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Uehara Rena - Todokanai Koi '13 (TV EDIT)

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Sellenite
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年12月16日 at 22:52:16

Artist: Uehara Rena
Title: Todokanai Koi '13 (TV EDIT)
Source: WHITE ALBUM2
Tags: opening wa2 leaf Crystal Christmas
BPM: 135
Filesize: 16525kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Crystal's Easy (1.41 stars, 74 notes)
  2. Hard (3.1 stars, 222 notes)
  3. Normal (1.74 stars, 130 notes)
  4. Rewrite (4.14 stars, 317 notes)
Download: Uehara Rena - Todokanai Koi '13 (TV EDIT)
Download: Uehara Rena - Todokanai Koi '13 (TV EDIT) (no video)
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just map for a very good story and my best favourite song

Easy by Crystal
Video by -Google-

thanks modders
Kawaiwkyik
Sakaue Nachi
OblivioN
Kagamine Ren
Pururut
Aiceo
nadapan
Kamio Misuzu
Kibbleru
Shad0w1and
Owntrolf
Momochikun
Sakura bubbled ranked
smallboat
xxdeathx
Tari rebubbled
SPOILER
Last edited by Sellenite , edited 59 times in total.
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00:46:402 (1,2,3) - 虽然说不出为什么但是把23叠在一起会不会好一点。。
00:50:624 (4,5) - 这中间要不要插一个或者把这两个放远一点？因为ar比较低，这两个是同时出现在视野中的，我会经常误判断note5是出现在这两个note中间的白线上的;w;
01:26:846 (3,4) - 把这两个并成一个滑条试试？


话说为什么是tv edit不是tv size啊？不是很懂这方面的所以问问...
说起来这算不算mod啊。。瞎写的不要在意（你这么没自信是闹哪样啊麻婆又不会吃了你
Sellenite
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Takanashi Rikka wrote:

00:46:402 (1,2,3) - 虽然说不出为什么但是把23叠在一起会不会好一点。。
00:50:624 (4,5) - 这中间要不要插一个或者把这两个放远一点？因为ar比较低，这两个是同时出现在视野中的，我会经常误判断note5是出现在这两个note中间的白线上的;w;
01:26:846 (3,4) - 把这两个并成一个滑条试试？


话说为什么是tv edit不是tv size啊？不是很懂这方面的所以问问...
说起来这算不算mod啊。。瞎写的不要在意（你这么没自信是闹哪样啊麻婆又不会吃了你
神id，所以算mod
现在要求需要官方发售cd名字做标题啦，所以是edit
现在手机没看图啦，回去看看，thx
Mother Ship
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Sellenite wrote:

Takanashi Rikka wrote:

00:46:402 (1,2,3) - 虽然说不出为什么但是把23叠在一起会不会好一点。。
00:50:624 (4,5) - 这中间要不要插一个或者把这两个放远一点？因为ar比较低，这两个是同时出现在视野中的，我会经常误判断note5是出现在这两个note中间的白线上的;w;
01:26:846 (3,4) - 把这两个并成一个滑条试试？


话说为什么是tv edit不是tv size啊？不是很懂这方面的所以问问...
说起来这算不算mod啊。。瞎写的不要在意（你这么没自信是闹哪样啊麻婆又不会吃了你
神id，所以算mod
现在要求需要官方发售cd名字做标题啦，所以是edit
现在手机没看图啦，回去看看，thx
瞎写的居然被认可辣w
第一颗星呢ww
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Crystal's Easy
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: todokanai.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54513
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.100001

[Metadata]
Title:Todokanai Koi '13 (TV Edit)
TitleUnicode:届かない恋 '13 (TV Edit)
Artist:Uehara Rena
ArtistUnicode:上原れな
Creator:Sellenite
Version:Crystal's Easy
Source:White Album2
Tags:opening wa2 leaf
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
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加个soft-sliderslide.wav 就用你的clap :D
Sellenite
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Rizia
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Rizia
[General]
  1. Fine
[W.A.]
  1. 00:05:068 (2) - 加個clap 其他難度都是
  2. 00:19:291 (7) - ctrl+g
  3. 00:30:846 (3) - 移到 x220 y120
  4. 00:40:624 (5) - drum finish
  5. 00:56:624 (6,7) - 低難度玩逆flow有點不對
    SPOILER
  6. 00:57:735 (2) - 這個也換換吧
  7. 01:00:846 (2,3) - 3個circle比較好
  8. 01:13:291 (2,3) - 這個換次序?
    SPOILER
  9. 01:26:846 (3) - 一個1/4的折返slider比較合適
  10. 01:27:179 (1) - 刪了這whistle, 這個不適合
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:068 (2,3,4,5,6) - 作為一個hard, circle的建議不要連續太多
  2. 01:26:846 (3,4,5) - 同insane
  3. 01:27:179 (1) - 同insane
[Normal]
  1. 00:36:179 (4,5) - stack好
  2. 00:51:735 (1,1) - 好像有點危險
  3. 01:27:068 (1) - 也是
[Easy]
  1. 沒問題
Good luck
Sakaue Nachi
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[General]
觉得你现在的Normal好像有点简单，和hard差的有点多，建议弄难点，2星左右差不多，可以试下cs3.5

[Crystal's Easy]
00:15:291 可以跟下这个比较明显的音，把折返换成一个2/1滑条加个圈怎样
00:25:068 (1,3) - blanket好点
00:37:513 (1,2) - 感觉最低难度不放红线跟鼓好点？

[Normal]
00:13:957 (4) - 这个换成这样？https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2249947
00:20:624 (2,4) - 不叠一下吗
00:51:735 (1) - 好像隔下一个物件时间太短了
01:25:513 (1) - 拉到这里感觉好点01:26:624

[Hard]
00:05:068 (2) - clap 其他难度也是，之前忘了说
00:10:846 (1) - 感觉这里whis比fin合适，或者把00:09:957 (4) - 音效用whis，后面的00:10:846 (1) - 用fin突出一种强调的感觉
00:13:513 (3,4,5,6) - 试下这样？https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2250008
00:19:513 (5) - 这里补个clap感觉不错
00:44:179 (4,1) - blanket好点
00:54:402 (1) - 这里可以用1/8突出这个快促的音，区别于这个00:54:846 (2) -
01:00:846 (2) - ctrl+g感觉好点
01:09:068 (4) - 这个离下个2.0xds吧，你后面也是2.0的01:23:291 (5,1) -

[W.A.]
00:10:402 (6) - 差不多出界的样子，摆上一点吧，打的时候感觉明显
00:19:291 (7) - ^
00:25:068 (1) - 这个尾巴往右拉一点感觉和下个搭配好看点
00:33:068 (3,4) - ctrl+g，感觉00:33:291 (4,5) - 这里是个跳点，而且顺点感觉
00:54:402 (1) - 换成1/8和hard同理
01:00:846 (2,3) - ctrl+g，感觉这样节奏更符合音乐，白线上的重音有得打击感觉比较好
01:13:291 (2,3) - ^
01:10:624 (6) - 放到407,105感觉顺手点
Sellenite
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Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[General]
  1. Fine
[W.A.]
  1. 00:05:068 (2) - 加個clap 其他難度都是 故意没加的，有点吵
  2. 00:19:291 (7) - ctrl+g 好
  3. 00:30:846 (3) - 移到 x220 y120 好
  4. 00:40:624 (5) - drum finish 加了
  5. 00:56:624 (6,7) - 低難度玩逆flow有點不對 好
    SPOILER
  6. 00:57:735 (2) - 這個也換換吧 keep
  7. 01:00:846 (2,3) - 3個circle比較好 其实是想二连效果
  8. 01:13:291 (2,3) - 這個換次序? 改成三个circle了
    SPOILER
  9. 01:26:846 (3) - 一個1/4的折返slider比較合適 同上，故意的
  10. 01:27:179 (1) - 刪了這whistle, 這個不適合 尾部没音效有点虚
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:068 (2,3,4,5,6) - 作為一個hard, circle的建議不要連續太多 其实玩起来不错
  2. 01:26:846 (3,4,5) - 同insane 三连吧
  3. 01:27:179 (1) - 同insane
[Normal]
  1. 00:36:179 (4,5) - stack好 好
  2. 00:51:735 (1,1) - 好像有點危險 两拍了，没问题
  3. 01:27:068 (1) - 也是
[Easy]
  1. 沒問題
Good luck

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

[General]
觉得你现在的Normal好像有点简单，和hard差的有点多，建议弄难点，2星左右差不多，可以试下cs3.5 改成3.5了，改难了很多但星级还是上不去，干

[Normal]
00:13:957 (4) - 这个换成这样？https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2249947 好
00:20:624 (2,4) - 不叠一下吗 好
00:51:735 (1) - 好像隔下一个物件时间太短了 两拍没问题
01:25:513 (1) - 拉到这里感觉好点01:26:624 改难了

[Hard]
00:05:068 (2) - clap 其他难度也是，之前忘了说 故意不加的，有点吵
00:10:846 (1) - 感觉这里whis比fin合适，或者把00:09:957 (4) - 音效用whis，后面的00:10:846 (1) - 用fin突出一种强调的感觉 finish用来递进音乐
00:13:513 (3,4,5,6) - 试下这样？https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2250008 好
00:19:513 (5) - 这里补个clap感觉不错 有点怪怪的
00:44:179 (4,1) - blanket好点 不blan了，和上面的物件复制黏贴的
00:54:402 (1) - 这里可以用1/8突出这个快促的音，区别于这个00:54:846 (2) - 太难了，不加1/8
01:00:846 (2) - ctrl+g感觉好点 改了一下这部分
01:09:068 (4) - 这个离下个2.0xds吧，你后面也是2.0的01:23:291 (5,1) - 这里叠起来好看些

[W.A.]
00:10:402 (6) - 差不多出界的样子，摆上一点吧，打的时候感觉明显 好
00:19:291 (7) - ^ 好
00:25:068 (1) - 这个尾巴往右拉一点感觉和下个搭配好看点 好
00:33:068 (3,4) - ctrl+g，感觉00:33:291 (4,5) - 这里是个跳点，而且顺点感觉 改了
00:54:402 (1) - 换成1/8和hard同理 也是觉得难
01:00:846 (2,3) - ctrl+g，感觉这样节奏更符合音乐，白线上的重音有得打击感觉比较好 不了，故意clap放在尾巴的
01:13:291 (2,3) - ^ 换成三连了
01:10:624 (6) - 放到407,105感觉顺手点 故意的overlap
thanks！！
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Crystal
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
1,122 posts
Joined June 2012
Crystal

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

[Crystal's Easy]
00:15:291 可以跟下这个比较明显的音，把折返换成一个2/1滑条加个圈怎样 ok
00:25:068 (1,3) - blanket好点 fixed
00:37:513 (1,2) - 感觉最低难度不放红线跟鼓好点？ 我觉得这个没问题哦

OblivioN wrote:

Crystal's Easy

  1. 01:25:513 (1) - 这个……本来一路挺舒服的……233 我建议这样就好了:http://puu.sh/cY6XD/27d08cb663.png 好

:D挺好的，另外建议加个静音的sliderslide，由于另外两个diff没有摸我就射个星补偿一下吧
thanks for modding! :)

update
osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:届かない恋 '13 (TV Edit)
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Tags:opening wa2 leaf Crystal
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Last edited by Crystal , edited 1 time in total.
OblivioN
OblivioN

W.A.

  1. 00:04:846 (1) - drum clap好像不错，虽然也想建议00:05:068 (2) - clap来着，看你之前reject了就算啦
  2. 00:08:846 (6,7) - 这两个clap我觉得有点吵……
  3. 00:12:291 (7) - 我好像没听到bgm的这里有声音哦，为什么要clap呢？
  4. 00:17:735 (6) - 对我来说clap去掉节奏会比较好，而且听bgm也没有要clap的必要……
  5. 00:39:735 (2) - drum whistle要合适一些
  6. 00:40:402 (4) - drum finish听起来有点沉了……而且00:40:402 (4,5) - 感觉上要有点区别才好，所以00:40:402 (4) - 用drum clap怎么样呢？
  7. 00:43:291 -加个note吧……你00:41:513 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里都不只是跟vocal了……而且空着我打起来感觉怪怪的
  8. 00:49:957 (1) - soft whistle？有个高音呢这里
  9. 00:55:291 (1) - 弯一点有个引到00:55:735 (2) - 的感觉
    SPOILER
  10. 01:00:846 (2,2) - 这个stack修一下，nazi有点明显啦
  11. 01:25:957折返处有个嚓的音，看看要不要sampleset drum唔……softhit好像也没问题的样子……【混乱中】

Crystal's Easy

  1. 01:25:513 (1) - 这个……本来一路挺舒服的……233 我建议这样就好了:http://puu.sh/cY6XD/27d08cb663.png

:D挺好的，另外建议加个静音的sliderslide，由于另外两个diff没有摸我就射个星补偿一下吧
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
马克 今天摸 还是现在摸吧

[General]
  1. 主难度bg重了吧，虽然没什么大碍不过换一个比较好o.o
  2. 所有diff的widesceen support统一
  3. normal有点简单，最好2.x星

[Crystal's Easy]
  1. 00:37:513 (1,2) - 这俩slidertick要么都加个clap要么都不加，我觉得不加比较好，不然听起来挺奇怪的，like01:04:179 (2) -

[Normal]
  1. 00:25:957 (5) - 为什么用drum？去掉吧太违和
  2. 01:09:291 (3) - ^
  3. 00:26:624 (7) - 有点丑，往下一点，然后后面滑条稍微调整一下
  4. 01:25:291 (4) - ^

[Hard]
  1. 00:18:402 (2) - ctrl+G for flow
  2. 01:16:179 (3) - 有点远..2.0x左右就够了

[W.A.]
  1. 00:25:513 (2) - ctrl+G好一点
    我看不懂这个diff，pp式间距233
gl~
Pururut
488 posts
Joined March 2012
Pururut
songmo
[General]
其实我觉得soft的finish和whistle一起用比较好...

[Normal]
01:21:957 (3,4) - 这里最好别叠一起 因为 01:18:846 (4,5) - 这里是1/2 而后面变成了1/1 新手会误读
01:27:291 (1) - 转盘和别的难度统一一下结尾吧

[Hard]
00:26:846 (1) - 感觉这个滑条的锚点拖到和slidertick重叠好看点
01:23:291 (5,1) - 后面两个为啥都变成2.0间距了 前面那个不是1.2吗..

[W.A.]
00:51:068 (5) - nc
00:51:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 你们就喜欢放这种大跳 打死 233
01:13:291 (2,3,4) - 建议删掉3, 4放在2的左边 比如71,255
01:25:068 (5,6,7,8,1) - 让8和01:23:735 (1) - 的头叠一起？强迫症患者你可懂.


摸不动太深
Aiceo
213 posts
Joined May 2014
Aiceo
M4M?

W.A
00:30:846 (3) - slider from this point and blanket it with 00:30:624 (2) -
00:31:513 - circle here.
00:41:513 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this is so cheesy and boring, add some sliders and blankets?
00:57:068 (1) - reshape this slider?
01:01:957 (5) - nc
01:02:846 (1) - nc
01:04:179 (1) - nc
01:15:513 (4) - reshape slider?
01:19:068 (3) - ^

The sliders are just a personal opinion, feel free to do whatever you want with them.

Hard
01:09:068 (4,1) - avoid overlap
01:14:402 (3,1) - ^
Otherwise seems really well mapped, sorry i'm bad with lower difficulties.

I'll skip the easier diffs because I'm bad with them and wouldn't be much of a help. Nice map and goodluck!

My map if you can do m4m: t/256366
Starfall9908
663 posts
Joined November 2013
Starfall9908
M4M from your modding queue

[General]
  1. Turn off the widescreen supporter you're not making a storyboard
[Easy]
  1. 00:26:846 (3) - Blanket
  2. 00:30:402 (2) - ^
  3. 01:09:513 (3) - ^
  4. 01:16:624 (3) - ^
[Normal]
  1. Why so big gridsnap level?
  2. 01:11:957 (5) - Make the slider shape to a better blanket to 01:13:068 (1)
[Hard]
  1. Gridsnap level just like normal ._.
  2. 00:36:402 (4) - Blanket
  3. 00:44:624 (1) - ^

Sorry for aking it to a blanket mod .__.

Good Luck ;)
Sellenite
1,092 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
Sellenite
OblivioN

OblivioN wrote:

W.A.

  1. 00:04:846 (1) - drum clap好像不错，虽然也想建议00:05:068 (2) - clap来着，看你之前reject了就算啦 保持统一吧，原生的不错就不额外加鼓了
  2. 00:08:846 (6,7) - 这两个clap我觉得有点吵…… 下面的clap都是手动加的，没跟bgm
  3. 00:12:291 (7) - 我好像没听到bgm的这里有声音哦，为什么要clap呢？
  4. 00:17:735 (6) - 对我来说clap去掉节奏会比较好，而且听bgm也没有要clap的必要……
  5. 00:39:735 (2) - drum whistle要合适一些 改成drum finish
  6. 00:40:402 (4) - drum finish听起来有点沉了……而且00:40:402 (4,5) - 感觉上要有点区别才好，所以00:40:402 (4) - 用drum clap怎么样呢？好
  7. 00:43:291 -加个note吧……你00:41:513 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里都不只是跟vocal了……而且空着我打起来感觉怪怪的 很久以前打图就想这里空着了，所以现在我空了他
  8. 00:49:957 (1) - soft whistle？有个高音呢这里 这段就全部用drum算了
  9. 00:55:291 (1) - 弯一点有个引到00:55:735 (2) - 的感觉 五连后的滑条我这里都用直的
    SPOILER
  10. 01:00:846 (2,2) - 这个stack修一下，nazi有点明显啦 好
  11. 01:25:957折返处有个嚓的音，看看要不要sampleset drum唔……softhit好像也没问题的样子……【混乱中】原生好听点
Kagamine Ren

Kagamine Ren wrote:

马克 今天摸 还是现在摸吧

[General]
  1. 主难度bg重了吧，虽然没什么大碍不过换一个比较好o.o
  2. 所有diff的widesceen support统一 改了
  3. normal有点简单，最好2.x星 天啊够难了，星级体现不出来

[Normal]
  1. 00:25:957 (5) - 为什么用drum？去掉吧太违和 有这个音的
  2. 01:09:291 (3) - ^
  3. 00:26:624 (7) - 有点丑，往下一点，然后后面滑条稍微调整一下 故意放在上面
  4. 01:25:291 (4) - ^

[Hard]
  1. 00:18:402 (2) - ctrl+G for flow 移近了些，不过没改ctrl+g
  2. 01:16:179 (3) - 有点远..2.0x左右就够了 改成1.8了

[W.A.]
  1. 00:25:513 (2) - ctrl+G好一点 好
    我看不懂这个diff，pp式间距233
gl~
Pururut

Pururut wrote:

songmo
[General]
其实我觉得soft的finish和whistle一起用比较好...

[Normal]
01:21:957 (3,4) - 这里最好别叠一起 因为 01:18:846 (4,5) - 这里是1/2 而后面变成了1/1 新手会误读 两个circle放开不好看
01:27:291 (1) - 转盘和别的难度统一一下结尾吧 干，移动的时候忘记调短了

[Hard]
00:26:846 (1) - 感觉这个滑条的锚点拖到和slidertick重叠好看点 没所谓啦
01:23:291 (5,1) - 后面两个为啥都变成2.0间距了 前面那个不是1.2吗.. 觉得好看些。。

[W.A.]
00:51:068 (5) - nc 好
00:51:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 你们就喜欢放这种大跳 打死 233 打死
01:13:291 (2,3,4) - 建议删掉3, 4放在2的左边 比如71,255 re了一下
01:25:068 (5,6,7,8,1) - 让8和01:23:735 (1) - 的头叠一起？强迫症患者你可懂. re了，远离烦恼


摸不动太深 打死
Aiceo

Aiceo wrote:

M4M?

00:30:846 (3) - slider from this point and blanket it with 00:30:624 (2) - i think it is already blanket..
00:31:513 - circle here. ？
00:41:513 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this is so cheesy and boring, add some sliders and blankets? really on purpose
00:57:068 (1) - reshape this slider?
01:01:957 (5) - nc your nc is not depend on mine lol
01:02:846 (1) - nc
01:04:179 (1) - nc
01:15:513 (4) - reshape slider?
01:19:068 (3) - ^

The sliders are just a personal opinion, feel free to do whatever you want with them.

01:09:068 (4,1) - avoid overlap d
01:14:402 (3,1) - ^ on purpose
Otherwise seems really well mapped, sorry i'm bad with lower difficulties.

I'll skip the easier diffs because I'm bad with them and wouldn't be much of a help. Nice map and goodluck!

My map if you can do m4m: t/256366
nadapan

nadapan wrote:

M4M from your modding queue

[General]
  1. Turn off the widescreen supporter you're not making a storyboard yes
[Normal]
  1. Why so big gridsnap level?
  2. 01:11:957 (5) - Make the slider shape to a better blanket to 01:13:068 (1) so hard lol
[Hard]
  1. Gridsnap level just like normal ._.
  2. 00:36:402 (4) - Blanket already imo
  3. 00:44:624 (1) - ^ keep the same shape

Sorry for aking it to a blanket mod .__.

Good Luck ;)
thanks for mod!
上面两个为什么会黏在一起好搞笑
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