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AKINO with bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR

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Topic Starter
Rizia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年12月12日 at 13:27:05

Artist: AKINO with bless4
Title: EXTRA MAGIC HOUR
Source: 甘城ブリリアントパーク
Tags: opening amagi brilliant park
BPM: 180
Filesize: 6944kb
Play Time: 04:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.58 stars, 215 notes)
  2. Hard (3.55 stars, 571 notes)
  3. Insane (4.9 stars, 869 notes)
  4. Normal (2.06 stars, 313 notes)
Download: AKINO with bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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kowaiwkyik
Ujimatsu Chiya
I WANT MAKE HARD !!! xD

Har..d.. orz
Awaken
瞎了 神速做完所有set
Topic Starter
Rizia
sorry i want map full set myself ;w;
Bki
整体说这是一张很不错的图啊!话说你只弄了很短时间么!这就是pro mapper的可怕

Insane


赞,真的找不出什么毛病,奔放的风格,我的码谱风格也是那种不要平行与网格的那种


你每次结尾都要一个note的,被坑的感觉,酸爽

00:08:604 (2) - HR之后距离太远,建议:要么干掉要么贴到下一个拖条的开头
00:11:438 (2) - 不工整,模仿下面style应该在贴近一点00:11:771 (4) - 滑条头
00:13:271 (6,7,8) - 太远,我觉得这种滑条群应该一远两近一远两近,要么就是一近两远一近两远的


00:19:438 (2) - 说过了,HR后距离会大增,建议如上第一条
00:20:104 (4) - end与 00:15:771 (4) - 对齐
00:48:271 (5) - HR后横着来的会断,再向上斜一点
01:50:938 (7) - 太远,调整
02:58:771 (3,4) - HR后反而太近
03:25:438 (3,4) - ^
03:50:771 (5,6) - 远,不要同一条线反而更好

Hard

00:32:271 (7) - 摆滑条与滑条间距中间吧,你这个是hard难度啊
02:01:438 (2) - 没对正,以后用滑条在开头和结尾做尺子量量(偏左下了)
02:13:271 (3,4) - 这些也是
02:13:271 (3,4) - 要么把note彻底弯出去,要么校正
02:24:771 (3) - ^

Normal

01:06:938 (1) - 音效忘记加了
02:09:604 (1) - ^
02:14:938 (1) - ^
03:36:271 (1) - ^
03:41:604 (1) - ^

EZ

00:08:938 (1) - 太早放,应在下一个拍的白线停
00:49:771 (3) - 不好听!中间那里! 分割成两个slider都在白线起落
01:06:438 (4) - 这个应该也要往返吧,不然不好看也不怎么好听
01:13:271 (2) - 急了点删掉也没关系
01:15:938 (2) - ^
01:57:771 (3) - 中间那也是不好听
02:05:104 (5) - 诶,往返
02:21:271 (2) - 删(我试了试,你也可以把他们叠在下一个拖条的开头)
02:21:271 (2) - ^
03:26:604 (2) - ^
03:29:271 (2) - ^
03:36:104 (4) - 往返
03:46:771 (4) - ^
Topic Starter
Rizia

Bki wrote:

整体说这是一张很不错的图啊!话说你只弄了很短时间么!这就是pro mapper的可怕

Insane


赞,真的找不出什么毛病,奔放的风格,我的码谱风格也是那种不要平行与网格的那种


你每次结尾都要一个note的,被坑的感觉,酸爽

00:08:604 (2) - HR之后距离太远,建议:要么干掉要么贴到下一个拖条的开头
00:11:438 (2) - 不工整,模仿下面style应该在贴近一点00:11:771 (4) - 滑条头
00:13:271 (6,7,8) - 太远,我觉得这种滑条群应该一远两近一远两近,要么就是一近两远一近两远的


00:19:438 (2) - 说过了,HR后距离会大增,建议如上第一条
00:20:104 (4) - end与 00:15:771 (4) - 对齐
00:48:271 (5) - HR后横着来的会断,再向上斜一点
01:50:938 (7) - 太远,调整
02:58:771 (3,4) - HR后反而太近
03:25:438 (3,4) - ^
03:50:771 (5,6) - 远,不要同一条线反而更好

Hard

00:32:271 (7) - 摆滑条与滑条间距中间吧,你这个是hard难度啊
02:01:438 (2) - 没对正,以后用滑条在开头和结尾做尺子量量(偏左下了)
02:13:271 (3,4) - 这些也是
02:13:271 (3,4) - 要么把note彻底弯出去,要么校正
02:24:771 (3) - ^

Normal

01:06:938 (1) - 音效忘记加了
02:09:604 (1) - ^
02:14:938 (1) - ^
03:36:271 (1) - ^
03:41:604 (1) - ^

EZ

00:08:938 (1) - 太早放,应在下一个拍的白线停
00:49:771 (3) - 不好听!中间那里! 分割成两个slider都在白线起落
01:06:438 (4) - 这个应该也要往返吧,不然不好看也不怎么好听
01:13:271 (2) - 急了点删掉也没关系
01:15:938 (2) - ^
01:57:771 (3) - 中间那也是不好听
02:05:104 (5) - 诶,往返
02:21:271 (2) - 删(我试了试,你也可以把他们叠在下一个拖条的开头)
02:21:271 (2) - ^
03:26:604 (2) - ^
03:29:271 (2) - ^
03:36:104 (4) - 往返
03:46:771 (4) - ^
insane不打算考慮任何mod的東西(包括dt hr hd fl)
hard不夠直的都搞好了
nm的hitsound加好了
easy我盡量避免改一些可能會增加圖難度的東西
thanks for mod
這圖我是一天一難度做出來的ORZ 太喜歡了
KaedekaShizuru
[General]
BG在不调到很闇的情况下与combo2的颜色过于相近(嘛 我的眼睛问题摊手)
顺便combo2和combo3的颜色也很接近?(错觉?
[Insane]
00:42:938 (9) - 可以考虑在中间加一个锚点让它与00:43:104 (1)作blanket
00:47:271 (2) - 替换为slider并持续到00:47:604,中间空着很不舒服
00:52:438 (1,2) - 人性?
02:29:771 - spin
02:49:104 (3) - 弧度稍微小一点 顺便CTRL+G并旋转一下 flow太顺了
03:21:771 (1,2) - 音量大一点 毕竟是很明显的嚓音

[Hard]
00:09:604 - 在hard是无用绿线
00:09:771 - 可以挪到00:11:104
02:29:771 - spin
04:09:604 (1) - 放中间算啦
Mint
Topic Starter
Rizia

appleeaterx wrote:

Topic Starter
Rizia

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[General]
BG在不调到很闇的情况下与combo2的颜色过于相近(嘛 我的眼睛问题摊手)
顺便combo2和combo3的颜色也很接近?(错觉?
[Insane]
00:42:938 (9) - 可以考虑在中间加一个锚点让它与00:43:104 (1)作blanket
00:47:271 (2) - 替换为slider并持续到00:47:604,中间空着很不舒服
00:52:438 (1,2) - 人性?
02:29:771 - spin
02:49:104 (3) - 弧度稍微小一点 顺便CTRL+G并旋转一下 flow太顺了
03:21:771 (1,2) - 音量大一点 毕竟是很明显的嚓音 在其他DIFF也fix了

[Hard]
00:09:604 - 在hard是无用绿线
00:09:771 - 可以挪到00:11:104
02:29:771 - spin
04:09:604 (1) - 放中间算啦
其他不想改
xxdeathx
IRC mod
22:49 xxdeathx: you wanted irc?
22:50 Kawaiwkyik: yea
22:52 xxdeathx: was it this one
22:52 *xxdeathx is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/532562 AKINO with bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR]
22:52 Kawaiwkyik: yes
22:52 *xxdeathx is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/532338 AKINO with bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR [Insane]]
22:56 xxdeathx: mmm very nice
22:56 xxdeathx: i got an A on a 5 star 180 bpm song
22:57 xxdeathx: the jumps weren't too bad at all, most of the time i didn't miss any there
22:57 Kawaiwkyik: seem it's a 5star easy map
22:58 xxdeathx: lol like frostmourne's ignite
22:58 Kawaiwkyik: easy to get many pp
22:58 xxdeathx: 00:08:021 (7) - i think this would sound better at 00:07:854 - or 00:07:688 -
22:58 xxdeathx: long songs are hard to get pp >.<
23:00 Kawaiwkyik: keep this
23:00 xxdeathx: i compared to my diff and wcx's diff
23:00 xxdeathx: 00:19:104 (1,2) - 3/4 slider + circle is overmapped imo, since music is empty here
23:00 xxdeathx: 1/1 slider is better
23:02 Kawaiwkyik: ok
23:03 xxdeathx: 00:35:104 (1) - flow is kind of awkward because slider is in opposite direction from previous objects, maybe http://puu.sh/cHRIG/2949e59b63.png
23:04 xxdeathx: 00:53:104 (1,2) - circles for these vocals really don't feel right, since the vocals sound long and drawn out
23:05 xxdeathx: i think a 1/1 or two 3/4 sliders fit the music much better for those vocals
23:06 Kawaiwkyik: maybe put some 1/4 ?
23:06 xxdeathx: maybe 1/4 or you can use that in kiai
23:06 xxdeathx: for the middle part
23:06 xxdeathx: i used 1/4 in the middle of my kiai
23:06 xxdeathx: i used 1/4 here in my diff but i think you already have it 01:03:438 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
23:06 xxdeathx: 00:53:104 (1,2) - is kind of slow, maybe 1/4 is not best idea
23:08 Kawaiwkyik: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2215370
23:09 xxdeathx: that can work
23:09 xxdeathx: 00:54:771 (4,1) - you want the circle to be in the slider's path
23:09 xxdeathx: like move the circle to the left or the slider to the right so the curve matches up
23:09 xxdeathx: to help with playability
23:10 Kawaiwkyik: ok i try
23:13 xxdeathx: i think the jump at 01:03:938 (7,8) - is too big, how about move 01:04:104 (8,9) - http://puu.sh/cHSaK/727495c3fb.png
23:16 xxdeathx: 01:22:771 (4,1) - blanket can be fixed
23:20 Kawaiwkyik: yea it change to 4.90star after i remaped 01:08:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
23:20 xxdeathx: idk i thoguht that pattern was pretty fun
23:21 Kawaiwkyik: http://puu.sh/cHSwq/a1258189d7.jpg
23:22 Kawaiwkyik: i'm always break combo there
23:22 xxdeathx: ah i guess that pattern looks neater
23:22 xxdeathx: 01:43:438 (3) - the vocal at 01:43:604 - is very interesting so i wouldn't want to ignore it
23:22 xxdeathx: maybe change 01:43:438 (3) - to 2 circles + 1/4 slider
23:23 xxdeathx: 02:01:104 (1,2) - same thing about these circles that i said earlier
23:24 Kawaiwkyik: fixed
23:26 xxdeathx: 02:03:938 (4,5) - ctrl-g plays better
23:26 xxdeathx: then you can have 02:04:438 (1) - point the other way
23:30 xxdeathx: 02:19:438 (3,4) - opposite direction slider after a jump is bad flow so you want to move the slider or change its direction or use red point to help change direction
23:32 xxdeathx: like http://puu.sh/cHSX5/b07d3db89b.png
23:44 Kawaiwkyik: actually i love these flow on play orz
23:44 Kawaiwkyik: *playing
23:45 xxdeathx: yeah, but it may break combo so be careful
23:46 xxdeathx: 02:49:104 (3) - ctrl-g would create jumps at 02:48:771 (2,3,4) - that fit the music
23:47 Kawaiwkyik: ok
23:48 xxdeathx: 02:50:438 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - orz easiest combo break
23:48 xxdeathx: i always miss here on oracion
23:49 Kawaiwkyik: orz
23:50 xxdeathx: 02:51:604 (2) - 1/4 doesn't fit here, i think should be 1/2
23:51 xxdeathx: 03:01:854 (1) - end at 03:04:104 so you have more time for notes after spinner?
23:51 xxdeathx: 03:04:104 -
23:52 Kawaiwkyik: 02:51:604 (2) - it's 1/2
23:52 Kawaiwkyik: that spinner is ok for playing
23:52 xxdeathx: orz i must have changed it
23:52 xxdeathx: while moving stuff >.<
23:53 Kawaiwkyik: sad
23:53 xxdeathx: i guess the spinner is ok because the circles are at the center
23:57 xxdeathx: ok remember to check the timing at the end 04:05:021 (1,1) -
23:57 xxdeathx: wcx and i added new timing point at around 170 bpm
23:57 xxdeathx: for the spinner and last note
23:58 xxdeathx: oh 174 bpm
23:58 Kawaiwkyik: ummmm
23:59 Kawaiwkyik: but i feel it to early on this beat
23:59 Kawaiwkyik: 04:09:248 -
00:00 xxdeathx: did you add 174 bpm red timing point at 04:04:938 - ?
00:00 Kawaiwkyik: YEA
00:00 xxdeathx: and you feel it's off?
00:00 Kawaiwkyik: i tested before i start map this diff
00:00 Kawaiwkyik: yea
00:01 xxdeathx: maybe consult another timer for it then, because ours is getting ranked with it
00:01 xxdeathx: and you want all the mapsets of this song to be consistent
00:05 xxdeathx: want to do hard now
00:05 *xxdeathx is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/533591 AKINO with bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR [Hard]]
00:10 xxdeathx: 另外的时候再看timing吧
00:10 Kawaiwkyik: ok
00:10 xxdeathx: 00:08:938 (1,1) - in hard, i think 1/2 beat after slider is unrankable
00:13 Kawaiwkyik: ok i will map spinner part
00:13 xxdeathx: 03:01:938 (1,1) - and here too
00:13 xxdeathx: my suggestion for insane was to end spinner earlier
00:14 Kawaiwkyik: i hate spinner rules ;w;
00:15 xxdeathx: orz i hate unranks
00:15 xxdeathx: i think wcx's set has spent a record number of days in qualified
00:16 xxdeathx: 6.5 days + 6.5 days + 7 days = 20 days >.<
00:16 Kawaiwkyik: rank 3times
00:16 xxdeathx: 00:53:104 (1,2) - 02:01:104 (1,2) - same suggestion as insane to use sliders
00:17 xxdeathx: everything else is very nice in this diff, looks a lot like fycho's hards
00:18 Kawaiwkyik: my 1st ranked map has unrank twice too ;w;
00:18 xxdeathx: `the little busters song that everybody plays with DT?
00:19 *Kawaiwkyik is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/362949 Suzuyu - Mezameta Asa ni wa Kimi ga Tonari ni (TV Size)]
00:19 Kawaiwkyik: unrank by timing
00:19 xxdeathx: whta was wrong with timing
00:20 *xxdeathx is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/532562 AKINO with bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR [Normal]]
00:20 Kawaiwkyik: i think watch that thread can understand ;w;
00:21 xxdeathx: ok
00:22 Kawaiwkyik: http://puu.sh/cHUTS/90419f0f41.jpg
00:22 Kawaiwkyik: 00:53:104 -
00:23 Kawaiwkyik: is it ok if i put like this
00:23 xxdeathx: why the repeat tick o.o
00:24 Kawaiwkyik: sounds good
00:24 xxdeathx: lol i guess
00:24 xxdeathx: fycho's hard uses two 1/4 repeat sliders lol
00:24 *xxdeathx is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/532562 AKINO with bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR [Normal]]
00:24 xxdeathx: 02:19:104 (2,3) - this is a little awkward to play because it stretches away from the other stuff
00:25 xxdeathx: and then has to make a sharp turn to reach the next object
00:25 xxdeathx: i hightly suggest htis pattern instead http://puu.sh/cHV0L/f63c4978bf.png
00:27 Kawaiwkyik: great
00:30 xxdeathx: 02:47:771 (4,5,1) - ah this doesn't flow well
00:30 xxdeathx: you want to follow slider paths or the beginners will get confused
00:31 Kawaiwkyik: http://puu.sh/cHVgi/0b440d98ea.jpg
00:32 xxdeathx: yeah that's better
00:32 Kawaiwkyik: ok
00:33 *xxdeathx is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/533599 AKINO with bless4 - EXTRA MAGIC HOUR [Easy]]
00:38 xxdeathx: too much nc? 02:06:104 (1) -
00:39 Kawaiwkyik: switch nc with 02:05:104 (5,1) -
00:39 xxdeathx: better is remove nc to stay consistent with first kiai
00:41 xxdeathx: 02:29:771 (1) - there is a lot going on here so it will be hard to guess which note in the song the player is supposed to hit
00:41 Kawaiwkyik: umm ok
00:41 Kawaiwkyik: maybe remove this?
00:42 xxdeathx: how about slider starting at 02:29:438-
00:42 xxdeathx: 02:29:438 -
00:42 xxdeathx: slider means you don't have to worry about getting 100
00:42 Kawaiwkyik: but it's need 4 beat after spinner
00:42 xxdeathx: and 02:29:438 - is the first strong note
00:42 xxdeathx: are you sure about 4 beats?
00:43 Kawaiwkyik: 我記得rule是這樣寫的
00:44 xxdeathx: ok, remove or put slider then >.<
00:44 xxdeathx: it's just hard to hit circle with the rhythm there
00:44 Kawaiwkyik: or elongate that spinner to02:29:771 - ?
00:45 Kawaiwkyik: seem work
00:45 xxdeathx: also okay
00:47 xxdeathx: 03:17:771 - orz this section's hitsounds are too quiet for all diffs
00:47 xxdeathx: i can't hear the hitnormal at all
00:48 Kawaiwkyik: change vol to 50%?
00:48 xxdeathx: i changed vol to 60% still can't hear
00:48 Kawaiwkyik: 00:21:771 -
00:48 xxdeathx: 80% can barely hear
00:48 Kawaiwkyik: here is 50% too
00:49 xxdeathx: i think it's best to use different hitsound
00:49 Kawaiwkyik: also s:c2 too
00:49 xxdeathx: i think that part was quieter
00:49 xxdeathx: but now that you show me, it's also hard to hear
00:49 xxdeathx: just not impossible
00:49 Kawaiwkyik: sad
00:50 xxdeathx: maybe ask other people about this
00:50 xxdeathx: i am worst with hitsounds
00:50 Kawaiwkyik: i use 50
00:51 xxdeathx: yeah idk myself
00:51 xxdeathx: ok that's it
00:51 Kawaiwkyik: ok
00:52 Kawaiwkyik: modded 2 hours
00:52 xxdeathx: wow
00:52 xxdeathx: i don't mod full length songs that much lol
00:52 xxdeathx: i will post log now?
00:52 Kawaiwkyik: ok
00:53 xxdeathx: gj, hope you get this ranked :D
00:53 Kawaiwkyik: i will rank this :3
I'm holding you to that.
Rakuen
( =`・ω・´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

Default = Normal mods
Opt. = Optional / Minor / Nazi
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
:3

[KIAI Times]
Prefer the KIAI to stop at where the bg music stops. The first one at 01:20:438 - .
So maybe you can do a flash effect (on and off) at 01:21:771 - if you want.
Applies to the rest of the KIAI parts.

[Easy]
  1. Remove unneeded timing points~
  2. 00:47:104 - Remove clap, it should be at 00:47:771 -
  3. 00:49:771 (3) - This one is a bit off imo, try this rhythm:
  4. 00:53:104 - These are not needed timings~ mentioned tho :33
  5. 01:13:604 (3) - Minor blanket
  6. 01:57:771 (3) - Same as 00:49:771 (3) -
  7. 02:21:604 (3) - Minor blanket
  8. 03:17:771 - Can add some whistles here, too quiet
  9. 03:29:271 (2) - Put up there?:
  10. 03:34:438 (2) - I'd NC here for the change and new KIAI part
  11. 04:00:938 - Add Clap
[Normal]
  1. Remove unneeded timing points~
  2. 00:27:771 (2) - Try not to stack 00:26:104 (4) - ? (opt.)
  3. 01:13:604 - Missing Finish? Like 01:16:271 -
  4. 01:27:104 - A clap fits here
  5. 01:53:104 (4) - Prefer to follow the triangle placed at 01:51:104 (1) - , seems the slider is a bit off flow imo
  6. 02:04:271 (1) - Missing Finish? First KIAI have finish
  7. 02:12:104 (5) - Clap!
  8. 02:17:104 (5) - Try not to stack on 02:15:771 (2) - , maybe move the set 02:16:438 (3,4,5,6) - upper
  9. 02:18:271 - Clap?
  10. 02:50:438 - Clap!
  11. 03:01:104 - Clap? @_@
  12. 03:17:771 - Too quiet ; w ;
  13. 03:24:938 - imo here needs clap...and for 03:25:438 - too
  14. 03:33:771 (5) - NC for off KIAI
  15. 03:44:104 - Clap!?
  16. Try to check the hitsounds for all diffs too? :)
[Hard]
  1. 00:32:271 (7) - This stack will break the flow imo, I'd make it moving to 00:32:438 (1) -
  2. 00:37:271 (3) - Nor perfectly stacked tho
  3. 00:42:521 (4) - ^ This one too~
  4. 00:47:771 - Clap?
  5. 00:56:271 (6,7,1) - Rhythm is strange...prefer something like 00:57:438 (3,1,2) - (opt. both looks ok)
  6. 01:01:604 (5,1) - Umm...there's a triplet at previous set tho
  7. 01:04:104 - Clap here sounds cool!
  8. 01:24:104 - Sounds a clap in song!
  9. 01:51:104 (1) - Make it snapped like on the tail of 01:50:771 (4) - (reverse and 1.4x DS):
  10. 02:01:104 (5) - NC to signify SV change
  11. 02:25:771 - Clap or Finish?
  12. 03:05:271 (2) - NC, there's anti jump here
  13. 03:17:771 - Come some whistles~
  14. 03:25:438 - Missing Clap? ;w;
  15. 03:33:771 - Prefer a slowed down slider to be added here too~ like 0.8SV
  16. 03:44:104 - Clap clap...OAQ
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:104 (8) - Clap?
  2. 00:09:854 (2) - Clap! :3
  3. 00:10:354 (6) - ^ :3
  4. 00:10:604 (8,9) - ^ :33
  5. 02:29:438 (1,2) - Minor blanket:
  6. 03:20:938 (2) - Too specific...prefer to follow vocal at 03:21:104 -
Nice song and map!
~(=^・ω・^)/。・:*:・゚★,。・:*:・゚☆
Topic Starter
Rizia

Rakuen wrote:

( =`・ω・´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

Default = Normal mods
Opt. = Optional / Minor / Nazi
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
:3

[KIAI Times]
Prefer the KIAI to stop at where the bg music stops. The first one at 01:20:438 - .
So maybe you can do a flash effect (on and off) at 01:21:771 - if you want.
Applies to the rest of the KIAI parts.

[Easy]
  1. Remove unneeded timing points~
  2. 00:47:104 - Remove clap, it should be at 00:47:771 -
  3. 00:49:771 (3) - This one is a bit off imo, try this rhythm:
  4. 00:53:104 - These are not needed timings~ mentioned tho :33
  5. 01:13:604 (3) - Minor blanket
  6. 01:57:771 (3) - Same as 00:49:771 (3) -
  7. 02:21:604 (3) - Minor blanket
  8. 03:17:771 - Can add some whistles here, too quiet
  9. 03:29:271 (2) - Put up there?:
  10. 03:34:438 (2) - I'd NC here for the change and new KIAI part
  11. 04:00:938 - Add Clap
[Normal]
  1. Remove unneeded timing points~
  2. 00:27:771 (2) - Try not to stack 00:26:104 (4) - ? (opt.)
  3. 01:13:604 - Missing Finish? Like 01:16:271 -
  4. 01:27:104 - A clap fits here
  5. 01:53:104 (4) - Prefer to follow the triangle placed at 01:51:104 (1) - , seems the slider is a bit off flow imo
  6. 02:04:271 (1) - Missing Finish? First KIAI have finish
  7. 02:12:104 (5) - Clap!
  8. 02:17:104 (5) - Try not to stack on 02:15:771 (2) - , maybe move the set 02:16:438 (3,4,5,6) - upper
  9. 02:18:271 - Clap?
  10. 02:50:438 - Clap!
  11. 03:01:104 - Clap? @_@
  12. 03:17:771 - Too quiet ; w ;
  13. 03:24:938 - imo here needs clap...and for 03:25:438 - too
  14. 03:33:771 (5) - NC for off KIAI
  15. 03:44:104 - Clap!?
  16. Try to check the hitsounds for all diffs too? :)
[Hard]
  1. 00:32:271 (7) - This stack will break the flow imo, I'd make it moving to 00:32:438 (1) -
  2. 00:37:271 (3) - Nor perfectly stacked tho
  3. 00:42:521 (4) - ^ This one too~
  4. 00:47:771 - Clap?
  5. 00:56:271 (6,7,1) - Rhythm is strange...prefer something like 00:57:438 (3,1,2) - (opt. both looks ok)
  6. 01:01:604 (5,1) - Umm...there's a triplet at previous set tho
  7. 01:04:104 - Clap here sounds cool!
  8. 01:24:104 - Sounds a clap in song!
  9. 01:51:104 (1) - Make it snapped like on the tail of 01:50:771 (4) - (reverse and 1.4x DS):
  10. 02:01:104 (5) - NC to signify SV change
  11. 02:25:771 - Clap or Finish?
  12. 03:05:271 (2) - NC, there's anti jump here
  13. 03:17:771 - Come some whistles~
  14. 03:25:438 - Missing Clap? ;w;
  15. 03:33:771 - Prefer a slowed down slider to be added here too~ like 0.8SV i think it's good now
  16. 03:44:104 - Clap clap...OAQ
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:104 (8) - Clap?
  2. 00:09:854 (2) - Clap! :3
  3. 00:10:354 (6) - ^ :3
  4. 00:10:604 (8,9) - ^ :33
  5. 02:29:438 (1,2) - Minor blanket:
  6. 03:20:938 (2) - Too specific...prefer to follow vocal at 03:21:104 -
Nice song and map!
~(=^・ω・^)/。・:*:・゚★,。・:*:・゚☆
Fixed unused timing point, hitsound, blanket and some rhythm suggestion
i don't want clap on 01:04:104 - (same as之後)
thanks for mod~~~
Sellenite
[Insane]
  1. 00:07:771 (5) - 156,200?顺便加finish
  2. 00:47:604 我觉得这里加个circle节奏更连贯
  3. 01:13:604 (1) - 滑条头加finish
  4. 01:28:604 (3,4) - 我是觉得叠起来显得气势不足,你后面那个相同的部分也是跳的
  5. 03:47:771 (3) - 滑条头加finish
  6. 04:03:771 (1,2) - 每个地方都加clap吧,这1/3听起来太虚了
  7. 04:09:604 (1) -
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:771 (4) - 滑条头加finish
  2. 01:13:604 加finish
  3. 01:51:104 (1) - 距离这么放好看
  4. 03:46:938 (5) - finish改放在滑条尾
  5. 03:47:771 (3) - 头加finish
  6. 04:03:771 (3) - 同insane
normal滑条速度有点感人,easy没问题
美丽
Topic Starter
Rizia

Sellenite wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:07:771 (5) - 156,200?顺便加finish 位置不改了 想保持三角梗 finish加了
  2. 00:47:604 我觉得这里加个circle节奏更连贯 沒音
  3. 01:13:604 (1) - 滑条头加finish
  4. 01:28:604 (3,4) - 我是觉得叠起来显得气势不足,你后面那个相同的部分也是跳的 差不多吧
  5. 03:47:771 (3) - 滑条头加finish
  6. 04:03:771 (1,2) - 每个地方都加clap吧,这1/3听起来太虚了 加了有點吵
  7. 04:09:604 (1) - 不明白
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:771 (4) - 滑条头加finish
  2. 01:13:604 加finish
  3. 01:51:104 (1) - 距离这么放好看
  4. 03:46:938 (5) - finish改放在滑条尾
  5. 03:47:771 (3) - 头加finish
  6. 04:03:771 (3) - 同insane
hard都fix了 除了同insane
thanks for mod
normal滑条速度有点感人,easy没问题
美丽
Irie Miyuki
hi~hi 骗分m4m来啦

[Insane]
  1. 00:09:938 (3,7) - + drum clap (addition)
  2. 00:10:770 (10) - + drum finish (addition)
  3. 00:11:438 (2) - 感觉这个地方可以再加个其他啥自定义的音效强调一下这个音 o.o
  4. 00:21:604 (9,10) - clap换成finish
  5. 00:41:604 (1) - 总觉得这个形状稍微好一点 o.o vocal比较饱满滑条瘪瘪的不好看(什么垃圾理由
  6. 00:42:938 (9) - 头上加drum addtion的finish
  7. 00:53:771 (1) - 头上的finish用normal的addtion, 尾上加个finish听听看呗 ><
  8. 00:57:604 (6) - +finish, 00:57:771 (1) - 头上的finish去掉,不过本来感觉这个三连就不太合理 感觉重音在红线上orzz
  9. 01:02:271 (3,5) - +drum finish,
  10. 01:04:104 (8,9) - 可以加条绿线稍微高点sv? 感觉会比较有趣
  11. 01:07:771 (3) - 感觉头上加个finish 不然这个01:07:104 (1) - 上的finish就感觉有点奇怪 o.o
    你在03:46:938 - 这个地方白线是直接滑条过去的就比较好解释 所以..
  12. 01:17:771 (1) - 这个用normal的addtion比较好吧? o.o
  13. 02:01:771 (1) - 同00:53:771 (1) -
  14. 02:04:271 (6,1) - 6上finish.. 1去掉? 03:36:271 (6,1) - 同
  15. 02:10:271 (3,5) - +drum finish 03:42:271 (3,5) - 同
  16. 02:12:438 (1) - 同前面说过的.. 还有03:44:438 (1) -
  17. 02:25:771 (1) - 头finish?
  18. 03:18:938 (2,3) - 是不是该往前提半拍然后滑条多拉长1/2啊 听着舒服些?
感觉这首歌编曲低音不太够 然后你的音效基本也都是全程clap+finish 整首歌听起来很干燥
要是能加点drum音效 用用whistle来提亮一下音色感觉更好 o.o

[Hard]
  1. 00:45:771 (1,4) - 1的尾巴上+whistle 4的头上+whistle 因为2中间空了个clap声 最好补点啥盖过去orz
  2. 01:16:771 (2) - 头上加个finish?
  3. 01:53:771 (1,2,3,4) - 同前面
  4. 02:41:604 (1,2,3,4) - 这里用这个节奏试试? 感觉缺了clap节奏听起来不太好
  5. 03:34:104 (1) - 我觉得还是用3/4滑条好些啊
音效我就不继续写了orz 和insane的看法一样的 o.o

[Normal]
  1. 00:07:104 (1) - 尾巴+clap
  2. 00:21:104 (4) - 头用soft clap 或者直接不带音效了 折返用drum finish?
  3. 01:48:438 (5) - NC?
  4. 03:53:604 (5) - ^
[Easy]
厉害


Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Rizia

Irie Miyuki wrote:

hi~hi 骗分m4m来啦

[Insane]
  1. 00:09:938 (3,7) - + drum clap (addition) 有點吵
  2. 00:10:770 (10) - + drum finish (addition)
  3. 00:11:438 (2) - 感觉这个地方可以再加个其他啥自定义的音效强调一下这个音 o.o 感覺沒其他clap比這個好了
  4. 00:21:604 (9,10) - clap换成finish
  5. 00:41:604 (1) - 总觉得这个形状稍微好一点 o.o vocal比较饱满滑条瘪瘪的不好看(什么垃圾理由
  6. 00:42:938 (9) - 头上加drum addtion的finish
  7. 00:53:771 (1) - 头上的finish用normal的addtion, 尾上加个finish听听看呗 >< 尾不加 頭加了
  8. 00:57:604 (6) - +finish, 00:57:771 (1) - 头上的finish去掉,不过本来感觉这个三连就不太合理 感觉重音在红线上orzz 我覺得重音在大白線
  9. 01:02:271 (3,5) - +drum finish,
  10. 01:04:104 (8,9) - 可以加条绿线稍微高点sv? 感觉会比较有趣 現在的比較好 再快就有點難了
  11. 01:07:771 (3) - 感觉头上加个finish 不然这个01:07:104 (1) - 上的finish就感觉有点奇怪 o.o 我覺得差不多
    你在03:46:938 - 这个地方白线是直接滑条过去的就比较好解释 所以..
  12. 01:17:771 (1) - 这个用normal的addtion比较好吧? o.o
  13. 02:01:771 (1) - 同00:53:771 (1) -
  14. 02:04:271 (6,1) - 6上finish.. 1去掉? 03:36:271 (6,1) - 同
  15. 02:10:271 (3,5) - +drum finish 03:42:271 (3,5) - 同 也是有點吵
  16. 02:12:438 (1) - 同前面说过的.. 还有03:44:438 (1) -
  17. 02:25:771 (1) - 头finish?
  18. 03:18:938 (2,3) - 是不是该往前提半拍然后滑条多拉长1/2啊 听着舒服些?
感觉这首歌编曲低音不太够 然后你的音效基本也都是全程clap+finish 整首歌听起来很干燥
要是能加点drum音效 用用whistle来提亮一下音色感觉更好 o.o

[Hard]
  1. 00:45:771 (1,4) - 1的尾巴上+whistle 4的头上+whistle 因为2中间空了个clap声 最好补点啥盖过去orz 有點難搞 我看看有沒其他解決方法
  2. 01:16:771 (2) - 头上加个finish?
  3. 01:53:771 (1,2,3,4) - 同前面
  4. 02:41:604 (1,2,3,4) - 这里用这个节奏试试? 感觉缺了clap节奏听起来不太好 圖片美麗 用了自己方法改
  5. 03:34:104 (1) - 我觉得还是用3/4滑条好些啊 3/4太難了
音效我就不继续写了orz 和insane的看法一样的 o.o

[Normal]
  1. 00:07:104 (1) - 尾巴+clap
  2. 00:21:104 (4) - 头用soft clap 或者直接不带音效了 折返用drum finish? 這個只改了折返
  3. 01:48:438 (5) - NC?
  4. 03:53:604 (5) - ^
[Easy]
厉害


Good Luck~
其他都fix了 thanks for mod
smallboat
Forum PM

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. Insane的 WidescreenStoryboard forgot select it,or you can cancel widescreenStoryboard in all diff .
[Easy]


  • Hitsound:
  1. 00:07:104 (1) - Why this first red line volume is 70%? Another volume are 80% here.
  2. 00:19:104 (1) - Slider head is downbeat,why not add a finish? Sounds like better.
  3. 00:29:771 (3) - Remove this clap hitsound make keep consistent for another diff. (Btw,combo a bit long,forgot set a NC here?)
  4. 00:31:604 (4) - Why these hitsound are not the same with another diff?
  5. 00:35:771 (2) - This slider hitsound seems so quiet ,add a whistle in head here? (Follow this vocal to add)
  6. 00:40:104 (3) - Missed a clap.
  7. 01:53:771 (5) - This combo seems so long,I suggest add a NC here.
  8. 01:59:104 (1) - I guess it is a downbeat,you shouldn't add clap here,suggest add finish express this vocal.

    Placement:
  9. 03:33:771 (1) - Feel no necessary do a single NC,it is can be read easily I think (And it has no speed change,too).

    Rhythm:
  10. 02:38:938 (1) - Although the space is 3.5 (Actually want to space 4 beat)beats,But I still think it will be picked this reason,suggest replace rhythm here :
    又是一張Easy音效與其他難度不同的map,我主要挑都是比較明顯的,昨晚摸長喜那張摸了1小時多都在摸漏掉的音效。
[Normal]


  • Hitsound:
  1. 00:19:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
  2. 00:29:771 (1) - Why add a whistle at head? Because easy diff add a finish here.
  3. 00:35:104 (1) - Add a whistle in end.
  4. 01:01:771 (1) - Missed a finish.
  5. 01:19:771 (3) - You can remove this hitsound in slider end,because easy diff has no voice here.
  6. 01:59:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
  7. 03:00:438 (3) - Slider reverse should be added finish ,not clap

    Placement:
  8. 00:08:771 (3) - Notice the distance,keep the same part to 1.00x.
  9. 02:20:271 (5) - Move to (262,363) keep the curve?
  10. 03:23:104 (1) - The same as 00:08:771 (3) reason.
  11. 03:33:771 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.

    Rhythm:
  12. 02:22:438 (4) - The vocal is at 02:22:604 (4) - start here,try to replace this rhythm ?
  13. 02:48:271 (5) - Suggest remove this note will be played better and cool,it has no vocal here I think.
[Hard]


  • Hitsound:
  1. 00:19:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
  2. 00:29:771 (1) - The same as normal diff reason.
  3. 00:35:771 (3) - Add a whistle in head.
  4. 01:06:938 (5) - Missed a finish
  5. 01:20:104 (3) - The same as normal diff reason.
  6. 01:59:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
  7. 02:04:271 (4) - Missed a finish.
  8. 02:14:938 (4) - The same as above.
  9. 03:00:438 (1) - Missed a finish in end.
  10. 04:09:604 (1) - Remove this clap make the same hitsound set with ins diff.

    Placement:
  11. 00:21:438 (3,4,5,6) - Sounds like noisy,maybe you can reduce a bit volume (-10%) for all diff at this part?
  12. 00:52:438 (4,1) - DS is so far,suggest make these objects move a bit closely (to 2.00x),I don't think it can be passed by their check.


  13. Rhythm:
  14. 00:10:271 (4) - Add a one slider reverse ? I listen the 00:10:521 has a blue tick in there.
  15. 00:17:688 (5) - Sounds like has no blue tick sound here,suggest remove this note.
  16. 00:42:521 (4) - The same as above.
[Insane]


  • Hitsound:
  1. 00:19:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
  2. 00:29:771 (1) - The same as normal diff reason.
  3. 00:35:771 (4) - Add a whistle
  4. 01:06:938 (6) - Missed a finish
  5. 01:20:104 (3) - The same as normal diff reason.
  6. 01:59:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
  7. 02:04:271 (6) - Missed a finish.
  8. 02:14:938 (7) - The same as above.
  9. 03:01:104 (3) - Missed a finish

    Placement:
  10. 00:21:438 (7,8,9,10) - The same as hard diff reason
  11. 02:58:938 (4) -Move to (287,123) make closer the 02:59:104 (1). (DS so far now)


  12. Rhythm:
  13. 00:37:438 (4,5,6,7) - I didn't listen any bluetick sound at this stream,maybe you can change 1/4 slider here?
  14. 00:51:188 (2,5) - The same reason as above.
  15. 03:58:521 (1) - The vocal is start 03:58:521 here,not at the blue tick line,btw,why not add 03:57:938 (8,9,10) - these note? Just follow the last vocal (03:58:521 (1)) seems playing not so smooth.

    This diff overmapped have bit serious,suggest check another BATs (Suggest find C445 I think)(or you can ask QAT to check this diff?) to improve these rhythm. 現在都因overmapped的原因被un,所以再寫下去都是overmap好幾行 (所以就寫到前一分鐘)
[Other]
  1. Rhythm and placement looks okay,but your hitsound didn't keep consistent for all diff,I have a bit hate about that.
  2. 這音效也漏太多了(實際上我只看了全部diff前面3分鐘,如果再寫下去全都是音效mod),覺得音效還是有些有漏提,確定都沒問題再找我 (建議你把一個diff加完再用我給你的軟件直接複製,很快)
Topic Starter
Rizia

smallboat wrote:

Forum PM

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. Insane的 WidescreenStoryboard forgot select it,or you can cancel widescreenStoryboard in all diff .fixed
[Easy]


  • Hitsound:
  1. 00:07:104 (1) - Why this first red line volume is 70%? Another volume are 80% here.
  2. 00:19:104 (1) - Slider head is downbeat,why not add a finish? Sounds like better.
  3. 00:29:771 (3) - Remove this clap hitsound make keep consistent for another diff. (Btw,combo a bit long,forgot set a NC here?)
  4. 00:31:604 (4) - Why these hitsound are not the same with another diff?
  5. 00:35:771 (2) - This slider hitsound seems so quiet ,add a whistle in head here? (Follow this vocal to add)
  6. 00:40:104 (3) - Missed a clap.
  7. 01:53:771 (5) - This combo seems so long,I suggest add a NC here.
  8. 01:59:104 (1) - I guess it is a downbeat,you shouldn't add clap here,suggest add finish express this vocal.

    Placement:
  9. 03:33:771 (1) - Feel no necessary do a single NC,it is can be read easily I think (And it has no speed change,too). kkkkkkk

    Rhythm:
  10. 02:38:938 (1) - Although the space is 3.5 (Actually want to space 4 beat)beats,But I still think it will be picked this reason,suggest replace rhythm here : wow great idea, accepted

    又是一張Easy音效與其他難度不同的map,我主要挑都是比較明顯的,昨晚摸長喜那張摸了1小時多都在摸漏掉的音效。
[Normal]


  • Hitsound:
  1. 00:19:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
  2. 00:29:771 (1) - Why add a whistle at head? Because easy diff add a finish here.
  3. 00:35:104 (1) - Add a whistle in end.
  4. 01:01:771 (1) - Missed a finish.
  5. 01:19:771 (3) - You can remove this hitsound in slider end,because easy diff has no voice here.
  6. 01:59:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
  7. 03:00:438 (3) - Slider reverse should be added finish ,not clap

    Placement:
  8. 00:08:771 (3) - Notice the distance,keep the same part to 1.00x.
  9. 02:20:271 (5) - Move to (262,363) keep the curve?
  10. 03:23:104 (1) - The same as 00:08:771 (3) reason.
  11. 03:33:771 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.

    Rhythm:
  12. 02:22:438 (4) - The vocal is at 02:22:604 (4) - start here,try to replace this rhythm ? i don't want to ignore that clap
  13. 02:48:271 (5) - Suggest remove this note will be played better and cool,it has no vocal here I think. i can hear here had one voice
[Hard]


  • Hitsound:
  1. 00:19:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
  2. 00:29:771 (1) - The same as normal diff reason.
  3. 00:35:771 (3) - Add a whistle in head.
  4. 01:06:938 (5) - Missed a finish
  5. 01:20:104 (3) - The same as normal diff reason.
  6. 01:59:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
  7. 02:04:271 (4) - Missed a finish.
  8. 02:14:938 (4) - The same as above.
  9. 03:00:438 (1) - Missed a finish in end.
  10. 04:09:604 (1) - Remove this clap make the same hitsound set with ins diff.

    Placement:
  11. 00:21:438 (3,4,5,6) - Sounds like noisy,maybe you can reduce a bit volume (-10%) for all diff at this part? same
  12. 00:52:438 (4,1) - DS is so far,suggest make these objects move a bit closely (to 2.00x),I don't think it can be passed by their check.


  13. Rhythm:
  14. 00:10:271 (4) - Add a one slider reverse ? I listen the 00:10:521 has a blue tick in there. i want to use same rhythm with insane
  15. 00:17:688 (5) - Sounds like has no blue tick sound here,suggest remove this note.
  16. 00:42:521 (4) - The same as above.
[Insane]


  • Hitsound:
  1. 00:19:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
  2. 00:29:771 (1) - The same as normal diff reason.
  3. 00:35:771 (4) - Add a whistle
  4. 01:06:938 (6) - Missed a finish
  5. 01:20:104 (3) - The same as normal diff reason.
  6. 01:59:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
  7. 02:04:271 (6) - Missed a finish.
  8. 02:14:938 (7) - The same as above.
  9. 03:01:104 (3) - Missed a finish

    Placement:
  10. 00:21:438 (7,8,9,10) - The same as hard diff reason i don't think so
  11. 02:58:938 (4) -Move to (287,123) make closer the 02:59:104 (1). (DS so far now) it's good now


  12. Rhythm:
  13. 00:37:438 (4,5,6,7) - I didn't listen any bluetick sound at this stream,maybe you can change 1/4 slider here? i think have here
  14. 00:51:188 (2,5) - The same reason as above.
  15. 03:58:521 (1) - The vocal is start 03:58:521 here,not at the blue tick line,btw,why not add 03:57:938 (8,9,10) - these note? Just follow the last vocal (03:58:521 (1)) seems playing not so smooth. i think it's fine on playing, it can read 成 white line起的slider

    This diff overmapped have bit serious,suggest check another BATs (Suggest find C445 I think)(or you can ask QAT to check this diff?) to improve these rhythm. 現在都因overmapped的原因被un,所以再寫下去都是overmap好幾行 (所以就寫到前一分鐘)
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  1. Rhythm and placement looks okay,but your hitsound didn't keep consistent for all diff,I have a bit hate about that.
  2. 這音效也漏太多了(實際上我只看了全部diff前面3分鐘,如果再寫下去全都是音效mod),覺得音效還是有些有漏提,確定都沒問題再找我 (建議你把一個diff加完再用我給你的軟件直接複製,很快)
hitsound方面我會先集中搞好insane的 之後再複製好
thanks for mod
smallboat
Looks fine,happy magic bubble hour come.

Bubbled !
rinsukir
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Rizia
thx smallboat >w<
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