:23:781 - Add 1
01:23:952 - Add 3
01:27:381 - Add 1
01:28:067 - Add 1
01:28:752 - Add 1
01:29:438 - Add 3 all accept

[Hyper]
00:04:581 - Add 3 ok
00:07:238 - Add 2 nope, layering piano only
00:07:324 - Add 3 ^
00:17:952 - Add 4 ^
00:18:295 - Add 4 ^
00:50:095 - Add 2 layering vocal only, so no
00:50:181 - Add 3 ^
00:50:438 - Add 3 ^
00:50:524 - Add 2 ^
00:50:610 - Add 1 ^
00:50:695 (50695|2) - Move to 4 ^
00:50:781 - Add 3 ^
00:50:867 - Add 2 ^
00:51:124 - Add 2 ^
00:51:210 - Add 3 ^
This map has opposite problem of last one, of 00:50:010 to 01:59:952 being too easy compared to the start. Some things you can do to make it harder:
01:08:181 (68181|3) - Move to 01:08:267 it's actually meant to be easy, the last difficulty patterns are relatively easy to hit, so making a jump from this to that is okay imo, i'll change it if someone else points it out
01:10:324 - Add note
01:10:495 - Add note
01:15:295 - Add note
01:18:210 - Add note
01:18:467 (78467|2) - Change to normal note; Add trills: 01:18:552 - Add 2; 01:18:638 - Add 3; 01:18:724 - Add 2
01:20:010 - Add note
01:20:181 - Add 1
01:21:467 - Add 4
01:22:152 - Add note
01:23:181 - Add 2
01:23:695 - Add 2
01:23:952 (83952|1) - Change to normal notes
01:24:724 - Add note
01:25:410 - Add note
01:26:095 - Add note
01:26:781 - Add note
01:27:467 - Add note
01:27:810 - Add note
01:28:152 - Add note
01:31:238 - Add note
01:32:952 - Add note
01:33:981 - Add note
01:34:324 - Add note
01:34:667 - Add note
01:35:010 - Add note
01:35:095 - Add note
01:41:181 - Add note
01:42:552 - Add note
01:43:838 (103838|0) - Move to 01:43:924
01:44:267 - Add 1
01:48:124 - Add 3
01:48:895 - Add 3
01:49:752 - Add 4
01:51:124 - Add 1
01:51:810 - Add 1
01:52:067 (112067|0) - Move to 01:52:152
01:52:495 - Add 1
01:53:867 - Add note
01:54:038 - Add note
01:55:238 - Add note
01:56:267 - Add note
01:56:610 - Add note
01:56:952 - Add note ☆
01:57:124 - Add note ☆
01:59:867 (119867|2) - Remove


[Another]
Seems good

Good luck [-Seiryuu-] !! :) c:
so yeah i'm sorry about most of this mod, because it conflicts with my mapping

but i'm sure you'll get better if you mod more ^^

thanks for the mod anyway c:
Gravey-
1,491 posts
Joined July 2013
Gravey-

[General]
☑ Background
☑ Timing
☑ Song Setup
☑ Metadata
☑ Misc. . .
|1|2|3|4|
[Beginner]
00:23:267 (23267|0) - What does this note signifies? Seems like a ghost note for me. I don't hear a particular instrument that signifies this SN. Pls check this one, as for my opinion this part only needs re-pattern maybe?

00:40:410 (40410|2) - Remove, not necessary for Beginner level. The SN with 'W' is enough to represent the Cymbal end.

00:44:524 (44524|2) - Add 'W' just like the same as your previous 2 noted such as 00:43:152 (43152|1,43152|0) - and for their consistency.

01:01:324 (61324|2) - Add 'C' it's the same as this 01:00:638 (60638|2) -

01:22:581 (82581|0) - Move to |4| for pattern consistency and better/relax-able hand coordination. And as it's for consistency it follows the rhythm/beat well.

01:47:952 (107952|3) - Add 'C'

01:57:210 (117210|1,117724|0) - and 01:58:410 (118410|1) - Add 'W'

[Standard]
00:13:495 (13495|1) - Move to |3| for pattern consistency, notice your pattern next to this.

00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency, notice your pattern next to this.

00:34:924 (34924|3) - Move to |1| instead for pattern consistency and better pattern and hand balance. You will notice this pattern from 00:29:438 to the next 2nd noted remember the alignment of 2 noted and get back to this one that i said to move. Notice until the 2nd noted of this too.

01:01:324 (61324|0) - Add 'C'

01:09:038 (69038|2,69210|3) - Ctrl + G as this becomes like this 01:07:838 (67838|3,67838|1) - it's better to make the one that i specified to be ctrl'd + G to make a consistent pattern.

01:07:838 (67838|3,67838|1) - Remove not necessary then 01:13:324 (73324|0) - Add 'W'

[Hyper]
00:04:410 (4410|2) - Move to |2| it is not necessary to be stacked with 00:04:581 (4581|2) - because they don't have the same rhythm/sound/beat/pitch. . . . it's better to be in |2| since it will make a good hand coordinated pattern.

00:07:324 Add note to |3| for snare?

00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency

00:48:981 (48981|1) - You forgot the 'W' here.

[Another]
00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency

01:18:810 (78810|3) - Add 'W'

01:34:238 (94238|1) - Add 'C'

[Black Another]
00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency


Nice map! I like the song! Lol Good luck! >w<)b
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

[GraveChaos] wrote:


[General]
☑ Background
☑ Timing
☑ Song Setup
☑ Metadata
☑ Misc. . .
|1|2|3|4|
[Beginner]
00:23:267 (23267|0) - What does this note signifies? Seems like a ghost note for me. I don't hear a particular instrument that signifies this SN. Pls check this one, as for my opinion this part only needs re-pattern maybe? i layered it to the drums instead ^^

00:40:410 (40410|2) - Remove, not necessary for Beginner level. The SN with 'W' is enough to represent the Cymbal end. okay

00:44:524 (44524|2) - Add 'W' just like the same as your previous 2 noted such as 00:43:152 (43152|1,43152|0) - and for their consistency. ok

01:01:324 (61324|2) - Add 'C' it's the same as this 01:00:638 (60638|2) - ok

01:22:581 (82581|0) - Move to |4| for pattern consistency and better/relax-able hand coordination. And as it's for consistency it follows the rhythm/beat well. ok

01:47:952 (107952|3) - Add 'C' ok

01:57:210 (117210|1,117724|0) - and 01:58:410 (118410|1) - Add 'W' ok

[Standard]
00:13:495 (13495|1) - Move to |3| for pattern consistency, notice your pattern next to this. ok

00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency, notice your pattern next to this. ok

00:34:924 (34924|3) - Move to |1| instead for pattern consistency and better pattern and hand balance. You will notice this pattern from 00:29:438 to the next 2nd noted remember the alignment of 2 noted and get back to this one that i said to move. Notice until the 2nd noted of this too. ok

01:01:324 (61324|0) - Add 'C' ok

01:09:038 (69038|2,69210|3) - Ctrl + G as this becomes like this 01:07:838 (67838|3,67838|1) - it's better to make the one that i specified to be ctrl'd + G to make a consistent pattern. ok

01:07:838 (67838|3,67838|1) - Remove not necessary then 01:13:324 (73324|0) - Add 'W' added w but won't remove

[Hyper]
00:04:410 (4410|2) - Move to |2| it is not necessary to be stacked with 00:04:581 (4581|2) - because they don't have the same rhythm/sound/beat/pitch. . . . it's better to be in |2| since it will make a good hand coordinated pattern.

00:07:324 Add note to |3| for snare?

00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency

00:48:981 (48981|1) - You forgot the 'W' here.
all accept
[Another]
00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency ok

01:18:810 (78810|3) - Add 'W' ok

01:34:238 (94238|1) - Add 'C' ah nope

[Black Another]
00:18:981 (18981|3) - Move to |2| for pattern consistency ok


Nice map! I like the song! Lol Good luck! >w<)b
Thanks for the mod!
Ender Lain
822 posts
Joined January 2015
Ender Lain
Hi
Listen, if i didn't mod your maps it means I have a busyness IRL.Some modder have a busy RL until they couldn't check their Modding Queue. Okay
Now, if you want to accept or reject this. Is up to you now.

|0|1|2|3|

[Beginner]01:58:067 - Add note @ |0|
01:58:238 - Add note @ |1|

[Standard]00:04:581 - Add note @ |1|
00:06:810 (6810|1) - Move to |2|
00:06:981 - Add note @ |1|
00:22:067 - Add note @ |0|
00:22:238 - Add note
00:22:410 - ^
00:45:210 - Add note @ |0|

[Hyper]00:04:581 - Add note @ |3|
00:06:981 - Add note
00:11:610 (11610|1) - Cymbal sound, Move to |0|
00:33:552 (33552|1) - Cymbal sound again, Move to |0|
01:14:352 (74352|1) - Clap sound, Move to |3|
01:14:695 (74695|0,74695|1) - Move to |1| |2|
01:59:952 - Add two Note -> |1| |2|

Next time, Do not enforce me to mod you map via PM again
Understand?

Good Luck
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

Izect Ztenz wrote:

Hi
Listen, if i didn't mod your maps it means I have a busyness IRL.Some modder have a busy RL until they couldn't check their Modding Queue. Okay
Now, if you want to accept or reject this. Is up to you now.

|0|1|2|3|

[Beginner]01:58:067 - Add note @ |0|
01:58:238 - Add note @ |1|

nope sorry

[Standard]00:04:581 - Add note @ |1| ok
00:06:810 (6810|1) - Move to |2| ok
00:06:981 - Add note @ |1| nope, layering piano only here
00:22:067 - Add note @ |0| nope, layering drums only here
00:22:238 - Add note ^
00:22:410 - ^ ^
00:45:210 - Add note @ |0| ok

[Hyper]00:04:581 - Add note @ |3| ok
00:06:981 - Add note ok
00:11:610 (11610|1) - Cymbal sound, Move to |0| nop
00:33:552 (33552|1) - Cymbal sound again, Move to |0| nop
01:14:352 (74352|1) - Clap sound, Move to |3| ok
01:14:695 (74695|0,74695|1) - Move to |1| |2| nop
01:59:952 - Add two Note -> |1| |2| nop

Next time, Do not enforce me to mod you map via PM again
Understand?



Good Luck
read this
When i first read that last sentence, i almost laughed.

Look carefully at where my request is, it's in the second page
and it was requested a month ago. And since you still do mods on every other page up to the 12th page, it's rather obvious that you have forgotten.

In any case, your queue may be using a star priority system. If this is the case, please learn to finish all of your mods Before Opening The Queue Again.
To be honest, if my mod was put on hold for a week or two i wouldn't mind, but putting it on hold for a entire month, pushing my request back by opening the queue and blaming it on being busy is out of the question. You're just making yourself look stupid.

Don't blame it on being busy IRL. Next time, complete all of your requests, then open your queue for more.

Thanks for the mod anyway
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Hotaru-
hi hii :D From Kuhaku Mania Mod House
Sorry For Late Reply >< Getting Busy With RL :"
Okay lets start It

Beginner
everything was okay

Another
00:02:009 (2009|3,2009|1,2009|0) - hmmm i just thinking you should start is from here 00:01:924 (if i right)
The Rest Of Them Are

i'm soo sorry for the bad mod
i'm still learning How To mod and Mapping :D
Good luck yooo :3
Seiryuu
265 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Seiryuu

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

hi hii :D From Kuhaku Mania Mod House
Sorry For Late Reply >< Getting Busy With RL :"
Okay lets start It

Beginner
everything was okay

Another
00:02:009 (2009|3,2009|1,2009|0) - hmmm i just thinking you should start is from here 00:01:924 (if i right)
The Rest Of Them Are (i'm layering this to the bell thing, and it starts at 00:02:009 -, so sorry :C

i'm soo sorry for the bad mod
i'm still learning How To mod and Mapping :D
Good luck yooo :3
even though this mod wasn't helpful, it was a good try though ^^
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Hotaru-

[-Seiryuu-] wrote:

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

hi hii :D From Kuhaku Mania Mod House
Sorry For Late Reply >< Getting Busy With RL :"
Okay lets start It

Beginner
everything was okay

Another
00:02:009 (2009|3,2009|1,2009|0) - hmmm i just thinking you should start is from here 00:01:924 (if i right)
The Rest Of Them Are (i'm layering this to the bell thing, and it starts at 00:02:009 -, so sorry :C

i'm soo sorry for the bad mod
i'm still learning How To mod and Mapping :D
Good luck yooo :3
even though this mod wasn't helpful, it was a good try though ^^
thanks :D i must try hard next time ><
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