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BoA - MASAYUME CHASING (Speed Up Ver.) [OsuMania]

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streeteelf
439 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
streeteelf
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 17 wrze?nia 2015 at 22:33:40

Artist: BoA
Title: MASAYUME CHASING (Speed Up Ver.)
Source: FAIRY TAIL
Tags: ???????? ?? Chasing Graspable Dreams Opening 15 Sayonara Trance J-Pop Nightcore TV Size Short Speed Up
BPM: 151
Filesize: 2401kb
Play Time: 01:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. EZ - 4Key (1,17 stars, 167 notes)
  2. HD - 4Key (2,35 stars, 393 notes)
  3. NM - 4Key (1,51 stars, 235 notes)
Download: BoA - MASAYUME CHASING (Speed Up Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first osu!mania beatmap. I hope it's not too diffucult and nice to play with my mapstyle. :P

All credits to Gero for mp3 and BG.

Thanks to all modders <3

22.02.15 - complete remap all diffs with a little more experienced style
Last edited by streeteelf , edited 20 times in total.
Danielslz9
222 posts
Joined April 2014
Danielslz9
Hi from Modding Queue
Column Format |1|2|3|4|

[General]
Preview Point in 00:37:469
Reduce the Audio. 60% I think it's ok

[EZ]
00:04:864 Move to 4

[NM]
00:19:973 Move the LN in 2 to 1
00:20:769 Move the LN in 3 to 4

00:47:807 This part I suggest to change the pattern. It's not Harmonic

I suggest
2 notes in every white Line.
1 note in every red line
since 00:47:409 until 00:49:030

[HD]
00:00:689 Delete a note the sound it's no so strong
00:02:279
00:03:870
00:05:460

00:07:250 Add a note.
00:08:840
00:10:431
00:29:715
streeteelf
439 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
streeteelf

Danielslz9 wrote:

Hi from Modding Queue
Column Format |1|2|3|4|

[General]
Preview Point in 00:37:469 - fixed
Reduce the Audio. 60% I think it's ok - fixed

[EZ]
00:04:864 Move to 4 - fixed

[NM]
00:19:973 Move the LN in 2 to 1 - fixed
00:20:769 Move the LN in 3 to 4 - fixed

00:47:807 This part I suggest to change the pattern. It's not Harmonic

I suggest
2 notes in every white Line.
1 note in every red line
since 00:47:409 until 00:49:030 - fixed

[HD]
00:00:689 Delete a note the sound it's no so strong - all fixed
00:02:279
00:03:870
00:05:460

00:07:250 Add a note. - all fixed
00:08:840
00:10:431
00:29:715
Thanks for mod. :P Maybe I'm a little ingenuous for my hope this getting ranked, but, maybe it'll be. :)
juankristal
osu! Alumni
1,408 posts
Joined August 2010
juankristal
Hi Hi ! From #modreq with a little mod trying to help :3

HD

00:30:113 (30113|3,30113|1) - Maybe make it a single note?
00:30:312 (30312|2,30312|0) - Double note here (drum)

00:37:270 (37270|3) - You can add a note there

NM

00:00:689 (689|1) - How about adding a note at the end of that LN?
00:02:279 (2279|1) - Same
00:03:870 (3870|3) - Same
00:04:864 (4864|1) - I dont like that LN, maybe making it shorter? 00:05:659 - should be fine i guess. And the same of the others, maybe adding a note at the end of each one.

00:11:226 (11226|0) - Dont know why this LN is shorter than the HD one, maybe a change in one of them?

00:35:083 (35083|0,35083|1,35083|2,35083|3) - Maaybe Quad Note is too much, another double is fine but is your choice

00:37:270 (37270|3) - Add a note if you want

EZ


00:41:445 (41445|1) - Add a note

The other seems fine at least for me :P


Hope you like it, good luck with the map!
DarkSider2442
220 posts
Joined October 2011
DarkSider2442
Hi! From Kivi's random queue.
|1|2|3|4|
EZ
Add LN to 2 from 00:00:689 - to 00:01:285 -
Add LN to 3 from 00:02:279 - to 00:02:876 -
Add LN to 1 from 00:03:870 - to 00:04:466 -
Add LN to 3 from 00:05:460 - to 00:06:057 -
End this 00:06:454 (6454|0) - LN at 00:07:051 -
Add LN to 3 from 00:07:051 - to 00:07:647 -
End this 00:08:045 (8045|3) - LN at 00:08:641 -
Add LN to 3 from 00:08:641 - to 00:09:238 -
End this 00:09:635 (9635|1) - LN at 00:10:232 -
Add LN to 4 from 00:10:232 - to 00:10:828 -
End this 00:11:226 (11226|2) - LN at 00:11:822 -
Add LN to 4 from 00:11:822 - to 00:12:419 -
^ Same in other diffs
00:12:021 (12021|0) - move to 4, 00:12:419 (12419|3) - move to 3
00:19:973 (19973|2) - move to 2
00:20:371 - add note to 4
00:21:962 - add note to 3
00:23:552 (23552|3) - move to 1
00:23:950 (23950|1) - move to 3
00:29:318 (29318|0) - delete
00:29:914 (29914|1) - move to 4
00:30:113 (30113|0) - delete
00:30:312 - add note to 2
00:30:510 (30510|3) - delete
00:30:709 (30709|0) - move to 3
00:30:908 (30908|3) - delete
00:31:107 - add note to 2
00:38:662 - add note to 3
00:39:457 - add note to 1
00:41:445 - add note to 4
00:41:843 (41843|0) - move to 00:41:445 -
00:41:843 - add note
00:45:024 - add note to 4
00:45:819 - add note to 2
00:52:181 (52181|1) - delete
00:53:374 (53374|3,53771|0) - delete
00:55:362 (55362|1) - delete
00:58:543 (58543|1) - delete
00:59:735 (59735|0,60133|1) - delete
01:00:928 (60928|3,61724|2) - delete
01:03:712 (63712|3) - move to 3
NM
00:06:355 (6355|0) - delete
00:11:822 - add note to 1
00:13:214 - add note to 4
00:13:612 - add note to 1
00:14:804 - add note to 1
00:15:202 - add note to 4
00:17:389 (17389|1) - delete
00:19:576 - add note to 1
00:19:973 - add note to 4
00:20:769 (20769|0) - move to 3
00:21:166 - add note to 1
00:21:564 - add note to 4
00:22:359 - add note to 3
00:22:757 - add note to 2
00:23:154 - add note to 3
00:23:552 - add note to 1
00:24:546 - add note to 3
00:25:938 - add note to 2
00:26:335 - add note to 3
00:26:733 - add note to 2
00:27:528 (27528|1) - move to 1
00:28:721 (28721|2) - move to 4
00:30:113 (30113|2) - delete
00:30:312 - add note to 2
00:30:510 (30510|3) - delete
00:30:709 (30709|1) - move to 4
00:30:908 (30908|0) - delete
00:31:107 - add note to 3
00:31:306 (31306|0,31504|1,31703|2) - change to simple notes
00:37:270 - add note to 1
00:40:252 - add note to 2
00:46:614 - add note to 3
00:47:807 (47807|0,48204|0) - delete
00:48:602 (48602|3,49000|3) - delete
HD
00:06:355 (6355|3) - delete
00:06:454 (6454|2) - move to 4
00:00:291 - 00:00:490 - add note
00:01:882 - 00:02:081 - add note
00:03:472 - 00:03:671 - add note
00:05:063 - 00:05:262 - 00:05:460 - add note
00:06:653 - 00:06:852 - add note
00:08:244 - 00:08:443 - add note
00:09:834 - 00:10:033 - add note
00:11:822 - add note
00:12:618 - add note to 2, 00:12:717 - add note to 4
00:13:413 - add note
00:14:606 - add note
00:15:003 - add note
00:16:991 (16991|0) - delete
00:17:787 - add note
00:18:184 - add note
00:18:979 - 00:19:079 - add note
00:19:278 (19278|2) - delete
00:19:775 - add note
00:20:868 (20868|1) - delete
00:21:365 - add note
00:22:160 - add note
00:22:459 (22459|3,22657|1,22856|1,23055|1) - delete
00:23:353 - add note
00:25:341 - 00:25:441 - add note
00:26:932 (26932|2) - delete
00:27:329 - add note
00:28:125 - add note
00:31:107 - add note
00:31:703 - add note
00:33:095 - add note
00:33:493 - add note
00:34:487 - add note
00:36:674 - add note
00:37:270 - add note
:o
00:38:463 - 00:38:860 - 00:40:053 - 00:40:451 - 00:41:246 - 00:41:644 - 00:42:041 - 00:42:837 - 00:43:234 - 00:43:632 - 00:44:029 - add note
00:44:328 (44328|3) - delete
00:44:825 - 00:45:222 - 00:45:620 - 00:46:018 - 00:46:216 - 00:46:415 - 00:46:813 - 00:47:608 - add note
01:04:904 (64904|2,64904|1) - delete

Good luck! :)
TTGL
46 posts
Joined May 2013
TTGL
Heyo!

From Hawxx's Modding Queue that will pierce the heavens!

Column : \1\2\3\4\

Alright, let's start with a general mod.

General.


Disable letterboxing and countdown in all difficulties since it isn't allowed in mania.

The OD is a bit low for EZ diff, I'd say you should make it 7 as well as for NM diff and maybe 8 for HD.

There appears to be some mistakes in your NM difficulty, make sure to fix them.
00:09:635 (9635|2) - the end of this LN isn't snapped
00:10:231 (10231|0) - this note isn't snapped either
00:10:430 (10430|1) - neither is this note

Now for your HD difficulty, there was an object overlapping, make sure you fix this.
00:59:735 (59735|1) - at the end of this LN there is another note overlapping it.

Mod.


EZ
00:06:057 (6057|1) - I'd say you should delete this note, it's place quite awkwardly.
00:06:454 (6454|0) - make this LN end at 00:07:051 -
00:07:250 - and put a note in column 3 here
00:08:045 (8045|3) - make this LN end at 00:08:641 -
00:08:840 - and put a note in column 3 as well.
00:09:635 (9635|1) - this LN end at 00:10:232 -
00:10:431 - place a note in column 1
00:20:371 - ^
00:21:962 - note in 3
00:29:318 (29318|0,30113|0,30709|0) - these 3 notes seem to be mapped to the vocal, from what I've seen it's kinda frowned up in o!m but if it's your style and you don't wanna remove them then you can keep them I guess.
00:38:264 (38264|0) - this LN should end at 00:38:960 -
00:39:059 (39059|2) - this LN should end at 00:39:556 -
00:41:445 - note in 2

HD
(Did a short HD mod and no NM mod due to the in-depth easy mod, it took me quite some time e_e)

00:19:278 (19278|2) - remove this note
00:20:868 (20868|1) - ^
00:22:359 (22359|2,22459|3,22558|2,22657|1,22757|2,22856|1,22956|0,23055|1,23154|3,23154|0) - this pattern is doesn't even go to the beat, I'd suggest you'd change it so it fits to the background instruments (there's piano in the bg so you can use that for LN)
00:25:349 - add note here
00:26:932 (26932|2) - delete
00:31:121 - add a note

Another thing to note is in your diffs you seem to map your vocals a lot... I'd suggest you should look over them and delete them or maybe only map some of them in case you want that to be your style; there is a piano (or some kind of other instrument) in the background music that you could use for a lot of LN in your diffs.

Well then that's it, an in-depth mod for EZ and a short mod for HD, reason why I didn't mod NM is because this mod took quite some time haha; either way, not a bad map for your first! Keep on working and I'm sure this will get ranked! :D
Bad Apple
307 posts
Joined April 2014
Bad Apple
Hey there! :D
Here's the mod from my queue.

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
Colors:
  • Red = Huge flaw, must be fixed!
    Blue = Minor flaw, should be fixed.
    Green= Suggestion what could be changed.
    Purple = Random Comment on something.
- Easy -
00:00:689 - add a single note on 3 here. (Isn't too hard for newer players, but you need to map the second hearable tone!)
00:01:683 (1683|3) - Move this to column 3 for balancing. (the Intro has 4 LN's, two of them on 4, none on 3).
00:02:279 - add a single note on 1 here (Same reason as above)
00:03:870 - add a note on 4 (again :D)
00:05:460 - aaand a note on 2 here :)
00:06:057 - If you added the note on 2 before, move this to 3. (for hand-balancing :) )
-
00:06:454 (6454|0) - this one should end here; 00:07:051 - . Try to add a single note here, like above. (BN's and BAT's get mad if LN's are longer than the sound actually is :D)
00:07:250 - Now, to make the second part of the intro different to the one before, I would add a single note on line 2 here, to map the "clap" that's in the song.
00:08:045 (8045|3) - this one should end here aswell; 00:08:641 - . I would, yet again, add a single note on 2 here, like before.
00:08:840 - Maybe a note on 3 here to get the clap again.
00:09:635 (9635|1) - this one needs to end here; 00:10:232 - , also add a single note here on 4. :)
00:10:431 - add a note on 1 here for the clap. (I chose 1 and not 3 since we already had 3 before)
00:11:226 (11226|2) - let this one end here; 00:11:822 - , try to keep LN's just as long as the sound you're trying to map :).
00:11:822 - add a note here on line 1 (so it matches the pattern used before)
-
I like how you tried to map the drum-fill that starts at 00:11:822 - . However, I think you could make it a little bit harder, here is my suggestion;
00:12:021 (12021|0,12419|3) - remove these notes!
00:12:021 - add one on 4 here, 00:12:220 - one on 3 here, 00:12:419 - a note on 2 here and 00:12:618 - a note on 1 here. :)
It plays alot harder, but it doesn't increases the difficulty too much but still challenges the player. It's nice not to get a S at the first try, so newer plays have to work towards it! :D
-
00:12:816 - I also like the decision to map the kick-drum here, but be careful, if you decide to map one element of the song, you need to keep it consistent, that means, you need to map every single kick-drum from that point on. (of course, there are some exceptions, for example during guitar solos, but you get the general idea.
00:20:371 - this means, you need to add the kick drum here. (maybe on 1)
00:21:962 - same here, I would suggest to add one on 1 again.
With these notes added, this part plays exactly the same for over 10 seconds (which can get boring) so here are some suggestions to spice this part up a little bit;
00:17:588 - Remove the note on 4, add one on 1 and add a LN that ends here; 00:18:781 -
The LN supports the long vocal really well and makes it more interesting to play.
00:23:950 - I would do the same thing here. Move the note to line 3, add a LN that ends here; 00:24:745 - .
00:24:347 - have a note on 2 here
00:24:745 - and one on 4 here :)
00:24:745 - Now, we have a drumfill starting here again, which I would definitely include. Since we already used stairs in the fill before (stairs means 4->3->2->1 or 1->2->3->4), I would change the pattern into a burst (4->2->3->1 or 1->3->2->4) to mix things up a little bit.
This means we would have to...
00:24:944 - add one on 2 here
00:25:143 - add one on 3 here
00:25:341 - and a note on 1 here :)
This yet again makes the song a little harder, but also more rewarding and more challenging to play for newer players. They also have to learn a "new" pattern for that, which sets them up for harder songs that use that pattern later on :)
00:25:143 (25143|0) - I can't really agree with the LN here. For the drums in the background, I would use single notes, at the same time, the LN doesn't follow any instrument or the vocals, so I would remove it and do the following;
-
Here, we have the same problem mentioned above. You do follow the kick-drum, but it gets a little boring after some time, so I would add LN's again. Here's my suggestion;
00:27:131 - have an LN start here and end here; 00:28:323 - to map the long vocals.
00:27:528 - move this note on 1 :)
00:29:119 - This part is a little tricky and it's a mistake that almost every new mapper makes, so don't worry!
Now, Osu!Mania mostly focuses on the instruments - ideally a piano or synthesizer, but also bass, guitar and drums - and - in some RARE cases - the vocals. This means, you should try to avoid mapping vocals as much as you can, or only map them when there is nothing else to use. (for example, we added the LN's to make the part, that used the kick-drum, more interesting. The focus still lies on the kick-drum pattern!).
In our case, the main pattern is the kick drum, which still beats at the same speed, so you need to remove the notes, that only follow the vocal part.
These notes are;
00:29:318 - remove!
00:30:113 - this one, too!
00:30:510 - aaand this one :D
00:30:908 - and this is the last one :)
Instead, try to follow the kick-drum pattern as usual, which means...
00:30:312 - add a note here, maybe on 4
00:31:107 - add a note here (on 2?)
Now that we've fixed that, lets spice it up a little bit again, and add a longnote for the vocals.
00:33:493 - add the LN here and let it end on 00:34:685 - , remove the note on 4 and move it over to column line 2.
This next part focuses on the vocals again, as I said, try to avoid that, here is my suggestion;
00:35:083 - move this note on line 1
00:35:481 (35481|0,35878|1) - - remove those two.
You can leave the 3rd LN as it is, since it highlights the bass-drop in the background of the song.
00:35:481 - There is a very silent clap hearable here, if you don't want big gap between those two notes, you could add a single note on line 2 here.
-
Here, I would try to map the drumfill again, I tried to combine the previously mentioned two patterns into a big fill (to make the song more challenging and rewarding to play :) ), here is my suggestion for this part;
Add notes on the following places;
00:36:872 - add note on 2
00:37:071 - move this to line 3
00:37:270 - add note on 1
00:37:469 - move this to line 2
00:37:668 - add note on 3
00:37:866 - note on line 4 :)
00:38:065 - add a note on line 3 here.
00:38:264 - and move the single note from 4 to line 2 for handbalancing reasons :)
-
At this point, you need to keep the kick-pattern constant again, so we have to add notes at several during the refrain.
00:38:662 - add a note on 4 here
00:39:059 - add on on 2 here
00:39:457 - add a note on 1 here
00:40:849 - you've mapped the clapping at a later point of the song, so try to add it here aswell (maybe on line 2)
00:41:445 - missing kick-drum here, add on line 1
00:41:843 (41843|0) - this LN follows no hearable part of the song (BAT's and BN's get mad here again :D) so remove it and add one note on 2 where the LN starts instead :)
Same problem as mentioned above here, you've added LNs for the clearly hearable vocals, which is fine, but don't forget to keep the kick-drum-pattern consistent.
00:44:626 - add one on 1
00:45:024 - and one on line 2 here
00:45:421 - single note on line 4 here
00:45:819 - and last but not least a single note on line 2 here. :)
00:50:590 - I would remove the single note here and replace it with a LN that ends here; 00:50:988 -
-
00:52:578 - I would move this note to line 1 (so you don't get a double-tap on 2)
00:52:976 - If you've moved the note mentioned above, move this note to line 3 now :)
00:56:952 - I would remove this not yet again and replace it with a LN as suggested before, ending at; 00:57:350 -
00:58:145 - same suggestion as before, move this note from 2 to 4 to avoid the double-tap :D
00:58:940 - and then I would rearrange this note from line 4 to 1 (for hand-balancing reason).
-
01:02:121 - Here, there is another drum-fill that I would try to map. It makes for a nice outro and ignoring it after mapping the previously mentioned drum-fills would kinda break the pattern :) I would suggestion the following;
01:02:320 - add a note on 2 here
01:02:718 - add a note on line 4 here
01:02:916 - move this to line 3 :)
01:03:115 - place a note on line 2
01:03:314 - move this to line 1
01:03:513 - place a note on column 2
01:03:712 - add a note on line 3 here (since you have the kick-drum AND the vocals on this part of the song. :) )

I know, it might seem like a lot of mistakes, but most of them are completely normal for every person that just started mapping mania-maps.
My goal is, to try and help people get into making maps, rather than editing their maps for complete perfection.
I think, your maps will improve if you follow my suggestions, most of them are general mistakes that I made when I started out with mapping mania aswell. (some of them I still do, lol).
Don't give up and try to correct those mistakes in the future.

My suggestion would be, that you try to correct those mistakes for the Normal and Hard Difficulty on your own, I would only repeat myself several times.
Once you've done that, you can message me and I'll take a quick look over them if you want so. :)

If you want to play-test the map with all my suggestions, I've uploaded it on dropbox, you can check it out if you want. :)
(https://www.dropbox.com/s/a2mmv6oo2cyl6 ... D.osu?dl=0)

Best of luck for your future maps and I hope I could help you out with mapping in general. :D
Bad Apple

:idea: P.S.: If you want and if you like my version of the song, you can add my version as a Guest Difficulty. That would be reaaally cool. :D
streeteelf
439 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
streeteelf
Wow, so many mods at the same time. :P

Most of them are applied and I don't really remember which not. :D

Thanks to 3 of you for mods. :3
schwarzvgrune
1,214 posts
Joined April 2014
schwarzvgrune
from grun's mania modding queue

general
don't believe AiMod telling you the difficulty, its unsuitable and not applicable for mania.
your HD is unrankable, you have NM blue icon. HD should have a minimums star of 2.26
below 2.26 the icon becomes NM, which denotes atm you have 2 normal maps, and no hard, thus your HD is unrankable.


apply to all diffs

your SFX is too loud, consider decreasing to 30 / 40% its disturbing on higher diffs

1 2 3 4

SPOILER
ill focus on hand balance
pitch relevancy

00:03:870 (3870|2) - move to 4
00:17:985 (17985|1) - 3

the rest are okay, i can't give judgment since you'll have to raise the difficulty to meet the criteria
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
At the least could you give me the credits for the mp3 and the background since you've stolen them from my mapset also if I'm not wrong your source should be FAIRY TAIL.
Frim4503
2,067 posts
Joined July 2013
Frim4503

col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7
General
00:38:264 - until 00:50:988 - make ass KIAI time
source Fairy Tail

EZ
00:25:143 - untill 00:25:540 - add LN to 3
00:28:323 - add note
00:41:445 (41445|0) - remove. which sound do you follow ?
NM
00:12:618 - add note
00:29:119 (29119|3,29318|2,29516|1) - change to normal note.not suitable for LN
00:35:481 (35481|3) - wrong place. move to 00:36:276 (36276|3) -

HD
00:35:481 (35481|0,35878|2) - remove.change with normal note
00:41:843 (41843|0) - remove
00:43:035 (43035|2,43234|3) - ctrl + G

please add Gero in creator word for BG and Mp3
streeteelf
439 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
streeteelf

schwarzvgrune wrote:

from grun's mania modding queue

general
don't believe AiMod telling you the difficulty, its unsuitable and not applicable for mania.
your HD is unrankable, you have NM blue icon. HD should have a minimums star of 2.26
below 2.26 the icon becomes NM, which denotes atm you have 2 normal maps, and no hard, thus your HD is unrankable.


apply to all diffs

your SFX is too loud, consider decreasing to 30 / 40% its disturbing on higher diffs

1 2 3 4

SPOILER
ill focus on hand balance
pitch relevancy

00:03:870 (3870|2) - move to 4
00:17:985 (17985|1) - 3

the rest are okay, i can't give judgment since you'll have to raise the difficulty to meet the criteria
All applied, thanks. :)

Gero wrote:

At the least could you give me the credits for the mp3 and the background since you've stolen them from my mapset also if I'm not wrong your source should be FAIRY TAIL.
Sry Gero, forgot to do it when uploading, later also, but I've done it now, thanks for reminding me.

Frim4503 wrote:


col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7
General
00:38:264 - until 00:50:988 - make ass KIAI time
source Fairy Tail

EZ
00:25:143 - untill 00:25:540 - add LN to 3
00:28:323 - add note
00:41:445 (41445|0) - remove. which sound do you follow ?
NM
00:12:618 - add note
00:29:119 (29119|3,29318|2,29516|1) - change to normal note.not suitable for LN
00:35:481 (35481|3) - wrong place. move to 00:36:276 (36276|3) -

HD
00:35:481 (35481|0,35878|2) - remove.change with normal note
00:41:843 (41843|0) - remove
00:43:035 (43035|2,43234|3) - ctrl + G

please add Gero in creator word for BG and Mp3
All applied, thanks. :)
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18

Frim4503 wrote:

please add Gero in creator word for BG and Mp3
Even Gero helped streeteelf with Mp3 and BG , @streeteelf Don't add Gero at tags if he helped you with just BG and Mp3 . A mapper is added to tags if he help you with : making SB , making GD etc.

Thanks for understand ~ PS no kudosu for this
streeteelf
439 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
streeteelf

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Frim4503 wrote:

please add Gero in creator word for BG and Mp3
Even Gero helped streeteelf with Mp3 and BG , @streeteelf Don't add Gero at tags if he helped you with just BG and Mp3 . A mapper is added to tags if he help you with : making SB , making GD etc.

Thanks for understand ~ PS no kudosu for this
Ye, I know, that's why I wrote about him in Creator's words, not tags. :P
Frim4503
2,067 posts
Joined July 2013
Frim4503
good to hear :D
[ C r a c k ]
172 posts
Joined November 2013
[ C r a c k ]
Hi streeteelf :)
Here as your request in HarbyCrack Modding Team for Osu!Mania sorry for late ;w;

General :
Click Me!
BPM: 151 ✓ (you have set BPM on 150,898 x)
Offset: 86 or 00:00:086 - ✓ (you have set offset at 93 x)
Do not forget to resnap all notes, Preview Point & SVs in all difficulties !
Call me back when you have done all, I will check your notes !
Bye ~ :) my 100st post yay
Harbyter
Beatmap Nominator
1,364 posts
Joined October 2011
Harbyter
hy from my queue

Column-1-2-3-4-

[HD]


00:17:569 (17569|1) - suggest to remove ,no need for a triple here

00:26:708 (26708|1) - move in col 3 for balance

00:27:304 (27304|0,27503|2,27701|3) - move those note in col 3 4 3 for balance

00:30:085 (30085|3) - remove, no need a double here

00:30:483 (30483|1) - col 4 for abetter flow of patterns

00:35:450 (35450|0,35648|2,35847|1,36046|3,36244|1) - you followed the vocal with those note so add a note 00:35:251 - here ,cause vocal starts here

00:41:807 - add note 1 for clap

00:42:602 - add note 2 for clap

00:44:191 - add note 1 for clap

00:44:986 (44986|1,44986|2,45185|0,45384|3,45384|2,45582|0,45781|0,45781|1) - suggest to rearrange like this


00:47:172 - add note 1 for the clap and 00:47:370 (47370|0) - move this in col 3

00:47:569 (47569|2) - col 2 for balance and 00:47:768 (47768|1) - col 4 same reason



after you apply those add a new redline here

seems like there is a reset of the metronome in that point
streeteelf
439 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
streeteelf

Harbyter wrote:

hy from my queue

Column-1-2-3-4-

[HD]


00:17:569 (17569|1) - suggest to remove ,no need for a triple here

00:26:708 (26708|1) - move in col 3 for balance

00:27:304 (27304|0,27503|2,27701|3) - move those note in col 3 4 3 for balance

00:30:085 (30085|3) - remove, no need a double here

00:30:483 (30483|1) - col 4 for abetter flow of patterns

00:35:450 (35450|0,35648|2,35847|1,36046|3,36244|1) - you followed the vocal with those note so add a note 00:35:251 - here ,cause vocal starts here

00:41:807 - add note 1 for clap

00:42:602 - add note 2 for clap

00:44:191 - add note 1 for clap

00:44:986 (44986|1,44986|2,45185|0,45384|3,45384|2,45582|0,45781|0,45781|1) - suggest to rearrange like this


00:47:172 - add note 1 for the clap and 00:47:370 (47370|0) - move this in col 3

00:47:569 (47569|2) - col 2 for balance and 00:47:768 (47768|1) - col 4 same reason



after you apply those add a new redline here

seems like there is a reset of the metronome in that point
All applied, thanks for mod. :3 IMO now it's a lot better.
_underjoy
704 posts
Joined January 2013
_underjoy
EZ:
SPOILER
00:30:284 (30284|3) - do 2 kolumny, ten doubletap jakoś tu nie pasuje
00:31:079 (31079|1) - zastąpić holdem?
00:40:241 (40241|0) - do 4 kolumny, fajny double tap się robi a znika niepotrzebny trill
00:52:162 (52162|2) - jump?
00:53:354 (53354|1,53751|2) - dwa jumpy, może 14 14? albo coś takiego
00:55:341 (55341|2) - również można zrobić jumpa
w drugiej części to samo
01:02:890 (62890|2,63089|1,63486|1) - usunąłbym
01:03:288 (63288|0) - slider?

NM:
SPOILER
00:18:364 (18364|2,18364|1) - bardziej kosmetyczna zmiana, usunąłbym jeden z tapów
00:38:033 - brakuje nutki, 1 kolumna?
00:41:036 (41036|2) - zrobiłbym jumpa
00:47:394 (47394|0) - to samo
00:51:864 (51864|3) - ciężka sprawa z tymi trillami, nie jestem pewien czy pasują, możnaby wyciąć tą notkę.
00:52:658 (52658|2,53056|1) - te też, i generalnie późniejsze trille
00:53:354 (53354|3) - tutaj opcjonalnie mogą być handy, jumpy też pasują
01:04:281 - notka w 4?
I możesz gdzieniegdzie powstawiać jumpy jeśli chcesz podbić star rating

HD:
SPOILER
00:00:284 - myślę że mógłbyś dać w tym całym początku też notki za gitarkę w tle (czyli w każdym sliderze po 2 notki brakuje)
00:37:039 (37039|2) - usunąć jedną z nich?
00:41:036 (41036|0) - te jumpy pasują do doubletapa, zmieniłbym na 23
00:47:195 (47195|1) - ale te nie, bo przed nimi jest slider (więc brzmią ok)
00:52:162 (52162|2) - pasują handy. Przy okazji, tutaj te trille pasują bo hard :D
00:53:354 (53354|2,53553|1,53751|3,53751|0) - środkową bym wyciął, a dwie pozostałe zamienił na jumpy (albo handy)
01:01:102 (61102|3) - 2? bardziej kosmetyczna zmiana
01:04:281 - dałbym tu nutkę
01:04:877 (64877|1) - a stąd usunął

Większość z tego to niewielkie zmiany, bardzo podoba mi się twój styl mapowania. GOOD JOB
streeteelf
439 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
streeteelf

TheZiemniax wrote:

EZ:
SPOILER
00:30:284 (30284|3) - do 2 kolumny, ten doubletap jakoś tu nie pasuje
00:31:079 (31079|1) - zastąpić holdem?
00:40:241 (40241|0) - do 4 kolumny, fajny double tap się robi a znika niepotrzebny trill
00:52:162 (52162|2) - jump?
00:53:354 (53354|1,53751|2) - dwa jumpy, może 14 14? albo coś takiego
00:55:341 (55341|2) - również można zrobić jumpa
w drugiej części to samo
01:02:890 (62890|2,63089|1,63486|1) - usunąłbym
01:03:288 (63288|0) - slider?

NM:
SPOILER
00:18:364 (18364|2,18364|1) - bardziej kosmetyczna zmiana, usunąłbym jeden z tapów
00:38:033 - brakuje nutki, 1 kolumna?
00:41:036 (41036|2) - zrobiłbym jumpa
00:47:394 (47394|0) - to samo
00:51:864 (51864|3) - ciężka sprawa z tymi trillami, nie jestem pewien czy pasują, możnaby wyciąć tą notkę.
00:52:658 (52658|2,53056|1) - te też, i generalnie późniejsze trille
00:53:354 (53354|3) - tutaj opcjonalnie mogą być handy, jumpy też pasują
01:04:281 - notka w 4?
I możesz gdzieniegdzie powstawiać jumpy jeśli chcesz podbić star rating

HD:
SPOILER
00:00:284 - myślę że mógłbyś dać w tym całym początku też notki za gitarkę w tle (czyli w każdym sliderze po 2 notki brakuje)
00:37:039 (37039|2) - usunąć jedną z nich?
00:41:036 (41036|0) - te jumpy pasują do doubletapa, zmieniłbym na 23
00:47:195 (47195|1) - ale te nie, bo przed nimi jest slider (więc brzmią ok)
00:52:162 (52162|2) - pasują handy. Przy okazji, tutaj te trille pasują bo hard :D
00:53:354 (53354|2,53553|1,53751|3,53751|0) - środkową bym wyciął, a dwie pozostałe zamienił na jumpy (albo handy)
01:01:102 (61102|3) - 2? bardziej kosmetyczna zmiana
01:04:281 - dałbym tu nutkę
01:04:877 (64877|1) - a stąd usunął

Większość z tego to niewielkie zmiany, bardzo podoba mi się twój styl mapowania. GOOD JOB
Niemal wszystko wbite, no może poza usuwaniem nutek z HD, bo to mi zbiło do 2.2*, a potrzebuję minimum 2.26* :P Dziękować. :v
Padge14
111 posts
Joined October 2013
Padge14
Quick Review

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:483 - (Suggestion) Add a note
    00:02:072 - (Suggestion) Add a note
    00:03:662 - (Suggestion) Add a note
    01:04:877 - Maybe add a timing section to down the hitsound ( Soft or a 5% audio Normal )
Other dif. seems fine.
streeteelf
439 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
streeteelf

Padge14 wrote:

Quick Review

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:483 - (Suggestion) Add a note
    00:02:072 - (Suggestion) Add a note
    00:03:662 - (Suggestion) Add a note
    01:04:877 - Maybe add a timing section to down the hitsound ( Soft or a 5% audio Normal )
Other dif. seems fine.
Small mod, but right points IMO posted. :) Especially last, I didn't think about this. :P Thanks. :3
Kruzon
1,023 posts
Joined December 2013
Kruzon


Hi, I'm sorry for the late modding. I literally found your map lying un-modded in our queue, therefore decided to mod it
My 4K Column Format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

Easy

00:00:086 (86|0,682|2) - Try to plot them with Pitch Relevancy, I suggest to Ctrl + H them
00:01:675 (1675|3) - move to 3, better flow

00:16:377 (16377|0) - move to 3, flow
00:16:774 (16774|2) - move to 1
00:18:761 (18761|2) - move to 1
00:19:158 (19158|0) - move to 3

00:19:556 (19556|3) - move to 2
00:19:953 (19953|1) - move to 4, implement pattern repetition 00:20:350 (20350|0,20748|2,21145|1,21542|3) -
00:22:337 (22337|1) - move to 1
00:22:735 (22735|2) - move to 2
00:23:132 (23132|1) - move to 4
00:23:529 (23529|0) - move to 3
00:23:927 (23927|2) - move to 4
00:25:119 (25119|1) - move to 3, and 00:25:516 (25516|3) - move to 1

00:27:503 (27503|0) - place it to 4 for pitch
00:27:900 (27900|2) - move to 1 for flow

00:28:695 (28695|0,29092|1,29489|2,29887|3) - not supposed to be a stair, doesn't match with the rhythm. you should implement repetition here, listen closely to the sound at this point. therefore, my suggestion:
00:28:695 (28695|0) - move to 3
00:29:887 (29887|3) - move to 2, a zig zag will do for proper notes presentation 00:28:695 (28695|2,29092|1,29489|2,29887|1) -

00:30:284 (30284|1) - move to 1
00:31:476 (31476|0) - move to 4, pr
00:32:271 (32271|1) - doesn't match if included with the stairs, suggest to move to 1
00:33:066 (33066|0) - move to 2
00:34:655 (34655|2) - move to 1
00:35:052 (35052|0) - move to 3

00:37:238 (37238|0) - ghost note, or rather, irrelevant at this point for an Easy, suggest to delete it

00:38:231 (38231|1,38652|3,39049|1,39447|0) - listen to the chorus, suggest to implement repetition of pattern here, i suggest to simply move 00:39:447 (39447|0) - to 4

00:39:844 (39844|1,40241|3,40639|3) - meaningless jacks and seemingly randomize pattern, perhaps: implement stair pattern here since the momentum is slowly going down, therefore:
00:39:844 (39844|1) - move to 3
00:40:241 (40241|3) - move to 2
00:40:639 (40639|3) - move to 1

00:43:420 (43420|2) - move to 4, note should represent highly pitch voice

00:44:612 (44612|2,44612|0,45009|1,45407|0,45407|3,45804|1) - again, i suggest you to implement repetition of pattern here, re-pattern them. there's 2 way to present this notes: 1. mirroring the pattern, by ctrl+h, and 2. simply cloned them, without displacing the notes from their respective column

00:48:983 (48983|1) - move to 3, better flow imo

00:51:367 (51367|1,51764|0) - why cut the stairs? it's better of as a stair, resuming these stair stream of yours 00:49:380 (49380|0,49778|1,50175|2,50572|3) -
with that being said, i suggest move 00:51:764 (51764|0) - to 3

00:54:546 (54546|3) - bad flow, move to 3
00:55:341 (55341|2) - bad flow as well, move to 2

*Optional: 00:55:738 (55738|0,56930|3) - press Ctrl+H to form a descending stair pattern instead, imo this suit the best to close off the previously ascending stair pattern

00:58:917 (58917|3) - does not belong to these stair sequences 00:57:725 (57725|0,58122|1,58519|2) - , it should be place as a new pattern base, on 1
00:59:314 (59314|1) - move to 4,
01:00:109 (60109|3) - move to 2,
01:00:506 (60506|0) - move to 4,

01:00:904 (60904|2) - move to 1
01:01:301 (61301|1) - move to 4
01:01:698 (61698|3) - move to 2, refer 01:00:904 (60904|0,61698|1) - as they are place to fit along with her vocal

- mod ends -

Good luck with your map :)
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