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jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
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jonathanlfj
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on March-04-15 at 9:00:27 PM

Artist: senya
Title: Koyoi Index
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Touhou Autobahn 幽閉サテライト Yuuhei Satellite Patchouli Knowledge ラクトガール ～ 少女密室 Locked Girl ~ The Girl's Secret Room 東方紅魔郷 ～ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil Project_Railgun Kamase-Tora かませ虎 of Night
BPM: 140
Filesize: 6288kb
Play Time: 03:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.03 stars, 523 notes)
  2. Lunatic (4.04 stars, 769 notes)
  3. Normal (1.95 stars, 337 notes)
  4. Railgun's Easy (1.38 stars, 181 notes)
Download: senya - Koyoi Index
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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last time i mapped senya was in 2012

experimental mapping dont mind the 1/2 spam
Last edited by jonathanlfj , edited 8 times in total.
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
Was this the one you mapped on stream last night?
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
*insert correlation with nhato - miss you here*
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

xxdeathx wrote:

Was this the one you mapped on stream last night?
yeah i just kinda finished it tonight
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
wub wub
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
wooooo

yeah pending
sjoy
1,025 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
first mod
just some my opinion
[wub wub]
00:23:350 (2) - 我觉得叠在 1后面感觉比较好，类似这种00:16:707 (3,4) -
00:27:421 (4,5) - 45不同音，5放在 00:28:064 (2) - 位置如何？
00:29:564 (1) - 用1/1 slider 如何？
00:55:064 (4) - CTRL+G？
01:03:850 (1) - 放在300，12 ？
01:07:493 (2) - CTRL+G？
01:10:707 (1) - NORMAL-FINISH? 而且你后面用的NORMAL 厎音参考这里00:56:993 (1) -
01:24:421 (1) - 我觉得用个FINISH 感觉比较好 因为你后面是BREAK ，单用WHIS感觉音太短了 参考这里03:41:564 (1) -
01:51:850 (1) - 同01:10:707 (1)
02:46:707 (1) - ^
03:00:421 (1) - ^
03:02:564 (4) - 3连？ 和03:02:136 (1,2,3) - 对应
[Hard]
00:13:064 (3) - 28,120?
01:14:993 (3) - 3/4滑条+NOTE 这种组合 ，01:15:207 有个音漏了有点难受 变成1/2滑条多个NOTE如何
01:58:707 (1) - 头来个S-WHIS?
02:02:136 (1) - ^
02:33:850 (3) - 同01:14:993 (3)
[Normal]
nothing to find

it's hard to mod your map everytime
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj

sjoy wrote:

first mod
just some my opinion
[wub wub]
00:23:350 (2) - 我觉得叠在 1后面感觉比较好，类似这种00:16:707 (3,4) - stack去掉了
00:27:421 (4,5) - 45不同音，5放在 00:28:064 (2) - 位置如何？放00:28:707 (4)
00:29:564 (1) - 用1/1 slider 如何？ok
00:55:064 (4) - CTRL+G？ok
01:03:850 (1) - 放在300，12 ？这里摆了个菱形
01:07:493 (2) - CTRL+G？我更喜欢现在这种flow
01:10:707 (1) - NORMAL-FINISH? 而且你后面用的NORMAL 厎音参考这里00:56:993 (1) - ok
01:24:421 (1) - 我觉得用个FINISH 感觉比较好 因为你后面是BREAK ，单用WHIS感觉音太短了 参考这里03:41:564 (1) - 这里用finish听着不对
01:51:850 (1) - 同01:10:707 (1)
02:46:707 (1) - ^
03:00:421 (1) - ^ kkk
03:02:564 (4) - 3连？ 和03:02:136 (1,2,3) - 对应 我一般不同时下两个三连
[Hard]
00:13:064 (3) - 28,120? 改成slider了
01:14:993 (3) - 3/4滑条+NOTE 这种组合 ，01:15:207 有个音漏了有点难受 变成1/2滑条多个NOTE如何 ok
01:58:707 (1) - 头来个S-WHIS? 这里就不加了whistle太多很吵
02:02:136 (1) - ^
02:33:850 (3) - 同01:14:993 (3) ok
[Normal]
nothing to find

it's hard to mod your map everytime
lol thanks for modding~
just click
245 posts
Joined May 2014
just click
Hey, here's my mod for a M4M!

Hope this helps in any way!

Railgun's Easy

SPOILER
00:22:707 (1,2) - Make these identical to each other? Because at 00:15:850 (1,2) these are identical to each other so it would make sense to do it here as well.

01:06:421 (3,4) - You could probably form some kind of slider art with this, it just looks bland as straight sliders in a Beginner difficulty.

01:43:707 (3) - Curve this slightly? It would then go more towards the next note instead of to the side, which may be helpful for a beginner.

02:14:136 (3,4) - Not an issue, but these slightly touch each other, maybe curve the (4) a little less? It just looks sort of scrunched up in this particular area.

02:53:564 (1,3) - Why not have either one of these identical to each other? A lot of your map has this sort of style so it would be cooler if you did this.

03:41:136 (3) - Start a NC with this slider because in every other difficulty in this mapset, it starts at a NC with the last note, and it would be more consistent.

Normal

SPOILER
00:14:136 (4,5) - For this part, I would make them both curve and look identical to each other for a cooler look, and then by having these curve, the (5) would then flow into the next note more easily.

00:35:564 (6) - Curve this so that it can blanket with the (3) in this combo.

01:12:421 (5) - Curve this so that it ends facing the next note more.

02:00:421 (4,5) - Have these appear identical to each other? I think it would look nicer.

02:02:136 (1) - I would curve this slider because the next slider afterwards is curved, and you can make sort of a mirror effect here.

02:34:707 (5) - Curve this one as well for the mirroring thing I mentioned, and then this note will curve and end facing the next note, which would be easier for a beginner in a way.

02:43:064 (7,1) - Make these have the same slope? The (1) looks slightly off unless you intended this.

Hard

SPOILER
00:10:707 (5) - To me, this curve looks barely noticeable, I would either curve this more or just make it a straight slider.

00:11:993 (8,1) - Try and have these identical?

00:54:421 (3) - This reverse slider ends facing away from the next slider, I would have it so that it faces the next slider.

01:19:278 (1,2,3) - I would have the (3) have the same curvature as (1) and (2) because it would look nicer and look more consistent.

02:32:993 (1,2) - I would have these identical to each other just so that it looks nicer :D

02:33:850 (3) - Curve this slightly so that it appears to blanket with the preceding slider.

02:53:564 (1) - Curve this so that it it flows more into the next note.

03:20:136 (6) - ^

03:22:707 (1) - Have this curve upwards so that it is consistent with how (2) and (3) in this combo curve upward.

03:29:993 (2) - Curve this so that it looks perfectly symmetrical with this star shaped pattern that you have around here.

03:34:707 (1) - Have this reverse slider end facing the next slider instead of away from it.

wub wub

SPOILER
00:04:707 (5) - Curve this so that it is similar to (6) in this combo.

00:54:636 (2) - Move this a bit closer to the preceding slider so that (1,2,3,4) all have the same spacing, it would look nicer this way.

01:09:850 (4) - Curve this so that it has the same curvature as the next slider, would give off a sort of mirroring effect.

01:14:136 (1,2) - ^

01:49:707 (4) - Have this reverse slider end facing the stream.

01:55:278 (1,2,3) - In my opinion, I think having these stacked would look better.

03:04:707 (3) - Curve this so that it is consistent with the (1,2,4) in this combo.

03:09:207 (2) - Curve this so that it looks mirrored with the (4)

It's a very nice mapset, I'll shoot a star towards the success of this map! :D

Good luck! Hope my mod has helped the mapset improve in any way!
CSLM
1,058 posts
Joined May 2013
CSLM
hi, m4m

Unrankeable
Important
Suggestion

General

  1. if i'm not wrong, the timing a little bit off (but i can't test it ;w;), try to move it between 00:02:170 - and 00:02:180 - (i move it to 00:02:171 - and i can hear it better)
  2. wub wub... strange name... unrankeable?

Railgun's Easy

  1. 00:24:421 (2) - the another patters are maked with simmetry, and this no?
  2. 00:47:993 - add note plzz, sound so empty
  3. 00:57:850 (1) - this slider can be better, you don't think?:
    Image + Code

    256,344,57850,6,0,B|236:280|276:248|256:184,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:23:564 (3) - move it to x332 y328 and change it for make it simmetric plz
  5. 02:20:136 (1) - the same thing what i say in 00:57:850 (1) -
    Image + Code

    272,160,140136,6,0,B|244:208|300:264|268:320,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 03:32:564 - add note

Normal

  1. 00:20:993 (3) - delete the second curve point, plz
  2. 00:23:350 (2) - i'm not agree with stuff like this, could be confusing, i suggest what you make the same thing what you did here: 00:23:350 (2) -
  3. 00:36:421 (1) - make more sense imo if you extend it to 00:42:421 - like in hard. Too with: 03:20:993 (1) -
  4. 02:08:993 (1,2) - this have a strange flow, look better of this way:
    Image + Code

    512,224,129850,2,0,P|496:272|456:320,1,99.9999999999999
    376,352,130707,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Hard

  1. ar7 is very slow imo, try with ar7.5
  2. 00:03:850 (5,6) - i don't feel very neccesary this space, looks unconsistent, too on: 00:09:850 (3,4) - and 00:12:421 (1,2) - fix it plzz
  3. 00:12:421 (1,2) - why you don't make it rect? plzz, looks very good rect with the blanket
  4. 00:31:278 (3) - this slider make a strange flow with the before it (00:30:421 (2) - ), i suggest make something like this:
    Image + Code

    296,196,31278,2,0,P|220:216|128:200,1,168,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:68,172,32136,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  5. 00:44:136 (2) - nc?
  6. 00:47:993 (4) - make a 1/4 slider reverse, or delete it and add 4 reverse more to 00:47:564 (3) - or something what can make enfasis in the rest of the 1/4 rhythm plz plz plz, looks so strange. too with: 00:50:136 (1,2) - 00:54:421 (3,4) - 03:32:136 (4,5) - 03:34:707 (1,2) - and 03:38:993 (3,4) -
  7. 01:14:564 (2,3) - unnecesary space, take it off plz
  8. 01:22:278 (6) - move the last point a little bit up, that give a nice efect
  9. 01:40:278 (8,9,10) - all patterns of before are triangles, and this no?
  10. 01:49:278 (3,4) - i dislike this, doesn't not have sense with the rhythm, delete the reverse on (3) and make another 1/2 slider on 01:49:707 - plz
  11. 01:51:850 (1) - 01:53:564 (1) - 01:56:993 (1) - 01:58:707 (1) - 02:02:136 (1) - 02:05:564 (1) - 02:07:278 (1) - 02:10:707 (1) - and the rest i don't like it because all of them are skiping a beat very strong, you could change it to 1/2 sliders or change the slider tick fecuency to 2, for make a sound in the blank space
  12. 02:10:707 (1) - change the curvature of this slider, looks very nice imo
  13. 02:29:778 (1,2,3,4) - plz move this to x292 y112 for make simmetry with 02:28:064 (3,4,5,6) -
  14. 02:48:421 (1,4) - bad stacked
  15. 02:55:278 (1) - stack with the tail of 02:55:278 (1) - ?
  16. 03:28:707 (2) - nc?

wub wub

  1. 00:03:421 (5,6) - why you don't move this to: x188 y308, for keep a perfect square with the objets of before?
  2. 00:04:278 (3,6) - *nazi* bad stacked
  3. 00:16:707 (3,4) - i don't like this stack, principially 'cause is hard to see with hidden mode, and doesn't have sense with the pattern of before, why not better a blanket?
  4. 00:18:421 (4,5) - this is very confusing, when i play it i was very confused by this part, why you don't overlap it, or stack it?
    (i suggest a overlap, of that way doesn't arriun the flow). the same with 00:21:850 (5,6) - 00:25:278 (5,6) - and 00:28:707 (4,5) -
  5. 00:30:421 (3) - why don't make it more curved, for make it similar with 00:29:564 (1) - ?
  6. 00:31:278 (1) - this slider is something un-simmetric, the left part is more long what the right (i duno if this was intentional)
  7. 00:44:136 (2) - nc?
  8. 00:48:207 (4,2) - why don't stack it? is ugly imo
  9. 00:50:778 (4,3) - bad stacked (i dunno is this was intentional)
  10. 00:56:993 (1) - is better imo if you delete the curve point
  11. 01:52:493 (3,1) - bad stacked
  12. 02:03:421 (6) - i know what you are trying to stack it with 02:01:707 (6) - , but looks very very very strange and ugly imho, the thing what you can do is move
  13. 02:02:564 (4,5) - to x256 y276, look much better imo
  14. 02:10:278 (8,2,5) - bad stacked
  15. 02:36:850 (2) - ctrl g and move it to x240 y128?
  16. 03:28:708 (2) - nc?
  17. 03:29:993 (3,8) - bad stacked

senya <3
GL with rank
choo choo~
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
Hi Jonathan, from PM.

senya..... Nice!

General

  1. Disable widescreen support in Hard, Normal and Railgun's Easy.

Wub Wub

  1. 00:08:136 (3,4,5,6) - Suggest not to stack them perfectly. (Move 3 and 4 slightly to downwards and right hand side) This won't ruin blanket and would be fun.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:08:993 (1,2) - Suggest to duplicate (1), rotate by 180 degree and replace (2).
  3. 00:11:993 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved.
  4. 00:18:421 (4,5) - According your introduction in profile, this is really, really hard to read (even the distance has been slightly reduced, it's still hard to read). Suggest to half stack them.
  5. 00:21:850 (5,6) - Same.
  6. 00:23:350 (2,3,4) - Blanket can be improved.
  7. 02:14:564 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't like the entire flow here because of the direction of slider. Suggest to blanket (3) with (2).
  8. 02:35:136 (3,4) - Looks not that good. You Would better duplicate (3), rotate by 180 degree, then replace (4) with it.
  9. 03:15:850 (1,2) - Suggest not stack them. (then move 03:16:707 (3,4) - upwards)
  10. 03:32:136 (1) - This should be a single circle instead of a 1/4 slider, because electric sound does not start here.

Hard

  1. 00:26:778 (2,3) - Try not using overlap here.
  2. 00:51:850 (1,3) - These two stuffs touch each other, which is visible.
  3. 00:51:850 (1,2) - (If you don't accept last one) Try curving these two. Blanket (3) with (2).
  4. 02:18:421 (4) - Suggest to curve the slider in the opposite direction.
    SPOILER
  5. 03:29:993 (2,3) - These two touch each other. (or I guess you did this on purpose? )

Normal

Seems like you have placed massive single circles with 1/2-beat space (e.g. 00:44:564 (3,4,5) - ). Is that too hard in a Normal? (Even though the BPM is not that high. )
  1. 00:14:136 (4,5) - Curve them. Because from (5) to (6) and (7), it seems not that smooth.
  2. 02:17:564 (3,4) - Better not overlap.
  3. 03:09:850 (5,6,1) - Better line up (5), (6) and the first half of (1). (you may need to change (2) for symmetry)

That's all my mod. Sorry but I have 0 experience for a Easy diff, both mapping and playing.....

Good luck ;)
Eni
1,437 posts
Joined May 2013
Eni

Breezy wrote:

Hey, here's my mod for a M4M!

Hope this helps in any way!

Railgun's Easy

00:22:707 (1,2) - Make these identical to each other? Because at 00:15:850 (1,2) these are identical to each other so it would make sense to do it here as well. I tried identical sliders here and they do not seem to fit, so changed the first altogether.

01:06:421 (3,4) - You could probably form some kind of slider art with this, it just looks bland as straight sliders in a Beginner difficulty. This is done intentionally, so no change.

01:43:707 (3) - Curve this slightly? It would then go more towards the next note instead of to the side, which may be helpful for a beginner. The pattern here is actually a zig-zag one in which the directional distance before and after the slider is the same, so curving it would decrease playability IMO.

02:14:136 (3,4) - Not an issue, but these slightly touch each other, maybe curve the (4) a little less? It just looks sort of scrunched up in this particular area. Reverse blanket is here, which I think is fine for gameplay, so no change.

02:53:564 (1,3) - Why not have either one of these identical to each other? A lot of your map has this sort of style so it would be cooler if you did this. Give me an example and I'll consider it. Right now I can't think of anything to replace this with.

03:41:136 (3) - Start a NC with this slider because in every other difficulty in this mapset, it starts at a NC with the last note, and it would be more consistent. The note density between the Easy and Normal is different, thus the different NC. It does not make sense to add NC here without adding NC everywhere else I used 2/1.

It's a very nice mapset, I'll shoot a star towards the success of this map! :D

Good luck! Hope my mod has helped the mapset improve in any way!

CSLM wrote:

hi, m4m

Unrankeable
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Suggestion

Railgun's Easy

  1. 00:24:421 (2) - the another patters are maked with simmetry, and this no? Thanks, I fixed this with a different pattern
  2. 00:47:993 - add note plzz, sound so empty No, adding a note on the 1/1 will not fit here so I leave it intentionally blank.
  3. 00:57:850 (1) - this slider can be better, you don't think?: No, the current slider pattern is done intentionally for a semi-blanket.
    Image + Code

    256,344,57850,6,0,B|236:280|276:248|256:184,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:23:564 (3) - move it to x332 y328 and change it for make it simmetric plz Symmetry is intentionally NOT used here to emphasize the end of the section.
  5. 02:20:136 (1) - the same thing what i say in 00:57:850 (1) - I tried this slider but it does not fit well with the other circle, so I won't change it for now.
    Image + Code

    272,160,140136,6,0,B|244:208|300:264|268:320,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 03:32:564 - add note Same as mentioned above

senya <3
GL with rank
choo choo~

Adol Christin wrote:

Hi Jonathan, from PM.

senya..... Nice!

That's all my mod. Sorry but I have 0 experience for a Easy diff, both mapping and playing..... ;;;;;; :o

Good luck ;)

Thanks for mods
http://0paste.com/7261
Shurelia
Global Moderator
2,771 posts
Joined December 2013
Shurelia
おっす!やったよ!
Hi , lfjlfj o/
sorry for the Really Late M4M >,<


~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~


[General]
- You might want to add "Kamase-Tora" and "かませ虎" it's the lyric creator's name.
- You might want to add "Index of Night" it's the song's name in english

[Railgun's Easy]
  1. 02:03:850 (2) - 1.26 is a bit too far away for the current distant snap you use. You might want to move it a bit closer
  2. 02:14:993 (4) - CTRL + H and rotate +15 degree this ? , It plays better for me (also looks prettier w)
  3. 02:17:564 (2) - Same case with 02:03:850 (2) - i think 1.25 is a bit too far away for me.

[Normal]

  • Already great for me.

[Hard]
  1. 01:02:778 - I don't know why but.. I feels so empty if you not map this while the other similiar patterns are mapped.
  2. 01:20:993 (1,2) - Stacking this makes play a bit awkward for me. You might want to move (2) to elsewhere.
  3. 02:36:421 (1,2) - ^^
  4. 02:39:421 (6,1) - Swap NC this? Because it looks different with the other similar patterns.

[wub wub]
  1. 00:21:850 (5,6) - Why this one had more distance than 00:18:421 (4,5) - this ? it has a same rhythm but different jump, i suggest to make the distance same

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
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Breezy wrote:

Hey, here's my mod for a M4M!

Hope this helps in any way!

Normal

SPOILER
00:14:136 (4,5) - For this part, I would make them both curve and look identical to each other for a cooler look, and then by having these curve, the (5) would then flow into the next note more easily. i prefer straight sliders here

00:35:564 (6) - Curve this so that it can blanket with the (3) in this combo.

01:12:421 (5) - Curve this so that it ends facing the next note more.

02:00:421 (4,5) - Have these appear identical to each other? I think it would look nicer. i dont see anything wrong here

02:02:136 (1) - I would curve this slider because the next slider afterwards is curved, and you can make sort of a mirror effect here.

02:34:707 (5) - Curve this one as well for the mirroring thing I mentioned, and then this note will curve and end facing the next note, which would be easier for a beginner in a way. i prefer this one straight

02:43:064 (7,1) - Make these have the same slope? The (1) looks slightly off unless you intended this.

Hard

SPOILER
00:10:707 (5) - To me, this curve looks barely noticeable, I would either curve this more or just make it a straight slider. i dont like curving short sliders too much

00:11:993 (8,1) - Try and have these identical?

00:54:421 (3) - This reverse slider ends facing away from the next slider, I would have it so that it faces the next slider. this is negligible in gameplay

01:19:278 (1,2,3) - I would have the (3) have the same curvature as (1) and (2) because it would look nicer and look more consistent.

02:32:993 (1,2) - I would have these identical to each other just so that it looks nicer :D

02:33:850 (3) - Curve this slightly so that it appears to blanket with the preceding slider. i prefer the straight connection with the stream

02:53:564 (1) - Curve this so that it it flows more into the next note. im keeping these straight as a design choice

03:20:136 (6) - ^

03:22:707 (1) - Have this curve upwards so that it is consistent with how (2) and (3) in this combo curve upward.

03:29:993 (2) - Curve this so that it looks perfectly symmetrical with this star shaped pattern that you have around here.

03:34:707 (1) - Have this reverse slider end facing the next slider instead of away from it. again it shouldnt matter

wub wub

SPOILER
00:04:707 (5) - Curve this so that it is similar to (6) in this combo. they are intentionally different

00:54:636 (2) - Move this a bit closer to the preceding slider so that (1,2,3,4) all have the same spacing, it would look nicer this way.

01:09:850 (4) - Curve this so that it has the same curvature as the next slider, would give off a sort of mirroring effect. i am aligning this with 01:08:993 (1) -

01:14:136 (1,2) - ^

01:49:707 (4) - Have this reverse slider end facing the stream. it wont affect game play too much at this bpm

01:55:278 (1,2,3) - In my opinion, I think having these stacked would look better.

03:04:707 (3) - Curve this so that it is consistent with the (1,2,4) in this combo.

03:09:207 (2) - Curve this so that it looks mirrored with the (4) mirroring 03:10:278 (6)

It's a very nice mapset, I'll shoot a star towards the success of this map! :D

Good luck! Hope my mod has helped the mapset improve in any way!

CSLM wrote:

hi, m4m

Unrankeable
Important
Suggestion

General

  1. if i'm not wrong, the timing a little bit off (but i can't test it ;w;), try to move it between 00:02:170 - and 00:02:180 - (i move it to 00:02:171 - and i can hear it better) timing is correct according to my testplayers
  2. wub wub... strange name... unrankeable?

Normal

  1. 00:20:993 (3) - delete the second curve point, plz that would kill the curve
  2. 00:23:350 (2) - i'm not agree with stuff like this, could be confusing, i suggest what you make the same thing what you did here: 00:23:350 (2) -
  3. 00:36:421 (1) - make more sense imo if you extend it to 00:42:421 - like in hard. Too with: 03:20:993 (1) -
  4. 02:08:993 (1,2) - this have a strange flow, look better of this way: this flow is intentional
    SPOILER

    512,224,129850,2,0,P|496:272|456:320,1,99.9999999999999
    376,352,130707,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Hard

  1. ar7 is very slow imo, try with ar7.5 AR7 is more appropriate for this bpm
  2. 00:03:850 (5,6) - i don't feel very neccesary this space, looks unconsistent, too on: 00:09:850 (3,4) - and 00:12:421 (1,2) - fix it plzz i dont get what you mean
  3. 00:12:421 (1,2) - why you don't make it rect? plzz, looks very good rect with the blanket
  4. 00:31:278 (3) - this slider make a strange flow with the before it (00:30:421 (2) - ), i suggest make something like this: i think this one is pretty smooth...
    SPOILER

    296,196,31278,2,0,P|220:216|128:200,1,168,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:68,172,32136,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  5. 00:44:136 (2) - nc? not necessary imo
  6. 00:47:993 (4) - make a 1/4 slider reverse, or delete it and add 4 reverse more to 00:47:564 (3) - or something what can make enfasis in the rest of the 1/4 rhythm plz plz plz, looks so strange. too with: 00:50:136 (1,2) - 00:54:421 (3,4) - 03:32:136 (4,5) - 03:34:707 (1,2) - and 03:38:993 (3,4) - I am trying to make it easier for playing here, if i fill the 1/4 it will force players to alternate
  7. 01:14:564 (2,3) - unnecesary space, take it off plz i dont get it what
  8. 01:22:278 (6) - move the last point a little bit up, that give a nice efect
  9. 01:40:278 (8,9,10) - all patterns of before are triangles, and this no? variety
  10. 01:49:278 (3,4) - i dislike this, doesn't not have sense with the rhythm, delete the reverse on (3) and make another 1/2 slider on 01:49:707 - plz
  11. 01:51:850 (1) - 01:53:564 (1) - 01:56:993 (1) - 01:58:707 (1) - 02:02:136 (1) - 02:05:564 (1) - 02:07:278 (1) - 02:10:707 (1) - and the rest i don't like it because all of them are skiping a beat very strong, you could change it to 1/2 sliders or change the slider tick fecuency to 2, for make a sound in the blank space keep in mind this is a hard, im intentionally skipping them so they can be filled in the insane
  12. 02:10:707 (1) - change the curvature of this slider, looks very nice imo its nice and you said to change what
  13. 02:29:778 (1,2,3,4) - plz move this to x292 y112 for make simmetry with 02:28:064 (3,4,5,6) -
  14. 02:48:421 (1,4) - bad stacked
  15. 02:55:278 (1) - stack with the tail of 02:55:278 (1) - ? intentional
  16. 03:28:707 (2) - nc? as above

wub wub

  1. 00:03:421 (5,6) - why you don't move this to: x188 y308, for keep a perfect square with the objets of before?
  2. 00:04:278 (3,6) - *nazi* bad stacked
  3. 00:16:707 (3,4) - i don't like this stack, principially 'cause is hard to see with hidden mode, and doesn't have sense with the pattern of before, why not better a blanket? there is auto stack, it shouldnt affect hidden
  4. 00:18:421 (4,5) - this is very confusing, when i play it i was very confused by this part, why you don't overlap it, or stack it?
    (i suggest a overlap, of that way doesn't arriun the flow). the same with 00:21:850 (5,6) - 00:25:278 (5,6) - and 00:28:707 (4,5) - [/color]
  5. 00:30:421 (3) - why don't make it more curved, for make it similar with 00:29:564 (1) - ?
  6. 00:31:278 (1) - this slider is something un-simmetric, the left part is more long what the right (i duno if this was intentional)
  7. 00:44:136 (2) - nc? not needed
  8. 00:48:207 (4,2) - why don't stack it? is ugly imo this one is to actually avoid confusing hidden players
  9. 00:50:778 (4,3) - bad stacked (i dunno is this was intentional)
  10. 00:56:993 (1) - is better imo if you delete the curve point small blanket on 00:56:350 (6,7,8) -
  11. 01:52:493 (3,1) - bad stacked
  12. 02:03:421 (6) - i know what you are trying to stack it with 02:01:707 (6) - , but looks very very very strange and ugly imho, the thing what you can do is move wait what how is this ugly lol
  13. 02:02:564 (4,5) - to x256 y276, look much better imo i was not intending to use a triangle pattern here
  14. 02:10:278 (8,2,5) - bad stacked
  15. 02:36:850 (2) - ctrl g and move it to x240 y128? flow is intentional
  16. 03:28:708 (2) - nc? not needed
  17. 03:29:993 (3,8) - bad stacked

senya <3
GL with rank
choo choo~

Adol Christin wrote:

Hi Jonathan, from PM.

senya..... Nice!

General

  1. Disable widescreen support in Hard, Normal and Railgun's Easy.

Wub Wub

  1. 00:08:136 (3,4,5,6) - Suggest not to stack them perfectly. (Move 3 and 4 slightly to downwards and right hand side) This won't ruin blanket and would be fun.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:08:993 (1,2) - Suggest to duplicate (1), rotate by 180 degree and replace (2).
  3. 00:11:993 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved.
  4. 00:18:421 (4,5) - According your introduction in profile, this is really, really hard to read (even the distance has been slightly reduced, it's still hard to read). Suggest to half stack them. i've got similar suggestion before, but i still dont get how this is hard to read. i even raised the AR above 8 to make these easier to identify...
  5. 00:21:850 (5,6) - Same.
  6. 00:23:350 (2,3,4) - Blanket can be improved.
  7. 02:14:564 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't like the entire flow here because of the direction of slider. Suggest to blanket (3) with (2).
  8. 02:35:136 (3,4) - Looks not that good. You Would better duplicate (3), rotate by 180 degree, then replace (4) with it. not intending for symmetry here
  9. 03:15:850 (1,2) - Suggest not stack them. (then move 03:16:707 (3,4) - upwards) i personally like this stack
  10. 03:32:136 (1) - This should be a single circle instead of a 1/4 slider, because electric sound does not start here. with my headphones i can hear a faint sound starting here

Hard

  1. 00:26:778 (2,3) - Try not using overlap here. its harder to read without stack imo
  2. 00:51:850 (1,3) - These two stuffs touch each other, which is visible. that is intentional
  3. 00:51:850 (1,2) - (If you don't accept last one) Try curving these two. Blanket (3) with (2).
  4. 02:18:421 (4) - Suggest to curve the slider in the opposite direction.
    SPOILER
  5. 03:29:993 (2,3) - These two touch each other. (or I guess you did this on purpose? ) yeah

Normal

Seems like you have placed massive single circles with 1/2-beat space (e.g. 00:44:564 (3,4,5) - ). Is that too hard in a Normal? (Even though the BPM is not that high. ) thats fine since i have an easy diff for the spread
  1. 00:14:136 (4,5) - Curve them. Because from (5) to (6) and (7), it seems not that smooth. this is intentional to keep the pattern clean
  2. 02:17:564 (3,4) - Better not overlap. that would break distance snapping
  3. 03:09:850 (5,6,1) - Better line up (5), (6) and the first half of (1). (you may need to change (2) for symmetry)

That's all my mod. Sorry but I have 0 experience for a Easy diff, both mapping and playing.....

Good luck ;)

Shurelia wrote:

おっす!やったよ!
Hi , lfjlfj o/
sorry for the Really Late M4M >,<


~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~


[General]
- You might want to add "Kamase-Tora" and "かませ虎" it's the lyric creator's name.
- You might want to add "Index of Night" it's the song's name in english

[Normal]

  • Already great for me.

[Hard]
  1. 01:02:778 - I don't know why but.. I feels so empty if you not map this while the other similiar patterns are mapped. im following a different layer here, which skipped a beat
  2. 01:20:993 (1,2) - Stacking this makes play a bit awkward for me. You might want to move (2) to elsewhere.
  3. 02:36:421 (1,2) - ^^
  4. 02:39:421 (6,1) - Swap NC this? Because it looks different with the other similar patterns. hmm i dont see anything wrong with this

[wub wub]
  1. 00:21:850 (5,6) - Why this one had more distance than 00:18:421 (4,5) - this ? it has a same rhythm but different jump, i suggest to make the distance same

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
no comment = fixed, thanks for the mods and stars!
Eni
1,437 posts
Joined May 2013
Eni

Shurelia wrote:

[Railgun's Easy]
  1. 02:03:850 (2) - 1.26 is a bit too far away for the current distant snap you use. You might want to move it a bit closer Done intentionally. Also see: 02:15:850 (1,2) -.
  2. 02:14:993 (4) - CTRL + H and rotate +15 degree this ? , It plays better for me (also looks prettier w) I prefer the current pattern. It also introduces the player to a reverse blanket, so no change.
  3. 02:17:564 (2) - Same case with 02:03:850 (2) - i think 1.25 is a bit too far away for me. Mentioned above
Thanks for mod
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
Hi !

[General]
  1. I'm not sure "normal-sliderslide" and "soft-sliderslide" is not 44byte. and this wav file are include a very small sound.
    img1
    img2
    I think you must be changed wav file. Try used this wav file. http://puu.sh/ghEyY/a8412659c3.zip
  2. Add "Comiket 86" and "C86" to tag.
  3. I feel the noise of the slider to be noisy on 01:38:136 - ~ 01:51:421 and 02:33:421 - ~ 02:44:993 - and 03:14:136 - ~ 03:27:850 - this part. You should add sliderslide of the long silence newly imo.
[Railgun's Easy]
  1. 01:53:564 (3,4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try this pattern ? and 01:55:278 (1) - The start place. I think that the symmetric position of this is preferable 01:53:136 (2) - here.
    img
  2. 02:02:136 (1,2) - It is not preferable to use different distance snap imo. please used this code.
    204,200,122136,6,0,P|211:123|161:63,1,160
    308,184,123850,2,0,P|301:261|351:321,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 02:14:136 (3,4) - It is not preferable to use overlap on Easy diff. Please changed this pattern.
    img
  4. 02:20:136 (1) - I think that it has a slightly strange shape. Based on grid of the image, please adjust it.
    img
[Normal]
  1. 02:58:707 (4,5) - It is good rhythm, but I thinks that it is hard to read on Normal diff. Please try this rhythm.
[Hard]
  1. 00:54:421 (3) - I think "Ctrl + G" more better flow. because you are pattern.
  2. 03:34:707 (1) - Same as above. "Ctrl + G" more better flow.
[Lunatic]
  1. 01:16:921 (4) - Mmm... I think " Ctrl + G" more better flow. because you are pattern.
Overall : Normal -> Hard diffspread are wide to me. But I think that it is made very well. When you are ready call me back!
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
everything is fixed on my end, thanks for the mod!
waiting on railgun's update

if you are concerned with the diff spread, let me know and i can try to make Normal more dense, though i personally feel it is fine as-is
Eni
1,437 posts
Joined May 2013
Eni

Satellite wrote:

Hi !

[General]
[Railgun's Easy]
  1. 01:53:564 (3,4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try this pattern ? and 01:55:278 (1) - The start place. I think that the symmetric position of this is preferable 01:53:136 (2) - here. No change, I prefer my current pattern
    img
  2. 02:02:136 (1,2) - It is not preferable to use different distance snap imo. please used this code. both are within 0.1x; I increased the DS to make it easier to play
    204,200,122136,6,0,P|211:123|161:63,1,160
    308,184,123850,2,0,P|301:261|351:321,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 02:14:136 (3,4) - It is not preferable to use overlap on Easy diff. Please changed this pattern. Changed to a new pattern
    img
  4. 02:20:136 (1) - I think that it has a slightly strange shape. Based on grid of the image, please adjust it. Ok
    img
Thanks for modding!
Update http://0paste.com/7321
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
updated

changed source to 東方Project to comply with new rule
added some density in Normal to even out the spread a bit
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
Bubbled
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
Ranked.

其实我有点担心01:51:850 - 02:46:707 - 这两段有些音像是六分拍
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
whoa didnt expect to go this fast, thanks Satellite and Zero__wind~

那部分我用25%听了一遍，基本上我下的都是1/4
captin1
osu! Alumni
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Joined February 2011
captin1
nice
Sellenite
1,092 posts
Joined September 2013
Sellenite
C86 Single CD...miss this D;;
congrats~
Lust
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Joined January 2013
Lust

captin1 wrote:

nice
agreed

Congratulations!
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
Great <3
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
Congratulation. ;)
I failed..... with 800+ combo.....
Edit: twice....
CSLM
1,058 posts
Joined May 2013
CSLM
whoa, gratz~
Trust
1,240 posts
Joined March 2012
Trust
grats :D
poe15
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Joined May 2012
poe15
Great map, tons of fun and good song. Only minor complaint I have is that it could use some more breaks towards the end... hand started getting a little cramped towards it :o
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