forum

Sharlo & Sabbo - Sakura no Hana ga Maiochiru Toki

posted
Total Posts
90
show more
sodarose
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Sakura no Hana ga Maiochiru Toki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 67179
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Sakura no Hana ga Maiochiru Toki
TitleUnicode:桜の花が舞い落ちるとき
Artist:Sharlo & Sabbo
ArtistUnicode:Sharlo & Sabbo
Creator:Wing My Way
Version:Soda's Hard
Source:
Tags:Jin Li Chao 锦鲤抄
BeatmapID:720159
BeatmapSetID:227128

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,15236,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
2,105608,120727
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
494,342.857142857143,6,2,0,40,1,0
494,-133.333333333333,6,2,2,30,0,0
15751,-100,6,2,2,30,0,0
16265,-100,6,2,1,40,0,0
16951,-100,6,2,1,40,0,1
33065,-133.333333333333,6,2,1,40,0,0
33236,-133.333333333333,6,2,3,30,0,0
49865,-133.333333333333,6,2,1,30,0,0
50208,-133.333333333333,6,2,2,30,0,0
50722,-133.333333333333,6,2,3,30,0,0
53294,-133.333333333333,6,2,3,30,0,0
53979,-133.333333333333,6,2,1,30,0,0
54151,-133.333333333333,6,2,3,30,0,0
58094,-133.333333333333,6,2,1,30,0,0
58436,-133.333333333333,6,2,2,30,0,0
60151,-133.333333333333,6,2,3,30,0,0
62208,-133.333333333333,6,2,1,30,0,0
62551,-133.333333333333,6,2,3,30,0,0
67179,-100,6,2,1,45,0,0
68379,-100,6,2,1,70,0,1
105408,-100,6,2,1,70,0,0
121522,-133.333333333333,6,2,3,50,0,0
138322,-133.333333333333,6,2,1,30,0,0
138494,-133.333333333333,6,2,3,50,0,0
142436,-133.333333333333,6,2,1,30,0,0
142608,-133.333333333333,6,2,3,50,0,0
146551,-133.333333333333,6,2,1,30,0,0
146722,-133.333333333333,6,2,3,50,0,0
150665,-133.333333333333,6,2,1,50,0,0
151008,-133.333333333333,6,2,3,50,0,0
153751,-133.333333333333,6,2,2,50,0,0
155808,-100,6,2,2,50,0,0
156836,-100,6,2,1,70,0,1
193179,-100,6,2,1,35,0,1
193865,-125,6,2,1,50,0,0
210322,-100,6,2,1,50,0,1
230894,-133.333333333333,6,2,3,20,0,0
235008,-133.333333333333,6,2,2,30,0,0
235094,-133.333333333333,6,2,3,20,0,0
243236,-133.333333333333,6,2,3,5,0,0


[HitObjects]
80,96,494,6,0,L|208:84,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,132,1008,2,0,L|376:128,1,105.000004005432
444,148,1522,2,0,P|456:88|452:36,2,105.000004005432,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,312,2551,6,0,P|368:336|300:320,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,272,3065,2,0,P|200:265|155:289,1,105.000004005432
80,328,3579,2,0,P|56:248|56:216,2,105.000004005432,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,272,4608,6,0,P|248:208|272:164,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,108,5122,2,0,P|392:104|428:128,1,105.000004005432
424,204,5636,2,0,L|480:304,2,105.000004005432,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,92,6665,6,0,L|196:84,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,100,7179,2,0,P|92:136|96:212,1,105.000004005432
164,240,7694,2,0,L|268:248,2,105.000004005432,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,198,8551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,268,8722,6,0,L|240:276,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,276,9236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,320,9408,2,0,P|436:304|456:288,1,52.5000020027161
424,216,9751,2,0,P|448:160|484:136,2,105.000004005432,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,352,10779,6,0,L|220:344,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,344,11294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,292,11465,2,0,L|88:224,1,52.5000020027161
124,168,11808,2,0,P|192:160|236:184,2,105.000004005432,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,232,12836,6,0,P|300:188|288:128,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,60,13351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,32,13522,2,0,L|396:28,1,52.5000020027161
460,52,13865,2,0,P|476:120|472:168,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,316,14551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,288,14722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,316,14894,5,4,0:0:0:0:
272,316,15751,2,0,L|284:368,2,35,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,156,16265,5,0,0:0:0:0:
184,108,16436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,68,16608,2,0,L|336:76,1,70
392,128,16951,6,0,P|436:96|456:12,2,140,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,176,17808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,256,17979,2,0,P|328:288|348:372,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,308,18836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,324,19008,6,0,L|104:172,1,140,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,28,19694,2,0,P|128:40|224:24,1,140
364,40,20379,2,0,P|368:80|360:112,1,70
336,188,20722,2,0,P|332:228|340:260,1,70
396,320,21065,6,0,L|248:348,2,140,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,164,22094,2,0,P|440:108|348:72,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,204,23122,6,0,L|144:200,1,140,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,172,23636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,92,23808,2,0,P|68:48|84:32,1,70
160,64,24151,2,0,L|240:68,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,65,24494,2,0,L|293:225,1,140
340,276,25008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,224,25179,6,0,L|421:85,2,140,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,276,26036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,324,26208,2,0,P|196:344|128:316,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,276,27065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,228,27236,6,0,P|205:208|139:228,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,348,27922,2,0,L|28:208,1,140
120,68,28608,2,0,P|156:64|204:76,1,70
272,84,28951,2,0,P|306:89|341:85,1,70
420,64,29294,6,0,L|408:212,2,140,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,188,30322,2,0,L|292:336,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,248,31008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,212,31179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,188,31351,6,0,P|368:200|440:176,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,96,31865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,40,32036,2,0,P|352:48|320:44,1,70
248,44,32379,2,0,P|196:40|120:92,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,212,33065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,212,33408,6,0,L|224:212,2,105.000004005432,8|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,316,34436,2,0,L|312:316,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,272,35122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,140,35465,6,0,P|432:88|484:52,2,105.000004005432,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,196,36494,2,0,P|268:136|284:80,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,8,37179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,132,37522,6,0,P|104:188|124:256,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,340,38208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,292,38551,2,0,P|376:256|388:212,1,105.000004005432
356,84,39236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,196,39579,6,0,L|156:184,1,105.000004005432
132,132,40094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,160,40265,2,0,P|56:216|76:284,1,105.000004005432
184,328,40951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,328,41294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,328,41636,6,0,P|144:364|96:380,2,105.000004005432,8|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,248,42665,2,0,P|344:232|404:252,1,105.000004005432
476,352,43351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,216,43694,6,0,L|492:92,2,105.000004005432
360,132,44722,2,0,L|384:16,1,105.000004005432
244,48,45408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,180,45751,6,0,P|152:192|104:164,1,105.000004005432
56,48,46436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,180,46779,2,0,L|28:284,1,105.000004005432
156,336,47465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,47808,6,0,P|212:328|268:336,1,105.000004005432
396,360,48494,2,0,P|448:348|500:316,1,105.000004005432
436,196,49179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,120,49522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,120,49865,6,0,P|260:120|216:132,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,264,50551,2,0,P|248:264|292:252,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
404,180,51236,2,0,P|420:120|408:68,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,52,51922,6,0,L|176:48,2,105.000004005432,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,160,52951,2,8,L|92:156,1,105.000004005432
24,36,53636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,68,53979,6,0,P|208:60|268:88,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,168,54665,2,0,P|388:136|392:68,1,105.000004005432,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,16,55351,2,0,L|492:136,1,105.000004005432
448,248,56036,6,0,L|336:260,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,296,56551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,332,56722,2,0,L|124:328,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,240,57408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,116,57751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,116,58094,6,0,P|144:96|188:68,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,16,58779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,128,59122,2,0,P|380:192|360:240,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,304,59808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,176,60151,6,0,L|420:180,2,105.000004005432,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,212,61179,2,0,P|132:180|120:120,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,44,61865,2,0,L|288:56,1,52.5000020027161
344,84,62208,6,0,L|464:88,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,216,62894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,332,63236,2,0,P|356:336|312:304,1,105.000004005432
186,318,63922,5,0,0:0:0:0:
186,318,64265,2,0,P|139:339|88:332,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,216,64951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
63,87,65295,2,0,L|168:84,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,84,65979,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,66151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,84,66322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,268,67351,6,0,P|360:252|268:272,1,140,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,332,68036,2,0,P|132:284|104:216,1,105
84,200,68379,6,0,L|228:164,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,276,69065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,132,69408,2,0,P|412:156|372:164,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,129,69751,2,0,P|298:92|311:54,1,70
377,13,70094,2,0,P|411:25|438:55,1,70
440,132,70436,6,0,P|438:211|458:283,2,140,6|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,61,71465,2,0,P|250:53|162:73,1,140,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,212,72151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,212,72494,6,0,P|124:204|168:216,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,276,72836,2,0,P|174:321|142:353,1,70
80,348,73179,2,0,P|49:310|37:266,1,70,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,212,73522,2,0,P|84:148|68:72,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,337,74551,6,0,P|228:337|244:329,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,296,74894,2,0,P|334:289|368:295,1,70
436,344,75236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,280,75408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,208,75579,2,0,B|472:144|472:144|480:68,2,140,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,184,76608,6,0,P|236:196|200:192,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,124,76951,2,0,P|179:79|201:50,1,70
276,56,77294,2,0,P|308:88|322:121,1,70
280,184,77636,2,0,P|344:192|400:132,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,59,78665,6,0,P|148:55|104:71,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,120,79008,2,0,P|56:164|72:208,1,70
120,248,79351,2,0,P|124:292|108:336,1,70
40,352,79694,2,0,L|180:360,2,140,8|0|0,0:3|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,188,80722,6,0,P|196:228|196:260,1,70,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,248,81065,2,0,P|300:203|328:187,1,70
276,120,81408,2,0,P|227:124|199:108,1,70
248,40,81751,2,0,P|316:44|360:120,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,180,82779,6,0,P|403:170|440:113,1,140,12|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,120,83294,2,0,P|250:183|281:243,1,140
352,100,83808,2,0,P|332:64|292:44,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,180,84151,2,0,P|377:180|414:156,1,70
276,120,84494,2,0,P|254:155|257:199,1,70
208,92,84836,6,0,P|140:100|60:80,1,140,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,168,85351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,252,85522,2,0,L|136:272,1,70
192,324,85865,2,0,P|276:316|356:332,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,292,86551,2,0,L|480:208,1,70
420,164,86894,6,0,P|368:176|288:232,2,140,6|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,16,87922,2,0,L|344:12,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,64,88608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,52,88779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,36,88951,6,0,P|24:92|64:180,1,140,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,228,89465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,180,89636,2,0,L|264:184,1,70
300,112,89979,2,0,L|160:104,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,64,91008,6,0,P|476:140|456:224,1,140,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,320,91694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,320,92036,2,0,P|252:312|196:336,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,356,92551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,332,92722,2,0,L|32:260,1,70
32,180,93065,6,0,B|84:152|120:208|200:168,2,140,6|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,100,94094,2,0,P|228:124|248:208,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,94608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,344,94779,2,0,P|352:336|372:324,1,70
436,296,95122,6,0,L|408:148,2,140,12|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,132,96151,2,0,P|464:92|368:88,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,160,96836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,97008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,97179,6,0,L|208:108,1,140,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,16,97865,2,0,P|304:60|308:92,1,70
320,152,98208,2,0,P|308:220|228:256,2,140,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,320,99236,6,0,P|240:332|176:284,1,140,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,172,99922,2,0,P|52:124|68:92,1,70
112,40,100265,2,0,B|168:20|208:72|272:36,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,144,101294,6,0,P|312:120|348:56,1,140,12|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,20,101979,2,0,L|484:100,1,70
464,168,102322,2,0,P|460:232|488:308,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,268,103351,6,0,P|280:288|184:292,1,140,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,236,103865,2,0,P|177:237|241:211,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,132,104379,2,0,P|231:158|162:156,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,104,104894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,28,105065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,32,105236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,112,105408,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,116,121522,5,4,0:0:0:0:
176,116,121865,2,0,L|288:104,2,105.000004005432
72,204,122894,2,0,P|72:276|96:320,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,348,123579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,304,123922,6,0,P|400:312|456:340,2,105.000004005432,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,204,124951,2,0,L|286:88,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,52,125636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,188,125979,6,0,P|440:184|488:196,2,105.000004005432,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,204,127008,2,0,P|186:212|122:204,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,112,127694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,48,128036,6,0,L|280:56,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,68,128551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,96,128722,2,0,P|396:144|372:208,1,105.000004005432
304,312,129408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,356,129751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,356,130094,6,0,P|448:280|464:244,2,105.000004005432,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,312,131122,2,0,P|220:324|176:324,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,340,131808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,204,132151,6,0,P|56:132|32:104,2,105.000004005432,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,236,133179,2,0,P|280:216|320:216,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,148,133865,2,0,L|416:92,1,52.5000020027161
412,28,134208,6,0,L|284:44,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,68,134894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,140,135236,2,0,P|40:72|44:28,2,105.000004005432,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,204,136265,6,0,P|248:196|292:172,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,100,136951,2,0,L|424:212,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,332,137636,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,340,137979,1,4,0:0:0:0:
308,340,138322,6,0,P|256:332|192:340,2,105.000004005432,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,236,139351,2,0,P|360:216|328:208,1,52.5000020027161
280,212,139694,2,0,P|260:160|272:56,1,157.500006008148,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,16,140379,6,0,L|192:20,2,105.000004005432,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,28,141408,2,0,P|468:76|468:144,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,260,142094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,352,142436,6,0,L|456:360,2,105.000004005432,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,244,143465,2,0,P|176:260|124:284,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,352,144151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,216,144494,6,0,P|60:144|68:92,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,48,145008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,16,145179,2,0,L|260:20,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,116,145865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,68,146208,2,0,P|480:112|476:136,1,52.5000020027161
456,184,146551,6,0,P|448:240|480:296,2,105.000004005432,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,60,147579,2,0,P|356:40|288:56,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,96,148265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,232,148608,6,0,L|280:212,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,304,149294,2,0,L|260:320,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,336,149979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,208,150322,2,0,P|100:168|116:160,1,52.5000020027161
172,144,150665,6,0,L|196:28,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,24,151351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,28,151694,2,0,P|472:68|456:144,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,192,152379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,253,152722,2,0,P|472:304|464:356,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,360,153408,5,0,0:0:0:0:
193,342,153752,2,0,L|172:240,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,240,154436,5,0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,154608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,144,154779,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,144,155808,6,0,P|228:124|316:136,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,168,156494,2,0,L|440:292,1,105
444,312,156836,6,0,P|372:308|296:320,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,360,157522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,204,157865,2,0,P|68:168|72:136,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,92,158208,2,0,P|179:103|204:122,1,70
208,208,158551,2,0,P|180:232|151:245,1,70
205,123,158894,6,0,L|353:123,2,140,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,36,159922,2,0,P|408:60|436:140,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,268,160608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,268,160951,6,0,P|336:312|344:344,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,368,161294,2,0,P|462:352|485:330,1,70
476,252,161636,2,0,P|441:223|410:214,1,70
340,336,161979,2,0,P|260:344|184:340,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,248,163008,6,0,P|148:260|124:280,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,332,163351,2,0,P|36:312|16:280,1,70
28,204,163694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,124,163865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,44,164036,2,0,L|176:36,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,120,165065,6,0,P|192:168|224:200,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,165408,2,0,P|325:161|337:117,1,70
300,68,165751,2,0,P|254:50|210:62,1,70
203,184,166094,2,0,P|199:256|215:332,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,92,167122,6,0,P|412:140|408:172,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,228,167465,2,0,P|352:268|364:308,1,70
428,344,167808,2,0,P|400:372|340:368,1,70
292,348,168151,2,0,B|208:360|208:360|144:344,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,264,169179,6,0,P|456:220|480:204,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,140,169522,2,0,P|375:144|350:131,1,70
320,212,169865,2,0,P|348:251|349:280,1,70
268,276,170208,2,0,B|184:288|184:288|120:272,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,152,171236,6,0,L|16:144,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,68,171751,2,0,L|192:76,1,140
260,124,172265,2,0,P|276:168|300:188,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,176,172608,2,0,P|406:140|411:109,1,70
364,48,172951,2,0,P|317:39|288:50,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,183,173294,6,0,P|324:240|408:252,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,236,173808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,316,173979,2,0,P|396:332|360:332,1,70
296,352,174322,2,0,P|248:344|156:352,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,236,175008,2,0,L|56:148,1,70
72,88,175351,6,0,L|216:80,2,140,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,176,176379,2,0,P|268:156|312:76,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,40,177065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,120,177236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,200,177408,6,0,L|312:224,1,140,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,252,177922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,176,178094,2,0,L|124:172,1,70
64,172,178436,2,0,P|80:124|160:96,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,328,179465,6,0,P|220:352|272:352,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,296,180151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,296,180494,2,0,P|432:224|416:152,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,76,181008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,12,181179,2,0,L|252:20,1,70
216,76,181522,6,0,L|72:56,2,140,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,204,182551,2,0,P|312:272|228:308,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,312,183065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,308,183236,2,0,P|76:256|80:224,1,70
124,168,183579,6,0,B|184:140|216:184|272:156,2,140,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,56,184608,2,0,P|336:72|368:132,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,276,185294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,296,185465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,316,185636,6,0,L|396:352,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,204,186322,2,0,P|416:184|376:196,1,70
320,200,186665,2,0,P|256:208|176:188,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,187694,6,0,P|116:144|116:232,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,312,188379,2,0,L|312:328,1,70
388,356,188722,2,0,L|240:368,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,204,189751,6,0,P|440:136|364:72,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,36,190436,2,0,P|208:72|200:104,1,70
228,176,190779,2,0,P|164:188|72:172,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,160,191808,6,0,P|416:212|400:300,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,368,192322,2,0,P|354:300|332:234,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,172,192836,2,0,P|280:224|264:312,1,140,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,348,193351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,304,193522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,228,193694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,228,193865,6,0,L|320:236,1,56,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,244,194208,2,0,P|400:188|404:120,1,112
296,44,194894,2,0,P|240:84|176:92,1,112,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,72,195579,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,216,195922,6,0,P|68:272|96:332,1,112,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,332,196436,2,0,L|284:336,1,112
344,344,196951,1,2,1:0:0:0:
484,300,197294,2,0,L|472:176,1,112,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,92,197979,6,0,P|404:84|352:108,1,112,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,156,198494,2,0,P|260:176|192:168,1,112,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,140,199008,1,2,1:0:0:0:
60,20,199351,2,0,P|136:12|188:16,1,112
315,44,200036,6,0,L|311:176,1,112,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,200551,2,0,L|368:304,1,112
348,356,201065,1,2,1:0:0:0:
348,356,201408,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,304,201579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,300,201751,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,248,201922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,252,202094,6,0,L|76:116,2,112,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,228,203122,2,0,L|220:92,1,112,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,20,203808,2,0,P|384:16|416:8,1,56
464,12,204151,6,0,P|456:76|472:136,1,112,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,268,204836,2,0,P|448:312|384:344,1,112,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,336,205351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,348,205522,2,0,L|128:336,1,112,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
124,192,206208,6,0,P|84:156|24:144,2,112,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,120,207236,2,0,P|244:66|206:18,2,112,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,257,208265,6,0,P|343:220|360:161,1,112,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,93,208779,2,0,L|244:121,1,112
196,164,209294,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,228,209465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,276,209636,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,340,209807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,380,209979,2,0,L|300:376,1,56,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,364,210322,6,0,P|412:300|420:220,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,140,210836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,52,211008,2,0,L|312:40,1,70
248,72,211351,2,0,L|88:48,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,212379,6,0,P|320:292|260:364,2,140,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,316,213408,2,0,P|112:320|16:288,1,140,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,116,214094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,72,214265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,40,214436,6,0,P|308:48|392:76,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,120,214951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,215122,2,0,L|488:344,2,140,2|2|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,140,216151,2,0,P|244:184|256:232,1,70
296,280,216494,6,0,L|140:300,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,160,217179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,36,217522,2,0,P|244:8|320:16,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,188,218208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,148,218379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,108,218551,6,0,P|116:156|72:236,2,140,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,280,219579,2,0,P|76:308|140:280,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,248,220094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,296,220265,2,0,P|336:320|368:324,1,70
448,296,220608,6,0,L|428:152,2,140,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,124,221636,2,0,P|460:80|376:88,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,168,222322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,148,222494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,128,222665,6,0,L|196:104,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,15,223351,2,0,P|388:75|388:103,1,70
340,160,223694,2,0,P|344:224|400:272,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,272,224722,6,0,P|464:328|380:356,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,324,225408,2,0,P|144:328|68:352,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,152,226436,2,0,L|248:80,1,70
192,12,226779,6,0,L|168:156,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,324,227465,2,0,P|260:320|296:304,1,70
356,260,227808,2,0,P|376:304|324:384,2,140,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,212,228836,6,0,P|160:144|188:64,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,8,229351,2,0,P|230:74|250:141,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,208,229865,2,0,P|304:140|332:60,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,76,230379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,160,230551,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,16,230722,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,164,230894,6,0,P|444:224|436:280,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,340,231579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,231922,2,0,L|152:348,1,105.000004005432
76,272,232608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,180,232951,6,0,B|112:144|188:232|340:164,1,315.000012016297,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,84,234322,2,0,L|464:72,2,52.5000020027161
348,92,234836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,88,235008,5,8,0:0:0:0:
296,88,236722,6,0,L|176:88,1,105.000004005432
256,192,237151,12,0,243236,0:0:0:0:

Kencho wrote:

夏蘿大法好好好

[Soda's Hard]
  1. 這hard可以再做難點,3.1左右剛剛好 现在已经够难了

  2. 00:52:951 (2,1) - blanket
    03:21:408 (4) - NC會不會好點 没必要

  3. 後面看出來有一段是複製的,不過沒大問題,nice diff 为什么我看不出哪复制了

Autumn wrote:

[Hard]
02:30:322 (4,1) - 隔开点就好
thx :)
Lobelia

Kencho wrote:

[Abhor's Normal]
  1. 建議每8拍1NC,現在4拍1NC顯得每個combo物件太少,8拍NC也會對玩家玩FL有幫助

  2. 00:13:179 (2,3) - 間距變成1.25x了
    00:36:836 (2) - 建議改成兩個圓圈,提升打擊感先留着不改QWQ
    01:04:265 (1,1) - EZ要隔4拍才能再放物件(雖然這個是NM,但是是這圖最低難度,不知道要不要隔),另外要改的話可以參考02:34:436 (4) - 的做法
    02:01:522 (1,2,3,1) - 這裡間距一會1.3x一會1.0x,你需要保持1.2x
    03:11:808 (1,1) - 這種不知道會不會被砍,因為只隔了3拍,其實是有空間保持1.2x間距的这里我在看看ORZ
    03:42:665 (1,1) - 間距0.95x了

Narcissu wrote:



  • [Normal]

  1. NC降到兩節一次吧,不少數字組都不到2
Lobelia
  • osu file format v14

    [General]
    AudioFilename: Sakura no Hana ga Maiochiru Toki.mp3
    AudioLeadIn: 1500
    PreviewTime: 67179
    Countdown: 0
    SampleSet: Soft
    StackLeniency: 0.7
    Mode: 0
    LetterboxInBreaks: 1
    WidescreenStoryboard: 0

    [Editor]
    DistanceSpacing: 1.2
    BeatDivisor: 2
    GridSize: 32
    TimelineZoom: 1.9

    [Metadata]
    Title:Sakura no Hana ga Maiochiru Toki
    TitleUnicode:桜の花が舞い落ちるとき
    Artist:Sharlo & Sabbo
    ArtistUnicode:Sharlo & Sabbo
    Creator:Wing My Way
    Version:Abhor's Normal
    Source:
    Tags:Jin Li Chao 锦鲤抄
    BeatmapID:720158
    BeatmapSetID:227128

    [Difficulty]
    HPDrainRate:3
    CircleSize:3
    OverallDifficulty:2
    ApproachRate:2
    SliderMultiplier:0.8
    SliderTickRate:1

    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
    Video,15236,"video.avi"
    //Break Periods
    2,105608,119962
    //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
    //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
    //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
    //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
    //Storyboard Sound Samples

    [TimingPoints]
    494,342.857142857143,6,2,0,40,1,0
    494,-100,6,2,2,30,0,0
    16265,-100,6,2,1,40,0,0
    16951,-100,6,2,1,40,0,1
    33065,-100,6,2,1,40,0,0
    33236,-100,6,2,3,30,0,0
    49865,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
    50722,-100,6,2,3,30,0,0
    58094,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
    58436,-100,6,2,3,30,0,0
    62208,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
    62551,-100,6,2,3,30,0,0
    64265,-100,6,2,2,30,0,0
    67179,-100,6,2,1,45,0,0
    68379,-100,6,2,1,70,0,1
    105408,-100,6,2,1,70,0,0
    121522,-100,6,2,3,50,0,0
    138322,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
    138494,-100,6,2,3,50,0,0
    142436,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
    142608,-100,6,2,3,50,0,0
    146551,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
    146722,-100,6,2,3,50,0,0
    150665,-100,6,2,1,50,0,0
    150836,-100,6,2,2,50,0,0
    156836,-100,6,2,1,70,0,1
    193179,-100,6,2,1,35,0,1
    193865,-100,6,2,1,50,0,0
    210322,-100,6,2,1,50,0,1
    230551,-100,6,2,3,50,0,1
    230894,-100,6,2,3,20,0,0
    235008,-100,6,2,2,30,0,0
    235094,-100,6,2,3,20,0,0
    243236,-100,6,2,3,5,0,0


    [HitObjects]
    80,73,494,6,0,P|120:98|204:91,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    53,165,1865,2,0,P|80:222|85:265,1,80
    178,222,2551,2,0,P|175:268|117:330,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    252,161,3922,2,0,P|279:211|310:233,1,80
    347,143,4608,6,0,P|387:194|393:264,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    271,83,5979,2,0,P|216:86|182:78,1,80
    127,152,6665,2,0,B|146:205|128:247|128:247|137:291,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    222,155,8036,2,0,P|235:198|263:231,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    288,84,9065,6,0,P|345:71|382:76,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    212,144,10094,2,0,P|164:145|126:132,1,80
    63,70,10779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    50,165,11122,2,0,P|63:218|155:293,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    234,295,12151,2,0,B|288:279|288:279|339:292,1,80
    395,329,12836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    390,233,13179,2,0,B|372:183|397:149|397:149|442:133|465:84,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    369,56,14208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    282,98,14551,2,0,P|230:101|193:89,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    83,63,16265,6,0,B|117:92|116:132|116:132|169:140|186:184,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    367,124,17636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    391,216,17979,2,0,P|337:244|308:249,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    225,224,18665,2,0,B|155:202|89:227|89:227|124:262,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    200,131,20379,2,0,P|261:131|297:125,1,80
    371,97,21065,6,0,B|379:221|379:221|357:266,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    267,256,22094,2,0,B|290:205|290:205|283:73|283:73|226:27,1,240,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    150,67,23465,2,0,P|148:128|161:166,1,80
    159,241,24151,2,0,P|178:322|254:357,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    250,260,25179,6,0,P|325:213|411:212,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    407,113,26208,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    312,97,26551,2,0,L|208:93,1,80
    136,82,27236,2,0,B|134:129|134:129|109:160|72:171|72:171|89:225|78:286,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    168,318,28608,2,0,P|196:275|203:234,1,80
    227,154,29294,6,0,B|236:104|229:60|229:60|355:97|454:57,1,320,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    419,149,31008,2,0,P|401:191|403:249,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    451,305,31694,2,0,B|427:324|386:335|345:314|323:289|323:289|276:278|276:278|251:308|208:305,1,240
    120,148,33408,6,0,B|158:121|208:128|208:128|245:98|245:98|290:110,1,160,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    280,197,34436,2,0,B|236:237|236:237|177:219|138:253,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    200,326,35465,2,0,B|250:347|298:323|298:323|357:264|357:264|426:256,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    439,165,36836,2,0,P|413:111|387:98,1,80
    302,117,37522,6,0,P|228:139|141:120,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    67,71,38551,2,0,P|54:148|107:209,1,160
    197,228,39579,2,0,P|263:228|336:204,2,120,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    102,209,40951,2,0,B|100:159|100:159|81:117,1,80
    158,66,41636,6,0,B|183:115|183:115|226:131|303:123,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    379,96,42665,2,0,P|369:173|305:218,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    210,235,43694,2,0,B|132:246|132:246|71:214|71:214|54:273|73:317,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    161,327,45065,2,0,P|209:331|258:322,1,80
    316,267,45751,6,0,B|370:268|407:302|407:302|447:255,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    400,171,46779,2,0,P|319:156|243:173,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    187,250,47808,2,0,B|143:253|143:253|68:60,2,240,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    425,88,50894,6,0,P|381:105|266:86,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    221,171,51922,2,0,B|329:223|445:182|445:182|403:269,1,320,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    215,284,53979,6,0,P|134:272|44:281,1,160,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    50,182,55008,2,0,B|105:168|137:135|137:135|150:77,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    244,59,56036,2,0,B|231:146|231:146|251:191,2,120,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    331,99,57408,2,0,P|371:91|430:113,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    369,187,58094,6,0,B|361:287|361:287|320:340,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    228,333,59122,2,0,B|191:285|191:285|183:185,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    177,89,60151,2,0,B|118:91|88:158|88:158|94:251,2,200,8|4|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    260,136,62208,6,0,P|317:152|422:130,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    433,39,63236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    338,55,63579,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    243,38,63922,2,0,P|190:56|158:48,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    104,70,67351,6,0,P|110:135|101:169,2,80,8|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    199,66,68379,6,0,P|265:96|363:91,2,160,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    114,20,70094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    124,115,70436,2,0,B|125:194|125:194|96:225|98:273,1,160,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    193,259,71465,2,0,P|239:253|292:267,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    226,168,72494,6,0,B|264:131|257:73|257:73|294:86|339:81,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    388,140,73522,2,0,B|381:217|330:266|330:266|381:294|390:351,2,240,8|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    327,65,75922,2,0,P|269:47|247:51,1,80,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    185,119,76608,6,0,B|125:126|71:102|71:102|102:161,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    147,218,77636,2,0,B|153:274|112:329|112:329|180:319,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    236,276,78665,2,0,P|304:261|394:290,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    464,346,79694,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    464,250,80036,2,0,P|451:177|431:149,1,80,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    364,125,80722,6,0,B|280:108|188:124|188:124|251:160,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    262,249,82094,2,0,P|231:277|186:284,1,80,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    98,275,82779,2,0,P|61:227|46:156,2,120,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    274,198,84494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    350,257,84836,6,0,P|405:181|414:145,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    311,168,86208,2,0,P|248:194|146:180,2,160,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    355,82,87922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    169,67,88608,6,0,P|122:153|185:281,1,240,2|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
    269,255,89979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    358,219,90322,2,0,B|379:169|379:169|417:143,1,80
    449,237,91008,2,0,P|406:300|322:308,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    252,249,92036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    67,301,92722,6,0,B|64:200|64:200|142:123,2,200,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    163,302,94779,1,2,3:0:0:0:
    234,237,95122,2,0,P|313:222|394:255,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    467,299,96151,2,0,L|494:136,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    410,92,97179,6,0,B|365:68|310:96|310:96|254:149|178:117,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    410,292,99236,2,0,B|365:316|310:288|310:288|254:235|178:267,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    415,91,101294,6,0,P|338:103|246:87,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    162,102,102322,2,0,P|151:206|112:257,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,103351,12,2,105408,0:0:0:0:
    97,58,121522,5,4,0:0:0:0:
    96,160,121865,2,0,B|115:201|107:240|107:240|89:273|89:273|105:311,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    190,267,122894,2,0,P|200:187|165:98,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    97,58,123922,6,0,B|124:2|195:-2|227:20|227:20|278:65|323:48,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    497,36,125636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    445,117,125979,2,0,P|420:182|431:280,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    332,262,127008,2,0,B|322:218|328:173|328:173|300:145|260:142,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    173,170,128036,6,0,P|96:184|39:171,2,120
    336,68,129751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    327,163,130094,2,0,B|326:217|326:217|352:278|352:278|352:333,1,160
    256,322,131122,2,0,B|256:291|256:291|204:171,1,160
    108,163,132151,6,0,P|181:78|288:123,1,240
    374,290,133865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    381,194,134208,2,0,B|376:158|376:158|399:111|399:111|383:70|341:60,1,160
    255,81,135236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    186,148,135579,2,0,P|119:187|99:190,1,80
    31,229,136265,6,0,P|112:284|248:222,1,240
    352,85,137979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    367,179,138322,2,0,P|374:255|323:318,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    285,229,139351,2,0,P|208:251|82:216,2,200
    217,161,141408,6,0,P|165:141|141:111,1,80
    87,50,142094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    181,33,142436,2,0,P|265:47|332:102,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    361,179,143465,2,0,B|410:160|420:98|420:98|463:137,1,160
    465,230,144494,6,0,P|418:269|351:292,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    333,90,146208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    237,99,146551,2,0,P|160:117|74:105,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    45,196,147579,2,0,P|125:214|212:204,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    296,186,148608,6,0,B|379:171|440:123|440:123|452:204|416:285,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    323,298,150322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    227,294,150665,2,0,P|143:250|32:337,2,240,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    310,342,153065,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    311,245,153408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    341,153,153751,2,0,P|363:104|393:84,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    435,169,154436,2,0,P|417:212|387:237,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    88,71,156836,6,0,P|127:125|242:135,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    310,132,157865,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    310,228,158208,2,0,L|319:317,1,80
    414,313,158894,2,0,B|421:201|421:201|458:152,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    439,67,159922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    343,74,160265,2,0,P|288:90|248:86,1,80
    259,185,160951,6,0,B|352:195|412:228|412:228|389:258|341:271,1,240,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    252,293,162322,2,0,P|179:289|163:293,1,80
    78,307,163008,2,0,P|79:229|177:86,2,240,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    171,285,165408,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    248,228,165751,2,0,P|301:162|388:167,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    342,250,166779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    433,278,167122,2,0,B|412:333|367:355|317:351|285:325|285:325|222:336,1,240,4|10,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
    156,269,168494,2,0,P|102:266|54:242,1,80
    130,176,169179,6,0,P|199:180|309:156,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    357,96,170208,2,0,L|392:169,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    272,51,171236,6,0,P|190:36|145:43,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    445,134,172951,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    415,225,173294,2,0,P|350:260|297:260,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    395,131,174665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    310,85,175008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    219,116,175351,6,0,P|145:150|53:135,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    27,55,176379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    60,244,177065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    155,238,177408,2,0,P|230:237|297:262,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    176,144,178779,2,0,P|120:133|87:109,1,80
    164,48,179465,6,0,B|214:40|254:76|270:121|270:121|295:177|369:181,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    495,56,181179,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    452,141,181522,6,0,P|439:215|459:302,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    362,318,182551,2,0,P|341:242|350:149,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    376,70,183579,2,0,P|296:77|216:62,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    122,48,184608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    96,238,185294,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    190,221,185636,6,0,B|289:195|368:227|368:227|306:269,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    35,308,187694,2,0,B|66:235|61:144|61:144|92:177|140:173,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    399,86,189751,6,0,P|303:127|226:121,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    170,70,190779,2,0,P|152:110|161:168,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    248,126,191808,2,0,P|280:193|285:254,2,120,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    99,63,193865,5,2,3:0:0:0:
    105,158,194208,2,0,P|114:213|143:248,1,80
    200,170,194894,2,0,P|263:190|360:183,1,160,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
    421,113,195922,2,0,P|454:184|423:255,1,160
    347,313,196951,1,2,1:0:0:0:
    254,287,197294,2,0,P|196:291|171:289,1,80
    180,193,197979,6,0,B|132:162|121:89|121:89|192:63|253:97,1,240,4|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
    329,105,199351,2,0,B|368:127|451:115|451:115|454:150,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    467,294,200551,1,2,1:0:0:0:
    324,274,201065,2,2,P|248:251|170:275,1,160,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
    96,214,202094,6,0,B|145:163|241:157|241:157|237:119|196:90,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    282,45,203465,2,0,P|316:92|327:139,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    328,208,204151,2,0,B|413:200|422:102|422:102|451:135|452:179,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    435,272,205522,2,0,P|392:297|352:303,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    269,277,206208,6,0,P|194:260|106:289,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    44,347,207236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    78,158,207922,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    170,131,208265,2,0,B|297:134|388:89|388:89|380:152|414:188,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    220,224,210322,6,0,B|220:267|220:267|173:332|173:332|125:344,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    74,267,211351,2,0,P|41:219|57:118,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    132,67,212379,2,0,P|187:80|303:64,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    382,44,213408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    413,233,214094,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    317,230,214436,6,0,B|258:229|258:229|136:264,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    92,188,215465,2,0,B|208:153|208:153|235:114,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    146,73,216494,2,0,P|208:26|298:51,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    350,109,217522,2,0,P|367:184|308:256,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    274,166,218551,6,0,P|216:189|107:170,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    97,84,219579,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    191,98,219922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    279,60,220265,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    371,34,220608,2,0,P|410:104|410:193,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    381,268,221636,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    189,260,222322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    120,193,222665,6,0,B|144:112|58:56|58:56|115:45|149:43,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    392,193,224722,2,0,B|368:112|454:56|454:56|397:45|363:43,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,226436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    166,226,226779,6,0,P|255:289|349:210,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    321,127,228151,2,0,P|384:99|414:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,228836,12,0,230894,0:0:0:0:
    81,83,232951,6,0,B|67:140|134:159|234:77|226:5|130:43|188:135,1,240
    192,210,234322,2,0,B|270:249|333:208|333:208|386:224|434:190,1,240
    394,105,235694,2,0,P|346:75|310:71,1,80
    131,80,236722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,237065,12,0,243236,0:0:0:0:
Lobelia
[Insane]
00:30:494 (7,8) - 这里擦边不好看
01:10:436 (1,2,3) - 感觉好难打← ←
01:12:151 (3) - 我觉得这里滑条到红线结束,白线还需要一个NOTE在重音增强打击感,不然感觉就是突然停顿了一下 可以像你这样处理01:19:694 (4,5,6,1) -
01:25:351 (2,3) - 这两换个顺序我觉得节奏更舒服听起来
02:22:436 (3,4) - 其实我一直觉得这种梗好难读好难玩,来回箭头底下遮挡ORZ
03:29:979 (1,2) - 弄点平行的感觉出来?看着有点别扭
ichibannobaka
没怎么mod过有点担心用词问题,理解就好(
每个GD的下面部分为建议...

[Abhor's Normal]

00:29:294 (1,2) - anti-flow
01:29:979 (3,2) - stack
02:03:922 (1) - ds引起的一系列问题
03:20:551 (1) - 很突兀的红线节奏啊 何况还是个circle

00:08:036 (2,2) - stack?
01:10:094 (2) - 02:05:636 (2) - 03:01:179 (2) - 这三个note相对于全图有点太靠外了,调整一下?

[Soda's Hard]

00:12:836 (1) - 没包好

没什么问题,但是主歌部分节奏可以丰富一些,基本都是在打拍子的话略无聊

[Insane]

02:20:379 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 有点不明所以的jump,以及8,1的空拍
03:15:236 (4,5,1) - bad pattern
03:39:065 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 左边的note和右边的note的排列做整齐一点

01:45:065 (5,6,7) - 我觉得啊,这里直接顺着flow摆就好
关于某些blanket和stack的问题,我作图的jump肯定是没有这样的风格的,所以不知道该书什么...x/
Crystal
锦鲤抄prprprprpr

[General]
  1. 要不要把下面这些加到tags里: 慕清明 灰原穷 弹棉花的GG 还有这些的拼音 我记得是作词作曲音乐啥的
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:551 (4) - NC, 另外这个前后间距然后感觉半吊子的 无法表现节拍. 再另外 这个whistle感觉声音好重啊 用这么多次大丈夫? 你现在的clap当whistle挺好
  2. 00:04:608 (1) - 同上, 前面的67是2分拍 这里是1分拍却是同样的间距 打起来也不太舒服
  3. 00:04:951 (2,3,4) - 同上
  4. 00:07:008 (2) - 这样放是不是很厚? *http://puu.sh/iVbQs/581c2bacc2.jpg
  5. 00:08:036 (4,5,6) - 同上
  6. 00:11:122 (2,3,4,5,6) - 好几把 这么舒缓的段落这样大丈夫? *http://puu.sh/iVbX2/73d3195291.jpg 注意这里7也改了位置
  7. 00:13:865 (4) - 这里的drum finish好违和 改成你现在的clap吧
  8. 00:14:894 (6,1,2,3) - 滑条之后还要打3下好容易断啊 而且这个滑条底下的音太平静了 一般人都会认为滑条尾巴是压在下一个音上的吧? *http://puu.sh/iVc1D/34d5f0c04c.jpg
  9. 00:16:265 (3) - 考虑NC
  10. 00:20:036 (7) - 类似于这样的空了1拍的单点我觉得都可以用1/2滑条带过 第一是充实节奏 第二是这个用太多让人感觉停顿太多了 接着打后面的时候就会卡. 你应该懂, 一般姥爷打高难度要马不停蹄的移动 这个我打完立马移到下一个才能按到, 这样都会觉得爽, 可是我打这个的时候要在这个note的位置逗留1/2拍再过去, 这样就不好玩了. (但是像00:27:236 (1) - 不改更好) 后面一样的不再说了
  11. 00:20:894 (4,1) - 感觉还是blanket一下好看
  12. 00:21:751 (3,4) - 考虑一下这种样子的 *http://puu.sh/iVcc8/9e084eae99.jpg
  13. 00:30:494 (7,8) - overlap好难看呀
  14. 00:33:065 (5) - 既然有变速 还是NC一下吧
  15. 00:34:436 (3,4,5) - 这种间距还是不太顺手
  16. 00:37:008 (5,1,2) - 考虑这种 *http://puu.sh/iVcmy/6e4ea49d05.jpg
  17. 00:41:636 (1,2) - 吓得我以为是1/2
  18. 00:45:751 (5) - 不要折返吧 就1分的滑条
  19. 00:51:579 (6) - 如果是想anti-jump, 考虑308|104
  20. 00:53:636 (1) - 锚点放在中间会不会舒服点呀 *http://puu.sh/iVcsH/6fe0d41212.jpg
  21. 01:02:894 (2) - 492|184? 重叠有点无聊
  22. 01:08:379 (1,2) - blanket
  23. 01:10:694 (2,3) - 好几把的节奏 我在2的地方啥也没听到啊 我翻了一下你后面的 好像也都没有在这里放4分的 只有02:41:894 (4,5) - 但是和此处不是同一个位置
  24. 01:12:151 (3) - 好棒的滑条 但是这个重音反而在滑条尾 大丈夫?
  25. 01:12:665 (1,2) - 重音在滑条尾 打起来不是很自然 前面那个不改没关系 这个建议重音(白线)给个击打
  26. 01:17:294 (3,4) - blanket 看的我都要哭了
  27. 01:27:236 (2) - 碰到血条了 记得是unrankable
  28. 01:30:922 (6,1) - 156|156?
  29. 01:36:836 (4,5) - ctrl+g吧
  30. 01:45:408 (7) - NC
  31. 02:03:922 (1,2,3) - 和前面提到的重音问题一样
  32. 02:17:294 (3,4,5) - clap好违和 感觉沿用24clap即可
  33. 02:23:808 (5,6) - blanket
  34. 02:26:551 (1,2) - 间距? 感觉即使把这俩重叠也比现在的样子好些 (后面类似的也注意一下 比如03:23:122 (3,4,5) - 03:39:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
  35. 02:30:665 (3) - 没必要的变速 如果坚持要变速的话也NC一下
  36. 02:43:008 (1,2) - blanket (啊 后面的不想说了)
  37. 02:51:236 (1) - 既然是重音 给个跳
  38. 02:59:465 (1) - 节奏不支持这样的几把滑条吧
  39. 03:02:894 (2) - 也是不要stack
  40. 03:45:236 (2) - 重音给个击打 换成2个circles
  41. 03:50:894 (2) - finish音好违和 真的
  42. 03:52:951 (1) - 提早1/4结束 然后尾巴加一个现在的clap
  43. 03:57:065 (5) - finish把我吓飞了 另外这里两个圈要么换成1个滑条 要么把前面的滑条换成2个圈吧

美丽 终于写完了
加油!
Kamio Misuzu
no kds
I难度
kiai部分的三连比较莫名奇妙,有些很没必要的加了反而画蛇添足,比如01:41:208 (7) - 。类似的还有。
00:14:894 (6) - 尾巴没音啊,而且这么放这里变成四连了。。好蛋疼。
00:15:922 (3,4) - slider柑橘好点

美丽
Topic Starter
Wing My Way

[ Abhor ] wrote:

  • osu file format v14

    [General]
    AudioFilename: Sakura no Hana ga Maiochiru Toki.mp3
    AudioLeadIn: 1500
    PreviewTime: 67179
    Countdown: 0
    SampleSet: Soft
    StackLeniency: 0.7
    Mode: 0
    LetterboxInBreaks: 1
    WidescreenStoryboard: 0

    [Editor]
    DistanceSpacing: 1.2
    BeatDivisor: 2
    GridSize: 32
    TimelineZoom: 1.9

    [Metadata]
    Title:Sakura no Hana ga Maiochiru Toki
    TitleUnicode:桜の花が舞い落ちるとき
    Artist:Sharlo & Sabbo
    ArtistUnicode:Sharlo & Sabbo
    Creator:Wing My Way
    Version:Abhor's Normal
    Source:
    Tags:Jin Li Chao 锦鲤抄
    BeatmapID:720158
    BeatmapSetID:227128

    [Difficulty]
    HPDrainRate:3
    CircleSize:3
    OverallDifficulty:2
    ApproachRate:2
    SliderMultiplier:0.8
    SliderTickRate:1

    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
    Video,15236,"video.avi"
    //Break Periods
    2,105608,119962
    //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
    //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
    //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
    //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
    //Storyboard Sound Samples

    [TimingPoints]
    494,342.857142857143,6,2,0,40,1,0
    494,-100,6,2,2,30,0,0
    16265,-100,6,2,1,40,0,0
    16951,-100,6,2,1,40,0,1
    33065,-100,6,2,1,40,0,0
    33236,-100,6,2,3,30,0,0
    49865,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
    50722,-100,6,2,3,30,0,0
    58094,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
    58436,-100,6,2,3,30,0,0
    62208,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
    62551,-100,6,2,3,30,0,0
    64265,-100,6,2,2,30,0,0
    67179,-100,6,2,1,45,0,0
    68379,-100,6,2,1,70,0,1
    105408,-100,6,2,1,70,0,0
    121522,-100,6,2,3,50,0,0
    138322,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
    138494,-100,6,2,3,50,0,0
    142436,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
    142608,-100,6,2,3,50,0,0
    146551,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
    146722,-100,6,2,3,50,0,0
    150665,-100,6,2,1,50,0,0
    150836,-100,6,2,2,50,0,0
    156836,-100,6,2,1,70,0,1
    193179,-100,6,2,1,35,0,1
    193865,-100,6,2,1,50,0,0
    210322,-100,6,2,1,50,0,1
    230551,-100,6,2,3,50,0,1
    230894,-100,6,2,3,20,0,0
    235008,-100,6,2,2,30,0,0
    235094,-100,6,2,3,20,0,0
    243236,-100,6,2,3,5,0,0


    [HitObjects]
    80,73,494,6,0,P|120:98|204:91,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    53,165,1865,2,0,P|80:222|85:265,1,80
    178,222,2551,2,0,P|175:268|117:330,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    252,161,3922,2,0,P|279:211|310:233,1,80
    347,143,4608,6,0,P|387:194|393:264,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    271,83,5979,2,0,P|216:86|182:78,1,80
    127,152,6665,2,0,B|146:205|128:247|128:247|137:291,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    222,155,8036,2,0,P|235:198|263:231,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    288,84,9065,6,0,P|345:71|382:76,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    212,144,10094,2,0,P|164:145|126:132,1,80
    63,70,10779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    50,165,11122,2,0,P|63:218|155:293,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    234,295,12151,2,0,B|288:279|288:279|339:292,1,80
    395,329,12836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    390,233,13179,2,0,B|372:183|397:149|397:149|442:133|465:84,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    369,56,14208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    282,98,14551,2,0,P|230:101|193:89,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    83,63,16265,6,0,B|117:92|116:132|116:132|169:140|186:184,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    367,124,17636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    391,216,17979,2,0,P|337:244|308:249,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    225,224,18665,2,0,B|155:202|89:227|89:227|124:262,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    200,131,20379,2,0,P|261:131|297:125,1,80
    371,97,21065,6,0,B|379:221|379:221|357:266,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    267,256,22094,2,0,B|290:205|290:205|283:73|283:73|226:27,1,240,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    150,67,23465,2,0,P|148:128|161:166,1,80
    159,241,24151,2,0,P|178:322|254:357,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    250,260,25179,6,0,P|325:213|411:212,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    407,113,26208,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    312,97,26551,2,0,L|208:93,1,80
    136,82,27236,2,0,B|134:129|134:129|109:160|72:171|72:171|89:225|78:286,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    168,318,28608,2,0,P|196:275|203:234,1,80
    227,154,29294,6,0,B|236:104|229:60|229:60|355:97|454:57,1,320,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    419,149,31008,2,0,P|401:191|403:249,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    451,305,31694,2,0,B|427:324|386:335|345:314|323:289|323:289|276:278|276:278|251:308|208:305,1,240
    120,148,33408,6,0,B|158:121|208:128|208:128|245:98|245:98|290:110,1,160,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    280,197,34436,2,0,B|236:237|236:237|177:219|138:253,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    200,326,35465,2,0,B|250:347|298:323|298:323|357:264|357:264|426:256,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    439,165,36836,2,0,P|413:111|387:98,1,80
    302,117,37522,6,0,P|228:139|141:120,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    67,71,38551,2,0,P|54:148|107:209,1,160
    197,228,39579,2,0,P|263:228|336:204,2,120,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    102,209,40951,2,0,B|100:159|100:159|81:117,1,80
    158,66,41636,6,0,B|183:115|183:115|226:131|303:123,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    379,96,42665,2,0,P|369:173|305:218,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    210,235,43694,2,0,B|132:246|132:246|71:214|71:214|54:273|73:317,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    161,327,45065,2,0,P|209:331|258:322,1,80
    316,267,45751,6,0,B|370:268|407:302|407:302|447:255,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    400,171,46779,2,0,P|319:156|243:173,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    187,250,47808,2,0,B|143:253|143:253|68:60,2,240,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    425,88,50894,6,0,P|381:105|266:86,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    221,171,51922,2,0,B|329:223|445:182|445:182|403:269,1,320,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    215,284,53979,6,0,P|134:272|44:281,1,160,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    50,182,55008,2,0,B|105:168|137:135|137:135|150:77,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    244,59,56036,2,0,B|231:146|231:146|251:191,2,120,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    331,99,57408,2,0,P|371:91|430:113,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    369,187,58094,6,0,B|361:287|361:287|320:340,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    228,333,59122,2,0,B|191:285|191:285|183:185,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    177,89,60151,2,0,B|118:91|88:158|88:158|94:251,2,200,8|4|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    260,136,62208,6,0,P|317:152|422:130,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    433,39,63236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    338,55,63579,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    243,38,63922,2,0,P|190:56|158:48,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    104,70,67351,6,0,P|110:135|101:169,2,80,8|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    199,66,68379,6,0,P|265:96|363:91,2,160,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    114,20,70094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    124,115,70436,2,0,B|125:194|125:194|96:225|98:273,1,160,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    193,259,71465,2,0,P|239:253|292:267,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    226,168,72494,6,0,B|264:131|257:73|257:73|294:86|339:81,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    388,140,73522,2,0,B|381:217|330:266|330:266|381:294|390:351,2,240,8|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    327,65,75922,2,0,P|269:47|247:51,1,80,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    185,119,76608,6,0,B|125:126|71:102|71:102|102:161,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    147,218,77636,2,0,B|153:274|112:329|112:329|180:319,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    236,276,78665,2,0,P|304:261|394:290,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    464,346,79694,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    464,250,80036,2,0,P|451:177|431:149,1,80,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    364,125,80722,6,0,B|280:108|188:124|188:124|251:160,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    262,249,82094,2,0,P|231:277|186:284,1,80,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    98,275,82779,2,0,P|61:227|46:156,2,120,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    274,198,84494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    350,257,84836,6,0,P|405:181|414:145,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    311,168,86208,2,0,P|248:194|146:180,2,160,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    355,82,87922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    169,67,88608,6,0,P|122:153|185:281,1,240,2|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
    269,255,89979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    358,219,90322,2,0,B|379:169|379:169|417:143,1,80
    449,237,91008,2,0,P|406:300|322:308,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    252,249,92036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    67,301,92722,6,0,B|64:200|64:200|142:123,2,200,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    163,302,94779,1,2,3:0:0:0:
    234,237,95122,2,0,P|313:222|394:255,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    467,299,96151,2,0,L|494:136,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    410,92,97179,6,0,B|365:68|310:96|310:96|254:149|178:117,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    410,292,99236,2,0,B|365:316|310:288|310:288|254:235|178:267,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    415,91,101294,6,0,P|338:103|246:87,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    162,102,102322,2,0,P|151:206|112:257,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,103351,12,2,105408,0:0:0:0:
    97,58,121522,5,4,0:0:0:0:
    96,160,121865,2,0,B|115:201|107:240|107:240|89:273|89:273|105:311,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    190,267,122894,2,0,P|200:187|165:98,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    97,58,123922,6,0,B|124:2|195:-2|227:20|227:20|278:65|323:48,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    497,36,125636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    445,117,125979,2,0,P|420:182|431:280,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    332,262,127008,2,0,B|322:218|328:173|328:173|300:145|260:142,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    173,170,128036,6,0,P|96:184|39:171,2,120
    336,68,129751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    327,163,130094,2,0,B|326:217|326:217|352:278|352:278|352:333,1,160
    256,322,131122,2,0,B|256:291|256:291|204:171,1,160
    108,163,132151,6,0,P|181:78|288:123,1,240
    374,290,133865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    381,194,134208,2,0,B|376:158|376:158|399:111|399:111|383:70|341:60,1,160
    255,81,135236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    186,148,135579,2,0,P|119:187|99:190,1,80
    31,229,136265,6,0,P|112:284|248:222,1,240
    352,85,137979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    367,179,138322,2,0,P|374:255|323:318,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    285,229,139351,2,0,P|208:251|82:216,2,200
    217,161,141408,6,0,P|165:141|141:111,1,80
    87,50,142094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    181,33,142436,2,0,P|265:47|332:102,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    361,179,143465,2,0,B|410:160|420:98|420:98|463:137,1,160
    465,230,144494,6,0,P|418:269|351:292,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    333,90,146208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    237,99,146551,2,0,P|160:117|74:105,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    45,196,147579,2,0,P|125:214|212:204,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    296,186,148608,6,0,B|379:171|440:123|440:123|452:204|416:285,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    323,298,150322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    227,294,150665,2,0,P|143:250|32:337,2,240,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    310,342,153065,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    311,245,153408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    341,153,153751,2,0,P|363:104|393:84,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    435,169,154436,2,0,P|417:212|387:237,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    88,71,156836,6,0,P|127:125|242:135,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    310,132,157865,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    310,228,158208,2,0,L|319:317,1,80
    414,313,158894,2,0,B|421:201|421:201|458:152,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    439,67,159922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    343,74,160265,2,0,P|288:90|248:86,1,80
    259,185,160951,6,0,B|352:195|412:228|412:228|389:258|341:271,1,240,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    252,293,162322,2,0,P|179:289|163:293,1,80
    78,307,163008,2,0,P|79:229|177:86,2,240,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    171,285,165408,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    248,228,165751,2,0,P|301:162|388:167,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    342,250,166779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    433,278,167122,2,0,B|412:333|367:355|317:351|285:325|285:325|222:336,1,240,4|10,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
    156,269,168494,2,0,P|102:266|54:242,1,80
    130,176,169179,6,0,P|199:180|309:156,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    357,96,170208,2,0,L|392:169,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    272,51,171236,6,0,P|190:36|145:43,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    445,134,172951,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    415,225,173294,2,0,P|350:260|297:260,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    395,131,174665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    310,85,175008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    219,116,175351,6,0,P|145:150|53:135,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    27,55,176379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    60,244,177065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    155,238,177408,2,0,P|230:237|297:262,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    176,144,178779,2,0,P|120:133|87:109,1,80
    164,48,179465,6,0,B|214:40|254:76|270:121|270:121|295:177|369:181,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    495,56,181179,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    452,141,181522,6,0,P|439:215|459:302,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    362,318,182551,2,0,P|341:242|350:149,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    376,70,183579,2,0,P|296:77|216:62,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    122,48,184608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    96,238,185294,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    190,221,185636,6,0,B|289:195|368:227|368:227|306:269,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    35,308,187694,2,0,B|66:235|61:144|61:144|92:177|140:173,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    399,86,189751,6,0,P|303:127|226:121,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    170,70,190779,2,0,P|152:110|161:168,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    248,126,191808,2,0,P|280:193|285:254,2,120,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    99,63,193865,5,2,3:0:0:0:
    105,158,194208,2,0,P|114:213|143:248,1,80
    200,170,194894,2,0,P|263:190|360:183,1,160,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
    421,113,195922,2,0,P|454:184|423:255,1,160
    347,313,196951,1,2,1:0:0:0:
    254,287,197294,2,0,P|196:291|171:289,1,80
    180,193,197979,6,0,B|132:162|121:89|121:89|192:63|253:97,1,240,4|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
    329,105,199351,2,0,B|368:127|451:115|451:115|454:150,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    467,294,200551,1,2,1:0:0:0:
    324,274,201065,2,2,P|248:251|170:275,1,160,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
    96,214,202094,6,0,B|145:163|241:157|241:157|237:119|196:90,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    282,45,203465,2,0,P|316:92|327:139,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    328,208,204151,2,0,B|413:200|422:102|422:102|451:135|452:179,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    435,272,205522,2,0,P|392:297|352:303,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    269,277,206208,6,0,P|194:260|106:289,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    44,347,207236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    78,158,207922,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    170,131,208265,2,0,B|297:134|388:89|388:89|380:152|414:188,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    220,224,210322,6,0,B|220:267|220:267|173:332|173:332|125:344,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    74,267,211351,2,0,P|41:219|57:118,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    132,67,212379,2,0,P|187:80|303:64,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    382,44,213408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    413,233,214094,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    317,230,214436,6,0,B|258:229|258:229|136:264,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    92,188,215465,2,0,B|208:153|208:153|235:114,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    146,73,216494,2,0,P|208:26|298:51,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    350,109,217522,2,0,P|367:184|308:256,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    274,166,218551,6,0,P|216:189|107:170,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    97,84,219579,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    191,98,219922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    279,60,220265,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    371,34,220608,2,0,P|410:104|410:193,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    381,268,221636,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    189,260,222322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    120,193,222665,6,0,B|144:112|58:56|58:56|115:45|149:43,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    392,193,224722,2,0,B|368:112|454:56|454:56|397:45|363:43,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,226436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    166,226,226779,6,0,P|255:289|349:210,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    321,127,228151,2,0,P|384:99|414:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,228836,12,0,230894,0:0:0:0:
    81,83,232951,6,0,B|67:140|134:159|234:77|226:5|130:43|188:135,1,240
    192,210,234322,2,0,B|270:249|333:208|333:208|386:224|434:190,1,240
    394,105,235694,2,0,P|346:75|310:71,1,80
    131,80,236722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,237065,12,0,243236,0:0:0:0:
大伯记得下次po加code啊,不然不方便的orz
Topic Starter
Wing My Way
没怎么mod过有点担心用词问题,理解就好( orz没事的
每个GD的下面部分为建议...
[Insane]

02:20:379 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 有点不明所以的jump,以及8,1的空拍 这一部分基本全部remap了
03:15:236 (4,5,1) - bad pattern fixed
03:39:065 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 左边的note和右边的note的排列做整齐一点 ok

01:45:065 (5,6,7) - 我觉得啊,这里直接顺着flow摆就好
关于某些blanket和stack的问题,我作图的jump肯定是没有这样的风格的,所以不知道该书什么...x/
锦鲤抄prprprprpr 小星星prprprprpr

[General]
  1. 要不要把下面这些加到tags里: 慕清明 灰原穷 弹棉花的GG 还有这些的拼音 我记得是作词作曲音乐啥的
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:551 (4) - NC, 另外这个前后间距然后感觉半吊子的 无法表现节拍. 再另外 这个whistle感觉声音好重啊 用这么多次大丈夫? 你现在的clap当whistle挺好 我试了试加finish 感觉好像好点
  2. 00:04:608 (1) - 同上, 前面的67是2分拍 这里是1分拍却是同样的间距 打起来也不太舒服 这一部分距离基本都remap了
  3. 00:04:951 (2,3,4) - 同上
  4. 00:07:008 (2) - 这样放是不是很厚?* http://puu.sh/iVbQs/581c2bacc2.jpg
  5. 00:08:036 (4,5,6) - 同上 这是啥……
  6. 00:11:122 (2,3,4,5,6) - 好几把 这么舒缓的段落这样大丈夫? * 还行吧orzhttp://puu.sh/iVbX2/73d3195291.jpg 注意这里7也改了位置 这是啥……
  7. 00:13:865 (4) - 这里的drum finish好违和 改成你现在的clap吧 没用默认皮肤没听出来 现在改了
  8. 00:14:894 (6,1,2,3) - 滑条之后还要打3下好容易断啊 而且这个滑条底下的音太平静了 一般人都会认为滑条尾巴是压在下一个音上的吧? * 改成二连了http://puu.sh/iVc1D/34d5f0c04c.jpg
  9. 00:16:265 (3) - 考虑NC
  10. 00:20:036 (7) - 类似于这样的空了1拍的单点我觉得都可以用1/2滑条带过 第一是充实节奏 第二是这个用太多让人感觉停顿太多了 接着打后面的时候就会卡. 你应该懂, 一般姥爷打高难度要马不停蹄的移动 这个我打完立马移到下一个才能按到, 这样都会觉得爽, 可是我打这个的时候要在这个note的位置逗留1/2拍再过去, 这样就不好玩了. (但是像00:27:236 (1) - 不改更好) 后面一样的不再说了 所以你是星星老爷/me 跪拜 我还是觉得停顿比较好,keep
  11. 00:20:894 (4,1) - 感觉还是blanket一下好看 好,不过好像间距变大了感觉不太舒服
  12. 00:21:751 (3,4) - 考虑一下这种样子的 * 好好好,不过你这个跳太远了http://puu.sh/iVcc8/9e084eae99.jpg
  13. 00:30:494 (7,8) - overlap好难看呀 orz怎么都说难看
  14. 00:33:065 (5) - 既然有变速 还是NC一下吧 ok
  15. 00:34:436 (3,4,5) - 这种间距还是不太顺手 fixed
  16. 00:37:008 (5,1,2) - 考虑这种 * http://puu.sh/iVcmy/6e4ea49d05.jpg
  17. 00:41:636 (1,2) - 吓得我以为是1/2
  18. 00:45:751 (5) - 不要折返吧 就1分的滑条 还是要的
  19. 00:51:579 (6) - 如果是想anti-jump, 考虑308|104
  20. 00:53:636 (1) - 锚点放在中间会不会舒服点呀 * 改位置了√http://puu.sh/iVcsH/6fe0d41212.jpg
  21. 01:02:894 (2) - 492|184? 重叠有点无聊 也行,然后后边搞了blanket
  22. 01:08:379 (1,2) - blanket
  23. 01:10:694 (2,3) - 好几把的节奏 我在2的地方啥也没听到啊 我翻了一下你后面的 好像也都没有在这里放4分的 只有02:41:894 (4,5) - 但是和此处不是同一个位置 改了
  24. 01:12:151 (3) - 好棒的滑条 但是这个重音反而在滑条尾 大丈夫? 改过了0.0好像现在不是这样 全改成1/2滑条了 重音也是滑条首了
  25. 01:12:665 (1,2) - 重音在滑条尾 打起来不是很自然 前面那个不改没关系 这个建议重音(白线)给个击打 ^
  26. 01:17:294 (3,4) - blanket 看的我都要哭了 QAQ
  27. 01:27:236 (2) - 碰到血条了 记得是unrankable fixed
  28. 01:30:922 (6,1) - 156|156? 什么鬼
  29. 01:36:836 (4,5) - ctrl+g吧
  30. 01:45:408 (7) - NC 不需要吧
  31. 02:03:922 (1,2,3) - 和前面提到的重音问题一样
  32. 02:17:294 (3,4,5) - clap好违和 感觉沿用24clap即可
  33. 02:23:808 (5,6) - blanket
  34. 02:26:551 (1,2) - 间距? 感觉即使把这俩重叠也比现在的样子好些 (后面类似的也注意一下 比如03:23:122 (3,4,5) - 03:39:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
  35. 02:30:665 (3) - 没必要的变速 如果坚持要变速的话也NC一下
  36. 02:43:008 (1,2) - blanket (啊 后面的不想说了)
  37. 02:51:236 (1) - 既然是重音 给个跳 没问题
  38. 02:59:465 (1) - 节奏不支持这样的几把滑条吧 我认为没问题
  39. 03:02:894 (2) - 也是不要stack ok
  40. 03:45:236 (2) - 重音给个击打 换成2个circles
  41. 03:50:894 (2) - finish音好违和 真的 fixed
  42. 03:52:951 (1) - 提早1/4结束 然后尾巴加一个现在的clap 不太好,不过开头都加了
  43. 03:57:065 (5) - finish把我吓飞了 另外这里两个圈要么换成1个滑条 要么把前面的滑条换成2个圈吧 233我再考虑一下

美丽 终于写完了
星星这摸我改了快三个小时了QAQ终于能睡觉了
加油! 谢谢!
I难度
kiai部分的三连比较莫名奇妙,有些很没必要的加了反而画蛇添足,比如01:41:208 (7) - 。类似的还有。
00:14:894 (6) - 尾巴没音啊,而且这么放这里变成四连了。。好蛋疼。fixed
00:15:922 (3,4) - slider柑橘好点

美丽
谢谢mod!!
Asahina Momoko
hi!!
pretty beautiful song, i rly like it o.o

Abhor's Normal

  1. difficulty setting is pretty low. should be changed to about AR4, OD4-5, HP4
  2. 00:10:094 (2) - stack with 00:08:036 (2) -
  3. 00:14:551 (4,1) - a bit overlapped
  4. 00:18:665 (1) - i felt something strange for this, how about put a circle at 00:18:665 - and make like this?
  5. 00:51:922 (1) - remove NC
  6. 01:00:151 (1) - weird rhythm. actually there are sound at 01:01:008 - , but you should catch the strong vocal sound at 01:01:179 - . so try this one
  7. 01:28:608 (2) - weird rhythm. try to put a circle at 01:28:608 - and start slider at 01:28:951 -
  8. 01:32:722 (1) - put a circle here and make like this fit music
  9. 01:39:236 (1) - how about add NC?
  10. 03:07:694 (1) - ^
  11. 03:21:065 (2) - remove whistle

Soda's Hard

  1. 01:43:351 (1,2,1) - make the flow like raising makes sense imo

    nice diff!

Insane

  1. 00:05:465 (3) - how about put it near 00:05:636 (4) - ?
  2. 00:09:751 (4) - move the red grid to 240/232
  3. 00:11:122 (2,3,4,5,6) - there's no intense sound, so making distance getting bigger is strange i guess.
  4. 00:17:979 (1) - no sound at reverse. so if you wanna use reverse slider, should put like this
  5. 00:22:094 (5,6) - ugly overlapping, replace 00:22:608 (6) - is better.
  6. 00:45:751 (5) - add NC and remove NC 00:46:779 (1) -
  7. 00:46:265 (6) - how about ctrl+g?
  8. 00:47:808 (4) - add NC
  9. 03:14:894 (3,4,5) - same spacing has different rhythm. avoid to occur misreading, i recommend to stack it with 03:15:408 (5) -

    i like the part of after breaktime, but you need to make more clean before break.

good luck~! :)
Zweib
[Normal]
02:08:036 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - add s.e for hitsound
03:24:151 (3) - clap on tail?
03:54:322 (2) - move to 03:54:665 (2) follow vocal?
03:57:065 (1) - end at 04:01:179 ?

[Hard]
没什么问题:D
03:57:065 (1) - end at 04:01:179 ?

[Insane]
01:07:265 (2,1) - 叠到滑条了,放到(133,144) 后面这个01:08:036 (3) - 没必要stack啦早都看不见了
其实也没什么好摸的/.\有时间把blanket和nazi全修一修
-shikaco-
  • General
    这个spread是不是有点危险了啊?Hard和Insane差了1.5几了
  • Abhor's Normal
    00:31:694 (1) - 第2 、4个锚点去掉
    01:32:722 (1) - 分成两个滑条感觉更合音
    02:56:379 (2) - 顺势做个blanket吧
  • Soda's Hard
    00:53:294 - 这个地方绿线没用啊,和前一条一样
    Nice diff!再做难一点就更棒了
  • Insane
    00:05:636 (4) - 从中间折得太直了,弯一点吧
    00:13:865 (4) - 这个Finish去掉
    00:28:908 - 这条绿线和上一条重复了 还有01:00:151 -
    00:46:779 (1,2) - vocal升调,换成两个单点跳吧
    00:55:865 (2,3) - blanket靠近一点吧
    01:39:236 (1) - 换成whistle+clap舒服点
    02:17:979 (5) - 下一段歌词在滑条中间开始,把滑条拆成头尾两个单点NC吧
    02:32:722 (1) - x:260 y:80
    建议把跳改小降星数
水摸也就能摸这些了 柑橘解决spread就离起飞不远了
Moe
xian zhan yi keng
nvzhuang ne
只是一些建议
00:02:551 (1) 00:04:608 (1) - - 像这种直接叠到滑条头上感觉更清爽点
00:06:665 (1,3) - 把1,3 blanket?好读而且美观
00:07:694 (4,5,6,7) - ds混乱..
00:19:522 (4,5,6,7) - 4,6,7等边,5放3滑条尾
00:18:836 (2) - 这里开始感觉摆得有点随意和乱。。建议开ar0再摆一摆 像这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3435634
00:21:065 (1,2) - 如上图 1,2分开一点感觉更有趣 ;)
00:25:865 (3,4) - 像这种要么让3和 4的滑条头 在一条弧上,要么完全叠进4里
00:28:265 (5,1) - 叠吧……
00:40:779 (4) - 删掉这一拍?
00:55:008 (6) - 和3挤在一块,并且不在flow上。。00:54:494 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 整个做个flow吧
00:45:751 (1,2) - 无意义overmap...
00:55:865 (2) - blan..
01:01:865 (5,1) - 同前。。分的开一点反而更有趣。。这样半叠不叠感觉不好看oAo
01:09:236 (2) - bl..
01:28:951 (1) - 类似这种长滑条可以考虑插个绿线减下SV 总觉得长滑条不好看 后面还有很多不列举了(blanket)
01:30:922 (6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 依然单点太乱。。http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3435686
01:45:322 (6,7) - 叠或者to 347 125
后面大同小异 单点规整02:33:236 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 03:12:836 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 像这种明显太随意啦oAo blanket
音效很棒!起飞起飞
ZZHBOY

Reimoe wrote:

xian zhan yi keng
nvzhuang ne
nvzhuang ne
Lobelia

Asahina Momoko wrote:

Abhor's Normal

  1. difficulty setting is pretty low. should be changed to about AR4, OD4-5, HP4
  2. 00:10:094 (2) - stack with 00:08:036 (2) -
  3. 00:14:551 (4,1) - a bit overlapped
  4. 00:18:665 (1) - i felt something strange for this, how about put a circle at 00:18:665 - and make like this?
  5. 00:51:922 (1) - remove NC×
  6. 01:00:151 (1) - weird rhythm. actually there are sound at 01:01:008 - , but you should catch the strong vocal sound at 01:01:179 - . so try this one
  7. 01:28:608 (2) - weird rhythm. try to put a circle at 01:28:608 - and start slider at 01:28:951 -
  8. 01:32:722 (1) - put a circle here and make like this fit music
  9. 01:39:236 (1) - how about add NC?×
  10. 03:07:694 (1) - ^×
  11. 03:21:065 (2) - remove whistle×

ichibannobaka wrote:

[Abhor's Normal]

00:29:294 (1,2) - anti-flow不啦
01:29:979 (3,2) - stack
02:03:922 (1) - ds引起的一系列问题
03:20:551 (1) - 很突兀的红线节奏啊 何况还是个circle我觉得还好啊ORZ
00:08:036 (2,2) - stack?不啦
01:10:094 (2) - 02:05:636 (2) - 03:01:179 (2) - 这三个note相对于全图有点太靠外了,调整一下?/

Zweib wrote:

[Normal]
02:08:036 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - add s.e for hitsound
03:24:151 (3) - clap on tail?
03:54:322 (2) - move to 03:54:665 (2) follow vocal?
03:57:065 (1) - end at 04:01:179 ?
Lobelia
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Sakura no Hana ga Maiochiru Toki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 67179
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Sakura no Hana ga Maiochiru Toki
TitleUnicode:桜の花が舞い落ちるとき
Artist:Sharlo & Sabbo
ArtistUnicode:Sharlo & Sabbo
Creator:Wing My Way
Version:Abhor's Normal
Source:
Tags:Jin Li Chao 锦鲤抄
BeatmapID:720158
BeatmapSetID:227128

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,15236,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
2,105608,120202
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
494,342.857142857143,6,2,0,40,1,0
494,-100,6,2,2,30,0,0
16265,-100,6,2,1,40,0,0
16951,-100,6,2,1,40,0,1
33065,-100,6,2,1,40,0,0
33236,-100,6,2,3,30,0,0
49865,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
50722,-100,6,2,3,30,0,0
58094,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
58436,-100,6,2,3,30,0,0
62208,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
62551,-100,6,2,3,30,0,0
64265,-100,6,2,2,30,0,0
67179,-100,6,2,1,45,0,0
68379,-100,6,2,1,70,0,1
105408,-100,6,2,1,70,0,0
121522,-100,6,2,3,50,0,0
138322,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
138494,-100,6,2,3,50,0,0
142436,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
142608,-100,6,2,3,50,0,0
146551,-100,6,2,1,30,0,0
146722,-100,6,2,3,50,0,0
150665,-100,6,2,1,50,0,0
150836,-100,6,2,2,50,0,0
156836,-100,6,2,1,70,0,1
193179,-100,6,2,1,35,0,1
193865,-100,6,2,1,50,0,0
210322,-100,6,2,1,50,0,1
230551,-100,6,2,3,50,0,1
230894,-100,6,2,3,20,0,0
235008,-100,6,2,2,30,0,0
235094,-100,6,2,3,20,0,0
241179,-100,6,2,3,5,0,0


[HitObjects]
80,73,494,6,0,P|120:98|204:91,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,165,1865,2,0,P|80:222|85:265,1,80
178,222,2551,2,0,P|175:268|117:330,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,161,3922,2,0,P|279:211|310:233,1,80
347,143,4608,6,0,P|387:194|393:264,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,83,5979,2,0,P|216:86|182:78,1,80
127,152,6665,2,0,B|146:205|128:247|128:247|137:291,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,155,8036,2,0,P|235:198|263:231,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,84,9065,6,0,P|345:71|382:76,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,155,10094,2,0,P|174:156|136:143,1,80
80,74,10779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
50,165,11122,2,0,P|63:218|155:293,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,295,12151,2,0,B|288:279|288:279|339:292,1,80
395,329,12836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
390,233,13179,2,0,B|372:183|397:149|397:149|442:133|465:84,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,56,14208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,79,14551,2,0,P|223:82|186:70,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,63,16265,6,0,B|117:92|116:132|116:132|169:140|186:184,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,124,17636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
391,216,17979,2,0,P|337:244|308:249,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,224,18665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,260,19008,2,0,P|83:254|34:269,2,80,4|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,224,20036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,131,20379,2,0,P|261:131|297:125,1,80
371,97,21065,6,0,B|379:221|379:221|357:266,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,256,22094,2,0,B|290:205|290:205|283:73|283:73|226:27,1,240,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,67,23465,2,0,P|148:128|161:166,1,80
159,241,24151,2,0,P|178:322|254:357,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,260,25179,6,0,P|325:213|411:212,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,113,26208,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,97,26551,2,0,L|208:93,1,80
136,82,27236,2,0,B|134:129|134:129|109:160|72:171|72:171|89:225|78:286,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,318,28608,2,0,P|196:275|203:234,1,80
227,154,29294,6,0,B|236:104|229:60|229:60|355:97|454:57,1,320,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,149,31008,2,0,P|401:191|403:249,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,306,31694,2,0,B|381:339|330:291|330:291|276:278|276:278|251:308|208:305,1,240
120,148,33408,6,0,B|158:121|208:128|208:128|245:98|245:98|290:110,1,160,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,197,34436,2,0,B|236:237|236:237|177:219|138:253,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,326,35465,2,0,B|250:347|298:323|298:323|357:264|357:264|426:256,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,165,36836,2,0,P|413:111|387:98,1,80
302,117,37522,6,0,P|228:139|141:120,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,71,38551,2,0,P|54:148|107:209,1,160
197,228,39579,2,0,P|263:228|336:204,2,120,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,209,40951,2,0,B|100:159|100:159|81:117,1,80
158,66,41636,6,0,B|183:115|183:115|226:131|303:123,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,96,42665,2,0,P|369:173|305:218,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,235,43694,2,0,B|132:246|132:246|71:214|71:214|54:273|73:317,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,327,45065,2,0,P|209:331|258:322,1,80
316,267,45751,6,0,B|370:268|407:302|407:302|447:255,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,171,46779,2,0,P|319:156|243:173,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,250,47808,2,0,B|143:253|143:253|68:60,2,240,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,88,50894,6,0,P|381:105|266:86,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,171,51922,2,0,B|329:223|445:182|445:182|403:269,1,320,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,284,53979,6,0,P|134:272|44:281,1,160,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,182,55008,2,0,B|105:168|137:135|137:135|150:77,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,59,56036,2,0,B|231:146|231:146|251:191,2,120,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,99,57408,2,0,P|371:91|430:113,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,187,58094,6,0,B|361:287|361:287|320:340,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,333,59122,2,0,B|191:285|191:285|183:185,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,89,60151,2,0,B|118:91|88:158|88:158|101:289,1,240,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
185,234,61522,2,0,P|223:258|265:267,1,80
256,170,62208,6,0,P|313:186|418:164,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,72,63236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,91,63579,1,2,0:0:0:0:
237,59,63922,2,0,P|184:77|152:69,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,70,67351,6,0,P|110:135|101:169,2,80,8|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,66,68379,6,0,P|265:96|363:91,2,160,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,37,70094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,130,70436,2,0,B|126:209|126:209|97:240|99:288,1,160,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,279,71465,2,0,P|241:273|294:287,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,184,72494,6,0,B|253:147|246:89|246:89|283:102|328:97,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,140,73522,2,0,B|381:217|330:266|330:266|381:294|390:351,2,240,8|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,65,75922,2,0,P|269:47|247:51,1,80,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,119,76608,6,0,B|125:126|71:102|71:102|102:161,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,218,77636,2,0,B|153:274|112:329|112:329|180:319,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,276,78665,2,0,P|304:261|394:290,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,346,79694,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,250,80036,2,0,P|451:177|431:149,1,80,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,125,80722,6,0,B|280:108|188:124|188:124|251:160,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,249,82094,2,0,P|231:277|186:284,1,80,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,275,82779,2,0,P|61:227|46:156,2,120,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,198,84494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,257,84836,6,0,P|405:181|414:145,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,168,86208,2,0,P|248:194|146:180,2,160,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,82,87922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
175,13,88608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,38,88951,6,0,P|220:124|283:252,1,240,2|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
362,209,90322,2,0,B|383:159|383:159|421:133,1,80
455,226,91008,2,0,P|412:289|328:297,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,249,92036,2,0,P|178:256|155:268,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,337,92722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
23,325,93065,6,0,B|20:224|20:224|62:181,2,160,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,309,94779,1,2,3:0:0:0:
204,267,95122,2,0,P|283:252|364:285,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,328,96151,2,0,L|465:165,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,92,97179,6,0,B|365:68|310:96|310:96|254:149|178:117,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,292,99236,2,0,B|365:316|310:288|310:288|254:235|178:267,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
415,91,101294,6,0,P|338:103|246:87,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,102,102322,2,0,P|151:206|112:257,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103351,12,2,105408,0:0:0:0:
97,58,121522,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,154,121865,2,0,B|115:195|107:234|107:234|89:267|89:267|105:305,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,268,122894,2,0,P|204:188|169:99,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,65,123922,6,0,B|123:9|194:5|226:27|226:27|277:72|322:55,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,37,125636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
445,117,125979,2,0,P|420:182|431:280,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,262,127008,2,0,B|322:218|328:173|328:173|300:145|260:142,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,170,128036,6,0,P|96:184|39:171,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,68,129751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,163,130094,2,0,B|326:217|326:217|352:278|352:278|352:333,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,322,131122,2,0,B|256:291|256:291|204:171,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,163,132151,6,0,P|181:78|288:123,1,240,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,290,133865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,194,134208,2,0,B|376:158|376:158|399:111|399:111|383:70|341:60,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,81,135236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,148,135579,2,0,P|119:187|99:190,1,80
31,229,136265,6,0,P|112:284|248:222,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,85,137979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,179,138322,2,0,P|374:255|323:318,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,229,139351,2,0,P|208:251|82:216,2,200,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,161,141408,6,0,P|165:141|141:111,1,80
87,50,142094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,33,142436,2,0,P|265:47|332:102,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,179,143465,2,0,B|410:160|420:98|420:98|463:137,1,160
465,230,144494,6,0,P|418:269|351:292,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,90,146208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,99,146551,2,0,P|160:117|74:105,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,196,147579,2,0,P|125:214|212:204,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,186,148608,6,0,B|379:171|440:123|440:123|452:204|416:285,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,298,150322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,294,150665,2,0,P|143:250|32:337,2,240,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,342,153065,5,0,0:0:0:0:
311,245,153408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,153,153751,2,0,P|363:104|393:84,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,169,154436,2,0,P|417:212|387:237,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,71,156836,6,0,P|127:125|242:135,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,132,157865,1,8,0:0:0:0:
310,228,158208,2,0,L|319:317,1,80
414,313,158894,2,0,B|421:201|421:201|458:152,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,67,159922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
343,74,160265,2,0,P|288:90|248:86,1,80
259,185,160951,6,0,B|352:195|412:228|412:228|389:258|341:271,1,240,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,293,162322,2,0,P|179:289|163:293,1,80
78,307,163008,2,0,P|79:229|177:86,2,240,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,285,165408,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,228,165751,2,0,P|301:162|388:167,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,250,166779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
433,278,167122,2,0,B|412:333|367:355|317:351|285:325|285:325|222:336,1,240,4|10,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
156,269,168494,2,0,P|102:266|54:242,1,80
130,176,169179,6,0,P|199:180|309:156,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,96,170208,2,0,L|392:169,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,51,171236,6,0,P|190:36|145:43,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
445,134,172951,1,2,0:0:0:0:
415,225,173294,2,0,P|350:260|297:260,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,131,174665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,85,175008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,116,175351,6,0,P|145:150|53:135,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,55,176379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,244,177065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
155,238,177408,2,0,P|230:237|297:262,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,178779,2,0,P|120:133|87:109,1,80
164,48,179465,6,0,B|214:40|254:76|270:121|270:121|295:177|369:181,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
495,56,181179,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,141,181522,6,0,P|439:215|459:302,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,318,182551,2,0,P|341:242|350:149,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,70,183579,2,0,P|296:77|216:62,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,48,184608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,238,185294,1,2,0:0:0:0:
190,221,185636,6,0,B|289:195|368:227|368:227|306:269,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,308,187694,2,0,B|66:235|61:144|61:144|92:177|140:173,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,86,189751,6,0,P|303:127|226:121,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,70,190779,2,0,P|152:110|161:168,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,126,191808,2,0,P|280:193|285:254,2,120,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,63,193865,5,2,3:0:0:0:
105,158,194208,2,0,P|114:213|143:248,1,80
200,170,194894,2,0,P|263:190|360:183,1,160,2|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
421,113,195922,2,0,P|454:184|423:255,1,160
347,313,196951,1,2,1:0:0:0:
254,287,197294,2,0,P|196:291|171:289,1,80
180,193,197979,6,0,B|132:162|121:89|121:89|192:63|253:97,1,240,4|2,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
329,105,199351,2,0,B|368:127|451:115|451:115|454:150,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,294,200551,1,2,1:0:0:0:
324,274,201065,2,2,P|248:251|170:275,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,214,202094,6,0,B|145:163|241:157|241:157|237:119|196:90,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,45,203465,2,0,P|316:92|327:139,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,208,204151,2,0,B|413:200|422:102|422:102|451:135|452:179,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,272,205522,2,0,P|392:297|352:303,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,277,206208,6,0,P|194:260|106:289,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,347,207236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
78,158,207922,1,2,0:0:0:0:
170,131,208265,2,0,B|297:134|388:89|388:89|380:152|414:188,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,224,210322,6,0,B|220:267|220:267|173:332|173:332|125:344,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,267,211351,2,0,P|41:219|57:118,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,67,212379,2,0,P|187:80|303:64,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,44,213408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
413,233,214094,1,2,0:0:0:0:
317,230,214436,6,0,B|258:229|258:229|136:264,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,188,215465,2,0,B|208:153|208:153|235:114,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,73,216494,2,0,P|208:26|298:51,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,109,217522,2,0,P|367:184|308:256,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,166,218551,6,0,P|216:189|107:170,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,84,219579,1,8,0:0:0:0:
191,98,219922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,60,220265,1,2,0:0:0:0:
371,34,220608,2,0,P|410:104|410:193,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,268,221636,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,260,222322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,193,222665,6,0,B|144:112|58:56|58:56|115:45|149:43,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,193,224722,2,0,B|368:112|454:56|454:56|397:45|363:43,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,226436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
166,226,226779,6,0,P|255:289|349:210,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,127,228151,2,0,P|384:99|414:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,228836,12,0,230894,0:0:0:0:
81,83,232951,6,0,B|67:140|134:159|234:77|226:5|130:43|188:135,1,240
169,211,234322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,259,234665,2,0,B|330:298|393:257|393:257|446:273|494:239,1,240
427,167,236036,2,0,P|379:137|343:133,1,80
261,117,236722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,237065,12,0,241179,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Wing My Way
pretty beautiful song, i rly like it o.o thank you >,<

Insane

  1. 00:05:465 (3) - how about put it near 00:05:636 (4) - ? sure
  2. 00:09:751 (4) - move the red grid to 240/232 good idea!
  3. 00:11:122 (2,3,4,5,6) - there's no intense sound, so making distance getting bigger is strange i guess. fixed
  4. 00:17:979 (1) - no sound at reverse. so if you wanna use reverse slider, should put like this fixed
  5. 00:22:094 (5,6) - ugly overlapping, replace 00:22:608 (6) - is better. fixed
  6. 00:45:751 (5) - add NC and remove NC 00:46:779 (1) - fixed
  7. 00:46:265 (6) - how about ctrl+g? no
  8. 00:47:808 (4) - add NC fixed
  9. 03:14:894 (3,4,5) - same spacing has different rhythm. avoid to occur misreading, i recommend to stack it with 03:15:408 (5) - fixed
    i like the part of after breaktime, but you need to make more clean before break. 0.0 thank you

thanks mod!>,<
[Insane]
01:07:265 (2,1) - 叠到滑条了,放到(133,144) 后面这个01:08:036 (3) - 没必要stack啦早都看不见了 还好吧,坐标改了
其实也没什么好摸的/.\有时间把blanket和nazi全修一修 /.\谢谢
  • Insane
    00:05:636 (4) - 从中间折得太直了,弯一点吧 这个还直啊Orz
    00:13:865 (4) - 这个Finish去掉 no
    00:28:908 - 这条绿线和上一条重复了 还有01:00:151 - fixed
    00:46:779 (1,2) - vocal升调,换成两个单点跳吧 不要
    00:55:865 (2,3) - blanket靠近一点吧 ok
    01:39:236 (1) - 换成whistle+clap舒服点
    02:17:979 (5) - 下一段歌词在滑条中间开始,把滑条拆成头尾两个单点NC吧 还是跟白线走
    02:32:722 (1) - x:260 y:80 太远了
    建议把跳改小降星数
水摸也就能摸这些了 柑橘解决spread就离起飞不远了谢谢mod!
thanks!
MirinH
m4m

General

  1. tag加夏羅

Abhor's Normal

  1. 這是Easy吧,跟hard的gap這麼大肯定過不了關,你有連個選擇:名字改成Easy,加一個normal或者是直接加一個Advanced
  2. 02:22:436 (3) - nc應該在這裡下
  3. 02:30:665 (3,3,4) - 這個鈴聲好吵啊

Soda's Hard

  1. 00:00:494 (1,1,1,1) - 我覺得每個長白線都加太吵了,4個一次剛好,你這樣反而不能突出音效
  2. 01:05:979 (1,2,3) - antijump加上遮擋好難讀啊放開一點
  3. 01:45:236 (6,1) - 漏1/4
  4. 02:49:179 (1,2,3) - 怎麼向內凹了
  5. 03:03:579 (1) - 拉好看點啊

Insane

  1. 00:24:151 (4) - 幹嘛anti jump
  2. 01:05:636 (5,6) - 什麼幾把
  3. 01:27:236 (2,4) - 這種遮擋太醜了
  4. 02:07:865 (7,1) - 這種遮擋還是最好改掉,qd可能性大
good luck
sjoy
TAG 加上GDER 的ID
[Abhor's Normal]
02:19:351 (4) - 感觉这个折返节奏有点怪,换成2个2/1看看
02:40:951 (1) - 尾巴CLAP漏了
03:20:551 (3) - 一个单点 在红线上显得有点突兀
[Soda's Hard]
00:14:894 (1) - 可以多个CLAP
00:38:551 (3) - 头clap
01:43:351 (1,2,3) - 我觉得可以不用粘在一起
02:16:951 (2) - 中间有一拍,漏了有点难受
03:11:808 (1,2,3) - 同 01:43:351 (1,2,3)
03:35:979 加个 NOTE?
03:49:865 (3,5) - 别粘一起呀
[Insane]
首先给我感觉滑条真的好快。。
00:28:265 (5) - 这个折法觉得很莫名
00:31:865 (4,1,2) - 你4和1都NC 我觉得41的间隔应该还比12大才合理
00:45:751 (1) - 感觉折返没意义,拆成滑条+单点吧
00:50:722 (2) - 说实在的,这个位置有点反人类
01:05:636 (5,6) - 这种粘的感觉不太好
01:11:465 (1,2,3) - 看到这梗就想笑,至少上镜不下10次了
01:30:922 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种遮挡感 ,给我感觉像是便秘
01:36:836 (4,5) - 通过前面的01:36:151 (1,2) - ,感觉这里间距感觉有点挤
02:04:779 (3) - 重音在白线阿,建议延长半拍,前面加个单点
02:23:465 (4) - 试试1/2滑条
02:41:894 (4,5) - 这里2连很奇怪的,前面都没有建议补成3连
03:02:894 (2) - 间距阿 我觉得这里前后一致比较好
03:19:522 漏音
03:38:379 (4) - 间距 和1 太近了感觉很不爽

看你这图就想笑,总体感觉空拍有点多,我的个人看法是KIAI不建议空拍,可以用滑条补上,给人感觉比较饱满,
my angel yayoi
射颗星纪念半年前夭寿再也没能复活的nika‘ Easy
要mod直接跟我说保证送个水摸
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply