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Snepif
Heyyy

[Normal]

00:04:235 (1,2) - I'd add whistles at both of this slider's tails.
Also I think it'd be better if these two sliders were mirrored like at the same angle
00:11:235 (2) - I've never seen an overlap like this, it looks kinda ugly to be honest :(
00:12:235 (1,2,3,4) - Since it's the easiest diff of the mapset, I suggest deleting (2) and (4) and adding a repeat to (1) and (3) - specially since you change from blue tick to a red tick note - which is extremely confusing for new players. Just like here 00:18:235 (1) -

00:20:235 (1,2,3,4) - Same here
00:26:235 (1,2,3) - Rearrange them so that (2) isn't in such a small angle with (1) and (2): http://puu.sh/iMbIr/2a54f7b0f1.jpg
00:36:235 (1,2,3) - Weird flow, move (2) down a bit?
00:39:235 (3) - Try to rearrange so that the next note follows this slider's curve http://puu.sh/iMbT7/bd56449290.jpg

From what I've seen you wanna keep the break, however I'd like to know the reasoning for that. Seems nonsense to me :(

00:57:735 (3) - Move middle point and tail a few grids down so that the next object follows this slider's curve.
01:05:735 (3) - Curve like this http://puu.sh/iMccL/4335420047.jpg

[Hard]

Uhh have you asked for testplays? I'm not too sure about the whole 1/4 jumps, but maybe they are okay, you should ask for testplays - it's just that it's a huge jump from normal to this, even though for some reason osu! doesn't say so

00:16:235 (1) - Should finish 1/4 earlier and add a slider starting on blue tick, you know what to do. That way you'd also avoid that crappy thing 00:16:735 (2,3) - do, which is kinda confusing for a Hard diff player I suppose
00:23:735 (5) - Make it equally distant to the previous and next object? Specially since next object is a triplet.
00:25:485 (5) - I feel like this is where the 1/4 should be more emphazised according to the music, yet it's where you mapped a 1/2 slider instead of 1/4s
00:29:485 (5) - Same
00:30:485 (2) - Why not 1/4 like 00:34:235 (1,2) - ?
00:55:235 (4) - This jump from (3) to here is so big it looks like 1/2 - since this distance is what suggests 1/2 based on the previous patterns, like here 00:57:985 (7) - , see? Move closer to (3)
01:06:235 (1) - Don't hide the tail like that
01:11:235 (4) - I'd emphasize the end a bit more by reducing this slider by 1/2 and adding a clickable note as the last object of the map at 01:11:735

[Insane]

00:14:985 (3) - Really unnecessary and messy dontcha think D:?
00:17:735 (7,8,9) - I think it'd fit the music a LOT more if you changed (8) and (9) for a slider, simillar to 00:21:735 (7,8) - but not exactly the same
00:44:235 (1,2) - I'd make the blue tick at 00:44:360 clickable like this http://puu.sh/iMd7t/2a327d7461.jpg - just like you did at 00:52:235 (1,2) - , consistency pleeeeax
00:47:360 (5) - This jump both breaks the flow and also it's a bit too much don't you think?
00:57:735 (10,11) - Since this is a 240 bpm triplet, I'd make it easier by doing this: http://puu.sh/iMdeI/556d08b6ed.jpg it also fits the music a lot more
01:00:485 (2) - Not too sure, but maybe the jump from (1) to (2) is a bit unnecessary and you could move (2) to x140 y288
01:05:610 (8,9,10,11) - Same as 00:57:735 (10,11)
01:09:610 (8,9,10,11) - And here too

[Expert]

00:07:985 (4) - If you wanna do something funny and nice try increasing SV for this slider only
00:17:985 (10) - I think there's no way this is readable as 1/8 away from the slider, looks 1/4
00:32:985 (5) - Feels a lot better here http://puu.sh/iMdvY/088630cd07.jpg and idk do something about (6) after

nothing else to say about this diff, an organized madness.
Arphimigon

Snepif wrote:

[Normal]
00:04:235 (1,2) - I'd add whistles at both of this slider's tails. pls no horrid high pitched whistles in calm part thnx
Also I think it'd be better if these two sliders were mirrored like at the same angle Eh heard it before but honestly I dont like the idea at all
00:11:235 (2) - I've never seen an overlap like this, it looks kinda ugly to be honest :( How is this ugly
00:12:235 (1,2,3,4) - Since it's the easiest diff of the mapset, I suggest deleting (2) and (4) and adding a repeat to (1) and (3) - specially since you change from blue tick to a red tick note - which is extremely confusing for new players. Just like here 00:18:235 (1) - Well sadly I think this is extremely easy for easier players (ye i got a few to try it and none had a problem) plus it fits the music imo so sadly no
00:20:235 (1,2,3,4) - Same here ^
00:26:235 (1,2,3) - Rearrange them so that (2) isn't in such a small angle with (1) and (2): http://puu.sh/iMbIr/2a54f7b0f1.jpg Agreed
00:36:235 (1,2,3) - Weird flow, move (2) down a bit? I thought it was fine but okay
00:39:235 (3) - Try to rearrange so that the next note follows this slider's curve http://puu.sh/iMbT7/bd56449290.jpg Changed curve and note position

From what I've seen you wanna keep the break, however I'd like to know the reasoning for that. Seems nonsense to me :(
This is not nonsense.
Easy difficulties should have more breaks for easier players, yeah its a bit of common sense really there but this song in general doesn't suit it at other times, however at this point there is basically a massive lack of note emphasis and it fits a break due to anything being in there would be mapped rather slowly and calmly, so it really does fit a break. If I mapped it then there would be a boring long slider section too and that is asdf ugh


00:57:735 (3) - Move middle point and tail a few grids down so that the next object follows this slider's curve. Okiii
01:05:735 (3) - Curve like this http://puu.sh/iMccL/4335420047.jpg Genius idea
<3

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[General]
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PreviewTime: 56235
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Title:Skrillex Circulation
TitleUnicode:Skrillex Circulation
Artist:TheLaxOne
ArtistUnicode:TheLaxOne
Creator:grumd
Version:Arphi's Normal
Source:
Tags:arphimigon dubstep
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Topic Starter
grumd

Arphimigon wrote:

that is asdf ugh
yes
Arphimigon

grumd wrote:

Arphimigon wrote:

that is asdf ugh
yes
Enlightening comments today o/
Snepif
It doesn't sound stupid only because I read it in british accent.
Topic Starter
grumd
"Snepif"
[Hard]

Uhh have you asked for testplays? I'm not too sure about the whole 1/4 jumps, but maybe they are okay, you should ask for testplays - it's just that it's a huge jump from normal to this, even though for some reason osu! doesn't say so
just asked for a few testplays from lower rank friends, Kurokami for example. that stuff was totally readable and fine

00:16:235 (1) - Should finish 1/4 earlier and add a slider starting on blue tick, you know what to do. That way you'd also avoid that crappy thing 00:16:735 (2,3) - do, which is kinda confusing for a Hard diff player I suppose
00:16:610 - i emphasize both dubstep sounds with this slider. i hardly can notice something on the red tick also. btw it was totally readable on testplaying. 00:40:235 (1,2,3) - actually this slowdown was LESS readable than these 1/4 patterns. so yep
00:23:735 (5) - Make it equally distant to the previous and next object? Specially since next object is a triplet.
different spacings was kind of my style lol, but i guess its a bad style for lower diffs :D fixed
00:25:485 (5) - I feel like this is where the 1/4 should be more emphazised according to the music, yet it's where you mapped a 1/2 slider instead of 1/4s
nope. 00:24:735 (2,3,4) - these 3 emphasize repeating dubstep sound and 00:25:485 (5) - this one is based on 3 vocal notes there. i don't wanna change the rhythm here
00:29:485 (5) - Same
00:30:485 (2) - Why not 1/4 like 00:34:235 (1,2) - ?
had to ruin some patterns but fixed
00:55:235 (4) - This jump from (3) to here is so big it looks like 1/2 - since this distance is what suggests 1/2 based on the previous patterns, like here 00:57:985 (7) - , see? Move closer to (3)
i will fix it, but testplays didn't show that it's a problem. this pattern was fine
01:06:235 (1) - Don't hide the tail like that
moved it a bit to the left, but CMON how nazi are you gonna be lol :D it's fine
01:11:235 (4) - I'd emphasize the end a bit more by reducing this slider by 1/2 and adding a clickable note as the last object of the map at 01:11:735
i'm following a certain music from the background which i don't know how is called lel :^) dont wanna change it

[Insane]

00:14:985 (3) - Really unnecessary and messy dontcha think D:?
that's the part of the style cmon :v
00:17:735 (7,8,9) - I think it'd fit the music a LOT more if you changed (8) and (9) for a slider, simillar to 00:21:735 (7,8) - but not exactly the same
i guess i fixed it
00:44:235 (1,2) - I'd make the blue tick at 00:44:360 clickable like this http://puu.sh/iMd7t/2a327d7461.jpg - just like you did at 00:52:235 (1,2) - , consistency pleeeeax
00:47:360 (5) - This jump both breaks the flow and also it's a bit too much don't you think?
it fits the music though, but i made it a bit smaller
00:57:735 (10,11) - Since this is a 240 bpm triplet, I'd make it easier by doing this: http://puu.sh/iMdeI/556d08b6ed.jpg it also fits the music a lot more
taken your suggestion. btw i use triplets in this diff only between other sliders, not with many 1/2 taps around
01:00:485 (2) - Not too sure, but maybe the jump from (1) to (2) is a bit unnecessary and you could move (2) to x140 y288
well it's indeed not that necessary, changed this
01:05:610 (8,9,10,11) - Same as 00:57:735 (10,11)
i'll keep one of them as is. it's insane after all
01:09:610 (8,9,10,11) - And here too
this one is definitely fine. it's between two sliders. so you pasically just click the triple and that's all. and as you know triples is the easiest type of stream. i can click triples at 280 bpm easy lol

[Expert]

00:07:985 (4) - If you wanna do something funny and nice try increasing SV for this slider only
that's kinda unlogical to me
00:17:985 (10) - I think there's no way this is readable as 1/8 away from the slider, looks 1/4
you sure? because this is how 1/4 looks in this map lol 01:00:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - you maybe forgot i'm using 120 bpm
00:32:985 (5) - Feels a lot better here http://puu.sh/iMdvY/088630cd07.jpg and idk do something about (6) after
yeah i understand your logic here, but i just can't think of a good pattern with that. i'll stick to my pattern, i still like it anyway

nothing else to say about this diff, an organized madness.

thank you for this Snepiferino!
Topic Starter
grumd
03:31 grumd: hey Charles
03:31 grumd: i need some advice about diff spread
03:31 grumd: some people are saying my map has big gaps between all diffs
03:31 *grumd is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/539789 TheLaxOne - Skrillex Circulation]
03:32 grumd: so i want to ask more experienced people about this
03:32 Charles445: lol...
03:32 Charles445: ok let' ssee
03:33 Charles445: kk so 1.6 to 3 is pretty reasonable, star rating spikes at any sense of spacing at that point
03:33 Charles445: 3 to 4.5 is uh, pretty good actually hm
03:33 Charles445: 4.5 being like, MEH hard
03:33 Charles445: like you got them streams
03:33 Charles445: probably
03:33 Charles445: 3 wouldn't have any
03:33 grumd: hm, hard to say
03:33 Charles445: 4.5 to 6 is where things get fuckin WEIRD
03:33 Charles445: and the reason is
03:33 grumd: 3 has more streams than 4.5
03:33 Charles445: there is a bizarre rift
03:33 Charles445: between 4.7 and 5.25
03:33 Charles445: loool
03:34 Charles445: the rift being
03:34 Charles445: you can have a technically hard as shit map
03:34 grumd: but in 3 they are 1/4 and in 4.5 they are 1/8
03:34 Charles445: but the only thing that brings it past, say, 4.9
03:34 grumd: ok listening
03:34 Charles445: is either hella fast streams or jumps
03:34 Charles445: and 6.14 is CLEARLY fullscreen jumps
03:34 Charles445: right?
03:34 grumd: yeah you got it
03:34 Charles445: mmhm
03:34 Charles445: so
03:34 Charles445: at that point it's star rating shitting itself
03:34 grumd: 240 bpm fullscreen stuff
03:34 Charles445: at the sheer sight of jumps
03:34 Charles445: but
03:34 Charles445: in contrast to 4.5
03:34 Charles445: it's hella fucking harder
03:34 Charles445: because it's a separate mentality
03:35 Charles445: if I were to recommend a spread fix
03:35 Charles445: the lower diffs are totally fine
03:35 Charles445: but shoot for the higher-end of the rift
03:35 Charles445: this can be anything between 4.9 - 5.7
03:35 grumd: that's the hard part
03:35 Charles445: yes, a 4.5 4.9 6.14 is good imo
03:35 grumd: let me tell you a little detail
03:35 Charles445: lolll
03:35 Charles445: copy paste hardest diff, add 1 to cs
03:35 Charles445: bam
03:35 Charles445: 5.1
03:35 Charles445: LOL
03:35 Charles445: or, subtract 1, is a joke ofc
03:35 Charles445: what's the detail
03:35 grumd: 4.5 and 6.1 are basically of the same rhythm. except that 4.5 has slight rare jumps and 6.1 has fullscreen
03:36 grumd: same triples, same 1/2s
03:36 grumd: but a lot less jumps
03:36 Charles445: sure
03:36 grumd: so another same-rhythm diff would be a fucking what
03:36 Charles445: so like
03:36 Charles445: while the insane is like
03:36 Charles445: 2
03:36 Charles445: and the other is like 5
03:37 Charles445: make this one a 3.5
03:37 Charles445: just
03:37 Charles445: the inbetweener of the spacing
03:37 Charles445: the same rrhythm, sure!
03:37 grumd: that sounds fun
03:37 grumd: hm
03:37 Charles445: you already did it for the previous diff didn't ya
03:37 Charles445: so like, it's already an issue
03:37 grumd: probably i'd better find a guest for this, just to bring a bit of veriety
03:37 Charles445: if you have the same rhythm
03:37 Charles445: for 3 diffs
03:37 Charles445: you have one of the best jump practice maps
03:37 Charles445: because of its logical spacing progression
03:37 grumd: hah
03:37 grumd: nice
03:37 Charles445: so consider that loool
03:38 grumd: i think i'll look into finding a guest for this 5-6 diff map
03:38 grumd: will tell them your vision of the case
03:38 grumd: thanks a lot Charles
Arphimigon
^
That was actual worth reading in the end
TicClick
я тебе чуть фон подчистил http://puu.sh/iV5AN/d539a5d67d.jpg
ещё вот этот bass 01:11:985 - лишне звучит, срезал (оффсет тот же должен быть) http://puu.sh/iV78p/e389ca55f5.zip

[Expert]
  1. 00:12:610 (2) - ритм похерен, тут же слайдер должен начинаться, нет?
  2. 00:13:235 - аналогично, только вот этот тик у тебя закрыт концом слайдера. Дальше мне такое лень искать, но этого точно до черта и в этой, и в остальных двух дифках
  3. 00:17:985 (10) - не очень хорошо играется, лучше или одно, или другое, но без слайдера с концом на 1/8 (ко всем таким слайдерам относится, кстати)
  4. 00:44:485 (2) - по этой же причине я бы удалил эту ноту, а к прошлому слайдеру добавил повтор. ну и так далее, ты уже понял, что за звук я хочу выделять
  5. 01:02:485 (3) - вылезает за край экрана в 4:3, сдвинь немного вправо
[Insane]
  1. 00:25:485 (6) - плохо играется, там лучше либо 1/4 + нота, либо полноценный 1/2
  2. 00:55:860 (7) - мне постоянно кажется, что она на 00:55:860, и хочется ударить там же. Может, её лучше вообще удалить? Не такая уж плохая пауза перед киаи получится
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:860 - не хватает ноты
[Arphi's Normal]
  1. 00:01:235 (2) - were I you, I'd add an extra whistle for guitar at 00:01:985 / 00:03:985 and so on
По поводу спреда (не знаю, зачем ↑столько ↑слов было писать, но, видимо, это привычка) — с ним всё хорошо, разве что между H и I небольшой провал, но он терпим, потому что из харда много не выжмешь, не добавив дисбаланса N − H.
Arphimigon

TicClick wrote:

[Arphi's Normal]
  1. 00:01:235 (2) - were I you, I'd add an extra whistle for guitar at 00:01:985 / 00:03:985 and so on
It was like that in my original hitsounding but it was all changed for consistency within the set, hopefully now its a compromise.
Also in response I changed a bunch of the hitsounding in the easy to fit both our styles at other points @grumd whilst trying to not go overboard.
And a bunch of note placements.
And a blanket.
Etc.

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Makyu
Hey if you still need a 4.9 - 5.7 star ratin diff, I can make one(?

/me runs
Topic Starter
grumd

Makyu wrote:

Hey if you still need a 4.9 - 5.7 star ratin diff, I can make one(?

/me runs
hi, well, i'm afraid i'll not add it :c
i'm a bit busy right now, but in a few days i'll try to make it myself. you have only 1 ranked map and i wasn't very impressed with it, so eh, i want to make the mapset quality the best i can :v sorry
Makyu

grumd wrote:

Makyu wrote:

Hey if you still need a 4.9 - 5.7 star ratin diff, I can make one(?

/me runs
hi, well, i'm afraid i'll not add it :c
i'm a bit busy right now, but in a few days i'll try to make it myself. you have only 1 ranked map and i wasn't very impressed with it, so eh, i want to make the mapset quality the best i can :v sorry

it's ok, that ranked map is quite old, it is one of the first map I ever tried to map, I have more experience with mapping right now >.<
best luck with the map
Arphimigon

Makyu wrote:

Hey if you still need a 4.9 - 5.7 star ratin diff, I can make one(?
/me runs
Caught me before I was gonna ask heh.
Grummy how about a massive collab insane/extra? Then we can all be a part of the awesome.
Nyan
THIS NEEDS KUDOS STARS.
Luel Roseline
I shot the 3 stars.
Arphimigon
Clearly there aren't enough stars
VINXIS
nic grumd u broke the star rating system lolz
Ciyus Miapah

grumd wrote:

I need kudosu stars pls ;_;
as you wish, grumd. reserved 2 stars for this!

and one thing on Expert diff
01:02:485 (3) - this one is offscreen. you should move it to right, or maybe you can put slider like this
kd for additional sp. *runs
PatZar
lol gg
Topic Starter
grumd

PatZar wrote:

lol gg
Oh lol. I think I forgot to rank this one. Someone please remind me every day. I'm right now working on a new project right here: https://www.reddit.com/r/csgobetting/co ... tatistics/
So I wasn't really into osu for past week or so. But I'll definitely come back to this map. It's worth it.
Lacrima
Лень моддить, просто кину звездy ;3 ~~~
Topic Starter
grumd

Fort wrote:

grumd wrote:

I need kudosu stars pls ;_;
as you wish, grumd. reserved 2 stars for this!

and one thing on Expert diff
01:02:485 (3) - this one is offscreen. you should move it to right, or maybe you can put slider like this
kd for additional sp. *runs
yep fixed this important thing ty!
Topic Starter
grumd
"TicClick"
я тебе чуть фон подчистил http://puu.sh/iV5AN/d539a5d67d.jpg
мне больше нравится прыщавый скриллекс, он у тебя какой-то размазанный получился, сори)
ещё вот этот bass 01:11:985 - лишне звучит, срезал (оффсет тот же должен быть) http://puu.sh/iV78p/e389ca55f5.zip
класс, супер, спасибо. вот это правда нужно было сделать

[Expert]
  1. 00:12:610 (2) - ритм похерен, тут же слайдер должен начинаться, нет?
    00:12:735 - не могу же я вот это мимо ушей пропустить в эксперте
  2. 00:13:235 - аналогично, только вот этот тик у тебя закрыт концом слайдера. Дальше мне такое лень искать, но этого точно до черта и в этой, и в остальных двух дифках
    честно говоря, хз, я ничего плохого не слышу. может, на конце слайдера сильный тик, но я не хочу оставлять 00:13:110 - вот это просто пустующим, я хочу там слайдер
  3. 00:17:985 (10) - не очень хорошо играется, лучше или одно, или другое, но без слайдера с концом на 1/8 (ко всем таким слайдерам относится, кстати)
    раньше там этого слайдера не было, но потом кто-то посоветовал этот особенный высокий голос выделить как-нибудь, чтобы было слегка разнообразнее. обратно менять третий раз уже не хочется
  4. 00:44:485 (2) - по этой же причине я бы удалил эту ноту, а к прошлому слайдеру добавил повтор. ну и так далее, ты уже понял, что за звук я хочу выделять
    вообще не понял, про какой ты звук, честно
  5. 01:02:485 (3) - вылезает за край экрана в 4:3, сдвинь немного вправо
    сделал
[Insane]
  1. 00:25:485 (6) - плохо играется, там лучше либо 1/4 + нота, либо полноценный 1/2
    прав, я дальше в таких же паттернах обычные 1/4 использовал
  2. 00:55:860 (7) - мне постоянно кажется, что она на 00:55:860, и хочется ударить там же. Может, её лучше вообще удалить? Не такая уж плохая пауза перед киаи получится
    не понял, что тебе кажется, но без неё действительно лучше
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:860 - не хватает ноты
    сделяль
[Arphi's Normal]
  1. 00:01:235 (2) - were I you, I'd add an extra whistle for guitar at 00:01:985 / 00:03:985 and so on
По поводу спреда (не знаю, зачем ↑столько ↑слов было писать, но, видимо, это привычка) — с ним всё хорошо, разве что между H и I небольшой провал, но он терпим, потому что из харда много не выжмешь, не добавив дисбаланса N − H.
ты и моя лень против чарльза, 2:1, дифки не будет
большое спасибки тикклику! отдельное за мп3
Arphimigon
Woo updated placements and added minor polish changes.
00:36:235 (1,2) - Made the angle here easier
00:39:235 (3) - Made this start and end on same y co-ord for aesthetic
Added a few minor hitsounds around the place.
Reduced end spinner volume to 60% except the end noise.

I think it's all good to go now.

Yay
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Kurokami
Mod requested by grumd. Oh my, I haven't touched osu! a while.

[Normal]

00:12:235 (1,3) - I don't think ending them on blue tick is a good choice. The next white tick or the previous red is much more stronger and better to play. I suggest you to either make these last until white or end them at red then add a repeat to them.
00:20:235 (1,3) - Here too. I know you wanted some different rhythm but ending them on blue sounds weird.
00:56:235 (1,2) - The current rhythm is really questionable. How about this instead: http://puu.sh/jCysN/8f003b116d.png? Same at 01:04:235 (1,2,3).

[Hard]

I only though about one thing here
00:44:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - The rhythm at this part is really intense. Its almost like an Insane. (1,5) could be easily missed.

[Insane]

00:08:610 (3) - Ugh, ignoring that white tick plays really weird. How about adding a repeat there?

[Extra]

Nope, I'm not pro enough. /o/
[]

Just kick those BNs even if you didn't know them. \o/ I'm not experience enough in this game mode (yet) to give you icon. q.q (I actually stopped playing 2 years ago.)
Arphimigon

Kurokami wrote:

Mod requested by grumd. Oh my, I haven't touched osu! a while.

[Normal]

00:12:235 (1,3) - I don't think ending them on blue tick is a good choice. The next white tick or the previous red is much more stronger and better to play. I suggest you to either make these last until white or end them at red then add a repeat to them. Yes I wanted to follow the particular obvious instrument (idk names) but I tried extending 1/4 and it played nice. I'll experiment with both.
00:20:235 (1,3) - Here too. I know you wanted some different rhythm but ending them on blue sounds weird. ^
00:56:235 (1,2) - The current rhythm is really questionable. How about this instead: http://puu.sh/jCysN/8f003b116d.png? Same at 01:04:235 (1,2,3). I personally think this rhythm is perfectly fitting for an easiest diff given the low BPM and the reverse is on a 1/1, and it doesn't feel bad to tap either. Yours fits but it fits just as much as mine, so no change.
After testing I decided to change the 3/4 sliders to 1/1

Dont bother with the other code
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Skrillex Circulation.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56235
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 8250,24250,40250,56250,70250
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Skrillex Circulation
TitleUnicode:Skrillex Circulation
Artist:TheLaxOne
ArtistUnicode:TheLaxOne
Creator:grumd
Version:Arphi's Normal
Source:
Tags:arphimigon dubstep bangarang renai
BeatmapID:728364
BeatmapSetID:232505

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2.5
CircleSize:2.8
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"nadeko.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,40435,51035
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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235,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
8235,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
56235,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
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Topic Starter
grumd
Skystar:

00:05:735 - you really need a note here, it feels very inconsistent compared to this 00:04:235 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
00:12:235 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is fucking AWESOME but this is not 00:20:235 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
that ugly slider shape REALLY irritates me, can you please please make it same smooth sliders like in first part?
00:38:235 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these two triples are very very different in sound, i think you should map them differently as well.
00:44:985 (5,1) - 00:45:985 (5,1) - i didn't really like these antijumps, maybe place them farther?
01:03:485 (1,2) - these two MUST be 1/4 (they're 1/8), it sounds so much a lot better as 1/4

That's it. Brilliant diff
Topic Starter
grumd
"Kurokami"
Mod requested by grumd. Oh my, I haven't touched osu! a while.
[Hard]

I only though about one thing here
00:44:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - The rhythm at this part is really intense. Its almost like an Insane. (1,5) could be easily missed.
yep, indeed, fixed this!

[Insane]

00:08:610 (3) - Ugh, ignoring that white tick plays really weird. How about adding a repeat there?
i did this several times in the diff, i was just following synth sound, not the basses. if i add every white tick, it will be more like Extra, so i can't do that

Just kick those BNs even if you didn't know them. \o/ I'm not experience enough in this game mode (yet) to give you icon. q.q (I actually stopped playing 2 years ago.)
naah no problems man, still thanks for the mod :D
thankiiiies
Arphimigon
Uh last minute notice but I'm surprised no one ever mentioned this combo on Extra
01:00:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - being wayyyyy harder tapping/stamina wise than the rest of the map, its caused me to fail about 80% of my tests and is honestly should not be that much of a spike. Perhaps turn 01:01:360 (2,3) - into two notes like you had done at 01:09:360 (2) - to make it less stressful so late for no reason.

Thats my only concern about this diff (also kinda finishing off that old mod where I said nothing about Extra)
Topic Starter
grumd

Arphimigon wrote:

Uh last minute notice but I'm surprised no one ever mentioned this combo on Extra
01:00:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - being wayyyyy harder tapping/stamina wise than the rest of the map, its caused me to fail about 80% of my tests and is honestly should not be that much of a spike. Perhaps turn 01:01:360 (2,3) - into two notes like you had done at 01:09:360 (2) - to make it less stressful so late for no reason.

Thats my only concern about this diff (also kinda finishing off that old mod where I said nothing about Extra)
tried a few reworks, but it all looked like shit. not gonna change this pattern for now
Skystar
All fixed except for the anti jumps, as I really like the way how they represent the music, placing the notes farther would even make the patterns play worse imo.

Also most of the SR comes from my jumps in 00:24:235 - 00:40:235 - , so if any BNs/QATs think that the spread gap is still too big I can nerf the jumps into an acceptable extent.

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Topic Starter
grumd
imo the spread is just fine, i could pass your diff easily, just as the insane, but i cant play extra at all
Topic Starter
grumd
fixed diff names and edited hardest diff a bit so now it's not 6.14 but 6.43.
GET REKT
Arphimigon

grumd wrote:

fixed diff names and edited hardest diff a bit so now it's not 6.14 but 6.43.
GET REKT
Yay for jumps!
Kyubey
[General]
Добавляем в сурс «化物語», так как музыка оттуда за основу взята, в теги «bakemonogatari».
[Arphi's Normal]
Isn't AR a little high for a lowest difficulty? Maybe reduce it to 4-4.5?
[Hard]
00:46:985 (4,5) - выглядит сложновато, нужно прыгнуть, а потом ещё и короткий слайдер вниз вести, ибо синглить хардоребята такое вряд ли умеют, попробуй как-то плавнее всё сделать. например, эти слайдеры развернуть
00:57:985 (7,1) - довольно большой джамп, и он неудобный, честно говоря. уменьши его до 2.0 хотя бы, а лучше до 1.7-1.8, чтобы под большую часть киая вписывался
01:10:235 (1,2) - тоже хорошо бы сдвинуть, ибо не каждый хардоигрок привык сходить со слайдера к следующему, и в таком случае флоу жутко неудобное, а размер джампа это только дополняет
[Insane]
ОД7.5 или 7 тут лучше бы подошёл, как по мне.
00:21:610 (6,7) - может, лучше 5 и 6 подвинуть к 7, и отодвинуть от 4? приятнее играться будет, ибо тут всё снизу, внимание из-за этого теряется и сложнее заметить джамп
00:28:735 (3,4,5,6) - очень очень неудобно для такого инсейна. мало кто из 4.5* игроков может синглить такой бпм, и ещё меньше тех, кто сможет поймать это движение. лучше плавнее что-нибудь сделать
00:38:235 (1,2,3) - как насчёт треугольника?
01:05:610 (8,9,10) - лучше давай такие вещи в инсе отдельно не ставить, скорости пальцев мало кому хватит, чтобы и просинглить до и после, и трипл прожать, ставить их тут лучше только перед слайдерами, как 00:57:610 (8,9,10) - здесь
01:09:610 (8,9,10) - то же самое, плюс ты тут ещё сложнее сделал из-за того, что после него джамп
[Skystar's Extra]
Disable widescreen support? It's useless anyway.
00:04:360 (2,3,4) - actually i was expecting 2→4→3 flow here continuing previous flow, and your placement was really confusing for me. and it was even confusing after some plays when i remembered that placement, my hand just doesn't want to move that way. maybe make that flow in that way i showed to make it more intuitive?
00:05:860 (1,2) - same goes there, ctrl+g on these ones will make the flow more pleasant and intuitive, and it will even work better with next slider
00:26:235 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - somehow this pattern goes pretty unfomfortable for me with 00:26:235 (1,1,1) - this stack, but if you unstack it like http://kyubey.s-ul.eu/fmWV6XKS.jpg this, it plays much better
00:38:235 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this thing is confusing too, i don't know what to suggest here but want to say it's pretty hard to read because i don't expect such a slow movement and sudden jumps after it, and overlapping circles make the readability of this pattern even worse
01:01:860 (1,2,3) - such a slow and linear movement kills the momentum imo
[Хуект]
Ну ты и намудрил тут, конечно. Может, АР до 9.8 прибавить? А то джампы-то здоровые.
00:34:860 (6,7,8) - не надо так далеко, не надо, это слишком далеко
00:38:985 (2,3,1) - а тут я вообще категорически против, это ужасно сложно, и слишком выделяется на фоне остальной мапы и этой части в особенности, и играется это так же плохо, сдвинь их
01:00:985 (7,8) - замени на слайдер, ибо продолжительный сингл здесь играется ужасно неудобно, плюс ещё и флоу не идеальное во время игры. а ещё он отлично будет смотреться, как переход в новую партию
^на последних двух строках я настаиваю на нерф, ибо иначе карта слиииишком уж овермапнута и неприятна для игры.
Arphimigon

Kyubey wrote:

[Arphi's Normal]
Isn't AR a little high for a lowest difficulty? Maybe reduce it to 4-4.5?
Personally I think AR4 is too low for this diff, but eh it's not that bad.
@grumd just make my diff AR4.5 instead of me posting a whole update .osu
Topic Starter
grumd
"Kyubey"
[Hard]
00:46:985 (4,5) - выглядит сложновато, нужно прыгнуть, а потом ещё и короткий слайдер вниз вести, ибо синглить хардоребята такое вряд ли умеют, попробуй как-то плавнее всё сделать. например, эти слайдеры развернуть
помню, я смотрел, как какой-то полный нуб ранка эдак 30к играл эту карту, никаких проблем с такими слайдерами не было. но я развернул один
00:57:985 (7,1) - довольно большой джамп, и он неудобный, честно говоря. уменьши его до 2.0 хотя бы, а лучше до 1.7-1.8, чтобы под большую часть киая вписывался
у меня там есть и побольше джампы, а 1.8 это вообще средний СВ для этой карты. но сделал 2.0
01:10:235 (1,2) - тоже хорошо бы сдвинуть, ибо не каждый хардоигрок привык сходить со слайдера к следующему, и в таком случае флоу жутко неудобное, а размер джампа это только дополняет
нет, ну тут ты загнул, это слишком простой момент. сделал слегка ближе, но не особо
[Insane]
ОД7.5 или 7 тут лучше бы подошёл, как по мне.
прав, это же не хуект :shock:
00:21:610 (6,7) - может, лучше 5 и 6 подвинуть к 7, и отодвинуть от 4? приятнее играться будет, ибо тут всё снизу, внимание из-за этого теряется и сложнее заметить джамп
не согласен. я выделяю 00:21:735 (7,8) - вот этих ребят в музыке, джамп тут нужен
00:28:735 (3,4,5,6) - очень очень неудобно для такого инсейна. мало кто из 4.5* игроков может синглить такой бпм, и ещё меньше тех, кто сможет поймать это движение. лучше плавнее что-нибудь сделать
индид, переделал
00:38:235 (1,2,3) - как насчёт треугольника? любовного? с акочкой? я не против. а, ты про карту, да нет, мне не кажется хорошей идеей
01:05:610 (8,9,10) - лучше давай такие вещи в инсе отдельно не ставить, скорости пальцев мало кому хватит, чтобы и просинглить до и после, и трипл прожать, ставить их тут лучше только перед слайдерами, как 00:57:610 (8,9,10) - здесь
ага фиксед
01:09:610 (8,9,10) - то же самое, плюс ты тут ещё сложнее сделал из-за того, что после него джамп
для разнообразия оставлю трипл, но убрал джамп
[Хуект]
Ну ты и намудрил тут, конечно. Может, АР до 9.8 прибавить? А то джампы-то здоровые.
9.7
00:34:860 (6,7,8) - не надо так далеко, не надо, это слишком далеко
сделал немножко короче, но вообще там всё такая красота, что не хочется менять
00:38:985 (2,3,1) - а тут я вообще категорически против, это ужасно сложно, и слишком выделяется на фоне остальной мапы и этой части в особенности, и играется это так же плохо, сдвинь их
сделал меньше
01:00:985 (7,8) - замени на слайдер, ибо продолжительный сингл здесь играется ужасно неудобно, плюс ещё и флоу не идеальное во время игры. а ещё он отлично будет смотреться, как переход в новую партию
СУКА НУ ТЫ ЖЕ ПОНИМАЕШЬ КАК Я НЕ ХОЧУ ЭТО ИСПРАВЛЯТЬ?
я потратил с полчаса и ремапнул половину киаи. всё из-за тебя. наслаждайся нёрфнутой дифкой. всё исправил

^на последних двух строках я настаиваю на нерф, ибо иначе карта слиииишком уж овермапнута и неприятна для игры.

но всё равно спасибо
Natsu
Hi

General:

  1. kiai really have to be inconsistent? cuz I really don't see the reason behind it tbh
  2. I guess tick rate 2 fit this song better tbh, I'm not garven btw, ya Skystar looking at you :roll:
Rekt!:

  1. 00:15:610 (8) - I don't think this need a click action, since is an almost inaudible beat, I guess is better if you do a slider instead 00:15:485 (7,8) -
  2. 00:16:360 (2) - 00:24:110 (11) - similar as above, there are some more similars.
  3. 00:09:735 (8,9) - there are similar parts in the music like this one, that you did map in a different way in other parts, for example 00:25:735 (9,10) - with similars I'm refering to vocals, is ok for variation though, just making sure that is on purpose
  4. 00:49:235 (3,4,5) - personally I prefer if you use the same rhythm as 00:41:235 (3,4,5) - for consistency
  5. 00:38:860 (1) - is the NC really necessary? since you didn't use any short combo in the rest of the map, and judging how the map plays, I don't think that someone will have an issue with this pattern without the NC
  6. 01:05:985 (7) - use 2 circles plsm fit better the song >:
    wew
Skystar's Extra:

  1. 00:21:610 (3) - really weird rhythm o.o, isn't better if you bring a click action to 00:21:735 - since is really strong tbh I got confused with this lel:
  2. 00:38:360 - I know why the antijump, but its kinda unexpected, if you really like it, atleast play more with NCs, anyways you did already with the rest of the diff so should be ok
  3. 00:40:735 (1,2) - this is probably too huge jump, it feels really hard to notice and play lel, so ye reduce the spacing pls
  4. 00:42:235 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:03:985 (3,4) - rhythm feel a bit weird to me , maybe add some hitsounds or make it a slider, doesn't feel really comfortable to click those, idk why lol
Insane:

  1. same OD as Skystar diff?? maybe reduce it to 7 or 7,5
  2. 00:13:735 (6) - don't end this slider on such strong beat as 00:14:235
  3. 00:07:235 green line is unsnapped and the sv don't really work how is supposed to be
Hard:

  1. OD too low compared to AR, use OD 6 instead?
  2. 00:38:235 (1,2) - this transition is a bit hard to play in my opinion, make them overlap a bit
  3. 00:07:235 green line is unsnapped and it affects the sv of 00:07:235 (3) -
Normal:

  1. SV changes aren't cool in thi easy diff of the set, maybe you can consider change the intro to 1,00
  2. 00:06:985 (2) - consider to remove this circle to bring more emphasis to 00:07:235 (3) - also take in mind that this kind of ¨train¨ patterns can be considered as ¨too hard¨ for the EZ diff in th set, nvm I see the rest of the map, anyways I consider that by using 1,20 distance snap the map will looks clean, since you will avoid all the 1/2 overlaps, but maybe too much work to do \o/
  3. 00:40:235 - about the break, wew is a 1 min song no one need to rest for such short time imo, also rhythm is totally mapeable, you don't have to do long sliders tbh.
not much to say here, but I'm a bit worry about this diff spread lol
Topic Starter
grumd

Natsu wrote:

not much to say here, but I'm a bit worry about this diff spread lol
Hey, thanks for mod. As talked with Charles445 earlier, spead had a gap between Insane and the hardest diff, but after the addition of Skystar's diff it's perfect.
See: p/4314028
I'll check the rest tomorrow, it's 7 am already and I didn't sleep lol.
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