School Food Punishment - in bloom

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Topic Starter
Irie Miyuki

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[Insane]
flow好奇怪 很多地方跟我的习惯是相反的Orz
00:01:789 (7) - CTRL+G
00:02:153 (8) - CTRL+G
00:03:244 (1) - CTRL+G
00:07:244 (6,7,8) - 分别CTRL+G
00:49:789 (1) - CTRL+G orz ctrl+g的都没改 个人习惯吧算是。。
01:06:335 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 挤一起实在是不好看 这个打起来根本没啥的啊 o.o
这部分连续鼓点稍微把间距拉开一些
02:15:607 (1,2,3,4) - 这部分感觉可以用1/2slider填一下 背景没合适的音给我1/2诶 ;w;
02:19:971 (1,2) - 换成三角跳如何 是不是有点难 ;w;

[Hard]
00:01:425 (2,3) - 平行
00:39:425 - 这里还是不要空着吧 放一个circle 换了下节奏 o.o
好棒好棒滴 谢谢大爷

[Easy]
有一些无用的绿线最好去掉
01:44:335 (2,3) - 有一点点歪了 平行
01:53:062 (2,3) - 弧面 同上
[Kamiya]
骗kd for m4m
渣评仅建议/w\
[Insane]
00:14:516 (6,7) - ctrl+G
01:25:789 (5) - ctrl+G 很卡手的感觉/w\
02:52:335 (2,4,6) - 这个部分的note摆成阶梯式的咋样。看起来有点乱(雾
03:00:335 (4) - 移动至x:288 y:244这个位置试试。(仅建议。。不喜欢的话就算了
insane的音效方面:
01:59:971 (2) - slider尾部加Whistle
02:00:880 (5) - Whistle
02:05:607 (2) - Whistle
仅建议啦

[Hard]
01:58:880 (4) - ctrl+G
02:04:698 (3,4) - note 3 叠在 4 上?(我疯狂flow也是够了orz

[OblivioN's Normal]
02:32:516 (2) - slider去掉 改成note
ex)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2255823

以上。
说实在的,我大气都不敢喘的评完了你的图 :o
GL and GJ
:)
Rizia
M4M

[General]
  1. http://puu.sh/cXbws/14acb371ea.wav 這個finish挺適合用在這歌


[Insane]
  1. 00:11:607 (7) - 試試這個方向?
  2. 00:42:153 (6) - 現在的不夠好玩 換了1 circle+3連比較好
  3. 00:54:153 (1) - 這裡應該有個finish(其他diff也有這個情況)
  4. 00:58:153 (6) - ctrl+g的話flow會比較順 改的話00:58:425 (7,1) - 要改位置 順道00:58:698 (2,3) - 也ctrl+g(改6的話)
  5. 01:12:698 (7,8,9,10,1) - 這個讀上去不太舒服 可以改成原地的連打
  6. 01:33:062 - 這裡有個音 我覺得這裡也放note好點
  7. 01:40:335 (8,1) - 不應該stack
  8. 02:03:971 (1) - 頭finish
  9. 02:05:244 (1,2,3) - 這裡不太好讀
  10. 02:06:516 - 加finish挺合適
  11. 02:06:880 (1) - 頭也finish
  12. 02:08:698 (2,3,4) - 好像stack得不好
  13. 02:46:153 - 這段總感覺有點寧靜


[Hard]
  1. 00:54:153 (1) - 頭finish
  2. 00:59:607 (1) - 尾finish
  3. 02:00:335 (3,4) - 各自ctrl+g一下?
  4. 02:17:062 (1,2,3,4,1) - 感覺可以做個好點的五邊形
  5. 02:18:516 (1,2,3) - 試試這樣的節奏 2中間的鼓音我認為不好忽略
  6. 02:24:335 - break拉到這裡開始
  7. 02:42:880 (3) - stack好


[OblivioN's Normal]
  1. 00:58:516 - 這裡還是map下去好點
  2. 02:19:971 (1) - finish


[Easy]
  1. 00:59:971 - 漏finish'


good luck
Topic Starter
Irie Miyuki

[Kamiya] wrote:

[Insane]
00:14:516 (6,7) - ctrl+G
01:25:789 (5) - ctrl+G 很卡手的感觉/w\ xDDD这个为啥会卡手啊!
02:52:335 (2,4,6) - 这个部分的note摆成阶梯式的咋样。看起来有点乱(雾 阶梯式是啥 o.o
03:00:335 (4) - 移动至x:288 y:244这个位置试试。(仅建议。。不喜欢的话就算了 妈呀你好人性 orz
insane的音效方面:
01:59:971 (2) - slider尾部加Whistle
02:00:880 (5) - Whistle
02:05:607 (2) - Whistle 好好好!我就觉得一直缺点啥!
仅建议啦

[Hard]
01:58:880 (4) - ctrl+G
02:04:698 (3,4) - note 3 叠在 4 上?(我疯狂flow也是够了orz 萌妹不要太人性啊 我们可是出来害人的!
谢谢大萌妹!

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[General]
  1. http://puu.sh/cXbws/14acb371ea.wav 這個finish挺適合用在這歌 请问这和soft finish有啥不一样吗! ;w;


[Insane]
  1. 00:11:607 (7) - 試試這個方向? 还是喜欢现在的..
  2. 00:42:153 (6) - 現在的不夠好玩 換了1 circle+3連比較好 这个容我考虑一下怎么重新摆啊
  3. 00:54:153 (1) - 這裡應該有個finish(其他diff也有這個情況)
  4. 00:58:153 (6) - ctrl+g的話flow會比較順 改的話00:58:425 (7,1) - 要改位置 順道00:58:698 (2,3) - 也ctrl+g(改6的話) 还是比较喜欢现在的
  5. 01:12:698 (7,8,9,10,1) - 這個讀上去不太舒服 可以改成原地的連打 抄了下arousing
  6. 01:33:062 - 這裡有個音 我覺得這裡也放note好點 想强调一下后边那个拍子 这里空着也还说得过去 o.o
  7. 01:40:335 (8,1) - 不應該stack 摆不出别的了orz
  8. 02:03:971 (1) - 頭finish
  9. 02:05:244 (1,2,3) - 這裡不太好讀 还好了 我找过的testplay没在这爆炸的
  10. 02:06:516 - 加finish挺合適
  11. 02:06:880 (1) - 頭也finish 连着两个有点别扭
  12. 02:08:698 (2,3,4) - 好像stack得不好 故意的 系统会自动错一格出来 不这样摆的话那个circle就不能被前面滑条盖住了
  13. 02:46:153 - 這段總感覺有點寧靜 说的也是23333


[Hard]
  1. 00:54:153 (1) - 頭finish
  2. 00:59:607 (1) - 尾finish
  3. 02:00:335 (3,4) - 各自ctrl+g一下? 就现在这样挺好的
  4. 02:17:062 (1,2,3,4,1) - 感覺可以做個好點的五邊形 反正打着也感觉不出来(懒
  5. 02:18:516 (1,2,3) - 試試這樣的節奏 2中間的鼓音我認為不好忽略 换了下节奏
  6. 02:24:335 - break拉到這裡開始 这个忘了
  7. 02:42:880 (3) - stack好 orz stack不好...


[Easy]
  1. 00:59:971 - 漏finish'
谢谢柚子爷爷
OblivioN

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

凑数的来了
[OblivioN's Normal]
SV1.4会不会略高? :arrow:-我也觉得有点高…:D不过还没有爆星,看看之后的modder怎么说
00:23:244 (2) - 遮挡会不会太难了 :arrow:移开了:D
别的地方都挺好的 :arrow:>///<

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[OblivioN's Normal]
  1. 00:58:516 - 這裡還是map下去好點 :arrow:好好好,节奏都贴出来柚子真是太良心了w谢谢DD
  2. 02:19:971 (1) - finish :arrow:
thx for modding
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Yuthuil
Hi from mod queue

Easy:

00:11:244 (4,1) - try not to create overlap in easy
00:13:425 (3,4) - flow here is worrying, try and fix after ctrl + g 3?
00:16:335 (2,1) - blanket properly, and try to keep the blanketing distance the same
00:18:516 (2) - feels better if ctrl + g, btw all my mod is suggestions
00:21:971 (2) - this slider is unnecessarily long and misses lots of beats, resize?
00:27:244 (1,3) - blanket
00:41:062 (3) - make wave shape more smooth
02:23:062 how do you make the blue break thingy?
02:43:971 (4,1) - blanket properly
02:49:789 (2,4) - stack properly together
03:06:880 (2,3) - flip vertically after ctrl + g 2

OblivioN's normal:

AR4 CS3

00:22:516 (1,2,1) - stack properly with one
00:27:789 (4) - move to x220 y348 then move 00:28:335 (5) - to x296 y348 to make symmetry perfect
01:11:607 in this section the hitsounds are too quite imo

What else am i supposed to mod in this diff!!?? xD

Hard:

AR7 or 7.5

01:25:062 (2,3) - stack better
02:30:153 (1) - i think the spinner should allow more time for mouse adjustment...or...err...pen adjustment

GREAT diff

Insane:

ar8 or 8.5

[*]Nothing to say !
Sonnyc
[Easy]
01:57:062 (3) - Missing sampleset Normal.
02:45:062 (1) - Distance error.

[Oblivion's Normal]
00:30:698 (3) - The rhythm sounds a little weird. Mind trying a 1/2 slider at 00:30:880 instead?
01:48:516 (2) - Better blanket please.

[Hard]
00:39:971 (2) - This slider is nearly offscreen. For more safty, hope you can lessen the curve.

[Insane]
00:23:607 (1) - Reducing 1/2 and adding a beat at 00:24:153 would play more interesting.
02:12:516 (8) - ctrl+G? Heading up would be more natural here imo.

Good map. Have a star.
Topic Starter
Irie Miyuki

Yuthuil wrote:

Easy:

00:11:244 (4,1) - try not to create overlap in easy orz it's fine imo xD
00:13:425 (3,4) - flow here is worrying, try and fix after ctrl + g 3? ^
00:16:335 (2,1) - blanket properly, and try to keep the blanketing distance the same fixed
00:18:516 (2) - feels better if ctrl + g, btw all my mod is suggestions
00:21:971 (2) - this slider is unnecessarily long and misses lots of beats, resize?
00:27:244 (1,3) - blanket fixed
00:41:062 (3) - make wave shape more smooth
02:23:062 how do you make the blue break thingy? move your cursor between the last object and the break and you will find it's draggable
02:43:971 (4,1) - blanket properly fixed
02:49:789 (2,4) - stack properly together ^
03:06:880 (2,3) - flip vertically after ctrl + g 2

Hard:

AR7 or 7.5

01:25:062 (2,3) - stack better tried
02:30:153 (1) - i think the spinner should allow more time for mouse adjustment...or...err...pen adjustment it's rankable and playable in this diff xD

GREAT diff thank you!

Insane:

ar8 or 8.5 orz
others i did not reply = didnt fix

Sonnyc wrote:

[Easy]
01:57:062 (3) - Missing sampleset Normal. fixed
02:45:062 (1) - Distance error. ^

[Hard]
00:39:971 (2) - This slider is nearly offscreen. For more safty, hope you can lessen the curve. ^

[Insane]
00:23:607 (1) - Reducing 1/2 and adding a beat at 00:24:153 would play more interesting. nah, i wanna compare the slider velocity with the next one so
02:12:516 (8) - ctrl+G? Heading up would be more natural here imo. okay

Good map. Have a star. thank you!! ><

thanks for the mods!
OblivioN

Yuthuil wrote:

Hi from mod queue

OblivioN's normal:

AR4 CS3-大丈夫、問題ない

00:22:516 (1,2,1) - stack properly with one :arrow:-i just separated them……
00:27:789 (4) - move to x220 y348 then move 00:28:335 (5) - to x296 y348 to make symmetry perfect :arrow:-nah
01:11:607 in this section the hitsounds are too quite imo :arrow:- fixed

What else am i supposed to mod in this diff!!?? xD

[*]Nothing to say !

Sonnyc wrote:

[Oblivion's Normal]
00:30:698 (3) - The rhythm sounds a little weird. Mind trying a 1/2 slider at 00:30:880 instead? :arrow:-good idea!
01:48:516 (2) - Better blanket please. :arrow:-done
Thanks for modding!
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Fushimi Rio
From queue, sorry for delay

[Easy]

nazi就不写了 反正打图也看不出来 于是没了

[Normal]

maya这normal怎么看着跟hard似的
00:27:789 (4) - 我感觉这个挡折返箭头有点危险
00:39:244 (3,2) - 这个还是看得出来有点不好看 考虑到后面2还有照应的note就改一下3的形状吧 然后顺便调一下后面的circle

200,164,39244,2,0,P|240:144|328:184,1,140,8|0,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
384,316,39971,5,8,0:2:0:0:
255,229,40335,1,0,3:2:0:0:
408,236,40698,1,8,0:2:0:0:
01:31:244 - 这里叠个note上去是不是好一点 有可能会在这把2打早了
02:57:789 (1) - 和前面叠好 这个打的时候能看出来

[Hard]

00:35:971 (2) - 改成一个短的折返更好一点
02:00:335 (3) - ctrl+g
02:33:062 - 这里钢琴好像也没那么明显 我感觉不如让转盘停在1或者干脆停到绿线算了
02:42:880 (3) - 234的角度太小 叠在1的尾巴上好一点

[Insane]

00:26:516 (1) - ctrl+g
00:41:244 (2,3) - ctrl+g
00:58:698 (2,3) - ctrl+g
02:04:698 (3) - ctrl+g
01:50:880 (1) - 叠在5上好点 个人感觉
02:21:062 (4) - 这个可以用1/6啊
我怎么写了一堆奇怪的东西

大概就这样 本身也没什么不舒服的地方 祝上架顺利
Melt
打死歪歪
好久没摸图了,以下纯属扯淡

[OblivioN's Normal]
  1. sv感觉有点高,不过都弄好了再改有点麻烦,可以试试ar+1这样反差不会那么大
  2. 00:00:335 (1) - 感觉可以改成在00:00:516这个位置的circle
  3. 00:11:971 (1,2,3) - 可以试试这样摆
  4. 00:18:880 (3) - 可以让这个偏斜角度小一点(个人爱好:3)
  5. 00:39:244 (3,2) - blanket(逃
  6. 00:43:971 (1) - 是我的话可能会移到00:43:789然后后面再补一下节奏
  7. 01:30:516 (1,2) - nc换成这样试试呢
  8. 02:48:335 (2) - 这个好丑啊然后我也没想到怎么改


[Hard]
  1. 01:25:789 (3) - 这个circle试试放在01:25:607这里呢
  2. 02:34:516 (1) - 这里可以试试这个节奏


[insane]
  1. 00:00:335 (1) - 个人倾向于不要这个circle=.=
  2. 00:19:425 (2,3) - 有点强迫症,可以稍微挪一下 2(204,106),3(141,283)
  3. 00:23:244 (6) - 觉得不用压蓝线在00:23:425结束也行
  4. 02:09:062 (4) - 打了几遍也觉得这样错好别扭,虽然实际上没什么影响,不过我还是觉得动一下2、3把4让到左边来好些_(:з」∠)_
  5. 02:41:425 (7,8,1) - 没叠好 /runs


gl ~
OblivioN

Melt wrote:

打死歪歪-这个妹儿一天不打我就浑身难受;w;@老大

[OblivioN's Normal]
  1. sv感觉有点高,不过都弄好了再改有点麻烦,可以试试ar+1这样反差不会那么大 :arrow:-结果我调了sv.
  2. 00:00:335 (1) - 感觉可以改成在00:00:516这个位置的circle :arrow:-白线起手对新手来说比较善良:D
  3. 00:11:971 (1,2,3) - 可以试试这样摆
    :arrow:-改了sv这个形状摆不成了
  4. 00:18:880 (3) - 可以让这个偏斜角度小一点(个人爱好:3)
  5. 00:39:244 (3,2) - blanket(逃 :arrow:-好好好
  6. 00:43:971 (1) - 是我的话可能会移到00:43:789然后后面再补一下节奏 :arrow:补好了
  7. 01:30:516 (1,2) - nc换成这样试试呢
    :arrow:好,换了
  8. 02:48:335 (2) - 这个好丑啊然后我也没想到怎么改 :arrow:妹儿好丑啊 ;w;

imoutosan wrote:

From queue, sorry for delay

[Normal]

maya这normal怎么看着跟hard似的 :arrow:sv调低了,应该好一些了
00:27:789 (4) - 我感觉这个挡折返箭头有点危险 :arrow:改掉了
00:39:244 (3,2) - 这个还是看得出来有点不好看 考虑到后面2还有照应的note就改一下3的形状吧 然后顺便调一下后面的circle

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408,236,40698,1,8,0:2:0:0:
:arrow:-fixed
01:31:244 - 这里叠个note上去是不是好一点 有可能会在这把2打早了 :arrow:-added
02:57:789 (1) - 和前面叠好 这个打的时候能看出来 :arrow:
谢谢摸图:D

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Topic Starter
Irie Miyuki

Melt wrote:

打死歪歪 你们快结婚啊 骏喵要带走Y哥了

[Hard]
  1. 01:25:789 (3) - 这个circle试试放在01:25:607这里呢 我草 你不说我都忘了我还可以跟着钢琴音放whistle
  2. 02:34:516 (1) - 这里可以试试这个节奏 哎 我直接转盘过去了


[insane]
  1. 00:00:335 (1) - 个人倾向于不要这个circle=.= 哭了
  2. 00:19:425 (2,3) - 有点强迫症,可以稍微挪一下 2(204,106),3(141,283)
  3. 00:23:244 (6) - 觉得不用压蓝线在00:23:425结束也行 想搞个滑条速度对比 挺好玩的啊!
  4. 02:09:062 (4) - 打了几遍也觉得这样错好别扭,虽然实际上没什么影响,不过我还是觉得动一下2、3把4让到左边来好些_(:з」∠)_ 好!
  5. 02:41:425 (7,8,1) - 没叠好 /runs 我努力了一下……

imoutosan wrote:

From queue, sorry for delay 谢谢爷爷

[Easy]

nazi就不写了 反正打图也看不出来 于是没了

[Hard]

00:35:971 (2) - 改成一个短的折返更好一点 哎我所有类似节奏好像都是这样qwq
02:00:335 (3) - ctrl+g 不太想改orz
02:33:062 - 这里钢琴好像也没那么明显 我感觉不如让转盘停在1或者干脆停到绿线算了
02:42:880 (3) - 234的角度太小 叠在1的尾巴上好一点

[Insane]

00:26:516 (1) - ctrl+g
00:41:244 (2,3) - ctrl+g
00:58:698 (2,3) - ctrl+g
02:04:698 (3) - ctrl+g
01:50:880 (1) - 叠在5上好点 个人感觉
02:21:062 (4) - 这个可以用1/6啊
我怎么写了一堆奇怪的东西

insane没怎么改orzzz
谢谢两位爷爷!
smallboat
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  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. OblivioN's Normal的第二條kiai time尾建議還是用Irie的,停在這邊有點怪
  2. OblivioN's Normal hitsound set (The first red line should be fixed 'S:C1',not 'N' hitsound.)

[Easy]
  1. 01:23:244 (1) - Downbeat vocal,forgot add a finish?
  2. 01:29:062 (1) - The same as above.
  3. 02:06:880 (1) - Sounds like have the finish sound,why not add it?

[OblivioN's Normal]
  1. 00:02:153 (2,3) - This stack seems not fit place here in normal,suggest replace this DS.
  2. 00:20:335 (3) - The same as
  3. 01:23:244 (1) - Suggest add a finish at slider head.
  4. 01:29:062 (1) - The same as above.
  5. 01:30:153 (3,4,1,2) - These stack really make confuse to players I think...(Will probaly miserror hit the 01:30:880 - this white line point),perhaps can replace it here.
  6. 01:51:789 (2) - Seems can add a note,because missed a vocal here.
  7. 02:16:698 (3) - Listen to the music tune,perhaps can add a note here.
  8. 02:19:971 (1) - Spinner end seems missed a finish here.
  9. 02:23:971 (2,1) - DS (Keep 1.30x plz)
  10. 02:34:516 (1) - Stack better.

[Hard]
  1. 00:31:607 (1) - Sounds like no necessary do a NC here (Has no any express downbeat),remove it?
  2. 00:35:971 (2) - Has a stream sound,change a 1/4 reverse slider here?
  3. 01:02:153 (3) - This distance seems have a bit far in hard diff,make close a bit?
  4. 01:23:244 (1) - The same as easy diff.
  5. 01:29:062 (1) - Seems missed a finish at slider head.
  6. 02:06:516 (4) - Compare with another diff,missed a finish hitsound here.
  7. 02:06:880 (1) - The same as easy diff.

[Insane] 我懷疑這有嚴重的overmapped..很多滑條尾端沒音的地方都加了藍線.
  1. 00:05:244 (8) - Feel use a ctrl+g will be flow better.
  2. 00:16:244 (5) - Seems no vocal here,remove this vocal?
  3. 00:28:971 (4) - The same as above.
  4. 00:59:971 (1) - Hitsound should be set Addition-soft finish (check another diff)
  5. 01:11:244 (9) - Stream distance change,suggest add a NC here.
  6. 01:17:062 (9) - The same as above.
  7. 01:23:244 (1) - The same as easy diff.
  8. 01:29:062 (1) - The same as hard diff.
  9. 02:06:880 (1) - The same as easy diff.
  10. 02:40:607 (3) - Remove this note (Really has no vocal!) and replace this placement will play better.
OblivioN

smallboat wrote:

Forum PM

[General]
  1. OblivioN's Normal的第二條kiai time尾建議還是用Irie的,停在這邊有點怪
  2. OblivioN's Normal hitsound set (The first red line should be fixed 'S:C1',not 'N' hitsound.)

[OblivioN's Normal]
  1. 00:02:153 (2,3) - This stack seems not fit place here in normal,suggest replace this DS.
  2. 00:20:335 (3) - The same as
  3. 01:23:244 (1) - Suggest add a finish at slider head.
  4. 01:29:062 (1) - The same as above.
  5. 01:30:153 (3,4,1,2) - These stack really make confuse to players I think...(Will probaly miserror hit the 01:30:880 - this white line point),perhaps can replace it here.
  6. 01:51:789 (2) - Seems can add a note,because missed a vocal here.
  7. 02:16:698 (3) - Listen to the music tune,perhaps can add a note here. :arrow:-听了一下这附近似乎都不需要加……;w;
  8. 02:19:971 (1) - Spinner end seems missed a finish here.
  9. 02:23:971 (2,1) - DS (Keep 1.30x plz)
  10. 02:34:516 (1) - Stack better.
-除了那一条其他全改啦 :)

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412,240,158335,2,0,P|403:277|376:304,2,60,0|8|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,164,158880,6,0,L|408:96,1,60,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
332,104,159244,2,0,L|320:32,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,48,159607,2,0,L|252:112,1,60,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
172,112,159971,2,0,L|184:176,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,248,160335,5,0,3:0:0:0:
196,248,160698,2,0,P|164:288|83:285,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,236,161789,6,0,L|56:376,2,120,4|8|0,3:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,88,162880,2,0,P|64:70|36:72,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
164,128,163425,6,0,P|224:144|288:120,2,120,2|2|0,3:2|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
300,52,164516,2,0,P|328:68|348:96,1,60,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,224,165062,6,0,P|407:184|408:152,1,60,12|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,180,165425,2,0,P|499:218|492:256,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,292,165789,2,0,P|404:294|372:280,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,232,166153,6,0,P|262:222|188:240,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,248,166698,2,0,P|132:280|144:312,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,168,167244,2,0,P|144:140|132:104,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,56,167607,6,0,L|220:60,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,112,168335,2,0,L|216:136,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,208,169062,6,0,P|424:172|436:112,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,124,169789,2,0,P|245:203|264:252,1,120,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,324,170516,6,0,L|320:312,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,320,170880,2,0,L|184:352,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,364,171244,2,0,L|40:348,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,272,171607,2,0,L|124:288,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,258,171971,6,0,P|256:240|312:280,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,332,172516,2,0,L|364:196,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,136,173062,2,0,P|304:97|244:100,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,104,173789,5,8,0:0:0:0:
28,240,174153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,164,174516,1,10,0:0:0:0:
100,304,174880,6,0,P|160:320|224:300,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,224,175607,2,0,P|288:208|224:228,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,304,176335,6,0,L|120:232,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,376,176880,2,0,P|120:378|148:364,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,316,177244,2,0,P|204:348|212:380,2,60,8|4|0,0:3|0:3|3:0,0:0:0:0:
100,304,177789,6,0,P|84:244|92:184,1,120,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,44,178516,2,0,P|172:112|160:176,1,120,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,308,179244,6,0,P|136:296|92:308,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,156,179971,2,0,P|119:146|185:176,1,120,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,252,180698,5,0,0:0:0:0:
412,352,181062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,204,181425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,264,181789,1,10,0:0:0:0:
404,144,182153,6,0,P|409:100|376:32,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,140,182880,2,0,P|259:184|304:264,1,120,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,100,183607,6,0,P|276:64|216:80,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,228,184335,2,0,P|240:264|296:248,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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212,328,185789,2,0,P|272:300|288:244,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,140,186516,6,0,P|240:132|304:140,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,296,187244,2,0,P|236:308|176:296,1,120,8|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
172,221,187789,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,187971,12,0,194516,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Irie Miyuki

smallboat wrote:

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  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[Easy]
  1. 01:23:244 (1) - Downbeat vocal,forgot add a finish?
  2. 01:29:062 (1) - The same as above.
  3. 02:06:880 (1) - Sounds like have the finish sound,why not add it?

[Hard]
  1. 00:31:607 (1) - Sounds like no necessary do a NC here (Has no any express downbeat),remove it?
  2. 00:35:971 (2) - Has a stream sound,change a 1/4 reverse slider here?
  3. 01:02:153 (3) - This distance seems have a bit far in hard diff,make close a bit? 这个应该没问题吧 bpm也不高 4x的ds是因为sv低
  4. 01:23:244 (1) - The same as easy diff.
  5. 01:29:062 (1) - Seems missed a finish at slider head.
  6. 02:06:516 (4) - Compare with another diff,missed a finish hitsound here.
  7. 02:06:880 (1) - The same as easy diff.

[Insane] 我懷疑這有嚴重的overmapped..很多滑條尾端沒音的地方都加了藍線.
  1. 00:05:244 (8) - Feel use a ctrl+g will be flow better.
  2. 00:16:244 (5) - Seems no vocal here,remove this vocal?
  3. 00:28:971 (4) - The same as above.
  4. 00:59:971 (1) - Hitsound should be set Addition-soft finish (check another diff)
  5. 01:11:244 (9) - Stream distance change,suggest add a NC here.
  6. 01:17:062 (9) - The same as above.
  7. 01:23:244 (1) - The same as easy diff.
  8. 01:29:062 (1) - The same as hard diff.
  9. 02:06:880 (1) - The same as easy diff.
  10. 02:40:607 (3) - Remove this note (Really has no vocal!) and replace this placement will play better.
didnt change the rhythm in insane diff cuz it would be so boring to play if there is only 1/2 spamming in the kiai part
hitsounding/nc all fixed

船爷么么哒!

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smallboat
Looks fine,and still found some issue to fix this mapset , good luck !

Bubbled !
Topic Starter
Irie Miyuki

smallboat wrote:

Looks fine,and still found some issue to fix this mapset , good luck !

Bubbled !
艾玛 船爷我和你嗦 我真是太感谢了啊qwq
Zero__wind
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Sakura
Really need some metadata confirmation since there's none in the thread and here http://www.amazon.co.jp/Prog-Roid-Schoo ... VEBSRYPJW8 it appears that the artist should be "school food punishment" and not スクール フード パニッシュメント

Once metadata's confirmed whether it's wrong or not (and if wrong fixed) i can qualify this.

Edit: http://www.sfp-sound.com/info/index.html Ok found the official website, it is capitalized after all
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