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Nightmare - Alumina ~TV Size~

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Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
I randomly played the map, found no major issue except one in Insane that you really ought to fix in my opinion.

  1. 00:19:738 (1,2) - Those two kick sliders don't really make much sense. Kick sliders aren't a good way to fill music emptyness :( It makes the pattern harder for no reason and looks/play plain bad. (And if I were a QAT I would unqualify over this :x)
    You should rather do something like in Mao's Insane
I'm happy to finally see a good version of this song being so close to get ranked!
FlobuFlobs
575 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
FlobuFlobs
Sup kurai, Fixxed that
You were not the only one who pointed it

I hope kwan will rebubble lol
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
I'm sure he will! :3
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN

Kurai wrote:

I'm sure he will! :3
nah
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
Popping over too low quality of Epicz's Easy, a wrongly snapped repeat slider in Mao's diff and Slider Tick Rate issues.

[General]

  1. Slider Tick Rates are inconsistent throughout the spread, which doesn't make much sense. Easy should keep Tick Rate 1, since the SV is too low so that the first and last tick would never be visible with Tick Rate 2, but for all other diffs I highly recommend you to set Slider Tick Rate 2! If you do that, remember to check for wrongly snapped objects, since that may happen when changing Slider Tick Rate.
[Easy]

Rhythm/Placement/etc
  1. OD 1 seems far too low considering the actual difficulty level here. Please go with OD 2.
  2. 00:19:738 (1,2) - Try to avoid stacking in the lowest difficulty. http://puu.sh/eZUbF/717ebbfcf6.jpg
  3. 00:22:495 (3,4) - Following vocals here sounds awkward. You followed the drums (and cymbals) in the rest of the section, so this seems out of place. The rhythm is also a bit complex for an Easy. Try this: http://puu.sh/eZUwb/62db6b7ca3.jpg
  4. 00:57:035 (4,5) - Ctrl+G this rhythm-wise. The position of the slider will fit better to vocals and beat.
  5. Try to place NCs every second measure, not just every 4th like you did in some sections. Combos of 7 or 8 are quite long for this difficulty level.
Hitsounding
  1. The Hitsound Volume in the second kiai is far too low! Turn it up to 70%!
  2. 00:23:954 - Missing Clap.
  3. 00:29:143 - Same as above.
  4. 00:29:792 - I see no other reason to map this beat except following the drum, so I'd remove the Finish and add a Clap instead.
  5. 00:31:738 - Remove the Clap, since you are using whistles only on 2 and 4 in the rest of this section.
  6. 00:38:873 - Add a Soft Finish.
  7. 00:44:387 - Same as above.
  8. 01:05:143 - Why did you silence the end here? Try 25% volume + a Whistle
[Epicz's Easy]

  1. Overall, it would be nice to replace some longer sliders with more objects, since you have fewer objects than the other Easy at the moment, although this one is supposed to be harder. I will give some suggestions to help with this.
  2. 00:05:468 (1,2) - Try to avoid 3/2-gaps in an Easy, since it breaks the polarity and is confusing for many newbies. Try this rhythm instead: http://puu.sh/eZXjD/bf94115ad7.jpg
  3. 00:12:603 (3) - Replace with 1/1-slider + circle, to increase density and to have the big white tick clickable c: http://puu.sh/eZXxH/5571545edc.jpg
  4. 00:19:738 (1,2) - Try to avoid stacking in an Easy difficulty, please. http://puu.sh/eZXMt/5f08b65137.jpg
  5. To be honest, your rhythm in the kiai needs a lot of work, since you often ignore important cymbals and instead map on ticks where there is nothing in the music. I won't force you to change those, but in it's current state this map lacks quality. I won't point out placement issues now since the first kiai needs to be rearranged anyway if you follow my rhythm suggestions. But please, try to keep your placement as simple as possible for an Easy diff. Avoid things like 00:21:684 (2,3,1) - Here, (2) and (1) overlap, which is noticable ingame and might confuse newbies. Also, try to avoid things like 00:22:495 (3,1) - Here, (1)'s slidertail is closer to the previous object than the head, which can cause misreads easily. Please consider that if you rearrange the kiai.
    1. 00:22:495 (3,1) - Avoid the polarity issue please: http://puu.sh/f01ND/9b2c7fa12f.jpg
    2. 00:25:251 - This beat should be mapped when you map to 00:25:900 to catch the drums. That's why I would recommend you to add a repeat to 00:24:278 (2) -
    3. 00:26:873 (2,3) - Ctrl+G these rhythm-wise, to catch the cymbal at 00:27:360 -
    4. 00:29:468 (3,4) - Try this rhyhtm, to catch the cymbal at 00:29:954 - and to add some more density: http://puu.sh/f027N/1f65f2f327.jpg
    5. 00:34:657 (2) - Catch the cymbal at 00:35:143 in this way: http://puu.sh/f02eD/4c911ee5aa.jpg
    6. 00:36:278 - This beat seems pretty important, so I would add a circle here.
  6. 00:40:495 (3,4) - Try to improve the blanket, please, since it looks really off at the moment. You can use this Code:
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    250,142,41468,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  7. 00:46:657 (4,1,2,3,4) - At the moment, these sliders all start on upbeats (on the second and fourth white tick in a measure), which sounds pretty weird since the musically more important downbeats (first and third white tick in a measure) are not clickable then. I'd recommend you to move all of these sliders 1/1 later in the timeline, and add a circle at 00:46:657 - http://puu.sh/f02DD/2f4c597834.jpg
  8. 00:55:738 (2) - I don't really get what you are following with the repeat.. There is no vocal, drum or anything important at the red tick from what I can hear. Try this: http://puu.sh/f02LL/5c89458ce7.jpg
  9. 00:58:333 (3) - You can create much better-looking wavesliders by arranging the anchors symmetrically: http://puu.sh/f02UL/968f503616.jpg
  10. Hitsounding and NCing also need a lot of work. I will cover that in my next check.
[Pereira's Normal]

  1. What about HP 4? The current HP setting seems a bit too far from the AR setting.
  2. 00:15:846 (1) - It sounds better to end this spinner at 00:17:630 - and have a Finish hitsound there
  3. 00:18:441 (1) - I don't really get your rhythm here. The cymbals are so strong that this rhythm fits much better: http://puu.sh/f03xr/af789b32e8.jpg
  4. 00:31:333 - Better remove this kiai fountain for consistency with the other difficulties.
  5. 01:05:143 (7) - I would NC here already instead of the next object, since the instrument (I don't know how it's called) starts playing here.
[Smoothie's Hard]

  1. I would say AR 7.5 feels better to play here, but it might be me.
  2. What about HP 6? The current HP setting seems a bit too far from the AR setting.
  3. 00:10:981 - Missing Normal Sampleset.
[Insane]

  1. 00:53:468 (3) - Add NC please.
  2. 00:38:711 (4) - Add a Whistle?
[Mao's Insane]

  1. 00:43:414 (3) - This object is wrongly snapped. It must be a 3/16-repeat Slider, like in the Insane difficulty.
Last edited by Myxo , edited 1 time in total.
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006

Desperate-kun wrote:

[Pereira's Normal]

  1. What about HP 4? The current HP setting seems a bit too far from the AR setting. ok
  2. 00:15:846 (1) - It sounds better to end this spinner at 00:17:630 - and have a Finish hitsound there no, follow main vocal
  3. 00:18:441 (1) - I don't really get your rhythm here. The cymbals are so strong that this rhythm fits much better: http://puu.sh/f03xr/af789b32e8.jpg ^ same, I prefer my
  4. 00:31:333 - Better remove this kiai fountain for consistency with the other difficulties. ok
  5. 01:05:143 (7) - I would NC here already instead of the next object, since the instrument (I don't know how it's called) starts playing here. mistake
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Aka
1,777 posts
Joined January 2012
Aka
i failed to ninja this damn
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao
Don't forget to add video, Flobu *runs*

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FlobuFlobs
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Topic Starter
FlobuFlobs
Update :P
Myxo
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Myxo
Quick Recheck~ Because I know you don't really mind the lack of explanation caused by me being tired qq

[Easy]

  1. 00:34:008 (3,4) - Spacing
  2. 00:57:035 - Remove Finish
  3. 00:57:360 - Add Finish + Soft Additions
[Epicz]

  1. 00:03:522 (4,5,6) - Confusing Placement. The overlap of (4) and (6) is not suitable for an Easy difficulty. Also, the transition between (4) and (5) is tricky, because (5)'s tail is much closer to (4) than (5)'s head. I would recommend you to avoid both. Suggestion: 00:03:522 (4) to 162 | 252 and then try: http://puu.sh/fKnXN/6d5bd226ad.jpg for example c:
  2. 00:07:738 - Missing Clap.
  3. 00:34:333 - Missing Clap.
  4. 00:45:684 (3) - I think you wanted to end it 1/2 later, at 00:46:170 - o.o Currently I don't really get the rhythm.
  5. The NCing is messed up. I would recommend you to place a NC at every 2nd big white tick for a logical pattern.
  6. Finishes are missing at a lot of places, although you can hear important cymbals in the music. Please try to find these places and add a Soft / Normal Finish where you can hear them. If you need help, catch me ingame.
Mao
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Mao
Gogo, Flobsi o/
Myxo
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Myxo 
2015-02-19 22:45 Desperate-kun: irc let's go
2015-02-19 22:45 FlobuFlobs: xDD
2015-02-19 22:45 FlobuFlobs: wie man nur 1 amibo gleichzeitig auf amazon kaufen darf
2015-02-19 22:45 Desperate-kun: lol
2015-02-19 22:45 FlobuFlobs: schreib ich direkt sonnyc für rank an
2015-02-19 22:45 FlobuFlobs: OH WAIT
2015-02-19 22:45 Desperate-kun: ne
2015-02-19 22:45 FlobuFlobs: oder neonat
2015-02-19 22:45 FlobuFlobs: OH WAIT
2015-02-19 22:46 FlobuFlobs: lust
2015-02-19 22:46 FlobuFlobs: OH WAIT
2015-02-19 22:46 Desperate-kun: is QAT
2015-02-19 22:46 Desperate-kun: xDDD
2015-02-19 22:46 FlobuFlobs: irre
2015-02-19 22:46 Desperate-kun: Mao
2015-02-19 22:46 Desperate-kun: hat ne GD und ist QAT
2015-02-19 22:46 Desperate-kun: :D
2015-02-19 22:46 FlobuFlobs: +1
2015-02-19 22:46 FlobuFlobs: direkt pereira
2015-02-19 22:46 FlobuFlobs: der würd sogar machen
2015-02-19 22:46 FlobuFlobs: wenn er keine gd hätt
2015-02-19 22:47 FlobuFlobs: kp
2015-02-19 22:47 FlobuFlobs: spamme wahrscheinlich kibbleru oder so zu
2015-02-19 22:47 Desperate-kun: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/554186 Nightmare - Alumina ~TV Size~ [Epicz's Easy]]
2015-02-19 22:47 Desperate-kun: 00:21:035 (3) - NC
2015-02-19 22:47 Desperate-kun: 00:25:900 (1,2) - NCs tauschen
2015-02-19 22:49 Desperate-kun: 00:44:387 (1) - hier einfach 00:45:684 (3) - nehmen und horizontal flippen
2015-02-19 22:49 Desperate-kun: vergiss nich hitsounds zu übernehmen vom alten slider
2015-02-19 22:50 Desperate-kun: 00:58:333 (3) - http://puu.sh/g49uz/be1c5bba75.jpg
2015-02-19 22:50 Desperate-kun: dat wars mit der diff
2015-02-19 22:51 FlobuFlobs: wew
2015-02-19 22:51 FlobuFlobs: dachte wäre schlimmer xD
2015-02-19 22:51 Desperate-kun: nene passt
2015-02-19 22:51 Desperate-kun: die diff is nich mehr kacke
2015-02-19 22:52 FlobuFlobs: xD
2015-02-19 22:52 FlobuFlobs: ich kann ja auch nicht nein zu gd
2015-02-19 22:52 FlobuFlobs: sagen >_>
2015-02-19 22:53 Desperate-kun: NCing bei Smoothie is auch nich grade der himmel auf erden
2015-02-19 22:53 Desperate-kun: aber w/e
2015-02-19 22:54 FlobuFlobs: kann ich auch ändern
2015-02-19 22:54 Desperate-kun: nene
2015-02-19 22:54 Desperate-kun: passt
2015-02-19 22:54 FlobuFlobs: smoothie lässt mich da auch ran
2015-02-19 22:54 Desperate-kun: uhhhhh
2015-02-19 22:54 Desperate-kun: jetzt ists raus
2015-02-19 22:54 FlobuFlobs: hö
2015-02-19 22:54 FlobuFlobs: xD
2015-02-19 22:55 Desperate-kun: update
2015-02-19 22:55 Desperate-kun: please
2015-02-19 22:55 Desperate-kun: dann check ich auf unrankable kram
2015-02-19 22:55 Desperate-kun: und guck jede diff noch einmal durch
2015-02-19 22:55 FlobuFlobs: DAFÜR HAB ICH 10 TAGE GEWARTET?
2015-02-19 22:55 FlobuFlobs: AUF DIE 10min
2015-02-19 22:55 Desperate-kun: ja
2015-02-19 22:55 FlobuFlobs: mappen ist ne bitch
2015-02-19 22:56 FlobuFlobs: hängt bei 11%
2015-02-19 22:56 FlobuFlobs: meh
2015-02-19 22:56 Desperate-kun: xD
2015-02-19 22:56 FlobuFlobs: jetzt bei creating package
2015-02-19 22:56 FlobuFlobs: 0%
2015-02-19 22:57 Desperate-kun: gj
2015-02-19 22:58 FlobuFlobs: ich restart ma
2015-02-19 22:59 Desperate-kun: jo
2015-02-19 22:59 FlobuFlobs: warum
2015-02-19 22:59 FlobuFlobs: trollt mich osu
2015-02-19 22:59 Desperate-kun: kp
2015-02-19 22:59 FlobuFlobs: beatmap processing...
2015-02-19 22:59 FlobuFlobs: bei 34k
2015-02-19 23:01 Desperate-kun: achja und die map is außerhalb meiner kudosu history
2015-02-19 23:01 Desperate-kun: kannst also nocheinmal einen geben dann
2015-02-19 23:01 Desperate-kun: ich hab dir immerhin genug stars geshooted
2015-02-19 23:01 Desperate-kun: auf deine sets xDD
2015-02-19 23:01 FlobuFlobs: xD
2015-02-19 23:01 FlobuFlobs: DIE PAAR
2015-02-19 23:01 FlobuFlobs: update
2015-02-19 23:01 FlobuFlobs: ~<3
2015-02-19 23:01 Desperate-kun: Hard
2015-02-19 23:01 Desperate-kun: update?
2015-02-19 23:02 Desperate-kun: oke
2015-02-19 23:03 Desperate-kun: interesting
2015-02-19 23:03 Desperate-kun: 30-Nightmare - Alumina (Tv Size)
2015-02-19 23:03 Desperate-kun: Genre: BLUES
2015-02-19 23:03 FlobuFlobs: hö
2015-02-19 23:04 FlobuFlobs: xD
2015-02-19 23:04 Desperate-kun: http://puu.sh/g4aDE/58bd9fb98a.png
2015-02-19 23:04 FlobuFlobs: aah
2015-02-19 23:04 FlobuFlobs: lol
2015-02-19 23:04 Desperate-kun: ups
2015-02-19 23:04 Desperate-kun: http://puu.sh/g4aDE/58bd9fb98a.png
2015-02-19 23:04 Desperate-kun: http://puu.sh/g4aEQ/8f992e86a6.png
2015-02-19 23:04 Desperate-kun: da
2015-02-19 23:04 FlobuFlobs: xD
2015-02-19 23:04 FlobuFlobs: ich hab ja zuerst ne diff in anderen set gemacht
2015-02-19 23:05 FlobuFlobs: dann irgendwann übernommen
2015-02-19 23:05 FlobuFlobs: deshalb
2015-02-19 23:05 Desperate-kun: dude
2015-02-19 23:05 Desperate-kun: warum
2015-02-19 23:05 Desperate-kun: sind hitclap 1 2 und 3 gleich
2015-02-19 23:05 FlobuFlobs: xxD
2015-02-19 23:05 FlobuFlobs: pssh
2015-02-19 23:05 Desperate-kun: achso
2015-02-19 23:05 Desperate-kun: okay
2015-02-19 23:05 FlobuFlobs: lol
2015-02-19 23:05 FlobuFlobs: weil
2015-02-19 23:05 Desperate-kun: ja is klar
2015-02-19 23:05 FlobuFlobs: lol
2015-02-19 23:06 Desperate-kun: epicz diff widescreen support aus please
2015-02-19 23:07 Desperate-kun: update plz
2015-02-19 23:09 FlobuFlobs: hab

Finally rebubbled! You deserve it c:

In case anyone is wondering why I'm bubbling actively even though I became QAT - because I'm clearing my old bubble pops :b
Mao
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Mao
yaay
FlobuFlobs
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FlobuFlobs
<3
Sieg
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Sieg
Death Note ww

[General]
  1. Combo color 3 and 4 way too similar this may lead to confusion in identifying new combo start, alter one of them.
  2. There is no video on Normal diff.
  3. Also take a note. That
    Slider tick hitsounds are discouraged. If you want to use them, then make sure that their volume is balanced (i.e. notably quieter than regular hitsounds). A very loud slider tick, especially when only used once or twice, would be extremely jarring.
  4. ^ I'm not going to force you to change this tho, up to you.
[Mao's Insane]
  1. 00:43:414 (3) - Last repeat is excessive.
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:008 (7,1) - Some kind of jump here would be nice. Since you placed one on even weaker spot e.g. 00:01:089 (3,4) or 00:06:927 (5,6) or 00:09:846 (3,4)
  2. ^ Also applies to: 00:04:657 (2,3) // 00:09:197 (5,1) // 00:10:495 (6,1)
  3. 00:04:170 (1,3) - Idea is fine but these sliders shape quality is quite questionable.
  4. 00:12:927 (4) - Is this even a wave slider? Consider something like flow slider http://puu.sh/g4S4G/53a592ac91.jpg or just straight.
  5. 00:18:116 (4,1) - You difficulty will be way more cleaner if you make similar sliders by copy-pasting.
  6. 00:24:441 (2,3,1,2) - This "back" movement plays horrible bad, also this is big difficulty spike since you don't have any other complicated flow movements over your diff.
  7. 00:28:819 (1,1) - Already said about similar sliders. I guess you can easily find spots by yourself.
  8. 00:34:008 (1) - Wave can be improved here a lot. http://puu.sh/g4Skh/76b69654a5.jpg
  9. 00:43:414 (3) - Last repeat is excessive.
  10. 00:43:738 (2,1) - Anti Jump on such a strong beats plays weird, consider to incrise spacing here.
  11. 00:49:900 (4) - Normal sample set on head.
  12. 00:55:738 (3) - Whistle on head.
  13. Difficulty needs some more polishing imo.
[Smoothie's Hard]
  1. 00:10:657 (1) - Move this up, please. http://puu.sh/g4SCB/2fc83999fe.jpg
  2. 00:11:306 (4,5) - Consider to end 4 on 00:11:630 () and remove circle, this will fit "long" vocals much better, also it would be easier to catch following slider.
  3. 00:31:008 (7,8) - Unstack, it's confusing to read since you use many 1\2 stacked and will help to keep consistancy.
  4. 00:44:387 (1) - Overlaps with hp bar.
  5. 01:01:576 (5) - ^ Same here.
[Epicz's Easy]
  1. Slider tick rate 2 here looks weird becuse only used by insanes.
  2. 00:07:738 (4) - Soft clap intended here?
  3. 00:12:603 (3) - Clap on the end, also nearby green lines are useless here.
  4. 00:21:035 (1) - Clap on the end.
  5. uhhh.... Check you HS pattern carefully, please, since I can't find any consistancy in and bacuse of that can't say for sure what is missed or what is not.
  6. 00:24:278 (6,7) - Placement is confusing, move 00:25:900 (7) out of 00:24:278 (6) slider end.
  7. 00:54:765 (1) - Offscreen.
[Easy]
  1. 00:00:927 (2,3) - I found this is amusing how you placed 2 soft hitwhistles only here and only for this diff. :3 Seriously, looking pretty random.
  2. 00:21:684 (2,3,4) - I want to see here transfer somewhat similar to 00:26:873 (2,3) - will fit much better.
  3. 00:56:711 (3) - Clap missed.
  4. 01:00:278 (2) - You mapped all kiai based on 1\1 rhythm and this one 3\2 consider to keep 1\1, also you missed you slider tick sound here.
FlobuFlobs
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RIP

ONE DAY
Sieg
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Sieg
HEY, don't say such things:C
Just put a bit more work, that's not so hard. I'll gladly assist you.
FlobuFlobs
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i meant rip 4th bubble lol
Sieg
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Sieg

FlobuFlobs wrote:

i meant rip 4th bubble lol
lol :\
Mao
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Mao
Don't forget video, Flobsi C:
@Sieg: Fixed

Code
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 30-Nightmare - Alumina (Tv Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 19657
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15807,31375,54726,62510
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 4.999997

[Metadata]
Title:Alumina ~TV Size~
TitleUnicode:アルミナ ～TVサイズ～
Artist:Nightmare
ArtistUnicode:ナイトメア
Creator:FlobuFlobs
Version:Mao's Insane
Source:Death Note
Tags:Sakito Smoothie Mao Epicz Pereira006
BeatmapID:538130
BeatmapSetID:228762

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:8
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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279,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
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15846,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
21035,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
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67089,-100,4,2,0,15,0,0
67738,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0
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Combo2 : 62,114,210
Combo3 : 190,44,44
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Smoothie
558 posts
Joined August 2011
Smoothie
Everything fixed.
Thanks, Sieg

Update
osu file format v14

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Title:Alumina ~TV Size~
TitleUnicode:アルミナ ～TVサイズ～
Artist:Nightmare
ArtistUnicode:ナイトメア
Creator:FlobuFlobs
Version:Smoothie's Hard
Source:Death Note
Tags:Sakito Smoothie Mao Epicz Pereira006
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Snaggletooth
491 posts
Joined November 2012
Snaggletooth
Random Mod.

[Easy]
  1. Cosmetical Issue
    1. 00:09:360 (5) - Of course this is highly subjective. I just personally wouldn't ad a non-symmetric slider.
      If you're gonna use a slider with an unusual path, there sould be a significant change in the music to justify it properly.
      Obviously, everyone defines 'pretty' diffrently, which means that this is only a mere suggestion.
  2. New Combo
    1. 00:22:170 (3) - To keep the combo-numbers down for the newbs. It would also make the
      1/2 beat a bit more readable.
    2. 00:28:495 (5)
    3. 00:57:360 (5)
  3. Close the gap.
    1. From 00:24:765 - 00:25:900 you have a quite signifficant vocal part. I wouldn't leave that
      blank. Also concidering it might cause an unnecessary fail.

      My suggestion would be to shorten 00:24:278 (4) to and to add a slider starting on 00:24:765 and ending on 00:25:900.
      Maybe circle or wave-shaped.

[Epicz's Easy]
  1. Use Distance-Snap on easy always
    1. 00:00:927 (2,3,4) - This was even for me hard to hit on the first try. There isn't really
      anything to be gained if you keep the anti-jump, other than the blanket, for which I do have a solution.
      I really hope you concider changing this.

      On 00:01:900 you have a beat. You can easily add a circle and stack it onto the beginning of 00:02:224 (3).
      Move 00:03:522 (5) down to x:216 y:344 to create some space and to make it more readable. Moving it there wont
      be the exact current distance-snap, but since this is an easy and newbs tend to focus on approach-circles more than on the distance, this
      minor difference wont hurt. Also, since thepattern you created 00:00:927 (2,4) is already faded once (5) is visible, this wont even
      hurt your pattern.
    2. Same thing on 00:06:116 (2,3). The only difference is, that you can add a circle on 00:07:089 and place it to x:180 y:152 to
      keep your pattern alive. I' also hit NC on 00:07:738 (5) to keep the combo short.
  2. Nazi:
    1. 00:17:143 (2,1) - Stack
  3. New Combo to keep the numbers down.
    1. 00:23:954 (5)
    2. 00:28:333 (5)
  4. Cosmetical Issue.
    1. 00:40:495 (3) - If you're gonna use a slider with an unusual path, there sould be a significant change in the music to justify it properly.
      Obviously, everyone defines 'pretty' diffrently, which means that this is only a mere suggestion.

[Pereira's Normal]
  1. Rhythmical Issue
    1. 00:08:711 (2) - To be fair, if I would tell you to change this, then your pattern wouldn't work anymore. Which
      if why I do have an example as to what you could do. This would keep your symmetric pattern and it
      would also get rid of this messy sound, which is a problem as this part is really clean and calm.
      Example
    2. 00:33:684 (5) - This circle can be removed as there is no real beat in the background, that would
      need to be playable. Altho I don't think it will/would hurt either way.
    3. 01:03:684 (4,2) - These two overlap. But more importantly, I would change 01:05:143 (1,2) from it's current form
      to simply 4 circles aligned in a slight curve but you might want to ask someone who knows more about
      normal-diffs than me. So, feel free to ignore this one. Change the overlap tho.

[Insane]


  • I honestly would reduce CS to 4. Since you do have some big jumps and since this is a rather fast-paced map, having
    CS4 would just make it more comfortable to look at, and make the jumps a bit easier and more fun. I checked and as
    far as I can tell, non of your patterns will suffer, it will just make everything a tad-bit more comfortable.
  1. Nazi:
    1. 00:52:008 (4,1) - Stack
  2. Cosmetical Issue
    1. I personally dislike streams like this 01:01:900 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4). It's just a simple preference.
      I do understand that there is a somewhat signifficant change in the drums, but I would still
      concider changin the pattern to something like this.
      Example

      I'd add tho that this stream isn't 'perfect' or fits 100%. This is just an Example. I would stick to a more curved stream tho
      as it would be a bit more consistent and look better with 01:02:549 (1)

[Mao's Insane]
  1. Add New Combo

    • I personally prefere to mark sudden rhythmical changes by adding new combos. It would make it more pleasant to read. But to each their own.
    1. 00:04:657 (3)
    2. 00:09:846 (3)
    3. 00:12:603 (5)
    4. 00:15:197 (6)


I didn't include Hard in this mod as I didn't find anything change-worthy. But I checked. c:

Good Luck ~
FlobuFlobs
575 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
FlobuFlobs
Hio, Sorry for late answer

- Fixxed everything in Insane except the Stack thing, because i dont understand what you want lol
- Fixxed everything on easy except the symmetrical thing because the music did change (guitar sound)
- No changes on Normal cuz, ask him xD
- Removed Easy GD
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
recheck

general:
there is no video on hard
mix you combo colors to fix 2 grey cc in a row

insane:
01:01:900 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - make this stream with more common spacing like 00:30:765 (4,5,6,7,8) or 00:36:278 (6,7,8,9) atm this is huge spike in difficulty, it also hurts hard-insane gap
FlobuFlobs
575 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
FlobuFlobs
Fixxed spacing and video

Changed one Combo colour to avoid 2 grey in a row
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
here we go again
Yauxo
1,622 posts
Joined June 2011
Yauxo
Hi there, coming from either your or my request/queue or m4m, whatever. Be so kind to answer to my mod and tell my why you denied suggestions.

Unrankable
Suggestion, no change neccessary (but recommended)
Rather important change
Not so important change/small note or opinion
(copy paste end | HistoryTag: ~ Sploosh ~)

checking

[General]
■ I dont think that the first long Kiai is neccessary. For a TV-Size, the later part (your 2nd Kiai) works just fine.
■ The 2nd Kiai should also end on 00:59:954 - - and if you feel fancy, you could add another short kiai on 01:02:549 - till 01:05:143 -

[Hard]
■ 00:04:008 (4,6) - 00:34:008 (1,2) - Iam really not a fan of these and I want to point these out especially.
Circles hidden under Sliderends never really made sense to me for why exactly they are there :c
Theyre hidden from the player, who might not pay too much attention to the approach circle. They try to focus on the next visible object (which is the Slider) and then they notice the Circle too late. Meh :v

Can you try to space these out a little? Maybe even something basic like 00:13:251 (1,2,3) - would work.

[Insane]
■ 00:39:197 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about adding a slower section here so that it fits to the song (as it gets slower/more quiet, similar to 00:19:738 (1) - )? That Slider feels too fast
■ 00:44:062 (1) - Stack this one under 00:43:738 (2) - ? Would make more sense to me
■ 00:59:954 (1) - This rhythm would make more sense to me. The current one feels off to me, yet I cant say what exactly causes that.
(Marked = Changed)

[Normal]
■ 00:18:441 (1) - Sorry, but this one ends on ... basically nothing. You could do this to fix it http://puu.sh/h6bp6/0f29716225.jpg
■ 00:21:684 (3,4) - Unstack these. In general, stacks are dangerous to use in Normals. Try to keep everything spaced at any time.
■ 00:24:603 (3,4) - ^
■ 00:26:873 (2,3) - ^
■ 00:32:062 (2,3) - ^
■ 00:37:251 (2,3) - ^. As most of these are the same (rhythm wise), why dont you try to use a rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/h6bzj/071965e63a.jpg
In my opinion, this would be easier and more enjoyable to play, as it fits to the rhythm AND vocals

Rinse and repeat for all the coming stacks

■ 01:05:143 (1,2) - Use a simple 4hit (repeat) Slider for that

[Easy]
■ 00:24:603 (5) - Sliderend unsnapped? Wrong Snap? It's not supposed to be there, isit?
■ 00:52:819 (2) - If you can, unstack this one. Beginners might still use huge hit animations that might block the view on this Slider

Normal is a big thing in my eyes, as I really dont approve of the stacks made there. PM me for more info if you need any.
FlobuFlobs
575 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
FlobuFlobs

Yauxo wrote:

Hi there, coming from either your or my request/queue or m4m, whatever. Be so kind to answer to my mod and tell my why you denied suggestions.

Unrankable
Suggestion, no change neccessary (but recommended)
Rather important change
Not so important change/small note or opinion
(copy paste end | HistoryTag: ~ Sploosh ~)

checking

[General]
■ I dont think that the first long Kiai is neccessary. For a TV-Size, the later part (your 2nd Kiai) works just fine.
Well, its more of a Personal opinion and i would like to keep the Kiai

[Easy]
■ 00:52:819 (2) - If you can, unstack this one. Beginners might still use huge hit animations that might block the view on this Slider
I think its fine since theres a 2/1 gap and a NC between them also the slider repeat is pointing to the next object
Fixxed the rest
Smoothie
558 posts
Joined August 2011
Smoothie
Well... I unstacked a few as you suggested.
Thanks.
Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 30-Nightmare - Alumina (Tv Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 19657
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 49212
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9999999

[Metadata]
Title:Alumina ~TV Size~
TitleUnicode:アルミナ ～TVサイズ～
Artist:Nightmare
ArtistUnicode:ナイトメア
Creator:FlobuFlobs
Version:Smoothie's Hard
Source:Death Note
Tags:Sakito Smoothie Mao Pereira006
BeatmapID:535609
BeatmapSetID:228762

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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400,280,2387,2,0,P|468:252|540:276,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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396,152,3360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,152,3522,2,0,P|412:100|372:16,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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96,72,4657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,8,4819,2,0,P|16:56|40:133,1,140
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380,96,7251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,166,7414,6,0,P|291:186|247:186,1,70
196,124,7738,1,0,1:0:0:0:
216,36,7900,2,0,P|148:44|104:116,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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496,100,29306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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308,320,30765,2,0,P|292:360|260:376,1,70,8|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
244,372,31008,1,0,1:0:0:0:
220,368,31089,2,0,L|134:359,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
52,272,31414,6,0,P|104:248|196:272,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
124,332,31900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,332,32062,2,0,L|108:184,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
68,112,32549,2,0,L|-16:104,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,193,32873,2,0,L|179:200,1,70,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,33197,2,0,P|288:108|256:20,1,140
148,80,33684,2,0,P|182:87|216:84,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,168,34008,6,0,L|496:188,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
512,268,34495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,260,34657,2,0,P|432:296|452:332,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
490,187,35143,2,0,P|452:152|472:64,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,28,35630,2,0,P|344:12|316:12,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,35954,2,0,P|292:112|256:136,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,36278,2,0,P|304:220|296:256,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
292,276,36522,1,0,1:0:0:0:
288,300,36603,6,0,P|252:340|152:344,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
132,268,37089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,268,37251,2,0,L|124:196,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
52,312,37738,2,0,L|44:381,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,224,38062,2,0,L|16:144,1,70,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
44,68,38387,2,0,P|92:48|140:116,1,140
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275,196,39846,2,0,P|379:223|395:316,1,210,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,368,40495,2,0,B|252:384|216:328|216:328|160:320|120:372,1,210
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84,204,41468,2,0,P|108:248|108:280,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,353,41792,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,41873,12,4,44062,3:0:0:0:
164,152,44387,6,0,P|144:84|172:8,2,140,4|0|0,2:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
252,176,45197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,152,45360,2,0,P|116:144|88:152,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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480,320,48116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,232,48278,2,0,L|448:84,1,140,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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216,240,50387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,233,50549,2,0,P|296:199|276:172,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,332,50873,2,0,P|237:331|268:315,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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404,104,52008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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412,171,52819,2,0,P|415:136|404:104,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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88,188,54441,2,0,L|0:192,1,70,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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8,372,55738,2,0,L|100:384,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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340,260,59143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Pereira006
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Pereira006

Yauxo wrote:

[Normal]
■ 00:18:441 (1) - Sorry, but this one ends on ... basically nothing. You could do this to fix it http://puu.sh/h6bp6/0f29716225.jpg Stay, still follow vocal, there too many option to choose follow this music, I decide my own
■ 00:21:684 (3,4) - Unstack these. In general, stacks are dangerous to use in Normals. Try to keep everything spaced at any time.
■ 00:24:603 (3,4) - ^
■ 00:26:873 (2,3) - ^
■ 00:32:062 (2,3) - ^
■ 00:37:251 (2,3) - ^. As most of these are the same (rhythm wise), why dont you try to use a rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/h6bzj/071965e63a.jpg
I did ask QAT and the New update osu like this http://puu.sh/h6mYz/ce147fbaf5.jpg is really fine because if you see ingame they are still unstack, I did talk with Desperate http://puu.sh/h6nKE/3bb44b6865.jpg
In my opinion, this would be easier and more enjoyable to play, as it fits to the rhythm AND vocals

Rinse and repeat for all the coming stacks

■ 01:05:143 (1,2) - Use a simple 4hit (repeat) Slider for that
I did talk Flobu, 01:05:143 (1,2) - move down
Thank you
Mao
Elite Mapper II
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Mao
Gogo! ;^;
Sieg
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Sieg

Mao wrote:

Gogo! ;^;
FlobuFlobs
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FlobuFlobs

Mao wrote:

Gogo! ;^;
QWQ
Sieg
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Sieg
repaired
pkk
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pkk
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FlobuFlobs
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Topic Starter
FlobuFlobs
Well, some drums are not snapped on 1/2 ticks so... i have to wait for a Timing or MP3 Edit which noone wants to do
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Yauxo
1,622 posts
Joined June 2011
Yauxo

FlobuFlobs wrote:

Well, some drums are not snapped on 1/2 ticks so... we have to wait for pishi or grave it
Rip
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
[General]

Tag add "デスノート"

[Easy]

00:02:873 (4) - NC here. cuz very long combo imo
00:08:062 (4) - same (^)
00:22:981 (2) - missing hitsound adding
00:24:603 (5) - awkward this so slider start 00:24:765 - here?
00:25:900 - clap

[Pereira's Normal]

00:15:846 (1) - spiner finish 00:15:846 (1) - here
00:18:441 (1) - flow drum better so change slider 1/2 repeat?
SPOILER

00:32:549 - No hitsound?
00:37:738 - whistle
00:41:792 (1) - spiner finish 00:43:089 - here

[Mao's Insane]

00:12:765 (6) - here.. this flow bad me.. so chagne this?
SPOILER
FlobuFlobs
575 posts
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Topic Starter
FlobuFlobs
Sup habic, i will apply the mod as soon ive got a fixxed timing or fixxed mp3

Thanks anyway!
Saut
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Saut

FlobuFlobs wrote:

which noone wants to do


new offset should be 313 - http://puu.sh/inTHD/c8dc77f81b.zip
tell me if i missed any drums/claps
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