mingmichael wrote:

お誕生日おめでとう!

1. Disqualified for an uneven spread between lower and higher difficulties which is caused by the higher density in Muzukashii due to missing rest moments. Futsuu differs here a lot. Have one example of many, from 00:28:385 to 00:34:032 - :
   
   
   
   
   
2. Also disqualified for the difficulty in Kantan and Futsuu. Certain patterns are pretty long and should be reduced in their lenght. I will give down below examples:

1. (Kantan) 00:16:385 (10) - For example, this could be deleted to prevent having long pattern constellations.
   Or 01:18:502 - and 01:31:208 -
2. (Futsuu) 00:10:738 ~ 00:26:267 - 00:17:797 (15) - and 00:23:444 (28) - could be deleted.
3. (Muzukashii) To prevent having too long patterns which become at the end difficulty, you can delete for examples notes like 00:25:914 (55) - and 00:31:561 (76) - . Muzukashii of course requiers some more removals, so it comes closer to lower difficulties but I didn't gave so many examples because, I would probably change your patterns too much, so I leave it to you.

OnosakiHito wrote:

Reason for Disqualification

1. Disqualified for an uneven spread between lower and higher difficulties which is caused by the higher density in Muzukashii due to missing rest moments. Futsuu differs here a lot. Have one example of many, from 00:28:385 to 00:34:032 - :
   
   
   
   
   
2. Also disqualified for the difficulty in Kantan and Futsuu. Certain patterns are pretty long and should be reduced in their lenght. I will give down below examples:

1. (Kantan) 00:16:385 (10) - For example, this could be deleted to prevent having long pattern constellations.
   Or 01:18:502 - and 01:31:208 -
2. (Futsuu) 00:10:738 ~ 00:26:267 - 00:17:797 (15) - and 00:23:444 (28) - could be deleted.
3. (Muzukashii) To prevent having too long patterns which become at the end difficulty, you can delete for examples notes like 00:25:914 (55) - and 00:31:561 (76) - . Muzukashii of course requiers some more removals, so it comes closer to lower difficulties but I didn't gave so many examples because, I would probably change your patterns too much, so I leave it to you.

The cause of this is the way you map. You map a lot to vocals which make the difficulties be automatically harder. Especially Muzukashii. Muzukashii is mapped on 1/2+1/1, and without breaks, this difficulty can become quick much harder than Futsuu and Kantan. But well, it isn't that urgent as one might think. Overall, the set is alright. So don't worry too much.

Sorry for DQ on last day, but we had to talk about this in QAT forum first.
And giving an additional mod at this time is a bit hard at this time, so I will leave it for now to the BNs.

waa last day ..

Julie wrote:

Sorry I'm so late XD

[Kantan]

01:23:444 (96) - remove finish, feel more impact on this 01:24:855 (97) - okey.

[/notice]

[Futsuu]

00:38:267 (59) - move to 00:38:091 - , this is where it have piano and vocal, since you been following vocal 00:38:620 (60,61,62,63) - , keep same rhythm. okay

00:41:444 (65) - move to 00:41:620 - , following piano with 00:41:973 (66,67,68) - , also the "do" in "doki"~, like this 00:41:091 - xD doki dokiii~ okeey xd

[Muzukashii]

00:31:032 (71,72) - ctrl+g, 00:31:032 (71) - should follow 00:29:973 (68,69,70) - and 00:31:208 (72) - for piano chord? okay. 00:53:620 (143,144) - some change

[Oni]

00:21:238 - add d, should flow like this 00:20:620 (47,48,49) - ~ nope. It has deliberately delete the Notes　http://puu.sh/hRKCk/606541f6f2.jpg ( The sound that can pick )

01:14:532 (293) - move it here 01:14:355 - , since no sound ><. Should be like how you did here 01:17:179 - :3 okay. 01:25:826 (360) - some

had the old version, and check the one you deleted, should be fine~

Julie wrote:

Oups LOL!

Bubble~

Now let's go yell at Love =w=!!

Love wrote:

[JuDa's Oni]

1. 01:47:267 (304) - Change this to a k for the quiet hi-hat and to differ from the mekkadons after.
   removed 01:47:267 (304) - instead of your suggestion.
   Intro part (e.g. 00:16:914 (34) - , 00:19:738 (52) - ) hits low-tone base sounds, but 01:47:267- doesn't.
   
   01:04:561 - changed to don by myself. low-tone base and drums sounds not high.
   
   The others are fixed as your suggestion

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Love wrote:

[Oni]

1. 00:21:149 (51,52) - Ctrl+G these to switch them around, this will fit the drums that are present here and not end this part so blandly. okay.
2. 00:33:679 - This feels really empty since you've been using the drums mostly and then you have a random vocal break here. What you should do is just have k k d d k from 00:33:679 to 00:34:385. Chenge k * d d k :3
3. 01:19:738 (324) - Change this to a d for the lower vocal pitch here. okay,
4. 01:23:444 (347) - Remove the finisher on this since it doesn't need to be emphasized as much as 01:23:973 (351).okay.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:21:149 (37,38) - Ctrl+G these as well just like the Oni to fit the drums that are present and to keep this from being so bland.okay.
2. 01:18:149 (226) - Delete this since it's extra and there's no vocal here to emphasize. You left this blank on 01:29:444 as well so might as well remove it.okay.

[Futsuu]

There's some missing necessary 4/1 breaks that could be incorporated into the map, so I'll just mainly think about those for a little.

1. 00:20:267 (21,22,23,25) - Remove these for a nice break to follow the piano instead.
2. 00:37:385 (54) - Move this to 00:38:797 for the piano and vocal here that could be used to create another long break since this switches to a slower part.
3. 00:44:267 - 00:46:032 - Try doing this to help with a transition as well as another break: Delete 00:44:267 (67), change 00:44:620 to a k, and delete
4. 00:46:032. This will be all together.
5. 01:05:797 (111) - Delete this so that the next vocal can be alone.
6. 01:08:620 (115,117) - Delete these for 4/1 breaks as well.
7. 01:13:914 (124) - Delete this since 01:25:208 is empty to keep consistency.

The random switch from 1/1 to 1/2 vocals feels really off instead of incorporating 1/2 throughout the map. Rhythm just keeps switching out of nowhere instead of staying consistent, it feels really bland then out of nowhere the 1/2 vocals that I start liking get put in, then it goes back to 1/1 off-rhythm notes. This is only my opinion, but you could've done better.

all fix and change random switch patterns.

[Kantan]

• Nothing here, just might be able to fit some 1/2 beats with some of the 1/1 off-beat vocals.

Surono wrote:

i forget how2mod

[Oni]
not see some to do..

[Muzukashii]
00:22:738 (44) - this stronk pitch, give finisher,okay. 00:23:973 (48) - this too, 00:25:032 (52,53) - and this... give finisher too?

[Futsuu]
00:19:914 (20) - give finisher nope.
00:25:208 (27) - finisher? ^

[Kantan]
about finisher? XD Hmmm...

lol sry, this already nice...

Surono wrote:

[JuDa's Oni]
00:20:620 - this high *kat, 00:20:973 - this low *don. so i have suggestion, can you change kkd kdd or kdd ddd? XD
prefer to keep the both triplets followed violins. it sounds not well followed the high sound area.

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hope it gets ranked soon~

ManP wrote:

Ｊｕｄａ’ｓ　ｏｎｉ

1. 01:45:414(290,291) を1/4一つ右にずらして、d kdkにしてみるとかどうでしょうか？ ドラム類のことを考えると音の粒が何も鳴っていない部分へとずらすのに抵抗があるのと,ずらすぐらいなら5連にした方が音圧に対してやさしいかな... ただ5連も曲調に対して助長しすぎているのでno changeで

ManP wrote:

ツイッタから！　初心者ですけど頑張ってmodしてみようと思います！

Futsuu

1. 00:59:091 ここにdとか置いてみてはどうでしょうか？元々k置いてたんですがFutsuuなのでけしました；； no change.

Muzukashii

1. 01:17:835 change to d? 下がる音かなと思いました 01:17:835に何もありませんでした・・・前後少し変えました！
2. 01:23:797　add Ｄ? ここは拾ってもいいかなと思いますMuzuなおかつやさしめな曲なのでkeep. 元々は置いてたんですけどね・・・

Ｊｕｄａ’ｓ　ｏｎｉ

1. 01:45:414(290,291) を1/4一つ右にずらして、d kdkにしてみるとかどうでしょうか？

Kantan Oni は言うこと無いと思いました；
ランクド頑張ってください　:3

1. Diffs under Muzukashii ,This map has serious issue on based. (e.g. nothing 01:13:914 - ) This issue needs to improve, and I suggested for this time.
   
2. Futsuu has huge difficuly spread with Muzukashii, and This has "too less 1/2s" , so I suggest toara to much "add" , "move" suggestions.
   
3. But, I'm still not sure a little about the spread. If you noticed something, please suggest to toara!>_<

JUDYDANNY wrote:

返事がない、ただのしかばねのようだ
趣旨
Spread強化(enhance the difficuly spread)
緩急強化(adjust ups and downs the more)

見ます見ますと言ってかれころ1か月以上も遅れてしまった上にTNAに投げてしまってたので全力でサポートします　いや～投げるんじゃなかったっすｗ

[Introduction]Spreadなんですが
Oniはブレイクの間隔が1/1でほぼ統一されており,リズムがイントロで定まった部分でAメロ等で変化しているので
Muzuもそれに倣います

現MuzukashiiのAメロ等による休憩部分を一気にまず詰め込み、詰め込んだ部分の代案でより流れが壊れないような休憩部分を作成(Oni同様な1/1の間隔をより統一, 赤線上のノーツを少し減らす)
他パートの前後(特に00:37:561 -ここからクールダウンを作らせる体)で休憩を作る…そんな具合でまず見ていきます
且つ、playingによる流れが地味にOniと違うので,かなり気になった部分くらいは提案しておきます

その後
MuzukashiiとFutsuuの差を調整します
ので
Muzukashii >> Futsuuの順に調整見てもらえると助かります

[Muzukashii]

• 
  緩急強化

1. 00:15:679 – move to 00:15:855 – and d. 一貫性00:12:149 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -. この密度ならトランペットよりパターン重視の方がイントロにやさしいと思います
2. 00:34:208 – move to 00:34:914 - . 手前のkddkは基本のリズムからかなり外れた変化形なので一度おちつかせるためにも基本リズムに戻してあげた方がより緩急に易しいです
   
   
3. 00:37:208 – , 00:40:032 - Oniも同様, add d これまでのOniの密度を見てたら(1/2 の2連がそもそも少ない)ここにノーツがあっても緩急は自然　Oniもいじった
   
   1. And, 00:37:738 (45,46) – 休憩目的も兼用 , remove? 手前のボーカル 「こどもの」の部分がアップで切りやすいのと, 変化を何かしらここでつけるならここを削除するのが自然に感じます, はっきりとしたスネア、バスドラも聞こえにくいので違和感も少ないはず
4. 00:40:561 - , 00:40:914 – same as above. 配色は00:41:091 -この辺とかはボーカル意識で変えてもいいかもしれない ok kdkd
   
5. 00:56:797 – remove 、既に1st Aメロで説明済み こっちにむーぶした00:57:502 (156) -
6. 00:58:914 - 周辺に少しk混ぜた方がいいかも dが少しくどい感じがした
   
7. 00:59:797 – add d
   
8. 01:08:444 – add d
9. 01:21:855 - 削除、 ボーカルが弱くなるからよりメリハリつきますの
   
10. 01:14:444 – add d, イントロとの差異づくり
11. 01:25:738 - ^
    
    
    Spread + 緩急+Break
12. 00:23:091 – remove
    OniのAメロはどうしようもなくつまってるし、かといってMuzukashiiが削れるかっていうとAメロ前半部は消しようもないのでここが一番違和感ないと思った
    
13. 00:25:914 – add k ,
    まぁ普通にメリハリ00:42:502 (108,109) –間との緩急がつけられるってのもあるけど今後のmapset作成のためにも難しいこともいっときます
    ここでまずOniについては
    d-k-ddkdとの流れはイントロ(00:11:444 -~),Aメロ共通でドラム基盤と変わらないリズム
    
    それに対してMuzukashiiはAメロからplayingによる決定的な流れの差異ができてしまいます spreadの整合ならここは必須.、　もしも詰めないなら00:26:267 –をkに変える、、そのような流れが必要(これは密度を1段階落としたdiff ,KantanとかFutsuu等でカバーできる流れの統一方法)
    
14. 00:27:502 – ここを削除 気持ち抑えるパートを表現したいなら
    
15. 00:30:326 – k に変えて(このkは個人的にイイかなと思っただけ) ,00:30:679 (70,71,72) –をOni同様に1/2でdkkd ..。じゃないな dk-dに変更　ok Oniもchange
    
16. 00:34:914 (34,35) – remove 2回目のAメロパートを見て思ったけど、ここは抑えられる
    
17. 00:47:797 – remove, 休憩部分パートはここまでですよ~とよりはっきりさせるため
    
18. 00:48:502 – add k, 00:54:149 - add k , 0:53:444 (92,93,94) –kkd , 00:54:502 (96) – d やんなぁ same as 1st Aメロ.
19. 00:52:914 - k?
    
20. 01:13:914 –, 01:25:208 - Aメロからの流れ云々で説明したとおり, add k
    
21. 01:19:208 – から, 00:17:091 (23,24,25) –ここからのイントロと流れがまったく同じなんで クールダウンしてよろし
    
    1. 01:19:561 (233,234) - , 01:20:091 (236,237) - remove…01:20:267 - 01:20:620 - addかなぁ 1/1リズムで01:19:208 – からで d-dkみたいな
22. 01:31:208 – d , 01:31:738 – move to 1/2 みぎ
23. ちなみにkiaiパート抜け後の01:36:502 – は00:23:091 –で作ってるのでadd k しなくても大丈夫
    
24. 01:01:914 – remove?
    
    提案全部とるこんな感じですよってことで[c Muzukashii]っていう別.osuで作っときましたhttp://puu.sh/k52Iu/75c21ddc06.osu
    
    すこしつまりすぎって感じもしますけど これぐらいにしとけば後は他のBNによる修正もたやすくなる

[Oni]

1. 00:37:208 – , 00:40:032 – add d, Muzuで説明済み
2. 00:47:973 – 削除かなぁ.. 00:45:149 –同様に
   

[Futsuu]

• 
  前提として赤線配置は避けられません, OniとMuzukashiのkiaiとAメロの密度の差異が少ないのと曲がクソむずかしいので
  Muzukashiiをベースにした流れでパターン変更は出します
  
  まぁ結果1/2や肉付けが増える分大きな休憩部分もたくさん作るハメになるのでそれもまとめて入れときました
  
  緩急

1. 00:15:679 - move to 00:15:502 – Muzuでもいったけど00:15:679 –のトランペットは基本的に一般プレイヤーからすれば聞き逃します 手前の配置と一致することの方が優先度が激高です
2. 00:23:444 – remove ,
   
3. 00:26:267 – change to k , Muzukashiiでいった通りです
4. 00:26:620 – add d + 00:26:973 (35,36) – 1/2 左にずらし Muukashiiのリズムを踏襲させるため, あまりにも難易度差がひらきすぎてる
5. 00:28:738 - move to 00:29:444 – and 00:29:797 (21,22) – move to 1/2 左
6. and, 00:30:326 – add k , 00:29:091 – change to d
7. 00:32:267 – add d, and 00:32:620 (28,29) – move to 1/2 左
8. and 00:33:679 – add k
9. 00:34:032 – change to d
10. 00:34:385 – change to k
    
11. 00:35:620 – remove, 休憩づくり similar e as Muzukashii.,
12. 00:36:502 – add k
13. 00:37:208 – , 00:40:032 - add d この場合は1/1間隔にした方がplayしやすくなるでしょう
14. 00:38:091 – change to 　d して↓
    
    • その後の00:38:620 (58,59,60,61) –は1/1ベースにしてあげるとか。。がいいかな あまり難しくさせなくていいと思います
    1. 00:38:797 (59,60) – move to 1/2 右
    2. 00:41:620 (65,66) – same , move to 1/2 右
15. 00:43:208 –ここからFutsuuの緩急なら”2/1”ベースの5連でぐっとクールダウンできます
    1. 00:44:267 – remove, 00:44:620 (55,56) – kd
    2. 00:46:032 – remove
16. 00:48:149 (61) - ~ ここからも1st Aメロと同じですね
    
    1. 00:49:208 – add d , 00:49:561 (64,65) – move to 1/2 左 , 00:50:091 – add 何か nanika ha k de
    2. 00:51:326 - move to 00:52:032 (70) - , 00:52:385 (71,72,73) – move to 1/2 左
    3. 00:54:855 – add d, 00:55:208 (78,79,80) – move to 1/2 左
    4. 00:56:973 – add k , 00:56:620 – change to d ,
       
    5. 00:58:385 - add　d , 00:58:738 - remove , 00:57:855 (100,101) - change to kdk?
17. 00:59:444 –からも同じって思ったけど少し変えた方がいいか..
    
    1. 00:59:797 – add d
    2. 01:00:855 – move to 1/2 左 and change to d, 01:01:385 (95,96) – move to 1/2 右
    3. 01:04:208 (102,103) – move to 1/2 右
    4. 01:05:782 – add ｄ　あっど
       
       
    5. kiaiからだけど、 やっぱ01:13:914 –はボーカルのために外せないと思うな～ ここもパターン変更とノーツの詰め合わせが必要
       
       1. 01:13:914 –add d?
       2. 01:14:267 – ここらはイントロと同じく k
       3. 01:14:973 – move to 1/2 左 イントロ部同様
       4. 01:15:326 – add d
       5. 01:17:444 – ここからadd 1/2 dk
       6. 01:17:797 (134,135) – 1/2 右, 01:18:502 (1,2) – remove.
    6. 01:20:091 (138,139) –ここらもイントロの部分、Muzukashii同様に1/1ベースでokなパート
       1. 01:20:091 (138,139) – remove, 01:20:620 – addd , 01:19:914 – change to k
          
       2. 01:22:385 (142,143) – move to “1/1” 右
    7. 01:25:208 -～もうせつめいもイラン気がするけど
       
       1. 01:25:208 –add d, 01:25:561 – change to k , 01:26:267 – move to 1/2 左
       2. 01:26:620 – add d
       3. 01:28:738 – add 1/2 dk, 01:29:091 (161,162) – move to 1/2 右, change to kd , 01:29:797 (163) – remove.
       4. 01:30:855 – remove
       5. 01:31:561 (165,166) – remove , 01:31:914 – add d
       6. 01:34:032 (177,178,179) – move to 1/2 左, 配色をそしてkkdに + 01:33:679 – add d,
          01:33:326 –ここからD dk-k-dって感じですね, ボーカルに忠実
    8. 01:38:973 - ~01:44:620 - は00:23:973 (8,9,10,11,12) –とほぼ同じhttp://puu.sh/k57bQ/8457fefff6.jpgこーんな具合でいけるでしょう
       
       
       
       正直まだAメロ後半部はMuzuとのspread差がかなり不安だけど、他のBNやmodderに任せた方がいいかも
       
       Muzukashii同様に[c Futsuu] .osuつくっときました
       http://puu.sh/k57lY/0993c41543.osu
       ノーツ10増えてSR2.12ですまじかよ

もちろんまだWIP.
Kantanもこれから見る (IRCで?)
こんなパッタン使えねぇ思ったらkudosuなしでいいです

@To Viewers

1. Diffs under Muzukashii ,This map has serious issue on based. (e.g. nothing 01:13:914 - ) This issue needs to improve, and I suggested for this time.
   
2. Futsuu has huge difficuly spread with Muzukashii, and This has "too less 1/2s" , so I suggest toara to much "add" , "move" suggestions.
   
3. But, I'm still not sure a little about the spread. If you noticed something, please suggest to toara!>_<

xtrem3x wrote:

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Juda's Oni

00:41:973 (167,168,169,170) - Invert colors (if follow vocal sound is better, and more notorious) vatitied is only needed on 00:41:091 - , the other colors can be covered ,For fixing(returening) the sounds pressure. that's broken the consistency with drums flow. not prefer as Taiko sounds imo.

00:49:385 - Change to k (not different than the above sequences) no change , the reason is same as above.
00:55:032 - Same ^ same.

00:57:679 (246,247) - ctrl+g (same reason about follow vocal sound and is more fluid) same.

01:13:561 - is better change these 2-notes in D for D-K (is Low and High respectively "Ze-ttai!" comparing next pair 01:16:385- ) pitch is no changed.
01:16:385 - Change these 2-notes in K for D (is low ^ ) same.

01:24:855 - Same indication as 01:13:561- same.
01:27:679 - Same indication as 01:16:679- same.

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xtrem3x wrote:

[b]Request via ... .-.

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General:

ALL Suggestions are based in notorious sounds (other reason is with comments)

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

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Kantan:

01:18:502 - Add note (much empty space in kiai time D: )
01:23:797 - Same reason ^
01:24:149 - Same ^
01:34:032 - Same ^ Some fix

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Futsuu:

01:13:914 - Change to k (same as Muzukashii "Ze-ttai!" ) put d d

01:20:444 - Is better change to d this note why not same as next pair notes in pitch sound

01:25:208 - add k (missing note?)

01:31:738 - this and next note Move 1 line rear (in this part have a notorious broken sequence and flow, is better this change accoirding vocal sound and possible lite drums)

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Muzukashii:

00:50:444 - 2 options .-. - 1) Change these 4-note for dkdk (for emphasis in lite drums) / 2) Change for dddk (emphasis in last note a high sound) no change. put perttern

00:53:620 (141,142) - ctrl+g (in this part is better swap this notes for notorious sound in vocal as 2nd an 3rd note, in 4th note is a hit drum)

00:56:091 (150,151) - ctrl+g (in this part 3rd note is high vocal sound and 4th note is a notorious hit drum)

00:57:326 (154,155) - Change to k (no have a notorious Hit sound in these 2-notes, in next 2 notes have these Hit and is correct)

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Oni:

00:36:855 - Is possible remove finish in this note why not have notable hit sound for a sequence change of this way, also..
00:37:032 - Add d (if remove finish can add this note for fill this space, have lite drum) or Add k (same remove finish and combinated with vocal and lite drum is possible a better fluid with this note) keep

00:39:679 - Remove finish (same reason as 00:36:855- )
00:39:855 - Add note (same indications as 00:37:032- )keep

00:59:444 - In this note have cymbal for a finish note and is correct (-w-)b

00:59:620 - Add note (Same indications as 00:37:032- )
00:59:797 - Add d (is better repeat sequence as previous similar sequence with this sound)keep

01:02:267 - In this note not applies as 00:59:444- then Remove finish
01:02:444 - Add note (Same indications as 00:37:032- )keep

01:02:620 - ctrl+g with next note (is better repeat sequence, have same drum rhythm type)

01:03:767 - Move to 01:03:591- (the triple is better in this part)

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