- Same as Hard, the LNs are highly similar to Hard. Rearranging some of the LN patterns would add more variety to the mapset as a whole.
00:01:480 (1480|4) - Move to 2 so the 1/2 jack is on the left hand while the LN is on the right hand for better playability
00:03:013 (3013|2,3232|2) - Same idea as above, try to find a way to move the 1/2 jack to the right hand (preferably on column 5) so the pattern is a bit easier to do. Even with the slow BPM, this is pretty much more of a playability suggestion.
00:06:079 (6079|0,6079|6,6079|4,6079|2,6079|3) - 5-note chords is too strong for the drum snare and crash alone. 3-note chord or 4-note chord should be enough for that.
00:10:021 (10021|5,10240|4,10458|3,10677|2) - The piano's pitch is ascending but the LNs here are descending in pattern. Try to find a way to reverse the LN arrangement here for piano pitch relevancy.
Here's a
pattern suggestion for this portion of the song. This one avoids some 1/2 shielding while keeping pitch relevancy in check.
00:14:181 - Add a note here for the hi-hat.
00:18:123 (18123|5,18342|4,18561|3) - Should be an LN trill to follow piano pitch relevancy here
00:21:845 (21845|6,21845|4) - Switch these around by column for guitar pitch
00:22:721 (22721|6) - Move to 4 for a better pattern flow
00:25:130 (25130|4) - Move to 6, then 00:25:349 (25349|5,25349|6) - move LN to 5 for pitch and move regular note to 7 for better synergy
00:31:480 (31480|0) - Move to 2 for better playability
00:40:896 (40896|6,41115|4,41334|5,41553|3,41772|4,41991|2,42429|1) - The current LN pattern seems a little random, so try to rearrange the notes around and arrange the LNs based on e-guitar pitch for the best effect.
00:44:838 (44838|0,45057|1,45276|2,45495|3) - These should be in a descending pattern to follow the electric guitar pitch here.
00:46:590 (46590|6) - I don't really see a reason why that minijack's there as it doesn't really fit with the music. Move to 5 to avoid mini-jack
01:00:276 (60276|3) - Move this note down to 01:00:057 - since the drum actually starts there
01:01:261 (61261|5) - Move to 2 to put in a little vocal pitch relevancy for the left hand
01:03:232 (63232|5,63232|6) - Remove one of the notes here, 4-note chords are a bit much to express the e-guitar and drum alone.
01:09:692 - Missing drum note here
01:18:561 - Maybe add a note here so this little section doesn't feel a bit empty? Same suggestion for 01:18:670 - .
01:23:159 (83159|1) - Move to 1 for better flow
01:24:364 - Missing snare note
01:24:692 (84692|6,84692|0) - Move to 2, 6 respectively for comfortability.