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TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

597 posts

Joined March 2013

TtmnZk 2015-07-09T18:18:57+00:00

先占个坑，
明天之内没po的话qq叫下。

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2015-07-10T00:55:15+00:00

夏蘿大法好好好

[General]

GDer的難度請去掉WidescreenStoryboard
建議把sliderslide靜音，還是那句，太難聽了

[Abhor's Normal]

建議每8拍1NC，現在4拍1NC顯得每個combo物件太少，8拍NC也會對玩家玩FL有幫助
00:13:179 (2,3) - 間距變成1.25x了
00:36:836 (2) - 建議改成兩個圓圈，提升打擊感
01:04:265 (1,1) - EZ要隔4拍才能再放物件（雖然這個是NM，但是是這圖最低難度，不知道要不要隔），另外要改的話可以參考02:34:436 (4) - 的做法
02:01:522 (1,2,3,1) - 這裡間距一會1.3x一會1.0x，你需要保持1.2x
03:11:808 (1,1) - 這種不知道會不會被砍，因為只隔了3拍，其實是有空間保持1.2x間距的
03:42:665 (1,1) - 間距0.95x了

[Soda's Hard]

這hard可以再做難點，3.1左右剛剛好
00:52:951 (2,1) - blanket
03:21:408 (4) - NC會不會好點
後面看出來有一段是複製的，不過沒大問題，nice diff

[Insane]

00:03:408 (6,7) - blanket
00:07:522 (3) - 這個滑條尾漏了clap
00:08:036 (4) - clap去掉
00:11:807 (6,7) - 這也太難讀了
00:25:865 (3) - 這樣彎的不好看。。不要那麼彎就好了
SPOILER
00:28:951 (2) - 這個滑條尾的whistle好違和，還是去掉吧
00:32:379 (3) - 放下一點，而且不要那麼彎
SPOILER
00:46:265 - 這裡漏音了，加個圓圈會好點
00:55:694 (1,2) - 不明這裡間距為何突然加大
00:59:122 (2,3,1) - 前後23隔了1拍，後面31隔了1/2拍，但間距分別不明顯，總結就是把3放上面點
SPOILER
00:59:808 (3) - 還有這個的finish也去掉吧
01:07:351 (3) - 突然變速建議NC
01:25:351 (2,4) - 01:26:894 (1,2) - blanket好點
01:27:236 (2,4) - 這種在HD mod比較坑哦
01:36:836 (1) - 其實不需要NC
01:38:036 (1) - 不需要NC
01:44:722 (4,5,6) - 你確定這能玩，4.39x間距
02:09:408 (5,6) - 建議再放下面點和前面34間距分明，不然這種就是容易誤按的
02:13:179 (5,6,7) - 這個改成一個折返如何，剛好因為vocal是延音
02:27:579 (2) - 試試這樣？
SPOILER
02:55:008 (6) - ctrl+G的話flow會更順
03:04:436 (4,5) - 求不要碰到
03:07:008 (1) - 放遠一點
SPOILER
03:18:494 (5,6) - 這間距有點違和
03:37:522 (9,1) - 其實還是建議多用這種，隔1拍的時候原地再放物件開始
03:41:979 (1,2) - 像上面說的，2疊去1就不會覺得違和了
03:52:951 (1) - 這種有機會被說看不清jb然後被砍。因為中間轉彎那裡沒有明確的路線，總之小心點吧
整個圖看完覺得排版不夠美觀，不過打起來除了上面說的那些其他都挺順的，多點包好物件這樣更好看。

美麗;w;

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2015-07-10T02:56:14+00:00

[General]

letter box 會黑掉頭所以建議去掉
加1500的AudioLeadIn 讓玩家在開頭有合計兩秒左右的時間反應，位置在osu文件的general 第二行
AR2 - AR 7.7 絕對不行。hard只是空拍多，該難的地方也有連單點和單點跳。實際難度並不遜色於lfj 的Eternal 難度…… 而normal 難度完全沒有1/2 ，你可能不得不在這中間補一個難度

加上自定義顏色吧，試試我的

[Colours]
Combo1: 255,128,255
Combo2: 128,255,255
Combo3: 255,255,128
Combo4: 128,128,255

BG 好漂亮 >_<

[Insane]
難度名換成Eternal , Sakura 或者別的什麼什麼，insane 的意思是神經病 .-.
soft-hitwhistle2 這個水滴聲存在感爆棚而且使用過於頻繁……我覺得這麼嬌弱造作的音效在段落開頭或者結尾用一次就足夠了，強烈建議替換或者降低使用頻率，可以再試試這些，交替用兩個鐘（因為鐘和水滴一樣響，兩個交替違和感低一點）或者單獨用你的鈴鐺（soft-hitclap2） → 鐘1 , 鐘2
soft-hitfinish 我覺得很合曲但也是一節一次太頻繁了，不嫌麻煩也可以找個別的交替使用或者直接空成兩節甚至四節一次
soft-hitfinish2 試試這個柔和一點 http://puu.sh/iTzti/281bc8eae4.wav
00:33:236 - 00:37:351 - 如果是希望表現人聲前面可以用1/2滑條，因為這兩個地方都是有非常明顯的鼓點，對於音遊來說不必要的空拍還是儘量避免吧
00:33:065 (1,2) - 00:39:408 (1,2) - 01:12:494 - 然後像這種我還是建議維持長白線NC ，當然你也可以統一按照一個固定的思路比如一句一個總之不要隨性切換，關於最後一個時間點你可能要考慮重新調整節奏使得重音上有點擊
01:41:294 (8) - 同上建議NC的位置，而且相比01:41:294 (8,9) - 的節奏，人聲在這裡顯眼的多得多，我建議和01:42:322 (1,2,3) - 一樣摆六個1/2滑條下梗……總之你可能要花不少的力氣重新處理NC 的邏輯
01:44:979 (5,6) - 你平時從來沒把1/4拆的這麼遠過，所以從rating角度上建議接上或者平時就多次使用這樣的排列讓玩家有心理準備
02:03:579 (6,7,1) - 的確你是對應的節奏，但是這個歌的節奏和鼓點不是很明顯……所以這樣的讀圖梗只能說好玩而並不舒服
02:13:522 (7,1) - ^
02:06:322 (2,3,6) - unrankable ……
02:41:894 (4) - 既然這裡下二連的話可以考慮02:41:722 - 也補一個，雙二連的節奏比較容易把握，然後既然你overmap 了二連就應該貫徹到底其他地方也要加一點……
02:44:722 (7,8) - 雖然我覺得抒情平穩的音樂下串甚至十六連打都很合適……如果你覺得底音吵的話可以考慮把02:44:808 - 02:44:979 - 的底音切成drum 達到偽消音的效果，全切成drum也不錯
03:38:551 (1) - 重音我傾向下跳 = =
03:49:865 (4,5,6,1) - 這不是昨晚lan wind 那哨子版本的折返跳嗎 QAQ

[Normal]
NC降到兩節一次吧，不少數字組都不到2

Asserin

332 posts

Joined August 2013

Asserin 2015-07-10T09:05:42+00:00

Insane :
00:14:722 (5) - x:305 y:71
01:36:836 (1) - x:223 y:188
01:37:007 (2) - x:292 y:296
01:37:179 (1) - Ctr+H and stack on 01:38:036 (1)
02:46:951 (5) - x:298 y:103
03:03:579 (1) - Ctr+H>Ctr+G and stack on 03:04:265 (3)
03:04:265 (3,4) - Ctr+G and "4" put on x:386 y:30

It's all for more flow ^^

Other diffs are amazing for me \o/
Get luck !

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Wing My Way 2015-07-10T09:31:00+00:00

Misure

in-game request
一波水摸接好;w;
[General]

BG能换张更好的吧...这张没存在感啊，还容易联想到另外两张图._.
[Insane]

00:04:608 (1,2,3,4) - 这里用00:00:494 (1,2,3) - 的节奏，节奏正好错开
00:03:579 (7,1) - 远点
00:14:894 (6,1,2,3) - 虽然感觉挺好的但是这种非常规的我就是觉得有点别扭...不如不要stack？
00:15:922 (3) - 可以改成滑条,或者3和4距离再远点,现在感觉有点3后面有一点点空
00:20:894 (4,1) - 打起来感觉有点怪怪的,可以试试滑条和3 stack然后blanket 4 之类的感觉
00:22:951 (8,1) - 感觉离远好点
00:32:722 (4,2) - 可以包，顺便00:32:722 (4,1) - 可以远点
00:40:094 (3) - 这个flow大概朝下好些
00:41:636 (1,2) - 包？后面有几个地方也没包好(还是故意的？)
00:49:179 (7,1) - 感觉近了 00:49:179 (7,2) - (272,120) ；00:49:522 (1) - (192,204)
00:51:922 (1,2) - 有一点点别扭推荐00:52:436 (2,3) - ctrl+G ；00:52:779 (4) - (228,44)
00:56:036 (3) - 往上点
00:59:636 - 加个note 连续空两个1分拍感觉有点不好
00:57:922 (4) - 极力推荐(336,224) 如果采用的话 2和3就改个位置之类的
01:02:894 (1,2) - 有点近了
01:02:894 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 你这几个是没想包还是？
01:10:779 (2,3) - 我觉得跳一下比较好，就是3放远点
01:16:608 (1,2) - 这个stack相比于前几个就不好了，重叠1/2怎么样？或者类似01:22:779 (1,2) - 这种...
01:18:494 (5) - ctrl+H
01:23:465 (3) - (238,146) 01:23:636 (4) - (316,312) 因为感觉这段flow太顺了...
01:28:608 (6,2) - 干脆stack起来...是因为rank规则不允许么？如果是那干脆就分开点...
01:29:636 (2,3,4) - 都是接尾巴 01:30:322 (4,5) - 这个接头就感觉不好了
01:35:122 - with 1/4
[box=Image]

*上面这条你看看就好,按你那个滑条突然就想这么摆一下看看Orz*
01:37:179 (1,1,2,3) - 你这个就和开头那个不一样...直接导致读错图啊(亲测读错)或者干脆

01:39:236 (1,2,3) - 滑条flow不好，感觉第二个滑条flow向左右好些
01:44:722 (4,5,6) - 呃...嗯，挺难的，但是感觉问题不大(大概)
02:04:436 (2,3) - 分别ctrl+G 总之对02:03:922 (1,2) - 这种形式感觉不太好
02:11:122 (6,7) - 近了，干脆stack就感觉挺好
02:13:522 (7,1) - ^ stack
02:13:865 (1,2,3) - 不好，摆弧形吧
02:29:636 (9) - (288,152) 举个例子第二段stack怎么这么多...试几个和第一段相同的这种错位啊
02:31:179 (4,5) - 近了
02:35:636 - 真的不加note？虽然感觉差不多但还是觉得常规的好
02:39:579 (6) - (176,232) 02:39:922 (1) - (156,200) 主要控制一下5-6的flow
02:44:722 (7,8) - 我感觉分别ctrl+G好点
02:55:008 (6) - ctrl+G 控制6-1的flow
02:58:094 (3,4) - 这种怎么都是感觉4 ctrl+G好点
02:58:779 (5) - ^
03:19:351 (7) - 改成滑条,红线上有个音那是故意漏掉的，跟的节奏不同
03:23:122 (3,4,5,6) - 间距控制一下？
03:26:036 (7) - (248,204)
03:26:722 (2) - (328,312) 03:26:894 (3) - (164,256)
03:35:465 (4,5) - flow感觉不好 03:36:322 (5) - (144,368)之类的...
03:37:865 (1,2,3,4,1) - 摆两个三角形好不好？03:38:208 (3) - (324,122) 03:38:379 (4) - (456,132) 之类的感觉

GD就先不摸了(容我懒一下...)
神图，起飞预定
别的美丽

Good luck！

QAQ前面大部分都改了，然而360浏览器抽风全部美丽
谢谢mod！

Kencho

夏蘿大法好好好

[General]

GDer的難度請去掉WidescreenStoryboard
建議把sliderslide靜音，還是那句，太難聽了

[Insane]

00:03:408 (6,7) - blanket
00:07:522 (3) - 這個滑條尾漏了clap
00:08:036 (4) - clap去掉
00:11:807 (6,7) - 這也太難讀了
00:25:865 (3) - 這樣彎的不好看。。不要那麼彎就好了
SPOILER
00:28:951 (2) - 這個滑條尾的whistle好違和，還是去掉吧
00:32:379 (3) - 放下一點，而且不要那麼彎
SPOILER
00:46:265 - 這裡漏音了，加個圓圈會好點
00:55:694 (1,2) - 不明這裡間距為何突然加大
00:59:122 (2,3,1) - 前後23隔了1拍，後面31隔了1/2拍，但間距分別不明顯，總結就是把3放上面點
SPOILER
00:59:808 (3) - 還有這個的finish也去掉吧
01:07:351 (3) - 突然變速建議NC
01:25:351 (2,4) - 01:26:894 (1,2) - blanket好點
01:27:236 (2,4) - 這種在HD mod比較坑哦
01:36:836 (1) - 其實不需要NC
01:38:036 (1) - 不需要NC
01:44:722 (4,5,6) - 你確定這能玩，4.39x間距
02:09:408 (5,6) - 建議再放下面點和前面34間距分明，不然這種就是容易誤按的
02:13:179 (5,6,7) - 這個改成一個折返如何，剛好因為vocal是延音
02:27:579 (2) - 試試這樣？
SPOILER
02:55:008 (6) - ctrl+G的話flow會更順
03:04:436 (4,5) - 求不要碰到
03:07:008 (1) - 放遠一點
SPOILER
03:18:494 (5,6) - 這間距有點違和
03:37:522 (9,1) - 其實還是建議多用這種，隔1拍的時候原地再放物件開始
03:41:979 (1,2) - 像上面說的，2疊去1就不會覺得違和了
03:52:951 (1) - 這種有機會被說看不清jb然後被砍。因為中間轉彎那裡沒有明確的路線，總之小心點吧
整個圖看完覺得排版不夠美觀，不過打起來除了上面說的那些其他都挺順的，多點包好物件這樣更好看。

美麗;w;
基本都改了，浏览器抽风美丽;w;
谢谢mod！

Narcissu

[General]

[*]letter box 會黑掉頭所以建議去掉那是什么0.0

[*]加1500的AudioLeadIn 讓玩家在開頭有合計兩秒左右的時間反應，位置在osu文件的general 第二行好

[*]AR2 - AR 7.7 絕對不行。hard只是空拍多，該難的地方也有連單點和單點跳。實際難度並不遜色於lfj 的Eternal 難度…… 而normal 難度完全沒有1/2 ，你可能不得不在這中間補一個難度

[*]加上自定義顏色吧，試試我的嗯，我自己调了调色

[Colours]
Combo1: 255,128,255
Combo2: 128,255,255
Combo3: 255,255,128
Combo4: 128,128,255

[*]BG 好漂亮 >_< >,<店长帮忙找的

[Insane]

[*]難度名換成Eternal , Sakura 或者別的什麼什麼，insane 的意思是神經病 .-. 233，考虑换掉

[*]soft-hitwhistle2 這個水滴聲存在感爆棚而且使用過於頻繁……我覺得這麼嬌弱造作的音效在段落開頭或者結尾用一次就足夠了，強烈建議替換或者降低使用頻率，可以再試試這些，交替用兩個鐘（因為鐘和水滴一樣響，兩個交替違和感低一點）或者單獨用你的鈴鐺（soft-hitclap2） → 鐘1 , 鐘2 我试了试钟1，感觉不是特理想，第一个kiai试着改了改，要不听听看？

[*]soft-hitfinish 我覺得很合曲但也是一節一次太頻繁了，不嫌麻煩也可以找個別的交替使用或者直接空成兩節甚至四節一次

[*]soft-hitfinish2 試試這個柔和一點 http://puu.sh/iTzti/281bc8eae4.wav 不太好听

[*]00:33:236 - 00:37:351 - 如果是希望表現人聲前面可以用1/2滑條，因為這兩個地方都是有非常明顯的鼓點，對於音遊來說不必要的空拍還是儘量避免吧 fixed

[*]00:33:065 (1,2) - 00:39:408 (1,2) - 01:12:494 - 然後像這種我還是建議維持長白線NC ，當然你也可以統一按照一個固定的思路比如一句一個總之不要隨性切換，關於最後一個時間點你可能要考慮重新調整節奏使得重音上有點擊嗯，交换NC了

[*]01:41:294 (8) - 同上建議NC的位置，而且相比01:41:294 (8,9) - 的節奏，人聲在這裡顯眼的多得多，我建議和01:42:322 (1,2,3) - 一樣摆六個1/2滑條下梗……總之你可能要花不少的力氣重新處理NC 的邏輯 fixed
[*]01:44:979 (5,6) - 你平時從來沒把1/4拆的這麼遠過，所以從rating角度上建議接上或者平時就多次使用這樣的排列讓玩家有心理準備诶都这么说啊那我还是改掉好了

[*]02:03:579 (6,7,1) - 的確你是對應的節奏，但是這個歌的節奏和鼓點不是很明顯……所以這樣的讀圖梗只能說好玩而並不舒服

[*]02:13:522 (7,1) - ^

[*]02:06:322 (2,3,6) - unrankable …… fixed

[*]02:41:894 (4) - 既然這裡下二連的話可以考慮02:41:722 - 也補一個，雙二連的節奏比較容易把握，然後既然你overmap 了二連就應該貫徹到底其他地方也要加一點…… 我觉得不用加

[*]02:44:722 (7,8) - 雖然我覺得抒情平穩的音樂下串甚至十六連打都很合適……如果你覺得底音吵的話可以考慮把02:44:808 - 02:44:979 - 的底音切成drum 達到偽消音的效果，全切成drum也不錯已经改掉了√

[*]03:38:551 (1) - 重音我傾向下跳 = =

[*]03:49:865 (4,5,6,1) - 這不是昨晚lan wind 那哨子版本的折返跳嗎 QAQ QAQ前面也有
谢谢mod！！

Asserin

Insane :
00:14:722 (5) - x:305 y:71 sure
01:36:836 (1) - x:223 y:188
01:37:007 (2) - x:292 y:296 Good ideas
01:37:179 (1) - Ctr+H and stack on 01:38:036 (1)
02:46:951 (5) - x:298 y:103 ok
03:03:579 (1) - Ctr+H>Ctr+G and stack on 03:04:265 (3) blanket not good
03:04:265 (3,4) - Ctr+G and "4" put on x:386 y:30

It's all for more flow ^^

Other diffs are amazing for me \o/
Get luck !
wow thank you

thanks for all！！

Nezzar

117 posts

Joined June 2009

Nezzar 2015-07-10T12:24:07+00:00

[Insane]
00:16:265 (4,5,6,7) - 5和7放一起而且被之前的3擋住了好像不太好QAQ…
00:19:522 (4,5,6,7) - 個人意見，不過這樣放比較好?QAQ

img

00:32:036 (1,2) - 有點怪
00:38:208 (5,6,7,8) - 節奏不太對QAQ

img

這樣比較好?
00:55:694 (1,2) - 太近啦QAQ 313,139?
00:57:408 (2,3) - 遠一點厚
02:56:722 (5,1,2) - ^
01:15:065 (3) - 略難讀出來
01:31:351 (3) - ^
01:18:494 (5) - 腦洞大開

img

((runs
01:24:836 (1) - 感覺可以刷一下kiai
02:53:294 (1) - ^
01:28:951 (1,2) - 感覺這樣不會打斷那2個歌詞比較厚一點QAQ

img

02:13:865 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 好像有點急了的感覺放個滑條比較好QAQ?
02:41:636 (3,4) - 中間放一拍做成三連比較好吧QAQ?

img

03:03:236 (3,1) - 可以遠一點的說
03:15:408 (5,1,2,3) - 讀不出來啊QAQ 這5到1 和1到2之間的距離不太好
03:36:322 (5) - 238,96? 感覺不被擋住比較好

[Hard and below]
不會摸啊QAQ

不會做圖啊不會摸圖啊wmw教我做圖啊教我摸圖啊教我放音效啊QAQQAQQAQ
Sharlo大法厚((runs

testplay

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Wing My Way 2015-07-10T18:08:04+00:00

clp012345 wrote:
[Insane]
00:16:265 (4,5,6,7) - 5和7放一起而且被之前的3擋住了好像不太好QAQ… QAQ
00:19:522 (4,5,6,7) - 個人意見，不過這樣放比較好?QAQ
img
不错
00:32:036 (1,2) - 有點怪
00:38:208 (5,6,7,8) - 節奏不太對QAQ
img
這樣比較好?
00:55:694 (1,2) - 太近啦QAQ 313,139? 还可以吧QAQ
00:57:408 (2,3) - 遠一點厚厚
02:56:722 (5,1,2) - ^ fixed
01:15:065 (3) - 略難讀出來
01:31:351 (3) - ^
01:18:494 (5) - 腦洞大開
img
((runs QAQ
01:24:836 (1) - 感覺可以刷一下kiai 不太好
02:53:294 (1) - ^
01:28:951 (1,2) - 感覺這樣不會打斷那2個歌詞比較厚一點QAQ QAQ NO
img
02:13:865 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 好像有點急了的感覺放個滑條比較好QAQ? 怎么都说这里QAQ
02:41:636 (3,4) - 中間放一拍做成三連比較好吧QAQ? QAQ 不好
img
03:03:236 (3,1) - 可以遠一點的說
03:15:408 (5,1,2,3) - 讀不出來啊QAQ 這5到1 和1到2之間的距離不太好
03:36:322 (5) - 238,96? 感覺不被擋住比較好可以

[Hard and below]
不會摸啊QAQ

不會做圖啊不會摸圖啊wmw教我做圖啊教我摸圖啊教我放音效啊QAQQAQQAQ QAQQAQQAQ臭老婆又卖弱吃人，自从被臭老婆摸了以后感觉自己实力一下提升200倍！
Sharlo大法厚((runs
testplay
QAQ DT3*100兼职诗人

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2015-07-11T05:50:24+00:00

啧啧，Yes！I AM！

iRC MOD

2015-07-11 12:59 Wing My Way: hi 浮雷接不接摸0.0
2015-07-11 12:59 Frey: 哪首歌
2015-07-11 13:00 Wing My Way: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/529289 Sharlo & Sabbo - Sakura no Hana ga Maiochiru Toki]
2015-07-11 13:00 Frey: ;w;四分钟..
2015-07-11 13:01 Wing My Way: ;w; 主要就是in 其他无所谓啦
2015-07-11 13:01 Frey: 你确定是175bpm吗
2015-07-11 13:01 Frey: 我怎么都不觉得是175
2015-07-11 13:02 Wing My Way: 不是175
2015-07-11 13:02 Wing My Way: 因为拍号问题……
2015-07-11 13:02 Wing My Way: 只能*2
2015-07-11 13:03 Frey: 有时间IRC吗
2015-07-11 13:03 Wing My Way: 有
2015-07-11 13:04 Frey: 那我简单查一查吧
2015-07-11 13:04 Wing My Way: 好
2015-07-11 13:09 Frey: 首先，统一下颜色
2015-07-11 13:09 Wing My Way: 嗯
2015-07-11 13:10 Wing My Way: 这个我还想再改，所以先不弄呢
2015-07-11 13:10 Frey: 然后，你确定drum-hitclap和drum-hitwhistle有用到吗
2015-07-11 13:10 Frey: 还有Normal的系列音效
2015-07-11 13:10 Frey: 因为我没看到区间里面有用
2015-07-11 13:10 Wing My Way: 都用到了
2015-07-11 13:10 Frey: OK
2015-07-11 13:11 Frey: Video也去了音轨调整好了offset对吧？
2015-07-11 13:11 Wing My Way: 嗯
2015-07-11 13:13 Wing My Way: 稍等我去更新一下
2015-07-11 13:13 Frey: 好
2015-07-11 13:14 Wing My Way: ok了
2015-07-11 13:14 Frey: 01:44:979 (5) - 这里跟蓝线，基本上听不出来
2015-07-11 13:15 Frey: 即便是你自创节奏我打起来我也觉得很奇怪
2015-07-11 13:15 Frey: 还是白线放个什么最好
2015-07-11 13:16 Frey: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/529289 Sharlo & Sabbo - Sakura no Hana ga Maiochiru Toki [Insane]]
2015-07-11 13:17 Wing My Way: osu刚才崩了233
2015-07-11 13:17 Wing My Way: 行那里我改一下
2015-07-11 13:17 Frey: 00:28:265 (5) - 我不太建议折返这样消音
2015-07-11 13:18 Frey: 不过这应该算滑条中，应该没啥问题，但是我建议加大一点音量
2015-07-11 13:19 Wing My Way: 好
2015-07-11 13:19 Wing My Way: 改到10了
2015-07-11 13:19 Frey: 嗯
2015-07-11 13:20 Frey: 00:49:179 (7) - ctrl+g?
2015-07-11 13:20 Frey: 个人兴趣，打这里我觉得别手
2015-07-11 13:22 Wing My Way: 不我喜欢这种逆flow
2015-07-11 13:22 Wing My Way: 诶我看看好像ctrl h还行……
2015-07-11 13:22 Wing My Way: ctrl g间距有点小了
2015-07-11 13:22 Frey: 00:55:865 (2) - x324 y132?
2015-07-11 13:23 Frey: 我觉得这样会好看一点
2015-07-11 13:24 Frey: 00:59:808 (5) - ctrl+g
2015-07-11 13:24 Wing My Way: ok
2015-07-11 13:25 Frey: 01:04:265 (3) - NC，因为1/1过渡到1/2了
2015-07-11 13:26 Wing My Way: 嗯
2015-07-11 13:27 Frey: 01:10:436 (1,2) -
2015-07-11 13:27 Frey: 整个kiai就只有这个3/4是这么跳的
2015-07-11 13:27 Frey: 这样不会很奇怪吗？我觉得小间距比较好
2015-07-11 13:28 Frey: 01:16:608 (1,2) - 没跳而且stack
2015-07-11 13:28 Frey: 01:22:779 (1,2) -
2015-07-11 13:28 Wing My Way: 行我把滑条改成单点了
2015-07-11 13:28 Frey: 后面那两个不是要你改...只是说明前面第一个3/4很跳
2015-07-11 13:29 Wing My Way: 改的是前面的
2015-07-11 13:31 Frey: 02:18:322 (1) - 这里到02:32:722 (1) - 之前你是不是忘了clap啊
2015-07-11 13:32 Frey: 类似02:21:408 (8) - 你都没clap
2015-07-11 13:32 Frey: 02:29:636 (9) -
2015-07-11 13:33 Frey: 02:34:094 (7) - 等距DS？我不知道为什么要这样摆
2015-07-11 13:33 Wing My Way: fixed
2015-07-11 13:34 Wing My Way: 这个等距有什么不好吗
2015-07-11 13:34 Frey: 02:33:751 (5,6,7,8,1) - 构成六边形比较好看一点
2015-07-11 13:35 Frey: 不完全的六边形
2015-07-11 13:35 Frey: 所以那里我觉得等距好一点
2015-07-11 13:36 Wing My Way: [http://puu.sh/iUWt1/acc20ee125.jpg 是不是你那里显示的问题？]
2015-07-11 13:36 Frey: 打起来的时候很明显
2015-07-11 13:37 Frey: 打的时候我一下子就发现那里ds没齐
2015-07-11 13:37 Wing My Way: 哦哦
2015-07-11 13:37 Frey: 02:35:636 - 这里有理由放一个Circle，很明显听得到那里人声已经开始了
2015-07-11 13:38 Frey: 而且这样更好打
2015-07-11 13:38 Wing My Way: 好
2015-07-11 13:41 Frey: 02:57:065 (1) - 我觉得单单这里NC很奇怪
2015-07-11 13:41 Frey: 同样段落只有这里NC
2015-07-11 13:41 Wing My Way: 改了
2015-07-11 13:41 Frey: 干脆取消02:57:408 (1) - NC为好
2015-07-11 13:41 Wing My Way: 这老早的坑 NC都瞎放的- -
2015-07-11 13:41 Frey: 听上去是一段的
2015-07-11 13:42 Wing My Way: 前面取消了这里我不想去
2015-07-11 13:44 Frey: 03:57:065 (1) - 这里放个Circle
2015-07-11 13:44 Frey: 转盘往后拉一拍
2015-07-11 13:44 Wing My Way: 好
2015-07-11 13:46 Frey: 应该没什么了
2015-07-11 13:46 Frey: tag把gder名字加上
2015-07-11 13:46 Frey: that;s it
2015-07-11 13:47 Wing My Way: 好
2015-07-11 13:48 Wing My Way: 谢谢惹;w;
2015-07-11 13:48 Frey: 没事没事

Good luck!

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

sodarose 2015-07-11T07:45:21+00:00

osu file format v14

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Kencho wrote:
夏蘿大法好好好

[Soda's Hard]
這hard可以再做難點，3.1左右剛剛好现在已经够难了

00:52:951 (2,1) - blanket √
03:21:408 (4) - NC會不會好點没必要

後面看出來有一段是複製的，不過沒大問題，nice diff 为什么我看不出哪复制了

Autumn wrote:
[Hard]
02:30:322 (4,1) - 隔开点就好 √

thx

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2015-07-11T10:30:39+00:00

Kencho wrote:
[Abhor's Normal]
建議每8拍1NC，現在4拍1NC顯得每個combo物件太少，8拍NC也會對玩家玩FL有幫助好

00:13:179 (2,3) - 間距變成1.25x了√
00:36:836 (2) - 建議改成兩個圓圈，提升打擊感先留着不改QWQ
01:04:265 (1,1) - EZ要隔4拍才能再放物件（雖然這個是NM，但是是這圖最低難度，不知道要不要隔），另外要改的話可以參考02:34:436 (4) - 的做法好
02:01:522 (1,2,3,1) - 這裡間距一會1.3x一會1.0x，你需要保持1.2x好
03:11:808 (1,1) - 這種不知道會不會被砍，因為只隔了3拍，其實是有空間保持1.2x間距的这里我在看看ORZ
03:42:665 (1,1) - 間距0.95x了好

Narcissu wrote:

[Normal]
NC降到兩節一次吧，不少數字組都不到2好

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2015-07-11T10:52:22+00:00

Abhor' Normal

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221,171,51922,2,0,B|329:223|445:182|445:182|403:269,1,320,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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217,161,141408,6,0,P|165:141|141:111,1,80
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465,230,144494,6,0,P|418:269|351:292,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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254,287,197294,2,0,P|196:291|171:289,1,80
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324,274,201065,2,2,P|248:251|170:275,1,160,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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44,347,207236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
78,158,207922,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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413,233,214094,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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191,98,219922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,60,220265,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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381,268,221636,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,260,222322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2015-07-11T11:16:03+00:00

[Insane]
00:30:494 (7,8) - 这里擦边不好看
01:10:436 (1,2,3) - 感觉好难打← ←
01:12:151 (3) - 我觉得这里滑条到红线结束，白线还需要一个NOTE在重音增强打击感，不然感觉就是突然停顿了一下可以像你这样处理01:19:694 (4,5,6,1) -
01:25:351 (2,3) - 这两换个顺序我觉得节奏更舒服听起来
02:22:436 (3,4) - 其实我一直觉得这种梗好难读好难玩，来回箭头底下遮挡ORZ
03:29:979 (1,2) - 弄点平行的感觉出来？看着有点别扭

Hiten

27 posts

Joined July 2012

Hiten 2015-07-11T11:42:52+00:00

没怎么mod过有点担心用词问题,理解就好（
每个GD的下面部分为建议...

[Abhor's Normal]

00:29:294 (1,2) - anti-flow
01:29:979 (3,2) - stack
02:03:922 (1) - ds引起的一系列问题
03:20:551 (1) - 很突兀的红线节奏啊何况还是个circle

00:08:036 (2,2) - stack?
01:10:094 (2) - 02:05:636 (2) - 03:01:179 (2) - 这三个note相对于全图有点太靠外了,调整一下?

[Soda's Hard]

00:12:836 (1) - 没包好

没什么问题,但是主歌部分节奏可以丰富一些,基本都是在打拍子的话略无聊

[Insane]

02:20:379 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 有点不明所以的jump,以及8,1的空拍
03:15:236 (4,5,1) - bad pattern
03:39:065 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 左边的note和右边的note的排列做整齐一点

01:45:065 (5,6,7) - 我觉得啊,这里直接顺着flow摆就好
关于某些blanket和stack的问题,我作图的jump肯定是没有这样的风格的,所以不知道该书什么...x/

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,122 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2015-07-11T13:10:48+00:00

锦鲤抄prprprprpr

[General]

要不要把下面这些加到tags里: 慕清明灰原穷弹棉花的GG 还有这些的拼音我记得是作词作曲音乐啥的

[Insane]

00:02:551 (4) - NC, 另外这个前后间距然后感觉半吊子的无法表现节拍. 再另外这个whistle感觉声音好重啊用这么多次大丈夫? 你现在的clap当whistle挺好
00:04:608 (1) - 同上, 前面的67是2分拍这里是1分拍却是同样的间距打起来也不太舒服
00:04:951 (2,3,4) - 同上
00:07:008 (2) - 这样放是不是很厚? *http://puu.sh/iVbQs/581c2bacc2.jpg
00:08:036 (4,5,6) - 同上
00:11:122 (2,3,4,5,6) - 好几把这么舒缓的段落这样大丈夫? *http://puu.sh/iVbX2/73d3195291.jpg 注意这里7也改了位置
00:13:865 (4) - 这里的drum finish好违和改成你现在的clap吧
00:14:894 (6,1,2,3) - 滑条之后还要打3下好容易断啊而且这个滑条底下的音太平静了一般人都会认为滑条尾巴是压在下一个音上的吧? *http://puu.sh/iVc1D/34d5f0c04c.jpg
00:16:265 (3) - 考虑NC
00:20:036 (7) - 类似于这样的空了1拍的单点我觉得都可以用1/2滑条带过第一是充实节奏第二是这个用太多让人感觉停顿太多了接着打后面的时候就会卡. 你应该懂, 一般姥爷打高难度要马不停蹄的移动这个我打完立马移到下一个才能按到, 这样都会觉得爽, 可是我打这个的时候要在这个note的位置逗留1/2拍再过去, 这样就不好玩了. (但是像00:27:236 (1) - 不改更好) 后面一样的不再说了
00:20:894 (4,1) - 感觉还是blanket一下好看
00:21:751 (3,4) - 考虑一下这种样子的 *http://puu.sh/iVcc8/9e084eae99.jpg
00:30:494 (7,8) - overlap好难看呀
00:33:065 (5) - 既然有变速还是NC一下吧
00:34:436 (3,4,5) - 这种间距还是不太顺手
00:37:008 (5,1,2) - 考虑这种 *http://puu.sh/iVcmy/6e4ea49d05.jpg
00:41:636 (1,2) - 吓得我以为是1/2
00:45:751 (5) - 不要折返吧就1分的滑条
00:51:579 (6) - 如果是想anti-jump, 考虑308|104
00:53:636 (1) - 锚点放在中间会不会舒服点呀 *http://puu.sh/iVcsH/6fe0d41212.jpg
01:02:894 (2) - 492|184? 重叠有点无聊
01:08:379 (1,2) - blanket
01:10:694 (2,3) - 好几把的节奏我在2的地方啥也没听到啊我翻了一下你后面的好像也都没有在这里放4分的只有02:41:894 (4,5) - 但是和此处不是同一个位置
01:12:151 (3) - 好棒的滑条但是这个重音反而在滑条尾大丈夫?
01:12:665 (1,2) - 重音在滑条尾打起来不是很自然前面那个不改没关系这个建议重音(白线)给个击打
01:17:294 (3,4) - blanket 看的我都要哭了
01:27:236 (2) - 碰到血条了记得是unrankable
01:30:922 (6,1) - 156|156?
01:36:836 (4,5) - ctrl+g吧
01:45:408 (7) - NC
02:03:922 (1,2,3) - 和前面提到的重音问题一样
02:17:294 (3,4,5) - clap好违和感觉沿用24clap即可
02:23:808 (5,6) - blanket
02:26:551 (1,2) - 间距? 感觉即使把这俩重叠也比现在的样子好些 (后面类似的也注意一下比如03:23:122 (3,4,5) - 03:39:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
02:30:665 (3) - 没必要的变速如果坚持要变速的话也NC一下
02:43:008 (1,2) - blanket (啊后面的不想说了)
02:51:236 (1) - 既然是重音给个跳
02:59:465 (1) - 节奏不支持这样的几把滑条吧
03:02:894 (2) - 也是不要stack
03:45:236 (2) - 重音给个击打换成2个circles
03:50:894 (2) - finish音好违和真的
03:52:951 (1) - 提早1/4结束然后尾巴加一个现在的clap
03:57:065 (5) - finish把我吓飞了另外这里两个圈要么换成1个滑条要么把前面的滑条换成2个圈吧

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Kamio Misuzu

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Kamio Misuzu 2015-07-11T15:30:43+00:00

no kds
I难度
kiai部分的三连比较莫名奇妙，有些很没必要的加了反而画蛇添足，比如01:41:208 (7) - 。类似的还有。
00:14:894 (6) - 尾巴没音啊，而且这么放这里变成四连了。。好蛋疼。
00:15:922 (3,4) - slider柑橘好点

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Wing My Way

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Wing My Way 2015-07-11T17:38:34+00:00

[ Abhor ] wrote:
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311,245,153408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,153,153751,2,0,P|363:104|393:84,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,169,154436,2,0,P|417:212|387:237,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,71,156836,6,0,P|127:125|242:135,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,132,157865,1,8,0:0:0:0:
310,228,158208,2,0,L|319:317,1,80
414,313,158894,2,0,B|421:201|421:201|458:152,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,67,159922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
343,74,160265,2,0,P|288:90|248:86,1,80
259,185,160951,6,0,B|352:195|412:228|412:228|389:258|341:271,1,240,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,293,162322,2,0,P|179:289|163:293,1,80
78,307,163008,2,0,P|79:229|177:86,2,240,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,285,165408,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,228,165751,2,0,P|301:162|388:167,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,250,166779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
433,278,167122,2,0,B|412:333|367:355|317:351|285:325|285:325|222:336,1,240,4|10,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
156,269,168494,2,0,P|102:266|54:242,1,80
130,176,169179,6,0,P|199:180|309:156,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,96,170208,2,0,L|392:169,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,51,171236,6,0,P|190:36|145:43,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
445,134,172951,1,2,0:0:0:0:
415,225,173294,2,0,P|350:260|297:260,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,131,174665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,85,175008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,116,175351,6,0,P|145:150|53:135,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,55,176379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,244,177065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
155,238,177408,2,0,P|230:237|297:262,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,178779,2,0,P|120:133|87:109,1,80
164,48,179465,6,0,B|214:40|254:76|270:121|270:121|295:177|369:181,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
495,56,181179,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,141,181522,6,0,P|439:215|459:302,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,318,182551,2,0,P|341:242|350:149,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,70,183579,2,0,P|296:77|216:62,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,48,184608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,238,185294,1,2,0:0:0:0:
190,221,185636,6,0,B|289:195|368:227|368:227|306:269,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,308,187694,2,0,B|66:235|61:144|61:144|92:177|140:173,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,86,189751,6,0,P|303:127|226:121,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,70,190779,2,0,P|152:110|161:168,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,126,191808,2,0,P|280:193|285:254,2,120,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,63,193865,5,2,3:0:0:0:
105,158,194208,2,0,P|114:213|143:248,1,80
200,170,194894,2,0,P|263:190|360:183,1,160,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
421,113,195922,2,0,P|454:184|423:255,1,160
347,313,196951,1,2,1:0:0:0:
254,287,197294,2,0,P|196:291|171:289,1,80
180,193,197979,6,0,B|132:162|121:89|121:89|192:63|253:97,1,240,4|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
329,105,199351,2,0,B|368:127|451:115|451:115|454:150,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,294,200551,1,2,1:0:0:0:
324,274,201065,2,2,P|248:251|170:275,1,160,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,214,202094,6,0,B|145:163|241:157|241:157|237:119|196:90,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,45,203465,2,0,P|316:92|327:139,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,208,204151,2,0,B|413:200|422:102|422:102|451:135|452:179,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,272,205522,2,0,P|392:297|352:303,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,277,206208,6,0,P|194:260|106:289,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,347,207236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
78,158,207922,1,2,0:0:0:0:
170,131,208265,2,0,B|297:134|388:89|388:89|380:152|414:188,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,224,210322,6,0,B|220:267|220:267|173:332|173:332|125:344,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,267,211351,2,0,P|41:219|57:118,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,67,212379,2,0,P|187:80|303:64,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,44,213408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
413,233,214094,1,2,0:0:0:0:
317,230,214436,6,0,B|258:229|258:229|136:264,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,188,215465,2,0,B|208:153|208:153|235:114,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,73,216494,2,0,P|208:26|298:51,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,109,217522,2,0,P|367:184|308:256,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,166,218551,6,0,P|216:189|107:170,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,84,219579,1,8,0:0:0:0:
191,98,219922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,60,220265,1,2,0:0:0:0:
371,34,220608,2,0,P|410:104|410:193,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,268,221636,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,260,222322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,193,222665,6,0,B|144:112|58:56|58:56|115:45|149:43,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,193,224722,2,0,B|368:112|454:56|454:56|397:45|363:43,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,226436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
166,226,226779,6,0,P|255:289|349:210,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,127,228151,2,0,P|384:99|414:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,228836,12,0,230894,0:0:0:0:
81,83,232951,6,0,B|67:140|134:159|234:77|226:5|130:43|188:135,1,240
192,210,234322,2,0,B|270:249|333:208|333:208|386:224|434:190,1,240
394,105,235694,2,0,P|346:75|310:71,1,80
131,80,236722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,237065,12,0,243236,0:0:0:0:

大伯记得下次po加code啊，不然不方便的orz

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Wing My Way 2015-07-11T20:00:30+00:00

ichibannobaka

没怎么mod过有点担心用词问题,理解就好（ orz没事的
每个GD的下面部分为建议...
[Insane]

02:20:379 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 有点不明所以的jump,以及8,1的空拍这一部分基本全部remap了
03:15:236 (4,5,1) - bad pattern fixed
03:39:065 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 左边的note和右边的note的排列做整齐一点 ok

01:45:065 (5,6,7) - 我觉得啊,这里直接顺着flow摆就好好
关于某些blanket和stack的问题,我作图的jump肯定是没有这样的风格的,所以不知道该书什么...x/

Crystal

锦鲤抄prprprprpr 小星星prprprprpr

[General]

要不要把下面这些加到tags里: 慕清明灰原穷弹棉花的GG 还有这些的拼音我记得是作词作曲音乐啥的好

[Insane]

00:02:551 (4) - NC, 另外这个前后间距然后感觉半吊子的无法表现节拍. 再另外这个whistle感觉声音好重啊用这么多次大丈夫? 你现在的clap当whistle挺好我试了试加finish 感觉好像好点
00:04:608 (1) - 同上, 前面的67是2分拍这里是1分拍却是同样的间距打起来也不太舒服这一部分距离基本都remap了
00:04:951 (2,3,4) - 同上 √
00:07:008 (2) - 这样放是不是很厚?* 厚http://puu.sh/iVbQs/581c2bacc2.jpg
00:08:036 (4,5,6) - 同上这是啥……
00:11:122 (2,3,4,5,6) - 好几把这么舒缓的段落这样大丈夫? * 还行吧orzhttp://puu.sh/iVbX2/73d3195291.jpg 注意这里7也改了位置这是啥……
00:13:865 (4) - 这里的drum finish好违和改成你现在的clap吧没用默认皮肤没听出来现在改了
00:14:894 (6,1,2,3) - 滑条之后还要打3下好容易断啊而且这个滑条底下的音太平静了一般人都会认为滑条尾巴是压在下一个音上的吧? * 改成二连了http://puu.sh/iVc1D/34d5f0c04c.jpg
00:16:265 (3) - 考虑NC 好
00:20:036 (7) - 类似于这样的空了1拍的单点我觉得都可以用1/2滑条带过第一是充实节奏第二是这个用太多让人感觉停顿太多了接着打后面的时候就会卡. 你应该懂, 一般姥爷打高难度要马不停蹄的移动这个我打完立马移到下一个才能按到, 这样都会觉得爽, 可是我打这个的时候要在这个note的位置逗留1/2拍再过去, 这样就不好玩了. (但是像00:27:236 (1) - 不改更好) 后面一样的不再说了 所以你是星星老爷/me 跪拜我还是觉得停顿比较好，keep
00:20:894 (4,1) - 感觉还是blanket一下好看好，不过好像间距变大了感觉不太舒服
00:21:751 (3,4) - 考虑一下这种样子的 * 好好好，不过你这个跳太远了http://puu.sh/iVcc8/9e084eae99.jpg
00:30:494 (7,8) - overlap好难看呀 orz怎么都说难看
00:33:065 (5) - 既然有变速还是NC一下吧 ok
00:34:436 (3,4,5) - 这种间距还是不太顺手 fixed
00:37:008 (5,1,2) - 考虑这种 * 厚http://puu.sh/iVcmy/6e4ea49d05.jpg
00:41:636 (1,2) - 吓得我以为是1/2
00:45:751 (5) - 不要折返吧就1分的滑条还是要的
00:51:579 (6) - 如果是想anti-jump, 考虑308|104 好
00:53:636 (1) - 锚点放在中间会不会舒服点呀 * 改位置了√http://puu.sh/iVcsH/6fe0d41212.jpg
01:02:894 (2) - 492|184? 重叠有点无聊也行，然后后边搞了blanket
01:08:379 (1,2) - blanket
01:10:694 (2,3) - 好几把的节奏我在2的地方啥也没听到啊我翻了一下你后面的好像也都没有在这里放4分的只有02:41:894 (4,5) - 但是和此处不是同一个位置改了
01:12:151 (3) - 好棒的滑条但是这个重音反而在滑条尾大丈夫? 改过了0.0好像现在不是这样全改成1/2滑条了重音也是滑条首了
01:12:665 (1,2) - 重音在滑条尾打起来不是很自然前面那个不改没关系这个建议重音(白线)给个击打 ^
01:17:294 (3,4) - blanket 看的我都要哭了 QAQ
01:27:236 (2) - 碰到血条了记得是unrankable fixed
01:30:922 (6,1) - 156|156? 什么鬼
01:36:836 (4,5) - ctrl+g吧
01:45:408 (7) - NC 不需要吧
02:03:922 (1,2,3) - 和前面提到的重音问题一样
02:17:294 (3,4,5) - clap好违和感觉沿用24clap即可
02:23:808 (5,6) - blanket
02:26:551 (1,2) - 间距? 感觉即使把这俩重叠也比现在的样子好些 (后面类似的也注意一下比如03:23:122 (3,4,5) - 03:39:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
02:30:665 (3) - 没必要的变速如果坚持要变速的话也NC一下好
02:43:008 (1,2) - blanket (啊后面的不想说了)
02:51:236 (1) - 既然是重音给个跳没问题
02:59:465 (1) - 节奏不支持这样的几把滑条吧我认为没问题
03:02:894 (2) - 也是不要stack ok
03:45:236 (2) - 重音给个击打换成2个circles
03:50:894 (2) - finish音好违和真的 fixed
03:52:951 (1) - 提早1/4结束然后尾巴加一个现在的clap 不太好，不过开头都加了
03:57:065 (5) - finish把我吓飞了另外这里两个圈要么换成1个滑条要么把前面的滑条换成2个圈吧 233我再考虑一下

美丽终于写完了
星星这摸我改了快三个小时了QAQ终于能睡觉了
加油! 谢谢！

Kamio Misuzu

I难度
kiai部分的三连比较莫名奇妙，有些很没必要的加了反而画蛇添足，比如01:41:208 (7) - 。类似的还有。
00:14:894 (6) - 尾巴没音啊，而且这么放这里变成四连了。。好蛋疼。fixed
00:15:922 (3,4) - slider柑橘好点

美丽

谢谢mod！！

Asahina Momoko

1,008 posts

Joined November 2013

Asahina Momoko 2015-07-11T20:48:21+00:00

hi!!
pretty beautiful song, i rly like it o.o

Abhor's Normal

difficulty setting is pretty low. should be changed to about AR4, OD4-5, HP4
00:10:094 (2) - stack with 00:08:036 (2) -
00:14:551 (4,1) - a bit overlapped
00:18:665 (1) - i felt something strange for this, how about put a circle at 00:18:665 - and make like this?
SPOILER
00:51:922 (1) - remove NC
01:00:151 (1) - weird rhythm. actually there are sound at 01:01:008 - , but you should catch the strong vocal sound at 01:01:179 - . so try this one
SPOILER
01:28:608 (2) - weird rhythm. try to put a circle at 01:28:608 - and start slider at 01:28:951 -
01:32:722 (1) - put a circle here and make like this fit music
SPOILER
01:39:236 (1) - how about add NC?
03:07:694 (1) - ^
03:21:065 (2) - remove whistle

Soda's Hard

01:43:351 (1,2,1) - make the flow like raising makes sense imo
SPOILER

nice diff!

Insane

00:05:465 (3) - how about put it near 00:05:636 (4) - ?
00:09:751 (4) - move the red grid to 240/232
00:11:122 (2,3,4,5,6) - there's no intense sound, so making distance getting bigger is strange i guess.
00:17:979 (1) - no sound at reverse. so if you wanna use reverse slider, should put like this
SPOILER
00:22:094 (5,6) - ugly overlapping, replace 00:22:608 (6) - is better.
00:45:751 (5) - add NC and remove NC 00:46:779 (1) -
00:46:265 (6) - how about ctrl+g?
00:47:808 (4) - add NC
03:14:894 (3,4,5) - same spacing has different rhythm. avoid to occur misreading, i recommend to stack it with 03:15:408 (5) -

i like the part of after breaktime, but you need to make more clean before break.

good luck~!

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Zweib 2015-07-12T02:23:51+00:00

[Normal]
02:08:036 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - add s.e for hitsound
03:24:151 (3) - clap on tail?
03:54:322 (2) - move to 03:54:665 (2) follow vocal?
03:57:065 (1) - end at 04:01:179 ?

[Hard]
没什么问题:D
03:57:065 (1) - end at 04:01:179 ?

[Insane]
01:07:265 (2,1) - 叠到滑条了，放到(133,144) 后面这个01:08:036 (3) - 没必要stack啦早都看不见了
其实也没什么好摸的/.\有时间把blanket和nazi全修一修

-shikaco-

50 posts

Joined April 2014

-shikaco- 2015-07-12T10:31:21+00:00

General
这个spread是不是有点危险了啊？Hard和Insane差了1.5几了

Abhor's Normal
00:31:694 (1) - 第2 、4个锚点去掉
01:32:722 (1) - 分成两个滑条感觉更合音
02:56:379 (2) - 顺势做个blanket吧

Soda's Hard
00:53:294 - 这个地方绿线没用啊，和前一条一样
Nice diff！再做难一点就更棒了

Insane
00:05:636 (4) - 从中间折得太直了，弯一点吧
00:13:865 (4) - 这个Finish去掉
00:28:908 - 这条绿线和上一条重复了还有01:00:151 -
00:46:779 (1,2) - vocal升调，换成两个单点跳吧
00:55:865 (2,3) - blanket靠近一点吧
01:39:236 (1) - 换成whistle+clap舒服点
02:17:979 (5) - 下一段歌词在滑条中间开始，把滑条拆成头尾两个单点NC吧
02:32:722 (1) - x:260 y:80
建议把跳改小降星数

水摸也就能摸这些了柑橘解决spread就离起飞不远了

Last edited by -shikaco- 2015-07-13T05:44:49+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Moe

99 posts

Joined December 2013

Moe 2015-07-12T16:02:13+00:00

xian zhan yi keng
nvzhuang ne
只是一些建议

Insane

00:02:551 (1) 00:04:608 (1) - - 像这种直接叠到滑条头上感觉更清爽点
00:06:665 (1,3) - 把1，3 blanket?好读而且美观
00:07:694 (4,5,6,7) - ds混乱..
00:19:522 (4,5,6,7) - 4,6,7等边，5放3滑条尾
00:18:836 (2) - 这里开始感觉摆得有点随意和乱。。建议开ar0再摆一摆像这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3435634
00:21:065 (1,2) - 如上图 1,2分开一点感觉更有趣

00:25:865 (3,4) - 像这种要么让3和 4的滑条头在一条弧上，要么完全叠进4里
00:28:265 (5,1) - 叠吧……
00:40:779 (4) - 删掉这一拍？
00:55:008 (6) - 和3挤在一块，并且不在flow上。。00:54:494 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 整个做个flow吧
00:45:751 (1,2) - 无意义overmap...
00:55:865 (2) - blan..
01:01:865 (5,1) - 同前。。分的开一点反而更有趣。。这样半叠不叠感觉不好看oAo
01:09:236 (2) - bl..
01:28:951 (1) - 类似这种长滑条可以考虑插个绿线减下SV 总觉得长滑条不好看后面还有很多不列举了（blanket)
01:30:922 (6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 依然单点太乱。。http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3435686
01:45:322 (6,7) - 叠或者to 347 125
后面大同小异单点规整02:33:236 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 03:12:836 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 像这种明显太随意啦oAo blanket
音效很棒！起飞起飞

Last edited by Moe 2015-07-24T17:52:44+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2015-07-13T02:24:11+00:00

Reimoe wrote:
xian zhan yi keng
nvzhuang ne

nvzhuang ne

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2015-07-13T09:52:27+00:00

Asahina Momoko wrote:
Abhor's Normal
difficulty setting is pretty low. should be changed to about AR4, OD4-5, HP4√
00:10:094 (2) - stack with 00:08:036 (2) - √
00:14:551 (4,1) - a bit overlapped √
00:18:665 (1) - i felt something strange for this, how about put a circle at 00:18:665 - and make like this?√
SPOILER
00:51:922 (1) - remove NC×
01:00:151 (1) - weird rhythm. actually there are sound at 01:01:008 - , but you should catch the strong vocal sound at 01:01:179 - . so try this one
SPOILER
√
01:28:608 (2) - weird rhythm. try to put a circle at 01:28:608 - and start slider at 01:28:951 -√
01:32:722 (1) - put a circle here and make like this fit music√
SPOILER
01:39:236 (1) - how about add NC?×
03:07:694 (1) - ^×
03:21:065 (2) - remove whistle×

ichibannobaka wrote:
[Abhor's Normal]

00:29:294 (1,2) - anti-flow不啦
01:29:979 (3,2) - stack好
02:03:922 (1) - ds引起的一系列问题好
03:20:551 (1) - 很突兀的红线节奏啊何况还是个circle我觉得还好啊ORZ
00:08:036 (2,2) - stack?不啦
01:10:094 (2) - 02:05:636 (2) - 03:01:179 (2) - 这三个note相对于全图有点太靠外了,调整一下?好/

Zweib wrote:
[Normal]
02:08:036 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - add s.e for hitsound好
03:24:151 (3) - clap on tail?好
03:54:322 (2) - move to 03:54:665 (2) follow vocal?好
03:57:065 (1) - end at 04:01:179 ?好

Lobelia

858 posts

Joined February 2014

Lobelia 2015-07-13T09:57:15+00:00

Abhor's Normal

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Sakura no Hana ga Maiochiru Toki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 67179
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Sakura no Hana ga Maiochiru Toki
TitleUnicode:桜の花が舞い落ちるとき
Artist:Sharlo & Sabbo
ArtistUnicode:Sharlo & Sabbo
Creator:Wing My Way
Version:Abhor's Normal
Source:
Tags:Jin Li Chao 锦鲤抄
BeatmapID:720158
BeatmapSetID:227128

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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Video,15236,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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78,307,163008,2,0,P|79:229|177:86,2,240,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,285,165408,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,228,165751,2,0,P|301:162|388:167,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,250,166779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
433,278,167122,2,0,B|412:333|367:355|317:351|285:325|285:325|222:336,1,240,4|10,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
156,269,168494,2,0,P|102:266|54:242,1,80
130,176,169179,6,0,P|199:180|309:156,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,96,170208,2,0,L|392:169,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,51,171236,6,0,P|190:36|145:43,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
445,134,172951,1,2,0:0:0:0:
415,225,173294,2,0,P|350:260|297:260,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,131,174665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,85,175008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,116,175351,6,0,P|145:150|53:135,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,55,176379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,244,177065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
155,238,177408,2,0,P|230:237|297:262,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,178779,2,0,P|120:133|87:109,1,80
164,48,179465,6,0,B|214:40|254:76|270:121|270:121|295:177|369:181,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
495,56,181179,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,141,181522,6,0,P|439:215|459:302,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,318,182551,2,0,P|341:242|350:149,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,70,183579,2,0,P|296:77|216:62,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,48,184608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,238,185294,1,2,0:0:0:0:
190,221,185636,6,0,B|289:195|368:227|368:227|306:269,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,308,187694,2,0,B|66:235|61:144|61:144|92:177|140:173,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,86,189751,6,0,P|303:127|226:121,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,70,190779,2,0,P|152:110|161:168,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,126,191808,2,0,P|280:193|285:254,2,120,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,63,193865,5,2,3:0:0:0:
105,158,194208,2,0,P|114:213|143:248,1,80
200,170,194894,2,0,P|263:190|360:183,1,160,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
421,113,195922,2,0,P|454:184|423:255,1,160
347,313,196951,1,2,1:0:0:0:
254,287,197294,2,0,P|196:291|171:289,1,80
180,193,197979,6,0,B|132:162|121:89|121:89|192:63|253:97,1,240,4|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
329,105,199351,2,0,B|368:127|451:115|451:115|454:150,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,294,200551,1,2,1:0:0:0:
324,274,201065,2,2,P|248:251|170:275,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,214,202094,6,0,B|145:163|241:157|241:157|237:119|196:90,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,45,203465,2,0,P|316:92|327:139,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,208,204151,2,0,B|413:200|422:102|422:102|451:135|452:179,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,272,205522,2,0,P|392:297|352:303,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,277,206208,6,0,P|194:260|106:289,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,347,207236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
78,158,207922,1,2,0:0:0:0:
170,131,208265,2,0,B|297:134|388:89|388:89|380:152|414:188,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,224,210322,6,0,B|220:267|220:267|173:332|173:332|125:344,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,267,211351,2,0,P|41:219|57:118,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,67,212379,2,0,P|187:80|303:64,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,44,213408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
413,233,214094,1,2,0:0:0:0:
317,230,214436,6,0,B|258:229|258:229|136:264,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,188,215465,2,0,B|208:153|208:153|235:114,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,73,216494,2,0,P|208:26|298:51,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,109,217522,2,0,P|367:184|308:256,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,166,218551,6,0,P|216:189|107:170,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,84,219579,1,8,0:0:0:0:
191,98,219922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,60,220265,1,2,0:0:0:0:
371,34,220608,2,0,P|410:104|410:193,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,268,221636,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,260,222322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,193,222665,6,0,B|144:112|58:56|58:56|115:45|149:43,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,193,224722,2,0,B|368:112|454:56|454:56|397:45|363:43,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,226436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
166,226,226779,6,0,P|255:289|349:210,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,127,228151,2,0,P|384:99|414:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,228836,12,0,230894,0:0:0:0:
81,83,232951,6,0,B|67:140|134:159|234:77|226:5|130:43|188:135,1,240
169,211,234322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,259,234665,2,0,B|330:298|393:257|393:257|446:273|494:239,1,240
427,167,236036,2,0,P|379:137|343:133,1,80
261,117,236722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,237065,12,0,241179,0:0:0:0:

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Wing My Way 2015-07-18T17:16:02+00:00

Mokori

pretty beautiful song, i rly like it o.o thank you >,<

Insane

00:05:465 (3) - how about put it near 00:05:636 (4) - ? sure
00:09:751 (4) - move the red grid to 240/232 good idea!
00:11:122 (2,3,4,5,6) - there's no intense sound, so making distance getting bigger is strange i guess. fixed
00:17:979 (1) - no sound at reverse. so if you wanna use reverse slider, should put like this fixed
SPOILER
00:22:094 (5,6) - ugly overlapping, replace 00:22:608 (6) - is better. fixed
00:45:751 (5) - add NC and remove NC 00:46:779 (1) - fixed
00:46:265 (6) - how about ctrl+g? no
00:47:808 (4) - add NC fixed
03:14:894 (3,4,5) - same spacing has different rhythm. avoid to occur misreading, i recommend to stack it with 03:15:408 (5) - fixed
i like the part of after breaktime, but you need to make more clean before break. 0.0 thank you

thanks mod！>,<

Zweib

[Insane]
01:07:265 (2,1) - 叠到滑条了，放到(133,144) 后面这个01:08:036 (3) - 没必要stack啦早都看不见了还好吧，坐标改了
其实也没什么好摸的/.\有时间把blanket和nazi全修一修 /.\谢谢

-shikaco-

Insane
00:05:636 (4) - 从中间折得太直了，弯一点吧这个还直啊Orz
00:13:865 (4) - 这个Finish去掉 no
00:28:908 - 这条绿线和上一条重复了还有01:00:151 - fixed
00:46:779 (1,2) - vocal升调，换成两个单点跳吧不要
00:55:865 (2,3) - blanket靠近一点吧 ok
01:39:236 (1) - 换成whistle+clap舒服点
02:17:979 (5) - 下一段歌词在滑条中间开始，把滑条拆成头尾两个单点NC吧还是跟白线走
02:32:722 (1) - x:260 y:80 太远了
建议把跳改小降星数

水摸也就能摸这些了柑橘解决spread就离起飞不远了谢谢mod！

thanks!

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2015-07-22T00:42:22+00:00

m4m

General

tag加夏羅

Abhor's Normal

這是Easy吧，跟hard的gap這麼大肯定過不了關，你有連個選擇：名字改成Easy，加一個normal或者是直接加一個Advanced
02:22:436 (3) - nc應該在這裡下
02:30:665 (3,3,4) - 這個鈴聲好吵啊

Soda's Hard

00:00:494 (1,1,1,1) - 我覺得每個長白線都加太吵了，4個一次剛好，你這樣反而不能突出音效
01:05:979 (1,2,3) - antijump加上遮擋好難讀啊放開一點
01:45:236 (6,1) - 漏1/4
02:49:179 (1,2,3) - 怎麼向內凹了
03:03:579 (1) - 拉好看點啊

Insane

00:24:151 (4) - 幹嘛anti jump
01:05:636 (5,6) - 什麼幾把
01:27:236 (2,4) - 這種遮擋太醜了
02:07:865 (7,1) - 這種遮擋還是最好改掉，qd可能性大

good luck

sjoy

1,024 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2015-07-22T05:36:27+00:00

TAG 加上GDER 的ID
[Abhor's Normal]
02:19:351 (4) - 感觉这个折返节奏有点怪，换成2个2/1看看
02:40:951 (1) - 尾巴CLAP漏了
03:20:551 (3) - 一个单点在红线上显得有点突兀
[Soda's Hard]
00:14:894 (1) - 可以多个CLAP
00:38:551 (3) - 头clap
01:43:351 (1,2,3) - 我觉得可以不用粘在一起
02:16:951 (2) - 中间有一拍，漏了有点难受
03:11:808 (1,2,3) - 同 01:43:351 (1,2,3)
03:35:979 加个 NOTE?
03:49:865 (3,5) - 别粘一起呀
[Insane]
首先给我感觉滑条真的好快。。
00:28:265 (5) - 这个折法觉得很莫名
00:31:865 (4,1,2) - 你4和1都NC 我觉得41的间隔应该还比12大才合理
00:45:751 (1) - 感觉折返没意义，拆成滑条+单点吧
00:50:722 (2) - 说实在的，这个位置有点反人类
01:05:636 (5,6) - 这种粘的感觉不太好
01:11:465 (1,2,3) - 看到这梗就想笑，至少上镜不下10次了
01:30:922 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种遮挡感，给我感觉像是便秘
01:36:836 (4,5) - 通过前面的01:36:151 (1,2) - ，感觉这里间距感觉有点挤
02:04:779 (3) - 重音在白线阿，建议延长半拍，前面加个单点
02:23:465 (4) - 试试1/2滑条
02:41:894 (4,5) - 这里2连很奇怪的，前面都没有建议补成3连
03:02:894 (2) - 间距阿我觉得这里前后一致比较好
03:19:522 漏音
03:38:379 (4) - 间距和1 太近了感觉很不爽

看你这图就想笑，总体感觉空拍有点多，我的个人看法是KIAI不建议空拍，可以用滑条补上，给人感觉比较饱满，

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

nika mika 2015-07-23T22:09:54+00:00

射颗星纪念半年前夭寿再也没能复活的nika‘ Easy
要mod直接跟我说保证送个水摸

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Wing My Way 2015-07-24T10:47:03+00:00

nika mika wrote:
射颗星纪念半年前夭寿再也没能复活的nika‘ Easy
要mod直接跟我说保证送个水摸

哭哭哦感谢

DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2015-07-24T11:31:03+00:00

抱歉我來晚了，我的筆電一直崩潰...

[General]

Tags加上GDer的ID：
```
[_Abhor_] sodarose
```
Insane就Spread看有些太難，點進去看更像Ex出道

[Normal]

00:20:036 (6,7) - 節奏看Ctrl+G比較好
00:30:322 - 這裡的音確定要省略掉嗎?? 做出來比較優；這給你參考：00:29:294 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/jaVYI/3c3e74565a.jpg
00:35:465 (3,4) - 這裡也保持2/1 slider比較好，主要是00:36:836 (4) - Slider感覺沒有下好。這裡也一樣00:43:694 (3,4) - 01:00:151 (3,4) -
01:03:236 (2,3,4) - 試試看1/1折返+Circle，感覺不錯
01:28:951 - 這裡是Finish吧
01:42:322 (2) - 這個強烈建議做成1/1折返，前面原樣沒關係
02:03:922 (1,3) - NC對調
02:08:036 (1,3) - ^
02:12:151 (1,3) - ^
02:16:265 (1,3) - ^
02:21:408 (1,3) - ^
02:24:494 (1,3) - ^
02:28:608 (1,3) - ^
02:33:065 (1) - NC去掉
02:35:808 - 前一段kiai有做出來，這裡要不要跟上??
02:42:322 (2) - Ctrl+J
02:51:236 (1,3) - NC對調
02:55:351 (1,4) - ^
02:59:465 (1) - NC去掉
03:13:865 (1,2) - 直接做折返如何??
03:29:979 - 加Circle
03:48:151 (2) - 換成2個Circle??
03:52:951 (1) - 這東西過不了關的，正常擺就好

[Hard]

00:00:494 (1,2) - 平行??
00:07:694 (3,1) - 我是覺得不要疊在一起比較好...
00:33:065 - 這條線減速沒意義，DS也亂了
01:20:036 - 01:35:122 - 01:37:179 - 01:39:236 - 01:41:294 - 01:43:351 - 01:45:408 - 03:11:808 - 第一個音效放錯，其他都是該放Finish沒放放別的
01:24:494 (5) - 我覺得這樣放比較順：http://puu.sh/jaXuv/d2e84f6134.jpg。就是01:24:151 (4) - 複製這個Ctrl+J再Ctrl+G的結果
01:34:608 (3) - 刪掉這個個比較順
03:24:836 (2,4) - 這兩個尾巴的音效檢查一下
04:01:179 - 轉盤結尾移到這裡，就Hard長度不一樣

[Insane]

00:07:694 (4,5,6,7) - 這幾個做成半個六角形如何??
00:22:608 (6) - 這個沒放好吧，很不好讀
00:31:351 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 我的個人想法，這幾個跳跳得很沒意義。00:31:522 (2,2) - 試試看把這兩個刪掉再去放一次跳，看看你喜不喜歡
00:32:036 (1) - 去掉NC
00:45:751 (5,1) - NC對調
00:47:808 (4) - NC
00:49:522 (1,3) - NC對調
00:53:636 (1,2) - ^。00:53:636 - 同時沒意義的綠線
00:55:694 (1,3) - ^
01:05:979 (6) - 這個沒有放好吧，328|80
01:06:322 (1,2) - Insane這樣放不是很好，間格太遠了，感覺這很危險
01:09:236 (2) - 沒放好??
01:26:551 - 音效
01:31:008 - 01:35:122 - 01:39:236 - 音效錯了
01:32:036 (1,1) - 去掉NC
01:33:065 (2) - NC
01:43:351 - 去掉Clap
02:13:865 (1,3) - NC對調
02:17:636 (4) - Ctrl+G??
02:21:751 (1,3) - NC對調
02:28:608 (6,1) - ^
02:47:122 (6,1) - ^
02:59:465 (1) - 這完全複製前面的Slider，在這裡很沒意義，不好看也不順
03:05:294 (1,3) - NC對調
03:07:008 (1,3) - ^
03:09:751 - Finish才對
03:11:808 - ^，其他都去掉
03:29:979 (1,2) - NC對調
03:41:979 (1) - NC去掉
03:50:551 (1,2) - NC對調

這個Insane太像Extra了，跳點很亂也不好抓，有的太過遙遠...
歌倒是很好聽

因為我筆電掛了，摸得不好請見諒

DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2015-07-25T09:24:26+00:00

因為W大好像沒有看Forum PM的習慣，所以我再說一次：

如果Hard和Insane的Spread被下個摸說太大的話，我很樂意幫你做一個不超過4星的難度
你答應的話，我會給你一個不亞於22個摸的Insane

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Wing My Way 2015-07-26T16:39:28+00:00

Mackenzie

Insane

00:24:151 (4) - 幹嘛anti jump
01:05:636 (5,6) - 什麼幾把
01:27:236 (2,4) - 這種遮擋太醜了
02:07:865 (7,1) - 這種遮擋還是最好改掉，qd可能性大

[/notice]
all fixed

sjoy

[Insane]
首先给我感觉滑条真的好快。。
00:28:265 (5) - 这个折法觉得很莫名
00:31:865 (4,1,2) - 你4和1都NC 我觉得41的间隔应该还比12大才合理 fixed
00:45:751 (1) - 感觉折返没意义，拆成滑条+单点吧 ok
00:50:722 (2) - 说实在的，这个位置有点反人类 fixed
01:05:636 (5,6) - 这种粘的感觉不太好 fixed
01:11:465 (1,2,3) - 看到这梗就想笑，至少上镜不下10次了 fixed
01:30:922 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种遮挡感，给我感觉像是便秘我也觉得
01:36:836 (4,5) - 通过前面的01:36:151 (1,2) - ，感觉这里间距感觉有点挤 fixed
02:04:779 (3) - 重音在白线阿，建议延长半拍，前面加个单点 fixed
02:23:465 (4) - 试试1/2滑条no
02:41:894 (4,5) - 这里2连很奇怪的，前面都没有建议补成3连好
03:02:894 (2) - 间距阿我觉得这里前后一致比较好
03:19:522 漏音 fixed
03:38:379 (4) - 间距和1 太近了感觉很不爽

看你这图就想笑，总体感觉空拍有点多，我的个人看法是KIAI不建议空拍，可以用滑条补上，给人感觉比较饱满，

DreaM117er

[Insane]

00:07:694 (4,5,6,7) - 這幾個做成半個六角形如何?? 整段都改了
00:22:608 (6) - 這個沒放好吧，很不好讀 ok
00:31:351 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 我的個人想法，這幾個跳跳得很沒意義。00:31:522 (2,2) - 試試看把這兩個刪掉再去放一次跳，看看你喜不喜歡整段都改了√
00:32:036 (1) - 去掉NC
00:45:751 (5,1) - NC對調
00:47:808 (4) - NC
00:49:522 (1,3) - NC對調
00:53:636 (1,2) - ^。00:53:636 - 同時沒意義的綠線
00:55:694 (1,3) - ^ 以上all fixed
01:05:979 (6) - 這個沒有放好吧，328|80 0.0现在就是
01:06:322 (1,2) - Insane這樣放不是很好，間格太遠了，感覺這很危險感觉还好啊
01:09:236 (2) - 沒放好??
01:26:551 - 音效 added
01:31:008 - 01:35:122 - 01:39:236 - 音效錯了按照原来的音效会很吵所以用这几个代替了
01:32:036 (1,1) - 去掉NC
01:33:065 (2) - NC
01:43:351 - 去掉Clap 不太好
02:13:865 (1,3) - NC對調
02:17:636 (4) - Ctrl+G??
02:21:751 (1,3) - NC對調
02:28:608 (6,1) - ^
02:47:122 (6,1) - ^
02:59:465 (1) - 這完全複製前面的Slider，在這裡很沒意義，不好看也不順
03:05:294 (1,3) - NC對調
03:07:008 (1,3) - ^
03:09:751 - Finish才對
03:11:808 - ^，其他都去掉
03:29:979 (1,2) - NC對調
03:41:979 (1) - NC去掉
03:50:551 (1,2) - NC對調

這個Insane太像Extra了，跳點很亂也不好抓，有的太過遙遠...
歌倒是很好聽

因為我筆電掛了，摸得不好請見諒

没有啦~很好谢谢！

谢谢mod！

DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2015-07-27T14:16:33+00:00

久等了

117's Insane

osu file format v14

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Title:Sakura no Hana ga Maiochiru Toki
TitleUnicode:桜の花が舞い落ちるとき
Artist:Sharlo & Sabbo
ArtistUnicode:Sharlo & Sabbo
Creator:Wing My Way
Version:117's Insane
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Tags:Jin Li Chao 锦鲤抄
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88,284,188722,2,0,P|88:196|76:100,2,170,2|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,368,189579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,336,189751,6,0,P|269:330|324:328,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,264,190094,2,0,P|417:261|375:256,1,85
240,172,190436,2,0,P|282:167|324:167,1,85
197,260,190779,2,0,P|164:232|143:195,1,85,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,28,191122,2,0,P|169:72|172:112,1,85
56,252,191465,2,0,P|46:210|43:168,1,85
160,28,191808,6,0,P|248:24|356:16,1,170,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,148,192322,2,0,P|410:143|316:132,1,170,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,252,192836,2,0,P|240:248|332:236,1,170,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,192,193351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,240,193522,1,8,0:3:0:0:
484,240,193865,6,0,P|484:184|496:84,2,152.999995330811,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,368,194894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,100,195236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,160,195579,2,0,L|456:156,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,80,195922,6,0,L|320:88,1,152.999995330811,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,196436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,100,196608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,100,196951,2,0,P|187:142|188:180,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,251,197294,2,0,P|97:213|104:176,1,76.4999976654053
19,64,197636,2,0,P|26:101|28:140,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,272,197979,6,0,P|40:313|137:324,1,152.999995330811,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,280,198494,2,0,P|245:272|283:270,2,76.4999976654053,8|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,344,199008,2,0,P|384:352|416:352,1,76.4999976654053
488,340,199351,2,0,P|480:264|480:176,1,152.999995330811,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,187,200036,6,0,P|416:188|360:104,1,152.999995330811,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,108,200551,2,0,L|440:272,1,152.999995330811,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,360,201065,2,0,L|360:284,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,184,201408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,296,201579,1,4,0:3:0:0:
328,212,201751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,202094,6,0,P|52:32|24:136,1,152.999995330811,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,192,202608,1,8,0:3:0:0:
36,272,202779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,272,203122,2,0,P|96:264|200:260,1,152.999995330811,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,292,203808,1,2,0:1:0:0:
192,336,204151,6,0,P|160:332|128:212,1,152.999995330811,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,36,204836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,204,205179,1,2,0:1:0:0:
92,336,205522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,112,205865,1,8,0:3:0:0:
352,160,206208,6,0,P|424:160|512:152,2,152.999995330811,4|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,207236,2,0,P|40:88|32:200,1,152.999995330811,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,352,207922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,352,208265,6,0,L|240:184,1,152.999995330811,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,56,208779,2,0,P|450:65|472:152,1,152.999995330811,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,248,209294,2,0,P|353:246|316:239,1,76.4999976654053,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,112,209636,2,0,P|225:105|263:103,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,124,209979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,124,210151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,124,210322,6,0,P|396:208|396:308,1,170,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,364,210836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,332,211008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,332,211351,2,0,P|200:325|144:324,1,85,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,248,211694,2,0,P|62:246|104:239,1,85
240,156,212036,2,0,P|198:149|155:147,1,85,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,64,212379,6,0,P|132:60|224:52,2,170,8|0|8,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
44,64,213408,2,0,P|51:111|52:168,1,85,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,296,213751,2,0,P|113:253|120:212,1,85
272,124,214094,2,0,P|315:122|368:116,1,85,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,220,214436,6,0,P|417:209|312:208,1,170,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,248,214951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,204,215122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,204,215465,2,0,P|159:251|160:316,1,85,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,356,215808,2,0,P|15:313|10:271,1,85,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,91,216151,2,0,P|75:134|74:176,1,85
236,336,216494,6,0,P|285:327|328:224,1,170,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,132,217008,1,4,0:3:0:0:
256,132,217179,2,0,L|160:124,1,85
27,202,217522,2,0,L|111:195,1,85,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,36,217865,2,0,P|186:27|128:24,1,85,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
20,32,218208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,32,218379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,32,218551,6,0,P|28:128|24:224,1,170,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,292,219065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
103,348,219236,2,0,L|96:264,1,85
171,115,219579,2,0,L|164:200,1,85,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,340,219922,2,0,P|303:344|359:345,1,85
492,281,220265,2,0,P|450:283|408:288,1,85,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,172,220608,6,0,P|252:124|348:40,1,170,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,44,221122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,104,221294,2,0,P|493:154|496:212,1,85
400,344,221636,2,0,P|394:300|392:232,1,85,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,172,221979,2,0,P|273:222|276:280,1,85
172,368,222322,2,0,P|166:324|164:256,1,85,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,180,222665,6,0,P|52:272|52:364,2,170,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,180,223694,2,0,P|108:184|140:184,1,85,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,127,224036,2,0,P|246:128|204:132,1,85,0|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,296,224379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,296,224551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,296,224722,6,0,P|224:288|332:288,1,170,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,324,225236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,268,225408,2,0,L|476:172,1,85
372,64,225751,2,0,P|380:152|380:252,2,170,2|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,12,226608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,64,226779,6,0,P|169:63|112:56,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
7,150,227122,2,0,P|49:144|91:143,1,85
268,192,227465,2,0,P|225:186|183:184,1,85
211,356,227808,2,0,P|219:316|219:260,1,85,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,144,228151,2,0,P|84:185|82:228,1,85
211,356,228494,2,0,P|252:363|295:365,1,85
448,264,228836,6,0,P|468:171|403:111,1,170,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,289,229351,2,0,P|427:353|508:329,1,170,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,200,229865,2,0,P|340:192|280:192,1,85,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,230208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,280,230379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,136,230551,1,4,0:3:0:0:
220,136,230894,6,0,P|168:142|72:143,2,127.500004863739,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,48,231922,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,320,232265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,212,232608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,212,232951,6,0,P|368:200|456:204,1,170,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,348,233979,2,0,P|80:332|52:200,1,170,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,32,235008,2,0,L|192:204,1,170,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,356,236036,2,0,P|453:347|492:272,1,170,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,168,237065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,237151,12,0,241179,0:0:0:0:

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Wing My Way 2015-07-27T15:09:37+00:00

DreaM117er wrote:
久等了

辛苦了

非常感谢>,<！

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2015-08-10T09:26:08+00:00

[Abhor's Normal]

01:22:094 Sampleset : Drum + clap is not fit here ,i think

01:29:979 ^

03:15:579 ^

01:24:494 (4,2) - put 4 to another place (overlap

01:32:722 (5,2) - try stack

01:37:179 (1,2) - 虽然看起来很美观,但是总感觉不对劲,特别是你打FL flow不是很好(我是不知道怎么用英语

表达,然后去查了下你是china的,于是这里开始用中文

02:03:922 (1) - blanket

03:46:436 (3,1) - ^

02:19:351 (4) - 这话条不是很好 , 02:20:379漏了音

02:29:636 ^ 一样,然而你并没有插绿线把音补上

02:32:036 ^

03:16:951 (5) - 这是鼓音吧,Sempleset 错了, Sempleset是包括原本的Soft-hitnormal音再加上Normal-

whistle, Addition 则不包括原本的音直接是目前的音效Normal-whistle替换掉

03:20:551 (3) - 超奇怪的,第一次肯定被坑,建议是前后2白线构成1滑条就行了

03:52:951 (1) - 建议不要这样容易被挑dq

滑条点看着好难受( 强迫症表示全部Ctrl+g 多好

[soda's Hard]

00:03:579 (3) - 我觉得再向左倾斜30°....

00:07:694 (3,1) - 不叠吧,41往下移,

00:23:122 音效好像不对

00:40:951 (4,5,1) - stack总觉得怪了些,00:41:465加个圈会好点

01:05:979 (1,2,3) - 放别的位置

01:11:465 Addition 用Drum?

03:12:836 ^

01:13:179 ^类似的我都觉得奇怪了点

01:37:179 (1) -

02:13:865 (3) - 尾巴点 (420,92)试试

03:08:379 (2,3) - 这个 overlap得不好

03:29:636 (5,6) - 换滑条

03:38:379 (5) - 位置调调

03:50:551 (5) - (376,136)试试

[Eternal]

跳过I 直接Ex吧,我还是喜欢lfj那首,这翻唱有点鸡皮疙瘩(单指唱到某些地方)

首先 color不统一没问题吗(吃我dq

00:28:265 (5) - nc吧毕竟不一样还变速

01:06:322 (1) - 这个结尾上有个滑条点,我觉得人玩很大概率会掉

01:24:836 (1,3) - 似乎又是bug产生的1px么

01:31:008 (1) - 怪音效

有些确实没叠好,你看6和2 ↓

SPOILER

02:13:008 (4,5,6,7) - 吃读图

02:41:636 (3) - 试试(220,44)

03:11:122 (5,6) - 试试分别ctrl+g的效果

03:56:122 似乎这里结尾跟人声的话

这diff吃读图啊,鸭梨

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2015-08-10T10:01:28+00:00

Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General

gder's tag

Abhor's Normal

没combo color
ar5?
00:47:808 (3) - 这里对节奏的处理，把00:49:865 - 当做滑条尾的话，我感觉是不太合适的，vocal起的地方啥都没有
02:35:808 - 这里可以和前面部分一样加点东西
03:52:951 (1) - 改正常点

这是easy吧？

Soda's Hard

没combo color
01:24:494 (5,1) - 这俩头距离有点近
03:47:465 (2,3) - blanket

117's Insane

00:14:894 (3) - 这里whistle改成s:c1的
01:07:351 (1,2,3) - 略感单调，spin后面三连单点可以做的放开点
02:35:808 (1,2,3) - ^
03:55:008 (3) - NC? 或者这个也行03:57:065 (5) -

Insane

看了一遍感觉是滑条好乱，我个人很不喜欢拉乱七八糟的滑条
00:28:608 (6) - remove nc?
00:32:379 (7,8,1) - 这距离和前面单点跳比也太怂了，要我就这么搞：http://puu.sh/jsjyF/07ac99a809.jpg
00:34:436 (3,4,5,1) - 间距太蛋疼了
00:46:608 - 我觉得你还不如在这里放一个note
00:53:979 (1,3) - 这个overlap让我看起来无比蛋疼
01:08:036 (5,1) - 这种时候明显应该大间距放跳的搞什么blanket
01:08:379 (1,2,3) - ……
01:10:608 - 01:11:294 - 刚进kiai连续两个空拍，就有种节奏不连贯的感觉
01:18:665 (1,2,3) - 这flow还能不能好好玩耍：http://puu.sh/jsjRA/4abd988a45.jpg
01:30:665 (5,6,1,2,3) - 堆叠之后看起来丑爆了
02:15:236 (4) - nc?
02:41:636 (3) - 这个往高处放而不是stack的话flow更加舒服
03:10:779 (4,5,6) - 不知道为什么就是感觉好蠢...
03:18:322 (4) - nc
03:56:722 (4,5) - 默认whistle?

老m个人认为啊，多点的扭曲形状的滑条更适合的是音游曲或者节奏鲜明的曲子，而不太适合这种类型的曲子……

good luck.

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2015-08-10T10:03:11+00:00

double post edited

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2015-08-13T12:18:30+00:00

[Eternal]
00:02:894 (2,3) - 距离有些不是应该再近点或者远点。远点的话比如：340,240 近点的话: 224,112。如果选前者是为了打图感觉，后者是突出4的高音
00:04:951 (2,3) - 同理。
00:11:807 (6) - NC
00:14:894 (1,1) - nazi影响图的质量，这种一看就知道是不小心碰到的尽量避免（这点很重要，请检查整张图）
00:20:036 (7,1) - 换成一个长滑条配合音乐里的延音
00:21:065 (1,2) - 避免使用这种无用的3/4
00:27:236 (1,2) - 换成滑条
00:35:294 (5) - 不如叠在3下面这里好像没什么读图梗好玩的
00:46:265 (3,4) - 太近了。如果懒改排版建议中间加个节奏
00:53:979 (1,3) - 须注意这个非常影响质量
01:08:379 (1,2,3,4) - 或许flow是还行，可是太乱了
01:18:494 (5) - 用的挺无解的，干脆叠着滑条头放连打
02:14:208 (3,1) - 这个间距考虑欠妥。1可以错位叠在3下面
02:37:865 (1,2,3) - 分别ctrl+g
02:41:636 (3,4) - 建议别这么放没必要的读图梗还挺影响打图感的. 3可以放在1的尾巴下
03:24:836 (3,4) - 太近
03:33:922 - 加个节奏。5 6 太近

注意空一拍的时候的物件距离，不要不近不远的正好放在中间的位置，这样做最影响质量，请检查整张图

注意下蓝色粗体字内容，如果这些改完了应该能对图质量有极大提升

[117]
有些滑条和flow好像和柚子挺像
没什么大问题。nazi懒摸

[Hard]
nazi懒摸

[Normal]
nazi懒摸

希望可以对你的图有用

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Wing My Way 2015-09-11T17:25:23+00:00

moonlightleaf

[Eternal]

跳过I 直接Ex吧,我还是喜欢lfj那首,这翻唱有点鸡皮疙瘩(单指唱到某些地方) Orz

首先 color不统一没问题吗(吃我dq 到时候改一下到时候改一下

00:28:265 (5) - nc吧毕竟不一样还变速 fixed

01:06:322 (1) - 这个结尾上有个滑条点,我觉得人玩很大概率会掉

01:24:836 (1,3) - 似乎又是bug产生的1px么

01:31:008 (1) - 怪音效

有些确实没叠好,你看6和2 ↓ fixed

SPOILER

02:13:008 (4,5,6,7) - 吃读图

02:41:636 (3) - 试试(220,44) 好

03:11:122 (5,6) - 试试分别ctrl+g的效果好

03:56:122 似乎这里结尾跟人声的话都不准，还是跟白线

这diff吃读图啊,鸭梨
蟹蟹mod！

Minakami Yuki

Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General

gder's tag

Insane

看了一遍感觉是滑条好乱，我个人很不喜欢拉乱七八糟的滑条
00:28:608 (6) - remove nc?
00:32:379 (7,8,1) - 这距离和前面单点跳比也太怂了，要我就这么搞：http://puu.sh/jsjyF/07ac99a809.jpg 好
00:34:436 (3,4,5,1) - 间距太蛋疼了 fixed
00:46:608 - 我觉得你还不如在这里放一个note 好吧……虽然我觉得不太好，但是你们都说不好
00:53:979 (1,3) - 这个overlap让我看起来无比蛋疼 fixed
01:08:036 (5,1) - 这种时候明显应该大间距放跳的搞什么blanket
01:08:379 (1,2,3) - ……
01:10:608 - 01:11:294 - 刚进kiai连续两个空拍，就有种节奏不连贯的感觉
01:18:665 (1,2,3) - 这flow还能不能好好玩耍：http://puu.sh/jsjRA/4abd988a45.jpg 第一个kiai基本re掉了
01:30:665 (5,6,1,2,3) - 堆叠之后看起来丑爆了
02:15:236 (4) - nc? ok
02:41:636 (3) - 这个往高处放而不是stack的话flow更加舒服
03:10:779 (4,5,6) - 不知道为什么就是感觉好蠢... 后面我再re一下吧/.\
03:18:322 (4) - nc ok
03:56:722 (4,5) - 默认whistle? 好

老m个人认为啊，多点的扭曲形状的滑条更适合的是音游曲或者节奏鲜明的曲子，而不太适合这种类型的曲子……

good luck. 谢谢老M~

yf_bmp

[Eternal]
00:02:894 (2,3) - 距离有些不是应该再近点或者远点。远点的话比如：340,240 近点的话: 224,112。如果选前者是为了打图感觉，后者是突出4的高音 ok
00:04:951 (2,3) - 同理。fixed
00:11:807 (6) - NC fixed
00:14:894 (1,1) - nazi影响图的质量，这种一看就知道是不小心碰到的尽量避免（这点很重要，请检查整张图） ok
00:20:036 (7,1) - 换成一个长滑条配合音乐里的延音好
00:21:065 (1,2) - 避免使用这种无用的3/4
00:27:236 (1,2) - 换成滑条好
00:35:294 (5) - 不如叠在3下面这里好像没什么读图梗好玩的 re掉了
00:46:265 (3,4) - 太近了。如果懒改排版建议中间加个节奏
00:53:979 (1,3) - 须注意这个非常影响质量这个部分re掉了
01:08:379 (1,2,3,4) - 或许flow是还行，可是太乱了第一个kiai基本remap了
01:18:494 (5) - 用的挺无解的，干脆叠着滑条头放连打可以
02:14:208 (3,1) - 这个间距考虑欠妥。1可以错位叠在3下面好
02:37:865 (1,2,3) - 分别ctrl+g 好
02:41:636 (3,4) - 建议别这么放没必要的读图梗还挺影响打图感的. 3可以放在1的尾巴下 ok
03:24:836 (3,4) - 太近
03:33:922 - 加个节奏。5 6 太近

注意空一拍的时候的物件距离，不要不近不远的正好放在中间的位置，这样做最影响质量，请检查整张图

注意下蓝色粗体字内容，如果这些改完了应该能对图质量有极大提升

[117]
有些滑条和flow好像和柚子挺像
没什么大问题。nazi懒摸

[Hard]
nazi懒摸

[Normal]
nazi懒摸

希望可以对你的图有用
谢谢爱抚！~

thx guys~

TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

597 posts

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TtmnZk 2015-09-12T14:38:12+00:00

[Eternal]
感觉比原来整洁了，但注意blanket的地方还是有很多问题，请自己耐心检查一下

01:03:236 (3) - 类似于这种两红点滑条也尽量拉成内外角一致的Z型，即要统一

02:49:865 (3,4,1) - 这接的太远了吧

03:02:208 (3) - 哨子声去了

03:09:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议把滑条之间的spacing一致，flow虽可以但这样摆有点随意

03:38:379 (4,1) - 太近，不好移的话就摆3连吧

03:47:465 (4,5) - ctrl+g试试。

other diffs are fine for me

NM现在也ok了
可以的,go

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