if you are following the sound then this LN 00:42:169 (42169|2) - should end here 00:42:308 -
00:42:378 (42378|0) - this here 00:42:516 -
00:42:586 (42586|3) - this here 00:42:898 -
00:42:898 (42898|1) - this here
then i suggest to add note in col 1 00:42:794 - and move 00:42:898 (42898|1) - in col 3
00:43:211 (43211|3) - this in col 2
00:43:419 - add a note in col 4
00:43:419 (43419|0) - this LN should start here 00:43:523 - and end here 00:43:680 -
00:43:697 (43697|1) - this ln should start here 00:43:732 - and end here 00:43:888 -
00:43:975 (43975|2) - this should start here 00:44:044 - (at first when playing it i felt strange in this pattern and i noticed that you put the note with keysound before the start of the tecno sound,i think that doesn't need )
00:47:030 (47030|2) - same here ,start here 00:47:065 -
00:47:864 (47864|1) - start here 00:47:898 -
00:48:141 (48141|2,48141|0) - start here 00:48:185 - end here 00:48:419 -
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00:50:190 - put a LN here too? feel empty maybe a Ln in col 2 and end here 00:50:294 -
00:51:961 (51961|0) - delete ,in this part of the song you followed only the battery,bass and the tecno sound, (retesting it without that note felt good)
00:53:523 (53523|3) - turn in a LN and end here 00:53:628 - (like the previous pattern
00:53:732 (53732|3) - this too
00:54:357 (54357|3,54461|1) - delete?
00:54:253 (54253|2) - turn in a LN till here 00:54:565 -
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01:23:419 - from here with the 1/4 divisor why note on the red lines only?The white lines are with the bass sound,and theire sound are more high in comparison of the sounds on the red lines.
felt always strange when playing,i missed too in this part lol
change?
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01:47:378 (107378|1) - suggest to move in col 4 for a more confortable jack
01:49:461 - no note here? the sound is like this 01:49:878 (109878|3) -
01:50:086 (110086|2) - delete,in other pattern you put only 2 notes for this sound
02:18:523 (138523|0,138732|1,138940|2,139148|3) - totally wrong here ,move all those LN 1 line above in divisor 1/4
02:19:253 (139253|2) - delete
then i suggest you to put those SV here if you done the previous changes ,i personally think they suit good for this part of the song
02:18:003 - start a SV 0.70x
02:18:419 - SV 1.50x
02:18:523 - SV 0.75x
02:18:628 - SV 1.50x
02:18:732 - Sv 0.75x
02:18:836 - Sv 1.50
ecc. ecc. till here 02:19:982 - then normal speed 1.00x here 02:20:086 -
02:25:086 - turn this pattern like the previous?With sv too maybe
02:42:794 (162794|3,163003|3,163211|3) - can't understand here,
maybe end this 02:42:794 (162794|3) - here 02:43:003 - and start 02:43:211 (163211|3) - here 02:43:107 - ??
02:58:732 - yo missing note,you can't break that combo
03:02:169 (182169|1,182221|2,182273|3) - mmm maybe here a simple one LN is better 03:02:169 - LN in col and end here 03:02:378 -
and add a note here too in col 3 03:02:065 -
03:04:669 - there's a slogan ,there aren't two without three ( ? )
03:15:503 - do here like the previos pattern with this sound?
03:20:190 - add 4
03:44:565 (224565|3,224565|1,224878|0,224878|2) - turn in note like in the previous pattern,those little LN doesn't suit for this part,otherside they should end here 03:44:878 - and here 03:45:190 -
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03:50:086 - starting from here i was stuck here around 1 hour to understand what you have done with those LN ,they are wrong ,i can tell for sure
at first i was thinking that they were a single LN that you broke in 2 LN and that was wrong but there a little restart of the tecno music that starts here
03:50:086 -
03:52:655 -
03:57:655 -
03:59:322 -
ecc. ecc. other this some LN end before they should end ,i think you have to recheck those pattern
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what i'm sure is this
03:51:475 (231475|3) - totaly wrong >
03:51:440 - here a LN and end here 03:51:544 -
03:51:544 - here start the other LN and ends here 03:52:169 -
03:51:753 (231753|2) - turn in a simple note?
03:58:107 - ^
04:02:482 (242482|2) - delete ,you havent put notes like this in the previous pattern wo why only here
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04:21:440 (261440|0) - this should end here 04:21:492 - maybe turn in a simple note?
04:21:700 - add a note and turn in a note this 04:21:648 (261648|0) -
i think you have to fill those notes too 04:22:430 - 04:22:534 -
like the previous pattern
04:34:669 - missing note
04:35:086 - ^
04:37:655 (277655|2,277724|1,277794|2,277863|3,277933|2,278002|1,278072|0,278141|1) - wrong,this is a 1/8 stream
04:44:044 (284044|1) - see this, and this 04:45:294 (285294|1,285398|2) - delete the second note
04:45:607 - where are you
04:46:857 (286857|0) - delete
04:47:898 (287898|2) - ^
04:48:315 - missing note
04:48:940 - ^
04:49:878 - add a note? it gives a better feeling before starting the stream
04:50:086 - 2 notes here,like the previous sounds
04:50:607 - add note
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2nd PART05:15:815 - missing note
05:21:648 (321648|1) - delete, drum's sounds start from here 05:20:086 - and you put only there
05:44:044 (344044|3) - delete?previous pattern there aren't a note here
06:00:086 (360086|1,360086|3,360086|2) - delete 1 note,like the previous pattern
06:00:919 - add one note ,like the previous pattern
06:29:982 - note?
06:53:628 - add
06:54:878 - ^
06:56:440 - ^
07:08:628 (428628|2) - delete,
07:09:773 - add?
07:23:836 (443836|0) - just my suggestion why don't end the LN here? 07:24:253 - this is the same for the other pattern
07:44:044 - here the rhytm start to change so add a note 2 here
07:54:200 - after some second there is a broken stair 1/8 so why don't put a note here too in 1/8
08:07:534 - ^
08:12:794 - pattern start here ,add note
08:18:836 (498836|0) - ???? delete
08:17:586 (497586|3,497586|1,498003|2) - those LN should end here 08:19:044 -
08:19:148 (499148|0) - delete
after those change at this point 08:19:044 - put a 1/2 LN in col 1
08:29:565 - add
10:07:447 (607447|0) - 10:07:430 -
10:09:114 (609114|0) - 10:09:096 -
10:10:398 (610398|1) - 10:10:346 -
10:10:659 - add
10:10:815 (610815|2) - move here 10:10:763 -
10:12:308 - you forgot one note here
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from here you messed up witht the snap of the notes
10:17:170 (617170|0) - unsnapped 10:17:169 -
10:16:753 (616753|1) - end snap bad
10:17:447 (617447|1) - move this here 10:17:430 -
10:18:420 (618420|3) - 10:18:419 - unsnapped
10:18:003 (618003|2) - resnap the end of this LN
10:19:670 (619670|0) - 10:19:669 - ^
10:19:253 (619253|1) - ^
10:20:781 (620781|3) - move here 10:20:711 -
10:20:920 (620920|3,620920|1,620920|0) - unsnapped and snapped bad they should be here 10:20:867 -
10:20:503 (620503|2) - and end this LN here too 10:20:867 - ,anyway the end of the LN was unsnapped too
10:21:753 (621753|1,622170|0) - unsnapped too
10:22:117 - start and end the LN here 10:22:117 - and move thi note too 10:22:169 (622169|3) -
10:22:170 (622170|0,622586|1,622586|2,622586|3) - all end and start here 10:22:534 -
10:22:170 (622170|0,622586|1,622586|2,622586|3) - 10:22:534 -
10:23:003 - to 10:23:766 - remap
10:23:836 (623836|2,624253|0,624253|1,624253|3) - 10:24:200 -
10:24:808 (624808|3,624947|2) - nonsense ,they shoudl be there 10:24:773 - and 10:24:878 - and here 10:24:982 - there another one tht you didn't put
10:25:190 - 10:25:294 - and you left empty here,so i think is better if you delete those note, previous pattern too
10:25:086 (625086|1,625503|0,625503|2) - 10:25:450 -
10:25:503 (625503|2,625920|3,625920|0,625920|1) - unsnapped and they should be here 10:25:867 -
10:25:920 (625920|3,626336|0,626336|2,626475|1,626614|3,626753|0,626753|1,626891|2,627030|3,627169|0,627169|2,627308|1,627447|2,627586|1,627586|3,627586|2,627725|0,627864|3,628003|0,628003|2,628141|1,628280|3,628419|1,628558|0,628697|2,628836|3,628836|1) -
remap
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10:29:721 - super mario
10:29:253 (629253|0) - end here 10:30:016 -
10:30:155 (630155|2,630225|1,630294|0,630364|3,630433|2,630503|1,630572|0,630642|3,630711|2,630781|1,630850|0,630919|3) - this can be a 1/12 too
10:57:638 (657638|3,657690|1,657742|0,657794|2,657846|3,657898|1,657950|0,658003|2,658003|1,658055|3,658107|1,658159|0,658211|2,658263|0,658315|1,658367|3) - this is a 1/6 or 1/12 not a 1/8 remap here and the other pattern like this too,i suggest like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/223801711:12:169 (672169|3,672169|1,672221|2,672378|3,672378|1,672430|2) -
little strange but i think is okay but.. 11:12:482 (672482|0) - should here 11:12:516 -
11:13:489 (673489|1,673558|2,673628|1,673697|2,673766|3) - wrong,this is a 1/8
11:15:294 - complete the pattern add note 4
11:15:711 - i think here the sound is too lound add some notes?
11:15:850 - here too
11:15:919 - ^
11:16:128 (676128|3,676180|0,676232|1,676284|2) - delete and notes here 11:16:023 - 11:16:075 - 11:16:128 -
11:16:475 - add note
11:16:648 (676648|3) - ninja note,delete it
11:19:669 - from here to here 11:23:003 - what you have done here usagi ,this map is so random
11:51:753 (711753|2) - shouldn't this LN start here? 11:51:544 - and end here 11:51:753 -
12:01:336 (721336|3) - this note is for the sound that are here 12:01:232 - and here 12:01:128 - right? but here 12:01:128 (721128|2) - the note is for the vocal .so i think you should delete this note 12:01:336 (721336|3) -