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FlobuFlobs

579 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

FlobuFlobs 2015-01-05T15:16:01+00:00

It's okay

Thanks <3

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-01-09T13:56:38+00:00

no kds.

http://vgmdb.net/album/19060 Title confirmation.

General:

-- Your soft-hitclap has got a long delay. Use this instead.

SPOILER

Easy
00:23:630 (4) - Devide to a note and a 1/1 slider.
00:55:738 (2) - The normal sampleset at the reverse seems to be missing.

Epicz's Easy
00:39:197 (1) - Missing finish at the head and maybe a clap at the end.

Pereira's Normal
01:03:035 (3,4,5) - Consider adding a finish at the head each.
01:05:143 - It feels really awkward to miss an object here.

Smoothie's Hard
-- Consider stack leniency 5 to avoid stack at 00:21:197 (1,3) and 01:04:170 (5,7).
-- Source broken.

Forum pm me after all being applied.

scanter

2,385 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2015-01-09T14:10:28+00:00

Hi ~ I'm Frobe's messager

General

it seems to unrankable factor due to soft-hitclap has large delay. here is cut file :3 http://puu.sh/ehmc7/4aac426947.wav
SPOILER
SPOILER
unicode of source seems to broken in Smoothie's Hard diff.

Easy

00:08:062 - maybe you missed clap
00:29:468 (7,8) - swap rhythm much better to play imo.
00:44:062 - add 1 circle?

Epicz's Easy

00:06:441 (2) - I assure you missed rhythm. it doesn't match up with songs every part. what about this? look at 2,3
SPOILER
00:09:360 (6) - in low difficulty, red point that under 90 degree is really danger about rank on. I recommend you at least change like this.
SPOILER
00:25:900 - add 1 circle? it has strong drum sound.
00:39:846 - maybe you forgot clap
00:45:360 (2) - its approach circle is really hard to see. try to change the shape 3 like this. maybe you can catch immediately if you play this auto mode
SPOILER

Pereira's Normal

00:23:306 (6) - I can't catch what you followed sound. move timing to 00:23:468 here much better to play and hear imo.
SPOILER
01:03:035 (3,4,5) - I recommend adding finish each sliders head. don't you think it is really flat compare with songs end?
01:05:792 (1) - what about add decrescendo like this? it is really suitable about fading out songs end imo.
SPOILER

Smoothie's Hard

00:10:981 - clap seems to sunken
00:21:197 (1) - it doesn't matched up in this songs every sound. I highly recommend to delete this circle one.
00:29:468 (3) - it can become more perfect stack on
00:37:738 - finish
01:05:306 (2,3,4) - 1/4 reverse slider much better in this hush part imo.
SPOILER
01:05:711 (1) - what about add decrescendo like this? it is really suitable about fading out songs end imo.
SPOILER

Insane

00:10:333 (5) - I assure you forgot add clap
00:12:927 - also here too
00:30:765 (4,5,6,7,8) - the distance is mismatched compare with your almost pattern.
00:41:143 (4) - clap
00:46:333 (5) - approaching circle seems to really hard to see. it needs to something that more clearly notice. like NC
01:05:792 (1) - what about add decrescendo like this? it is really suitable about fading out songs end imo.
SPOILER

Mao's Insane

00:38:549 (4) - clap sound seems to sunken
00:38:387 (3) - playing much better if you stack on 4 instead 2.
00:40:170 - Normal sampleset?
01:05:792 (1) - what about add decrescendo like this? it is really suitable about fading out songs end imo.
SPOILER

GL anyway

FlobuFlobs

579 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

FlobuFlobs 2015-01-09T18:55:35+00:00

scanter wrote:
Hi ~ I'm Frobe's messager q___q HAI FROBES MESSAGER

General
it seems to unrankable factor due to soft-hitclap has large delay. here is cut file :3 http://puu.sh/ehmc7/4aac426947.wav
SPOILER
SPOILER
unicode of source seems to broken in Smoothie's Hard diff.
Easy
00:08:062 - maybe you missed clap
00:29:468 (7,8) - swap rhythm much better to play imo.
00:44:062 - add 1 circle?Would be unrankable
Insane
00:10:333 (5) - I assure you forgot add clap
00:12:927 - also here too
00:30:765 (4,5,6,7,8) - the distance is mismatched compare with your almost pattern.
00:41:143 (4) - clap It really doesnt fit to add a clap here
00:46:333 (5) - approaching circle seems to really hard to see. it needs to something that more clearly notice. like NC
01:05:792 (1) - what about add decrescendo like this? it is really suitable about fading out songs end imo.
SPOILER
GL anyway

Fixxed the rest

thanks

FlobuFlobs

579 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

FlobuFlobs 2015-01-09T19:03:24+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
no kds.

http://vgmdb.net/album/19060 Title confirmation.

General:

-- Your soft-hitclap has got a long delay. Use this instead.I took Scanter's clap since i've applied his mod first
SPOILER

Easy
00:23:630 (4) - Devide to a note and a 1/1 slider. It doesnt really fit since the red tick has the finish sound in the music
00:55:738 (2) - The normal sampleset at the reverse seems to be missing.fixxed

Forum pm me after all being applied.

Pereira006

osu! Alumni

2,801 posts

Joined October 2010

Pereira006 2015-01-09T19:23:48+00:00

the first timing change S:C1
add finish 01:03:035 (3,4,5)
add 1 note + whistle in 01:05:143 (7)

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 19643
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Alumina ~TV Size~
TitleUnicode:Alumina ~TV Size~
Artist:Nightmare
ArtistUnicode:Nightmare
Creator:FlobuFlobs
Version:Pereira's Normal
Source:デスノート
Tags:Sakito Smoothie Mao Epicz Pereira Death note
BeatmapID:532642
BeatmapSetID:228762

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
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thanks

Frobe

Former osu!catch Champion: 2015

743 posts

Joined January 2011

Frobe 2015-01-09T19:43:36+00:00

i did not have enough time to mod. instead, i have request about mod to scanter.

sorry i'm late. here is star

good luck!

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2015-01-10T11:57:52+00:00

So, fixed everything but the stack because I think the spacing to the next note emphasizes it better than a stack would do :/

Code

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
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TitleUnicode:Alumina ~TV Size~
Artist:Nightmare
ArtistUnicode:Nightmare
Creator:FlobuFlobs
Version:Mao's Insane
Source:デスノート
Tags:Sakito Smoothie Mao Epicz Pereira Death note
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@Flobu, what happened to the video? :<

Smoothie

558 posts

Joined August 2011

Smoothie 2015-01-10T15:00:48+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Smoothie's Hard
-- Consider stack leniency 5 to avoid stack at 00:21:197 (1,3) and 01:04:170 (5,7). Sure
-- Source broken. Fixed

scanter wrote:
Smoothie's Hard
00:10:981 - clap seems to sunken Seems fine to me.
00:21:197 (1) - it doesn't matched up in this songs every sound. I highly recommend to delete this circle one. I agree
00:29:468 (3) - it can become more perfect stack on Should be better now I guess.
00:37:738 - finish Sure
01:05:306 (2,3,4) - 1/4 reverse slider much better in this hush part imo. I'd like to keep it the way it is.
SPOILER
01:05:711 (1) - what about add decrescendo like this? it is really suitable about fading out songs end imo. Yep
SPOILER

Thanks for the mod!

changes

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 30-Nightmare - Alumina (Tv Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 19643
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 49212
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9999999

[Metadata]
Title:Alumina ~TV Size~
TitleUnicode:Alumina ~TV Size~
Artist:Nightmare
ArtistUnicode:Nightmare
Creator:FlobuFlobs
Version:Smoothie's Hard
Source:デスノート
Tags:Sakito Smoothie Mao Epicz Pereira Death note
BeatmapID:535609
BeatmapSetID:228762

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Konachan.com - 19518 amane_misa death_note.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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[Epicz]

215 posts

Joined October 2012

[Epicz] 2015-01-10T16:25:08+00:00

scanter wrote:
Epicz's Easy
00:06:441 (2) - I assure you missed rhythm. it doesn't match up with songs every part. what about this? look at 2,3
SPOILER
00:09:360 (6) - in low difficulty, red point that under 90 degree is really danger about rank on. I recommend you at least change like this.
SPOILER
00:25:900 - add 1 circle? it has strong drum sound.
00:39:846 - maybe you forgot clap
00:45:360 (2) - its approach circle is really hard to see. try to change the shape 3 like this. maybe you can catch immediately if you play this auto mode
SPOILER

fixed everything

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-01-10T18:44:05+00:00

go go

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-01-11T06:02:08+00:00

[General]

Unicode artist is wrong, according to official website and the screenshot shown at the creator's word: http://www.ntv.co.jp/deathnote/goods/cd.html
```
Unicode Artist: ナイトメア
```
I guess starting another kiai at 00:44:387 - for all diffs sounds more reasonable like Mao's diff, as it's basically similar to the first kiai rhythmically.
00:19:657 - Snap the preview time here.
Add the full user name of Pereira to tag.

[Mao]

00:10:657 (1,2) - This stack is really inconsistent compared to other stacks throughout the diff.
00:32:224 (4) - Placed this at a higher position to have a more comfortable flow and make 00:31:414 (1,2,3,4) - 's heads aligning a straight line. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2499367
00:38:711 (5,6,7,8,9) - These triplets are unnatural and follow nothing, sticking to the vocal and drums is much better.
00:39:846 (2) - Whistle? 00:40:170 - 00:40:819 - 00:41:143 (1) - also.
00:43:414 (3,4,5,6) - Wrong snapped, should be 1/6 snapped:
00:58:495 (1) - This normal whistle feels really unsuitable, if you persist in adding hitsound, try finish instead like all other finishes you placed to emphasize the vocal. Same for 01:01:251 (1) - .
01:05:792 (1) - Whistle is also unnecessary here for the echo which doesn't comprise of a solid piano sound at 01:08:711 - .

[Insane]

00:43:414 (1,2,3,4,5) - See Mao's diff.

[Hard]

00:05:387 (2) - I don't expect overmapping in prelude of Hard, please delete it. Same for 00:07:170 - 01:05:387 (3) - .
00:13:251 (10) - NC here to cut the long wave and remove NC of 00:14:062 (1,1) -
00:53:143 (4) - This jump is way too harsh, rearrange the placements considering the distance snap as first priority.
00:57:360 (1) - ^ These are necessary as Insane is basically mapped according to distance snap in most parts and the BPM of the song isn't low at all.
00:59:143 (6) - ^ I would say this kind of recessive jump 00:37:738 (4,5) - is almost beyond my critical standard. Do the jumps less exaggerated and aggressive please.
01:05:792 (1) - Whistle is unnecessary here for the echo which doesn't comprise of a solid piano sound at 01:08:711 - .

[Normal]

00:58:495 (3) - I have much concern over this slider, no matter aesthetics (positions of nodes: http://i.imgur.com/6J5xhRV.png), shape or the path, would you mind considering another path such that it can be clearly visible from the head till the end? I am sure no matter you or me, we don't want to bear any risk of being disqualified by just a slider.
00:39:846 - Whistle, also same for 00:41:143 -

[Epicz]

00:39:846 - Whistle, also same for 00:40:170 (2) - 00:41:143 - 00:41:468 (4) -
00:41:792 (1) - As stated in the diff name, this is an Easy. So, you need to have more recovery gap between spinner and post-notes. Do it like this or any other alternatives which give 4-beat-pause: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2499859

Smoothie

558 posts

Joined August 2011

Smoothie 2015-01-11T08:06:01+00:00

Everything fixed.
Thanks!

Update

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 30-Nightmare - Alumina (Tv Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 19657
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 49212
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
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Version:Smoothie's Hard
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Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-01-11T08:36:02+00:00

Sorry for missing the snap, but 1/6 for that part seems a little faster than the music.
Even the value is abnormal, rather 3/16 will fit the drums better.

Pereira006

osu! Alumni

2,801 posts

Joined October 2010

Pereira006 2015-01-11T08:50:37+00:00

all fix, change slider and whistle, I didn't fix the General, i will let to flobu

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 19657
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TitleUnicode:Alumina ~TV Size~
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ArtistUnicode:ナイトメア
Creator:FlobuFlobs
Version:Pereira's Normal
Source:デスノート
Tags:Sakito Smoothie Mao Epicz Pereira Death note
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[Epicz]

215 posts

Joined October 2012

[Epicz] 2015-01-11T11:29:50+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
[/list][Epicz]
00:39:846 - Whistle, also same for 00:40:170 (2) - 00:41:143 - 00:41:468 (4) -
00:41:792 (1) - As stated in the diff name, this is an Easy. So, you need to have more recovery gap between spinner and post-notes. Do it like this or any other alternatives which give 4-beat-pause: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2499859

everything fixed
thanks

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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Artist:Nightmare
ArtistUnicode:ナイトメア
Creator:FlobuFlobs
Version:Epicz's Easy
Source:デスノート
Tags:Sakito Smoothie Mao Epicz Pereira Death note
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Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2015-01-22T15:33:55+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
[Mao]
00:32:224 (4) - Placed this at a higher position to have a more comfortable flow and make 00:31:414 (1,2,3,4) - 's heads aligning a straight line. Mine plays much more comfortable to me :<https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2499367
00:38:711 (5,6,7,8,9) - These triplets are unnatural and follow nothing, sticking to the vocal and drums is much better. Removed the first one, second one is still there to emphasize vocals.

Rest has been applied, @Flobu please add the video and stuff to my diff!

Code

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 30-Nightmare - Alumina (Tv Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 19657
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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[Metadata]
Title:Alumina ~TV Size~
TitleUnicode:Alumina ~TV Size~
Artist:Nightmare
ArtistUnicode:ナイトメア
Creator:FlobuFlobs
Version:Mao's Insane
Source:デスノート
Tags:Sakito Smoothie Mao Epicz Pereira Death note
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FlobuFlobs

579 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

FlobuFlobs 2015-01-22T15:54:55+00:00

Updatet

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-01-23T13:29:46+00:00

[General]

Unicode title: アルミナ～TVサイズ～ from http://www.ntv.co.jp/deathnote/goods/cd.html and the screenshot you've posted.

[Epicz]

00:41:143 - remove normal sample
00:23:630 (4) - NC
00:47:306 (5) - NC

[Hard]

00:33:684 (7) - Jump being too harsh.
00:57:360 (1) - Maybe a CTRL+G.
01:05:711 (1) - Whistle is still there!

[Insane]

Mind decreasing the OD? It is quite interesting to have OD setting even higher than Mao's diff. Maybe reduce it to 7.5.

FlobuFlobs

579 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

FlobuFlobs 2015-01-23T13:56:04+00:00

Fixxed everything except the OD thing on Insane

I would like to keep it and it shouldnt be a problem since the OD raises every diff by 2

Smoothie

558 posts

Joined August 2011

Smoothie 2015-01-23T14:31:29+00:00

Everything fixed
(for real this time >_<)

Changes

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 30-Nightmare - Alumina (Tv Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 19657
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 49212
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9999999

[Metadata]
Title:Alumina ~TV Size~
TitleUnicode:アルミナ ～TVサイズ～
Artist:Nightmare
ArtistUnicode:ナイトメア
Creator:FlobuFlobs
Version:Smoothie's Hard
Source:デスノート
Tags:Sakito Smoothie Mao Epicz Pereira006 Death note
BeatmapID:535609
BeatmapSetID:228762

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Konachan.com - 19518 amane_misa death_note.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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39197,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
44387,-100,4,2,0,100,0,1
62549,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
65792,-100,4,2,0,25,0,0
66441,-100,4,2,0,20,0,0
67089,-100,4,2,0,15,0,0
67738,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0
68711,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


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FlobuFlobs

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Topic Starter

FlobuFlobs 2015-01-23T17:41:13+00:00

Updatet

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2015-01-24T05:14:16+00:00

have this back

Kurai

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Kurai 2015-01-24T17:22:09+00:00

I randomly played the map, found no major issue except one in Insane that you really ought to fix in my opinion.

00:19:738 (1,2) - Those two kick sliders don't really make much sense. Kick sliders aren't a good way to fill music emptyness It makes the pattern harder for no reason and looks/play plain bad. (And if I were a QAT I would unqualify over this )
You should rather do something like in Mao's Insane

I'm happy to finally see a good version of this song being so close to get ranked!

FlobuFlobs

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Topic Starter

FlobuFlobs 2015-01-24T17:42:19+00:00

Sup kurai, Fixxed that
You were not the only one who pointed it

I hope kwan will rebubble lol

Kurai

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Kurai 2015-01-24T17:45:15+00:00

I'm sure he will! :3

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2015-01-25T06:08:18+00:00

Kurai wrote:
I'm sure he will! :3

nah

Myxo

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Myxo 2015-01-25T11:05:32+00:00

Popping over too low quality of Epicz's Easy, a wrongly snapped repeat slider in Mao's diff and Slider Tick Rate issues.

[General]

Slider Tick Rates are inconsistent throughout the spread, which doesn't make much sense. Easy should keep Tick Rate 1, since the SV is too low so that the first and last tick would never be visible with Tick Rate 2, but for all other diffs I highly recommend you to set Slider Tick Rate 2! If you do that, remember to check for wrongly snapped objects, since that may happen when changing Slider Tick Rate.

[Easy]

Rhythm/Placement/etc

OD 1 seems far too low considering the actual difficulty level here. Please go with OD 2.
00:19:738 (1,2) - Try to avoid stacking in the lowest difficulty. http://puu.sh/eZUbF/717ebbfcf6.jpg
00:22:495 (3,4) - Following vocals here sounds awkward. You followed the drums (and cymbals) in the rest of the section, so this seems out of place. The rhythm is also a bit complex for an Easy. Try this: http://puu.sh/eZUwb/62db6b7ca3.jpg
00:57:035 (4,5) - Ctrl+G this rhythm-wise. The position of the slider will fit better to vocals and beat.
Try to place NCs every second measure, not just every 4th like you did in some sections. Combos of 7 or 8 are quite long for this difficulty level.

Hitsounding

The Hitsound Volume in the second kiai is far too low! Turn it up to 70%!
00:23:954 - Missing Clap.
00:29:143 - Same as above.
00:29:792 - I see no other reason to map this beat except following the drum, so I'd remove the Finish and add a Clap instead.
00:31:738 - Remove the Clap, since you are using whistles only on 2 and 4 in the rest of this section.
00:38:873 - Add a Soft Finish.
00:44:387 - Same as above.
01:05:143 - Why did you silence the end here? Try 25% volume + a Whistle

[Epicz's Easy]

Overall, it would be nice to replace some longer sliders with more objects, since you have fewer objects than the other Easy at the moment, although this one is supposed to be harder. I will give some suggestions to help with this.
00:05:468 (1,2) - Try to avoid 3/2-gaps in an Easy, since it breaks the polarity and is confusing for many newbies. Try this rhythm instead: http://puu.sh/eZXjD/bf94115ad7.jpg
00:12:603 (3) - Replace with 1/1-slider + circle, to increase density and to have the big white tick clickable c: http://puu.sh/eZXxH/5571545edc.jpg
00:19:738 (1,2) - Try to avoid stacking in an Easy difficulty, please. http://puu.sh/eZXMt/5f08b65137.jpg
To be honest, your rhythm in the kiai needs a lot of work, since you often ignore important cymbals and instead map on ticks where there is nothing in the music. I won't force you to change those, but in it's current state this map lacks quality. I won't point out placement issues now since the first kiai needs to be rearranged anyway if you follow my rhythm suggestions. But please, try to keep your placement as simple as possible for an Easy diff. Avoid things like 00:21:684 (2,3,1) - Here, (2) and (1) overlap, which is noticable ingame and might confuse newbies. Also, try to avoid things like 00:22:495 (3,1) - Here, (1)'s slidertail is closer to the previous object than the head, which can cause misreads easily. Please consider that if you rearrange the kiai.
1. 00:22:495 (3,1) - Avoid the polarity issue please: http://puu.sh/f01ND/9b2c7fa12f.jpg
2. 00:25:251 - This beat should be mapped when you map to 00:25:900 to catch the drums. That's why I would recommend you to add a repeat to 00:24:278 (2) -
3. 00:26:873 (2,3) - Ctrl+G these rhythm-wise, to catch the cymbal at 00:27:360 -
4. 00:29:468 (3,4) - Try this rhyhtm, to catch the cymbal at 00:29:954 - and to add some more density: http://puu.sh/f027N/1f65f2f327.jpg
5. 00:34:657 (2) - Catch the cymbal at 00:35:143 in this way: http://puu.sh/f02eD/4c911ee5aa.jpg
6. 00:36:278 - This beat seems pretty important, so I would add a circle here.
00:40:495 (3,4) - Try to improve the blanket, please, since it looks really off at the moment. You can use this Code:
```
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00:46:657 (4,1,2,3,4) - At the moment, these sliders all start on upbeats (on the second and fourth white tick in a measure), which sounds pretty weird since the musically more important downbeats (first and third white tick in a measure) are not clickable then. I'd recommend you to move all of these sliders 1/1 later in the timeline, and add a circle at 00:46:657 - http://puu.sh/f02DD/2f4c597834.jpg
00:55:738 (2) - I don't really get what you are following with the repeat.. There is no vocal, drum or anything important at the red tick from what I can hear. Try this: http://puu.sh/f02LL/5c89458ce7.jpg
00:58:333 (3) - You can create much better-looking wavesliders by arranging the anchors symmetrically: http://puu.sh/f02UL/968f503616.jpg
Hitsounding and NCing also need a lot of work. I will cover that in my next check.

[Pereira's Normal]

What about HP 4? The current HP setting seems a bit too far from the AR setting.
00:15:846 (1) - It sounds better to end this spinner at 00:17:630 - and have a Finish hitsound there
00:18:441 (1) - I don't really get your rhythm here. The cymbals are so strong that this rhythm fits much better: http://puu.sh/f03xr/af789b32e8.jpg
00:31:333 - Better remove this kiai fountain for consistency with the other difficulties.
01:05:143 (7) - I would NC here already instead of the next object, since the instrument (I don't know how it's called) starts playing here.

[Smoothie's Hard]

I would say AR 7.5 feels better to play here, but it might be me.
What about HP 6? The current HP setting seems a bit too far from the AR setting.
00:10:981 - Missing Normal Sampleset.

[Insane]

00:53:468 (3) - Add NC please.
00:38:711 (4) - Add a Whistle?

[Mao's Insane]

00:43:414 (3) - This object is wrongly snapped. It must be a 3/16-repeat Slider, like in the Insane difficulty.

Last edited by Myxo 2015-01-25T12:39:35+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Pereira006

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Pereira006 2015-01-25T11:19:36+00:00

Desperate-kun wrote:
[Pereira's Normal]

What about HP 4? The current HP setting seems a bit too far from the AR setting. ok
00:15:846 (1) - It sounds better to end this spinner at 00:17:630 - and have a Finish hitsound there no, follow main vocal
00:18:441 (1) - I don't really get your rhythm here. The cymbals are so strong that this rhythm fits much better: http://puu.sh/f03xr/af789b32e8.jpg ^ same, I prefer my
00:31:333 - Better remove this kiai fountain for consistency with the other difficulties. ok
01:05:143 (7) - I would NC here already instead of the next object, since the instrument (I don't know how it's called) starts playing here. mistake

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Aka

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Joined January 2012

Aka 2015-01-25T17:39:12+00:00

i failed to ninja this damn

Mao

Elite Mapper II

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Joined December 2012

Mao 2015-02-01T16:05:59+00:00

Don't forget to add video, Flobu *runs*

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478,347,63035,2,0,L|470:229,1,108.000000411987,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,128,63359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
502,49,63522,1,8,0:0:0:0:
298,110,63684,6,0,L|76:94,1,216.000000823975,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,94,64089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,94,64170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,265,64333,2,0,L|494:249,1,216.000000823975,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,370,64819,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,243,64981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,243,65062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,243,65143,5,2,0:0:0:0:
195,358,65306,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,265,65468,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,142,65630,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65792,12,0,68711,0:0:0:0:

FlobuFlobs

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FlobuFlobs 2015-02-07T22:37:50+00:00

Update

Myxo

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Myxo 2015-02-10T22:00:16+00:00

Quick Recheck~ Because I know you don't really mind the lack of explanation caused by me being tired qq

[Easy]

00:34:008 (3,4) - Spacing
00:57:035 - Remove Finish
00:57:360 - Add Finish + Soft Additions

[Epicz]

00:03:522 (4,5,6) - Confusing Placement. The overlap of (4) and (6) is not suitable for an Easy difficulty. Also, the transition between (4) and (5) is tricky, because (5)'s tail is much closer to (4) than (5)'s head. I would recommend you to avoid both. Suggestion: 00:03:522 (4) to 162 | 252 and then try: http://puu.sh/fKnXN/6d5bd226ad.jpg for example c:
00:07:738 - Missing Clap.
00:34:333 - Missing Clap.
00:45:684 (3) - I think you wanted to end it 1/2 later, at 00:46:170 - o.o Currently I don't really get the rhythm.
The NCing is messed up. I would recommend you to place a NC at every 2nd big white tick for a logical pattern.
Finishes are missing at a lot of places, although you can hear important cymbals in the music. Please try to find these places and add a Soft / Normal Finish where you can hear them. If you need help, catch me ingame.

Mao

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Mao 2015-02-19T21:56:48+00:00

Gogo, Flobsi o/

Myxo

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Myxo 2015-02-19T22:12:54+00:00

2015-02-19 22:45 Desperate-kun: irc let's go
2015-02-19 22:45 FlobuFlobs: xDD
2015-02-19 22:45 FlobuFlobs: wie man nur 1 amibo gleichzeitig auf amazon kaufen darf
2015-02-19 22:45 Desperate-kun: lol
2015-02-19 22:45 FlobuFlobs: schreib ich direkt sonnyc für rank an
2015-02-19 22:45 FlobuFlobs: OH WAIT
2015-02-19 22:45 Desperate-kun: ne
2015-02-19 22:45 FlobuFlobs: oder neonat
2015-02-19 22:45 FlobuFlobs: OH WAIT
2015-02-19 22:46 FlobuFlobs: lust
2015-02-19 22:46 FlobuFlobs: OH WAIT
2015-02-19 22:46 Desperate-kun: is QAT
2015-02-19 22:46 Desperate-kun: xDDD
2015-02-19 22:46 FlobuFlobs: irre
2015-02-19 22:46 Desperate-kun: Mao
2015-02-19 22:46 Desperate-kun: hat ne GD und ist QAT
2015-02-19 22:46 Desperate-kun: :D
2015-02-19 22:46 FlobuFlobs: +1
2015-02-19 22:46 FlobuFlobs: direkt pereira
2015-02-19 22:46 FlobuFlobs: der würd sogar machen
2015-02-19 22:46 FlobuFlobs: wenn er keine gd hätt
2015-02-19 22:47 FlobuFlobs: kp
2015-02-19 22:47 FlobuFlobs: spamme wahrscheinlich kibbleru oder so zu
2015-02-19 22:47 Desperate-kun: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/554186 Nightmare - Alumina ~TV Size~ [Epicz's Easy]]
2015-02-19 22:47 Desperate-kun: 00:21:035 (3) - NC
2015-02-19 22:47 Desperate-kun: 00:25:900 (1,2) - NCs tauschen
2015-02-19 22:49 Desperate-kun: 00:44:387 (1) - hier einfach 00:45:684 (3) - nehmen und horizontal flippen
2015-02-19 22:49 Desperate-kun: vergiss nich hitsounds zu übernehmen vom alten slider
2015-02-19 22:50 Desperate-kun: 00:58:333 (3) - http://puu.sh/g49uz/be1c5bba75.jpg
2015-02-19 22:50 Desperate-kun: dat wars mit der diff
2015-02-19 22:51 FlobuFlobs: wew
2015-02-19 22:51 FlobuFlobs: dachte wäre schlimmer xD
2015-02-19 22:51 Desperate-kun: nene passt
2015-02-19 22:51 Desperate-kun: die diff is nich mehr kacke
2015-02-19 22:52 FlobuFlobs: xD
2015-02-19 22:52 FlobuFlobs: ich kann ja auch nicht nein zu gd
2015-02-19 22:52 FlobuFlobs: sagen >_>
2015-02-19 22:53 Desperate-kun: NCing bei Smoothie is auch nich grade der himmel auf erden
2015-02-19 22:53 Desperate-kun: aber w/e
2015-02-19 22:54 FlobuFlobs: kann ich auch ändern
2015-02-19 22:54 Desperate-kun: nene
2015-02-19 22:54 Desperate-kun: passt
2015-02-19 22:54 FlobuFlobs: smoothie lässt mich da auch ran
2015-02-19 22:54 Desperate-kun: uhhhhh
2015-02-19 22:54 Desperate-kun: jetzt ists raus
2015-02-19 22:54 FlobuFlobs: hö
2015-02-19 22:54 FlobuFlobs: xD
2015-02-19 22:55 Desperate-kun: update
2015-02-19 22:55 Desperate-kun: please
2015-02-19 22:55 Desperate-kun: dann check ich auf unrankable kram
2015-02-19 22:55 Desperate-kun: und guck jede diff noch einmal durch
2015-02-19 22:55 FlobuFlobs: DAFÜR HAB ICH 10 TAGE GEWARTET?
2015-02-19 22:55 FlobuFlobs: AUF DIE 10min
2015-02-19 22:55 Desperate-kun: ja
2015-02-19 22:55 FlobuFlobs: mappen ist ne bitch
2015-02-19 22:56 FlobuFlobs: hängt bei 11%
2015-02-19 22:56 FlobuFlobs: meh
2015-02-19 22:56 Desperate-kun: xD
2015-02-19 22:56 FlobuFlobs: jetzt bei creating package
2015-02-19 22:56 FlobuFlobs: 0%
2015-02-19 22:57 Desperate-kun: gj
2015-02-19 22:58 FlobuFlobs: ich restart ma
2015-02-19 22:59 Desperate-kun: jo
2015-02-19 22:59 FlobuFlobs: warum
2015-02-19 22:59 FlobuFlobs: trollt mich osu
2015-02-19 22:59 Desperate-kun: kp
2015-02-19 22:59 FlobuFlobs: beatmap processing...
2015-02-19 22:59 FlobuFlobs: bei 34k
2015-02-19 23:01 Desperate-kun: achja und die map is außerhalb meiner kudosu history
2015-02-19 23:01 Desperate-kun: kannst also nocheinmal einen geben dann
2015-02-19 23:01 Desperate-kun: ich hab dir immerhin genug stars geshooted
2015-02-19 23:01 Desperate-kun: auf deine sets xDD
2015-02-19 23:01 FlobuFlobs: xD
2015-02-19 23:01 FlobuFlobs: DIE PAAR
2015-02-19 23:01 FlobuFlobs: update
2015-02-19 23:01 FlobuFlobs: ~<3
2015-02-19 23:01 Desperate-kun: Hard
2015-02-19 23:01 Desperate-kun: update?
2015-02-19 23:02 Desperate-kun: oke
2015-02-19 23:03 Desperate-kun: interesting
2015-02-19 23:03 Desperate-kun: 30-Nightmare - Alumina (Tv Size)
2015-02-19 23:03 Desperate-kun: Genre: BLUES
2015-02-19 23:03 FlobuFlobs: hö
2015-02-19 23:04 FlobuFlobs: xD
2015-02-19 23:04 Desperate-kun: http://puu.sh/g4aDE/58bd9fb98a.png
2015-02-19 23:04 FlobuFlobs: aah
2015-02-19 23:04 FlobuFlobs: lol
2015-02-19 23:04 Desperate-kun: ups
2015-02-19 23:04 Desperate-kun: http://puu.sh/g4aDE/58bd9fb98a.png
2015-02-19 23:04 Desperate-kun: http://puu.sh/g4aEQ/8f992e86a6.png
2015-02-19 23:04 Desperate-kun: da
2015-02-19 23:04 FlobuFlobs: xD
2015-02-19 23:04 FlobuFlobs: ich hab ja zuerst ne diff in anderen set gemacht
2015-02-19 23:05 FlobuFlobs: dann irgendwann übernommen
2015-02-19 23:05 FlobuFlobs: deshalb
2015-02-19 23:05 Desperate-kun: dude
2015-02-19 23:05 Desperate-kun: warum
2015-02-19 23:05 Desperate-kun: sind hitclap 1 2 und 3 gleich
2015-02-19 23:05 FlobuFlobs: xxD
2015-02-19 23:05 FlobuFlobs: pssh
2015-02-19 23:05 Desperate-kun: achso
2015-02-19 23:05 Desperate-kun: okay
2015-02-19 23:05 FlobuFlobs: lol
2015-02-19 23:05 FlobuFlobs: weil
2015-02-19 23:05 Desperate-kun: ja is klar
2015-02-19 23:05 FlobuFlobs: lol
2015-02-19 23:06 Desperate-kun: epicz diff widescreen support aus please
2015-02-19 23:07 Desperate-kun: update plz
2015-02-19 23:09 FlobuFlobs: hab

Finally rebubbled! You deserve it c:

In case anyone is wondering why I'm bubbling actively even though I became QAT - because I'm clearing my old bubble pops :b

Mao

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Mao 2015-02-19T22:15:30+00:00

yaay

FlobuFlobs

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FlobuFlobs 2015-02-19T22:16:18+00:00

<3

Sieg

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Sieg 2015-02-20T11:14:08+00:00

Death Note ww

[General]

Combo color 3 and 4 way too similar this may lead to confusion in identifying new combo start, alter one of them.
There is no video on Normal diff.
Also take a note. That
Slider tick hitsounds are discouraged. If you want to use them, then make sure that their volume is balanced (i.e. notably quieter than regular hitsounds). A very loud slider tick, especially when only used once or twice, would be extremely jarring.
^ I'm not going to force you to change this tho, up to you.

[Mao's Insane]

00:43:414 (3) - Last repeat is excessive.

[Insane]

00:04:008 (7,1) - Some kind of jump here would be nice. Since you placed one on even weaker spot e.g. 00:01:089 (3,4) or 00:06:927 (5,6) or 00:09:846 (3,4)
^ Also applies to: 00:04:657 (2,3) // 00:09:197 (5,1) // 00:10:495 (6,1)
00:04:170 (1,3) - Idea is fine but these sliders shape quality is quite questionable.
00:12:927 (4) - Is this even a wave slider? Consider something like flow slider http://puu.sh/g4S4G/53a592ac91.jpg or just straight.
00:18:116 (4,1) - You difficulty will be way more cleaner if you make similar sliders by copy-pasting.
00:24:441 (2,3,1,2) - This "back" movement plays horrible bad, also this is big difficulty spike since you don't have any other complicated flow movements over your diff.
00:28:819 (1,1) - Already said about similar sliders. I guess you can easily find spots by yourself.
00:34:008 (1) - Wave can be improved here a lot. http://puu.sh/g4Skh/76b69654a5.jpg
00:43:414 (3) - Last repeat is excessive.
00:43:738 (2,1) - Anti Jump on such a strong beats plays weird, consider to incrise spacing here.
00:49:900 (4) - Normal sample set on head.
00:55:738 (3) - Whistle on head.
Difficulty needs some more polishing imo.

[Smoothie's Hard]

00:10:657 (1) - Move this up, please. http://puu.sh/g4SCB/2fc83999fe.jpg
00:11:306 (4,5) - Consider to end 4 on 00:11:630 () and remove circle, this will fit "long" vocals much better, also it would be easier to catch following slider.
00:31:008 (7,8) - Unstack, it's confusing to read since you use many 1\2 stacked and will help to keep consistancy.
00:44:387 (1) - Overlaps with hp bar.
01:01:576 (5) - ^ Same here.

[Epicz's Easy]

Slider tick rate 2 here looks weird becuse only used by insanes.
00:07:738 (4) - Soft clap intended here?
00:12:603 (3) - Clap on the end, also nearby green lines are useless here.
00:21:035 (1) - Clap on the end.
uhhh.... Check you HS pattern carefully, please, since I can't find any consistancy in and bacuse of that can't say for sure what is missed or what is not.
00:24:278 (6,7) - Placement is confusing, move 00:25:900 (7) out of 00:24:278 (6) slider end.
00:54:765 (1) - Offscreen.

[Easy]

00:00:927 (2,3) - I found this is amusing how you placed 2 soft hitwhistles only here and only for this diff. :3 Seriously, looking pretty random.
00:21:684 (2,3,4) - I want to see here transfer somewhat similar to 00:26:873 (2,3) - will fit much better.
00:56:711 (3) - Clap missed.
01:00:278 (2) - You mapped all kiai based on 1\1 rhythm and this one 3\2 consider to keep 1\1, also you missed you slider tick sound here.

FlobuFlobs

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FlobuFlobs 2015-02-20T12:12:17+00:00

RIP

ONE DAY

Sieg

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Sieg 2015-02-20T12:15:51+00:00

HEY, don't say such things:C
Just put a bit more work, that's not so hard. I'll gladly assist you.

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