ctpsky wrote:

蠢mod

00:03:457 (1) - 可以不Q
00:06:588 (1) - ^
00:00:327 (1,1,1) - 用绿线让这三个滑条长度增加看着更爽
00:23:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 我太蠢了打不了这种连打
00:35:231 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 间距渐大可能比较好
00:37:094 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 抖得不好看 合着前面的成弧形连打可能更靠谱
01:32:871 (1) - 柑橘跳的有点远
01:45:614 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 虽然明白你的想法，但是却没表现出来 建议增加间距和弧度
01:46:987 (1,2,1) - 略远 成等距直线/弧线更好
01:47:575 (2,3,4) - flow
02:03:063 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 跳歪了 建议DS跳，不要间距渐大
02:35:804 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 玩的时候没感觉，但是做图很明显看出 这里的直连打和后面的弧形连打柑橘好怪异
02:37:176 (1,1) - 第二个1不Q 不然第一个1Q得没意义
02:37:176 - 这段kiai是ctrl+C ctrl+V ctrl+J弄出来的吧。。。被发现了么
03:11:682 (1,2,3) - 听了N遍都柑橘很怪你需要把物件删了才听得清楚
03:21:092 (1,2,3) - 这种切指臣妾做不到嘛
03:50:892 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 我想大部分人都打不了这串这个是坑，当时没想到怎么摆，等有想法了会改的
04:32:059 (1,2,3,4) - 间距太大了
04:39:113 (5) - 256,21

nikachyan wrote:

懒病发作……摸个Insane做做样子好了其实是hard摸不动

Insane

音效有点吵
00:10:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1357之间的间距摆成一样的
00:36:015 (6) - 如果是梗的话推荐再向上挪一挪
00:36:996 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这里的衔接不太顺
00:54:444 (4) - NC
00:56:013 (4) - NC
00:55:425 (2) - 这边的clap推荐换在3上
00:56:601 (7) - 这个clap删掉
01:13:462 - 从这里开始到7做成三连，把7的finish换成clap
01:16:893 (5) - delete
01:19:147 (3) - 这边的音效是忘记换sampleset了吗……
01:20:029 (5) - delete
01:23:166 (5) - ^
01:46:791 - add
01:47:183 - delete
02:03:063 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 没放整齐？
02:05:416 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这边很不顺手……不过估计是我太菜
02:22:668 (7) - NC，后面的NC去掉
02:25:903 (5) - 这边的节奏我推荐这个音隔一个乐句出现一次
02:43:646 (2) - 这个note挪到02:43:259 - 这里
02:56:194 (2) - 这个note挪到02:55:801 - 这边
02:58:644 (4) - delete
03:07:957 (6) - 向后拉1/4拍
03:02:663 - add
03:11:290 (4,5) - 为了一致性推荐也做成折返
03:23:445 (7,8) - 接的不好看……后面的类似梗也是
03:39:129 (1,2,3,4) - overmap……？还是用circle吧
04:09:233 - add
04:13:542 - add，或者在这里04:13:933 - ，但是04:14:129 (9) - 这个要删
04:17:069 - add
03:23:445 (7,8) - 接的不好看……后面的类似梗也是
03:39:129 (1,2,3,4) - overmap……？还是用circle吧
04:09:233 - add
04:13:542 - add，或者在这里04:13:933 - ，但是04:14:129 (9) - 这个要删
04:17:069 - add

Hard

00:25:036 (4) - 向右转一点
00:33:075 - delete 改成s了
01:13:462 (5) - delete，6上NC再把下一个NC去掉
00:08:936 (4,5,6) - 间距？
00:14:450 (1) - 能做成三角形
00:46:994 (4) - 重音不在这边……clap放在滑条头
00:55:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 虽然你说音效不违和就行……但是自己加重音这种感觉怪怪的。clap还是安心点放白线上吧
01:07:384 (3) - 三角形
01:23:166 - 这边为什么不和之前放一样的节奏？
01:25:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - clap下在1,3,5上 试了下还是现在好
02:34:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^，那个六边形也没做好
01:42:674 (2) - 三角形
02:39:921 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 乱。我觉得你可以在kiai的时候加大ds
03:07:565 (3) - 向上
03:44:619 (1) - 如果是几何梗的话1的滑条尾稍微调整调整
04:37:545 (4) - NC开在这
04:37:545 (4) - 最后的spinner停在这就可以

Normal

00:20:331 (4) - NC
00:29:742 (4) - 只留一个circle就行 本来是这样的，好吧，我手欠改了，还是应该坚持初衷
00:31:702 (1,2,3,4) - 调整下位置做成五边形的其中四个
00:32:879 (4) - NC
00:55:425 (6) - clap放在7上
00:56:013 (8) - 这个clap删
00:56:405 (9) - 这个clap放在滑条开头
以上三条适用于所有类似音效梗
01:05:815 (8) - ^
01:13:658 (4) - NC
1.0的间距加上这个sv太挤了……根本看不出有什么梗能改间距增大就控不住星数了，这样也挺好的

Easy

00:17:586 (3,4,5,6,1) - 五边形没放好
00:27:781 (5) - 向外转一点
00:32:879 (4) - NC
01:04:639 (3,4) - copy 2 再逆时针转120°放在3的开头
01:33:655 (4) - 六边形有点歪了
02:16:787 (2) - ^
03:34:424 (2,3,4) - 弧度有问题
03:35:208 (4,5,6,1) - ^
04:25:397 (2,3,4,5) - ^

总体而言没什么出彩的梗……不过打起来很爽，那就够了
get your star ♪

-Tochi wrote:

From my modding queue

• 
  General

1. Use 80% volume in kiai times? fixed

• 
  Insane

1. Set the AR to 8.5 or 8.6?at first, it was ar8.5, i think it was slow, but now changed to ar8.6
2. 00:12:447 (4) - Too close to 00:12:162 (3) - i think it is no problem, plays well
3. 00:46:798 (5,6,7) - Stack the triple for a better flow? fixed, and the before
4. 02:33:451 (1) - Why new combo here? aaa just a mistake, fixed
5. 03:17:367 (6,7) - Bad slow here, i suggest to stack them. changed by another way
6. 03:35:600 (2) - Ctrl + G here, 03:35:796 (3) - fixed, and with the 4
7. 03:36:385 (5) - Copy this, and paste it in here 03:36:581 - and remember to do Ctrl + G so it looks like:changed, same as 03:35:208 (1,2,3,4) -
   
   ^

   
8. 03:50:108 (6) - New combo here? no necessary
9. 03:55:598 (1) - What a creative slider yes, and the hard here was created by 384059043
10. 04:16:383 (4) - Add drum whiste here? fixed
11. 04:36:370 (1,2,3) - Use same DS?they are just stack to before

• 
  Feedback
  
  Nice mapped! Good luck with it :p

384059043 wrote:

mod info:

Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.

[General]

1. nothing

[Insane]

1. 00:12:067 (2,3,4) - 这么摆着看上去很纠结啊，不如试试这样的？：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2437507挪到了下面
   
   Picture

   
2. 00:20:723 (1,2,3,4) - 3/4很违和。这里直接放4个大跳circle+finish，感觉比现在的要好。如果还是想要用3/4的话，改一下音效吧，比方说像02:00:710 (7,1,2,3,4,1) - 的
   
3. 00:33:271 (1,2,3,4) - ^好，这是忘了改滑条尾巴
   
4. 00:55:621 (3) - 按照你下音效的方法，我觉得这里应该改成一个1/2slider会更好听好
   
5. 01:09:541 (2,3,4) - 加点间距好
   
6. 01:26:597 (1) - 试试这样加绿线的方法，然后把music调到0，sample调到100听听看，感受下
   
   时间点 音效组 音量
   01:26:597 S:C1 70%
   01:26:695 S 5%
   01:26:793 S:C1 35%
   01:27:381 S 45%
   01:27:798 N 55% 注意这条绿线并没有压在白线上简化了下
   
   
7. 02:00:710 (7,1,2,3,4,1) - 这里没前面那么严重（因为音效的缘故），可以改或者不改好
   
8. 02:05:808 (1) - (nazi) 左移2小格（104,84 -> 96,84），不然你的这串连打的这个圆看起来是歪的好
   
9. 02:36:686 (2,3,4,5,6) - 用drum组试试好
   
10. 03:11:976 (2) - 节奏错了吧，吉他的节奏应该是这样的：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2437663我感觉没错诶
    
    Picture

    
11. 03:12:466 (1,2,3) - 如果上面这条是按照我的截图改的话，这里可以ctrl+H一下
    
12. 03:32:071 (1,2,3) - 估计会坑到人能反应过来的
    
13. 美丽，音效有点吵，善用drum组因为自带drum就懒了

[Hard]

1. 01:26:597 (1) - 可以和4的尾巴叠起来。三个点的坐标是：152,180（没动）; 305,312; 182,337。好
   
2. 02:36:686 - drum组好
   
3. 03:48:344 (2) - ctrl+G这里跟前半部分区分开

[Normal]

1. 按照这个排列，AR+1好

[Easy]

1. 低难度有啥好看的233

已经不会mod了，悲伤

1. 00:34:447 (4) - Maybe move to x204 y138 ? and 00:34:839 (1) - to x192 y284
2. 00:53:660 (1,2,3) - I suggest to scale these to 1,30x distant, so it make sense with 00:54:444 (4,5,6) -
3. 01:49:633 (4,5) - I suggest to make these circles' distant same as 01:49:928 (6,7) - or to make 01:49:928 (6,7) - Distant same as 01:49:633 (4,5) -
4. 02:58:644 (4,5) - maybe scale to 0,715x ?
5. 04:29:707 (8,9) - maybe move them closer, that part is hard to read, when it's done to so small area, unlike this part is easy to read 04:32:451 (1,2,3,4) -

smsh150 wrote:

Hello!

Came from my queue

[General]

nothing
[Insane]

1. 00:34:447 (4) - Maybe move to x204 y138 ? and 00:34:839 (1) - to x192 y284 don't mind,i t's just same as before
2. 00:53:660 (1,2,3) - I suggest to scale these to 1,30x distant, so it make sense with 00:54:444 (4,5,6) -
3. 01:49:633 (4,5) - I suggest to make these circles' distant same as 01:49:928 (6,7) - or to make 01:49:928 (6,7) - Distant same as 01:49:633 (4,5) -
4. 02:58:644 (4,5) - maybe scale to 0,715x ?
5. 04:29:707 (8,9) - maybe move them closer, that part is hard to read, when it's done to so small area, unlike this part is easy to read 04:32:451 (1,2,3,4) -
   they are the increasing distance

Sorry for so small mod. ;_; You have made map so good that I don't find anymore any things

just fast checked;

Easy: 04:14:815 (1) - is this blanket? is yes check distant yes
Normal: 00:42:681 (4,5) - maybe make these vertical parallel withbefore
02:42:666 (6) - check blank next distantdon't mind
Hard: nothing special

good luck with map

tutuhaha wrote:

[Insane]
00:33:271 (1,2,3) - 还是统一一下间距比较好
00:46:210 (3) - 懒改了，差别不大
00:46:994 (7) - 我觉得还是照常在这俩上面加clap, 或者说这个normal clap加在你现在加的地方实在是很奇怪点都不奇怪好吧
00:56:405 (6,7) - ctrl+g这个flow？那样太鬼畜了
01:04:639 (1,2,3,4,5) - 和前面的那个clap建议一样
01:10:129 (5,6) - 用1.0x的间距ok
01:18:755 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - normal clap放在这里还是感觉很weird唔，这个值得考虑，保留下，也许会改
01:49:143 (3,4,5) - 这个三连和01:49:928 (6,7,1) - 这个三连比我觉得很明显后者比较强烈，所以要搞不一样的间距的话大间距应该是后面那个ok
01:51:692 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 哎呦前面这么善良怎么到这块就......233
02:23:061 (1) - 重音是这里开始的所以我觉得这里最好搞个跳什么的比较有聊断flow算跳么
02:23:061 (1,2,3,4) - 要搞得话间距搞一样啦..
02:24:237 (4,1,2,3) - 有些萨比bat会挑你这里难读不觉得诶
02:40:901 (3) - 这里还是ctrl+g flow好一点跳还管flow
02:50:116 (1,2) -
02:51:684 (2,3) - 这俩节奏类型一样要不就都搞跳要不就都不搞跳我是这么觉得的跳是逐渐增大的
02:53:253 (2,3) - 哦还有这个
02:55:605 (10,1) - 这个我是真的觉得间距太小了..时间隔得比较久了，这影响不大
03:12:466 (1,2,3) - 这个适合搞大一点的跳ok
03:19:132 (10,1,2) - 10到1之间的间距应该要比1到2的大ok
04:19:028 (x) - 这里我觉得不该缺note
....感觉前半部分和后半部分不是一个难度等级是怎么回事...............后半更激昂吧，很多歌都这样

[Hard]
00:14:450 (1,2,3) - 间距用1.1x统一了1.2
00:37:976 (1,2,3) -
00:39:544 (1,2,3) - 这俩是一模一样的节奏类型，建议把这个改成上面那种节奏ok
00:45:818 (1) - 这块的clap我就不重复了，后面的也不重复了
01:00:522 (2) - 移上一格ok
01:07:384 (3) - 移到x132 y180ok
01:25:029 (1,2,3) - 间距统一影响不大
01:28:558 (1) - 其实我比较想不通这里干嘛要减速，我觉得这里和前面你用1.0x的节奏并没有足够明显的区别以至于你要用减速滑条来强调这种声音跟最后那段不一样，这个是低沉的感觉
02:19:924 (1) - 02:20:708 (3) - 1的尾巴到3的头的距离最好和1到2的距离一样ok
02:37:569 (1) - 这里和上上的观点一样
03:32:071 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2526701 节奏应该是这样的我还是觉得这样好，符合惯性
03:37:561 (4,5,6,1) - 间距统一这里滑条变速了，有个过程比较好
03:39:129 (4,5,6,1) - ^可以搞大点但还是影响不大
03:45:403 (2) - 这换成note更power一点影响不大
04:16:383 (2) - 忘加whistleok

normal和easy dt 玩了一把感觉没啥太大问题，就是normal的节奏要是主要跟vocal的话大部分时间slider+slider+note的节奏会玩的更舒服一些

1. I think AudioLeadIn 1500 is fine already, don't wanna make players wait for too long.
2. 04:39:897 (1) - The last spinner is pretty irrelevant to be honest, there's nothing noteworthy to follow anymore.
3. You could need confirmation for the timing settings, these decimals in your BPMs gives me worries and it sometimes sound really sketchy, e.g.00:26:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - in Hard.
4. Disable Widescreen support and Letterboxes during breaks in all your diffs.

1. Might be just me, but the combos seem to be pretty small for a Hard diff, consider setting NC after every 2 stanzas only instead of after every one.
2. Delete NC: 00:03:457 (1) - 00:06:588 (1) -
3. 00:34:055 (4) - Ctrl+g for some variety in motion.
4. Some blanket improvements: 00:13:650 (3,1) -
5. 00:31:310 (6) - 00:31:702 (1) - There should be Finish HS here for cymbals
6. 00:32:879 (1,2) - NC on 2, compare with 00:21:900 (4,1) -
7. 00:34:839 (6,1) - NC on 6, compare with 00:23:860 (1) -
8. 00:45:818 (1) - Why is there a clap on the reverse, it doesn't fit into the HS rhythm. Delete.
9. 00:46:994 (4) - Clap on head instead.
10. Forgot finish on the following objects: 00:53:268 (4) - start 01:02:679 (4) - start 01:03:071 (1) - start 01:12:089 (4,1) - 01:21:892 (1) - 01:25:029 (1,3,5) - 01:33:851 (4) -
    And this list continues... Try to listen closer to the track and set finishes at places where you can hear strong cymbals in the track.
11. 00:55:229 (1,2) - You should set HS more appropriately to the music, the HS pattern you make here doesn't comply with the music well. Delete clap on 1's tail and set it on 2's head.
    Same goes for 00:56:013 (3,5) - .
12. 00:56:601 (6) - Finish instead of clap, there's a cymbal here.
13. 01:04:639 (1,2,3,4) - Again, what instruments are you trying to follow with these claps here? I suppose the claps are intended for the drums like in the previous combos, but then you decided to change the HS rhythm... which sounds strange to me. :/
14. 01:11:697 (3) - to 01:25:029 - This whole section plays rather boring, because rhythm is pretty monotonous because you focus solely on percussions. Try to arrange the rhythm such that it follows the vocal as well.
15. 01:18:755 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Suddenly switching from drumwhistles to normalclaps feels really awkward, better make them drumwhistles.
16. 01:53:260 - I smell big copy-pasta up to 02:35:412 - , so I guess nothing new to add here (it's the same issues as above)
17. 02:35:608 (1) - Listen closer, there's no percussion beat at 02:35:706 - . Rearrange the rhythm: http://puu.sh/eXIBp/892923850b.jpg
18. 03:09:231 - There should be a beat here as well for the E--guitar you're following
19. 03:38:247 - This is a really big SV change, i really recommend you ease this up a bit (1.10x sounds good)
20. 03:54:814 (3) - Drumfinish sounds really good here.
21. 04:32:843 (4,1) - Sudden SV drop is not really good, as you can feel how the music is still really intense after the kiai. Again, go with 1.10x instead here.
22. 04:37:545 (4,1) - I'd set NC on 4 already, fits much better for the pattern.
23. Fine. There's a lot of copy-paste stuff, but the music is kind of repetitive as well so i'm okay with that.
    Hitsounding needs more improvement, I don't like how some of these clap patterns don't synergize with the music.

1. Hitsound issues are pretty much the same as with the hard diff, please fix.
2. 00:06:980 (2) - 3/2 slider would be really great here to follow the e-guitar optimally.
3. NC: 00:15:332 (7) - 00:18:273 (6) -
4. 00:36:407 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Idk, it looks and plays weird since you are suddenly changing DS during the stream for no apparent reason and then going back to 0.8xDS again. The best decision would be to make the DS constant throughout the stream.
5. 01:09:541 (2) - 01:11:109 (2) - I think things like this happen really often in this map: objects at beats which are pretty much non-existent in the track (aka overmapping). I know you're doing this for more comfortable play (or mb because you like triples much idk), but I really recommend you delete them.
   Some other notable mentions concerning this issue: 01:31:204 (6) - 01:35:812 (4,5) - 01:39:047 (6) - 01:42:085 (4,5) - 01:48:457 (4) - 01:50:026 (7) - 03:46:285 (2) - 03:47:854 (2) -
   This became such a common issue and ppl don't seem to really care too much about it anymore... so yeah, decide at your own will.
6. 01:28:558 (1) - 01:47:379 (1) - 02:04:632 (1,1) - Delete NC, unnecessary. Same goes for the 2nd kiai: 02:37:569 (1) -
7. 01:46:006 (5,8) - NC'ing these might be a good idea for the DS changes. Not necessary, just preference.
8. 02:00:710 (7,1) - There should be a notable jump here too imo as there is one between 02:01:495 (2,3) - as well.
9. 03:05:604 (3) - Split into slider+circle. Reason is that you want 03:05:996 - this beat clickable as there's a cymbal here.
10. 03:28:150 (4) - This should be a backslider as well for consistency :/ Compare with 03:28:935 (1) - 03:29:719 (4) -
11. 03:30:503 (1,4) - Crop them by 1/4 to follow the e-guitar much better.
12. 03:32:071 (1,2,3) - This is really dangerous, because before this section, all these small backsliders where 2x repeat and here you suddenly let them repeat only once.
    03:32:071 (1) - Swap this with a 1/2 slider instead and it should be much more readable.
13. 04:08:153 - Oh my, such high SV here.
14. This one's pretty cool, liked the solo part a lot.

Pho wrote:

From my modding queue, M4M ~
Since you haven't decided which diffs to mod, I just chose the 2 highest ones. Hope you're fine with it.
Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable stuff
Red: Highly recommend

[General]

1. I think AudioLeadIn 1500 is fine already, don't wanna make players wait for too long.
2. 04:39:897 (1) - The last spinner is pretty irrelevant to be honest, there's nothing noteworthy to follow anymore.
3. You could need confirmation for the timing settings, these decimals in your BPMs gives me worries and it sometimes sound really sketchy, e.g.00:26:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - in Hard.decimals but not faultmaybe
4. Disable Widescreen support and Letterboxes during breaks in all your diffs.

[Hard]

1. Might be just me, but the combos seem to be pretty small for a Hard diff, consider setting NC after every 2 stanzas only instead of after every one.
2. Delete NC: 00:03:457 (1) - 00:06:588 (1) -
3. 00:34:055 (4) - Ctrl+g for some variety in motion. Here different from behind
4. Some blanket improvements: 00:13:650 (3,1) -
5. 00:31:310 (6) - 00:31:702 (1) - There should be Finish HS here for cymbals
6. 00:32:879 (1,2) - NC on 2, compare with 00:21:900 (4,1) -
7. 00:34:839 (6,1) - NC on 6, compare with 00:23:860 (1) -
8. 00:45:818 (1) - Why is there a clap on the reverse, it doesn't fit into the HS rhythm. Delete.
9. 00:46:994 (4) - Clap on head instead.I think they are appropriately to the music
10. Forgot finish on the following objects: 00:53:268 (4) - start 01:02:679 (4) - start 01:03:071 (1) - start 01:12:089 (4,1) - 01:21:892 (1) - 01:25:029 (1,3,5) - 01:33:851 (4) -
    And this list continues... Try to listen closer to the track and set finishes at places where you can hear strong cymbals in the track.there are too many cymbals in the track. the map will sound noisy if add too many finish
11. 00:55:229 (1,2) - You should set HS more appropriately to the music, the HS pattern you make here doesn't comply with the music well. Delete clap on 1's tail and set it on 2's head.
    Same goes for 00:56:013 (3,5) - .sorry i don't think so
12. 00:56:601 (6) - Finish instead of clap, there's a cymbal here.too many
13. 01:04:639 (1,2,3,4) - Again, what instruments are you trying to follow with these claps here? I suppose the claps are intended for the drums like in the previous combos, but then you decided to change the HS rhythm... which sounds strange to me. :/ when it's sfot, i follow with vocal
14. 01:11:697 (3) - to 01:25:029 - This whole section plays rather boring, because rhythm is pretty monotonous because you focus solely on percussions. Try to arrange the rhythm such that it follows the vocal as well.
15. 01:18:755 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Suddenly switching from drumwhistles to normalclaps feels really awkward, better make them drumwhistles.just hold on, maybe change
16. 01:53:260 - I smell big copy-pasta up to 02:35:412 - , so I guess nothing new to add here (it's the same issues as above)
17. 02:35:608 (1) - Listen closer, there's no percussion beat at 02:35:706 - . Rearrange the rhythm: http://puu.sh/eXIBp/892923850b.jpg
18. 03:09:231 - There should be a beat here as well for the E--guitar you're following
19. 03:38:247 - This is a really big SV change, i really recommend you ease this up a bit (1.10x sounds good)but it's not fast
20. 03:54:814 (3) - Drumfinish sounds really good here.
21. 04:32:843 (4,1) - Sudden SV drop is not really good, as you can feel how the music is still really intense after the kiai. Again, go with 1.10x instead here.but it's not too fast
22. 04:37:545 (4,1) - I'd set NC on 4 already, fits much better for the pattern.
23. Fine. There's a lot of copy-paste stuff, but the music is kind of repetitive as well so i'm okay with that.
    Hitsounding needs more improvement, I don't like how some of these clap patterns don't synergize with the music.but i think the claps right

[Insane]

1. Hitsound issues are pretty much the same as with the hard diff, please fix.hold
2. 00:06:980 (2) - 3/2 slider would be really great here to follow the e-guitar optimally.
3. NC: 00:15:332 (7) - 00:18:273 (6) -
4. 00:36:407 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Idk, it looks and plays weird since you are suddenly changing DS during the stream for no apparent reason and then going back to 0.8xDS again. The best decision would be to make the DS constant throughout the stream.
5. 01:09:541 (2) - 01:11:109 (2) - I think things like this happen really often in this map: objects at beats which are pretty much non-existent in the track (aka overmapping). I know you're doing this for more comfortable play (or mb because you like triples much idk), but I really recommend you delete them.
   Some other notable mentions concerning this issue: 01:31:204 (6) - 01:35:812 (4,5) - 01:39:047 (6) - 01:42:085 (4,5) - 01:48:457 (4) - 01:50:026 (7) - 03:46:285 (2) - 03:47:854 (2) - [/color]
   This became such a common issue and ppl don't seem to really care too much about it anymore... so yeah, decide at your own will.
6. 01:28:558 (1) - 01:47:379 (1) - 02:04:632 (1,1) - Delete NC, unnecessary. Same goes for the 2nd kiai: 02:37:569 (1) -
7. 01:46:006 (5,8) - NC'ing these might be a good idea for the DS changes. Not necessary, just preference.
8. 02:00:710 (7,1) - There should be a notable jump here too imo as there is one between 02:01:495 (2,3) - as well.gradually increase ds
9. 03:05:604 (3) - Split into slider+circle. Reason is that you want 03:05:996 - this beat clickable as there's a cymbal here.
10. 03:28:150 (4) - This should be a backslider as well for consistency :/ Compare with 03:28:935 (1) - 03:29:719 (4) - Compare with 03:27:366 (1) -
11. 03:30:503 (1,4) - Crop them by 1/4 to follow the e-guitar much better.they're called tenuto
12. 03:32:071 (1,2,3) - This is really dangerous, because before this section, all these small backsliders where 2x repeat and here you suddenly let them repeat only once.
    03:32:071 (1) - Swap this with a 1/2 slider instead and it should be much more readable.
13. 04:08:153 - Oh my, such high SV here.intense
14. This one's pretty cool, liked the solo part a lot.

I'm still no fan of copy-pasting whole sections from a map. :p The set could need more mods concerning hitsounds and more mods in general. Shooting a star for the good work, good luck with this set!

handsome wrote:

hi

• General

1. just snap these, in case if there is issue: http://i.imgur.com/3hilJMx.png
2. 
   
   Easy
3. 00:20:723 (2) - change the design? its a very different sound from previous. maybe even change to more circles for loud drums.
4. 00:26:997 (3,4,5) - sliders, then circles? for loud drums at00:28:173 -
5. 00:30:134 (3,4,5) - ^
6. 00:31:702 (1,2,3) - if you dont want too many circles in a row becasue of ^, you can change to reverse slider here too.
7. 01:33:263 (3,4,5) - same as 00:26:997 (3,4,5) -
8. 01:45:810 (3,4,5) - ^
9. only ^ this issue appears for the rest of diff i didn't change the rhythm of Easy, because it's really very easy
   
   Normal
10. 01:03:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - too many reverse in the same pattern can be confusing. i suggest reduce. same for the rest. also this rhythm/pattern is very long, it is connected for almost 8 seconds, i really suggest to give more 1/1 pause. same for similar parts.
    
    Hard
11. 01:16:598 (4,5) - the spacing is very confusing here. its low enough that it can be confused for 1/2 spacing, i suggest its ok to break DS and space further, same for the rest.
12. 04:09:721 - a sliderhead/circle here is better to play. now 04:09:916 (4) - is weird. same for the rest.
    
    Insane
13. i love the low sv in kiai! nice~
14. 01:26:499 (7) - 01:29:636 (5) - 01:31:204 (6) - overmap, you get what i mean, you should fix. but not bad overmap
15. 02:01:495 (2,4) - i misread...
16. 02:28:746 (4,5) - i dislike a rhythm like this, its not very nice when sliderend = drum. i prefer 02:27:178 (4,5,6) -
    
    nice map~ good luck!

ZZHBOY wrote:

把hard的cs调大点 3.5-3.6你看如何 3.8 instead 3.6有些地方有点挤果然做完之后调cs是很沙皮的行为，还好低难度影响不是很大
[Easy]
00:50:523 (1) - 往下移点别离血条太近 fixed
其他没啥 好了喊我

Flower wrote:

Did a short irc check and I think it's so far so fine. Qualified :3
ps: zzh这个zz，一条的摸也敢骗，夫妻