- Ping - wrote:

are there any hopes ?

neonat wrote:

00:06:431 (1) - add some swanky curves in the slider, cuz you know, sexy.

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jk I just think being too straight is just not really nice
00:07:522 (1,2,3) - more balance in spacing? Somewhat like 00:08:068 (4,5,6) in terms of spacing ratio
00:13:386 (2) - ending the slider on the strong beat, I would usually encourage not to
00:27:158 (5,6) - why not follow what you did at 00:26:068 (1,2,3) - you did it for 00:34:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) after all
01:00:568 (4,5,6,1) - shouldn't 01:00:840 (6,1) be the one with the biggest spacing of them all?
01:15:158 (1,2,1,2,3) - continuously reducing the spacing for this part would be a nice effect i think now is already good enough
01:22:522 (4) and 01:27:977 (1) - just some I felt odd since the strong beat is the end of the slider
02:17:340 (1,2) - if you were trying to blanket them even though they don't appear together at any point, it's still not working
02:31:522 (1) - remove finish
02:35:477 (3,1) - is this a blanket
02:46:386 (4,5,1) - 02:46:522 (5,1) should have been bigger than what 02:46:386 (4,5) should be
03:17:068 (3) - like 01:27:977 (1)
03:47:613 (3) - ^
04:22:386 (3,4,1) - same as 02:46:386 (4,5,1)

Look out for the spacing because I feel one of the reasons QAT felt it was unpolished was because the spacing sometimes did not really stress the right beats in the song, and part of that is because some of the rhythm were worked around make nice patterns, and not the other way around. For me, one example would be those sliders that end on the big white line which start new phrases in the song, I felt that you had them to make nice patterns but then it made the emphasis odd.

neonat wrote:

04:16:249 (1,2,3,4,5) - add some claps here

have you asked other people to take a look too?

1. I found an unused file :
   
   1. konachan.com - 149829 butterfly flowers gumi headphones seifuku vient vocaloid.png

1. 00:06:431 (1) - Are you sure that you don't need large movement through this slider? It would make nice emphasis to have it with a jump . Another reason : Compared to the others, this one should have it too in my opinion
2. 00:12:295 (2) - SV changes applied here, so you need to make it has new combo
3. 00:12:568 (1) - Don't you think this circle is too short from previous slider? I feel weird to move just a little movement to this circle . Move it around 204|296 feels more intuitive to follow
4. 00:15:704 (3) - Oopps, forgot to new combo
5. 00:18:295 (2) - Hmm, for me, I don't think such SV fits in this slider currently . Please turn it to 1.00x
6. 00:18:295 (2,3) - Switching rhythm on them would make it plays more better than before, because you get the strong point of downbeat within this suggested rhythm
7. 00:56:613 (1) - The movement to this slider is rather short to have a nice emphasis for me . Move it to 132|200 will make it perfect, since it will be more intuitive to follow then before, and the spacing issue get fixed
8. 00:57:431 (2) - I thought this slider is a 1/2 jump
9. 01:33:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - They sounded overmapped in my opinion . Have it with regular 1/2 rhythm will fits nice more than those 1/4 I think . Or, if you want to keep those 1/4, consider to make it same with 03:02:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - , kick slider jumps
10. 02:26:068 (1) - 368|148 please >< I feel weird to move my cursor to the current position, compared to previous spacing which higher than this slider, which this slider should have it too
11. 03:21:977 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Give me reason why you using this intentional reduced spacing . I can't really tolerate it if there's no proper reason behind their existence

Ipas wrote:

Oh man this song is nice

[General]

1. I found an unused file :
   
   1. konachan.com - 149829 butterfly flowers gumi headphones seifuku vient vocaloid.png

[Kaleidoscope]

1. 00:06:431 (1) - Are you sure that you don't need large movement through this slider? It would make nice emphasis to have it with a jump . Another reason : Compared to the others, this one should have it too in my opinion yes
2. 00:12:295 (2) - SV changes applied here, so you need to make it has new combo
3. 00:12:568 (1) - Don't you think this circle is too short from previous slider? I feel weird to move just a little movement to this circle . Move it around 204|296 feels more intuitive to follow i don't think so, also i think it's fit here too
4. 00:15:704 (3) - Oopps, forgot to new combo
5. 00:18:295 (2) - Hmm, for me, I don't think such SV fits in this slider currently . Please turn it to 1.00x
6. 00:18:295 (2,3) - Switching rhythm on them would make it plays more better than before, because you get the strong point of downbeat within this suggested rhythm 00:18:704 - 00:18:977 - 00:19:249 - i want follow this three white line
7. 00:56:613 (1) - The movement to this slider is rather short to have a nice emphasis for me . Move it to 132|200 will make it perfect, since it will be more intuitive to follow then before, and the spacing issue get fixed
8. 00:57:431 (2) - I thought this slider is a 1/2 jump
9. 01:33:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - They sounded overmapped in my opinion . Have it with regular 1/2 rhythm will fits nice more than those 1/4 I think . Or, if you want to keep those 1/4, consider to make it same with 03:02:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - , kick slider jumps
10. 02:26:068 (1) - 368|148 please >< I feel weird to move my cursor to the current position, compared to previous spacing which higher than this slider, which this slider should have it too
11. 03:21:977 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Give me reason why you using this intentional reduced spacing . I can't really tolerate it if there's no proper reason behind their existence because it's first feel when i hear this part, i mapped it and i think decreasing ds is good for there, so i did it

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This is awesome ><
Call me again for a recheck!