K i R a wrote:

Hi ~

Please you know, my is only suggestion. (except offset).

General

Offset: 540

Easy

-00:22:140 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing
-00:32:010 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
-00:41:063 (3) - New combo

Finish the rest ~

All fixed

Hard

-00:41:491 (1,2) - Stack end.
-00:50:039 (5) - NC (new combo) no
-00:50:254 (1) - RNC (remove new combo) ^
-01:09:617 (3) - Stack
-01:13:048 (1) - Stack
-01:36:442 (7) - Stack
-01:39:658 (1) - RNC ^
-01:39:872 (2) - NC ^
-01:45:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Its a 1/6 stream not 1/4.i think 1/4 is better ):
-02:07:335 (4) - NC
-02:10:766 (7) - NC
-02:15:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Are you tried to put soft sounds? I think sounds better Yeah, now it's better
-02:38:855 (7) - Stack
-03:19:339 (1) - Without sound is better Sure

Good luck and star ^

Rating:

Song: 8.7
Map: 9.1

1. I'm not sure 256kbps is rankable anymore. I know your map was uploaded before the maximum bitrate was changed to 192kbps, but I don't think it matters.
2. 00:39:991 - Are you sure of your offset for this section ? All the notes you use are on red ticks...

1. Please map this until the end...
2. The little part you mapped is too hard for an Easy imo. Long streaks of notes tend to be hard to play. The difficulty settings are alos rather high for an Easy.
3. The kiai times are different from the other diffs. This affects the main menu and should be fixed.
4. 00:28:151 (1) - A bit soon after the spinner imo, although the BPM isn't high.
5. 00:53:949 (1) - Same.
6. 01:00:813 (1) - Same.

1. Too hard for a Hard imo. It has too many jumps, and too big streams.
2. 01:26:559 (1) - Why is this placed so far away from the next note ?
3. 02:00:689 (3,4,5) - Extremely confusing placement. The weird rhythm from the two slider before doesn't help. Please re-make this pattern.
4. 02:21:915 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - These two streams have extremely weird shape and it makes them rather confusing to play.
5. 02:47:862 (5) - Please space this one correctly. There's no reason why it should be placed so far from (4)...
6. 03:06:570 (1,2,3,4) - This placement is confusing: the two patterns before were 1/2 jumps, and the jumps got bigger with the second patter, so these will look like they're 1/2 jumps that follow the same type of patterns as the two previous ones.

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General

1. I'm not sure 256kbps is rankable anymore. I know your map was uploaded before the maximum bitrate was changed to 192kbps, but I don't think it matters. ~going to fix it later
2. 00:39:991 - Are you sure of your offset for this section ? All the notes you use are on red ticks...~i really don't know

Hard

1. Too hard for a Hard imo. It has too many jumps, and too big streams.
2. 01:26:559 (1) - Why is this placed so far away from the next note ? ~idk, a jump maybe
3. 02:00:689 (3,4,5) - Extremely confusing placement. The weird rhythm from the two slider before doesn't help. Please re-make this pattern. ~it's normal for me ):
4. 02:21:915 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - These two streams have extremely weird shape and it makes them rather confusing to play.~i'm going to think about
5. 02:47:862 (5) - Please space this one correctly. There's no reason why it should be placed so far from (4)...~it's a normal jump
6. 03:06:570 (1,2,3,4) - This placement is confusing: the two patterns before were 1/2 jumps, and the jumps got bigger with the second patter, so these will look like they're 1/2 jumps that follow the same type of patterns as the two previous ones.~but it's veeery bigger than the 1/2 one

NotShinta wrote:

General:
Technically, the difficulty names don't make sense. Twilight comes between light and dark, but whatever -> Twilight was like light plus dark lol
I don't think the first timing section is necessary, as the metronome doesn't seem to follow anything.
All difficulties should use tick rate 2, as with most 1/2 songs.
I modded this yesterday, but I lost the mod post and was incredibly annoyed, so I'm modding upwards this time.
01:16:044 etc. - The inherited section should arguably be here, so the kiai stream actually starts at the same time as the vocal it's following.-> I'm going to fix
That last image is hilarious for me, having no idea of the context.->Yeah, I just tried to use some mages lol

Twilight !:
I say remove the space before the '!'. It's grammatically correct in English, which this is, and I think it looks better in all honestly.
00:17:202 (5) - Add finish? -> I think it's better without finish
00:41:265 (5) - Personally, I would unstack this. Oh well.-> Why? D:
00:50:239 (1) - I dislike how the start of this combo overlaps the start of the previous one. You can probably rearrange it to look and play slightly better.-> I agree but it's not so overlapped, idk :~
00:55:663 (5) - Perhaps move this down slightly for less HP bar overlappage?-> Sure, thanks
01:12:184 (4) - I don't think anything in the music calls for the jumpy pattern.-> Fixed, thanks
01:26:766 (1) - I wouldn't new combo a jump like this, as the follow circles can help some players read such jumps.-> I think it's better
01:41:567 (4) - Move this left 1 grid4grid for super symmetrical sexual fun. Yes.-> Super symmetrical fun, thanks yeah
01:42:426 (5) - ^, right-> ^
02:22:324 (6) - I don't like this clusterfucky stream much at all, but I don't like how this is placed on a previous note, it seems kind of 'hidden'.-> I tried to change something but it's still hidden :s
03:06:999 (2) - This could be read as increased spacing and as such placed as 1/2, but I'm just silly today.
03:19:339 (1) - Soften the end of this up.-> Sure

Most of this is nitpicking, I'm sorry.

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Blue Dragon wrote:

VISHHHHHHHHH revived

JMC wrote:

as far as I know this original music from DAICON IV Animation 1983 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lyVqIkJ69VA watch minute 2:40
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Daicon_II ... Animations

Densha Otoko use this for parody
"The television series makes numerous references and homages to otaku culture. The opening animation is a homage to the legendary Daicon IV "Twilight" anime short, which was created by the founders of Gainax. Also, the space ship in the first opening is similar to the logo of the band ELO, who composed Twilight." https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Densha_Otoko_(TV_series)

pls ranked......

Mismagius wrote:

cade o revive vo remapea minha diff