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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, February 08, 2015 at 4:24:58 AM

Artist: xi
Title: Wish upon Twin Stars
Source: SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Tags: SDVX Character Theme First Contest eon-
BPM: 200
Filesize: 4315kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED Lv.12 - 4Key (3.04 stars, 967 notes)
  2. EXHAUST Lv.15 - 4Key (4.41 stars, 1370 notes)
  3. NOVICE Lv.9 - 4Key (1.89 stars, 543 notes)


Download: xi - Wish upon Twin Stars
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Bubbled by Stawwy-
Qualified by Ichikagi


Thanks Eon- for BG
posted
Fight with Ichia7x
02:50 LNP-: chi chan
02:50 ichia7x: hi beb
02:50 LNP-: mod request
02:50 *LNP- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/540060 xi - Wish upon Twin Stars]
02:51 LNP-: :D
02:51 ichia7x: wai no gd request
02:51 ichia7x: advanced lv. 10
02:52 LNP-: mau kerjain sendiri dulu
02:52 ichia7x: lv 9
02:52 ichia7x: lel
02:52 ichia7x: ye ye tau
02:52 ichia7x: aku pengen suptag siet
02:52 LNP-: huehue
02:52 ichia7x: mau bikin mapset mode lain
02:52 ichia7x: BAT mania pada repot
02:52 ichia7x: ngurusin MBC
02:52 LNP-: iya
02:53 LNP-: oh yg renatus ya
02:53 ichia7x: give me pls
02:53 LNP-: apanya ?
02:53 LNP-: renatus enak kalo dibikin mania
02:53 ichia7x: yup
02:53 ichia7x: suptag lel
02:54 LNP-: ini aja hasil ngemis ;w;
02:54 LNP-: dan mod queue pada tutup semua `-`
02:55 ichia7x: aku belum pernah denger renatus sampe selesai
02:55 ichia7x: pernah dl, nyoba ngemap 5 detik awal, deleted
02:55 ichia7x: kukira beli sendiri
02:55 LNP-: awakwkawkaw
02:55 LNP-: renatus awalnya ngebosenin
02:55 LNP-: tapi pass masuk reff baru emejing
02:56 ichia7x: lolz
02:56 *ichia7x is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/540061 xi - Wish upon Twin Stars]
02:56 ichia7x: OAO
02:56 ichia7x: fiat x quietus
02:56 LNP-: >w<
02:57 ichia7x: umm, anu aja
02:57 ichia7x: irc
02:57 ichia7x: lel
02:57 LNP-: okeh
02:57 *ichia7x is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/540060 xi - Wish upon Twin Stars [EXHAUST Lv.15]]
02:57 ichia7x: 00:02:125 (2125|0,2162|1,2200|2) -
02:57 ichia7x: turunin ke 1/8 beat
02:57 ichia7x: pake 50% dulu biar jelas
02:58 LNP-: um
02:58 LNP-: itu udh pass deh
03:00 ichia7x: nggak `-`)
03:01 LNP-: oiya
03:01 ichia7x: 00:04:975 - ga 2 notes?
03:01 LNP-: added
03:02 ichia7x: 00:11:875 (11875|0) - mulainya dari00:11:950 -
03:02 ichia7x: 00:22:300 - 3-notes aja, ngikution sebelumnya
03:02 LNP-: 00:11:875 (11875|0) - udh pass
03:02 ichia7x: 00:24:400 - add note di 2, reverse stairs
03:03 LNP-: ok
03:03 ichia7x: bentar aku dengerin lagunya dulu
03:03 LNP-: =w=)b
03:03 *ichia7x is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/540060 xi - Wish upon Twin Stars [EXHAUST Lv.15]] <osu!mania> |4K|
03:06 ichia7x: miss 6
03:06 ichia7x: 00:18:925 - add note deh
03:06 LNP-: kenapa ?
03:06 ichia7x: ada beat kelewat
03:07 LNP-: ok
03:07 ichia7x: 00:29:275 - 00:29:800 - samain aja kalo mau, 2-notes semua, tapi ga usah juga ga terlalu ngefek sih, aku tau maksudmu
03:07 LNP-: =w=
03:08 ichia7x: 00:31:275 - 00:32:075 - 1/6 pls
03:08 ichia7x: add note di 3, ada beat kelewat lagi
03:08 LNP-: aih
03:08 LNP-: ok
03:09 ichia7x: 00:33:475 - buat efek fading, kalo mau add note di 1, atau sebelumnya dibuat LN
03:09 ichia7x: di 1
03:10 ichia7x: 00:34:075 - 00:34:375 - 1/3 pls
03:10 LNP-: ok
03:10 LNP-: hue ok
03:10 ichia7x: 00:38:275 - fading juga
03:10 LNP-: eh kenapa 1/3
03:10 LNP-: 1/4 udh pass 030
03:10 ichia7x: emang 1/3 `-`
03:11 ichia7x: nope
03:11 ichia7x: pake 50% dong 8)
03:11 ichia7x: 00:39:100 - ini kalo dikasih note lebih enak deh
03:11 LNP-: oh iya
03:11 ichia7x: 2 aja
03:11 ichia7x: 00:40:676 - faing
03:11 ichia7x: *fading
03:11 LNP-: ok
03:12 ichia7x: 00:41:576 - fading
03:12 LNP-: 00:41:576 - jangan deh
03:12 LNP-: kurang afdol
03:13 ichia7x: 00:47:126 - 00:47:276 - stairs | 00:47:426 - 00:47:576 - juga
03:18 LNP-: DC `-`
03:18 ichia7x: lol
03:19 ichia7x: mod gw tadi banyak `-`
03:19 ichia7x: 00:47:126 - 00:47:276 - stairs | 00:47:426 - 00:47:576 - juga
03:19 LNP-: itu udh
03:20 ichia7x: 01:08:276 - 01:08:351 - missing note
03:20 LNP-: oh iya
03:21 ichia7x: 01:22:077 - 01:22:377 - full stair harusnya
03:21 LNP-: ikutin biola
03:21 ichia7x: 01:22:377 - 01:22:677 - ga yakin, kalo pake 50% beatnya 1/6, kalo 100% cuma 1/4
03:21 ichia7x: orz
03:21 LNP-: piano*
03:22 ichia7x: kalo piano, yang mod terakhir itu pake 1/6
03:22 LNP-: ok
03:22 LNP-: done
03:23 ichia7x: 01:23:052 (83052|1) - nothing happened, pls delete
03:23 ichia7x: 01:23:052 (83052|1) - add disini, ada piano
03:23 LNP-: =w=a
03:24 LNP-: perasaan dari tadi emank disitu deh
03:24 ichia7x: 01:26:127 - 01:26:277 - 1/6
03:25 LNP-: done
03:25 ichia7x: 01:26:427 - 01:26:502 - piano again
03:25 LNP-: ok
03:25 ichia7x: 01:27:177 - 01:27:252 - double trill kaya atasnya
03:26 LNP-: ok
03:26 ichia7x: 01:27:627 - 01:27:927 - piano semua
03:26 LNP-: ok
03:26 ichia7x: 01:31:902 - missing piano
03:26 LNP-: ok
03:27 ichia7x: 01:33:289 (93289|1,93327|2,93364|3) - turun ke 1/8
03:27 LNP-: ok
03:27 ichia7x: 01:34:377 (94377|1) - move to 01:34:352 - (1/12)
03:28 LNP-: ok
03:28 LNP-: 01:28:827 - disini tambah piano juga ?
03:29 ichia7x: oh itu ya
03:29 ichia7x: 01:28:902 -
03:30 ichia7x: 01:35:277 - add LN for uprising sound? whatever lel
03:30 LNP-: nonono
03:31 ichia7x: i know it lel
03:31 ichia7x: sounds bat
03:31 ichia7x: *bad
03:31 LNP-: yesyesyes
03:32 ichia7x: 01:40:227 (100227|3,100265|2,100302|1,100340|0,100377|3,100377|2) - copy 01:39:927 (99927|0,99927|2,100002|1,100002|3,100077|0,100077|2) - again reverse it
03:32 ichia7x: lel
03:32 LNP-: hue
03:32 ichia7x: 01:44:727 - 3-notes
03:32 LNP-: 1/8 cocok kok
03:32 LNP-: 2 notes lebih baik
03:33 ichia7x: aku tau, tapi aneh
03:33 ichia7x: terserah sih *-*
03:33 LNP-: meow
03:33 ichia7x: 01:45:177 - white blue piano
03:33 ichia7x: 01:46:677 - ^
03:33 LNP-: meow
03:33 LNP-: ok
03:34 ichia7x: 01:48:327 - 3-notes again
03:34 ichia7x: 01:49:002 - entah kenapa ini enak dikasih mini jack di 1
03:34 ichia7x: 01:49:527 - add note di 3
03:35 ichia7x: 01:49:977 - di 2
03:35 LNP-: no jack
03:35 LNP-: enak dilihat, gk enak dimainkan
03:35 LNP-: ok
03:35 ichia7x: um oke deh
03:35 ichia7x: 01:51:477 - ga 3-notes?
03:35 LNP-: 01:49:977 - no
03:36 LNP-: ok
03:37 LNP-: 00:35:875 - ada hihat
03:38 ichia7x: 01:55:677 (115677|2) - 'rusuh'
03:38 ichia7x: mending di fill semua
03:38 ichia7x: express your notes there
03:38 LNP-: wkwkw
03:38 LNP-: apus LN nya
03:39 ichia7x: 01:55:677 -
03:39 ichia7x: http://puu.sh/cQlFa/7236da7eef.png
03:41 LNP-: hmm
03:42 ichia7x: ah sudah~
03:43 LNP-: ok
03:43 LNP-: =w=
03:43 LNP-: ADV ?
03:43 *ichia7x is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/529285 LeaF - Evanescent [Aspire]] <CatchTheBeat>
03:43 ichia7x: surem
03:44 LNP-: emank
03:44 ichia7x: males =w=a
03:44 ichia7x: ntar kapan-kapan
03:44 LNP-: hue ok
03:44 LNP-: save log dulu
03:44 LNP-: um tombol savelog apa ya?
03:44 LNP-: lupa
03:45 ichia7x: males lol
03:45 ichia7x: a /savelog
posted
hi kak LNP-
Simple Mod Ready :D


Novice Lv.5
>> 01:17:276 - add note for consistency
>> 01:19:676 - ^
>> 01:22:077 - ^
>> gk banyak yg jdi msalah disini 8-)
ADVANCED Lv. 12
>> 01:46:752 - move to column 3
>> 01:46:752 - add note for consistency
>> 01:08:126 - ^
>> 01:42:177 - ^
>> 00:21:625 - add note ( the sound is same as 00:21:475 )
>> 00:26:575 - add note ( ^ 00:25:075 )
>> Disini juga gk banyak yg masalah :lol:
EXHAUST Lv. 15
>> 00:02:125 (2125|0,2162|1,2200|2) - move back by 1/8 line
>> 01:33:327 (93327|1,93364|2,93402|3) - ^
>> 00:04:975 - i suggest to make it double note
>> 00:54:326 (54326|0,54326|2) - maybe both note move to column 3 and 4 and turn it to LN end at 00:54:626
>> maybe at note in every 1/4 line at 01:08:126 - 01:08:426 ??
>> 01:46:677 and 01:46:752 - add single note
>> 01:23:277 - add note for consistency
>> I like this Difficulty very much :D


Itu aja dari aku...
klo msih ada kesalahan dimaklumi aja ya... 8-)
Thanks..
posted

Takane6 wrote:

hi kak LNP-
Simple Mod Ready :D


Novice Lv.5
>> 01:17:276 - add note for consistency ok
>> 01:19:676 - ^ ^
>> 01:22:077 - ^ ^
>> gk banyak yg jdi msalah disini 8-)
ADVANCED Lv. 12
>> 01:46:752 - move to column 3 ?
>> 01:46:752 - add note for consistency ? ok
>> 01:08:126 - ^ ok
>> 01:42:177 - ^ ok
>> 00:21:625 - add note ( the sound is same as 00:21:475 ) no
>> 00:26:575 - add note ( ^ 00:25:075 ) ok
>> Disini juga gk banyak yg masalah :lol:
EXHAUST Lv. 15
>> 00:02:125 (2125|0,2162|1,2200|2) - move back by 1/8 line ok
>> 01:33:327 (93327|1,93364|2,93402|3) - ^ kayak nya ini udh pass
>> 00:04:975 - i suggest to make it double note ...ok
>> 00:54:326 (54326|0,54326|2) - maybe both note move to column 3 and 4 and turn it to LN end at 00:54:626 nice
>> maybe at note in every 1/4 line at 01:08:126 - 01:08:426 ?? oh ok
>> 01:46:677 and 01:46:752 - add single note already
>> 01:23:277 - add note for consistency no
>> I like this Difficulty very much :DThanks :D


Itu aja dari aku...
klo msih ada kesalahan dimaklumi aja ya... 8-)
Thanks..
Thanks ;)

Updated ~
posted
As per requested
kolomnya 1234 ok?~
[General]
00:01:075 - tempat seharusnya inherited timing point
[EXHAUST]
~timing sebelum diubah~
00:01:037 - tambah di 2/3 ?
00:02:837 (2837|0,2837|2) - salah snap?
00:03:512 (3512|2) - hapus
00:54:888 - saran
01:04:526 - sekedar saran
01:34:714 (94714|3) - hapus
01:35:089 - tambah satu

Yah... aku saranin sih remap sedikit di bagian Kiai dan bagian yang mirip karena aku kira polanya mengikuti nada piano...
[ADVANCED]
~timing sebelum diubah~
00:09:925 (9925|2,9925|1) - pindah ke 14
00:50:726 (50726|1,50726|3) - pindah ke 13 ~sama untuk not dan nada yang mirip~
00:51:326 - tambah 2 not, ikuti snapping 1/4

Cukup lah
[NOVICE]
Sudah bagus, aku kaga nemu apapun yang harus dimod :3


That's all. Kalau nggak membantu jangan dikasih kudosu~
posted

Ryu Sei wrote:

As per requested
kolomnya 1234 ok?~
[General]
00:01:075 - tempat seharusnya inherited timing point hmm. . kayaknya udh pass, mungkin nunggu opini yang lain dulu :D
[EXHAUST]
~timing sebelum diubah~
00:01:037 - tambah di 2/3 ? no
00:02:837 (2837|0,2837|2) - salah snap? hmmm. . . ke white line dulu , butuh lebih banyak opini
00:03:512 (3512|2) - hapus no
00:54:888 - saran no , udh pass itu
01:04:526 - sekedar saran
01:34:714 (94714|3) - hapus no
01:35:089 - tambah satu no

Yah... aku saranin sih remap sedikit di bagian Kiai dan bagian yang mirip karena aku kira polanya mengikuti nada piano...
[ADVANCED]
~timing sebelum diubah~
00:09:925 (9925|2,9925|1) - pindah ke 14 ok
00:50:726 (50726|1,50726|3) - pindah ke 13 ~sama untuk not dan nada yang mirip~ ok
00:51:326 - tambah 2 not, ikuti snapping 1/4 ok

Cukup lah
[NOVICE]
Sudah bagus, aku kaga nemu apapun yang harus dimod :3 >w<


That's all. Kalau nggak membantu jangan dikasih kudosu~
Thanks :)

Updated ~
posted
Hi LNP-
General
BPM 199.995→BPM 200
Tag add 第一回ボルテキャラテーマ曲コンテスト or VOLTEX Character Theme First Contest
source https://remywiki.com/Wish_upon_Twin_Stars

|1|2|3|4|
mod
EXHAUST Lv.15
00:08:500 - add note 1 or 4
00:08:650 - add note 3
00:30:775 (30775|3,30850|2) - 1/6 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2241505
00:31:225 (31225|0,31225|2,31225|1) - 1/6 (00:31:275-)
00:32:950 - add note
00:33:100 - add note 2
00:34:375 - add note
01:28:302 - add note 3


Good luck ;)
posted
Really fun map, can never have too much xi!
I can only play up to the ADVANCED, so I'll only mod the first two diffs.

|1|2|3|4|

SPOILER
NOVICE Lv.5
01:33:027 - add note 1 or 2
01:33:327 (93327|1) - move to 3?
01:33:552 - add note 1 or 2
01:33:777 - add note 4
01:34:077 (94077|3) - move to 3
01:34:377 - add note 2 or 4
01:34:677 - add note
01:34:977 - add note
01:35:127 - add note

Here's a suggestion pattern...


Very nice diff, just towards the end I feel it could use a few more notes at the bridge where the piano is in full control..



ADVANCED Lv.12
Same section as in NOVICE really. However I feel I should explain my suggestion first....
At 01:13:076 - we have LNs that focus on bass notes which add a nice flow
At 01:32:277 - however, I feel there is more "influence" in the main melody, so I feel adding some LN's for the melody, and standard notes for the bass would make it flow a little better.

01:32:727 - Add LN until 01:33:027 -
01:33:327 - move 4 to 3, change it to an LN until 01:33:777
01:33:777 (93777|1) - Remove note
01:33:777 (93777|1) - Add note
01:33:777 (93777|3) - LN until 01:34:077 -
01:34:077 - add LN until 01:34:377 -
01:34:377 (94377|2) - LN until 01:34:677 -

Overall, another really nice diff, a lot of fun to play!
Keep it up ~


Sorry I can't help with EXHAUST, I could mod it, though I feel it's better to mod what I can play.
All the best with this map! :)
posted

-LASU- wrote:

Hi LNP-
General
BPM 199.995→BPM 200 fixed
Tag add 第一回ボルテキャラテーマ曲コンテスト or VOLTEX Character Theme First Contest added
source https://remywiki.com/Wish_upon_Twin_Stars

|1|2|3|4|
mod
EXHAUST Lv.15
00:08:500 - add note 1 or 4 add note 4
00:08:650 - add note 3 ok
00:30:775 (30775|3,30850|2) - 1/6 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2241505 ok
00:31:225 (31225|0,31225|2,31225|1) - 1/6 (00:31:275-) already 1/6
00:32:950 - add note ok
00:33:100 - add note 2 ok
00:34:375 - add note ok
01:28:302 - add note 3ok


Good luck ;)
Thanks :D

Hawkward wrote:

Really fun map, can never have too much xi!
I can only play up to the ADVANCED, so I'll only mod the first two diffs.

|1|2|3|4|

SPOILER
NOVICE Lv.5
01:33:027 - add note 1 or 2 ok
01:33:327 (93327|1) - move to 3? no
01:33:552 - add note 1 or 2 no
01:33:777 - add note 4 add note 3
01:34:077 (94077|3) - move to 3 ok
01:34:377 - add note 2 or 4 add note 2
01:34:677 - add note ok
01:34:977 - add note ok
01:35:127 - add note no

Here's a suggestion pattern... nice , but i dont apply it, i dont need more note because its novice diff, sorry


Very nice diff, just towards the end I feel it could use a few more notes at the bridge where the piano is in full control..



ADVANCED Lv.12
Same section as in NOVICE really. However I feel I should explain my suggestion first....
At 01:13:076 - we have LNs that focus on bass notes which add a nice flow
At 01:32:277 - however, I feel there is more "influence" in the main melody, so I feel adding some LN's for the melody, and standard notes for the bass would make it flow a little better.

01:32:727 - Add LN until 01:33:027 -
01:33:327 - move 4 to 3, change it to an LN until 01:33:777
01:33:777 (93777|1) - Remove note
01:33:777 (93777|1) - Add note
01:33:777 (93777|3) - LN until 01:34:077 -
01:34:077 - add LN until 01:34:377 -
01:34:377 (94377|2) - LN until 01:34:677 -
remap
Overall, another really nice diff, a lot of fun to play!
Keep it up ~


Sorry I can't help with EXHAUST, I could mod it, though I feel it's better to mod what I can play.
All the best with this map! :)Thanks :)
Updated ~
posted
My modding is focusing at the genre music itself.
Also i checked your note pitch and measure error.
note for beat is little suggest

[General]

try to follow step number while see my suggesting, it may be confuse you (me too)

not sure if background dimension are rankable from its dimension size, i suggest you to change background.

[Novice]

Pitch note problem
00:03:775 (3775|0) - move this to 2nd column for

1. 00:04:225 (4225|3) - this note, move to 1st column

2. 00:04:375 (4375|1) - i think this should been placed to 3rd column, according to your note pitch

3. 00:15:775 (15775|1,15925|0,16075|2,16225|3) - how about move them to 4th-3rd-2nd-1st column (Piano key goes down)

4. 00:13:675 - i suggest you to add note in 1st column, this part has chord (low key piano) i think better to make it double

5. 00:14:125 - same things like above, add note to 4th column

6. 00:15:475 - add note to 3rd column

7. 00:16:525 - add note to 4th column

8. 00:16:975 - 00:17:275 - add note to 3rd and 2nd (has same chord btw)

9. 00:17:575 (17575|1) - i'm not sure if this had chord, so i just suggest move this to 4th column, its high key

10. 00:25:975 (25975|3,25975|2) - move this to 1st and 2nd column, and 00:25:825 (25825|0) - to 3rd column. its almost same with 00:25:375 (25375|3,25525|0,25525|1) -

11. 00:43:826 (43826|3) - move to 2nd note, double drum and cymbal roll

12. 00:45:626 (45626|0,45776|1) - move them to 4th column and 00:46:076 (46076|3) - to 2nd column

13. From 01:01:076 - till 01:02:126 - pitch are more like this

14. 01:07:676 (67676|1,67826|2) - ctrl + H

15. 01:13:076 (73076|3,73076|0) - ctrl + H , this note has high pitch also 01:15:476 (75476|3) - should be in 1st column

20. 01:16:076 (76076|2) - move to 2nd column, i think its the proper pitch than 3rd

26. 01:18:476 (78476|2) - move to 2nd column

30. 01:19:676 (79676|3) - move to 2nd column

32. 01:20:277 (80277|2) - move this to 1st column and 01:20:277 (80277|0) - to 2nd column

37. 01:22:377 (82377|1) - move this to 3rd column

38. 01:32:427 (92427|1,92577|2,92727|3) - ctrl + h , pitch goes down

39. 01:37:077 (97077|3) - move to 1st column

40. 01:37:677 (97677|2) - move to 01:37:527 - in same column
Measure note problem
16. 00:05:575 (5575|2) - start hold note should be here 00:05:500 - lead synth and piano are sounded in that place

17. 01:15:476 (75476|0) - After you fixed #15 issue, this should can be highlighted. then this hold note end supposed to be 01:15:776 - or you can just change it to normal note

33. 01:20:277 (80277|0) - hold note end supposed to be 01:20:877 -

41. 01:42:927 (102927|1) - hold note end supposed to be 01:43:377 -
Note for beat problem
18. 00:07:675 - add note to 4th column and use finish sample sound

19. 01:15:776 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound, is not hard

21. 01:16:376 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

22. 01:16:676 - add note to 4th column for symphonic synth sound

23. 01:16:976 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

24. 01:17:576 - add note to 4th column for symphonic synth sound

25. 01:18:176 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

27. 01:18:776 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

28. 01:19:076 - add note to 4th column for symphonic synth sound

29. 01:19:376 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

31. 01:19:976 - add note to 1st column for symphonic synth sound

34. 01:20:577 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

35. 01:21:177 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

36. 01:21:777 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound



[EXHAUST]

Pitch note problem
1. 00:01:225 (1225|1,1525|2) - ctrl + H

3. 00:03:437 (3437|0,3475|1,3512|2) - still same with #2 problem, note start from 2nd column ( 00:03:437 - ) , grace pattern still same.

4. 00:04:375 (4375|0) - move to 3rd column

5. 00:06:400 (6400|0) - move to 2nd column

6. 00:06:475 (6475|1) - move to 1st column

Piano Sliding, i see this pattern seems to following piano sound but i think it hasn't follow the proper pitch. 8 -
8. 00:52:000 (52000|0) - move to 2nd column

9. 00:52:075 (52075|1) - move to 1st column

10. 00:52:150 (52150|3) - move to 3rd column

11. 00:52:225 (52225|2) - move to 2nd column

12. 00:52:300 (52300|0) - move to 4th column

13. 00:52:375 (52375|1) - move to 3rd column

14. 00:52:450 (52450|3) - move to 2nd column

15. 00:52:525 (52525|2) - move to 1st column

16. 00:52:675 (52675|0,52750|1,52825|2,52900|3) - Ctrl + H

17. 00:52:975 (52975|2,53050|1,53125|0) - move to right

18. 00:53:200 (53200|2) - move to 1st column, and you can see the result here

19. 01:33:287 (93287|1,93325|2,93362|3) - same like #2 & #3 issue , just the note started are from red measure line (1/2 beat)
Measure note problem
2. 00:02:087 (2087|0,2124|1,2162|2) - this grace isn't 1/8 beat, the grace used 1/16 as well it started from 1/4 00:02:087 - the things only you do is moving 00:02:125 (2125|1) - to 2nd column ( 00:02:106 - 1/16 measure ) and 00:02:162 (2162|2) - to 3rd column ( 00:02:125 -
1/16 measures )

7. 00:34:175 (34175|0,34275|3) - i see error note measure here it isn't 1/3, delete it and add note with this pitch

20. 01:22:425 (82425|0,82475|1,82525|2,82575|1,82625|0) - again, error note #7 issue. fix it

21. 01:26:175 (86175|0,86225|1) - error note , but i can hear from 01:25:975 - till 01:26:125 - it has 1/8 piano slide (or maybe 1/6) im not sure with 1/6 so i think you should make 1/8
Note for beat problem
22. if you interest to make it more harder, you can put 1/12 piano slide (don't reverse the slide) from 01:55:675 - till 01:55:900 -



[ADVANCED]

Pitch note problem
1. 00:01:225 (1225|1) - move to 3rd column
2. 00:01:375 (1375|3) - move to 2nd column

3. 00:01:525 (1525|2) - move to 3rd column

5. 00:25:375 (25375|2) - move to 4th column with 00:25:825 (25825|1,25975|2,25975|3) - Ctrl + H

6. 00:43:375 (43375|0) - move to 4th column, this part piano has same key being pressed
Note for beat problem
4. 00:18:325 - Piano chord, suggested add note to 4th column

7. 01:08:275 - add note to 3rd column

8. 01:08:350 - add note to 2nd column

9. 01:31:825 (91825|2,92125|3) - delete this to make this note -> 01:31:975 (91975|1) - more clear to pressed as piano key
posted

Reikosaka wrote:

My modding is focusing at the genre music itself.
Also i checked your note pitch and measure error.
note for beat is little suggest

[General]

try to follow step number while see my suggesting, it may be confuse you (me too)

not sure if background dimension are rankable from its dimension size, i suggest you to change background. fixed

[Novice]

Pitch note problem
00:03:775 (3775|0) - move this to 2nd column for ok

1. 00:04:225 (4225|3) - this note, move to 1st column ^

2. 00:04:375 (4375|1) - i think this should been placed to 3rd column, according to your note pitch ^

3. 00:15:775 (15775|1,15925|0,16075|2,16225|3) - how about move them to 4th-3rd-2nd-1st column (Piano key goes down) // 00:15:775 (15775|2,15925|1,16075|0) - move to 3 2 1

4. 00:13:675 - i suggest you to add note in 1st column, this part has chord (low key piano) i think better to make it double no

5. 00:14:125 - same things like above, add note to 4th column ^

6. 00:15:475 - add note to 3rd column ^

7. 00:16:525 - add note to 4th column ^

8. 00:16:975 - 00:17:275 - add note to 3rd and 2nd (has same chord btw) ^

9. 00:17:575 (17575|1) - i'm not sure if this had chord, so i just suggest move this to 4th column, its high key ok

10. 00:25:975 (25975|3,25975|2) - move this to 1st and 2nd column, and 00:25:825 (25825|0) - to 3rd column. its almost same with 00:25:375 (25375|3,25525|0,25525|1) - ok

11. 00:43:826 (43826|3) - move to 2nd note, double drum and cymbal roll ok

12. 00:45:626 (45626|0,45776|1) - move them to 4th column and 00:46:076 (46076|3) - to 2nd column ok

13. From 01:01:076 - till 01:02:126 - pitch are more like thismoved some note

14. 01:07:676 (67676|1,67826|2) - ctrl + H ok

15. 01:13:076 (73076|3,73076|0) - ctrl + H , this note has high pitch also 01:15:476 (75476|3) - should be in 1st column ok

20. 01:16:076 (76076|2) - move to 2nd column, i think its the proper pitch than 3rd

26. 01:18:476 (78476|2) - move to 2nd column

30. 01:19:676 (79676|3) - move to 2nd column ok

32. 01:20:277 (80277|2) - move this to 1st column and 01:20:277 (80277|0) - to 2nd column ok

37. 01:22:377 (82377|1) - move this to 3rd column

38. 01:32:427 (92427|1,92577|2,92727|3) - ctrl + h , pitch goes down moved to 4 3 2

39. 01:37:077 (97077|3) - move to 1st column

40. 01:37:677 (97677|2) - move to 01:37:527 - in same column ok
Measure note problem
16. 00:05:575 (5575|2) - start hold note should be here 00:05:500 - lead synth and piano are sounded in that place no

17. 01:15:476 (75476|0) - After you fixed #15 issue, this should can be highlighted. then this hold note end supposed to be 01:15:776 - or you can just change it to normal note ok

33. 01:20:277 (80277|0) - hold note end supposed to be 01:20:877 - no

41. 01:42:927 (102927|1) - hold note end supposed to be 01:43:377 - no
Note for beat problem
18. 00:07:675 - add note to 4th column and use finish sample sound

19. 01:15:776 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound, is not hard

21. 01:16:376 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

22. 01:16:676 - add note to 4th column for symphonic synth sound

23. 01:16:976 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

24. 01:17:576 - add note to 4th column for symphonic synth sound

25. 01:18:176 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

27. 01:18:776 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

28. 01:19:076 - add note to 4th column for symphonic synth sound

29. 01:19:376 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

31. 01:19:976 - add note to 1st column for symphonic synth sound

34. 01:20:577 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

35. 01:21:177 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound

36. 01:21:777 - add note to 3rd column for symphonic synth sound
add some note



[EXHAUST]

Pitch note problem
1. 00:01:225 (1225|1,1525|2) - ctrl + H no

3. 00:03:437 (3437|0,3475|1,3512|2) - still same with #2 problem, note start from 2nd column ( 00:03:437 - ) , grace pattern still same. ok

4. 00:04:375 (4375|0) - move to 3rd column

5. 00:06:400 (6400|0) - move to 2nd column ok

6. 00:06:475 (6475|1) - move to 1st column ok

Piano Sliding, i see this pattern seems to following piano sound but i think it hasn't follow the proper pitch. 8 -
8. 00:52:000 (52000|0) - move to 2nd column

9. 00:52:075 (52075|1) - move to 1st column

10. 00:52:150 (52150|3) - move to 3rd column

11. 00:52:225 (52225|2) - move to 2nd column

12. 00:52:300 (52300|0) - move to 4th column

13. 00:52:375 (52375|1) - move to 3rd column

14. 00:52:450 (52450|3) - move to 2nd column

15. 00:52:525 (52525|2) - move to 1st column

16. 00:52:675 (52675|0,52750|1,52825|2,52900|3) - Ctrl + H

17. 00:52:975 (52975|2,53050|1,53125|0) - move to right

18. 00:53:200 (53200|2) - move to 1st column, and you can see the result heremoved some note

19. 01:33:287 (93287|1,93325|2,93362|3) - same like #2 & #3 issue , just the note started are from red measure line (1/2 beat) ok
Measure note problem
2. 00:02:087 (2087|0,2124|1,2162|2) - this grace isn't 1/8 beat, the grace used 1/16 as well it started from 1/4 00:02:087 - the things only you do is moving 00:02:125 (2125|1) - to 2nd column ( 00:02:106 - 1/16 measure ) and 00:02:162 (2162|2) - to 3rd column ( 00:02:125 -
1/16 measures )ok

7. 00:34:175 (34175|0,34275|3) - i see error note measure here it isn't 1/3, delete it and add note with this pitchits 1/3 `-` , check it with playback rate 50%

20. 01:22:425 (82425|0,82475|1,82525|2,82575|1,82625|0) - again, error note #7 issue. fix it ^ with playback rate 25%

21. 01:26:175 (86175|0,86225|1) - error note , but i can hear from 01:25:975 - till 01:26:125 - it has 1/8 piano slide (or maybe 1/6) im not sure with 1/6 so i think you should make 1/8 ^[/box




[ADVANCED]

Pitch note problem
1. 00:01:225 (1225|1) - move to 3rd column ok
2. 00:01:375 (1375|3) - move to 2nd column ok

3. 00:01:525 (1525|2) - move to 3rd column ok

5. 00:25:375 (25375|2) - move to 4th column with 00:25:825 (25825|1,25975|2,25975|3) - Ctrl + H ok

6. 00:43:375 (43375|0) - move to 4th column, this part piano has same key being pressed no
Note for beat problem
4. 00:18:325 - Piano chord, suggested add note to 4th column no

7. 01:08:275 - add note to 3rd column ok

8. 01:08:350 - add note to 2nd column ok

9. 01:31:825 (91825|2,92125|3) - delete this to make this note -> 01:31:975 (91975|1) - more clear to pressed as piano keyno
Thanks :D

Updated ~
posted
very cool song :) nice map

good luck :D
posted
Oh hi there

|1|2|3|4|
Hitsounds: EQ the low bass out of the kick sample, it will sound bad if the player hits that even slightly off perfect timing. Otherwise, very good.
Timing: Good.
Special FX: Kiai time good.

Novice
I'm no good at making easy maps, but here are some suggestions
00:08:275 (8275|3) - Fill in the empty space after this note with some 1/2, this occurs many times throughout the map
00:13:375 (13375|0,13525|1) - LNs
00:53:425 (53425|0) - something here, it's too empty
01:17:275 (77275|1) - nothing in the music here really, do something else? idk
01:54:025 (114025|2,114175|3,114325|2,114475|1,114625|0,114775|1,114925|2) - make this pattern less generic

feel free to ignore any/all of the above lol

don't do that for the other difficulties though :P
Advanced
Patterning and layering:
00:02:125 (2125|3) - two notes here, preferably a grace note like you did in Exhaust
00:03:475 (3475|3) - ^
00:03:925 (3925|3) - ^
00:04:375 (4375|3) - ^
01:33:325 (93325|1) - ^you already have a double here but if you are going to make the above grace notes, this should be too
00:02:875 (2875|3) - move to 3
00:03:175 (3175|2) - move to 2
00:06:775 (6775|2) - double note here to be consistent with surrounding layering
00:07:975 (7975|3) - ^
00:07:075 (7075|3) - triple note
00:17:875 (17875|0) - double note
00:18:325 (18325|0) - double note
00:27:100 - add note here for piano , i suggest column 3
01:02:800 (62800|1,62875|0,62950|1,63025|2,63100|3) - make this generic pattern a little more interesting
01:08:275 (68275|2,68350|1,68425|0,68500|1) - ^
01:03:775 (63775|3) - make a double
01:10:525 (70525|3) - delete, not enough in the music to justify a double
01:23:125 (83125|2) - make a triple
01:23:575 (83575|2) - ^
01:24:025 (84025|3) - ^
01:24:475 (84475|2) - ^
01:24:925 (84925|3) - ^
01:25:375 (85375|2) - ^
01:25:825 (85825|2) - ^
01:27:250 (87250|2) - move to 1 for more interesting pattern and pitch relevancy
01:27:325 (87325|3) - move to 3 for more interesting pattern and pitch relevancy
01:30:775 (90775|2) - make triple


Rhythms:
00:17:950 (17950|1,18025|2,18100|3,18175|1,18325|0,18400|1,18475|2,18550|3,18625|1,18700|2) - if you're following piano here, this is not completely correct, do this:
00:17:950 (17950|1) - delete
00:18:250 - add note here, i suggest column 2
00:18:400 (18400|1) - delete

00:27:100 (27100|1) - delete
00:34:150 (34150|1,34225|2,34300|1) - should be 1/3 not 1/4
00:36:100 (36100|2) - delete
00:42:250 (42250|3) - delete
00:43:150 (43150|0) - delete
00:44:500 (44500|2) - delete
00:55:900 (55900|1) - delete, or do LNs, or do what you did in exhaust
01:01:900 (61900|0) - ^
01:43:900 (103900|2) - ^
01:02:725 - needs a note here
01:09:100 (69100|2) - delete
01:22:375 (82375|3,82450|2,82525|1,82600|2) - should be 1/6 but that would be too hard wouldn't it.... I suggest LNs
01:26:200 (86200|1) - ^
01:26:725 (86725|3) - add note here
01:30:925 (90925|1,90925|2) - delete
01:37:900 (97900|0,97975|1) - delete
01:39:175 (99175|1) - delete
Exhaust
Pattering and Layering:
00:00:925 (925|2) - move to 4
00:01:225 (1225|1) - move to 3
00:01:375 (1375|3) - move to 2
00:09:625 (9625|2,9625|1,9625|0,9775|2,9775|0,9775|1,9925|2,9925|1,9925|3,10075|1,10075|3,10075|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248035
00:13:375 (13375|1,13450|0,13525|1,13600|2) - make this more pitch relevant, i suggest 00:13:375 (13375|1) - move to 3
00:15:475 (15475|0) - move to 2
00:21:400 (21400|3) - delete for layering, there's no kick here
00:24:625 (24625|0,24662|1,24700|2,24737|3,24775|0,24775|2) - please realize that this pattern is much harder than 01:29:425 (89425|0,89462|1,89500|2,89537|3,89575|0,89575|1) , either move 00:24:775 (24775|2) - to 2 or maybe something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248071
00:36:625 (36625|0,36662|1,36700|2,36737|3,36775|0,36775|2) - ^ same issue
01:43:825 (103825|3,103862|2,103900|1,103937|0,103975|2,103975|1) - ^same issue
00:29:425 (29425|3,29500|2) - this instead : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248080
00:44:500 (44500|3) - delete, there's only a kick here, no need for double
00:45:925 (45925|2,45925|1) - fix pitch relevancy, ctrl + H
00:47:425 (47425|3,47500|2,47575|1,47725|2,47800|1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248104
00:49:675 (49675|1,49675|0,49750|3,49750|2,49825|0,49825|1) - no need for doubles
00:51:175 (51175|2,51175|3) - the whole stream starting here needs to be redone to fit the pitch of the piano: for example, this note 00:52:675 (52675|0) should definitely be in column 1 because it is the highest point of the whole piano melody here
01:22:375 (82375|2,82425|0,82475|1,82525|2,82575|1,82625|0,82675|1,82675|2) - way too dense for left hand, balance it out a bit more or release the LN in column 4 sooner
01:26:875 (86875|3) - make a double
01:28:300 (88300|2) - make a double
01:28:525 (88525|2) - make a double
01:52:075 (112075|2) - move to 4
01:52:675 (112675|2) - ^
01:53:275 (113275|2) - ^
01:56:275 (116275|1,116275|0,116275|3,116425|2,116425|3,116425|0) - these two triples should be the same

Some of these streams are a little awkward to play, up to you if you want to fix this and re-pattern some of them.

Rhythms:
00:01:075 (1075|0) - grace note like you did at 00:02:075 (2075|0,2125|1,2175|2)
00:03:925 (3925|0) - ^
00:04:375 (4375|0) - ^
00:19:075 (19075|1,19075|2) - ^
00:03:425 (3425|1,3475|2,3525|3) - this grace note is faster than 00:02:075 (2075|0,2125|1,2175|2) , so 1/8 snap instead of 1/6
00:05:950 (5950|2) - delete
00:06:400 (6400|1) - delete
00:07:150 (7150|1) - delete
00:07:600 (7600|1) - delete
00:09:475 (9475|3,9475|2) - delete
00:17:125 - add note here
00:17:950 (17950|0) - delete
00:18:400 (18400|0) - delete
00:20:500 (20500|2) - add a note
00:29:350 (29350|1) - delete
00:30:775 (30775|3,30825|2,30875|1) - i would just keep the 1/4 of the piano here but this is ok too
00:33:475 (33475|0) - delete
00:40:675 (40675|0) - delete yes there is a hi-hat but it sounds and feels so trivial compared to what's going on in the rest of the music)
00:43:525 (43525|1,43525|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248086
00:45:925 (45925|2,45925|1) - ^same issue
00:48:775 (48775|3,48775|2,48925|0,48925|1) - add 1/4 stream in this measure
between 00:49:525 (49525|0,49525|2,49525|3) and 00:50:125 (50125|3,50125|0) needs 1/4 streams
00:50:200 (50200|2) - add note
00:50:425 (50425|1,50425|0,50425|2,50575|1,50575|2,50575|0,50725|2,50725|3,50725|1,50875|3,50875|2,50875|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248035
00:56:425 (56425|1,56500|2) - delete
00:56:650 (56650|2) - delete
00:59:500 (59500|3) - delete
01:01:750 (61750|2) - delete
01:02:725 - needs note here
01:06:700 - needs note here. also the pattern around this should be changed a little to fit a note here
01:06:850 - ^
01:08:200 (68200|1) - delete
01:09:100 (69100|3) - delete
01:23:050 (83050|1) - delete
01:23:950 (83950|2) - delete
01:24:250 (84250|1) - delete
01:24:700 - needs note here, also the pattern around this should be changed a little to fit a note here
01:25:300 (85300|2) - 1/6
01:25:525 (85525|2) - delete
01:26:425 (86425|0,86500|1) - delete
01:26:650 (86650|1) - delete
01:26:950 (86950|2) - delete
01:28:000 (88000|3) - delete
01:29:200 (89200|2) - delete
01:33:325 (93325|0,93375|1,93425|2) - too early, push this back an 1/8 or so
01:37:900 (97900|0) - delete
01:47:500 (107500|2) - delete
01:49:525 (109525|2) - delete? or have a little 1/4 run
01:55:675 (115675|0,115675|3) - dude there's some awesome piano stuff happening here! don't just ignore it, it will feel lonely :cry:


Good map, hope you find this useful!
posted

BilliumMoto wrote:

Oh hi there

|1|2|3|4|
Hitsounds: EQ the low bass out of the kick sample, it will sound bad if the player hits that even slightly off perfect timing. Otherwise, very good.
Timing: Good.
Special FX: Kiai time good.

Novice
I'm no good at making easy maps, but here are some suggestions
00:08:275 (8275|3) - Fill in the empty space after this note with some 1/2, this occurs many times throughout the map um. . ok
00:13:375 (13375|0,13525|1) - LNs no, note is fine
00:53:425 (53425|0) - something here, it's too empty // 00:53:275 - add LN 1
01:17:275 (77275|1) - nothing in the music here really, do something else? idk
01:54:025 (114025|2,114175|3,114325|2,114475|1,114625|0,114775|1,114925|2) - make this pattern less generic ok

feel free to ignore any/all of the above lol

don't do that for the other difficulties though :P
Advanced
Patterning and layering:
00:02:125 (2125|3) - two notes here, preferably a grace note like you did in Exhaust ok
00:03:475 (3475|3) - ^ ^
00:03:925 (3925|3) - ^ ^
00:04:375 (4375|3) - ^ ^
01:33:325 (93325|1) - ^you already have a double here but if you are going to make the above grace notes, this should be too
00:02:875 (2875|3) - move to 3 ok
00:03:175 (3175|2) - move to 2 ok
00:06:775 (6775|2) - double note here to be consistent with surrounding layering ok
00:07:975 (7975|3) - ^ ok
00:07:075 (7075|3) - triple note no
00:17:875 (17875|0) - double note ok
00:18:325 (18325|0) - double note ok
00:27:100 - add note here for piano , i suggest column 3 ok
01:02:800 (62800|1,62875|0,62950|1,63025|2,63100|3) - make this generic pattern a little more interesting
01:08:275 (68275|2,68350|1,68425|0,68500|1) - ^
01:03:775 (63775|3) - make a double ok
01:10:525 (70525|3) - delete, not enough in the music to justify a double no
01:23:125 (83125|2) - make a triple no
01:23:575 (83575|2) - ^ no
01:24:025 (84025|3) - ^ no
01:24:475 (84475|2) - ^ no
01:24:925 (84925|3) - ^ no
01:25:375 (85375|2) - ^ no
01:25:825 (85825|2) - ^ no
01:27:250 (87250|2) - move to 1 for more interesting pattern and pitch relevancy move to 4
01:27:325 (87325|3) - move to 3 for more interesting pattern and pitch relevancy move to 1
01:30:775 (90775|2) - make triple no


Rhythms:
00:17:950 (17950|1,18025|2,18100|3,18175|1,18325|0,18400|1,18475|2,18550|3,18625|1,18700|2) - if you're following piano here, this is not completely correct, do this:
00:17:950 (17950|1) - delete
00:18:250 - add note here, i suggest column 2
00:18:400 (18400|1) - delete

00:27:100 (27100|1) - delete
00:34:150 (34150|1,34225|2,34300|1) - should be 1/3 not 1/4
00:36:100 (36100|2) - delete
00:42:250 (42250|3) - delete
00:43:150 (43150|0) - delete
00:44:500 (44500|2) - delete
00:55:900 (55900|1) - delete, or do LNs, or do what you did in exhaust
01:01:900 (61900|0) - ^
01:43:900 (103900|2) - ^
01:02:725 - needs a note here
01:09:100 (69100|2) - delete
01:22:375 (82375|3,82450|2,82525|1,82600|2) - should be 1/6 but that would be too hard wouldn't it.... I suggest LNs
01:26:200 (86200|1) - ^
01:26:725 (86725|3) - add note here
01:30:925 (90925|1,90925|2) - delete
01:37:900 (97900|0,97975|1) - delete
01:39:175 (99175|1) - delete
Remap
Exhaust
Pattering and Layering:
00:00:925 (925|2) - move to 4 ok
00:01:225 (1225|1) - move to 3 ok
00:01:375 (1375|3) - move to 2 ok
00:09:625 (9625|2,9625|1,9625|0,9775|2,9775|0,9775|1,9925|2,9925|1,9925|3,10075|1,10075|3,10075|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248035
00:13:375 (13375|1,13450|0,13525|1,13600|2) - make this more pitch relevant, i suggest 00:13:375 (13375|1) - move to 3 ok
00:15:475 (15475|0) - move to 2 ok
00:21:400 (21400|3) - delete for layering, there's no kick here ok
00:24:625 (24625|0,24662|1,24700|2,24737|3,24775|0,24775|2) - please realize that this pattern is much harder than 01:29:425 (89425|0,89462| 1,89500|2,89537|3,89575|0,89575|1) , either move 00:24:775 (24775|2) - to 2 or maybe something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248071 no
00:36:625 (36625|0,36662|1,36700|2,36737|3,36775|0,36775|2) - ^ same issue no
01:43:825 (103825|3,103862|2,103900|1,103937|0,103975|2,103975|1) - ^same issue no
00:29:425 (29425|3,29500|2) - this instead : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248080 no
00:44:500 (44500|3) - delete, there's only a kick here, no need for double ok
00:45:925 (45925|2,45925|1) - fix pitch relevancy, ctrl + H no
00:47:425 (47425|3,47500|2,47575|1,47725|2,47800|1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248104 ok
00:49:675 (49675|1,49675|0,49750|3,49750|2,49825|0,49825|1) - no need for doubles ok
00:51:175 (51175|2,51175|3) - the whole stream starting here needs to be redone to fit the pitch of the piano: for example, this note 00:52:675 (52675|0) should definitely be in column 1 because it is the highest point of the whole piano melody here
01:22:375 (82375|2,82425|0,82475|1,82525|2,82575|1,82625|0,82675|1,82675|2) - way too dense for left hand, balance it out a bit more or release the LN in column 4 sooner ok
01:26:875 (86875|3) - make a double ok
01:28:300 (88300|2) - make a double ok
01:28:525 (88525|2) - make a double ok
01:52:075 (112075|2) - move to 4 no
01:52:675 (112675|2) - ^ no
01:53:275 (113275|2) - ^ no
01:56:275 (116275|1,116275|0,116275|3,116425|2,116425|3,116425|0) - these two triples should be the same ok

Some of these streams are a little awkward to play, up to you if you want to fix this and re-pattern some of them.

Rhythms:
00:01:075 (1075|0) - grace note like you did at 00:02:075 (2075|0,2125|1,2175|2)
00:03:925 (3925|0) - ^
00:04:375 (4375|0) - ^
00:19:075 (19075|1,19075|2) - ^
00:03:425 (3425|1,3475|2,3525|3) - this grace note is faster than 00:02:075 (2075|0,2125|1,2175|2) , so 1/8 snap instead of 1/6
00:05:950 (5950|2) - delete
00:06:400 (6400|1) - delete
00:07:150 (7150|1) - delete
00:07:600 (7600|1) - delete
00:09:475 (9475|3,9475|2) - delete
00:17:125 - add note here
00:17:950 (17950|0) - delete
00:18:400 (18400|0) - delete
00:20:500 (20500|2) - add a note
00:29:350 (29350|1) - delete
00:30:775 (30775|3,30825|2,30875|1) - i would just keep the 1/4 of the piano here but this is ok too
00:33:475 (33475|0) - delete
00:40:675 (40675|0) - delete yes there is a hi-hat but it sounds and feels so trivial compared to what's going on in the rest of the music)
00:43:525 (43525|1,43525|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248086
00:45:925 (45925|2,45925|1) - ^same issue
00:48:775 (48775|3,48775|2,48925|0,48925|1) - add 1/4 stream in this measure
between 00:49:525 (49525|0,49525|2,49525|3) and 00:50:125 (50125|3,50125|0) needs 1/4 streams
00:50:200 (50200|2) - add note
00:50:425 (50425|1,50425|0,50425|2,50575|1,50575|2,50575|0,50725|2,50725|3,50725|1,50875|3,50875|2,50875|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2248035
00:56:425 (56425|1,56500|2) - delete
00:56:650 (56650|2) - delete
00:59:500 (59500|3) - delete
01:01:750 (61750|2) - delete
01:02:725 - needs note here
01:06:700 - needs note here. also the pattern around this should be changed a little to fit a note here
01:06:850 - ^
01:08:200 (68200|1) - delete
01:09:100 (69100|3) - delete
01:23:050 (83050|1) - delete
01:23:950 (83950|2) - delete
01:24:250 (84250|1) - delete
01:24:700 - needs note here, also the pattern around this should be changed a little to fit a note here
01:25:300 (85300|2) - 1/6
01:25:525 (85525|2) - delete
01:26:425 (86425|0,86500|1) - delete
01:26:650 (86650|1) - delete
01:26:950 (86950|2) - delete
01:28:000 (88000|3) - delete
01:29:200 (89200|2) - delete
01:33:325 (93325|0,93375|1,93425|2) - too early, push this back an 1/8 or so
01:37:900 (97900|0) - delete
01:47:500 (107500|2) - delete
01:49:525 (109525|2) - delete? or have a little 1/4 run
01:55:675 (115675|0,115675|3) - dude there's some awesome piano stuff happening here! don't just ignore it, it will feel lonely :cry:

Remap
Good map, hope you find this useful!
Thanks :)

Updated ~

TBLKitten wrote:

very cool song :) nice map

good luck :D
Thanks >w</
posted
nyan nyan LNyanP-

random mod www

click
[NOVICE Lv. 5]
00:04:225 (4225|3) - move to 2 bcs i think it has same sound with 00:03:775 (3775|1,3925|2) -

00:57:625 - add note to 2
01:06:175 - add note to 1 or 2
01:16:375 - add note
01:16:675 - ^
01:16:975 - ^
01:17:575 - ^
01:18:775 - ^
01:19:075 - ^
01:19:375 - ^
01:19:975 - ^
01:21:175 - ^
01:21:775 - ^

[ADVANCED Lv. 12]
00:04:975 - add note to 4, loud enough

00:07:975 (7975|2) - move to 1, avoid jack
00:08:275 (8275|1) - ^ to 3

00:09:325 (9325|0) - i think not fit this note placed here, try to move to 00:09:400 - at 2nd coloumn
then 00:09:325 (9325|1) - move to 3

00:20:725 (20725|2) - move to 2

00:53:575 (53575|2,53725|1) - ctrl + G

01:01:225 - add note to 4, same sound with 01:01:075 (61075|2,61075|1) -

[EXHAUST Lv. 15]
00:18:775 - add note to 1

00:38:275 (38275|1) - better remove this
then make 00:37:975 (37975|3) - to be Hold until 00:38:275 -

01:07:675 (67675|2,67675|1) - move to left by 1 coloumn
01:07:825 (67825|1,67825|0) - move to right by 2 coloumns

01:50:875 (110875|0,111100|3) - bcs here are 3-noted so lets make these 3-noted too
01:50:425 - add note to 4
01:50:575 - ^ to 4
01:50:725 - ^ to 1
01:51:325 - ^ to 4


gl~~~
posted

Zan - wrote:

nyan nyan LNyanP- Meow ~

random mod www

click
[NOVICE Lv. 5]
00:04:225 (4225|3) - move to 2 bcs i think it has same sound with 00:03:775 (3775|1,3925|2) - ok

00:57:625 - add note to 2 no
01:06:175 - add note to 1 or 2 ^
01:16:375 - add note ^
01:16:675 - ^ ^
01:16:975 - ^ ^
01:17:575 - ^ ^
01:18:775 - ^ ^
01:19:075 - ^ ^
01:19:375 - ^ ^
01:19:975 - ^ ^
01:21:175 - ^ ^
01:21:775 - ^ ^

[ADVANCED Lv. 12]
00:04:975 - add note to 4, loud enough ok

00:07:975 (7975|2) - move to 1, avoid jack ok
00:08:275 (8275|1) - ^ to 3 ok

00:09:325 (9325|0) - i think not fit this note placed here, try to move to 00:09:400 - at 2nd coloumn
then 00:09:325 (9325|1) - move to 3 ok

00:20:725 (20725|2) - move to 2 ok

00:53:575 (53575|2,53725|1) - ctrl + G ok

01:01:225 - add note to 4, same sound with 01:01:075 (61075|2,61075|1) - ok

[EXHAUST Lv. 15]
00:18:775 - add note to 1 no

00:38:275 (38275|1) - better remove this
then make 00:37:975 (37975|3) - to be Hold until 00:38:275 - ok

01:07:675 (67675|2,67675|1) - move to left by 1 coloumn ok
01:07:825 (67825|1,67825|0) - move to right by 2 coloumns no

01:50:875 (110875|0,111100|3) - bcs here are 3-noted so lets make these 3-noted too
01:50:425 - add note to 4 ok
01:50:575 - ^ to 4 ok
01:50:725 - ^ to 1 ok
01:51:325 - ^ to 4 ok


gl~~~
Thanks :)

Updated~
posted
Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]
Uncheck:
Song setup > Design > Widescreen support
|1|2|3|4|
NOVICE Lv. 5
00:18:325 (18325|2) - Move to |4| then 00:18:775 (18775|3) - Move to |3| (Pattern & Hand balance)
00:31:225 (31225|1) - Move to 00:31:300 (Drumbeat | Correct placing of note)
00:43:675 (43675|1) - Move to |3| (Pattern | Not necessary to be stack bacause of the song's flow/rhythm)
ADVANCED Lv. 12
00:56:725 (56725|2,57025|1) - Ctrl + G (Pattern | Hand balance)
01:06:325 (66325|0,66325|2,66625|1) - Ctrl + H ^
01:24:775 (84775|3,84925|1) - Ctrl + H (Pattern and because of the song's flow/rhythm not necessary to be stack)
01:25:225 (85225|0,85375|2) - ^
01:25:675 (85675|1,85675|2) - Move to |1| - |4| ^
01:51:325 (111325|1,111325|0) - Move to |3| - |4| ^
EXHAUST Lv.15
01:26:275 Add note to |1| (Drumbeat - Cymbal - Piano | Impact)
01:48:625 (108625|1,108625|0,108925|1,108925|2) - Ctrl + G (Better pattern | Hand balance)


Nice map!~
Good luck!~ =w=)b
posted

[GraveChaos] wrote:

Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]
Uncheck:
Song setup > Design > Widescreen support
|1|2|3|4|
NOVICE Lv. 5
00:18:325 (18325|2) - Move to |4| then 00:18:775 (18775|3) - Move to |3| (Pattern & Hand balance) ok
00:31:225 (31225|1) - Move to 00:31:300 (Drumbeat | Correct placing of note) ah my bad, ok
00:43:675 (43675|1) - Move to |3| (Pattern | Not necessary to be stack bacause of the song's flow/rhythm)ok
ADVANCED Lv. 12
00:56:725 (56725|2,57025|1) - Ctrl + G (Pattern | Hand balance) ok
01:06:325 (66325|0,66325|2,66625|1) - Ctrl + H ^ ok
01:24:775 (84775|3,84925|1) - Ctrl + H (Pattern and because of the song's flow/rhythm not necessary to be stack) ok
01:25:225 (85225|0,85375|2) - ^ ok
01:25:675 (85675|1,85675|2) - Move to |1| - |4| ^ ok
01:51:325 (111325|1,111325|0) - Move to |3| - |4| ^ok
EXHAUST Lv.15
01:26:275 Add note to |1| (Drumbeat - Cymbal - Piano | Impact)ok
01:48:625 (108625|1,108625|0,108925|1,108925|2) - Ctrl + G (Better pattern | Hand balance)ok


Nice map!~
Good luck!~ =w=)b
Thanks Grave-nyan >w<)/

Updated ~
posted
from my queue
column 1234

[NOVICE]
00:04:225 (4225|1,4375|3) - move to 13?
00:04:975 (4975|0,5275|1,5575|2) - only NOVICE is this rhythm...don't make rhythm
00:08:500 (8500|2,8950|1) - ?change please
00:34:075 (34075|2,34225|1) - 1/3
01:14:875 - add
01:17:725 - add
01:33:625 - ^
01:48:025 - ^
[ADVANCED]
00:08:350 (8350|3) - delete because EXHAUST doesn't have
00:24:175 - add some
00:27:100 - add piano sound
00:31:225 (31225|3,31225|2,31425|2,31425|1,31625|1,31625|0) - 1/3 please
01:37:900 (97900|0) - delete
01:47:500 (107500|1) - delete,no sound
[EXHAUST]
00:01:025 (1025|0,1075|2) - use 1/16 please,to close two notes
00:02:075 (2075|0,2125|1,2175|2) - ^
00:03:437 (3437|1,3475|2,3512|3) - ^
00:06:475 (6475|0,6475|3,6700|2,6700|0,6925|3,6925|1) - you can add some,because it's easier than ADVANCED
00:29:425 (29425|3,29500|2) - 1/8?
00:31:225 (31225|1,31225|2,31225|0) - on 1/3 line please
01:02:425 (62425|1,62425|2,62575|2,62575|1) - add 1?
01:23:950 - add and you can make hammer here><
01:24:250 - ^
01:24:850 - add 3
01:25:525 - add 2,piano sound
01:25:975 (85975|1,86050|2,86125|1,86125|3) - 1/6 starts here
01:26:350 - add
01:26:650 - ^
01:26:800 - ^
01:33:325 (93325|0,93362|1,93400|2) - use 1/16
01:34:625 (94625|1,94675|2,94725|3) - ^

good luck
posted

hutunohito wrote:

from my queue
column 1234

[NOVICE]
00:04:225 (4225|1,4375|3) - move to 13? ok
00:04:975 (4975|0,5275|1,5575|2) - only NOVICE is this rhythm...don't make rhythm hmm. . delete some LN & add note
00:08:500 (8500|2,8950|1) - ?change please add some note
00:34:075 (34075|2,34225|1) - 1/3 ok
01:14:875 - add ok
01:17:725 - add ok
01:33:625 - ^ ok
01:48:025 - ^ ok
[ADVANCED]
00:08:350 (8350|3) - delete because EXHAUST doesn't have ok
00:24:175 - add some no
00:27:100 - add piano sound ok
00:31:225 (31225|3,31225|2,31425|2,31425|1,31625|1,31625|0) - 1/3 please my bad, ok
01:37:900 (97900|0) - delete ok
01:47:500 (107500|1) - delete,no sound ok
[EXHAUST]
00:01:025 (1025|0,1075|2) - use 1/16 please,to close two notes ok
00:02:075 (2075|0,2125|1,2175|2) - ^ ok
00:03:437 (3437|1,3475|2,3512|3) - ^ ok
00:06:475 (6475|0,6475|3,6700|2,6700|0,6925|3,6925|1) - you can add some,because it's easier than ADVANCED ok
00:29:425 (29425|3,29500|2) - 1/8? 1/4
00:31:225 (31225|1,31225|2,31225|0) - on 1/3 line please my bad again, ok
01:02:425 (62425|1,62425|2,62575|2,62575|1) - add 1? no
01:23:950 - add and you can make hammer here>< hammer. . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . ok
01:24:250 - ^ ok
01:24:850 - add 3 ok
01:25:525 - add 2,piano sound ok
01:25:975 (85975|1,86050|2,86125|1,86125|3) - 1/6 starts here ok
01:26:350 - add ok
01:26:650 - ^ ok
01:26:800 - ^ ok
01:33:325 (93325|0,93362|1,93400|2) - use 1/16 ok
01:34:625 (94625|1,94675|2,94725|3) - ^ ok

good luck
Thanks >w<)/

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