Kurosaki Maon - Rakuen no Tsubasa · forum

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-04-10T23:16:37+00:00

Call me back here when you guys are done making changes to Joey's mod

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2015-04-11T00:10:31+00:00

[ Joey ] wrote:
Hey Asagi, sorry this took so long to get to.

So yeah, as requested, by Broccoly

General
Unfortunately you will probably run into issues with the difficulty gap between Normal and Hard. tbh the Normal feels more like an Easy to me. I recommend adding a difficulty in between the Normal and the Hard. 1.72 with 3.19 is pretty close imo, let's see other opinions here ;w;

10nya's Normal

00:10:199 - Why start the break here? I would just start it right after the spinner i'm following 2nd cymbal sound
00:30:715 (4,5) - This diestance is longer than what you were using previously, should probably keep it the same
00:37:683 (1) - I don't really like the sound of the claps on these slider ticks. I would remove them im supporting clap sound there
00:59:747 (2) - Sorry I really don't agree with these slider tick claps =/ I think it would sound better with them removed, srry well its true im following my own rhythm here, lets see other opinions..
01:27:231 (1) - Should change this to a 1/1 slider so you hit this beat also 01:27:618 - i want to keep this part less notes because there's some confusing sliders (like the one who reversed at blue line)
02:41:554 (1) - Extend this slider to here 02:42:328 - the drum sound is on red tick though

Wow short mod, sorry about that. It's a really good set Asagi. I enjoy it a lot. Good luck!

thank you for modding, and Kocari probably Asagi is still sleeping right now xD, didnt replied means fixed

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TitleUnicode:楽園の翼
Artist:Kurosaki Maon
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Creator:Asagi
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Source:グリザイアの果実 -LE FRUIT DE LA GRISAIA-
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Asagi

1,020 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Asagi 2015-04-11T08:43:19+00:00

[ Joey ] wrote:
Hey Asagi, sorry this took so long to get to.

So yeah, as requested, by Broccoly

General
Unfortunately you will probably run into issues with the difficulty gap between Normal and Hard. tbh the Normal feels more like an Easy to me. I recommend adding a difficulty in between the Normal and the Hard.~I asked a BN and a QAT to check the spread first, and they said it was "fine and safe", but im kinda doubting about that for a bit.

Insane

00:04:199 (1,2,3,4,5) - A little overmapped imo. There is nothing going on in the music here. I recommend a rhythm more like this: http://puu.sh/h96QS/92d02d8341.jpg ~actually, there is a music there, but idk what kind of sound is that.
00:24:328 (1,2,3) - This jump is a little big for this slow part in the music. Consider lowering the distance ~the voice on the start is kinda high pitch compare to the others, but the pitch is getting lower and lower, but yes, the distance is kinda long, but idk where to put them though ill consider it for now
01:39:425 (4,1) - Not a big deal, but you can stack these better ~fixed
02:32:263 (1,2,1) - This spacing can be confusing because they look evenly spaced. People might mistake slider 2 to slider 1 as a 1/4 note. Consider adding more space between these: 02:32:554 (2,1) - ~i asked a ton of testplay on my map, and it seems no one is getting miss or 100 there (even me) so itll be fine to put it that way, if im gonna change that, the design would be ruined
02:40:586 - The clap here doesn't sound good imo ~the music itself has a drum sound here
03:22:973 (5,2) - Stack ~fixed
03:28:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I like all these hitcircles, but I think a slider here 03:29:554 (1,2) - Would make this finish feel even better ~it'll ruin the design ;-; the distance spacing would do the job for that
03:31:102 (1,2) - This distance is quite far for a 1/4 note, and might trip some people up. Not a big deal, but just thought I'd point it out. ~well same as here, i always ask for testplays and checking this critical parts like this on my diff, and no is tripping there by far, but ill consider lowering the spacing

Hard

Perfect Diff ~yayay

Wow short mod, sorry about that. It's a really good set Asagi. I enjoy it a lot. Good luck!

Thanks for the mod and to Broccoly too :3

Kibbleru

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5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2015-04-11T23:18:27+00:00

general

oh my god this violin is soo off time lol

questionable snappings lol
01:23:941 - why the fk does this feel like a 1/6 repeat to me
02:38:263 - 02:39:425 - 02:40:199 - these are just off-metronome -.-
03:33:812 - oh my this violin

got metadata for me?

insane

can u ar 9? hard is already ar 8

02:32:263 (1,2) - ehh spacing is rather large compared to ur previous ones
02:33:038 (1,2) - ^
02:34:780 (1) - sounds like 1/6 i think
02:38:263 (5,6,1) - not sure if 1/4 is correct here lol
02:39:521 (5,2) - ^i think the instrument thing is just off time lol.
02:39:618 (6,1) - why isnt this parallel :C
02:46:296 (2) - i don't rly get this, i guess its fine tho lol
03:00:134 (1,2) - no copy pasta :C
03:17:747 (4,5) - imo the triplet would be more fitting here rather than 03:16:973 (1,2,3) -
03:31:876 (1) - i think u should do something similar to 03:31:102 (1,2) - instead, the sudden drop in difficulty doesn't make too much sense q:
03:22:392 (3,5) - manual stacking will help it read better
bleh the rest is just super nazi stuff

hard

01:23:747 (2,3) - eh i don't rly agree with using this type of stuff for hard diffs.
03:33:812 (2,3) - ^
02:28:199 (3,4) - the way this pattern is placed makes this seem kinda like a 1/2 jump
03:23:941 (3,4) - ^
02:34:780 (4) - as with insane

normal

02:08:263 - should map this out imo :C how bout just use repeat slider
02:46:586 (4,5) - nazi stack
02:47:747 (1) - what is the repeat for?
02:52:392 (3) - ^
03:14:457 (1,2) - swap nc?
03:34:199 (1,1) - spinner recovery time too short. at least 2 beats.

eh i wana ask about the spread, should be fine tho i think

also those snapping stuff lol

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2015-04-12T01:59:26+00:00

i'll leave timing to asagi :3 all has been fixed

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404,340,131941,2,0,P|412:272|396:168,1,165,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,133102,6,0,L|180:124,2,55,2|8|2,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
332,184,133876,2,0,L|408:188,2,55,2|8|2,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
252,244,134651,2,0,L|176:248,1,55,0|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,248,135038,2,0,P|104:188|124:92,1,165,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,136199,6,0,L|336:152,1,55,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,160,136586,2,0,P|404:220|384:316,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,340,137360,1,4,0:0:0:0:
228,268,137941,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,268,138134,2,0,P|144:256|76:316,1,165,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,300,138909,2,0,P|44:224|36:132,1,165,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,88,139683,6,0,B|108:92|108:92|208:64,2,165,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,136,141038,2,0,L|20:216,1,55,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,308,142199,2,0,P|288:320|344:308,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,276,142780,6,0,P|360:212|384:104,1,165,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,80,143747,2,0,P|232:68|176:80,1,110,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,116,144328,2,0,P|96:144|8:96,1,165,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,240,145489,6,0,P|60:280|56:304,2,55,2|8|2,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
32,144,146263,2,0,P|24:104|28:80,2,55,2|8|2,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
128,176,147038,2,0,L|200:172,1,55,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,152,147425,2,0,P|308:124|384:168,1,165,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,284,148586,5,2,0:1:0:0:
300,284,148780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,284,148973,2,0,P|220:312|144:268,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,248,149747,1,4,0:0:0:0:
228,156,150328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,150715,6,0,L|496:180,2,165,4|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,272,152263,2,0,L|272:364,2,82.5,4|0|0,0:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
216,256,153038,2,0,P|160:284|24:208,1,220,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
164,76,154586,5,2,0:0:0:0:
252,124,154973,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,155360,12,0,160005,0:0:0:0:
384,80,161554,6,0,L|396:260,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,364,162715,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,308,163102,2,0,P|152:252|148:224,1,110,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,163683,2,0,P|180:108|168:20,1,165,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,32,164651,6,0,L|384:36,1,110,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,72,165231,2,0,L|408:256,1,165,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,328,166199,1,0,1:0:0:0:
275,292,166586,1,2,0:0:0:0:
274,292,166780,2,0,P|328:233|408:236,1,165,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,320,167747,6,4,P|492:279|465:155,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,67,168909,1,2,0:0:0:0:
277,78,169296,2,4,P|244:119|271:243,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,161,170263,1,0,1:0:0:0:
330,161,170457,6,0,P|377:173|439:145,1,110,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,288,171425,2,0,P|291:264|226:307,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,342,172392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
82,260,172780,2,0,L|79:141,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,103,173554,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,192,173941,5,4,0:0:0:0:
300,136,174328,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,136,174521,2,0,P|316:188|264:288,1,165,2|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,340,175489,1,2,0:1:0:0:
156,248,175876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,152,176263,2,0,P|68:144|16:168,2,110,2|2|4,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,220,177425,5,8,0:0:0:0:
196,220,177618,2,0,P|224:172|172:64,1,165,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,36,178586,2,0,L|376:32,2,82.5,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,176,179747,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,240,180134,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,180328,12,2,183231,0:0:0:0:
204,232,183812,6,0,P|260:212|316:243,2,110,0|0|4,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,92,185360,2,0,P|64:48|56:20,2,55,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,132,185941,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,132,186134,2,0,P|112:116|188:180,1,165,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,224,187102,2,0,P|332:240|408:176,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,144,188070,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,84,188844,5,2,0:0:0:0:
72,168,189231,2,0,L|64:288,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,328,189812,2,0,P|108:348|132:344,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,332,190392,2,0,P|228:284|224:260,1,55,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,232,190780,2,0,P|204:176|256:80,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,184,191941,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,184,192134,6,0,P|428:192|480:160,1,110,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,96,192909,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,64,193296,1,0,1:0:0:0:
252,140,193683,2,0,P|240:192|264:248,1,110,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
200,320,194457,2,0,P|148:308|92:332,2,110,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,332,195425,6,0,P|324:348|396:288,1,165,4|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,200,196392,2,0,P|384:156|388:128,1,55,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
416,108,196780,2,0,P|424:64|420:36,1,55,0|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,88,197941,2,0,L|180:216,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,248,198521,6,0,P|108:284|16:252,1,165,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,164,199489,2,0,L|24:88,2,55,0|0|8,1:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,208,200070,2,0,L|64:372,1,165,0|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,296,201231,6,0,P|244:300|268:292,2,55,2|8|2,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
124,228,202005,2,0,P|72:224|48:232,2,55,2|8|2,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
220,200,202780,2,0,L|256:144,1,55,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,112,203167,2,0,P|360:84|436:136,1,165,0|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,244,204328,6,0,L|340:324,1,55,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,332,204715,2,0,P|224:348|148:284,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,256,205489,2,0,L|156:68,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,48,206263,1,2,0:1:0:0:
180,48,206457,6,0,P|236:72|336:36,2,165,4|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,112,208005,2,0,L|12:120,2,82.5,4|0|0,0:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
148,132,208780,2,0,L|168:356,1,220,0|4,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,352,209941,5,8,0:0:0:0:
268,352,210134,2,0,L|252:184,1,165,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,100,211102,2,0,P|348:84|400:96,2,82.5,4|0|0,0:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,124,211876,2,0,P|192:152|72:72,1,220,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
92,276,213425,5,2,0:0:0:0:
180,320,213812,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,214199,12,2,217296,0:0:0:0:
256,216,217876,6,0,L|248:80,2,110,2|4|4,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,218844,12,2,221167,0:0:0:0:

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-04-12T08:53:30+00:00

Not really much I can say while looking at the moment. It was spot on and very impressive. A mod won't really do as much since it's perfect as is. So instead have some Kocaine

Asagi

1,020 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Asagi 2015-04-14T17:00:15+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
general
oh my god this violin is soo off time lol

questionable snappings lol
01:23:941 - why the fk does this feel like a 1/6 repeat to me ~its just you
02:38:263 - 02:39:425 - 02:40:199 - these are just off-metronome -.- ~its actually not :v listen to the bass
03:33:812 - oh my this violin ~whats the problem? :v

got metadata for me?
insane

can u ar 9? hard is already ar 8 ~i didnt notice the hard diff is ar8, ill just reduce hard instead of increasing in insane
02:32:263 (1,2) - ehh spacing is rather large compared to ur previous ones
02:33:038 (1,2) - ^ ~thats the design of that part, and i ask a lot of testplay to make sure its not complicated to catch up
02:34:780 (1) - sounds like 1/6 i think ~its actually 1/4
02:38:263 (5,6,1) - not sure if 1/4 is correct here lol
02:39:521 (5,2) - ^i think the instrument thing is just off time lol. ~if you think the music only follows the violin, think again
02:39:618 (6,1) - why isnt this parallel :C ~fixed
02:46:296 (2) - i don't rly get this, i guess its fine tho lol ~listen to the downbeat pls
03:00:134 (1,2) - no copy pasta :C ~pasta'd
03:17:747 (4,5) - imo the triplet would be more fitting here rather than 03:16:973 (1,2,3) - ~okay then
03:31:876 (1) - i think u should do something similar to 03:31:102 (1,2) - instead, the sudden drop in difficulty doesn't make too much sense q: ~i wanna put at least a bit rest after those previous consecutive notes, and the vocals seems relax too
03:22:392 (3,5) - manual stacking will help it read better ~fixed
bleh the rest is just super nazi stuff
hard
01:23:747 (2,3) - eh i don't rly agree with using this type of stuff for hard diffs.
03:33:812 (2,3) - ^ ~same as mine, but its more fitting that a repeat slider so i put it that way
02:28:199 (3,4) - the way this pattern is placed makes this seem kinda like a 1/2 jump
03:23:941 (3,4) - ^ ~intentionally did that, to emphasize the finish hitsound better (unless its unrankable)
02:34:780 (4) - as with insane ~as with insane

eh i wana ask about the spread, should be fine tho i think

also those snapping stuff lol

Thanks :3

and Thanks to Kocari too for the 4 stars \o\

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2015-04-14T17:56:20+00:00

Hey, Asagi-san~
From M4M request in-game.

General:

Uncheck “enable countdown”. I just don’t prefer it
Also uncheck “Widescreen support” in all the diffs since you don’t have a SB.
Since Kibbleru had said that the timing might be off, just doublecheck it again with an experienced timer. I don’t want to overlook this.
Not a nice resolution for the background. I highly suggest you use a BG that’s 1024X768 or 1366X768. I managed to fix your current BG, so it has a resolution of 1366X768 now:
http://puu.sh/hbi4l/c548675962.png
Hm, I can understand why 10nya’s Normal’s kiai time is inconsistent to your diffs but why is the kiai times in your Hard and Insane different? I suggest you make sure the Hard and Insane’s kiai times are consistent.
To be safe, change the audio lead-in to 2000ms in all the diffs.

10nya’s Normal:

02:12:428 – This is snapped incorrectly. Just resnap the green line again please.
00:04:780 (2) –Why didn’t you stack this slider’s head perfectly on top of the tail of this slider: 00:02:070 (1) -?
00:30:521 –Maybe place a note here. I can hear a clear vocal beat here that needs to be emphasized imo.
00:39:038 (3,4) –I don’t really like this kind of rhythm. Rather try something like this instead:
Picture
00:39:618 (4,1) –This overlap can be seen so clearly. Can’t you try to avoid it please?
Picture
00:42:328 (3,1) –Please avoid this overlap. Those notes look so crammed into one little space. Try to space the notes out more and try to avoid unnecessary overlaps. So try something like this:
Picture
00:45:425 (2,3,4) –Also very crammed into a little space. Space out more.
00:47:747 (2,3) –Imo, this rhythm fits in better with the music/vocals.
Picture
00:52:102 – to 00:52:683 – This feels so empty and it’s definitely possible to map that section out. Try something like this:
Picture
00:59:167 –Since this is such an important and loud beat, I highly suggest you try to place a single note/circle there. Like this:
Picture
01:00:715 (3) –In my honest opinion, I really think this slider has to end earlier. Which is here: 01:01:102 –
Picture
There are a lot of these sliders. I’ll point a few out so you know which ones I’m talking about: 01:13:102 (3) -
01:11:554 –Again, try to place a single circle here for better emphasism. Like I suggested here: 00:59:167 –
01:19:102 (4) –Change this circle into a short slider to emphasize this beat: 01:19:296 – as well.
Picture
01:29:167 (3,4,1) –Looks crammed. Try this:
Picture
01:31:876 (3,4) –I suggest turning this into a short slider. More personal preference since there’s already a circle here: 01:32:457 (5) –
01:39:618 (1,1) –I feel the reaction time between the spinner and the next note might be too little. I suggest ending the spinner here: 01:41:167 – It will give you much more recovery time.
01:50:263 (3,4) –Precisely the same suggestion as here: 00:39:038 (3,4) –
02:03:425 –I suggest placing a note here. I can hear a clear vocal.
02:10:392 –Again, rather place a note here. Like this:
Picture

~~Continue later~~~

02:22:005 –Place a note here. There’s a clear vocal that suggests it.
02:24:328 (3,2) –Please try to avoid this overlap. So unnecessary. Try to place (2) somewhere on the right side of the grid.
02:28:586 (1,2) –Eh, I don’t really approve this triple stack in the easiest diff. Rather change those two circles into a short slider.
02:30:328 (5) –Change this circle into a short slider to emphasize this beat: 02:30:521 – as well.
Picture
02:32:070 –You can add a note here. It will fit.
02:34:586 (1,2) –These two circles doesn’t follow the rhythm that well at all. Try this rhythm:
Picture
02:42:715 (2) –Change this circle into a short slider to also emphasize this beat: 02:42:909 –
Picture
02:48:909 (2) –Hm, try this rhythm:
Picture
02:59:747 (4) –Change into short slider?
Picture
03:00:328 (1) –Imo, this spinner starts too early. Rather start the spinner here: 03:01:683 – and then map the section before the spinner out. Then remove this slider: 03:03:812 (1) – and end the spinner here: 03:04:586 –
03:06:134 (4) –New combo here.
03:06:909 –You can add a note here to emphasize the vocal.
03:08:844 (1) –Change into short slider to emphasize this beat: 03:09:038 –
03:12:134 (1) –This slider doesn’t really fit in with the vocals/music. Rather try this:
Picture
03:16:199 –You can add a note here.
03:17:747 -^
03:18:521 (1,3) –Eh, try to avoid this overlap. It looks bad and squished.
03:19:489 (2) –I would use a rhythm like this:
Picture
03:20:070 (3,2) –Aaahhh, overlap
03:27:812 –You can add a note.
03:30:909 -^
03:33:425 (1,2) –Same suggestion as here: 02:34:586 (1,2) –
03:34:199 (1,1) –For the easiest diff in the set, the reaction time between the spinner and the next note really feels too short. Try to think of a different plan to prevent this issue. Perhaps you can end the spinner here: 03:36:521 –

The reason why I suggested you some places where you can add more notes or make some rhythms a bit harder is because the diff can be a bit harder to give a more balanced diffspread and fill that gap between Normal and Hard a bit more. Just make sure the star difficulty stays under 2.

This diff isn’t bad, but it still requires more improvement, especially rhythm-wise and placement-wise (overlaps that are unnecessary, etc.) My mod should be able to fix most of the problems, but more mods will be needed before this diff will be ready.
The other two diffs are fine imo. I don’t really have anything to say about them. Very nicely done.
I guess if I have to mention something, it will be this slider in the Hard and the Insane: 00:08:070 (1) – The very slow SV just caught me a bit offguard and I think it will be better if you rather use normal SV here. I think it will be more fun to play it with a long slider.

And also rather avoid these multiple NC’s: 02:35:747 (1,2,1,2,1,2) – in the Insane. They are a bit unnecessary. Remove the NC’s here: 02:35:747 (1,1,1) –

Hm, maybe also Ctrl+G this: 02:46:489 (3,4) – in the Insane. Better flow imo with 02:46:780 (5) –

Well, that’s all. Here’s what I want you to do for me before you call me back for a recheck:

Get more mods for the Normal and try to make the diff a bit harder to improve the spread between Normal and Hard.
Check your timing and metadata again please. Ask an experienced timer and someone that knows metadata really well.

Good Luck, Asagi~!

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2015-04-16T09:12:53+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Hey, Asagi-san~
From M4M request in-game.

General:
Uncheck “enable countdown”. I just don’t prefer it
Also uncheck “Widescreen support” in all the diffs since you don’t have a SB.
Since Kibbleru had said that the timing might be off, just doublecheck it again with an experienced timer. I don’t want to overlook this. leaving this to asagi
Not a nice resolution for the background. I highly suggest you use a BG that’s 1024X768 or 1366X768. I managed to fix your current BG, so it has a resolution of 1366X768 now:
http://puu.sh/hbi4l/c548675962.png ^
Hm, I can understand why 10nya’s Normal’s kiai time is inconsistent to your diffs but why is the kiai times in your Hard and Insane different? I suggest you make sure the Hard and Insane’s kiai times are consistent.
To be safe, change the audio lead-in to 2000ms in all the diffs.

10nya’s Normal:
02:12:428 – This is snapped incorrectly. Just resnap the green line again please.
00:04:780 (2) –Why didn’t you stack this slider’s head perfectly on top of the tail of this slider: 00:02:070 (1) -?
00:30:521 –Maybe place a note here. I can hear a clear vocal beat here that needs to be emphasized imo. next part is have a lot of 1/2 so i leave this part calm
00:39:038 (3,4) –I don’t really like this kind of rhythm. Rather try something like this instead:
Picture
00:39:618 (4,1) –This overlap can be seen so clearly. Can’t you try to avoid it please?
Picture
00:42:328 (3,1) –Please avoid this overlap. Those notes look so crammed into one little space. Try to space the notes out more and try to avoid unnecessary overlaps. So try something like this:
Picture
00:45:425 (2,3,4) –Also very crammed into a little space. Space out more.
00:47:747 (2,3) –Imo, this rhythm fits in better with the music/vocals.
Picture
00:52:102 – to 00:52:683 – This feels so empty and it’s definitely possible to map that section out. Try something like this:
Picture
00:59:167 –Since this is such an important and loud beat, I highly suggest you try to place a single note/circle there. Like this:
Picture

01:00:715 (3) –In my honest opinion, I really think this slider has to end earlier. Which is here: 01:01:102 – the vocal actually ends at 01:01:296 - and extend slider to 01:01:296 - would create consistent clap sound too so i'll keep current ><!
Picture
There are a lot of these sliders. I’ll point a few out so you know which ones I’m talking about: 01:13:102 (3) -
01:11:554 –Again, try to place a single circle here for better emphasism. Like I suggested here: 00:59:167 – this one fixed
01:19:102 (4) –Change this circle into a short slider to emphasize this beat: 01:19:296 – as well. adding circle at the end of the slider is not really i like, thus extend the slider is not making big differences imo.. ;q;
Picture
01:29:167 (3,4,1) –Looks crammed. Try this:
Picture
01:31:876 (3,4) –I suggest turning this into a short slider. More personal preference since there’s already a circle here: 01:32:457 (5) – well this part is made as 2 circles to make a bit harder diff, since i have to raise the star rate, previous parts are also sliders so it wouldn't be too hard
01:39:618 (1,1) –I feel the reaction time between the spinner and the next note might be too little. I suggest ending the spinner here: 01:41:167 – It will give you much more recovery time.
01:50:263 (3,4) –Precisely the same suggestion as here: 00:39:038 (3,4) –
02:03:425 –I suggest placing a note here. I can hear a clear vocal. last and next part are having both 1/2 so i think it would be pretty hard, so i'll leave it like this ;-;
02:10:392 –Again, rather place a note here. Like this: same as above..
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02:22:005 –Place a note here. There’s a clear vocal that suggests it.
02:24:328 (3,2) –Please try to avoid this overlap. So unnecessary. Try to place (2) somewhere on the right side of the grid. well i want to make the flow up-down-left and i think this overlap didn't too messy since there's more than 1/1 range from slider (3)
02:28:586 (1,2) –Eh, I don’t really approve this triple stack in the easiest diff. Rather change those two circles into a short slider.
02:30:328 (5) –Change this circle into a short slider to emphasize this beat: 02:30:521 – as well.
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02:32:070 –You can add a note here. It will fit.
02:34:586 (1,2) –These two circles doesn’t follow the rhythm that well at all. Try this rhythm:
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02:42:715 (2) –Change this circle into a short slider to also emphasize this beat: 02:42:909 –
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02:48:909 (2) –Hm, try this rhythm: i'll keep current though, this part is really calm ;-;
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02:59:747 (4) –Change into short slider? ^ thus 02:59:941 - doesnt have strong beat to follow
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03:00:328 (1) –Imo, this spinner starts too early. Rather start the spinner here: 03:01:683 – and then map the section before the spinner out. Then remove this slider: 03:03:812 (1) – and end the spinner here: 03:04:586 –
03:06:134 (4) –New combo here.
03:06:909 –You can add a note here to emphasize the vocal. the vocal actually starts from 03:07:102 - so keep current ;q;
03:08:844 (1) –Change into short slider to emphasize this beat: 03:09:038 – next part also had 1/2 slider so adding 1/2 slider at here wouldn't make the view looks good imo D: i just dont like it huhu
03:12:134 (1) –This slider doesn’t really fit in with the vocals/music. Rather try this: next part is a bit nonstop 1/1 so i'll keep current
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03:16:199 –You can add a note here. next part is 2 slider 1/2 so it doesnt really fit to me imo
03:17:747 -^
03:18:521 (1,3) –Eh, try to avoid this overlap. It looks bad and squished. didnt affect the play too much imo
03:19:489 (2) –I would use a rhythm like this: i'll keep my current, current is fine though
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03:20:070 (3,2) –Aaahhh, overlap doesnt affect the play too much because the range is really far
03:27:812 –You can add a note.
03:30:909 -^ there isnt strong beat here, tbh i prefer to follow music than vocals
03:33:425 (1,2) –Same suggestion as here: 02:34:586 (1,2) –
03:34:199 (1,1) –For the easiest diff in the set, the reaction time between the spinner and the next note really feels too short. Try to think of a different plan to prevent this issue. Perhaps you can end the spinner here: 03:36:521 – i think the break is a bit far thus there's only slider repeat so player wont sliderbreak or got miss though

The reason why I suggested you some places where you can add more notes or make some rhythms a bit harder is because the diff can be a bit harder to give a more balanced diffspread and fill that gap between Normal and Hard a bit more. Just make sure the star difficulty stays under 2.

This diff isn’t bad, but it still requires more improvement, especially rhythm-wise and placement-wise (overlaps that are unnecessary, etc.) My mod should be able to fix most of the problems, but more mods will be needed before this diff will be ready.
The other two diffs are fine imo. I don’t really have anything to say about them. Very nicely done.
I guess if I have to mention something, it will be this slider in the Hard and the Insane: 00:08:070 (1) – The very slow SV just caught me a bit offguard and I think it will be better if you rather use normal SV here. I think it will be more fun to play it with a long slider.

Well, that’s all. Here’s what I want you to do for me before you call me back for a recheck:
Get more mods for the Normal and try to make the diff a bit harder to improve the spread between Normal and Hard.
Check your timing and metadata again please. Ask an experienced timer and someone that knows metadata really well.

Good Luck, Asagi~!

okidoki thanks for modding nya \o\

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Version:10nya's Normal
Source:グリザイアの果実 -LE FRUIT DE LA GRISAIA-
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EDIT: Talked with ~~hentai kusohara~~ KSHR about metadata, agreed to remove sasaki yumiko eroge visual novel on tags and add anime on tags. thanks

chatlog

17:02 KSHR: what did you added "sasaki yumiko" into Tags for?
17:02 KSHR: add*
17:02 KSHR: and if I'm not wrong, this is the opening theme from the anime?
17:04 KSHR: it's from the anime not the eroge,
17:04 KSHR: meaning there is no need to add them
17:04 KSHR: I'm 1000000000000000000000% sure they are not related to this song
17:06 10nya: talked to him about that though. but he said he'll keep it since the original "grisaia" is an eroge
17:06 10nya: i think you can convice him more lol
17:07 KSHR: you can send this chat log to him
17:07 10nya: oki
17:07 KSHR: I see no reason to add unrelated words(completely!) to tags :/
17:09 10nya: yeah
17:09 10nya: anything else sir? lol
17:10 KSHR: still searching
17:10 KSHR: don't forget to tell him to add anime to tags
17:11 10nya: anime will be on genre right? after it got ranked D:?
17:11 KSHR: but it doesn't work in game client, right?
17:11 KSHR: it works only on the web, if I'm not wrong
17:13 KSHR: when searching songs in game, there isn't anime in sort options
17:13 KSHR: in group options as well
17:14 KSHR: hope I told you enough..!
17:14 10nya: okei then
17:16 KSHR: well, others should be fine as is
17:16 10nya: nothing wrong on the japanese name right?
17:19 KSHR: you mean, source / title / artist, right?
17:19 KSHR: yeah, should be nothing wrong with them
17:24 10nya: okay then
17:24 10nya: thanks a lot kusohara
17:24 10nya: :>
17:25 10nya: oh ya, so remove eroge visual novel sasaki yumiko on tags right?
17:26 KSHR: yeah, I have no idea what "sasaki yumiko" is..
17:26 10nya: its the chara on the bg
17:27 KSHR: sa"ka"ki then
17:27 KSHR: either way, it's not the use of Tags though

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2015-04-20T15:27:30+00:00

[nyanya]

this is really neat diff so I only give you a little suggestion.
01:19:102 (4) - can change this to 1/2 slider to make it fit with vocal.
03:03:812 (1) - this need to fix, it visible while spinner and that's unrankable nowdays.
03:37:876 (1) - ^
02:59:747 (4,1) - swap NC for consistent with other part?
your NC still inconsistent imo, such as02:18:134 (5), it supposed to NC because of 01:06:909 (1) or remove this instead. I'm not sure if you follow something.

that's all for me now, GL! ganbatte 10nya :3

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2015-04-21T05:24:45+00:00

all has been applied thanks baka pano :3

remapped some part too..

osu file format v14

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Version:10nya's Normal
Source:グリザイアの果実 -LE FRUIT DE LA GRISAIA-
Tags:Sasaki Yumiko Grisaia no Kajitsu frontwing eroge visual novel opening 10nya  -_t_e_n_n_y_a_-
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OverallDifficulty:4
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Asagi

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Asagi 2015-04-21T09:03:10+00:00

Fixed the metadata that KSHR pointed out
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-Nya- wrote:
The other two diffs are fine imo. I don’t really have anything to say about them. Very nicely done.
I guess if I have to mention something, it will be this slider in the Hard and the Insane: 00:08:070 (1) – The very slow SV just caught me a bit offguard and I think it will be better if you rather use normal SV here. I think it will be more fun to play it with a long slider. ~it might be trippy on the first try but the slow slider there seems to be perfect there

And also rather avoid these multiple NC’s: 02:35:747 (1,2,1,2,1,2) – in the Insane. They are a bit unnecessary. Remove the NC’s here: 02:35:747 (1,1,1) – ~those NCs actually fits because every NC is decreasing the spacing as the music(violin) sound is getting softer and softer

Hm, maybe also Ctrl+G this: 02:46:489 (3,4) – in the Insane. Better flow imo with 02:46:780 (5) – ~i think the current one is much better flow

Well, that’s all. Here’s what I want you to do for me before you call me back for a recheck:
Get more mods for the Normal and try to make the diff a bit harder to improve the spread between Normal and Hard.
Check your timing and metadata again please. Ask an experienced timer and someone that knows metadata really well.

Good Luck, Asagi~!

Thanks :3

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-04-24T02:11:56+00:00

if nya bubbles, call me.

-Nya-

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-Nya- 2015-04-26T11:17:54+00:00

Fixed a few things. Looks ready to go now.

Bubbled~

@Kibbleru/or whoever's going to rank this: Just double-check the Normal for potential off-screen sliders. I did check it and thought it looked fine. It shouldn't be a problem but just thought I'll mention it.

Mira-san

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Mira-san 2015-04-27T07:45:21+00:00

HYPE HYPE HYPE HYPE

10nya

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10nya 2015-04-27T10:12:18+00:00

wee whooo wheee

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-04-28T02:01:06+00:00

does 'grisaia' need to be in tags? you (sorta) have it in the source alrdy

10nya wrote:

EDIT: Talked with ~~hentai kusohara~~ KSHR about metadata, agreed to remove sasaki yumiko eroge visual novel on tags and add anime on tags. thanks

chatlog

17:02 KSHR: what did you added "sasaki yumiko" into Tags for?
17:02 KSHR: add*
17:02 KSHR: and if I'm not wrong, this is the opening theme from the anime?
17:04 KSHR: it's from the anime not the eroge,
17:04 KSHR: meaning there is no need to add them
17:04 KSHR: I'm 1000000000000000000000% sure they are not related to this song
17:06 10nya: talked to him about that though. but he said he'll keep it since the original "grisaia" is an eroge
17:06 10nya: i think you can convice him more lol
17:07 KSHR: you can send this chat log to him
17:07 10nya: oki
17:07 KSHR: I see no reason to add unrelated words(completely!) to tags :/
17:09 10nya: yeah
17:09 10nya: anything else sir? lol
17:10 KSHR: still searching
17:10 KSHR: don't forget to tell him to add anime to tags
17:11 10nya: anime will be on genre right? after it got ranked D:?
17:11 KSHR: but it doesn't work in game client, right?
17:11 KSHR: it works only on the web, if I'm not wrong
17:13 KSHR: when searching songs in game, there isn't anime in sort options
17:13 KSHR: in group options as well
17:14 KSHR: hope I told you enough..!
17:14 10nya: okei then
17:16 KSHR: well, others should be fine as is
17:16 10nya: nothing wrong on the japanese name right?
17:19 KSHR: you mean, source / title / artist, right?
17:19 KSHR: yeah, should be nothing wrong with them
17:24 10nya: okay then
17:24 10nya: thanks a lot kusohara
17:24 10nya: :>
17:25 10nya: oh ya, so remove eroge visual novel sasaki yumiko on tags right?
17:26 KSHR: yeah, I have no idea what "sasaki yumiko" is..
17:26 10nya: its the chara on the bg
17:27 KSHR: sa"ka"ki then
17:27 KSHR: either way, it's not the use of Tags though

sasaki yumiko is still in tags, also anime could still be added

call me back

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2015-04-28T02:11:32+00:00

Anime as a tag when it'll be already applied in the Genre field isn't necessary. Unless I missed something hehe.

Anyways: Sasaki Yumiko
http://frontwing.jp/product/grisaia2/chara/yumiko.html

Just a character from the show. The one featured in the BG. It isn't really needed. (also It's Sakaki I think lol)

Asagi

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Asagi 2015-04-28T07:13:59+00:00

Ill just remove "grisaia no" on the tags
and yes, I mistakenly put "Sasaki" instead of "Sakaki" (fixed) but idk why I shouldn't put her name on the tags

Updated

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-04-28T19:56:55+00:00

i confirmed the snapping thing with garven, he said it was fine soo q:

oh crap almost forgot.

02:34:780 (1) - no srsly dude this is 1/6 i only hear 3 drums
http://puu.sh/hugjD/42c4e4a4bb.jpg

Asagi

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Asagi 2015-04-28T21:00:57+00:00

Okay then, fixed
and I made it 1/6 on Hard diff too without repeat

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-04-29T03:12:21+00:00

too many maps qualified lol

edit; now ranked