_Gezo_ wrote:

#hellmetadata2015 #今はミニミニストップ一休み #土曜日モッディング

Try: Volume 75% - fixed

[Oni]
00:01:963 (8) - or 00:03:883 (16) - change hitsounds so they are the same. 8: d or 16: k. - fixed
00:05:083 (2) - delete | there's no strong syllable support (I doubt the i is really pronounced separately - fixed
00:11:683 (8,9) - this triplet isn't really necessary imo, the melody doesn't continue, it's separated from the rest. - fixed
00:26:203 (28,29,30) - Here, I don't think this dkd works well. ddk seems better. - fixed

[Muzukashii]
00:01:963 (5) - 00:03:883 (10) - Same as oni - fixed
00:24:523 (11,12) - k alone would suffice. the second k doesn't really fit nice and has no strong support. - no change . Because there was the sound of the turning point of the interval, I felt it if necessary.
00:30:283 (32,33,34) - Add some more notes ? The gap in that moment is huge compared to oni - fixed

_Gezo_ wrote:

#hellmetadata2015 #今はミニミニストップ一休み #土曜日モッディング

Try: Volume 75%


[chaica's Futsuu]
all ok. a bit dense at parts but it's ok.

[chaica's Kantan]
A bit too continuous (long 2/1 sequences, will see with Ono if that's okay due to the nature of the song), try to have some breaks, or on the opposite more notes.
00:18:763 (18) - Delete this note, not really necessary and that would make a nicer break - fixed

edit : talked with ono pretty quick, you can delete 00:07:243 (4) - 00:11:083 (8) - to have breaks - fixed

_Gezo_ wrote:

2nd of x checks, since it's a short map it'll be hard. These are mostly break suggestions

[Muzu]
00:00:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - as it stands now this particular part is not really good for the spread. have something like this ? (anything above would start to be too hard) http://i.chiyozel.com/ACzB5mpH - no change
00:06:283 (6,7,8,9,10) - ddd k - fixed
00:08:203 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - very large breakless portion, consider removing some notes to have some 2/1 breaks? (
00:11:563 (20) - despite necessary would be ok at least.
00:12:043 (21,22,23,24,25) - 22 or 24
00:13:483 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - move 28 between 26 and 27, so you have kkd ddk. works better if you deleted 24 above.) - fixed
00:16:843 (1,2,3,4) - dk d(spin) ? - fixed
00:25:723 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - I strongly recommend you to delete some notes here. long pattern. - fixed

[Oni]
Considering every change, you should try to add more breaks so it evens out the spread. That is, make more deletions where you think it is suitable.

00:00:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and next: doubtful about it, but it would be cool to have it all 1/2, for spread. At least this would be very nice. - no change

_Gezo_ wrote:

2nd of x checks, since it's a short map it'll be hard. These are mostly break suggestions

[Kantan]
00:20:683 - add note here ? idk it was deleted either by accident or for some odd reason. - addd ,Why did it disappear...T_T
Speculation about adding breaks here 00:25:483 (21,4) - The pattern is rather large... So maybe add breaks ? - yes,I am fit the pattern.

I don't think this map can have many more breaks.

[Futsuu]
00:00:523 (1,2) - add more notes here so you have a nice transition (KF ------------------- M as it stands now) - 00:01:483-addk.
00:10:123 (10,11,12) - d k as 2/1 to have a small break and rhythm variety? ^ - delete k
00:06:283 (4,5,6) - ^ just noticed - 00:06:763 note delete,
00:15:883 (21,22,23) - There too, d d 2/1 should be nice to have. - 00:16:363 note delete.
00:19:243 (1,2,3) - I think you can delete 2 to have a break before the pattern which is rahter large - 00:19:723 note delete.
00:24:523 (5,6,7) - delete at least 6, it's not necessary imo. 7 is optional, but it would be nice to delete it as well if you wish to conserve a fairly simple futsuu - fixed
00:28:363 (13,14,15,16,17) - i'd say k k d d on that pattern, or k k d (17 deleted), same as above reasons, to have a better spread. - fixed

Mame ga nyaa wrote:

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MidSoul wrote:

本当に、本当に遅いなんてもんじゃないのですがfrom PM,です。遅れて申し訳ありません！


[Oni]
00:25:243 (23,24) -kk ?
・前の00:25:003 (22) - このkに対して、25:243の地点では全ての音が上昇しており、元がkである以上低く聞こえる音を置くのはあまりよくないという判断のためです。2つ目のkは25:243の余韻とボーカルの伸びを表します。

00:30:043 (44) - k
・上記とほぼ同様の理由です。この前のkに対しこちらの位置の方がすべてのおtが上昇しているため、dは適さないと判断します。

曲が、ですね、音が非常に少ない。なので音ゲーとしては音に合わせるべきなんですがそれを明確にしてしまっては楽しめる要素も少ない。はっきり言って言えることも少ない。
感覚でModしないと決めていたのでちょっと実はPMをもらった当時では力量不足で「えっ‥こんなの何も言えるわけ無いやん・・」と本気で思ってました。

今になってこの譜面を見ると、最大限おもしろさと変化を持たせることを考慮した上で悪くない譜面だと思います。
Modder集めこれだけ頑張ったんですからBN呼びましょう！
あと埋もれてるため☆投げ返せないのでもし復帰するようなら声かけてください！

1. General
   
   1. How about set HP to 7? because the drain time is very short.
2. Hitsounds
   
   1. 00:12:523 - this part is a bit stiff with only 2/1 pattern, try to add d to follow the vocal
   2. 00:15:883 (12,13) - how about reverse them? I feel the vocal's pitch on 00:15:883 - is a bit lower than 00:14:923 -

1. General
   
   1. As I said on kantan, try to use HP 6
2. Spread
   
   1. 00:12:043 - ~00:14:923 - could be easier,it is almost same as muzu
3. Hitsounds
   
   1. 00:04:843 (2) - move to 00:05:803 - and change to k would more fit the vocal's accent
   2. 00:08:683 (7) - same a above, move to 00:10:603 - and change 00:11:083 (10) - to k
   3. 00:29:323 (15,16,17,18,19) - this pattern sounds not really good imo, try this

1. Spread
   
   1. 00:00:523 - ~00:04:363 - this part is a bit denser compare with futsuu, try to make it less density , just use 1/1 pattern and 2/1 break is enough
   2. 00:11:563 (19) - could be removed to make 2/1 break
   3. 00:17:323 - add note to make the gap higher with futsuu
   4. 00:30:523 - compare with oni, the gap is a bit high, so add note here
2. Hitsounds
   
   1. 00:06:523 (7) - this note may loss the emphasis of the song, try to remove it would be better
   2. 00:24:763 (12) - the vocal is long tone note, so remove it would be better.

1. Spread
   
   1. 00:00:523 - ~00:04:363 -as i said on muzu, make this part less dense
2. Hitsounds
   
   1. 00:06:763 (9) - change to k to follow the vocal's accent

qoot8123 wrote:

Hi o/
from TNA queue

[ Muzukashii]

1. Spread
   
   1. 00:00:523 - ~00:04:363 - this part is a bit denser compare with futsuu, try to make it less density , just use 1/1 pattern and 2/1 break is enough
   2. 00:11:563 (19) - could be removed to make 2/1 break
   3. 00:17:323 - add note to make the gap higher with futsuu
   4. 00:30:523 - compare with oni, the gap is a bit high, so add note here
2. Hitsounds
   
   1. 00:06:523 (7) - this note may loss the emphasis of the song, try to remove it would be better
   2. 00:24:763 (12) - the vocal is long tone note, so remove it would be better.

[ Oni]

1. Spread
   
   1. 00:00:523 - ~00:04:363 -as i said on muzu, make this part less dense
2. Hitsounds
   
   1. 00:06:763 (9) - change to k to follow the vocal's accent

good luck!

qoot8123 wrote:

Hi o/
from TNA queue

[ Kantan]

1. General
   
   1. How about set HP to 7? because the drain time is very short. - ok!
2. Hitsounds
   
   1. 00:12:523 - this part is a bit stiff with only 2/1 pattern, try to add d to follow the vocal - ok,00:14:443 add d.
   2. 00:15:883 (12,13) - how about reverse them? I feel the vocal's pitch on 00:15:883 - is a bit lower than 00:14:923 - ok~

[ Futsuu]

1. General
   
   1. As I said on kantan, try to use HP 6 - fixed.
2. Spread
   
   1. 00:12:043 - ~00:14:923 - could be easier,it is almost same as muzu - ok,
3. Hitsounds
   
   1. 00:04:843 (2) - move to 00:05:803 - and change to k would more fit the vocal's accent - ok
   2. 00:08:683 (7) - same a above, move to 00:10:603 - and change 00:11:083 (10) - to k - ok
   3. 00:29:323 (15,16,17,18,19) - this pattern sounds not really good imo, try this

- okay

good luck!

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• [chaica's Kantan]

1. 00:21:643 (18) - maybe k to fit the higher-pitched vocal ?

• [chaica's Futsuu]

1. 00:12:043 (11) - consider changing this note to k to make it consistent with Kantan ?
2. 00:28:603 (13) - move to 00:29:083 - and change 00:28:843 (14) - to k ? This would follow the vocal in a way better.
3. 00:30:523 (17) - you may move this note to 00:30:283 - to improve the flow.

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:06:763 (7,8) - consider swapping these notes to k d ? This would fit the decreasing pitch of vocal nicely imo.
2. 00:28:603 (23) - move to 00:29:083 - to follow the vocal there ?

• [Oni]

1. 00:28:603 (37,39) - you may swap these notes to d k to fit the higher-pitched vocal at 00:29:083 -
2. 00:29:803 (43) - d would sound better if you change ^

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko as requested in TNA queue.

• [chaica's Kantan]

1. 00:21:643 (18) - maybe k to fit the higher-pitched vocal ? - ok~

• [chaica's Futsuu]

1. 00:12:043 (11) - consider changing this note to k to make it consistent with Kantan ? - ok
2. 00:28:603 (13) - move to 00:29:083 - and change 00:28:843 (14) - to k ? This would follow the vocal in a way better. - ok
3. 00:30:523 (17) - you may move this note to 00:30:283 - to improve the flow. - ok

You may call me back after that~

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko as requested in TNA queue.

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:06:763 (7,8) - consider swapping these notes to k d ? This would fit the decreasing pitch of vocal nicely imo.
2. 00:28:603 (23) - move to 00:29:083 - to follow the vocal there ?

• [Oni]

1. 00:28:603 (37,39) - you may swap these notes to d k to fit the higher-pitched vocal at 00:29:083 -
2. 00:29:803 (43) - d would sound better if you change ^

You may call me back after that~

Pnkmjp wrote:

_Gezo_ wrote:

Pnkmjp wrote:

今はデザート昼休み wait what

[Futsuu]
increase HP to 8 please 56.12% (2c)

00:20:683 (3,4,5) - dkd feels out of place (みにみに are same pitch), change to ddd ? - ok,but since become monotonous,00:21:643 change k(same as kantan).

[Kantan]
HP8 is possible but try 9 first ? 51.52% (2 notes hit before kiai) - ok

_Gezo_ wrote:

Pnkmjp wrote:

今はデザート昼休み wait what


[Oni]
HP drain rate is way too low. Increase to 7. 63.51% (6c)

[Muzukashii]
HP7 please 58.44% (5c)

Pnkmjp wrote:

_Gezo_ wrote:

Pnkmjp wrote:

toara_fict wrote:

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