Same as advance too much LNs imo.
00:00:874 (874|0,874|3,1147|1,1147|3,1419|1,1419|3,1692|0,1692|2) - The sound/instrument here is only one yet you made them 2-noters which are inconsistent. Recommending to remove a note at those 2-noters to make them single note (referring to novice difficulty). Change them until 00:04:147
00:05:101 (5101|3,5238|0,5374|2) - remove. Sudden 2-noters without strong sound.
00:19:147 - The patterns here are quite awkward to hit. Recommending these patterns:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2365537 • Balanced left and right hand taps
• Pitch-patterned stairs for the melody instrument which are comfortable to hit.
00:22:829 (22829|3) - move this note to 00:22:965 instead since there is no sound at 1/2 red line part and the LN needs another need since it has a strong sound:cymbals.
00:24:738 (24738|1) - ^ move to LN above
00:23:647 (23647|0) - move to 00:23:374 just like you did at 00:25:283 (25283|3,25283|1) -
00:25:283 (25283|1) - move to 1 for comfortability.
00:25:692 (25692|3) - ^ to 2
00:26:238 (26238|0) - ^ to 3
00:26:783 - do the same as 00:19:147 since it has similar sounds and also this part is much stronger!
00:28:692 (28692|1) - suggesting to remove this as there is no strong long sound to make this 2-LNoters. and if done..
00:28:965 (28965|0) - move to 2 to avoid stacking at 1st column.
00:29:510 (29510|3) - move to 2
00:33:329 (33329|2,33601|1) - move 1 column to left for pitch
00:36:601 (36601|3,36874|1) - ctrl J also for pitch.
00:33:874 (33874|3,34147|1,34147|2) - ^
00:37:419 (37419|0) - change to single note only as there is not long sound to LN here for.
00:38:510 (38510|1) - move to 4
00:38:510 (38510|2) - reduce length until 00:39:329
00:40:965 - add note to 1
00:42:329 (42329|0) - remove. no strong sound.
00:42:601 (42601|0,43147|3) - remove.
00:45:601 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236563700:50:510 (50510|3) - move to 2
00:51:601 (51601|0) - reduce to 00:52:147
00:52:692 (52692|2) - remove and add another note on 00:52:692 (52692|1,52965|1) -
00:59:783 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236565701:03:056 (63056|1,63601|3,64147|2,64692|1) - add notes to be 2-noter key press on those strong sounds.
01:06:874 (66874|2,67010|0,67010|3,67147|2,67147|1,67283|3,67283|0) - I believe this part is 1/3 and 1/6 snap
01:18:329 (78329|1) - extend until 01:20:510