P A N wrote:

Good luck lShuuichi

Asagi wrote:

Bakari is mad

SE_Soul wrote:

Epic SB But i Cant mod too since your maps good in pattern and hitsound ( i prefer hitsounding mods and nothing bad on hitsounding)
Thanks >.<
Stars and i suggest from Easy to hard can you swap the break time on 02:35:142 (1) - 02:46:113 (1) - with 02:46:113 (1) - 02:54:342 (1) ? its good if you swap it
I think not, as you follow the rhythm of music there, its not good to swap it in that part, which means that this part 02:46:113 (1) - 02:54:342 (1) needs to map there. btw thanks for your stars *O*

Edited : I FORGOT TO MENTION..... Pls Insane diff change the slider since some sliders are random to me
Asagi will take care of that


SORRY FOR MY ENGLISH THOUGH ;w;

SE_Soul wrote:

Edited : I FORGOT TO MENTION..... Pls Insane diff change the slider since some sliders are random to me

1. There's a lot of blankets you can fix, this, for example 00:19:370 (2,3) - . Just go through the map and fix'em all, or you can call me in-game, so I can find them for you.
2. 00:56:742 (1,3,2) - This overlap doesn't looks cool, fix it by moving (1) 3 grids to the left and (2) - 3 grids to the right, please.
3. 01:11:827 (4,1) - ^
4. 01:14:227 (4) - This slider's shape doesn't really fit that moment, change it to this.
5. 02:02:227 - There's unnecessary green line, delete it.

1. 01:46:799 (1) - End this slider 01:47:142 - to follow the lyrics. Following that sound is a bit unexpaected.
2. 02:02:227 - There's unnecessary green line, delete it.
3. 02:10:456 (1,1) - There's a new rule. Briefly, you have to leave 4 beats after the spinner in Easy diffs, 2 beats in Normal, 1 in Hard and whatever in Insane. So, delete (1) circle to follow that rule. It is necessary because it's unrankable.
4. 02:22:799 (4,5) - Make these sliders the same?
5. 02:28:627 (4) - You tried to make a symmerty here. Move it 2 grids higher to make it fully symmertical.
6. 02:46:456 (1) - Is there any reason to put a NC here? If not, delete it o/ (or explain it to me, I don't understand, lol)

1. 00:29:999 (1,2) - Move it to x:462 y:380 to avoid this overlap.
2. 02:17:313 (5,6) - Something like this instead?
3. 02:19:370 (3,4) - ^ you can also change this, if you feel like.

AlexaBM wrote:

[Gero]

1. 00:29:999 (1,2) - Move it to x:462 y:380 to avoid this overlap.
2. 02:17:313 (5,6) - Something like this instead?
3. 02:19:370 (3,4) - ^ you can also change this, if you feel like.

1. 00:14:227 (2) - Because this follows the singing (or I assume it does when she says "night"), I would hope that 00:15:256 (1,2,3) - this would also follow her singing.
2. 00:15:256 (1,2,3) - Referring above, 00:15:256 (1) - I think this should start 00:15:427 - here and 00:16:627 (3) - this should end 00:17:142 - here.
3. 00:16:284 (2) - Move this to x:466 y:116.
4. 00:20:742 (3,1) - Move to x:227 y:229 for a better blanket.
5. 00:22:113 (1,2) - Move (2) to x:243 y:154, creates a 1.00x previous distance snap as well as a smoother blanket with (1).
6. 00:23:484 (3) - Link Slider should end 00:24:170 - here, when she finishes the word "down", and then perhaps a note on 00:24:513 - instead. With a shorter slider, you could make a better blanket with (1)'s head. Move to x:166 y:174 for a 1.00x ds snap.
7. 00:24:513 - If you do place a note here, make sure it has 1.00x distance snap.
8. 00:25:542 (2) - Move to x:370 y:156, blankets and makes 1.00x distance snap.
9. 00:37:199 (3,1) - Blanket (1) better.
10. 00:55:027 (3) - Have the red points on top of the slider ticks so the slider bends as he's singing.
11. 01:37:542 (5) - Move to x:275 y:238.
12. 01:46:799 (4) - Move to x:192 y:53.
13. 01:47:142 (5) - Move to x:116 y:78.
14. 02:17:999 (4) - Move to y:288.
15. 02:24:856 (2) - Move to x:258 y:249.
16. 02:56:742 (2,3) - Blanket this better, move the points around and judge by the approach circle of (3) to create a better blanket.
17. 02:59:142 (2,3) - Same thing as above, but look to the slider-follow circle instead.
18. 03:06:684 (2) - Move to x:394 y:276.
19. 03:12:856 (2) - Move to x:281 y:154.
20. 03:19:027 (1) - Move to x:259 y:204.
21. 03:25:884 (3) - Fix blanket, have two white bend points after the red instead of a single white point.
22. 03:40:113 (3) - New combo for effect.

1. 00:19:884 (6) - Rotate 2 degrees around selection center and move to x:314 y:309.
2. 00:25:542 (2) - Move to x:182 y:211.
3. 00:48:513 (1) - Move to x:180 y:255.
4. 00:49:542 (3) - Move to x:151 y:158.
5. 00:51:599 (2) - Move to x:439 y:225.
6. 01:02:227 (1) - Move to x:160 y:181.
7. 01:22:113 (3) - Move to x:44 y:204 -- stack leniency will push this towards the top left of (4), but you want it to the top right instead.
8. 01:26:913 (5) - Link Try this instead.
9. 01:35:827 (4) - Same stack leniency concept stated above, I would move this to x:420 y:234.
10. 01:48:856 (5,1) - Link Same link as above.
11. 02:14:570 (3,4) - Fix this blanket.
12. 02:20:742 (4) - Move to x:196 y:68, mirrors (2).
13. 02:49:542 (2,3,4,5) - 02:52:284 (2,3,4) - Awkward rhythm. Split up the words and add single circles, maybe.
14. 03:03:599 (1) - Should only last to 03:03:770 - .
15. 03:05:656 (4) - Rotate -1 degree around selection center.
16. 03:14:570 (1) - Stack leniency, move to x:220 y:206.
17. 03:23:142 (3) - Rotate -3 degrees around selection center.
18. 03:34:113 (4,5,6,7) - Link Maybe something like this instead so the player knows it's mapped to the background singing as well.

1. Wow, nothing much to say about this difficulty. Well done.
2. 00:26:056 (4) - Move to y:96 so stack leniency doesn't place it towards the top left.
3. 00:26:827 (6) - Move to y:369 ^
4. 00:35:056 (7) - Move to x:512 y:112 ^
5. 00:39:083 (2) - Move to x:324 y:61.

1. Maybe just me, but I think ar8 or 8.5 would fit better on 175 bpm.
2. Amazing difficulty.
3. 02:19:199 (3) - Might be hard to see.
4. 03:31:542 (2) - ^

1. soft-hitfinish10.wav have a delay of 20ms
   [quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms, unless there's a special purpose. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.
   http://puu.sh/dgdl5/9725a2fcc9.zip
   mp3 has always few delay so use this wav file. NOT re-encode pls.
2. LJ.png is unused
3. burst.png is unused
4. inconsistent tags
   

1. 03:37:026 (5) - unsnapped
   

1. 00:43:713 - two inherited timing sections. you must remove one.
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

   
   
2. 03:17:656 - ^

1. HP -1 for balance
2. 00:12:513 (1) - 00:13:199 (3) - same sliderslide issue with other diffs, check Insane for details
3. another NC issue, 01:29:313 (4) - you have to add NC here because of both consistency and appropriateness. you also must adjust latter NCs too (for example like removing NC 01:30:684 (1) - here and etc.)
4. 01:50:913 (3) - this slider needs defaul normal finish on the ending point
5. 02:57:084 (3) - same opinion with 01:29:313 (4) -
6. delete 03:40:113 (1) - this NC or 03:40:627 (1) - this, for consistency yea

1. 00:13:199 (3) - same sliderslide issue with other diffs
2. 01:51:256 (1) - missed normal finish
3. 02:57:084 (5) - according to your NC pattern you have to fix some NCs because of consistency. first, you have to add NC on this slider and 02:58:456 (1) - delete this NC. you also have to adjust these NCs 02:59:827 (3) - (add NC) 03:01:199 (1) - (remove NC)
4. 03:09:427 (1) - , 03:10:799 (3) - and 03:12:170 (1) - ^
5. 03:06:684 (1) - how about removing this NC as well? i know that you tried to emphasize this part by adding NC, but since there isn't any reasonable sound (like 01:27:942 (1) - here), i'd rather remove this NC for consistency. you can add NC 01:38:913 (4) - here as back-up plan but i don't really recommend this
6. 03:14:570 (1,2) - you made most of parts of this map by following the vocal sound but this part doesn't, so reversing this rhythm by using ctrl g fits with the vocal much better imo

1. 00:01:542 (1) - as i mentioned in Insane diff, what about muting those sliderslide sounds? those are kind of annoying especially 00:42:684 (1) - here
2. 00:51:942 (5) - i don't think normal sampleset on the ending point ins't really necessary. try deleting it?
3. 00:53:313 (9) - ^
4. 00:55:713 (7) - maybe you forgot to add normal samplet here
5. 01:01:884 (1) - since current sliders are kind of boring because of those 2 repeat arrows, i'd prefer to split each sliders into a 1/2 slider with 1 repeat and a note. i have a idea about it (i think that you prefer to map by using parallel patterns i tried to follow that way)
   
   example

   F,0,61199,61884,0.1610322
    F,0,61884,62227,0.1610322,0.4054194
    F,0,62227,63942,0.4054194,0.1610322
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\text.png",320,240
    F,0,56399,,0.1163872
    R,0,56399,,0.9909677
    C,0,56399,,192,192,192
    V,0,56399,,1.21471,0.5624516
    M,0,56399,59142,-84,453,765,80
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\text.png",320,240
    M,0,59142,,210,536
    C,0,59142,,192,192,192
    V,0,59142,,1.21471,0.5624516
    F,0,59142,59484,0,0.1163872
    R,0,59142,61884,2.774711,0.8258093
    F,0,59484,61713,0.1163872
    F,0,61713,61884,0.1163872,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\text.png",320,240
    F,0,61884,,0.1163872
    R,0,61884,,-0.9083868
    C,0,61884,,192,192,192
    V,0,61884,,1.21471,0.5624516
    M,0,61884,64627,736,457,-76,6

6. 01:07:370 (1) - i'm really not sure if it's a kind of mistake or intended thing but this part needs normal finish imo, not only here but 01:29:313 (1) -, 02:57:084 (1) - and 03:19:027 (1) - here
7. 01:09:942 (8) - what about adding a whislte here? i assume that you added all of default normal whistles by following the sound (i don't know how to call precisely orz), so adding a whisle here would be great to hear. and this should be applied throughout the diff
8. 02:33:084 (3,1) - what about exchanging these NCs and adding NC here? it would be much better accroding to the vocal sound. you also have to delete 02:34:456 (1) - this NC if you apply those things

1. add Tance Rave on tags (thanks AIMod xD)
2. 00:01:542 - from here to 00:43:027 - here. what about muting sliderslide sounds by using soundless wav file? thoses sounds on this part quite annoying because this part has quite calm voices and beats
3. 00:45:942 (3) - missed whistle
4. 01:00:170 (6,7,1) - i expected different pattern here because current pattern doesn't have nice flow while playing. it has quite nice flow though, but i have a better idea on it (perhaps it's too dense?)
   
   example

   
5. 01:07:027 (1) - same opinion with 00:01:542 - here, try muting the sliderslide sound (you'd better remove 02:34:799 - this sound as well)
6. 01:51:256 (1) - maybe you forgot to add normal finish here?
7. 03:14:913 (1,2) - it seems that you tried to follow the vocal sound but since i'd rather keep consistency on NC patterns, i recommend you to swap NC because of consistency, for example like 01:19:370 (4) - here. this fits quite nicely with the vocal sound as well like current one

lShuuichi wrote:

Thanks for this Mira-San the best ^o^

We will update our mapset when all the incomplete and pending mods are finished.

lShuuichi wrote:

Thanks for this Mira-san

1. Pls reduse HP down to 2, because it's some difficulty for beginners
2. 00:22:113 (1,3) - blanket
3. 00:45:427 - prefer circle here to follow downbeat, I feel there impulse
4. 01:07:370 - ^
5. 02:24:170 - ^
6. 02:35:142 - ^
7. 01:08:742 (3) - I think it will be better http://puu.sh/dgAXe/2307a5927e.jpg
8. 01:14:227 (4) - ^
9. 01:16:970 (3) - ^
10. 01:22:456 (4) - ^
11. 02:28:284 (4) - ^
12. 02:51:599 (1) - i feel that there is not need 1.5/1 slider, maybe this : http://puu.sh/dgB6S/c342f56394.jpg
13. 02:57:084 (3) - NC
14. 02:58:456 - Remove NC

1. 01:38:227 (2) - stack with 01:40:284 (1) - ?
2. 01:51:256 (5) - NC
3. 02:13:199 - beetwen spinner and object in normal must be 2/1 empty.
4. 02:46:456 - Remove NC
5. Can't find any more ._.

1. Can't find there anything issue, sorry. I't look nice.

1. 01:32:056 (1) - i reccomend to change circle on 1/2 slider
2. 01:51:256 (1) - let's place it some higher, to follow music ("Up")
3. 03:14:913 (1) - triplet will be better, This slider can confuse players

Gero wrote:

some

1. check tags in Insane, they don't match

1. I'd prefer lower DP Drain, cause E diff and many objects, but might be just me ~
2. there are some unnecessary green lines like
   
   for example. delete them?
3. some parts need a little refining, cause visuals.. ;-; take a look at 00:40:970 (1,2,3) - for example, what's with the DS change here? it doesn't have much of an impact on playability, but it looks so inconsistent, especially if you compare the 1.1 DS to parts like 00:46:113 (2,3) - where slider borders are sooo close to each other. imo your map could look much better if you pay a bit more attention to blanketing (correctly), symmetry and some overlaps.
4. 00:15:256 (1) - add whistle on head to match with 00:12:513 (1) -
5. 00:17:999 (1) - reverse on red tick feels off, cause the other beats are more dominant, try this two sliders instead
   (00:19:370 (2) - sounds better, so that's fine)
6. 00:20:742 (3,1) - please unstack them. there is a lot of time to realize the stack, but c'mon. It's Easy and with high bpm it looks so confusing! ;-;
7. 00:26:227 (3,1,2) - looks a bit cramped and movement isn't the best, how about this:
   screen

   
8. 00:52:284 (3,1,2,3) - aah, I like the pattern, but the overlap might be confusing. s: I'd prefer if you change it up a little so 3+3 don't overlap.
   but if you don't want to, that fine to. if you wanna keep it, I'd prefer if you curve first and last part of 00:55:027 (3) - differently, so it doesn't overlap with 1
   screen

   
9. 01:08:742 (3) - sliderend on downbeat feels very weak, I'd prefer this -
   
   similar goes for following objects, I think you can emphasize them much better, but that's up to you ofc!
10. 01:22:456 (4,1) - example of why it looks a little messy, just space this perfectly with 1.0 DS, so they don't look like they're glued together s:
11. 01:25:542 (4) - consider splitting this into slider + circle, matches better with the song, imo
12. 01:27:942 (3,4) - please make this less confusing, don't let sliderborders touch each other!
13. 01:40:284 (3,1) - please move the sliderend of 1farther from 3, it might confuse beginners, especially cause there's a reverse. they might hit the wrong end :b
14. 01:43:027 (3,1,2) - don't stack 2 below 3, it's too confusing
15. 02:22:799 (3) - reduce length and place a circle on the downbeat, I'd want to click the beat
16. 02:34:799 (1) - why don't you make this symmetrical to previous object? looks better, imo
    screen

    
17. 02:47:484 (2) - should end one tick later at 02:48:513, goes better with the melody
18. 03:39:256 (2,1,1) - I don't think beginner players will be able to understand the red/white tick change, please think of a way to avoid it. (it's the only time you map red tick anyway, so..)

1. same aboutsome green lines as in Easy, please check them
2. 00:40:970 (1) - I'd prefer if you use two circles instead, like this:
   
   cause it matches better with the vocals and emphasize the downbeat way better
3. 00:50:227 (4,1,2) - flow is a bit weird, how about ctrl+g 2? you'd have to place 00:52:284 (3,4) - differntly, but flow gets improved so much ~ ;-;
4. 01:26:913 (1) - NC seems unnecessary, delete?
5. 02:26:227 (4) - use shoerter slider + circle on the downbeat, that goes better with beat and vocals
6. 02:47:313 - add a circle here, you emphasize the beat
7. 02:52:799 (3) - doesn't play well, imo, use two circles instead of a slider

1. settings seem a little high, especially AR. same as Insane.. doesn't work well as a spread I think.
2. 00:12:170 (3) - circle doesn't match cause sound you'Re following in the beginning is still ongoing, I'd remove it and extend previous slider
3. 00:24:084 (2) - and ongoing blue ticks - I'd really like to know what they are mapped to? cause I can't hear anything on these ticks and honestly don't think they match well. especially cause the part is rather "slow" compared to the rest and you don't map any blue ticks at parts that sound harder. prefer if you remove them, but Idk. s:
4. 01:26:227 (7,1) - and 01:48:170 (7,1) - just wondering why they are not stacked, when everything else in the diff is perfectly stacked
5. 02:48:170 (7) - and 02:50:913 (7) - already mentioned, but these especially don't fit well, imo. I'd prefer if you remove reverses and add another slider instead, that goes way better with the vocals (which are more dominant than the beat here, I think)
6. 03:40:113 (1,1,1) - are NCs really necessary?