http://puu.sh/d4XjY.rar Here you go~[Muzukashii]
01:00:983 (12,13) - change to d. i think most people disagree with the usage of kkd in muzukashii, so it's best to change it to ddd. the pattern is already quite challenging when you consider the notes before and after it. No. I'll discuss with Onosaki about the kkd patterns on my Muzukashii, but a good diffspread is way more important than "kkd is too hard " imo.
01:03:291 (23) - delete. i don't think this note is necessary since there's nothing in the song to indicate it. The drums on this song are a bit hard to hear so I can't tell if you're right or not, but I won't. I think it sounds fine and it fits the previous pattern better too.
01:10:983 - 01:11:079 - add d so that it becomes a ddd cluster (to follow the drums in the music) and change 01:11:175 (1) to d (small) I want to keep my emphasis on the finishers here. And I think K ddd d k ddd d k would be too long and hard.
01:20:598 (2) - delete. for variation :3, and to match with the vocals I admit I'm not sure about what I'm doing here, but I feel like keeping pattern consistency would be better. I feel like a break here would be a bit awkward.
01:21:945 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - too long and cluster-y for a muzukashii. consider deleting some of the notes? I feel like there's nothing else that would fit here except maybe a long roll. Well, changed to a long roll.Oni
00:29:156 (21) - a kdk seems a bit awkward here. change to k. No. Changed to ddk.
01:01:368 (19) - the sound of 3 kats in a row is a bit weird because you primarily use d's throughout the map. change to d. I don't really get why I should remove more kats because of this reason. And I'm following a pattern here (ddk k ddk k, following the melody).
01:04:829 (2) - unnecessary note. delete Okay.
01:08:675 (29,30) - you used kats in the 5 note streams before this, so a sudden ddddd doesn't really fit the pattern. change to k Well, I think it fits, sorry.
01:19:637 (17,18,19,20,21) - why this pattern? the previous one ( 01:17:906 (5,6,7,8,9) ) matches perfectly with the song. i suggest that you change it to kkdkd to make it the same I probably messed up trying to do variations, fixed.
01:20:598 (2,3) - remove for variation and rest for the upcoming stream Same answer as the Muzu.
01:21:752 (10) - remove to prepare for the next notes I'm okay to remove this one though, fixed.