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IamKwaN
不改了 全部有意為之
Leorda
Hi there

[Easy]
* AR +1? Your current one is bit slow I think

01:09:622 - Add note here? It feels empty here

[KwaN's Normal]
00:25:251 (3) - Make sure this slider isn't overlapped by previous one, so it makes the slider is readed clearly
00:49:862 (1) - Move the last sliderpoint up a bit so the sliderborder were clearly visible and players will understand the path
01:22:017 (3) - Move down a bit so it doesn't too much overlapped each other?

[yf's Hard]
* Approach Rate seems too high for Hard diff. Reduce a bit?

00:38:185 (6,7) - I don't think it would be fit having a triplets like this because the instruments wasn't heard any triplets hit-hat or snare-drum. How about remove this note to make the hitsound were heard clearly?
00:41:239 (1) - Why the tail slider is snap at blue tick? I don't see why it's should be snap there? Shorten to red tick to follow the vocal?
00:54:712 (3) - This slider is almost unrankable because the path were almost overlapped together that cause players confuse them. I recommend you to remake the slider if possible
01:02:347 (3) - I would like to remove this note because triplets here doesn't seems fit here
01:06:209 (3) - Same issue as 00:54:712 (3)
01:15:730 (1,3,1) - Same suggestion as 00:41:239 (1)

[iMage's Insane]
00:12:137 (4,5,6,7,1) - I don't think the streams would fit to calm part because no instruments is hit a 1/4 stream
00:30:820 (3,4) - Reverse this placement so the jump pattern path is same as 00:29:742 (1,2,3)
00:32:976 (2,4,2,4) - How about reverse it on each slider so it makes a circular jump?
00:41:778 (2) - Is there any reason why this slider is snap at blue tick? I don't think it fits here and the rhythm will probably messed up

That's all I got... good luck ;w;
Topic Starter
Rizia

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Easy]
* AR +1? Your current one is bit slow I think ok

01:09:622 - Add note here? It feels empty here ok

That's all I got... good luck ;w;
thanks for mod >w<~~
Meg

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[iMage's Insane]
00:12:137 (4,5,6,7,1) - I don't think the streams would fit to calm part because no instruments is hit a 1/4 stream fixed
00:30:820 (3,4) - Reverse this placement so the jump pattern path is same as 00:29:742 (1,2,3)fixed
00:32:976 (2,4,2,4) - How about reverse it on each slider so it makes a circular jump? i like this pattern. keep
00:41:778 (2) - Is there any reason why this slider is snap at blue tick? I don't think it fits here and the rhythm will probably messed up fixed

That's all I got... good luck ;w;
thank you for modding!
http://puu.sh/dyd3r.zip
xxdeathx
requested

[General]
  1. 01:15:730 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - in Hard: not sure if these vocals are 1/1 + 1/2 or 3/4, since there is conflict between Hard and all other diffs on this. Vocals sound a little late at 01:15:999, closer to 01:16:808 there, and almost on point at 01:17:437
  2. add 1000 ms audio lead in
  3. Add twgok to tags
  4. Some inconsistencies with the difficulty settings in the insanes, check mods on individual diffs.
[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
  1. 00:24:892 (2,3) - Very creative but idk if this is allowable because both stack and overlap is tricky
  2. 01:19:143 (2,3,4) - All other stacks in this diff are 1/2 but not these, idk
[Hard]
Try to make this diff a bit easier so spread is better.
  1. 00:12:856 (1,2) - Not exactly stacked
  2. 00:49:862 (1,1) - Stacking here is kind of awkward since the slider is so long that the player may lose track of the rhythm and not know exactly when to hit the next circle, and the approach circle is hard to see since it's stacked on a slider. Highly suggest unstacking this.
  3. 00:54:712 (3) - Open slider up a little since it could be hard to read
  4. 00:58:844 (2,3) - Fix blanket better if it was intended
  5. 01:06:209 (3) - Similar thing as earlier
  6. 01:15:730 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - See what I wrote in General, may want to clear this up
[Insane]
  1. 00:57:047 (1) - Actually I feel it plays better if you swap the times of 00:57:047 (1,2) - and 00:57:586 (3) - . Right now 00:56:688 (6,7,1) - is all 90 degree flow which is really awkward but swap them and it's better
  2. 00:58:305 (1) - Curve the other way for flow
  3. 01:19:862 (1) - ^
  4. 01:23:634 (6) - NC since you had one at 01:22:556 (1) - ?
  5. 01:28:125 - Maybe it's better to ignore the vocal to emphasize the other sounds
[Moecho's Insane]
  1. Shouldn't OD be lower than or equal to wkyik's diff which is harder? Same with CS
  2. Maybe AR8.8 since this diff is kinda low star rating
  3. 00:23:634 (3,4,5,6) - Too overmapped imo
  4. 01:18:245 (5,6,7,8) - ^ same, I'd prefer you map these some other way, maybe with a slider
  5. 01:21:658 - Strong vocal shouldn't be ignored
  6. 01:31:269 (7) - sounds better if removed
[iMage--'s Insane]
  1. Make HP drain at least as high as the others because this is the highest diff
  2. 00:49:502 (3) - flow is awkward, try ctrl-G
  3. 00:49:862 (1) - slider end snap is inconsistent with other insanes
  4. 00:52:377 (3) - sounds overmapped, I suggest deleting it and extending 00:52:197 (2) -
  5. 01:19:862 (2,1) - Swap NC or move closer together, since the equally spaced jump that is 1/2 beat 01:18:964 (2,3) - is the same combo.
  6. 01:27:766 (1) - Unnecessary NC tbh
  7. 01:29:023 (1) - 01:30:641 (1) - ^
Good enough. Let me know when everybody has fixed these.
IamKwaN
Leorda
00:25:251 (3) - Make sure this slider isn't overlapped by previous one, so it makes the slider is readed clearly why...i stack them intentionally
00:49:862 (1) - Move the last sliderpoint up a bit so the sliderborder were clearly visible and players will understand the path it's now clearly visible, they don't cross over
01:22:017 (3) - Move down a bit so it doesn't too much overlapped each other? intentional, they look great now
xxdeathx
00:24:892 (2,3) - Very creative but idk if this is allowable because both stack and overlap is tricky so nowadays BATs love to strangle creativity? its acceptable, believe me
01:19:143 (2,3,4) - All other stacks in this diff are 1/2 but not these, idk reading the AR is fine, stacking provides the best effect on the music in this case
Topic Starter
Rizia

xxdeathx wrote:

requested

[General]
  1. 01:15:730 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - in Hard: not sure if these vocals are 1/1 + 1/2 or 3/4, since there is conflict between Hard and all other diffs on this. Vocals sound a little late at 01:15:999, closer to 01:16:808 there, and almost on point at 01:17:437
  2. add 1000 ms audio lead in
  3. Add twgok to tags
  4. Some inconsistencies with the difficulty settings in the insanes, check mods on individual diffs.
[Insane]
  1. 00:57:047 (1) - Actually I feel it plays better if you swap the times of 00:57:047 (1,2) - and 00:57:586 (3) - . Right now 00:56:688 (6,7,1) - is all 90 degree flow which is really awkward but swap them and it's better i want make weird flow here, i think it's fun~~
  2. 00:58:305 (1) - Curve the other way for flow flow on here
  3. 01:19:862 (1) - ^
  4. 01:23:634 (6) - NC since you had one at 01:22:556 (1) - ? ok
  5. 01:28:125 - Maybe it's better to ignore the vocal to emphasize the other sounds ummmm, i want follow vocal here xd

thanks for mod~~
i will fix general thing later
Meg

xxdeathx wrote:

requested

[iMage--'s Insane]
  1. Make HP drain at least as high as the others because this is the highest diff ok
  2. 00:49:502 (3) - flow is awkward, try ctrl-G i did Ctrl+G 00:49:323 (2,4)
  3. 00:49:862 (1) - slider end snap is inconsistent with other insanes fixed
  4. 00:52:377 (3) - sounds overmapped, I suggest deleting it and extending 00:52:197 (2) - fixed
  5. 01:19:862 (2,1) - Swap NC or move closer together, since the equally spaced jump that is 1/2 beat 01:18:964 (2,3) - is the same combo. fixed
  6. 01:27:766 (1) - Unnecessary NC tbh fixed
  7. 01:29:023 (1) - 01:30:641 (1) - ^ fixed
Good enough. Let me know when everybody has fixed these.
thank you for modding, death :)
http://puu.sh/dLcbM.zip
Topic Starter
Rizia
updated these diff
added some tag like wkyik
and added leadin
waiting for moecho and yf
IamKwaN
Fixed some aesthetic thingy
insane still tag inconsistent and no audio leadin
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Mirai e no Tobira (OVA EDIT).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 52017
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Mirai e no Tobira (OVA EDIT)
TitleUnicode:未来への扉 (OVA EDIT)
Artist:eyelis
ArtistUnicode:eyelis
Creator:Kawaiwkyik
Version:KwaN's Normal
Source:Kami nomi zo Shiru Sekai: Tenri-hen
Tags:神のみぞ知るセカイ 天理篇 The World God Only Knows twgok Moecho iMage-- yf_bmp IamKwaN wkyik
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
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Moecho

xxdeathx wrote:

requested

[Moecho's Insane]
  1. Shouldn't OD be lower than or equal to wkyik's diff which is harder? Same with CS I don't think this is an issue, rather it's more as a mapper's preference. If it's an unrankable issue then I will change, but that needs confirmation.
  2. Maybe AR8.8 since this diff is kinda low star rating No, AR 9 for this BPM is great, and why does AR have reference to star rating? Star rating is 4.22 and it's quite fitting AR 9, I see no issue with this.
  3. 00:23:634 (3,4,5,6) - Too overmapped imo No, this rhythm should be clearly expected, and the notes on the blue ticks are actually being supported by the distorted electronic bass sound(or w.e.) in the background.
  4. 01:18:245 (5,6,7,8) - ^ same, I'd prefer you map these some other way, maybe with a slider This one clearly fits to the music, no change.
  5. 01:21:658 - Strong vocal shouldn't be ignored OK!
  6. 01:31:269 (7) - sounds better if removed
OK!

Good enough. Let me know when everybody has fixed these.
Thanks for modding!

Damn Firefox, doesn't save what I have written, when clicked on Post I needed to log in again.. and everything beautiful.

Update:
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Creator:Kawaiwkyik
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Source:Kami nomi zo Shiru Sekai: Tenri-hen
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Topic Starter
Rizia
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@駿喵: 怎麼我經常看不到你看得到的東西 & 有空提提你家yf改mod 星期三還未改的話我幫他改去了
xxdeathx
@Kwan It's not about strangling creativity, it's about whether such a pattern is still possible for normal players to read. Since the slider head of first and slider body of second overlap and the slider end of first stacks with the slider head of second it may confuse them. If you say it's acceptable I will be fine with that but I hope you aren't wrong.

@Moecho The AR is more relevant to the amount of big jumps and objects in the screen, but a lower star rating means less of those. Your diff doesn't have a lot of jumps or big spacing, and the bpm isn't very high, so it can afford to go lower than AR9. See this diff https://osu.ppy.sh/b/453565&m=0 is higher bpm, bigger/more jumps and still AR8.8.
Moecho

xxdeathx wrote:

@Moecho The AR is more relevant to the amount of big jumps and objects in the screen, but a lower star rating means less of those. Your diff doesn't have a lot of jumps or big spacing, and the bpm isn't very high, so it can afford to go lower than AR9. See this diff https://osu.ppy.sh/b/453565&m=0 is higher bpm, bigger/more jumps and still AR8.8.
Mm but I would still stick to AR 9, It's just not necessary to change to 8.8 imo. Would just mess up accuracy a bit more ;w;
IamKwaN
@柚子: 你自己叫yf改啊
@death: yea its acceptable and not really hard to read, i have asked my bro to teatplay it, its totally fine. But for aesthetic purpose, i change the position of the post slider, but for the one before the kiai, i just leave it as it is. No challenge, no fun
yf_bmp
周二有空 麻烦等等
Moecho
更新一下,改了结尾和修复了一些bug~

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Title:Mirai e no Tobira (OVA EDIT)
TitleUnicode:未来への扉 (OVA EDIT)
Artist:eyelis
ArtistUnicode:eyelis
Creator:Kawaiwkyik
Version:Moecho's Insane
Source:Kami nomi zo Shiru Sekai: Tenri-hen
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Fighto!!1!1!
yf_bmp

xxdeathx wrote:

[General]
  1. 01:15:730 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - in Hard: not sure if these vocals are 1/1 + 1/2 or 3/4, since there is conflict between Hard and all other diffs on this. Vocals sound a little late at 01:15:999, closer to 01:16:808 there, and almost on point at 01:17:437 Well,I just follow the feeling. Anyhow, I thought the first vocal is off, and the second one is really on the white line, and the third one is correct, but in order to be coincident in the same part and be in good feeling enough, I choose the current rhythm.

    [Hard]
    Try to make this diff a bit easier so spread is better. Easy enough.. at least no sudden jumps like the easiest insane diff
    1. 00:12:856 (1,2) - Not exactly stacked
    2. 00:49:862 (1,1) - Stacking here is kind of awkward since the slider is so long that the player may lose track of the rhythm and not know exactly when to hit the next circle, and the approach circle is hard to see since it's stacked on a slider. Highly suggest unstacking this.
    3. 00:54:712 (3) - Open slider up a little since it could be hard to read
    4. 00:58:844 (2,3) - Fix blanket better if it was intended
    5. 01:06:209 (3) - Similar thing as earlier
    6. 01:15:730 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - See what I wrote in General, may want to clear this up
others are fixed!

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Source:Kami nomi zo Shiru Sekai: Tenri-hen
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Topic Starter
Rizia
updated all
xxdeathx
Title according to http://kaminomi.jp/cd/index.html#eyelis_CDS is 未来への扉(OVA EDIT) without spaces before parentheses.

I also wonder if that means you must remove space before parentheses in romanized title: Mirai e no Tobira(OVA EDIT)
Topic Starter
Rizia

xxdeathx wrote:

Title according to http://kaminomi.jp/cd/index.html#eyelis_CDS is 未来への扉(OVA EDIT) without spaces before parentheses.

I also wonder if that means you must remove space before parentheses in romanized title: Mirai e no Tobira(OVA EDIT)
i think it should remove space
xxdeathx
Changed title again (as I feared, Bakawkyik initially just removed the space from the Japanese title instead of copying/pasting it in from what I gave since the parentheses are different characters).

Take my first real bubble!!
Topic Starter
Rizia

xxdeathx wrote:

Changed title again (as I feared, Bakawkyik initially just removed the space from the Japanese title instead of copying/pasting it in from what I gave since the parentheses are different characters).

Take my first real bubble!!
thanks bubble~~
Meg
death is god
Moecho
Sugoi desu!
xxdeathx
Changed the romanized title back to Mirai e no Tobira (OVA EDIT) according to Melophobia
Guy
Hi o/

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Is this "wkyik" tag really necessary?

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  1. 00:14:832 (2) - 終端の音が少し大きいので20%に設定してみてください。
  2. whistle入りそうな所が結構あるんで入れてみては?
    SPOILER
    00:16:808 -
    00:18:245 -
    00:19:682 -
    00:22:556 -
    00:24:532 -
    00:24:892 -
    00:27:227 - ここからはなんで2/1の間隔でwhistleなんでしょうか?曲は1/1の間隔でバスが鳴ってます。
    00:27:946 -
    00:28:664 -
    00:29:383 -
    00:30:101 -
    これだけ書けばあとは自分でもわかると思うので省きます。
  3. 00:51:299 - volume10%はUnrankableになる恐れがあるので最低でも20%に設定しておきましょう。
  4. 00:52:467 - ^
  5. 00:59:742 (1,2) - 2の位置には曲に音がないように思うのでここは素直にボーカルフォローで1/2スライダーを置いたほうが無難です。

  6. 01:03:694 (1) - 終端のdrum clapはかなり浮いてるような気がします。音量を下げるかSoft clapに変更してください。
  7. 01:08:544 (1) - こういう強い音が来てるところにもwhistleがほしい
  8. 01:09:802 (1) - 真上よりも気持ち左に移動してあげたほうが流れ良くなると思います。
  9. 01:13:215 (3) - 01:13:395 - ここが空白なのがとても違和感あります。せっかくボーカルの声が伸びているとこなのでスライダーに変更してみては?
  10. 01:14:652 (2,3) - 連打の音が始まるのは01:15:011 - ここからなので若干オーバーマップ気味に思います。単発に変更することをオススメします。
  11. 01:17:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - この曲調でこのジャンプですか? 全くfitしてないように感じるのでもう少し狭めてみてはどうでしょう。
  12. 01:19:502 (1) - NC消してもいいかも
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:000 - 10% volume is too low. Please set it up at least 20%.
  2. 00:24:532 (2,3) - Add whistle or clap to slider head. There has a loud sound.
  3. 00:27:227 (2) - Add whistle to slider head. I recommend that add whistle the place sounding similar sound (00:27:946 - 00:28:664 - 00:29:383 - 00:30:101 - and so on.)
  4. 00:48:425 (3) - Add drum whistle or clap to slider head.
  5. 00:48:784 (5) - Add whistle to slider head. sounding bass sound here.
  6. 00:51:299 - do not use 5% volume in slider end. It might become the unrankable. Please set it 20%.
  7. 01:15:370 (8) - Add clap? I want to put the some hitsound in stream for keeping rhythm.
[Moecho's Insane]
  1. 00:14:113 (1) - a bit bad shape this slider. Please move 3rd white tick between 2nd and 4th tick.
  2. 00:25:296 - using 20% volume please. i'm care about that this might be unrankable issue.
  3. 00:51:389 - unused green line. please remove it.
  4. 01:14:113 (1) - Add finish to slider head.
  5. 01:15:731 (1) - finish
  6. 01:26:329 (3,4,5) - it really doesn't fit the song this triplet. I recommend that consider changing rhythm like this.

  7. 01:29:383 (4,5,6) - please consistent spacing them
[yf's Hard]
  1. 00:38:185 (6,7) - I don't hear sound here. it doesn't fit the triplet imo. I recommend that remove notes.
  2. 01:29:203 (3) - Please reduce one repeat (slider end is 01:29:383 - ) 01:29:203 (3,4) - has big spacing for hard difficulty. so need to make more readable pattern.

[KwaN's Normal]
  1. 00:49:502 (5) - Add drum clap?

    nice diff :>

[Easy]
  1. 00:01:000 - same Insane diff. please use 20%~
call me back :3
Meg

Guy wrote:

Hi o/

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
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  1. 00:14:832 (2) - 終端の音が少し大きいので20%に設定してみてください。
  2. whistle入りそうな所が結構あるんで入れてみては?
    SPOILER
    00:16:808 -
    00:18:245 -
    00:19:682 -
    00:22:556 -
    00:24:532 -
    00:24:892 -
    00:27:227 - ここからはなんで2/1の間隔でwhistleなんでしょうか?曲は1/1の間隔でバスが鳴ってます。
    00:27:946 -
    00:28:664 -
    00:29:383 -
    00:30:101 -
    これだけ書けばあとは自分でもわかると思うので省きます。
  3. 00:51:299 - volume10%はUnrankableになる恐れがあるので最低でも20%に設定しておきましょう。
  4. 00:52:467 - ^
  5. 00:59:742 (1,2) - 2の位置には曲に音がないように思うのでここは素直にボーカルフォローで1/2スライダーを置いたほうが無難です。

  6. 01:03:694 (1) - 終端のdrum clapはかなり浮いてるような気がします。音量を下げるかSoft clapに変更してください。 soft clapにしました
  7. 01:08:544 (1) - こういう強い音が来てるところにもwhistleがほしい
  8. 01:09:802 (1) - 真上よりも気持ち左に移動してあげたほうが流れ良くなると思います。
  9. 01:13:215 (3) - 01:13:395 - ここが空白なのがとても違和感あります。せっかくボーカルの声が伸びているとこなのでスライダーに変更してみては?
  10. 01:14:652 (2,3) - 連打の音が始まるのは01:15:011 - ここからなので若干オーバーマップ気味に思います。単発に変更することをオススメします。 1/2sliderにしました
  11. 01:17:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - この曲調でこのジャンプですか? 全くfitしてないように感じるのでもう少し狭めてみてはどうでしょう。
  12. 01:19:502 (1) - NC消してもいいかも
call me back :3
all fixed
thank you desu 8-)
http://puu.sh/eZNkz.zip

EDIT:my 500th post :D
yf_bmp
Hey our GOD Guy :D

1: Won't fix after my consideration.

My first purpose is to overmap and mix with the music in an excellent way.
The music did have no sounds here, but it is a great way to lead the next part of the music, isn't it?
Much music have such kind of rhythm and in my mind, and here I thought it is fit to do this rhythm as well. (between the parts of the music, there really exists the same kind of occasion.)

Thank you for your understand :P

2: Maybe a little hard but imo it was against the rhythm of music well. Since there is a similar occasion in the former part and you didn't point that out. So I'd rather not fix it.

(I refused them after my second consideration but not causally, then please don't slap me X_X)
Moecho

Guy wrote:

Hi o/

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[Moecho's Insane]
  1. 00:14:113 (1) - a bit bad shape this slider. Please move 3rd white tick between 2nd and 4th tick.
  2. 00:25:296 - using 20% volume please. i'm care about that this might be unrankable issue.
  3. 00:51:389 - unused green line. please remove it.
  4. 01:14:113 (1) - Add finish to slider head.
  5. 01:15:731 (1) - finish
  6. 01:26:329 (3,4,5) - it really doesn't fit the song this triplet. I recommend that consider changing rhythm like this.

  7. 01:29:383 (4,5,6) - please consistent spacing them
call me back :3
All fixed! Thanks for modding :3

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Topic Starter
Rizia

Guy wrote:

Hi o/

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Is this "wkyik" tag really necessary? for now i think not, removed from all diff

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:000 - 10% volume is too low. Please set it up at least 20%.
  2. 00:24:532 (2,3) - Add whistle or clap to slider head. There has a loud sound. added whistle
  3. 00:27:227 (2) - Add whistle to slider head. I recommend that add whistle the place sounding similar sound (00:27:946 - 00:28:664 - 00:29:383 - 00:30:101 - and so on.)
  4. 00:48:425 (3) - Add drum whistle or clap to slider head.
  5. 00:48:784 (5) - Add whistle to slider head. sounding bass sound here.
  6. 00:51:299 - do not use 5% volume in slider end. It might become the unrankable. Please set it 20%.
  7. 01:15:370 (8) - Add clap? I want to put the some hitsound in stream for keeping rhythm.

[KwaN's Normal]
  1. 00:49:502 (5) - Add drum clap?

    nice diff :>

[Easy]
  1. 00:01:000 - same Insane diff. please use 20%~
call me back :3
all fixed on kwan and my diff~~
thanks for mod~~
all diff are updated
KSHR
About the triplet in yf's Hard which Guy mentioned, let me write my two cents.

First of all, I'm all for his suggestion that the triplet at 00:38:185 - should be removed.
I don't mean to force you to fix this, but listen the song carefully again please. I'm 10000% sure there is no sound to follow with an object such as the guitar, the drum, the vocal, the synthesizer... Are you sure this fits with the song? If the next objects was the beginning of the climax part which the song gets toned up, I partly would agree with you. But it's not. Therefore leading the next part of the music by adding this triplet doesn't make sense at all here. What's worse, because of the stack at 00:37:826 (5,6) - , the placement itself doesn't look that good to me. As a solution of both of issues, I personally highly recommend you to delete 00:38:185 (6,7) - .
As I wrote at the second line, I don't mean to force you to do that, ofc. But I will be glad if you reconsider it.


By the way, rest is fine at least to me. Good luck! ;)
yf_bmp
OTL What the trouble..

OK. Help me delete these two @wkyik
Topic Starter
Rizia
k updated~
Koiyuki
it seems that it doesnt need me anymore.
gogogo~
IamKwaN
we need you if this got dq'ed
Guy
Qualified.
Meg
8-)
Topic Starter
Rizia
Thanks Guy ><
Cloudchaser
Tenri best girl
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