Fort wrote:

hi in mod q

00:10:465 (1) - use 1/2 slider pls, it sounds overmapped Fixed
00:12:365 (5) - slider end in 00:12:665 - , you need add something in 00:12:865 - (and NC start in here) Fixed
00:17:065 (2,4) - its nothing wrong if you use 1/2 slider there Fixed
00:23:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - this part sound too loud, consider reduce volume Fixed
00:25:665 (6) - need NC this (you need to do same NC pattern like 00:32:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ) Fixed
00:50:665 (4) - you ignore this strong beat 00:50:865 - , consider make some clickable object in there Fixed

idk but combo in here feels didnt based on strong beat, im not really a NC expert but im not going to lie here your map like have some random ncing
01:05:665 (4,5) - overlap here looks blah, move this 01:05:665 (4,5,6,7) - a little bit to up until that note didnt overlap with 01:04:865 (2) - Still gotta work on NC a bit but tried fixing some
01:23:265 - so sad you didnt use clickable object in here, this part has lot of instrumental sounds, it very suggested you map based on some strong notes like 01:24:865 (2,1,6,6,5) - or etc and i prefer NC that thing Fixed, I think?

01:48:465 (4) - change to 1/2 slider, add circle and NC it in 01:48:865 - Fixed
01:53:465 (2) - lol, better stack that one with 01:52:865 (1) - in slider tail or slider head Fixed
01:59:665 (2,3,4,5) - looks like this stream little confusing because of this one 01:56:065 (1,2,3,4) - Fixed, I think?
02:04:265 - need add something in here, because you mapping this one before Fixed (weird I remember having a note there)
02:12:465 (2,3,4,5) - idk about this pattern, but whatever (im considering make newcombo in 02:12:865 - because it has very strong beat) Fixed
02:16:265 (3,4,5,6) - wow, you mad bro (that very overmap i sure of that) Fixed
02:18:265 (4,5,6,7) - same thing
02:22:715 (2,3,4) - this one better with 1/4 stream
aaaaaaaaaaa too much 1/8s 300 bpm stream in this slow song is like pain :<, and the gap of this map didnt balanced with your 1/2 and 1/4 pattern
(so sad) tried to get the ones I think could do without, I still like where some are though
02:34:665 - need add notes Went with a slider
02:43:065 (4,5) - wow im sure im following some piano sound there, and i think you need add note in 02:43:265 - Tried moving the slider back instead
02:44:465 (6,1) - im sure you need NC in 02:48:065 - because in 02:44:465 (6) - has strong piano song which you need to follow piano sound in that time (add add break time there?) but i dont know you mapped like that lol Yeah, I went with vocals there, gonna keep it for now unless I absolutely have to change it, would rather not though
02:56:865 (6) - slider end in 02:57:265 - ? Fixed
03:04:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - lol this spacing Not sure if good or not, but "fixed"
03:47:065 (7,1) - its kinda funny you overlapping that, consider move it little up a bitFixed
04:39:665 - i guess you need to slower SV and reducing volume there, slow part with that sv is like ugh. Fixed

Result:
- you need to fix some NC and some patterning
- you need some consistency about following something for clickable objects (im suggesting follow more instrumental than vocal because Intrumental > Vocal in musical theory, especially in this song)
- you need fix that 1/8s (that kinda forcing player being hardcore guy than enjoying your map)
- 02:15:665 (1) - you must fix this (look ai mod)
- fix some bad look overlap and imperfect blankets (its up to you) Tried getting some
- dont overmap this song pls :3 Honestly didnt think I did but oh well

looks that thing i can find some
good luck!

Hullahopp wrote:

Hey
I'm here fro my queue, as I promised!
I don't like Illenium tbh, but I make an exception with this
Illenium is listenable for me, but I'm just not really into it surprised not many people like the song, its prob one of fave
You could use a different name, if you want to ^^Still trying to think of one
00:20:065 (2,3) - Make a blanket? k
00:23:765 (1) - Maybe remove this? k
00:30:165 (1) - ^ -^
00:52:065 (3,4) - Blanket better pls k
00:59:265 (6) - Move this to x:118 y:182 for better overlap k
01:08:065 (5,1) - Blanket k
01:19:865 (10) - Move tis to x:340 y:192 for better overlap k
01:59:665 (2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe (Just maybe) these are a bit fast I like them though so im gonna keep those, already changed most of the other 1/8s I had in the map
02:04:265 (5) - Move this to x:384 y:210 for better overlap k
02:13:865 (5) - Move this to x:216 y:162 for better overlap k
03:22:465 (1,2) - I didn't mention the rest (because they weren't that bad), but this one.. Make a better blanket Not sure if im fixing the blankets right, let me know if they're still bad
03:25:065 (4) - Maybe move this to x:184 y:192 k
03:26:265 (3,4) - Blanket better k
03:54:265 (2,3) - ^-^
03:54:265 (2,4) - These are overlaping a bit k
03:56:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - This again (change it if you did previously)
04:09:265 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
04:10:665 (4) - Move this to x:104 y:166 for better overlap k
04:10:465 (3,8) - Try to make a better overlap Not sure if thats good
04:22:065 (1,2) - Better blanket Again, hope im doing these right
04:22:865 (4,5) - ^
04:23:665 (1,2) - ^
04:24:465 (4,5) - ^
04:25:765 (2,3) - Maybe use the slider you used before (00:47:065 (1) - ) Will probably change some, not sure too sure though
But not just there (I hope I'm not gonna need to point out the rest xd)
04:43:665 - Add a break? Was trying to avoid it mostly because I don't like the 3 second pauses and second cause its lowering the drain time but oh well, its the 3rd time its mentioned so i guess I should
04:50:065 - ^
04:56:665 - ^

That's all!
Good luck with it! ^^

Itasha_S13 wrote:

Hi from modReq

00:12:365 (5) - start this slider in the red tick and make it longer to finish on the next red tick k, had them on blue cause i think the timing was for em but maybe it jus works better on red? dunno but changed it
00:37:965 (6) - ^_^
00:18:765 (6) - ^ and add s circle here 00:19:265 - _^
00:19:865 (1,2) - and 00:21:465 (4,5) - should have the same distance K tried changing em hopefully its better
00:39:065 (1,2,1,2,3) - ^_^
00:44:065 - you should add a circle here and end the slider in the yellow tick Chose not to cause I feel like overmapping it a bit? If more people mention it, i'll think about changing it
00:47:065 (1) - ^
00:53:465 (1) - ^
01:06:465 - ^
03:20:865 - ^
03:27:265 - ^
00:49:465 (6) - This long jump here... no, 00:48:865 (4) - this is the slider that should have the jump because its the stronger beat K changed it, def agree there
01:00:065 (3) - ^_^
02:08:865 (1,2,3,4) - why not 1/8 here? The sound here its 1/8 xd Yea but someone said it was overmappin with all the 1/8 so i made them 1/4 and it doesnt sound bad so yeah
03:52:865 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:15:465 - missed a circle here? Na its more for a pause since it changes pace a bit
02:42:465 - you should start with a slider here.. Not sure what you mean?
02:49:665 (4) - end this slider at 02:50:065 - Changed
02:53:665 (3) - end this slider at 02:54:465 - _^
03:03:365 (6) - start this slider at the white tick _^
03:06:565 (5) - ^_^
03:11:265 (1) - the same about the jump, you should make the jump in the strong beat, not here 03:11:665 (2) - k
04:22:465 - the jumps since here doesnt go well with the overall difficult, I recommend to make them shorter will see how I change this later
04:27:665 (6,7,8) - change this to the 1/8 slider you were doing before xd k
04:41:165 (7) - start on red tick k
04:47:565 (9) - ^_^
04:53:965 (8) - ^_^
05:00:365 (8) - ^_^

gl gl, I liked the song

AlphaDude95 wrote:

Hello From The NM Queue: t/601442

Generally I´ll point out some issues, most of which repeat a lot in the map, they´re not big issues, but most of the maps today use them, so it could help you a lot if you want to get the map ranked.

OVERLAPS: If you open basically any new ranked map, it´s bound to have overlaps. Simply moving two notes over each other instead of having two circles overlap in a different way each time. Your map has got some overlaps, but in my opinion there´s more opportunities for it.

00:07:665 (1) - and 00:10:465 (1) is the first example.

BLANKETS: If you check the approach circles of the blanketed object, you might notice some of your sliders are off. This has a simple fix simply by reshaping the slider along the approach circle.

00:12:265 (5,1)

DISTANCE SNAPPING: It´s better to space objects together in a similar section of a song with a similar gap between them. While for example downbeats may get more spacing due to being strong sounds, most mappers try for having consistent spacing.

00:37:065 (3,4,5,6)

also please try to space streams accordingly to their distance in music. If there are 1/6 and 1/4 streams, make the 1/6 streams less spaced or give them a special combo colour for better recognition. You did this only a few times, but it´s still important.

COMBOS: Try to aim for having a consistent number of combos. This is achieavable easily by putting new combos on repeating important sounds (downbeats or repeating rhythm)

That´s all, the map is overally good but I feel it could benefit from these changes. Good luck!