eyelis - Mirai e no Tobira (OVA EDIT)

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Topic Starter
Rizia

xxdeathx wrote:

Title according to http://kaminomi.jp/cd/index.html#eyelis_CDS is 未来への扉(OVA EDIT) without spaces before parentheses.

I also wonder if that means you must remove space before parentheses in romanized title: Mirai e no Tobira(OVA EDIT)
i think it should remove space
xxdeathx
Changed title again (as I feared, Bakawkyik initially just removed the space from the Japanese title instead of copying/pasting it in from what I gave since the parentheses are different characters).

Take my first real bubble!!
Topic Starter
Rizia

xxdeathx wrote:

Changed title again (as I feared, Bakawkyik initially just removed the space from the Japanese title instead of copying/pasting it in from what I gave since the parentheses are different characters).

Take my first real bubble!!
thanks bubble~~
Meg
death is god
Moecho
Sugoi desu!
xxdeathx
Changed the romanized title back to Mirai e no Tobira (OVA EDIT) according to Melophobia
Guy
Hi o/

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Is this "wkyik" tag really necessary?



[image--------]
  1. 00:14:832 (2) - 終端の音が少し大きいので20%に設定してみてください。
  2. whistle入りそうな所が結構あるんで入れてみては?
    00:16:808 -
    00:18:245 -
    00:19:682 -
    00:22:556 -
    00:24:532 -
    00:24:892 -
    00:27:227 - ここからはなんで2/1の間隔でwhistleなんでしょうか?曲は1/1の間隔でバスが鳴ってます。
    00:27:946 -
    00:28:664 -
    00:29:383 -
    00:30:101 -
    これだけ書けばあとは自分でもわかると思うので省きます。
  3. 00:51:299 - volume10%はUnrankableになる恐れがあるので最低でも20%に設定しておきましょう。
  4. 00:52:467 - ^
  5. 00:59:742 (1,2) - 2の位置には曲に音がないように思うのでここは素直にボーカルフォローで1/2スライダーを置いたほうが無難です。

  6. 01:03:694 (1) - 終端のdrum clapはかなり浮いてるような気がします。音量を下げるかSoft clapに変更してください。
  7. 01:08:544 (1) - こういう強い音が来てるところにもwhistleがほしい
  8. 01:09:802 (1) - 真上よりも気持ち左に移動してあげたほうが流れ良くなると思います。
  9. 01:13:215 (3) - 01:13:395 - ここが空白なのがとても違和感あります。せっかくボーカルの声が伸びているとこなのでスライダーに変更してみては?
  10. 01:14:652 (2,3) - 連打の音が始まるのは01:15:011 - ここからなので若干オーバーマップ気味に思います。単発に変更することをオススメします。
  11. 01:17:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - この曲調でこのジャンプですか? 全くfitしてないように感じるのでもう少し狭めてみてはどうでしょう。
  12. 01:19:502 (1) - NC消してもいいかも


[Insane]
  1. 00:01:000 - 10% volume is too low. Please set it up at least 20%.
  2. 00:24:532 (2,3) - Add whistle or clap to slider head. There has a loud sound.
  3. 00:27:227 (2) - Add whistle to slider head. I recommend that add whistle the place sounding similar sound (00:27:946 - 00:28:664 - 00:29:383 - 00:30:101 - and so on.)
  4. 00:48:425 (3) - Add drum whistle or clap to slider head.
  5. 00:48:784 (5) - Add whistle to slider head. sounding bass sound here.
  6. 00:51:299 - do not use 5% volume in slider end. It might become the unrankable. Please set it 20%.
  7. 01:15:370 (8) - Add clap? I want to put the some hitsound in stream for keeping rhythm.


[Moecho's Insane]
  1. 00:14:113 (1) - a bit bad shape this slider. Please move 3rd white tick between 2nd and 4th tick.
  2. 00:25:296 - using 20% volume please. i'm care about that this might be unrankable issue.
  3. 00:51:389 - unused green line. please remove it.
  4. 01:14:113 (1) - Add finish to slider head.
  5. 01:15:731 (1) - finish
  6. 01:26:329 (3,4,5) - it really doesn't fit the song this triplet. I recommend that consider changing rhythm like this.

  7. 01:29:383 (4,5,6) - please consistent spacing them


[yf's Hard]
  1. 00:38:185 (6,7) - I don't hear sound here. it doesn't fit the triplet imo. I recommend that remove notes.
  2. 01:29:203 (3) - Please reduce one repeat (slider end is 01:29:383 - ) 01:29:203 (3,4) - has big spacing for hard difficulty. so need to make more readable pattern.



[KwaN's Normal]
  1. 00:49:502 (5) - Add drum clap?

    nice diff :>



[Easy]
  1. 00:01:000 - same Insane diff. please use 20%~


call me back :3
Meg

Guy wrote:

Hi o/

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[image--------]
  1. 00:14:832 (2) - 終端の音が少し大きいので20%に設定してみてください。
  2. whistle入りそうな所が結構あるんで入れてみては?
    00:16:808 -
    00:18:245 -
    00:19:682 -
    00:22:556 -
    00:24:532 -
    00:24:892 -
    00:27:227 - ここからはなんで2/1の間隔でwhistleなんでしょうか?曲は1/1の間隔でバスが鳴ってます。
    00:27:946 -
    00:28:664 -
    00:29:383 -
    00:30:101 -
    これだけ書けばあとは自分でもわかると思うので省きます。
  3. 00:51:299 - volume10%はUnrankableになる恐れがあるので最低でも20%に設定しておきましょう。
  4. 00:52:467 - ^
  5. 00:59:742 (1,2) - 2の位置には曲に音がないように思うのでここは素直にボーカルフォローで1/2スライダーを置いたほうが無難です。

  6. 01:03:694 (1) - 終端のdrum clapはかなり浮いてるような気がします。音量を下げるかSoft clapに変更してください。 soft clapにしました
  7. 01:08:544 (1) - こういう強い音が来てるところにもwhistleがほしい
  8. 01:09:802 (1) - 真上よりも気持ち左に移動してあげたほうが流れ良くなると思います。
  9. 01:13:215 (3) - 01:13:395 - ここが空白なのがとても違和感あります。せっかくボーカルの声が伸びているとこなのでスライダーに変更してみては?
  10. 01:14:652 (2,3) - 連打の音が始まるのは01:15:011 - ここからなので若干オーバーマップ気味に思います。単発に変更することをオススメします。 1/2sliderにしました
  11. 01:17:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - この曲調でこのジャンプですか? 全くfitしてないように感じるのでもう少し狭めてみてはどうでしょう。
  12. 01:19:502 (1) - NC消してもいいかも


call me back :3
all fixed
thank you desu 8-)
http://puu.sh/eZNkz.zip

EDIT:my 500th post :D
yf_bmp
Hey our GOD Guy :D

1: Won't fix after my consideration.

My first purpose is to overmap and mix with the music in an excellent way.
The music did have no sounds here, but it is a great way to lead the next part of the music, isn't it?
Much music have such kind of rhythm and in my mind, and here I thought it is fit to do this rhythm as well. (between the parts of the music, there really exists the same kind of occasion.)

Thank you for your understand :P

2: Maybe a little hard but imo it was against the rhythm of music well. Since there is a similar occasion in the former part and you didn't point that out. So I'd rather not fix it.

(I refused them after my second consideration but not causally, then please don't slap me X_X)
Moecho

Guy wrote:

Hi o/

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[Moecho's Insane]
  1. 00:14:113 (1) - a bit bad shape this slider. Please move 3rd white tick between 2nd and 4th tick.
  2. 00:25:296 - using 20% volume please. i'm care about that this might be unrankable issue.
  3. 00:51:389 - unused green line. please remove it.
  4. 01:14:113 (1) - Add finish to slider head.
  5. 01:15:731 (1) - finish
  6. 01:26:329 (3,4,5) - it really doesn't fit the song this triplet. I recommend that consider changing rhythm like this.

  7. 01:29:383 (4,5,6) - please consistent spacing them


call me back :3
All fixed! Thanks for modding :3

osu file format v13

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Title:Mirai e no Tobira (OVA EDIT)
TitleUnicode:未来への扉(OVA EDIT)
Artist:eyelis
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Creator:Kawaiwkyik
Version:Moecho's Insane
Source:Kami nomi zo Shiru Sekai: Tenri-hen
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Topic Starter
Rizia

Guy wrote:

Hi o/

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Is this "wkyik" tag really necessary? for now i think not, removed from all diff



[Insane]
  1. 00:01:000 - 10% volume is too low. Please set it up at least 20%.
  2. 00:24:532 (2,3) - Add whistle or clap to slider head. There has a loud sound. added whistle
  3. 00:27:227 (2) - Add whistle to slider head. I recommend that add whistle the place sounding similar sound (00:27:946 - 00:28:664 - 00:29:383 - 00:30:101 - and so on.)
  4. 00:48:425 (3) - Add drum whistle or clap to slider head.
  5. 00:48:784 (5) - Add whistle to slider head. sounding bass sound here.
  6. 00:51:299 - do not use 5% volume in slider end. It might become the unrankable. Please set it 20%.
  7. 01:15:370 (8) - Add clap? I want to put the some hitsound in stream for keeping rhythm.



[KwaN's Normal]
  1. 00:49:502 (5) - Add drum clap?

    nice diff :>



[Easy]
  1. 00:01:000 - same Insane diff. please use 20%~


call me back :3
all fixed on kwan and my diff~~
thanks for mod~~
all diff are updated
KSHR
About the triplet in yf's Hard which Guy mentioned, let me write my two cents.

First of all, I'm all for his suggestion that the triplet at 00:38:185 - should be removed.
I don't mean to force you to fix this, but listen the song carefully again please. I'm 10000% sure there is no sound to follow with an object such as the guitar, the drum, the vocal, the synthesizer... Are you sure this fits with the song? If the next objects was the beginning of the climax part which the song gets toned up, I partly would agree with you. But it's not. Therefore leading the next part of the music by adding this triplet doesn't make sense at all here. What's worse, because of the stack at 00:37:826 (5,6) - , the placement itself doesn't look that good to me. As a solution of both of issues, I personally highly recommend you to delete 00:38:185 (6,7) - .
As I wrote at the second line, I don't mean to force you to do that, ofc. But I will be glad if you reconsider it.


By the way, rest is fine at least to me. Good luck! ;)
yf_bmp
OTL What the trouble..

OK. Help me delete these two @wkyik
Topic Starter
Rizia
k updated~
Koiyuki
it seems that it doesnt need me anymore.
gogogo~
IamKwaN
we need you if this got dq'ed
Guy
Qualified.
Meg
8-)
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Rizia
Thanks Guy ><
Cloudchaser
Tenri best girl
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