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MAN WITH A MISSION - Database feat. Takuma (Anime Size)

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, January 23, 2015 at 1:31:51 AM

Artist: MAN WITH A MISSION
Title: Database feat. Takuma (Anime Size)
Source: ログ・ホライズン
Tags: log horizon opening anime rock database 10-feet
BPM: 177
Filesize: 2014kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (4.54 stars, 376 notes)
  2. Hard (3.04 stars, 204 notes)
  3. Hyper (3.58 stars, 258 notes)
  4. Insane (4.11 stars, 336 notes)
  5. Level 100 (5.14 stars, 447 notes)
  6. Newbie (1.48 stars, 76 notes)
  7. Novice (1.99 stars, 143 notes)
  8. Standard (2.3 stars, 171 notes)
Download: MAN WITH A MISSION - Database feat. Takuma (Anime Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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4th try at mapping. I know it's bad, but I'm trying.

swag

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Newbie - done mapping, needs mods
Novice - done mapping, needs mods
Standard - done mapping, needs mods
Hard - done mapping, needs mods
Hyper - done mapping, needs mods
Insane - done mapping, need mods
Another - done mapping, needs mods
Level 100 - done mapping need mods plz is baed

Changelog
1/22/2015 - remapped some of another, insane and level 100
12/30/2014 - Changed difficulty names and added a new Hard
12/28/2014 - Changed name to Level 100 and chose to make an Easy map.
12/27/2014 - Remapped most of Tier 10 and made random adjustments in the other maps
12/26/2014 - Made adjustments to finished difficulties. Mapping more of Intermediate. Finished mapping all difficulties, now all I need to do is make them good.
12/25/2014 - Finished mapping all but Intermediate.
12/24/2014 - Mapped Novice, working on finishing Intermediate, Hard, and Tier 10
12/17/2014 - trying to make flow better
12/07/2014 - Redid most of Insane to hopefully flow better, still working. Will have to do the same for advanced, hard still unfinished.
12/04/2014 - Adjusting spacing on Insane/Advanced beginning to map Hard
naoe dami
Sorry I can't mod yours cuz the hard one isn't finished yet and I can't mod insane+
Also my little suggest for bg http://puu.sh/dhI7Q.jpg
thanks
Topic Starter
Sem

naoe dami wrote:

Sorry I can't mod yours cuz the hard one isn't finished yet and I can't mod insane+
Also my little suggest for bg http://puu.sh/dhI7Q.jpg
thanks
ty I'd been meaning to change the image to an optimal size. I edited the suggested image to be 1366x768
Saut
yo, as requested



  • [General]
  1. bpm is correct but the offset isn't - try 1732 (sounds accurate to me)


  • [Hard]
  1. 00:02:918 (1,2) - after these sliders add a soft sound section from 00:03:596 (3) to 00:05:460 (8) (repeat this sound pattern - sounds great imo)
  2. if you change the first point a nc here 00:03:596 (1) - and here 00:06:308 (1) - ... would be cool (i will add a new diff down there where you can see the exact changes i made)
  3. 00:16:816 (1) - nc
  4. 00:17:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dont know - dont really feel the flow here with these tripples


  • [Advanced]
  1. 00:13:237 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - extend stream to 7 circles
  2. 00:13:745 (1) - add nc here then
  3. 00:14:423 (1) - ^
  4. 00:27:813 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try to find a good nc pattern here - seems so random
  5. 01:18:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - stream looks crooked

work on the basics (sounds, nc, and a bit rhythm) - you rplacing seems fine to me
good luck with ranking!

Saut
Topic Starter
Sem

Saut wrote:

yo, as requested



  • [General]
  1. bpm is correct but the offset isn't - try 1732 (sounds accurate to me)
-- hmm, okay


  • [Hard]
  1. 00:02:918 (1,2) - after these sliders add a soft sound section from 00:03:596 (3) to 00:05:460 (8) (repeat this sound pattern - sounds great imo) -- idk, it didn't sound good with my skin
  2. if you change the first point a nc here 00:03:596 (1) - and here 00:06:308 (1) - ... would be cool (i will add a new diff down there where you can see the exact changes i made) -- i think I understand what you mean
  3. 00:16:816 (1) - nc -- okay
  4. 00:17:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dont know - dont really feel the flow here with these tripples -- made changes around this part


  • [Advanced]
  1. 00:13:237 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - extend stream to 7 circles -- I like what I have
  2. 00:13:745 (1) - add nc here then -- made changes all around this
  3. 00:14:423 (1) - ^ -- ^
  4. 00:27:813 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try to find a good nc pattern here - seems so random -- made changes all around this part
  5. 01:18:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - stream looks crooked -- fixed that

work on the basics (sounds, nc, and a bit rhythm) - you rplacing seems fine to me
good luck with ranking!

Saut

thanks
Tarrasky
random mod from #modreqs

Hard

This difficult contain a high number of stack overlap, and many of them can be confusing to players, try using more space area
you can stack this slider 00:11:393 (2) - in 00:10:206 (3) -
00:12:409 (5) - press Ctrl + G
add a circle in here 00:13:087 - to improves the rhythm
00:23:257 (1,1,1) - 3 new combos? why?
you can stack this 00:26:308 (5) - here 00:24:782 (1) -
01:11:562 (1,1,1,1) - unnecesary high number of new combos
01:16:816 (4) - Ctrl + G
Im not sure if this kind of slider is accept in ranking criteria 01:19:528 (4,4) -, talk to a bat but i reccomend you remove
01:24:443 (1,1,1) - High number of NC

Advanced

change the name for Hyper
01:05:969 (3) - Ctrl + G sounds better
you can repeat 01:10:206 (3) - in 01:10:545 (4) - and change the angle
00:27:494 (3) - 00:28:172 (2) - 00:29:189 (4,6) - this sliders have the curve slightly exaggerated, not is so beautiful, try to make sliders like this 00:38:342 (5) -

Intermediate

Change the name from Standard
00:10:376 (7) - ugly slider, make a simple slider here
00:24:782 (4) - /\
omg what is this? 00:30:206 (1) -
The distance between the notes is very irregular, Always use the same distance, because it is very difficult to accept irregular distances and complex slides at low difficulties
you can look this distances when you click in some object, try to make a Prev and Next always the same value http://puu.sh/dJZIq/0cfdfe3a26.jpg


Good luck :) :)
Topic Starter
Sem

Tarrasky wrote:

random mod from #modreqs

Hard

This difficult contain a high number of stack overlap, and many of them can be confusing to players, try using more space area
you can stack this slider 00:11:393 (2) - in 00:10:206 (3) - okay
00:12:409 (5) - press Ctrl + G - okay
add a circle in here 00:13:087 - to improves the rhythm - I like the way I have it
00:23:257 (1,1,1) - 3 new combos? why? - I hadn't figured out another way for the combo to be
you can stack this 00:26:308 (5) - here 00:24:782 (1) - mmmkay
01:11:562 (1,1,1,1) - unnecesary high number of new combos - changed
01:16:816 (4) - Ctrl + G - okay
Im not sure if this kind of slider is accept in ranking criteria 01:19:528 (4,4) -, talk to a bat but i reccomend you remove - I'll try asking someone
01:24:443 (1,1,1) - High number of NC - mmkay

Advanced

change the name for Hyper - maybe
01:05:969 (3) - Ctrl + G sounds better - changed
you can repeat 01:10:206 (3) - in 01:10:545 (4) - and change the angle - ok i tried that
00:27:494 (3) - 00:28:172 (2) - 00:29:189 (4,6) - this sliders have the curve slightly exaggerated, not is so beautiful, try to make sliders like this 00:38:342 (5) - the slider velocity is lower for those sliders, but I tried adjusting

Intermediate

Change the name from Standard
00:10:376 (7) - ugly slider, make a simple slider here - maybe
00:24:782 (4) - /\ - ~
omg what is this? 00:30:206 (1) - lol
The distance between the notes is very irregular, Always use the same distance, because it is very difficult to accept irregular distances and complex slides at low difficulties
you can look this distances when you click in some object, try to make a Prev and Next always the same value http://puu.sh/dJZIq/0cfdfe3a26.jpg - lol


Good luck :) :)
thanks :D
zerfuth
Heyoo o/, first mod here so don't bite me ^,^

Really nice set, i hope your map gets ranked :D

[Novice]

00:29:020 (4) - This note sounds a bit awkward by itself. Try adding a note before (at 00:28:850)?

00:33:935 (3) - Same deal. Sounds awkward by itself. Would suggest adding a note after (at 00:34:104).

[Standard]

00:10:715 (6) - The slider is a bit awkward, the bump is too sudden. Try another, smoother shape. The other sliders look fine though, it's just this one.

01:03:087 (5) - I dont think this note is necessary, nothing here would be just fine.

01:04:104 (2) - ^same

01:19:359 (2) - ^same

[Hard]

00:18:172 (5,6) - This slider duo feels awkward. Like the first one is too short while the second is too long and too close to the next maybe.

01:11:138 (1,2,3,4) - Those sliders are counter-intuative. The first flips twice, the second and third flip three times and the fourth 6 times. There's no pattern and you can't guess it at this speed i think. Try something else like a bunch of sliders that flip only once and a final one with many flips or something like that.

[Hyper]

00:18:511 (3) - Orientation/placement of this slider is a bit awkward relative to the next slider

01:00:037 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Um... :l ... Im not 100% sure about those... same distance in time but not in space
Topic Starter
Sem

zerfuth wrote:

Heyoo o/, first mod here so don't bite me ^,^

Really nice set, i hope your map gets ranked :D

[Novice]

00:29:020 (4) - This note sounds a bit awkward by itself. Try adding a note before (at 00:28:850)? -i think it should be fine

00:33:935 (3) - Same deal. Sounds awkward by itself. Would suggest adding a note after (at 00:34:104). - ~

[Standard]

00:10:715 (6) - The slider is a bit awkward, the bump is too sudden. Try another, smoother shape. The other sliders look fine though, it's just this one. - yea i forgot about that, fixed it

01:03:087 (5) - I dont think this note is necessary, nothing here would be just fine. - fixed

01:04:104 (2) - ^same - ~

01:19:359 (2) - ^same - ~

[Hard]

00:18:172 (5,6) - This slider duo feels awkward. Like the first one is too short while the second is too long and too close to the next maybe. - ill figure something out

01:11:138 (1,2,3,4) - Those sliders are counter-intuative. The first flips twice, the second and third flip three times and the fourth 6 times. There's no pattern and you can't guess it at this speed i think. Try something else like a bunch of sliders that flip only once and a final one with many flips or something like that. - ehh im just used to watching the approach circle, i changed it though

[Hyper]

00:18:511 (3) - Orientation/placement of this slider is a bit awkward relative to the next slider - adjusted that

01:00:037 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Um... :l ... Im not 100% sure about those... same distance in time but not in space -ehh, i like it :3
thanks for teh swagger mod
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