Hi there, coming from your request via PM (m4m). Be so kind to take some minutes (or seconds, lets be honest) to answer to my mods. Dont be a dick and just "lol didnt changed stuffs hurr durr" without an explanation. If I told you something that was against your map, tell me why. This way mapper and modder both gain something.
Unrankable
Suggestion
Other than that, colours yellow to red indicate how important changes would be in my opinion[General]
■ You'll need a Hard inbetween Normal and Insane, otherwise it'll be unrankable (Spreadissue)
[Easy]
■ 00:01:892 (1,2) - Blanket maybe?
■ 00:06:239 (2) - The repeat doesnt really hit anything in the song. There's a beat on the white before and after it, but not on the red itself. How about this then?
■ 00:08:848 (2) - Move NC here
■ 00:08:848 (2,3) - These shouldnt stop that early, they should end on 00:09:718 - and 00:11:457 -
■ 00:10:152 (4) - Could fit a circle in here
■ 00:12:326 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved
■ 00:21:028 (4) - Replace with (Circle) (Slider) and NC the Slider. This supports the bigwhite, since there's a strong beat on it
■ 00:24:071 (2) - Replace with anything you like, but the bigwhite should be clickable
■ 00:24:941 (1) - The entire combo feels off. Try this
■ 00:31:898 (1) - Objects too close to the Spinner (in this case: Easy diff) are unrankable. t/241019■ 00:32:332 (2) - Sounds more like a (Circle) (Slider) to me
■ 00:33:637 (4) - replace with Slider?
■ 00:38:854 (2) - Should be replaced with a Slider. I mean, you can hear that long vocal, so why map it with a Circle
■ 00:48:854 (3) - Circle?
■ 00:55:811 (1) - (Circle) (Slider) NC the Slider
■ 01:02:767 (2) - Do this v
■ 01:07:984 (4) - Add Circle
■ 01:11:463 (5) - Add Circle
■ 01:11:898 (1) - Replace with Slider
■ 01:14:506 (4) - Remove repeat and do this?
■ 01:18:854 (1) - This fits better
■ 01:22:332 (1) - v
There are alot of rhythmerrors in here that should be fixed. Reminder: Loud beats should be clickable (Circle or Sliderhead), more silent beats can be covered by (Sliderend)[Normal]
■ 00:05:370 (1) - This feels really empty. Fill it with something like this
■ 00:08:413 (4) - Circle here
■ 00:08:848 (1) - 00:10:587 (3) - This might be difficult to read. People usually only expect one repeat, multiple repeats like this seem random. Try to replace them with simple Sliders
■ 00:14:065 (1) - The sound stops 00:17:544 - and not where it ends right now
■ 00:21:028 (1) - The white tick (which is currently at the (Slidertail)) should be clickable. Change that somehow (by either adding a Slider or Circle before that and move it)
■ 00:29:724 (5,6) - Same as above
■ 00:32:332 (1) - This pretty much starts on an empty beat. 00:31:898 - seems like a better place for it after youve fixed what I mentioned above
■ 00:43:637 (4,5) - Blanket can be improved
■ 00:47:550 (3,4) - ^
■ 01:04:506 (6) - add Circle
■ 01:07:984 (1) - Move to the white tick, add Circle here
■ 01:18:419 (5) - Add Circle
■ 01:21:898 (1) - Same as multiple examples above
■ 01:25:376 (7) - Circle
[Collab Insane]
Erra
■ 00:08:848 (4) - Move NC here
■ 00:10:587 (6) - Move NC here
■ 00:12:326 (7) - NC
■ 00:11:022 (1,2,3,4,5) - I wouldnt do this. Antijumps are a) hard to read and b) not fun to play, especially since 00:11:674 (4,5) - is a random speedup that wouldnt fit into 00:11:022 (1,2,3) - 's spacing pattern. Respace them.
■ From here on: Change everything that has a strong beat mapped with a (Sliderend) like in the other diffs. I wont point them out again.
■ 00:21:463 (2) - Move NC here ... then again, in general, You should move every NC to a point where it makes sense. This means -> big white ticks on every ~8 Beats (-> 8 Circle for example). Optionally also works for every 16 Beats
■ 00:23:637 (2,3,4) - Remove (3), no sound to be heard here
■ 00:27:767 (4) - Fix overlap
■ 01:07:767 (1,2) - These kind of combos dont really work if they have a 1/2 spacing between them. This is usually used for 1/4 type of combos. Respace them (goes for any similar combo as well)
And, as a small reminder, 01:09:506 (4,5) - is the same beat, but has way more spacing to it. Consistency wise, this is really bad.
■ 01:13:528 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Dont use so many NCs (Same for 00:29:724 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - )
andrei7
■ 00:37:116 (6) - NC here
■ 00:40:593 (5) - NC here (in general, double your NCs to fit in with Erra's NCing)