13:09 Exahilosys: Would you like me to take a look at your map for modding?
13:12 wmtokok: OH yes///Feel free to write down any suggest :3
13:12 Exahilosys: Ok, I will be going through the map and pointing out anything that I feel should be changed here ok?
13:13 wmtokok: sure.
13:13 Exahilosys: Alright, I will be doing the insane mod
13:13 wmtokok: thanks
13:14 Exahilosys: Alright, first I suggest you increase the approach rate by 0.2 or 0.3, it feels kinda slow compared to the pace of the song
13:14 Exahilosys: maybe do it 8.7 or 8.8
13:15 Exahilosys: I also suggest that you move the (5) here 00:02:988 - to the right of the slider, so it has a nice flow from the start
13:16 wmtokok: un...I think AR 8.5 are suitable for the insane
13:17 Exahilosys: It is, but I think 8.7 would look better, since you have some spacious jumps in the map
13:18 Exahilosys: I also suggest that you avoid straight triplestreams because the song seems kinda light, instead, do it like so
http://i.imgur.com/xHrDceB.jpg13:18 wmtokok: 00:02:988 (5) - OK
13:18 Exahilosys: you can see the time on the screenshot
13:20 Exahilosys: also here 00:08:454, I suggest you keep a general symmetry between the small slider, do it like so
http://i.imgur.com/J1rQkQi.jpg or
http://i.imgur.com/qqKJGe9.jpg13:20 Exahilosys: 00:08:454 -
13:21 Exahilosys: for the triplestreams again, you did well here 00:10:088 -
13:22 Exahilosys: also at 00:12:788 - and 00:13:588 - I suggest you do it like this
http://i.imgur.com/q7ilv1r.jpg and this
http://i.imgur.com/YpsCHwr.jpg13:22 wmtokok: for the triple stream,i think it is fine
13:23 Exahilosys: withoit moving the (5) and (6)
13:23 Exahilosys: I am siple pointing out how it could be a more flowfull version
13:23 Exahilosys: simply*
13:24 Exahilosys: Why not move the hc (hitcircle) here 00:19:388 - a bit to the right so it makes a nice eliptical shape
13:25 Exahilosys: Now this is kinda tricky, I think using a slider here 00:19:388 - that goes to here 00:20:388 - and then another one that goes from here 00:20:588 - to here 00:20:188 -
13:26 Exahilosys: because they way you have it, it does not match the vocalists' singing
13:26 Exahilosys: the only reason I see the slider ending here 00:20:188 (to reverse) - is because of the beat there
13:27 Exahilosys: 00:20:188 - *
13:27 Exahilosys: but I think that is too much focus on the background instuments and less on the vocalist
13:27 Exahilosys: And as for the triplestream, you have on here 00:25:588 - which is nice
13:28 wmtokok: OK i'll try change ot
13:28 wmtokok: it
13:28 Exahilosys: Do you want me to provide you of an expample for the sliders part?
13:28 Exahilosys: vie screenshot?
13:28 Exahilosys: via*
13:29 wmtokok: No.
13:29 Exahilosys: Ok
13:30 Exahilosys: I also suggest that you do something like that
http://i.imgur.com/6xJrfmi.jpg here 00:30:288 - so you don't break the spacing between the hcs
13:31 Exahilosys: And I think it would be better to move that (1) further from the (7) here 00:31:188 - because there is more ephasys, and a medium jump would be nice
13:32 wmtokok: I don't want make it too hard
13:32 Exahilosys: I did not say to move it too far
13:32 Exahilosys: maybe one fingertip
13:34 Exahilosys: And here 00:43:579 - I suggest you give a nice wooble to the stream by doing that
http://i.imgur.com/ta6B8zT.jpg13:36 Exahilosys: Also I think it would be better to end this slider 01:02:388 - here 01:02:688 and place a not here 01:02:788 -
13:36 Exahilosys: 01:02:688 - * and 01:02:2788 - *
13:36 Exahilosys: boop
13:37 Exahilosys: 01:02:788 - *
13:38 Exahilosys: Please say something >.<
13:38 Exahilosys: I feel like I am talking to myself XD
13:39 wmtokok: @@
13:40 Exahilosys: Ah good you are here >:D
13:40 Exahilosys: Now, I suggest you move the 5 here 02:00:588 - a bit closer to the 4
13:40 wmtokok: I just change some stream for the hc
13:41 Exahilosys: What time are you talking about?
13:41 wmtokok: 00:43:388 (3) -
13:41 Exahilosys: By the way, I like that 02:03:388 -
13:41 Exahilosys: Oh, ok
13:41 wmtokok: You are too fast ._.
13:41 Exahilosys: XD I work fast
13:41 wmtokok: XD
13:42 Exahilosys: Do you want me to slow down so you can take a better look at what I send you?
13:42 Exahilosys: I have sent you many other stuff since the stream part
13:42 Exahilosys: take a look at them and let me know of your opinion
13:45 wmtokok: You can working continue
13:45 Exahilosys: oh , ok
13:46 Exahilosys: move that 3 02:06:788 - a bit up-right so it has the same distance from the end of 2slider and the start of 4
13:46 Exahilosys: This is a huge jump for the rest of the map 02:09:788 - there is not that much tention here for a jump like this
13:47 wmtokok: yes
13:47 wmtokok: i'll fix it.
13:48 Exahilosys: This is not nessecarry since it will make this part too hard, but I think that ending the slider here 02:12:188 - one time early and
13:48 Exahilosys: placing a note to where they end now would be better
13:50 Exahilosys: here
http://i.imgur.com/G8fzza3.jpg is another ministream that would be nice if it was woobly like that.
13:50 Exahilosys: (on the screenshot its changed)
13:51 Exahilosys: (You can see the time on the screenshot)
13:52 Exahilosys: Also I think if you did something like that
http://imgur.com/1myMOMr here 02:27:088 - it would be nicer
13:52 Exahilosys: see? 02:39:188 - nice one
13:53 wmtokok: i see that~
13:54 Exahilosys: And here 03:01:188 - the pace is not changing, so you should not be chaning the distance between hcs
13:55 Exahilosys: Why not do it like that
http://i.imgur.com/ieN2oTu.jpg here 03:22:188 -
13:57 Exahilosys: This is not a gameplay change, but I suggest you do not make the white boxes expand because they end up looking... not nice... like here 03:49:688 -
13:57 Exahilosys: Compared to the images
13:58 Exahilosys: Compared*
13:58 Exahilosys: Also this is a bigger jump than the others here 04:18:188 -
13:58 Exahilosys: Not bad though, change it if you want
13:58 Exahilosys: And thats all I had to indicate
13:59 wmtokok: OK~
14:00 Exahilosys: Is there anything you want to ask me?
14:00 wmtokok: I like 02:27:188 (2) - suggest
14:00 Exahilosys: Yeah, it came out pretty nice :3
14:01 Exahilosys: As for my opinion, I think the map is amazing. And you did a lot of good work with its' design
14:03 Exahilosys: I will be making a post soon on your thread, make sure to check it out and maybe throw a kudosu if I was of help ok ?