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[Colours]
Combo1 : 253,235,130
Combo2 : 255,83,83
Combo3 : 70,163,255

Once you have the normal diff sorted out and the video added, call me back for full recheck and bubble

Kibbleru wrote:

uh sorry i don't think i explained the combo colors well enough.

red and blue are FINE so keep them as it is (i acually like the old colors better)

change the YELLOW combo color to something LIGHTER so that the slider repeat will become black like this

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>I know, fix now

anyway, try this following code

[Colours]
Combo1 : 253,235,130
Combo2 : 255,83,83
Combo3 : 70,163,255

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-insane
01:13:735 (4,6) - sry can u also avoid this overlap too lol, doesnt look too good in my opinion >I find here overlap, but don't know if fix it
00:20:856 -additional missing whistle for insane >Fix

-easy
00:38:583 (3) - nc here too >Fix
01:17:068 (1,1) - still havent fixed spinner recovery time yet, there needs to be a minimum of 4 white ticks (2 beats) after a spinner before the next object >Fix

-normal >Be harder for some part
01:17:371 (1,1) - for normal difficulty there needs to be a minimum of 2 white ticks (2 beats) after a spinner before the next object >Del spinner to fix here

Once you have the normal diff sorted out and the video added, call me back for full recheck and bubble
perhaps if you can catch me over irc this would be faster >_>

Aka wrote:

general

・the tag tail is duplicated, remove one of them >Fix
・we have discussed it with several BATs and came to the conclusion that the sv spread is quite big. the issue could be solved by making sv be 1.1х in normal and 1.5х in hard >OK, thank you


easy

・00:41:614 (1) - clap is missing on slider's tail? >Fix
・00:52:826 - unnecessary greenline >Fix
・01:16:765 (1) - im worrying about this spinner, its pretty hard to get 1k there unless you know that spinner is gonna appear there.. i'd recommend to map this part :\ like, maybe adding a slider instead >OK, Change slider

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normal

・00:41:311 (5) - clap is missing? >Fix
・01:16:765 - i suppose you forgot to finish the kiai there, since in all other diffs it ends eхactly on this point. so, to keep consistensy you could remove the kiai thingy there and additionally delete this greenline 01:17:826 - >Fix, I miss kiai is wrong here
・01:13:280 (2) - i believe the NC should be there, instead of there 01:12:523 (1) - :р >Fix


hard

・01:25:098 (1) - up to you but what about unstacking this circle? the NC would make more sence when its visible and IMO better to keep the movement there. m? >OK

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call me back owo

1. Did you forget to add Tail Yellow and Chinatsu Akasaki to tags? She's singing the ED too.

1. 00:51:917 (2) - You should really follow the sound at 00:51:765, it sounds awkward to ignore it.
   

1. 00:41:008 (1,2,3) - I have a feeling you could use a better rhythm here to emphasize the white ticks and downbeat instead of letting sliders end on them.
   
2. 00:59:795 (1) - Keep your NC's consistent with other diffs. They don't have NC here.

1. 00:05:856 (3) - Try to make consistent with 00:04:644 (3,4) - which is circle + slider (keypress for both vocals) since they correspond to similar vocals.
2. 00:49:341 - This seems to be an important sound in the music, perhaps you shouldn't ignore it.
3. 01:06:462 (3) - Same thing I said earlier, these vocals should best be mapped so that the player clicks on both of them.

xxdeathx wrote:

Some suggestions since Aka has already gotten to this

[General]

1. Did you forget to add Tail Yellow and Chinatsu Akasaki to tags? She's singing the ED too.

>How about add "テイルブルー(tail blue)", "テイルイエロー(tail yellow)"??
I have already added "yellow", "赤崎千夏"< "chinatsu akasaki"

[Easy]
Nothing

[Normal]

1. 00:51:917 (2) - You should really follow the sound at 00:51:765, it sounds awkward to ignore it. >return back original set
   

Good job keeping polarity almost everywhere.

[Hard]

1. 00:41:008 (1,2,3) - I have a feeling you could use a better rhythm here to emphasize the white ticks and downbeat instead of letting sliders end on them. >Fix
   
2. 00:59:795 (1) - Keep your NC's consistent with other diffs. They don't have NC here. >No Fix. Q: Same colour isn't hard to read map??

Wow, excellent placement and use of 1/1 stacks.

[Insane]
Nice diff. No overblown jumps, flows quite nicely, and still manages to keep a decently high star rating.

1. 00:05:856 (3) - Try to make consistent with 00:04:644 (3,4) - which is circle + slider (keypress for both vocals) since they correspond to similar vocals.
2. 00:49:341 - This seems to be an important sound in the music, perhaps you shouldn't ignore it. >I follow drum here, but cover many sounds with same point
3. 01:06:462 (3) - Same thing I said earlier, these vocals should best be mapped so that the player clicks on both of them. >I know what you say. but all diff with follow same vocal style is too hard for me. If it must be fix, maybe I can use large time to think how can I do.

Really clean and nearly flawless set. Good luck!

CloudSplash16 wrote:

@Aka
Just wondering why tags like that should be removed...
What if I wanted to search for "tail blue"?
Now, that doesn't find the map anymore: http://puu.sh/dnyvX/890fe9718d.png

Aka wrote:

Firstly, why would you want to search with " "? Secondly, searching system actually FINDS this map if you type "blue tail". Grammatically this variant is more appropriate btw

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Aka wrote:

Firstly, why would you want to search with " "? Secondly, searching system actually FINDS this map if you type "blue tail". Grammatically this variant is more appropriate btw

Tail Blue is the alias of a character in the show, so this has nothing to do with grammar.
Searching with the quotation marks helps eliminate irrelevant results. If I search for tail blue or blue tail without the quotation marks, it will return many more results (more than 100), most of which are unrelated to what I'm actually looking for. So if I know what I'm looking for, I obviously want to use a more specific search query to make it easier to get relevant results.

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Aka wrote:

easy

・01:16:765 (1,1) - after you replaced the spinner with circle, you had to adjust the spacing between these sliders.. would be nice to avoid that tiny overlap by placing 01:19:038 (1) - a bit down. you could select the whole structure 01:19:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - and move it like to х:184 y:347. spacing would be slightly similar to what you were using in the whole diff and overlap avoided >move objects now

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normal

・00:51:917 (2,3) - you had another rhythm patter when i checked this diff D: xxdeathx suggested you to change the rhythm in this part but you did it in a kind of another way.. well, the previous variant was better, since it fit the beats perfectly. please revert what you had before:

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>OK, change back

samplefish wrote:

I sacrificed a lamb for that score
plz

Kibbleru wrote:

soft-hitwhistle.wav is less than 100ms long

Image

Kibbleru wrote:

also in normal diff spinner should end 01:26:841 -

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

soft-hitwhistle.wav is less than 100ms long

What?
It looks to be ~160ms on my end...

Image

crap it's wrong, blame me, not garven cuz i told him to do it lol.

Kibbleru wrote:

also in normal diff spinner should end 01:26:841 -

It was in the correct place when you first bubbled it.. ;w;

rip

Chippy wrote:

samplefish wrote:

I sacrificed a lamb for that score
plz

SO MANY THINGS WERE SACRIFICED FOR NOTHING

Xinely wrote:

imo the hitwhistle ended around 90 ms

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards.

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

also in normal diff spinner should end 01:26:841 -

It was in the correct place when you first bubbled it.. ;w;

rip

Aka wrote:

CloudSplash16 wrote:

rip

seems like m1223961117 moved it there after resnapping objects after sv change -.-

so the hitsound is an issue or not? should we just fiх the spinner in normal and move it again?

Kibbleru wrote:

sakjfhsakfhsa i fked up

soft-hitwhistle.wav is less than 100ms long

also in normal diff spinner should end 01:26:841 - >Wtf...I forgot to notice snap, sorry Fix now

Xinely wrote:

also Easy diff missing a finish sound at 00:30:553 (3) - where other diffs have it >Fix

Update to fix these problem first
After 13 o'clock at GMT+8, I'll online again to finish it

Garven wrote:

I figure I at least owe you a quick mod after the mix up.

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best

[Easy]
Overall, with the rhythms that you chose, I think the current hitsounding style doesn't really work. The custom hitsounds really rely on a solid beat to support itself, but with a lot of the 3/2 sliders giving an irregular beat, it leaves it filled with holes and feels unfulfilling. You might want to rethink how they are used.
That said, I was kind of saddened to see so few circles in the map in comparison to sliders but oh well. >I don't know what I can say...thank you give me this point
01:16:765 (1) - This new combo doesn't really fit your combo structure up to this point. >Remove NC

[Normal]
01:16:765 (1) - This is a really really short spinner. I recommend you map through it - perhaps with a longer slider. >I try long slider, not good

[Hard]
OD +1 or 2 >+1
00:14:341 (7) - Can you position this a little further away so that the distance snap to 00:14:644 (8) - is more balanced? ?OK
01:10:098 (7,8) - I was really hoping this would continue the jump pattern. It would fit the vocal style, for sure. >It's fine, Fix

[Insane]
OD +1 or 2 >+1
01:16:765 (1,1,1,1,1) - Not sure what the purpose of all this new combo spam is, but it breaks from your previous combo structure >slow down green lines here lol
01:20:705 (6,7,8,9) - This spot was strange to play since everything is so close. I was expecting more jumps. >I want to let this diff to have a good end, so I reduce jumps here. little Fix here

Xinely wrote:

For all diffs :
~ try use finish for this time 01:10:553 - ? the music kinda same like 01:12:977 - Strange...no fix

Easy :
~ 01:18:583 - unnecessary greenline >Fix

Normal :
~ 00:27:068 (5) - add NC coz you NC'ed every 2 stanza here >Fix
~ 00:28:583 (1,2) - when you fix it, swap NC for this slider for consistency >Fix
~ 00:56:008 (1) - use 0,9x as spacing for this slider? coz it has 1/2 space from previous and i saw you used different spacing for 1/2 space >Fix

Hard:
~ 00:08:886 (2) - try ctrl+G? i think you did much jumps on previous so i prefer you reduce the jump spacing for this time to make it easier, also flow seems smoother when you do it
~ 00:11:311 (2) - do same for this slider if you agree with above >same 00:08:886 (2), Fix. It's fine now
~ 00:14:038 (6,8) - try stack their tail properly >Fix
~ 00:33:432 (7,8) - so nazi but stack them properly lol >

Insane :
~ 00:46:614 (2) - add whistle to the tail, it has drum sound here >Fix
~ 00:48:886 (1,2) - i think better to swap NC here, so NC for slider marking if it has anti jump here >Fix
~ 01:11:917 (1) - remove NC here for consistency, i saw you NC'ed every 2 stanza o.o >No Fix. If fix here, a new problem here: 01:12:523 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - and NC should be here 01:12:523 (3) -
~ 01:25:098 (1) - move the circle to 192,324 or anywhere to make higher jump here. i think it would be great if you make a jump to emphasize the cymbal >Fix

Call me back ><

Xinely wrote:

recheck nazi

Hard still OD 7 here. try use OD 6 or 6,5? OD 7 looks for Insane actually >FIx to 6.5
Insane : same , if you fix above so try OD 7,5 >Fix to 7.5

Hard diff : 00:33:432 (7,8) - so nazi but stack them properly lol <-- this one havent fixed yet, i mean try move 00:33:735 (8) - to 280,52 >wow...It's...OK, Fix